This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011년 5월 12일 목요일 at 오후 8:54:30

Artist: 3rd Coast
Title: Closer
Source: DJMAX
Tags: TECHNIKA Clazziquai Edition Giggsan So fly JC
BPM: 120
Filesize: 11021kb
Play Time: 01:37
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (0.98 stars, 98 notes)
2. Hard (4.57 stars, 181 notes)
3. Maximum (4.98 stars, 259 notes)
4. Normal (2.6 stars, 108 notes)
5. Taiko (4.73 stars, 321 notes)

Download: 3rd Coast - Closer
Download: 3rd Coast - Closer (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 7th beatmap, Remapped.

House song in DJMAX Clazziquai Edtion and DJMAX TECHNIKA

Composed by 3rd Coast
Visualized by Giggsan
Vocal by So fly
Rap feat. JC

MV and mp3 file are changed in 2011/5/5

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

-modded via IRC

fixed, thank you >w<~

Here is my suggestion. ^^


[Easy]
00:30:80 (2) - 앞 슬라이더랑 너무 가까워요. 저라면 슬라이더 끝 위치를 바꿀듯..

Easy만 kiai time이 다른거랑 다릅니다. 일부러 그러신거면
01:28:55 - 마지막 키아이 타임을 01:28:80 - 여기에 넣는게 더 잘 맞는 것 같네요.


[Normal]
00:43:30 (3) - 한 칸 위로


[Hard]
00:15:30 (3) - 한 칸 왼쪽으로
00:24:55 (9,1,2,3) - 1,2,3 스택 때문에 9번이랑 서로 좀더 떨어트리는게 좋을것 같네요.

Good Djmax music~~
[General]
리드 인이 1초라...그래도 개인적으로는 약간 좀 빨리 시작하는 느낌이 드네요. 약 1.5초(더 길게 하면 2초?)로 하는 건 어떨까요?

[Eazy]
이건 괜찮네요.

[Normal]
01:11:805 (1) 슬라이드 머리부분은 Finish 삭제하고 끝부분에 Finish를 넣으세요.

[Hard]
00:40:305 (3) 삭제.
00:57:680 (2,3) 통일성을 위해서 일반노트 대신에 슬라이드로 만들면 좋겠군요.
01:11:805 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) 볼륨을 약 두 칸 더 올려주세요. 또한 9는 Finish(이건 선택)

스타 주고 갑니다. ^-^)/☆

p.s.:이 맵과는 별로 상관이 없는 이야기지만 님의 서명란에 링크주소를 고쳐주시기 바랍니다. 제목은 Closer인데 링크는 Clear in the blue sky로 되어있네요.

p.s.2: 나중에 제가 하나 노트 채보를 만들어서 드려도 될까요?

완성(Completed!)

Download: 10099_3rd_Coast_-_Closer.zip

사운드나 기타 등등 이러면 괜찮겠다 싶은 구간입니다.
수정하거나 안하시거나 그건 님 주관에 맡길께요 ~_~

00:00:80 (1) - 기본 소프트 휘슬을 사용하는게 어떨까요?
00:01:80 (2,3) - 볼륨을 한두칸 키우고 커스텀 hitnormal 사운드를 사용하는게 어떨까요?
00:03:80 (2,3) - ^
00:04:80 (1) - 기본 소프트 휘슬을 사용하는게 어떨까요? 그리고 이 노트는 스페이싱을 맞춰주세요.
00:05:80 (2,3) - 볼륨을 한두칸 키우고 커스텀 hitnormal 사운드를 사용하는게 어떨까요?
00:06:80 (1) - 기본 소프트 휘슬을 사용하는게 어떨까요? 그리고 이 노트는 스페이싱을 맞춰주세요.
00:07:80 (2) - 볼륨을 한두칸 키우고 커스텀 hitnormal 사운드를 사용한 다음, 00:08:05, 00:08:35, 00:08:55에 노트를 추가하면 괜찮지 않을까 싶습니다.
00:06:80 (1) - 기본 소프트 휘슬을 사용하는게 어떨까요? 그리고 이 노트는 스페이싱을 맞춰주세요.
00:09:80 (2,3) - 볼륨을 한두칸 키우고 커스텀 hitnormal 사운드를 사용하는게 어떨까요?
00:11:55 (2,3) - 앞의 Tick에 스냅 시켜주시고 볼륨을 한두칸 키우고 커스텀 hitnormal 사운드를 사용하는게 어떨까요?
00:12:80 (1) - 기본 소프트 휘슬을 사용하는게 어떨까요? 그리고 이 노트는 스페이싱을 맞춰주세요.
00:13:80 (2,3) - 볼륨을 한두칸 키우고 커스텀 hitnormal 사운드를 사용하는게 어떨까요?
00:15:43 (1) - 볼륨을 한두칸 정도 줄여주시면 괜찮을거 같네요
00:18:43 (2,6) - 1/4칸씩 앞으로 당겨주면 어떨까요?
00:22:43 (2,6) - ^
00:27:80 (1,2,3,4) - 볼륨을 조금 줄여주시면 어떨까요?
00:36:05 (1,2) - 볼륨을 한두칸 키우고 커스텀 hitnormal 사운드를 사용하는게 어떨까요? 이 구간은 스크래치가 아닌 신디사이저가 사용된 구간이라...
00:40:05 (1,2) - ^
01:14:30 (4) - 반복을 1개 줄이면 어떨까요?
01:14:80 (1) - ^
01:15:30 (2) - 반복을 2개 줄이면 어떨까요?
01:16:30 (4) - 길이를 1/8로 줄이면 어떨까요?
01:17:18 (2) - ^
01:17:55 (3) - 사운드나 길이를 01:17:18 (2)와 같이 만들면 어떨까요?
01:18:30 (5) - ^

