Simple_Star wrote:

Hello,Reat. Here is Mod.Notice Column:1 2 3 4 5 6 7
[EZ]
00:18:537 (18537|5) - If you follow Vocal here. I suggest you Change to Hold.End at 00:19:524 -
00:19:129 (19129|3) - Then remove this
00:19:524 (19524|6) - And Then Move to 1 or 3
00:28:603 - I Suggest you Add a Hold here.End at 00:28:998 - For sequence
00:47:945 (47945|2,48340|1,48734|0,49129|1) - I Suggest you set these Notes likes 1-2-3-4.More Comfortable and more Fun
01:23:866 (83866|5,84063|5) - I Suggest you to Move to 4.Because Other Columns All have continuation press

[NM]
00:00:577 (577|2,577|0) - Remove 1 of these.Because you use 1 Note in other part
00:32:155 - Miss Beat.Add a Note at 1/2/3/4
00:35:313 - ^ Add a Note at 5
00:41:037 (41037|3) - Move to 5.More fun to press
01:10:840 - Add a Note at Right Hand.Because you use 2 Notes in the 01:10:050 -

[HD]
00:06:300 - Remove 1 Note.I think 2 Notes are enough
00:14:787 - Miss Beat.Add a Note
00:16:761 (16761|4,16761|6,16761|0,16761|2) - I Suggest you Set likes:1346. The mirror part likes before
00:19:524 (19524|6,19524|4) - ^ 4 and 6 Likes before
00:24:261 - Miss Beat.Add a Note at 4
00:26:234 - Heavy Beat. Add 3 Notes at 1 4 7
00:26:826 - Light Beat.Add 2 Notes at 2 6
00:53:866 - ~ 00:54:261 - 1/4
01:02:945 - Miss Beat.Add a Note at 1
01:05:511 (65511|2) - Move to 1
01:06:103 (66103|0) - Move to 4 ^These 2 Changes are making Stairs Part
01:09:655 (69655|6,69655|5) - Uncomfortable.Move to Left hand

Good Luck~

- R u m i a - wrote:

mod via pm req

[Generals]
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[EZ]
00:04:919 (4919|4,4919|2) - move to left by 2 . its better a hand balance for ez dif
00:25:445 - add a note
00:28:998 (28998|3) - move to 2 and add a note at 6 ,strong beat.
00:29:787 (29787|4) - better follow piano. move to 00:29:984
00:30:182 (30182|2) - delete
00:32:155 - add a note
00:35:708 (35708|5) - move to 00:35:905
00:36:103 (36103|3) - move to 00:36:498 , stronger beat.
00:47:353 (47353|0) - delete. follow the white line only i think. it might be hard for beginner to read this.
00:47:748 (47748|6) - move to 3
00:54:655 (54655|6) - delete finish sound.
00:54:655 - 1 note is enough
00:57:813 - ^ , dont have finish here too
01:00:971 - ^
01:06:498 - add a note
01:07:682 (67682|2) - delete finish sound.
01:08:274 (68274|4) - unnecessary
01:30:182 (90182|4,90379|4) - why double o.o

[NM]
00:06:892 (6892|2) - 2 note us enough.
00:11:826 (11826|3) - it should be here 00:11:629
00:17:550 - add a note
00:22:287 - add a note at 7
00:23:669 - add a note
00:36:498 (36498|4) - move to 6 , add a note at 3
00:41:234 - add a note , consistency
00:43:998 - add a note or 2 notes.
00:47:155 - add a note at 4
00:47:945 - add a note, and finish sound
00:53:669 - add a note at 5
00:54:063 - add a note at 6
00:57:024 - ^
00:58:603 - add a note at 4
00:58:998 - add a note
01:03:340 - add a note at 5
01:08:076 - add a note at 4
01:22:090 - add a note
01:23:669 - add a note
01:24:261 - ^
01:25:445 (85445|3) - delete. no reason to put 3 notes here. no consistency , or move it here 01:25:642
01:25:840 (85840|3,86234|3) - move to 1st collumn
01:28:405 - add a note


