1. 00:07:242 (2) - ga berkah ini bentuknya coba http://puu.sh/9vMrE/b29af53b3e.jpg begini saje
2. 00:08:180 (1) - sekalianin aja
3. 00:15:680 (1,1) - itu ujungnya ga pas ;w;
4. 00:16:430 (1) - kenapa NC?
5. 00:59:555 (2,1) - ujung ujung ujung ga pas
6. 01:01:242 (4,1) - ini juga aaa
7. 01:04:055 (2,4) - sama nih B)
8. 01:05:555 (2,1) - kenapa banyak gini yg ga pas? nya kalo ngemap niat dunk!!!11! B^)
9. 01:08:180 (1,3) - blanketnya ga barokah nie
10. 01:12:867 (2,3,4) - spacingnya ga sama mbak
    ;w;
11. 01:16:992 (1,4) - blanket kurang ajib
12. 01:19:992 (1,3) - ini apa ini???!?!??! ga ada pahalanya OvO
13. 01:21:492 (1,3) - blanket kurang mantep
14. 01:44:930 (2) - sebaiknja beginie http://puu.sh/9vMIt/1de11d58dd.jpg
15. 02:04:242 (4,5) - blanket ga asik nie
16. 02:16:242 (2,1) - terlalu deket ini entar pacaran lagi (kebawahin dikit)
17. 02:17:742 (3) - blanket aaaaa
18. 02:37:055 (5,6,7,8,9) - ini apa?!??!?!??! begini http://puu.sh/9vMOd/3ca5a0ea2b.jpg kan lebih berkah (kalo bikin star pattern liat dari dua ato tiga sisi, jangan satu aja, entar ga simetris ky gini wkw)
19. 02:38:180 (1,2) - kok distack
20. panjang amat sih ini lagu B(
21. 03:13:242 (4,6) - blanket dunk
22. 03:19:992 (1) - nanggung amat ini ekornya hha
23. 03:27:680 (1,2) - mending jadiin slider aja, biar gak kagok mencetnya (soalnya sebelomnya udah circle pattern, uda gitu ini jump lagi aheu)
24. 03:33:867 (1) - susah ini!!!11 keanya kalo ga ada maennya jadi lebi gampang ada spiner soalnya

inverness wrote:

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Hard

1. 00:07:242 (2) - ga berkah ini bentuknya coba http://puu.sh/9vMrE/b29af53b3e.jpg begini saje gasuka slider yang berkaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahh ;w;
2. 00:08:180 (1) - sekalianin aja ^
3. 00:15:680 (1,1) - itu ujungnya ga pas ;w;
4. 00:16:430 (1) - kenapa NC?
5. 00:59:555 (2,1) - ujung ujung ujung ga pas susah ngepasin (apa yang diharapkan dari notebuk busuk 4 taun dengan low graphic card yang ngestack aja butuh perjuangan) lelele but trying to fix all of them
6. 01:01:242 (4,1) - ini juga aaa
7. 01:04:055 (2,4) - sama nih B)
8. 01:05:555 (2,1) - kenapa banyak gini yg ga pas? nya kalo ngemap niat dunk!!!11! B^) kampret jangan buka kartu 8'(
9. 01:08:180 (1,3) - blanketnya ga barokah nie
10. 01:12:867 (2,3,4) - spacingnya ga sama mbak
    ;w;
11. 01:16:992 (1,4) - blanket kurang ajib
12. 01:19:992 (1,3) - ini apa ini???!?!??! ga ada pahalanya OvO
13. 01:21:492 (1,3) - blanket kurang mantep ..biarkanlah /runs
14. 01:44:930 (2) - sebaiknja beginie http://puu.sh/9vMIt/1de11d58dd.jpg
15. 02:04:242 (4,5) - blanket ga asik nie
16. 02:16:242 (2,1) - terlalu deket ini entar pacaran lagi (kebawahin dikit)
17. 02:17:742 (3) - blanket aaaaa
18. 02:37:055 (5,6,7,8,9) - ini apa?!??!?!??! begini http://puu.sh/9vMOd/3ca5a0ea2b.jpg kan lebih berkah (kalo bikin star pattern liat dari dua ato tiga sisi, jangan satu aja, entar ga simetris ky gini wkw)
19. 02:38:180 (1,2) - kok distack biar asick huehue /gak emang mau ngejump bagian sini
20. panjang amat sih ini lagu B( ampun mas
21. 03:13:242 (4,6) - blanket dunk ampuni saya
22. 03:19:992 (1) - nanggung amat ini ekornya hha
23. 03:27:680 (1,2) - mending jadiin slider aja, biar gak kagok mencetnya (soalnya sebelomnya udah circle pattern, uda gitu ini jump lagi aheu)
24. 03:33:867 (1) - susah ini!!!11 keanya kalo ga ada maennya jadi lebi gampang ada spiner soalnya

yeyeye modnya gendut
kaya nyanya ( b `w` )b kampret lwwwwwwwww:'[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[

`kabur

Gloria Guard wrote:

I will try this map hard diff mod o3o.
ww thanks gloria-kun ></~

[Hard]

■ 00:15:305 (4,1,2) This part can be made more stack patterns clearly.