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: 3rd Coast - Closer (MoonFragrance) [Tanmak's Technical].osu

[Easy]
It's really slow.
00:43:05 (2) - delete it, too fast compared to the rest of map.
00:50:05 (1) - I suggest to delete it. If you don't do it, then shorten it by 1/4 (it'll became 1/2 slider with one repeat).
00:54:05 (1) - ^
00:58:05 (1) - ^
01:14:43 (3) - 1/4 earlier, when dude says "this". You probably should turn 01:14:05 (2,3) into short slider like 01:12:80 (1), or it's again be too fast compared to the rest of map.
01:16:43 (3) - ^, "this" = "kiss".
01:18:30 (3) - ^
01:22:05 (2,3) - remove (2), move (3) to where (2) was and add repeat to (3). It'll sounds much better and wouldnt mess up the map. It also fixes (4) being too close after (3).
01:24:80 (1) - move next combo no next note?
01:26:05 (2,3) - (if you didnt move this new combo, it's 2 and 3) remove (2), move (3) to where (2) was and add repeat to (3). It'll sounds much better and wouldnt mess up the map. It also fixes (4) being too close after (3).


[Normal]
00:23:18 (4) - 1/4 earlier.
00:50:05 (1,2,3) - (2) 1/4 later, (3) 2/4 later.
00:54:05 (1) - same problem as in Easy. Make it 1/4 shorter.
00:58:05 (3,4,5) - same as Easy. (4) 1/4 earlier, (5) 2/4 earlier.
01:02:80 (1,2,3) - they dont fit IMO, delete them and make spinner longer?
01:14:05 (2,3) - same as Easy again. (3) 1/4 earlier.
01:16:30 (4) - 1/4 longer.
01:18:05 (3,4) - (4) 1/4 earlier.
01:22:55 (x) - place a note here.
01:23:93 (6,7) - doesnt fit.
01:26:55 (x) - place a note here?
01:28:05 (6,7,1) - totally doesnt fit, delete these.

[Tanmak's Technical]
00:07:80 (2) - +1 repeat?
00:15:43 (1) - this hitsound is just stupid.
00:18:05 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - delete this and remap. Completely doesnt fit the lyrics, and this song is mainly lyrics, not beat.
00:36:05 (1,2) - altering the song like that is weird. But it somehow fits. Duh.
01:13:05 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - om my god, man, you're not mapping to the song - you're making the song.
01:19:05 (1,2) - use the custom hitsounds here, too.

[Hard]
00:00:80 (1,2,1,1,2,3) - totally doesnt fit, and these sliders are ugly.
00:36:05 (1,2,3,4) - do these hitsounds fit here?
00:40:05 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:44:05 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:48:05 (5,6,7) - stack?
01:22:43 (5) - move to 01:22:617.


Starred, there's a lot of things, but they're little. And Tanmak's hitsounds kick ass.


edit: make blank.png 1x1

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Matma Rex wrote:

[Tanmak's Technical]
00:07:80 (2) - +1 repeat? Fixed and replaced it.
00:15:43 (1) - this hitsound is just stupid. Deleted custom sound and changed to soft-hitwhistle.
00:18:05 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - delete this and remap. Completely doesnt fit the lyrics, and this song is mainly lyrics, not beat. In fact, these notes follow not lyrics but synth bass sound. However, when I compared with Moonfra's map, I knew that there weren't lyrics note in this time part. Therefore, I maked these note follow lyrics.
00:36:05 (1,2) - altering the song like that is weird. But it somehow fits. Duh. Sorry, but I can't understand. T.T What does that mean?
01:13:05 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - om my god, man, you're not mapping to the song - you're making the song. Arranged volume lower.
01:19:05 (1,2) - use the custom hitsounds here, too. Fixed.