[HD]
sv = 41629 change to 0.80x
47945 change to 0.90x
00:06:300 (6300|6,6300|2) - move left by 1
00:07:484 (7484|1,7682|3) - ctrl + j ( check hitsound)
00:08:471 - add a note
00:11:629 - add a note
00:15:774 (15774|4,15774|3) - switch this 2 collumns does a better pattern
00:22:682 - add a note , strong beat
00:25:642 - add a note at 4
00:30:774 - add a note
00:39:063 - add a note at 4
00:35:905 - add a note at 6
00:37:090 - ^
00:38:471 - ^
00:40:248 - ^
00:42:221 - add at 4
00:43:603 - add at 2
00:46:761 - add at 6
00:51:103 - strong beat . add a note
00:53:669 - add a note at 2
00:53:767 - add a note at 3
00:57:024 - add at 3 for consistency
01:00:576 - add a note , strong beat
01:01:169 - add a note at 4
01:03:340 to 01:03:734 - its better to follow the violin. main beat here.
01:06:892 (66892|6) - move to 3
01:09:261 to 01:10:050 - follow violin. its more enjoyable than following voices.
01:15:576 - add a note
01:16:366 - ^ strong beat
01:17:945 (77945|2,78340|2) - add a note
01:21:892 - add a note
01:22:090 - ^
01:28:208 - ^
01:28:405 - ^

ah if you want my advice. try minimize to follow the voice.
instrument is the best beat to follow. act like you mute the vocals.
as if the instrument is not outstanding like the voice. than map the voice.
this is a pretty good chart. w

ah use this clap and whistle w. http://puu.sh/7yq8N.rar

lZenxl wrote:

From from Queueueueu

[HD]

Everything is pretty smooth when I testplayed it, I liked the patterns especially these chords to emphasize the piano 01:22:682 (82682|6,82682|4,82879|6,82879|4) -

I don't like to list stuff down since it is better to understand than to just fix all the mods without thinking

00:03:932 - I see that the intro's pitch relevancy is a bit messed up, 00:03:932 (3932|2) - Should be in Column 1 AND 00:04:129 (4129|0) - Shoudl be in Column 3
If you didn't know about pitch relevancy, here's the error I pointed out

PITCH RELEVANCY: - Words used : Lower Pitch / Higher Pitch

00:24:655 (24655|0,24655|6,24655|4,24853|5,24853|1,25050|4,25050|6,25050|2,25248|3,25248|5,25445|4,25445|6,25642|5,25642|3) - This pattern is biased to the right hand, I suggest to change it so that it is balanced? I don't see a need to have a heavy density of notes on the right hand

01:03:340 (63340|4,63438|3,63537|2,63636|1,63734|0) - The pitch is going up, your stair should be starting from the left and ending on the right

01:09:951 (69951|1,70050|0) - These notes are really really really awkward to execute if you were to try playing them. I suggest to move them somewhere else?

Good chart, very fitting patterns in my opinion.

[NM]

00:00:577 (577|2,1169|1,1761|0) - Why is the hitsound for the lower pitched piano so soft? They should be louder than 00:00:774 (774|4,971|6,1366|4,1563|6,1958|3,2155|6) - since the lower pitched piano are chords while the higher pitched ones are single notes

00:03:340 (3340|4) - Wrong pitch relevancy | Move Right by 2 columns

00:03:932 - Same error as HD, the pitch relevancy is wrong

00:11:037 (11037|1,11234|0,11234|2) - Are you sure about using brackets in NM? They are really really hard to execute when I first started playing mania, I suggest to change them to something else o_o

00:28:603 (28603|5,28701|4,28800|3,28899|2,28998|5,28998|1) - Wrong Pitch relevancy | Stair from left to right

00:38:669 (38669|0,39063|1,39261|2,39655|1,39853|0,40248|1) - This LN pattern may be too hard for NM players, I suggest to move 00:39:261 (39261|2,39655|1) - to the right hand

00:40:840 (40840|4,41037|4) - Why is this a hammer? I don't see a reason for this to be a hammer o.o

00:43:405 (43405|4,43603|6) - Wrong Pitch relevancy

01:21:300 (81300|0,81498|3,81498|6,81498|0) - This pattern is pretty hard to execute especially when you are hammering with your ring finger, I suggest to move 01:21:300 (81300|1,81498|1,82090|3,82287|2) - Right by 1 column

I suggest to watch out for hard patterns in NM, you might catch some awkward patterns outside of this mod

[EZ]

00:16:366 (16366|4,16366|6,16761|5,16761|3) - This pattern is putting a lot of pressure on the players who press the centre key with their right hand, balance the pattern here

01:08:274 - You should add a note here, this break feels pretty awkward

00:17:748 (17748|1,18142|3) - These should be LNs, the vocals here drag on

No other problems, not much to say about EZ

Good Luck!