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■ 00:16:430 (4) This slider end is not perfect stack.
■ 00:30:305 I just suggestion this point add note i'm following vocal here ;w;
■ 01:01:992 (1) You missing this slider end stack for 01:01:617 (4) slider end point.
■ 01:13:805 (5) Hmm, I suggestion this slider flow Ctrl+G is better imo. well, It can play a natural flow.
■ 01:21:305 (3,4,1) Umm, I think, this jump a little difficult. Can you try this pattern flow?

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it only slider jump so i guess it's ok ;w;
■ 01:35:180 (2) New combo? nah it's no use owo
■ 01:56:742 (2,3) I just want this pattern blanket improve but it's my opinion, If you don't want ignore this suggestion.
■ 02:42:367 Remove timing line here.
■ 03:07:242 (4,5,1) Nya.. nya!!! Can you try this ?!

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Good luck this map rank!

Mako Sakata wrote:

Tenyaaaaaa (✿◕‿◕)つ～
Maaf mod queue aku gabut berbulan-bulan, ditunggu yaaaa buat ranked

HabiHolic wrote:

[Natsu's Normal]

00:05:180 (2) - Why not a blanket?. blanket batter actually is a triangle XD

00:06:680 (1) - tail x:1 60 y: 292 I don't see why, is fine at it is IMO

no kud

1. 00:16:430 - You can consider adding a whistle here as the synthesizer goes.
2. 00:16:242 (3,5) - I'd recommend unstacking these objects. This might just me, but it's probably kinda hard for players who mainly play Hard difficulties to read them because of stacking and the same combo color.
3. 00:23:742 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - It'd be much nicer if you add soft default whistles as well.
4. 01:04:617 (3,4,1) - This flow kinda looks bad because of the shape of (4). How about rearranging (3,4) like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1808006
5. 01:19:242 (3,4) - It's probably kinda hard to play because of the jump with a bit too sharp angle. I'd rearrange to make this pattern more friendly like this if I were you. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1808015
   

   64,20,79805,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   12,176,79992,6,0,L|20:272,1,70,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   172,292,80367,2,0,L|164:196,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

6. 02:08:742 (1,2,3) - I have no idea to fix this, but the current pattern probably will give players an uncomfortable feeling because of the weird flow. I'd recommend making this simpler.
7. 02:11:742 (4,5,1,2) - It looks like the angle of (1) is against the flow to (2). By rearranging (5,1,2) like this, you can make the pattern around here clearer and easier to play. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1808041
   

   268,264,132305,2,0,P|240:300|208:312,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   132,368,132680,6,0,P|124:332|132:296,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   184,226,133055,1,8,0:0:0:0:

8. 03:24:492 (1,3) - It'd be nicer if you rotate these sliders a bit. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1808052 (7° in this screenshot)
9. 03:29:367 (2,3) - I don't think this spacing shouldn't be bigger than 03:28:617 (3,1) - since the melody at around 03:29:367 (2,3) - sounds calmer than 03:28:617 (3,1) - . Same goes for .
10. 03:30:492 (5,1) - Simply a bit too jumpy considering this is a Hard diff.
11. 03:40:242 (2,3,4) - Making a triangle with these objects and Ctrl+G (3,4) looks much better than the current idea in my opinion. Ofc there needs to move 03:41:367 (1,2,3,4,1) - as well. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1808064

1. Time points where a finish should be added as a sound like the cymbal goes.
   
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   1. 01:04:805 -
   2. 01:10:805 -
   3. 01:20:742 -
   4. 01:22:805 -
   5. 02:10:805 -
   6. 02:16:805 -
   7. 02:20:742 -
   8. 02:22:805 -
   9. 03:15:305 -
   10. 03:21:305 -
   11. 03:27:305 -
2. Time points where a finish should be removed as a sound like the cymbal doesn't.
   
