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Yuki Makishima - Yokan (TV Size)

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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2009년 12월 3일 목요일 at 오전 10:21:07

Artist: Yuki Makishima
Title: Yokan (TV Size)
Source: Tokimeki Memorial Only Love
Tags: Tokimeki
BPM: 123
Filesize: 11058kb
Play Time: 01:19
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.57 stars, 59 notes)
  2. Hard (4.92 stars, 213 notes)
  3. Normal (3.68 stars, 103 notes)
Download: Yuki Makishima - Yokan (TV Size)
Download: Yuki Makishima - Yokan (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 2nd Ranked Beatmap.
The opening theme of the anime 'Tokimeki Memorial Only Love'.

'Yokan' means 'Premonition'.
I hope you play with video. :)
Some parts of colors and motions are based on video.

Thanks for your cooperation!
Yes_old
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
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Yes wrote:

hard
00:57:06 (1) - whistle? // added
00:57:31 (2) - ^ // I don't like continous wistle :(
01:18:27 (2) - they might tell you to sb an arrow so you know what way it's going ._. // I'm considering
01:19:49 (1) - end at 01:20:71? // same length with 1st spinner. no changed

normal
01:01:45 (3) - clap maybe // added
01:19:49 (1) - end at 01:20:71? // same length with 1st spinner. no changed

easy
00:27:56 (1) - maybe better to have on all white ticks to not confuse // umm... :?
00:38:53 (3) - whistle? // added
00:46:34 (3) - ^ // ^
01:01:94 (3) - a hit sound at the end maybe // claps added
01:15:10 (1) - clap? // added
01:18:27 (2) - stack // I didn't use stack at Easy. I'll consider it.
01:19:49 (1) - end at 01:20:71? // same length with 1st spinner. no changed

i like this map a lot! great jobb n_n!!!!

Thanks for your mod and star! :D
K-S-O
I do not see anything wrong with this map. Good work on making a good map!
La Valse
카악퉷
스타뱉었음
star~
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K-S-O wrote:

I do not see anything wrong with this map. Good work on making a good map!
Thank you :D


hutka wrote:

카악퉷
스타뱉었음
star~
감사~
Tanmak
[Easy]
00:01:480 (1) 맨 끝 부분에 휘슬?
00:03:430 (2) ^
00:05:381 (1) ^
00:06:356 (2) ^

[Hard]
00:01:480 (1) 맨 끝 부분에 휘슬?
00:03:430 (3) ^
00:05:381 (5) ^
00:06:356 (6) ^

[Insane]
00:02:943 (1) 맨 끝 부분에 휘슬.?
00:03:430 (3) ^
00:13:182 (1,2,3,4,5,6) 플레이하는데 거리상으로 약간 혼란이 있지 않을까요?


이 외에는 딱히 문제점을 찾을 수가 없네요...:D

스타 드리겠습니다.
MoonFragrance
[Overall]
Offset -470? O_o it little bit seems weird. i recommend 505.
And how about set preview point at 00:50:24?

[Easy]
00:43:41 (1) - Delete new combo?
00:45:36 (1) - ^
01:01:45 (2) - Add clap?
01:13:15 (2) - ^

[Normal]
00:43:17 (1) - Delete new combo?
00:45:12 (1) - ^
00:46:34 (4) - Add new combo?

[Insane]
00:43:17 (1) - Delete new combo?
00:45:12 (1) - ^
00:46:34 (6) - Add new combo?
00:47:31 (8) - how about change to spinner?
01:18:27 (2) - make this slider be able to seem end of slider.

Nice map. Star~
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Tanmak wrote:

[Easy]
00:01:480 (1) 맨 끝 부분에 휘슬? // 추가
00:03:430 (2) ^ // 추가
00:05:381 (1) ^ // 휘슬이 너무 반복적으로 나오는건 싫어해서 안넣었습니다.
00:06:356 (2) ^ // ^

[Hard] - Normal!
00:01:480 (1) 맨 끝 부분에 휘슬?
00:03:430 (3) ^
00:05:381 (5) ^
00:06:356 (6) ^
노멀은 중간에 휘슬 들어간 서클이 있어서 추가 안했어요.

