Fluttershy03 wrote:

Hey, mod here~

General

Celzon's Easy has conflicting tags with the other diffs, so you should fix this. Yea, because of the unicode orz. Fixed

Hard

Reduce the slider tick rate to one. Sliders such as this don't look to great with a slider tick overlapping an end. Ah, just notice that I put that. Changed to 1

00:09:052 (2) - Move this circle to x:327 y:80 for a perfect stack with the slider end of 00:08:212 (4) Eh? I think you didn't update before. But I kinda changed that part. Thanks anyway~

00:37:373 (1,2) - These sliders actually seem to be going at different angles. Fix this by moving the slider end of 00:38:212 (2) - to x:264 y:112
I made it symmetrical :3

Insane

00:28:352 (5,1,2,1) - I'm not to fond of these two sliders, they seem hard to read and ugly looking imo. Some people might like, some people might not. But these slider looks good and readable to me because of the NC. No change~

00:40:520 (4) - Seems pretty overmapped in my opinion,I don't hear anything that would justify the 1/8 repeater slider. That part of the song the vocal starts to like increase her voice (Not sure how to explain). I believe 1/8 repeater is the best way to map that part

01:12:408 (1,2) - Blanket seems slightly off. Perhaps you could move 01:12:408 (1) - to x:121 y:41? Nah, the blanketing there is fine to me

01:17:863 (2,3) - Similar to what I've mentioned earlier in the mod. Hard to read and looks bad. Same reason as earlier. It doesn't really look ugly to me, but I just changed the NC a bit though ~

01:27:094 (2) - Not a fan of this awkward slider velocity change, it might trip some players up. I see, but the change in slider velocity here fits the song as the singer drags her voice in this part. Might change it sooner or later

Well, guess that's it from me, good luck~

azintairin710 wrote:

from your M4M queues ._.
sorry for my bad english

[ffstar's Normal]
this SV is quite slow i prefer 1.10 or 1.00 i think 0.9 is quite high already
00:02:758 : whistle nice!
00:03:387 : ^ ^
00:04:436 : ^ ^
00:05:066 : ^ ^
00:09:261 : i thing this tick have to get a hitsound ._. nvm just leave it
00:21:010 : whistle no
00:21:639 : ^ ok
00:28:982 : ^ no
00:41:359 : stack with next slider? no
00:49:961 : clap or finish is ok your timing there, i will consider you mentioned about the spinner start, but spinner start cant add hitsound >< edit: i see, but i added whistle instead of those
00:55:835 : if you follow the vocal so it must be 1 1/2 slider and give a note at 00:56:674 yea i consider this before, now changed
01:00:660 : give a note if you follow the vocal no
01:02:758 : fix this slider no, that is intentional
01:12:198 : whistle? ok
01:13:352 : ^ k
01:15:031 : ^ k
01:18:387 : ^ k

and good luck

Kazuya-sama wrote:

Hello.

[Normal]

00:02:128 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Hmm... Remap these parts? timeline e.g.: http://puu.sh/81UZq.png and http://puu.sh/81V0G.png ? good idea
00:09:891 (2,3) - delete and put 1/2 slider here 00:09:891 or put circles here: 00:09:891 - , 00:10:101 ? no
00:23:108 (2) - move: x: 280 y: 132 ? ok i think

Good luck

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Fluttershy03 wrote:

[Celzon's Easy]

I repositioned everything after reading this ;_; thanks!
00:08:842 (1,2) - These two notes are really not blanketed well because the slider end of 00:08:842 (1) - is touching the slidertrail of 00:09:576 (2) - . At a low distance snap like that, you should not be going for 3/4 blankets like that.

00:15:555 (1) - This slider here happens to be touching parts of 00:13:877 (3) - , this isn't good, especially for an easy diff because it looks bad and the typical easy player would have problems reading that.