   SPOILER

   1. 00:44:180 -
   2. 01:02:180 (1) -
   3. 01:12:680 - + Apparently you forgot to add a whistle here.
   4. 01:44:180 -
   5. 02:02:180 -
   6. 02:32:180 -
   7. 03:06:680 -
   8. 03:08:180 -
   9. 03:17:180 -
   10. 03:18:680 - + A whistle.
   11. 03:33:680 -
3. 00:30:211 (4) - Is this note really necessary? I can't hear any sound here at all. Keeping 1/2 rhythm should be better for this part.
4. 00:58:805 (1,2) - I'd recommend turning into a 1/2 slider instead. I understand the synthesizer is followed here, but it's not basically done in your rhythm, what's worse its volume is not that loud to notice during gameplay. + By doing this, you cam make the rhythm consistent with 01:58:805 (6) - .
   
   There are so many stack patterns in your difficulty as always! I think some of them don't fit with the song well, but should be enough acceptable as your mapping style. + It sounded like finishes are randomly added. Other than them, I don't have any complaints.

KSHR wrote:

Sorry to be late, 10nya. Ofc no kudosu please.


[Hard]

1. 00:16:430 - You can consider adding a whistle here as the synthesizer goes.
2. 00:16:242 (3,5) - I'd recommend unstacking these objects. This might just me, but it's probably kinda hard for players who mainly play Hard difficulties to read them because of stacking and the same combo color. eeh i think it's readable since there's slider 4 (and it'll create follow-path so player wont be soo hard to read this)
3. 00:23:742 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - It'd be much nicer if you add soft default whistles as well.
4. 01:04:617 (3,4,1) - This flow kinda looks bad because of the shape of (4). How about rearranging (3,4) like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1808006
5. 01:19:242 (3,4) - It's probably kinda hard to play because of the jump with a bit too sharp angle. I'd rearrange to make this pattern more friendly like this if I were you. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1808015
   

   64,20,79805,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   12,176,79992,6,0,L|20:272,1,70,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   172,292,80367,2,0,L|164:196,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

6. 02:08:742 (1,2,3) - I have no idea to fix this, but the current pattern probably will give players an uncomfortable feeling because of the weird flow. I'd recommend making this simpler.
7. 02:11:742 (4,5,1,2) - It looks like the angle of (1) is against the flow to (2). By rearranging (5,1,2) like this, you can make the pattern around here clearer and easier to play. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1808041
   

   268,264,132305,2,0,P|240:300|208:312,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   132,368,132680,6,0,P|124:332|132:296,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   184,226,133055,1,8,0:0:0:0:

8. 03:24:492 (1,3) - It'd be nicer if you rotate these sliders a bit. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1808052 (7° in this screenshot)
9. 03:29:367 (2,3) - I don't think this spacing shouldn't be bigger than 03:28:617 (3,1) - since the melody at around 03:29:367 (2,3) - sounds calmer than 03:28:617 (3,1) - . Same goes for .
10. 03:30:492 (5,1) - Simply a bit too jumpy considering this is a Hard diff.
11. 03:40:242 (2,3,4) - Making a triangle with these objects and Ctrl+G (3,4) looks much better than the current idea in my opinion. Ofc there needs to move 03:41:367 (1,2,3,4,1) - as well. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1808064

I'm gonna check Insane tomorrow.

10nya wrote:

yeeeeeeeeeey thanks kusohara

happy623 wrote:

pu pu pu

1. Disable letterbox during breaks ?

1. OD -1. Because you used many 1/2 rhythms in this difficulty.
2. 00:03:680 (1) - add a whistle to the repeat of the slider since you used this sound next slider's repeat 00:05:742 -
3. 01:15:680 (2) - Please move this slider down a bit. Because It touches score and acc number
   
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4. 02:01:805 (4,1) - Please check your pattern of the stack at here 00:24:117 (2,3) - ,00:25:992 (4,1) - ,02:08:555 (2,3) - . you made ​​a different pattern of the stack. so i would remove this stack for beginners. If you follow my suggestions, it prevents the player from misreading.

1. 00:15:867 (2) - As you can see here, since you already have the up and down motion from your previous patterns, the transition from this to the next slider almost feels like unnatural jump. so i recommend you to use ctrl + G to this slider.
2. 00:33:680 (1) - Design suggestion : How about making more curve point here ? It would fit with this vocal.
   
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3. 00:39:305 (4,5,1) - I recommend you to use same spacing about x1.70 like your other parts.
4. 01:37:055 (1,2,3) - Please check spacing here
5. 02:08:742 (1) - I think you don't need to add a new combo here. Please check other kiai times
6. 02:38:930 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - This part is too hard for this difficulty to me. Consider reducing spacings here.