[Insane] - Hard!
00:02:943 (1) 맨 끝 부분에 휘슬.? // 추가
00:03:430 (3) ^ // 추가
00:13:182 (1,2,3,4,5,6) 플레이하는데 거리상으로 약간 혼란이 있지 않을까요? // 일부러 만든겁니다


이 외에는 딱히 문제점을 찾을 수가 없네요...:D

스타 드리겠습니다.

Thanks for your mod and star! :D
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MoonFragrance wrote:

[Overall]
Offset -470? O_o it little bit seems weird. i recommend 505. // 505 is not correct start point.
And how about set preview point at 00:50:24? // sudden noisy :(

[Easy]
00:43:41 (1) - Delete new combo? // intentional new combo
00:45:36 (1) - ^ // ^
01:01:45 (2) - Add clap? // added
01:13:15 (2) - ^ // ^

[Normal]
00:43:17 (1) - Delete new combo? // intentional new combo
00:45:12 (1) - ^ // ^
00:46:34 (4) - Add new combo? // ^ if add new combo, too many new combos in short section.

[Insane] - Hard!
00:43:17 (1) - Delete new combo? // intentional new combo
00:45:12 (1) - ^ // ^
00:46:34 (6) - Add new combo? // ^ if add new combo, too many new combos in short section.
00:47:31 (8) - how about change to spinner? // nope, all diffs have same spinners.
01:18:27 (2) - make this slider be able to seem end of slider. // fixed

Nice map. Star~

Thanks for your mod and star! :D
al2e10
By AL2e10's Mod Queue

[Hard]
00:30:736 [12(finish)] Add finish
00:54:507 (3,6- Start) Add wistle
01:10:111 (3,6- Start) also ~ Because it like more better ~

[Normal]
Fine

[Easy]
Fine ~

[All]
I think your clap can be better 0.0
But it fine ~
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al2e10 wrote:

By AL2e10's Mod Queue

[Hard]
00:30:736 [12(finish)] Add finish
00:54:507 (3,6- Start) Add wistle
01:10:111 (3,6- Start) also ~ Because it like more better ~
// added all

[Normal]
Fine

[Easy]
Fine ~

[All]
I think your clap can be better 0.0
But it fine ~

Thanks for your mod and star! :D
Andrea
Mod Info's:

Green: Suggestions, you don't have to fix, your choice.
Orange: You don't have to fix too, but is better if you do it.
Red: You have to fix this for sure!

Starts Suggestions:

All seems fine.

[Easy]

00:35:983 - Hard to get this break, better if you remove it.

[Normal]

00:04:89 (4) - New combo.
00:13:18 (3) - Too close from (2). Adjust it.
00:35:85 (6) - New combo.

[Hard]

00:35:85 (1,2,3,4) - This spacing change can confuse. I suggest to use the same spacing ever.
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osuplayer111 wrote:

Mod Info's:

Green: Suggestions, you don't have to fix, your choice.
Orange: You don't have to fix too, but is better if you do it.
Red: You have to fix this for sure!

Starts Suggestions:

All seems fine.

[Easy]

00:35:983 - Hard to get this break, better if you remove it. // removed

[Normal]

00:04:89 (4) - New combo. // not changed
00:13:18 (3) - Too close from (2). Adjust it. // fixed
00:35:85 (6) - New combo. // fixed

[Hard]

00:35:85 (1,2,3,4) - This spacing change can confuse. I suggest to use the same spacing ever. // hmm.. I think this is not so much matter. becuz Hard diff.
Lissette
Hi!

Hard
00:08:55 - add note?
00:30:00 (12) - move to the next white tick, end slider at 00:30:73 and.... place a note at 00:30:00
00:35:85 (1,2,3,4) - i suggest to make this combo jumpy, very far away the notes (i like jumps n.n)
01:18:27 (2) - repeat slider and move the spinner half beat later?

Very nice map n___n
Star!
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Lissette wrote:

Hi!

Hard
00:08:55 - add note? // not added. start part is a little bit simple.
00:30:00 (12) - move to the next white tick, end slider at 00:30:73 and.... place a note at 00:30:00 // fixed
00:35:85 (1,2,3,4) - i suggest to make this combo jumpy, very far away the notes (i like jumps n.n)
// fixed. ok, osuplayer111 wanted more spacing too. I changed it but didn't used hard jump. :)
01:18:27 (2) - repeat slider and move the spinner half beat later? // fixed

Very nice map n___n
Star!

