1. Easy (1,3 stars, 126 notes)
2. Fluttershy03's Insane (4,83 stars, 336 notes)
3. Hard (4,59 stars, 258 notes)
4. Normal (2,89 stars, 199 notes)

1. OD2 -> OD4 ? OD2 seems to be to low for a normal
2. 02:08:200 (5,6) - fix blanket
3. 02:12:992 (6,7) - ^
4. 03:13:305 - 03:14:923 - Add spinner

1. HPdrain 8 -> HPdrain 6
2. 00:33:617 (2) - make it synchron
3. 01:54:450 - Add note?
4. 02:29:033 (7) - move this slider to x:460 y:116 for a blanked with 02:28:617 (6) -
5. 02:35:700 (1) - 02:36:533 (3) - fix blanket
6. 02:37:367 (4,5) - blanket here
7. 02:39:562 - fix blanket
8. 02:51:117 (2,3) - ^

1. HPdrain 5 -> HPdrain 7 its lower than on the hard lol
2. 00:35:700 (1,2) - fix blanket
3. 00:36:950 (1,2) - ^
4. 00:38:617 (2,3) - ^
5. 01:36:533 (1,2) - ^
6. 02:05:700 (1,2) - ^
7. 02:06:950 (1,2) - make this synchron? like this?
   
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8. 02:08:200 (1,2,1,2) - fix blanket
9. 02:10:283 (1,2) - ^
10. 02:35:700 (1,2,3) - ^
11. 02:36:950 (1,2,3) - ^
12. 03:13:158 - 03:13:746 - add here a slider like this maybe?
    
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FlobuFlobs wrote:

Fluttershy03's Insane

1. HPdrain 5 -> HPdrain 7 its lower than on the hard lol Yes I know orz. I don't know if I just got better, but 7 isn't as hard as I remember it when I did this map.
2. 00:35:700 (1,2) - fix blanket Done!
3. 00:36:950 (1,2) - ^ Done!
4. 00:38:617 (2,3) - ^Done!
5. 01:36:533 (1,2) - ^Done!
6. 02:05:700 (1,2) - ^Done!
7. 02:06:950 (1,2) - make this synchron? like this? um I think this is fine
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 02:08:200 (1,2,1,2) - fix blanket Done!
9. 02:10:283 (1,2) - ^ Done!
10. 02:35:700 (1,2,3) - ^Done!
11. 02:36:950 (1,2,3) - ^Done!
12. 03:13:158 - 03:13:746 - add here a slider like this maybe? Ok
    
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I hope i could help <3

Mao wrote:

General

1. Remove Ib, Mary and Theme from your Tags since you've already used them in Title/Source Done!
2. Add Fluttershy03 to your Tags Done!
3. None of your diffs is hitsounded. Consider adding whistles and finishes for emphasis. A map needs
   hitsounding or it just simply feels empty. Hitsounding has to support your map and fit the music. If
   you've got more questions on hitsounding feel free to poke me ingame. I'll try to work on it
4. Replace the sliderslide whit the silent one Now fixed! yay!

Normal

• 
  CS4 to fit the spread. CS4 Normals are cool :3 Okay!
  OD3 and HP3 fit better since your AR is 4 and you don't have an Easy. I personally made this 94% /me runs Okay!
  There are some polarity issues here and there that made me think it's on a white tick but it was on a red
  tick. You really have to take care about your polarity. If you are always mapping white ticks you have to
  show the player that the following objects are on a red tick and if you want to end red tick polarity
  (always mapping red ticks) you have to show them that the next object is on a white tick.
  You do this by a object in the current polarity followed by a snapped object in the following polarity. Fixed too!

1. 00:10:700 (1) - Why do these have 4 anchor points? Remove one of the two on the slidertrack. Fixed!
   01:37:783 (4) - This sounds weird and is kinda confusing for newbies. You may want to split this into 1/2
   sliders. Okay!
2. 02:56:325 (2,3) - I don't think that these are that good readable for newer players. Fixed!
3. 03:08:755 (1,1) - ^ Fixed!
   
   Another big problem in this Normal is the unconsistent spacing. Newer players mostly read after spacing
   so if a note has the same distance at the timeline but the a distance variation from 0,7 to 1,8 in the
   Grid they think the note comes later or earlier in the map! Consider remapping this with one consistent
   distance snap, without stacks etc. for way better readability. It's just messed up and not well playable
   for newer players which shouldn't be the case for a Normal and because this is your easiest difficulty.
   Tried to do my best, I used 1.0x in the whole map and 1.4x in parts which some sliders overlaps.