00:20:590 (1,2) - This blanket is quite bad, try moving it to x:60 y:232

00:26:884 (2,3) - This blanket is also quite bad (but not as bad :>) Try moving 00:26:884 (2) - to x:97 y:180

00:42:408 (3,4) - This blanket is also quite bad as well dx Try moving 00:43:457 (4) - to x:142 y:106

azintairin710 wrote:

[Celzon's Easy]

00:11:359 : whistle maybe? Changed
00:13:877 : ^ Changed
00:26:884 : prefer whistle then clap ._. it's my opinion I prefer it the way it is now, two claps
00:49:122 : this pattern look ugly ._. i prefer change it like this I changed it, but to a different pattern

00:52:478 : give hitsound. anything is good (i prefer finish) Changed
01:02:758 : i think it's too close although it's an easy diff It's on DS1.0
01:04:226 : prefer change it ._. this spinner is to short for beginner Autoplay can do 5000 on it, so I assume it's fine for beginners. They just need to pass it right?
01:07:898 : whistle Changed
01:10:101 : whistle? (i think it's sound better) Changed

Kazuya-sama wrote:

[Easy]

uncheck widescreen support. Didn't notice. Thanks!

00:02:128 (1) - 00:03:807 (2) - 00:05:485 (3) - repeat sliders? Timeline: http://puu.sh/81Ut7.jpg Changed
I repositioned everything again but it hasn't been uploaded so sorry :/
00:20:590 (1) - Blanket: second white tick/Point: x: 128 y: 292 and last tick: x: 56, y: 128 and move 00:21:849 (2) - circle: x: 60 y: 236 ?
00:27:303 (3) - Blanket: second tick: x: 152 y: 252 last tick: x: 40 y: 252 ?
00:30:660 (6) - center point: x: 444 y: 280 and move circle here: x: 364 y: 236 ?

00:40:730 (1) - CTRL+SHIFT+R and rotate -90 degrees. (Origin: please check the "Selection centre"). It's better! http://puu.sh/81UGb.jpg Changed

00:49:961 : clap or finish is ok your timing there, i will consider you mentioned about the spinner start, but spinner start cant add hitsound ><

1. Offset sounds a little off. I got ~2,164 but you should probably find someone that's better at timing than me. These mods are prior an offset change.

1. 00:06:115 (3) - this blanket needs fixing.
2. 00:26:254 (2,3,1,2,3) - i think this would fit better. the flow from 00:26:464 (3) to (2) to the stream felt pretty strange to play.
   
   screenshot

   
3. 00:27:303 (1) - move this to somewhere like (82,120). Slider is at a weird angle from the stream.
4. 00:33:177 (3,4) - swap these places on timeline
5. 00:36:954 (4,5,6,7) - not sure if you did this on purpose but the stream looks pretty messy.
6. 00:38:842 (3) - i see what you're trying to do here but I think you should just use a circle to match 00:38:003 (3).
7. 00:44:506 (4,5,6,7,1) - maybe try something like this? it might suit the music better
   
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8. 00:45:240 (7,2) - Blanket looks messy. Maybe fix it like this?
   
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9. 00:53:317 (1) - add finish
10. 01:05:905 (1) - finish instead of clap?
11. 01:07:583 (1,2) - i think a 1/2 slider fits better here.
12. 01:10:940 (6) - finish sounds like it'd fit here
13. 01:14:401 (2,3,4,5) - not sure if you did this on purpose but right now it looks unorganized/messy. I think something like this would have better flow:
    
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14. 01:21:429 (1) - finish instead of clap
15. 01:22:688 (1) - ^
16. 01:30:450 (1,1) - doesn't sound right to me. I think a jump using two circles to capture the vocals would be better.

1. 00:51:639 (1) - finish here and remove finish at 00:52:059 (2).
2. 00:53:317 (3) - finish sounds like it'd fit here
3. 01:05:905 (1) - finish instead of clap
4. 01:08:842 (2) - move to (173,134)
5. 01:11:989 (3) - not sure if you didn't stack this on the other slider on purpose. If not, move to (192,120)
6. 01:15:240 (3) - i don't think stacking this on the slider is good here since this slow section you mapped everything spread apart.
7. 01:20:695 (4) - not stacked on purpose? if not move to (268,108)
8. 01:21:429 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - finish instead of clap. It'd be a good idea to gradually decrease volume on the start of each slider too.
9. 01:26:045 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think this would fit the music better
   
