This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, February 25, 2014 at 12:48:30 PM

Artist: Mami Kawada
Title: Break a spell (TV Size)
Source: Tokyo Ravens
Tags: ED2
BPM: 175
Filesize: 3563kb
Play Time: 01:29
Difficulties Available:

1. New Mage (3.38 stars, 106 notes)
2. Spell (5 stars, 307 notes)

Download: Mami Kawada - Break a spell (TV Size)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Low quality but whatever ;w; Waiting for the official release @ 26/2! *^ *

I'll request mods to improve the quality of the map in the mean time so just ignore teh quality of the mp3 until it's available!

P.S. Need Easy and hard :c if you're good at it PM me u.u;

Thank you :3

Yeah, you've seen my IRC mod xD

[Testplay]

The map is really fun to play :c

But this circle isn't really visible, and really diffcult to hit :C

00:33:382 - Pls don't place this under the slider it's too confusing really xD

short mod~

[Spell]

in my honest opinion, cs4 looks better

00:16:240 (4) - something like this? http://gyazo.com/8db540a52f6d38bb8c15ad067a0ceacf

00:23:440 (3,4) - why not blanket

01:11:268 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - umm, a bit too long to stack don't you think? how bout make it like 01:08:525 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) -


[New Mage]

00:08:182 - i suggest something like this http://gyazo.com/b8d2b7be54ed824d3688bb48d85057cf
the one you have just feels off...
00:13:668 - same here
01:14:011 - ^
01:19:497 - ^

00:29:440 (1,1) - put these on the same vertical level http://gyazo.com/3283a91cc47275d26c95a932c5fca17b
something like that

Thank you Anime and Kibb! Very appreciated! Applied both mods normally!

00:08:182 - i suggest something like this http://gyazo.com/b8d2b7be54ed824d3688bb48d85057cf

sry i think i should explain it to you better

okay so (no kudos for this)

first slider starts at 00:08:182 - and ends at 00:08:525 -

second slider starts at 00:08:868 - and ends at 00:09:554 -

add a circle at 00:09:897 -

Kibbleru wrote:

00:08:182 - i suggest something like this http://gyazo.com/b8d2b7be54ed824d3688bb48d85057cf

sry i think i should explain it to you better

okay so (no kudos for this)

first slider starts at 00:08:182 - and ends at 00:08:525 -

second slider starts at 00:08:868 - and ends at 00:09:554 -

add a circle at 00:09:897 -

Yeah I know, I just decided to do it like this, it's easy to read and wont confuse the new players, thanks for the reply though

I think you should use the anime as the source "Tokyo Ravens"
and you've forgotten to write (Tv Size) i guess :c

AnimeStyle wrote:

I think you should use the anime as the source "Tokyo Ravens"
and you've forgotten to write (Tv Size) i guess :c

Yuuuuuh gomen :c Will include it in the net updaet T_T Thanks!

Nice beatmap! There are some suggestions for it:
from 00:37:668 (1) - to 00:38:954 (16) -
better replace a slider instead of 16 circles, as rapid pressing for a long time greatly increased the pressure of the players

for 01:09:211 - adding a break time here may slightly help players to ready for focusing the incoming circles

for the last spinner, it is too long, even it is not a spinner spamming, as it still causes the player fatigue after a long play, and it gives a big space to get score, which makes the score doesn't varies the difficulty. Replace it with sliders or shorten the spinner(more better) might helps

Hope there suggestions help, or maybe my skill level is just too low for this beatmap...?

*Also, why don't you make a hard difficulty too?

I put a mini slider at the begining and the end instead, thanks!

Put the Break time

I'm terrible at hard difficulties ;c

hello, m4m~

Just a suggestion to change yoru difficulty name from New Mage to Apprentice

[New Mage]
HP +1 OD +1 and AR +1 (imo)
00:07:155 (2,3) - better blanket
00:23:955 (1,2,1) - looks prettier http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1362599
00:40:412 (3) - NC
00:41:783 (5) - NC
01:11:268 (1,2,1) - only 3 notes here I don't think the timing points in between will help much
01:21:554 (1,2) - try to curve the 1st slider like the second to make them identical


[Spell]
OD+ 1
00:25:840 (3,4) - better blanket
00:32:697 (4,5,6,7) - hard to read. consider stacking all 3 circles or move them apart from the slider
00:39:554 (4,5) - I think this could look better http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1362637
00:45:897 (1,2,3,4,5) - same combo I'd say
00:46:753 (4,2) - stack them
01:04:754 (5,1) - line it up like 01:03:040 (1,2) - these two
01:06:811 (3,3) - the overlap seems confusing, how about you move 01:07:497 (3) - down a few spaces

