[Insane]
really nice blankets ;w;
in general i think all the finish hitsounds can have a higher volume, especially during kiai!
it'd be nice to have a spinner somewhere for more score variation
- happy623 -
00:10:054 (3,4,5) - maybe arrange the stream like so for better flow from 00:09:378 (2)?
00:13:889 (2) - for such a slow & calm part, this jump is a bit high imo D: maybe ctrl+G?
00:30:806 (2,3,1) - to continue the circular flow you had going, move 3 down a bit D: ?
00:32:723 - to match the vocals, add a note here?
00:36:445 (1,2,1) - this overlap seems a bit confusing to me imo, and even with AR 9 it could be mistaken as a 1/4 rhythm, try this?
00:38:250 (1) - i think it'd be more powerful if the hitsound volume was increased to maybe 60%
00:41:408 (4,1) - maybe instead of such close spacing, you can put an antijump. I think it would fit the music here
00:47:272 (1,2) - ahh once again, this overlap seems confusing and could be mistaken as 1/4 D:
00:50:430 (4,1,1) - even with AR 9, because of the hitbursts from your skin, I wasn't able to see these circles in time D: It'd be better to move them somewhere else
00:52:235 (1,2) - from the previous pattern, i expected this to be and up and down jump as well D: With the music build up to the chorus, i thought the jump would be bigger than the last, but it's smaller @_@ maybe change this to be more intuitive?
00:53:363 (3) - maybe ctrl+G so all the similar sliders point outward?
00:56:746 (2,4) - move 4 out to avoid the small overlap
01:12:423 - add a note to match vocals?
01:19:641 - ^ sorry these would ruin your pattern ;w;
01:59:114 (4) - hmm i don't really hear any beat in the music that supports this circle D: consider taking it out?
02:15:693 (1,2,3) - this overlap was really confusing for me to play D: maybe you can build up better to the kiai by spacing these out, maybe even have jumps?
- IamKwaN -
02:47:723 (4) - how about reducing this slider by 1/4 to match the beat i hear in the background? D:
03:07:911 - add a note to match the beat in the music
03:35:092 (1) - maybe a normal sampleset or drum clap or something on the head?
[Hard]
Add a space between "Love" and "Live" in the source LOL
intro needs more whistles!
00:10:280 (4) - whistle on repeat & tail?
00:12:084 (3) - whistle
00:13:889 (2) - whistle on head? @_@
00:14:791 (1,2) - whistles on ends to emphasize music?
00:34:190 (5,6) - place this way for better flow?
00:43:663 (1,3) - maybe stack these for a cleaner look?
00:48:626 (4,5,1) - since 1 has a strong beat behind it, why not make the jump occur from 5 to 1 instead of from 4 to 5?
01:09:829 (3) - how about moving this back 1/4 and ending it at the same spot as before to better match vocals
01:27:874 (4) - maybe have a soft finish instead of a drum clap?
01:35:994 (1,2) - consider switching these on timeline so the circle will catch the strong beat in the music
02:05:656 (3) - curve the slider so it'll blanket 02:06:671 (1) better
02:11:633 (5,6) - ctrl+G for better flow & back and forth movement
02:21:107 (1,2) - switch on timeline to better fit the vocals
02:22:686 (6) - move this right more so it'll look like a triangle shape?
02:32:836 (3) - move this back 1/4 but have it end at the same time to better match the singingg
02:42:535 (6,7,1) - the overlap seems messy to me D: Try this? (Yeah it's pretty much the exact same slider as 02:40:956 (1))
02:44:566 (1) - whistle on head to match the tingling sound in the background?
03:08:926 (3,4) - stacking is slightly off D:
03:47:498 (6) - avoid overlap by moving it down so it's blanketed by 03:46:821 (4) ? @_@
03:48:626 (3) - fit vocals better by moving this back 1/4 but ending it at the same spot
[Normal]
Same here, add a space in between "Love" and "live" haha
01:59:453 (3) - match vocals by extending this slider to 02:00:806?
02:22:911 (4) - finish on head & tail?
02:37:347 (4) - ^
that's all really. goodluck!
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