   screenshot

   
10. 01:30:450 (1) - same as Insane

1. Doesn't have video
2. 00:10:101 (3) - extend to white tick to catch that sound
3. 00:21:429 (6,7,8) - might be too hard for a normal. replace with a repeating 1/2 slider or just a 1/1 slider.
4. 00:34:017 (1) - end slider at 00:35:275. Add a circle at 00:35:695, 00:36:010, 00:36:324. A finish might fit on all 3 circles, not too sure though.
5. 00:31:499 (6,7,8) - same problem as 00:21:429 (6,7,8)
6. 00:52:478 (1,2) - finish on both of these instead of whistle
7. 01:21:429 (1) - finish instead of clap
8. 01:22:688 (2) - ^
9. 01:26:884 (4,1,1,2) - I think this sounds better
   
   screenshot

   

1. 00:02:128 (1,2,3) - i think you should shape these sliders into something creative so they don't take up the whole screen
2. 00:12:933 (2,3) - blanket could be better
3. 00:15:555 (1) - Ctrl + J this?
4. 00:20:590 (1,2) - needs a better blanket
5. 00:26:884 (2,3) - better blanket pls.
6. 00:39:891 (5) - Ctrl + J
7. 00:40:730 (1,2) - weird flow. Try this or something similar
   
   screenshot

   
8. 00:52:478 (2,3) - finish on both of these
9. 00:58:982 (1,2) - this looks pretty nasty. to keep consistency, make it like the sliders after it?
10. 01:26:045 (3) - im not too sure about this whistle. This is the only time you've used it and i don't think it fits
11. 01:27:933 (1) - move spinner to 01:27:723 and end at 01:30:240. Map the vocals after it

Knotts wrote:

Hi, M4M time
[Celzon's Easy]

1. 00:02:128 (1,2,3) - i think you should shape these sliders into something creative so they don't take up the whole screen
2. 00:12:933 (2,3) - blanket could be better
3. 00:15:555 (1) - Ctrl + J this?
4. 00:20:590 (1,2) - needs a better blanket
5. 00:26:884 (2,3) - better blanket pls.
6. 00:39:891 (5) - Ctrl + J
7. 00:40:730 (1,2) - weird flow. Try this or something similar
   
   screenshot

   
8. 00:52:478 (2,3) - finish on both of these
9. 00:58:982 (1,2) - this looks pretty nasty. to keep consistency, make it like the sliders after it?
10. 01:26:045 (3) - im not too sure about this whistle. This is the only time you've used it and i don't think it fits
11. 01:27:933 (1) - move spinner to 01:27:723 and end at 01:30:240. Map the vocals after it

Knotts wrote:

Hi, M4M time

[ffstar's Normal]

1. Doesn't have video i didn't notice this
2. 00:10:101 (3) - extend to white tick to catch that sound er, but the vocal is on blue tick (i follow vocal)
3. 00:21:429 (6,7,8) - might be too hard for a normal. replace with a repeating 1/2 slider or just a 1/1 slider. keep it first (yea it might be hard for normal, but don't you think a little bit of challenge is great for practice? just kidding ><
4. 00:34:017 (1) - end slider at 00:35:275. Add a circle at 00:35:695, 00:36:010, 00:36:324. A finish might fit on all 3 circles, not too sure though. nah, yours is good too, but i want to keep mine, that just totally different with mine ><
5. 00:31:499 (6,7,8) - same problem as 00:21:429 (6,7,8) keep it first
6. 00:52:478 (1,2) - finish on both of these instead of whistle i think whistle is better
7. 01:21:429 (1) - finish instead of clap a little bit noisy ._.
8. 01:22:688 (2) - ^ ^
9. 01:26:884 (4,1,1,2) - I think this sounds better sorry, i will like to keep mine ><
   
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Love D-Frag, take a star. Don't forget to get that timing checked

azintairin710 wrote:

from your M4M queues ._.
sorry for my bad english

General
- for me the offset are 2.146 ._. don't change it if you find your offset is better
- overall is good