Overall you did a great job imo
good luck~

M4M
[General]
Since it is TV size, I recommend you to add a video.
I suppose you should use plane name of diificulty better.
New Mage →　Nromal
Spell → Insane.
And you should make a Hard diff since the gap of two difficulty is big.(Maybe you'll make it because it's WIP)
Uncheck the "Widescreen" since there is no SB.
[New Mage]
At lesast AR4 better for this diff, also HP and OD should be 3 or 4.
For the easiest diff, I don't agree tick 2 since it will tend to miss notes for newbie.
Placement
00:12:982(2) Bent this slider on the reverse? The movement from (1) looks more natural.
00:41:782
00:41:782(5) Add NC better, 7 combo looks long.
01:11:268(1,2,1) For the easiest diff, you shouldn't make a stack since it isn't clear to hit notes for newbie.
Rhythm
00:47:311 Unnecesarry green line.
01:23:611 ^
00:08:182(4,1) Swap these notes better, you can pick a downbeat at 00:08:868 on the begiinig, and it sounds more better.
01:14:011(4,1) ^
00:17:097- Is this blank in really necessary? I don't think so because this song in only 1:30.
Hit Sound
[Spell]
Placement
00:13:325(2) Stack this note at (1) betetr not (3) because (3) has sphasized so I guess some spacing looks nicely.
00:20:868(4,5,1,2,3) Just a bit consufued placement, especially the stack at (5) looks not good.
00:26:525(5) Move this note a bit to avoid overlapped with a slider.
00:33:211(5) The spacing isn't reasonable, you should set same distance on here. e.g.)
00:46:582(1,2) Since you stacked previous (1,2), for consistence, you can do same placement on here better.
Rhythm
00:23:097(2,3) Combine these notes to 1 1/1 slider better to follow the vocal, I don't suppose it is better to make a brank.
00:57:897(4) Agaian it looks too confused, player will expect a stream without break. So you should add a note 00:57:811 better.
Hit Sound
00:33:554(1) Add finish better.

Not a full mod, you can improve this map more and more. But not bad, good luck.

Thanks a lot for your mods, everything applied! I'll think about the video though, I feel more like making an SB with lyrics and stuff, we'll see. The difficulty names will remain same for now, I might change them later, I'll see!

Hello. (My english is bad. ;_;)

[Normal]
Please make Easy diff because normal 3.28 star!

Approach Rate: +1 (5)
Overall: +1 (4)

00:02:012 (3) - better blanket! Center point: x: 180 y: 40 , end point: x: 92, y: 60 Screenshot: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1365195
00:10:925 (2) - Replace 1 slider, and 1 circle! 00:10:925: put slider here, 00:11:611: put circle here. e.g: http://puu.sh/79kdB.jpg
00:13:668 (3,1) : replace it! 00:13:668 (3) - = slider ; 00:14:011 (1) - = circle. Timeline e.g.: http://puu.sh/79kt1.jpg
00:32:183 (1) - Remove NC
00:34:926 (1) - ^
00:37:669 (1) - ^
00:40:412 (1) - ^
00:46:240 (1) - ^
00:51:726 (1) - ^
00:57:212 (1) - ^
01:02:698 (1) - ^
01:03:725 (2) - New combo
01:16:068 (1) - Remove NC
01:21:554 (1) - ^
00:36:298 (1) - better blanket! Center point: x: 128, y: 124
00:40:412 (1) - ^ Center point: x: 344, y: 100 End point: x: 392, y: 48
01:06:468 (1) - Remove spinner and
01:06:125 - 1:11:268 map these parts
01:19:497 (1,2) - replace it! Timeline e.g.: http://puu.sh/79kt1.jpg

[Insane]

Put a circle here: 00:18:297 (4) -
00:21:040 (5) - ^
00:25:154 (5,1) - delete, and put slider here. Timeline e.g.: http://puu.sh/79kRs.jpg
put a circle here: 00:46:411 (3) -
Remove NC: 01:05:097 (1) -
01:07:154 (1) - ^
01:07:840 (1) - ^
01:08:182 (1) - ^

Good Luck.

M4M request~

[general]
suggest to map from begining in spell diff. because during time is different in two diffs
delete the .osb file? because you dont have SB
enable the countdown and add AudioLeadIn as 2000

[spell]
00:06:297 miss a strong beat here. maybe end 00:06:125 (1) - here and add a note 00:06:468 (2) - . same like 00:11:611 (1,2) -
00:11:268 add a note here. feel strange on this gap. like you did 00:08:525 (4) - here
00:18:125 (3) - why not change this to a slider? imo it will be much better than just follow drum.
00:19:668 (6,1) - ctrl+G feel really nice to me
00:21:040 same as above
00:24:982 (4,5,1,2) - rhythm sound strange. maybe change to this
00:28:068 (1,2,3,4) - rhythm here also strange to me. not follow the vocal ,either the drum. if you want to follow the drum maybe try this
00:37:668 (1) - end at 00:37:925 and change 00:38:525 (1) - to note and slider
01:07:154 (1,2) - ctrl+G flow will be better
01:11:611 (5,6,7,8) - try to increase distance among these four? make something like this
01:17:097 same above

[New Mage]
01:02:698 (1,3) - stack them
good mapset have nothing to say

good luck~

hi m4m
[New Mage]
00:02:011(3) - slider start and middle - add whistle
00:08:525(4) - slider end - remove whistle
00:13:668(5) - add whistle
00:14:011(1) - remove NC
00:56:868(1) - add finish


two timing points. remove one of them

[Spell]
00:11:440(5) - move this circle to 00:11:268
01:17:268(5) - move this circle to 01:17:097
01:29:782(1) - add silence

Good luck mapping

AW-sama wrote:

Hello. (My english is bad. ;_;)

[Normal]
Please make Easy diff because normal 3.28 star!