Thanks for your mod and star! :D
Armin
[Easy]

00:09:282 (1,1) Remove the whistle in the middle of the slider
00:32:687 whistle at the start + whistle at 00:33:662 (reverse arrow)
00:37:563 whistle
00:39:757 whistle at the start + whistle at 00:40:732 and at the end
00:45:365 whistle
00:57:067 clap at the end
00:59:018 ^
01:04:869 whistle at the start
01:05:844 finish at the start
01:18:034 clap
01:18:278 whistle at the start

[Normal]

00:12:207 whistle at the start
00:27:567 ^ + whistle at 00:28:054
00:28:542 whistle
00:29:517 asymmetric slider, make it better <.<
00:31:468 whistle
00:39:757 whistle at the start + whistle at 00:40:732 and at the end
01:08:770 clap
01:18:034 clap
01:18:278 whistle at the start

[Hard]

00:00:505 (1,3) whistles
00:27:567 (4,7) ^
00:59:993 whistle
01:18:034 clap
01:18:278 whistle at the start+whistle at the end

Starred. :D
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Armin wrote:

[Easy]

00:09:282 (1,1) Remove the whistle in the middle of the slider
00:32:687 whistle at the start + whistle at 00:33:662 (reverse arrow)
00:37:563 whistle
00:39:757 whistle at the start + whistle at 00:40:732 and at the end
00:45:365 whistle
00:57:067 clap at the end
00:59:018 ^
01:04:869 whistle at the start
01:05:844 finish at the start
01:18:034 clap
01:18:278 whistle at the start

[Normal]

00:12:207 whistle at the start
00:27:567 ^ + whistle at 00:28:054
00:28:542 whistle
00:29:517 asymmetric slider, make it better <.<
00:31:468 whistle
00:39:757 whistle at the start + whistle at 00:40:732 and at the end
01:08:770 clap
01:18:034 clap
01:18:278 whistle at the start

[Hard]

00:00:505 (1,3) whistles
00:27:567 (4,7) ^
00:59:993 whistle
01:18:034 clap
01:18:278 whistle at the start+whistle at the end

Starred. :D
Almost added hitsound. slider was fixed

Thanks for your mod and star! :D
heartnetkung
One of my most favorite song ever !! Yokan ~
Seems like your map is quite perfect to me.
All these following comments are just my personal suggestions only, not need to be fixed

[overall]
Your design of colors looks great but for the red one i prefer this color Red(214,115,120)
It looks brighter and gives lighter emotion that is perfect match with this song's emotion~

[normal]
great great map~
good use of claps

[hard]
Again, great use of claps !
01:16:32 (8) - add hit circle here at the same place would sounds really nice~

Hope this map get ranked soon.
Star~
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heartnetkung wrote:

One of my most favorite song ever !! Yokan ~
Seems like your map is quite perfect to me.
All these following comments are just my personal suggestions only, not need to be fixed

[overall]
Your design of colors looks great but for the red one i prefer this color Red(214,115,120)
It looks brighter and gives lighter emotion that is perfect match with this song's emotion~
// I accepted it what you suggested color. Also blue was more brighter.

[normal]
great great map~
good use of claps

[hard]
Again, great use of claps !
01:16:32 (8) - add hit circle here at the same place would sounds really nice~
// each parts in chorus have not continuous beats, so not changed. :?

Hope this map get ranked soon.
Star~

Thanks for your mod and star! :D
pete2528
nice map

star :)
azuki
good map
i love your hitsounds :)
Zekira
Why has no one noticed the faulty timing...?

...I don't mean to offend, but the timing is very faulty on this one...

Offset: -503
BPM: 123.00 (contrary to what MixMeister says, this is actually correct)

Fix up the other timing points afterwards.

Since you posted this map on my queue and you crossed the deathline... I will have to put modding on hold.
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pete2528 wrote:

nice map

star :)

azuki wrote:

good map
i love your hitsounds :)

Thank you, pete2528 and azuki :D
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Zekira wrote:

Why has no one noticed the faulty timing...?

