Nakahara Mai - Anemone · forum

saymun

Joined July 2009

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saymun 2009-10-23T08:29:24+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Wednesday, 3 February 2010 at 11:31:06 AM

Artist: Nakahara Mai
Title: Anemone
Source: Kamichama Karin
Tags: Anime
BPM: 138
Filesize: 10822kb
Play Time: 04:00
Difficulties Available:

Hard (4.75 stars, 552 notes)
Normal (3.35 stars, 212 notes)

Download: Nakahara Mai - Anemone
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 3rd finished beatmap ;D
Thanks to Breeze for the awesome hit circle XD

Last edited by saymun 2010-02-03T00:31:16+00:00, edited 13 times in total.

Breeze

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Breeze 2010-01-31T10:17:22+00:00

source : Kamichama Karin, not tag o.o
I found nothing fit to make hirciccle :/
if you don't mind, you could use this, it's beautiful anyways

Fell free to PM me if you had finished this map, I'm glad to mod it

This anmation had 3 protagonist maybe o.o, so if you want I could make 3 comboburst
or maybe just make comboburst with one of them

EDIT : changed colour to pink, purple maybe :/

Last edited by Breeze 2010-01-31T12:18:41+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

frost-b-spec

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Joined February 2009

frost-b-spec 2010-01-31T11:40:02+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

kioukiou

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kioukiou 2010-01-31T11:52:27+00:00

I could not find any problem at here. o_o

star.

Card N'FoRcE

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Here since the beginning

Card N'FoRcE 2010-01-31T13:58:55+00:00

- Normal:

.Suggestions:
01:31:588 (1) - extend to 01:35:066?

- Hard:

.Opinions:
02:18:544 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i hope they won't bug you about this. No problems IMHO.
.Suggestions:
01:24:631 (1,2) - this spacing was weird, it confuses me when i compare it to 01:25:066 (4,5). I suggest moving (1) more to the left (moving to the centre of the grid seems perfect)
01:52:457 (1,2) - this is reeeeeeally weird. I think you should remove new combo from 01:52:457 (1) and add a new combo to 01:52:892 (2)

Try these suggestions and see if you like them ^^
After that, reach 8 SP and you can ask me for a protobubble.

saymun

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saymun 2010-01-31T14:08:05+00:00

Card N'FoRcE wrote:
- Normal:
.Suggestions:
01:31:588 (1) - extend to 01:35:066?
Done

- Hard:
.Opinions:
02:18:544 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i hope they won't bug you about this. No problems IMHO. Hhehe, Breeze talked about that too. I didn't stack them all into the centre because i don't like the mountain of stacked circles when you play..
.Suggestions:
01:24:631 (1,2) - this spacing was weird, it confuses me when i compare it to 01:25:066 (4,5). I suggest moving (1) more to the left (moving to the centre of the grid seems perfect)Fixed
01:52:457 (1,2) - this is reeeeeeally weird. I think you should remove new combo from 01:52:457 (1) and add a new combo to 01:52:892 (2)
Fixed

Try these suggestions and see if you like them ^^
After that, reach 8 SP and you can ask me for a protobubble. Will do XD

ouranhshc

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ouranhshc 2010-01-31T15:52:40+00:00

Normal
01:19:414 (1) - place this on (1) of the previous combo

~~ill mod the rest later, i really like it~~

EDIT: i didn't find anything major in hard.
here is a well deserved star

Dusty

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Joined June 2009

Dusty 2010-02-01T03:14:34+00:00

Diabetes song hurts my ears.

Nice sliders, though.

[Hard]
01:21:153 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Weird pattern, first it's doubles and then it's back and forth singles?

03:12:240 (1) - A little off-screen

saymun

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Topic Starter

saymun 2010-02-01T03:29:47+00:00

Dusty wrote:
Diabetes song hurts my ears.

Nice sliders, though.

[Hard]
01:21:153 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Weird pattern, first it's doubles and then it's back and forth singles? I like variety x]

03:12:240 (1) - A little off-screen Fixed it

Kytoxid

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Kytoxid 2010-02-01T04:21:50+00:00

[General]

Comboburst is too wide; must be under 500px width.
Ouch, white notes and kiai...

Offset felt slightly late (10-25ms), double check it?

[Normal]

00:22:457 (1,2,3,4,5) - Shift this combo down 2 grids; 1 currently isn't centered in play mode.
02:48:109 (1) - Can't determine direction without snaking sliders; unrankable.

[Hard]

00:48:538 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same thing about centered notes after a spinner.
01:25:495 (7,8,9) - This bend back is a bit hard to read with all the approach circles blocking the screen.

Cool.

saymun

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Topic Starter

saymun 2010-02-01T04:46:38+00:00

Kytoxid wrote:
[General]

Comboburst is too wide; must be under 500px width. Ok, i resized it with a width of 500px
Ouch, white notes and kiai... changed white to a light purple

Offset felt slightly late (10-25ms), double check it? changed offset it 8,100

[Normal]

00:22:457 (1,2,3,4,5) - Shift this combo down 2 grids; 1 currently isn't centered in play mode. Fixed
02:48:109 (1) - Can't determine direction without snaking sliders; unrankable. Fixed

[Hard]

00:48:538 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same thing about centered notes after a spinner. Fixed
01:25:495 (7,8,9) - This bend back is a bit hard to read with all the approach circles blocking the screen. Fixed

Cool.

Kytoxid

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Kytoxid 2010-02-01T05:07:26+00:00

Pubbled.

EEeee

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EEeee 2010-02-01T18:09:54+00:00

Normal
00:48:534 (1) - add whistle?
and wow, that's it, i think, , nice diff

Hard
00:44:621 (5) - move a little to the left, align under (1)
01:38:534 (1) - add finish
01:41:360 (8) - add finish to the ending of this slider only
02:45:926 (1) - add finish
03:02:013 (1) - ^
03:08:969 (1) - ^
03:10:708 (1) - ^ just to the start point of this slider

well nice map, all put together,
*star just for that

yaya

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yaya 2010-02-02T14:06:19+00:00

bubble

Larto

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Larto 2010-02-02T20:36:53+00:00

Map is popped for some reason, did you reupload?

Anyways...
Hard:
02:18:534 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Make that a normal stack. People will be thankful.

saymun