Approach Rate: +1 (5)
Overall: +1 (4)

00:02:012 (3) - better blanket! Center point: x: 180 y: 40 , end point: x: 92, y: 60 Screenshot: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1365195 >> ok!
00:10:925 (2) - Replace 1 slider, and 1 circle! 00:10:925: put slider here, 00:11:611: put circle here. e.g: http://puu.sh/79kdB.jpg >> Hmm the way it is now fits the song
00:13:668 (3,1) : replace it! 00:13:668 (3) - = slider ; 00:14:011 (1) - = circle. Timeline e.g.: http://puu.sh/79kt1.jpg >> ^
00:32:183 (1) - Remove NC >> ok!
00:34:926 (1) - ^ >> ok!
00:37:669 (1) - ^ >> Nah :c
00:40:412 (1) - ^ >> ok!
00:46:240 (1) - ^ >> ok!
00:51:726 (1) - ^ >> ok!
00:57:212 (1) - ^ >> nah :c
01:02:698 (1) - ^ >> ok!
01:03:725 (2) - New combo >> ok!
01:16:068 (1) - Remove NC >> ok!
01:21:554 (1) - ^ >> ok!
00:36:298 (1) - better blanket! Center point: x: 128, y: 124 >> ok!
00:40:412 (1) - ^ Center point: x: 344, y: 100 End point: x: 392, y: 48 >> ok!
01:06:468 (1) - Remove spinner and >> I'd rather leave it as it is xD
01:06:125 - 1:11:268 map these parts
01:19:497 (1,2) - replace it! Timeline e.g.: http://puu.sh/79kt1.jpg

[Insane]

Put a circle here: 00:18:297 (4) - >> Nah :c
00:21:040 (5) - ^>> Nah :c
00:25:154 (5,1) - delete, and put slider here. Timeline e.g.: http://puu.sh/79kRs.jpg >> ok!
put a circle here: 00:46:411 (3) - >> Nah :c
Remove NC: 01:05:097 (1) - >> Nah :c
01:07:154 (1) - ^>> Nah :c They fit with the finish combos so well
01:07:840 (1) - ^>> Nah :c ^
01:08:182 (1) - ^>> Nah :c ^

Good Luck.

Thanks :3

kamisamaaa wrote:

M4M request~

[general]
suggest to map from begining in spell diff. because during time is different in two diffs
delete the .osb file? because you dont have SB
enable the countdown and add AudioLeadIn as 2000

[spell]
00:06:297 miss a strong beat here. maybe end 00:06:125 (1) - here and add a note 00:06:468 (2) - . same like 00:11:611 (1,2) ->> ok!
00:11:268 add a note here. feel strange on this gap. like you did 00:08:525 (4) ->> ok!
00:18:125 (3) - why not change this to a slider? imo it will be much better than just follow drum.>> ok!
00:19:668 (6,1) - ctrl+G feel really nice to me>> ok!
00:21:040 same as above>> ok!
00:24:982 (4,5,1,2) - rhythm sound strange. maybe change to this>> I don't get this one o.o
00:28:068 (1,2,3,4) - rhythm here also strange to me. not follow the vocal ,either the drum. if you want to follow the drum maybe try this >> ^
00:37:668 (1) - end at 00:37:925 and change 00:38:525 (1) - to note and slider >> Nah i like it this way o:
01:07:154 (1,2) - ctrl+G flow will be better >> ok!
01:11:611 (5,6,7,8) - try to increase distance among these four? make something like this >> thats a stream, you know, I don't get it. o.o
01:17:097 same above >> ok!

[New Mage]
01:02:698 (1,3) - stack them >> nuh, it's not good to have hidden notes in normal :c
good mapset have nothing to say

good luck~

Thanks a lot :3.

arviejhay wrote:

hi m4m
[New Mage]
00:02:011(3) - slider start and middle - add whistle >> ok!
00:08:525(4) - slider end - remove whistle >> ok!
00:13:668(5) - add whistle >> ok!
00:14:011(1) - remove NC >> ok!
00:56:868(1) - add finish >> ok!


two timing points. remove one of them

[Spell]
00:11:440(5) - move this circle to 00:11:268 >> ok!
01:17:268(5) - move this circle to 01:17:097 >> ok!
01:29:782(1) - add silence >> I don't have it now but I'll consider it.

Good luck mapping

Thank you!!


Your maps will be added tomorrow cause I go to work soon! Thanks a lot <3

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