...I don't mean to offend, but the timing is very faulty on this one...

Offset: -503
BPM: 123.00 (contrary to what MixMeister says, this is actually correct)

Fix up the other timing points afterwards.

Since you posted this map on my queue and you crossed the deathline... I will have to put modding on hold.

I fixed offset and bpm. XD
Thank you very much. :D
Doomsday
Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these, but you may be able to get away with not changing it
Red = major issues. you need to change these

timing seems fine to me

[EASY]

its all good

[NORMAL]

fine

[HARD]

no problems!

very nice map. definately rankable in my eyes

star'd
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Doomsday93 wrote:

Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these, but you may be able to get away with not changing it
Red = major issues. you need to change these

timing seems fine to me

[EASY]

its all good

[NORMAL]

fine

[HARD]

no problems!

very nice map. definately rankable in my eyes

star'd

Thank you! :D
Card N'FoRcE
Hi ^^

- Easy:
  • .Suggestions:
    00:14:862 (1) - how about ending it at 0:17:057?
    01:19:253 (1) - how about ending it at 1:21:448?
- Normal:
  • .Opinions:
    Abit hard, in my opinion
    .Suggestions:
    00:14:862 (1) - how about ending it at 0:17:057?
    01:19:253 (1) - how about ending it at 1:21:448?
- Hard:
  • .Suggestions:
    00:14:862 (1) - how about ending it at 0:17:057?
    01:19:253 (1) - how about ending it at 1:21:448?
Great job ^^
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Card N'FoRcE wrote:

Hi ^^

- Easy:
  • .Suggestions:
    00:14:862 (1) - how about ending it at 0:17:057?
    01:19:253 (1) - how about ending it at 1:21:448?
- Normal:
  • .Opinions:
    Abit hard, in my opinion
    .Suggestions:
    00:14:862 (1) - how about ending it at 0:17:057?
    01:19:253 (1) - how about ending it at 1:21:448?
- Hard:
  • .Suggestions:
    00:14:862 (1) - how about ending it at 0:17:057?
    01:19:253 (1) - how about ending it at 1:21:448?
Great job ^^
I changed ends of all spinner.
Thanks for your mod and star :D
EEeee
:3 nice map, nice vid, nice background <3, nice *star
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EEeee wrote:

:3 nice map, nice vid, nice background <3, nice *star
Thank you! :D
gdeath
Overall:
00:08:052 --->> 00:12:066 too loud.try volume~50%~
00:23:064 --->> 00:48:027 ^
00:50:022 --->> 01:04:049 ^
01:05:083 --->> 01:16:032 ^
01:18:003 (1,2) - ^
00:48:052 (1) - volume ~70%~

[Hard]
00:28:076 (9) - new combo?
00:32:066 (7) - ^

nice map.
star*
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gdeath wrote:

Overall:
00:08:052 --->> 00:12:066 too loud.try volume~50%~
00:23:064 --->> 00:48:027 ^
00:50:022 --->> 01:04:049 ^
01:05:083 --->> 01:16:032 ^
01:18:003 (1,2) - ^
00:48:052 (1) - volume ~70%~
// I got it. But I setted default volume to 70%. under 60% is a little bit silence.

[Hard]
00:28:076 (9) - new combo? // fixed
00:32:066 (7) - ^ // fixed

nice map.
star*
Thanks for your mod and star! :D
panic_on
star~
Cyril Scarlet
go go ~ :oops:
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panic_on wrote:

star~

S i R i R u wrote:

go go ~ :oops:
Thank you, panic and siriru :D
Zekira
[General]

Larto wrote:

ARGH. DON'T PLACE TIMING SECTIONS THAT ONLY CHANGE THE SAMPLE SET OR THE VOLUME DIRECTLY ON NOTES. AT LEAST 1/4 BEFORE THEM.
Well in particular an example here is timing section I saw in [Easy], the one in 17:057. Maybe you could at least move it 1/4 before?