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

Mod by request (IRC)
Qrispy Joybox feat.mao - Colorful Minutes [Osu!Mania mod]

[Generals]
BPM + Offset: Okay
Kiai time: No problem
AiMod: No problem found!
Nice song!

Column | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 |

[EZ]
00:02:353 (2353|5,2353|3) - I think this long sound in reach to 00:03:636 - I think that's not match for EZ diff.
00:04:919 (4919|0) - move to 3
00:04:919 (4919|2) - move to 5
00:06:695 - Miss this beat, add 1 - 2 notes previous patterns followed piano.
00:08:669 (8669|5,8669|3) - I think edd at 00:09:951 - it same first comment.
00:17:353 (17353|5) - move to 7, for patterns I'm move this 00:17:155 (17155|1) - by right 1
00:27:221 (27221|4,27221|2) - Those notes not has same beat like 00:27:024 (27024|2,27024|4) - , move it to 1 and 7 and end at 00:28:603 -
00:59:787 (59787|5,60182|4) - I think has strong beat in here, try to add a note in those time
01:22:287 - add a note
01:30:379 (90379|2) - end at 01:33:340 -

[NM]
00:02:353 - add a note in 6, strong beat
00:01:169 (1169|0) - move to 4?
00:04:326 (4326|6) - move to 5 for patterns
00:11:629 (11629|4) - move to 6 for patterns
00:27:024 (27024|0,27024|6) - same problem at EZ, move to 2 and 6
00:29:984 (29984|4) - move to 4, for patterns
00:34:524 (34524|1) - move to 4, for patterns
00:38:274 (38274|5) - ^
00:45:971 (45971|1,45971|5) - why has a same sound in 00:42:813 - but just has 1 LN and this and 2 LNs? Try to change 1 LN to normal note I'm follow piano and vocal. So I think that parts are differnt.
00:52:287 (52287|4) - move to 6, for patterns
01:26:234 (86234|0) - move to 7?
01:30:379 (90379|0,90379|3,90379|6) - end at 01:33:340 -

[HD]
00:01:761 (1761|2) - move to 2?
00:02:353 (2353|1) - move to 4?
00:03:932 (3932|0) - move to 2 if allow this mod ^
00:07:484 - Try this osu.ppy.sh/ss/1432372
00:16:366 (16366|4,16761|2) - Ctrl + J
00:29:195 (29195|6) - move to 2
00:52:484 - add a note
00:58:208 (58208|2) - move to 1
01:06:300 (66300|1) - move to 5
01:09:063 (69063|6) - move to 4
01:09:853 (69853|2) - this LN, I think it end at 01:10:050 - , not has Long sound after here
01:10:445 (70445|6) - move to 4, for patterns
01:15:182 (75182|3) - move to 6, for patterns
01:27:024 (87024|3) - move to 5
01:29:195 (89195|6) - ^
01:29:787 - try this osu.ppy.sh/ss/1432389
01:30:379 (90379|0,90379|2) - end at 01:32:155 -
01:30:379 (90379|6,90379|4) - end at 01:33:340 -
That all! Nice map and nice song!
Good luck :3

PROGUY wrote:

Hi Reat.
Here's my check as requested.

[EZ]
01:19:326 (79326|1) Move to 4th or 5th column.

PROGUY wrote:

Hi Reat.
Here's my check as requested.

[EZ]
01:19:326 (79326|1) Move to 4th or 5th column.

[Shi-Ra] wrote:

Patterns are checked, no problems here, all HSed well and Bubbled~

PROGUY wrote:

Ranked!

Congrats!