Hard

1. 00:36:117 (1,2,3,4,5) - I'd recommend using Create Polygon Circles for star patterns like these :V Okay!
2. 00:42:783 (5) - A straight slider could fit the music way better here. Hmmpm... okay
3. 00:45:700 (2) - Move it a bit more left (of course replace the flipped one aswell) to avoid that
   overlap at the y-axis. Fixed!
4. 00:48:200 (6) - Same as I said before, a straight slider would fit better here. okay
5. 01:04:033 (9) - Move to 234|269 for line with the circles before for better aesthetics. Also a jump
   couldn't hurt. If you do this you have to rearrange the following objects aswell. Moved the hitcircle only. I'm not sure about the jump :S
6. 01:50:700 (1,2,3,4) - I'd suggest you mapping this like in the first part for more consistency :c Okay!
7. 01:55:700 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - These seem a bit random placed. Consider doing a geometric or
   symmetrical pattern here. It didn't seem, it was random placed, lol. I didn't know what to do but now it's fixed
8. 02:34:033 (1) - This spinner doesn't really fit here imo. This should really be mapped since the
   vocals are so strong here. Yeah you are right
9. 02:56:325 (2,3) - How about switching them for a better flow? Okay!
   
   Screenshot

   
10. 02:57:575 (4,5) - ^
11. 03:11:394 (1,2,3,4) - You've decided for lower spacing in the first place so why is it so high now?
    Her voice is getting lower so keep the distances lower. It was intended to be the annoying part when you lost the FC... but meh.
    
    Work on your aesthetics, create patterns and keep your map consistent. You are on the right way.
    Definitely the best diff in this set.
    Still got some really big flow issues and lack of aesthetics :c
    A big problem is the rhythm. You should map strong notes in the music with a clicked object as a slider head or a circle and not so emphasized notes with a slider reapt or tail. That is something really important. Mostly sliders from the red to the white tick aren't good since most time the white tick is way stronger than the red one. I hope I was able to give you a better idea of what note you have to map with what kind of object!
    If you have any questions feel free to poke me ingame. Working on it, it's hard to make it consistent tho...

Julini wrote:

M4M

General

-Try to add some Hitsounds, this will definetly sound nice Sure! Working on it
-The Timing may a bit strange? I am not really sure about this...
00:25:700 - 00:36:121 145 BPM... maybe ^^
02:25:700 - 02:32:275 146 BPM... I think, I am not a genius in this xD
But you should let look some more people over the timing, maybe try to post it in the timing check queue
I'll keep the timing as it is.

Normal

AR=6 Nope

00:52:367 (2,3) - distance is different, in a Normal diff the spacing should not be irritating ^^ Try to place the objects in a different way (maybe the following slider is have to be concerned too) Fixed!
01:10:700 add circle Okay!
01:37:783 (4) - reverseslider with more than one reverse are very irritating for a beginner, so try to change this Okay!
02:05:700 remove NC Sure
02:43:200 too many reverses~ I'll keep this

Hard

CS=4? they seem so small It seems fair to me

01:07:575 NC Okay!
01:17:575 ^ Okay!

Mao wrote:

Fluttershy03's Insane

1. 00:11:325 (2,3,4,5) - You may want to do a perfect square here using "Create Polygon Circles" Ok done
2. 00:20:700 (1) - Why is the second anchor point after the red anchor point there. One would be enough
   to make the slider look good. (Same goes for the others all over the map) Because that's the shape I had in mind when I did the sliders.
   
   Screenshot

   http://puu.sh/7Xcje.jpg
3. 00:43:200 (8,9,1,2) - Placing these as shown in the Screenshot below is better to me since the overlap
   between 9 and 2 looks really ugly to me. Done.
   
   Screenshot

   
4. 00:48:200 (5) - This overlaps the Score :c Done!
5. 00:52:783 (6) - Remove repeat and add a Circle at the big white tick because the vocals are pretty
   strong here, don't you think so? They should really be clicked. Okay
   
   Screenshot

   
6. 01:10:700 (1,2,3,4) - This didn't flow that well to me. Something like this could play better. The
   transition between those wasn't just simply that good since it was always changing the direction kind of
   steep. I thought it was quite bad too.Made it less steep, but didn't do what was in the pic.
   
   Screenshot

   
7. 01:12:367 (1) - Out of the screen Fixed when fixing the above ^
8. 01:18:200 (2,3) - Move to 33|236 for a better transition :3 Nope, aim to keep symmetry with 01:17:575 (1,2) -
9. Let the break end at 01:20:700 - (Same goes for the other breaks aswell) I'll consider it, just so you know, however, I can't really map to these vocals.
   
   Screenshot

   
10. 01:31:012 (2) - Extend the slider to the white tick.No, if I do that then the hitsound will sound very late and offbeat, and if you play in 25% you'll see that the word actually ends on that blue tick
11. 02:02:367 (3,4,1,2) - These jumps are so overdone compared to the rest of your placement. The spacing
    is so high. Ikr! Remapped that part.
12. 02:09:033 (1) - Object is out of screen Fixed!
13. 02:11:325 (3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Same as I said about the other jumps. It just seems like you've though "The map is too easy I
    have to add some crazy jumps". These aren't flowing well and are out of place. They don't really fit the
    music and go all over the screen. There were other parts in the music that were pretty similiar. Why did
    you map this like this? Ok to be totally honest here that quotation was TOTALLY me when I did this map lol, so you kinda just answered your own question. It's a shame all good things have to come to an end, but it has to be done. Knew those jumps wouldn't last more than 2 mods.
14. 02:43:200 (4) - Use a rotated version of 02:42:783 (3) - for a consistent pattern here.Fixed and moved to a different position because I thought that part was crap.
15. 03:07:366 (1) - Add a note here since the piano is pretty strong and high pitched here!Was mapping to vocals, but I guess it'll sound better with a note.
16. 03:09:866 - Unneeded inherited point :c lol how did that get through? Fixed!
    