Hard

first i want to ask you. you want it a 4.5 stars or 5 stars? Does star difficulty matter actually? @@ For me as long as it's "Hard" diff is good enough
if it's 4.5 it gonna have much change. if it's 5 stars just few change
00:10:415 : delete the hitsound. quite confusing The cymbal the seems fine to me. Might remove it if more modder as me to since is noisy a little
00:26:989 : hitsound like 00:29:821 slider ? There's no hitsound in that 00:29:838 (1) slider? If you mean the whistles I think better not. Too much hitsounds at that part
00:28:982 : ^ ^
00:36:534 : whistle and the next note are clap There's no need for additional hitsound for these notes. It doesn't fit the song either because there's nothing in the part of the song
01:02:338 : give a hitsound, it's not make a sense here Ah, forgotten to add a clap here. Fixed~
01:11:149 : give a hitsound. the next 2 slider is following this one Isn't it already hitsounded? I think you didn't update previously @@
01:20:695 : if it's stacking note, than fix it Reposition this part
01:30:870 : a hitsound, although it's a finishing move :v

Intentionally made it silenced

insane

00:03:807 : put it apart from other note. it's invincible :3 Already done that before
00:08:842 : a whistle around this section make a sense No, it doesn't make any difference to me. The claps is much better to me.
00:11:674 : how about this? Didn't notice this~ Fixed.

00:18:282 : for me it's ugly ._. fix it For me it isn't. So no changes
00:28:352 : stack it No, this looks good and very readable to me. No changes
00:28:667 : ^ ^
00:42:723 : quite confusing. make this closer Okay
00:51:115 : change the place with slider number 4 No, this looks good enough
00:57:094 : ctrl+g and fix the next note too What? The flow is already good here
01:09:786 : change the place with note number 4 No, nice flow already
01:22:268 : ctrl+g for more challenge No need, I don't see how does this makes it more challenging
01:23:108 : ^

^

and good luck

Kazuya-sama wrote:

Hello.

[Hard]

00:31:080 (3) - remove circle ? Unnecessary. No, this part is was intentional which is following the 00:30:677 (1,2) part
01:00:031 (2) - move: x: 168 y: 168 ? Okay~

[Insane]

00:28:352 (5,1,2,1) - Uhh. It's weird and little unreadable. 00:28:352 (5) - move: 392 y: 200 ? and 00:28:667 (2) - x: 252 y: 136 ? No, it's totally readable. I had quite a number of testplays from other player and none of them had any problem encountering that part
00:40:205 (3) - remove slider and put circle here: 00:40:205 ? Circle makes it worse, slider fits the music more
00:40:520 (4) - Remove 1/8 slider, and put circle here: 00:40:520 ?. No, 1/8 fits the music more. Circle is kinda too plain

Good luck

Knotts wrote:

Hi, M4M time

[General]

1. Offset sounds a little off. I got ~2,164 but you should probably find someone that's better at timing than me. These mods are prior an offset change.

[Insane]

1. 00:06:115 (3) - this blanket needs fixing. OK~ Fixed.
2. 00:26:254 (2,3,1,2,3) - i think this would fit better. the flow from 00:26:464 (3) to (2) to the stream felt pretty strange to play. It might be strange, but for a low bpm, this is perfectly fine. I'll think about it.
   
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3. 00:27:303 (1) - move this to somewhere like (82,120). Slider is at a weird angle from the stream. Okay~
4. 00:33:177 (3,4) - swap these places on timeline Yea, nicer flow~
5. 00:36:954 (4,5,6,7) - not sure if you did this on purpose but the stream looks pretty messy.Err.. I tried to follow the shape of the previous slider. But no need for that, fixed
6. 00:38:842 (3) - i see what you're trying to do here but I think you should just use a circle to match 00:38:003 (3). Looks better~
7. 00:44:506 (4,5,6,7,1) - maybe try something like this? it might suit the music better Nah, the current state sounds nicer to me
   
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8. 00:45:240 (7,2) - Blanket looks messy. Maybe fix it like this? Okay
   