WAIT, well I found a lot of those timing points that land directly on notes... maybe you could move them 1/4 before (I won't point out where since there are quite a number of them)

...that's it for now.
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Zekira wrote:

[General]

Larto wrote:

ARGH. DON'T PLACE TIMING SECTIONS THAT ONLY CHANGE THE SAMPLE SET OR THE VOLUME DIRECTLY ON NOTES. AT LEAST 1/4 BEFORE THEM.
Well in particular an example here is timing section I saw in [Easy], the one in 17:057. Maybe you could at least move it 1/4 before?

WAIT, well I found a lot of those timing points that land directly on notes... maybe you could move them 1/4 before (I won't point out where since there are quite a number of them)

...that's it for now.
I know. I didn't place audio timing point at right on circle or start of slider.(except gradually changing volume section)
I put it on only at the end of slider and the end of spinner. No problem at these cases.
ccbp
I personally would suggest you to redo the whistle hitsounds of easy. It sounds very randomly to me.
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ccbp wrote:

I personally would suggest you to redo the whistle hitsounds of easy. It sounds very randomly to me.
~_~? whistle made by almost same rule to Normal and Hard.
If you felt like randomly, because maybe there is not exist many notes.

Anyway thanks for your star and suggestion :)
Kytoxid
[Easy]

00:39:074 (4) - This might look slightly better if you line the startpoint up with that of 1.
00:51:069 (2) - Same, but with the endpoint.

[Normal]

00:05:035 (5) - Stack under the endpoint of 3?
00:38:003 (3) - I don't really like this slightly elevated slider, lol.

[Hard]

Quite good and fun.

Starred!
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Kytoxid wrote:

[Easy]

00:39:074 (4) - This might look slightly better if you line the startpoint up with that of 1. // fixed
00:51:069 (2) - Same, but with the endpoint. // fixed

[Normal]

00:05:035 (5) - Stack under the endpoint of 3?
00:38:003 (3) - I don't really like this slightly elevated slider, lol.

[Hard]

Quite good and fun.

Starred!
Thanks for your mod and star! :D
kino77
Ya~Nice map~ ;)

The whistle was a little bit loud for me ,turn volume of them down?

[Easy]
Fine~

[Normal]
Fine~

[Hard]
00:51:20(4)-I'd like it end here 00:51:69 and remove 5~
01:00:72(x)-Add a note here?
01:06:81(4)-End here 01:07:30 remove 5?
01:16:33(x)-Add a note here?

Nothing else~
Star~
WyndII
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
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kino77 wrote:

Ya~Nice map~ ;)

The whistle was a little bit loud for me ,turn volume of them down? // adjusted volume in whole time again.

[Easy]
Fine~

[Normal]
Fine~

[Hard]
00:51:20(4)-I'd like it end here 00:51:69 and remove 5~ // This slider is based on vocal, and 5 is clap pattern. not changed.
01:00:72(x)-Add a note here? // each parts in chorus have not continuous beats, so not changed.
01:06:81(4)-End here 01:07:30 remove 5?
01:16:33(x)-Add a note here?

Nothing else~
Star~

WyndII wrote:

[M0D]

um.... you know, the song is obviously from an anime but why did you put 'anime' in tags? Just put the title of the anime~ orz // removed tag. title is in source.
jk.
[Hard]
So since osu editor is acting weird o.o (please check the timeline and that particular note in that particular timeline lol.)
00:01:936 - click the repeating arrow here, put a whistle? // added
00:02:911 ^ // ^
00:03:039 (3) - do the same in this slider. // ^
00:08:765 - this section is freaking loud. // adjusted volume
Lower the volume a bit please.
00:42:017 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - <3 this part~ // :D
00:58:003 (7) - why not put finishes on this kind of parts i think it gives moar power to the chorus. and i meant these 00:58:003 (7,1) - // uh.. I see, but whistle works well. :)
loved it!~

[Normal]
I find similiraties with hard...
but it's fine~ X]

[Easy]
easy.

i hereby give an awesome star to this map~
lol xD
Thanks for your mod and star! :D
Scar
Star~
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scar1410 wrote:

Star~
Thank you :)
Mystearica
Good luck with your map, and in the future.
DeadAlready
Stared <3

Nice map :D
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Mystearica wrote:

Good luck with your map, and in the future.

quintitem wrote:

Stared <3

Nice map :D
Thank you! Mystearica and quintitem :)
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