Lissette wrote:

Tanmak's Technical
00:07:55 - add note? Added.
00:08:30 - ^ Added.
00:20:30 - ^ This part was redesigned by Rex's moding list.
00:24:30 - ^ ^
00:48:80 - ^ Added.

Star

Thanks for modding~~ Matma Rex and Lissette~

p.s.: 문프라(Moonfragrance)님, 이제 커스텀 Finish노트는 쓰는 데가 없어져버렸네요. 그 finish wav파일을 삭제해 주세요.

Download: 3rd Coast - Closer (MoonFragrance) [Tanmak's Technical].osu

Ah..... i've examine Rex's modding seriously.
only i can telling to you is, my diffs don't follow vocals.
they are just synthesizer, drum, harp, piano.

please don't hear only vocal but also background sound X_X

By the way, thanks for modding >w<~

MoonFragrance wrote:

only i can telling to you is, my diffs don't follow vocals.
they are just synthesizer, drum, harp, piano.

please don't hear only vocal but also background sound X_X

It probably should follow vocals, then. They are much louder in this map, and placing a note 1/4 before/after vocal because there's synthesizer or something there doesn't feel right. There are many songs with vocals that can me mapped only to instruments, but not this one.

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Timing:

Make sure offsets are the same for all difficulties.

General:

~ Set BG color to black.
~ Stacking leniency must be raised to 0.4 on those difficulties that have it on 0.2.
~ If possible get a better mp3?

Easy:

No problems.

Normal:

00:36:005 (1,2) - Random hitsound noise, sounds out of place.
00:44:005 (1,2) - ^
00:48:030 (3) - Also slightly random, but not as bad as the other two.
01:00:080 (1) - Sounds odd consider shortening the slider to hit white, red, white, red.

Tanmak's Technical:

~ Put Tanmak in tags!

00:36:005 (1,2) - Really these random hitsound noises are a little annoying.
00:40:005 (1,2) - ^
00:44:005 (1,2) - ^ I'll stop bringing them up now
01:13:005 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - These hitsounds sound good, unlike the others lol.

Hard:

~ Stacking leniency really needs to be raised on this difficulty.

01:09:055 (3,4,5,6) - Hitsounds seem a little quiet.
01:13:005 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - Too quiet.

Overall, nice no gameplay issues and really minor suggestions, not a huge fan of the custom hitsounds but not a huge issue.

~ Star!

OMG, it was supposed to going graveyard @_@
i'm finding better mp3 flie, so i'll fix it later ;_;

Lolwut...You wanted this graved? How could youuuu.

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

i'll revive it when i fine better quality mp3 :3

부활시켜요!

Oh god. Oh god!

Annyeong

General
* It is just me? The SB Load is 1,02x but there is no SB in this beatmap. It is a bug or something? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/86344

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Easy
00:13:660 (1,1) - Just suggestion. IMO, this part is kinda boring. Try add note at 00:14:660? Snice it's has a synthesizer.....
00:45:660 (1,2,3,4) - I know you following the drums, but the gap is really strange between (2) and (3). Replace (2) and (3) into slider?

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Normal
* Sorry for nazi modding for this one

00:24:785 (6) - Move 1/4 later?
00:29:160 (5) - Move 1 grid up to make spacing consistent. Please look here to see what is wrong http://puu.sh/1XaB (Look the distance bettween 3 and 4. And look the distance between head and tail slider and 5)
00:59:410 (4) - Move down to make it spacing consistent http://puu.sh/1XaD
01:31:410 (4) - Move up to make it spacing consistent http://puu.sh/1XaN

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Hard
* AR +1?

00:39:402 (6) - It's kinda weird having a same slider with 00:38:402 (4)
00:56:402 (7,8) - Perhaps, like this one? http://puu.sh/1Xb9

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Maximum
01:34:160 (2) - Not stack perfectly with tail slider. Make sure the "Prev:" in upper-right is 0,00x to make perfectly stacked. Otherwise, it'll be weird stack during gameplay

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Where did you get those hitsound? O.o?!

random mod from request in #modreqs

- look at this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/87300 offset seem too early, so +20ms (1,670) and don't forget to resnap all notes and stuff.
(thankyou Alace)
don't forget about your first green line on Hard and Maximum too, if you don't move it first then osu! will crash.

[Hard]
00:31:150 (3) - it's a hidden slider for me >_<!
01:26:150 (3) - add sound clap at begin of slider?

Nice map, Bubbled~

oh, thank you orion and Leorda XD
and Regou for star

Looks Good for another place.

SapphireGhost wrote:

I'm sorry, Krisom...

Never!
NEVERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR
Congratulations fragancia de luna :D!