    This difficulty seems kinda overdone to me. You've mapped that many blue tick sliders that really don't
    fit the music in my opinion. It just simply plays and feels sloppy to me. It feels messed up. Thanks for that dx
    Listen clearly to the music and just map the ticks that have to mapped! Strong beats in terms of vocals
    or instruments should be mapped with a slider head or a circle, other not that emphasized ticks should be
    mapped with a slider tail or repeat.I'll try orz

Please reply! I hope it was helpful and good luck! :3

Julini wrote:

Guest-Insane

The S.V. seems to be too high, slider are a bit fast for such a calm song
Also there are many points where the spacing is a bit irritating, maybe try to make it a bit clearer The SV is completely fine, fixed most spacing issues.
e.g.
00:19:450 (1,2) - strange jump Relocated
02:01:325 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2) - really hard to play ^^' Fixed in previous mod
02:11:325 (3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - really baaad jumps xD try make it playable

1. Remap

1. Remap

1. Delete

Kibbleru wrote:

[Normal]

1. Remap

[Hard]

1. Remap

kds plz

neonat wrote:

Normal

00:05:700 (1,2) - if possible, change how this is placed, or the shape, because this doesn't flow well Changed the position and also the shape of the (2) a bit. Imo it's better, but not sure...
00:09:033 (1) - I don't think a NC is needed for this though. Okay, it was only to keep a short combo, but you're right
00:16:950 (2,4) - because of the DS they look weird, so possibly move them further apart using the same DS Fixed!
00:35:700 (1) - too curvy Yep, ugly curvyness
00:38:200 (6,7) - the slider goes up, yet the next note is below, flip the slider or put the circle above to have a more lenient/much nicer flow
seems lacking of hitsounds, possibly add whistles when the vocals start, like 00:45:700 (1,2) - just an idea, it really is quite empty I rotated the slider just a little. About the hitsounds, that a great idea! I'll use it in all the diffs
00:49:867 (5,1) - awkward position, the flow is broken Yeah, maybe is not the best position. Changed
01:07:575 (5,7) - don't let them touch each other Ugh... Fixed!
01:20:700 - drag the break line till this point Sup
01:46:950 (4,5) - don't place the next slider too high up above the previous, having it closer to the side of it makes the flow better Sure, fixed!
01:50:700 - drag the break line to this part as well If i move it, the break would seems very spaced. No changes here
02:02:992 (6,8) - too close to each other imo, affects the presentation Moved
02:12:575 (5,6) - lower it down so i doesn't touch 02:10:700 (2) Okay!
02:34:867 (4,5,1) - woah hey, don't change the spacing so suddenly, it's uncalled for especially in a Normal! If you're using that large spacing of 02:30:283 (1,2,3,4,5,6) keep it all the way for the kiai, or don't use it at all Yeah I have some problems here but I couldnt fix it. I' trying to make it better here...
02:36:533 (2,3) - better blanket is possible Okay
02:50:700 (1,2) - same as the 1st suggestion Copy-Paste
02:58:617 (6,7) - too close to each other for comfort More closer
03:01:810 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - and then suddenly 03:06:255 (9,1) is big spacing again.....I think they are too close imo, it can be confused with 1/2 beats

Hard

00:43:200 (6) - NC Added
00:54:450 (6) - move to x:364 y: 156 so the spacing between 00:52:992 (4,5,6) looks the same Okay
01:01:117 (2,4) - could blanket better nope, it's okay
01:10:700 (1,4) - stack nicely It wasn't a stack but nvm, fixed
01:15:700 (9) - NC Added
01:35:700 (1) - higher up slightly Okay
01:38:617 (2,3,4,5) - that space is too far Yeah, impossible for this diff
01:46:533 (1,2) - not stacked perfectly Fixed all!
01:46:950 (2,3) - ^
01:47:367 (3,4) - ^
02:04:867 (1,2) - unnecessarily far, make it closer I want to emphasize the strong "but then" in the lyrics, thats why is the jump
02:13:200 (5,6) - better if stacked nope, i like them
02:39:450 (10,11) - normal spacing fits better Same ^^^
02:58:200 (9) - NC Added
03:07:366 (1) - object end not snapped oops... The red point was misplaced, now it's fixed
03:08:771 (2,3,4,5) - if the circles and sliders aligned themselves in a straight line, it would be better Sure, done!
03:11:417 (5) - NC to better indicate this is the final line of the song Added

Good luck, it's a nice song