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9. 00:53:317 (1) - add finish No, it makes the music more noisy
10. 01:05:905 (1) - finish instead of clap? Yes, just add finish. Clap stays
11. 01:07:583 (1,2) - i think a 1/2 slider fits better here. No, this part follows the front part of the kiai section. No changes
12. 01:10:940 (6) - finish sounds like it'd fit here No, doesn't sound good at all for me
13. 01:14:401 (2,3,4,5) - not sure if you did this on purpose but right now it looks unorganized/messy. I think something like this would have better flow: Okayy
    
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14. 01:21:429 (1) - finish instead of clap No, it doesn't fit
15. 01:22:688 (1) - ^ ^
16. 01:30:450 (1,1) - doesn't sound right to me. I think a jump using two circles to capture the vocals would be better. No, I think using slider might be a better way to finish the song.

[Hard]

1. 00:51:639 (1) - finish here and remove finish at 00:52:059 (2). Added S:C2 whistle instead. Removed the finish
2. 00:53:317 (3) - finish sounds like it'd fit here No, it's too noisy
3. 01:05:905 (1) - finish instead of clap No, same thing. The finish is quite noisy for this part of the song
4. 01:08:842 (2) - move to (173,134) Looks better~ Fixed.
5. 01:11:989 (3) - not sure if you didn't stack this on the other slider on purpose. If not, move to (192,120) It was intentional. Stacking the sliders might a bit unreadable for some players.
6. 01:15:240 (3) - i don't think stacking this on the slider is good here since this slow section you mapped everything spread apart. Kinda, re-position this part
7. 01:20:695 (4) - not stacked on purpose? if not move to (268,108) Fixed
8. 01:21:429 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - finish instead of clap. It'd be a good idea to gradually decrease volume on the start of each slider too. No, finish is too noisy even if the volume gradually decreases. No change
9. 01:26:045 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think this would fit the music better For it doesn't. The repeater spoils the music imo
   
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10. 01:30:450 (1) - same as Insane Hmmm..... I've came to conclusion to change into 1/2 slider instead

Love D-Frag, take a star. Don't forget to get that timing checked

No Dap wrote:

Hi

[ffstar's Normal]
I would make OD 4 and HP 3. so this difficulty makes sense ok
I would like to see this map in 1.3DS. 1.5 is too much, for an exmaple 00:03:404 (3,4,1) -
It's making easy->normal gap bigger. since no people mention about this, i will keep it first, and also the bpm isn't that high, it's ok i think
00:07:180 (5) - You should curve this the other way to keep flow from 00:06:761 (3,4) - actually i think mine is follow the flow too, it's like a "S" shape flow, and yours is "O" shape flow
00:14:733 (4) - consider adding finish on head to emphasize this part. ahh, this so nice...
And this note is ending on a new vocal. which is not a good idea, and also ruining your NC. ok, i deleted the slider and change to 2 circles, which will be better now
00:20:607 (5) - consider NC here. combo is getting too long, ok
00:23:964 (1,1) - Same as easy, this circle appears before spinner ends. This will cause confusion to beginners. i don't know about this, i actually did see some normal did the same thing, but nvm i replaced the spinner to slider
00:30:677 (5) - NC here for same reason as 00:20:607 (5) - and done
00:37:390 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - I really think this part can be more creative if you use more angles other than 90, 45 degree. T_T man i am lack of idea now ><
00:52:495 (1) - this one has to be fixed. It is so far away from the center. Give more recovery time to beginners. Same goes for 01:05:922 (1) - this map (http://osu.ppy.sh/b/305080) did the same thing as i did, yea that map's bpm is slightly lower than this but i think it's ok
00:52:495 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - Why no clap? blame me, my hitsound is BAD, BAD BAD BAD!!! ><
01:00:887 (1) - delete NC here, it isn't following your NC pattern ok
01:02:775 (4) - NC here ok
01:22:705 (2) - more than 1 reverse on short sliders is very hard to read. Consider splitting this into 2 1/2 sliders wait, the slider is slow enough to read that repeat sign :/ p/2998130
01:30:048 (1) - deleting this note might be a good idea. You don't have to put circle on this very soft guitar when you have a strong beat 01:30:467 (2) - coming right after it's like kinda empty there, so no p/2998130
Hitsounding could have been little more better imo. Try to use finish and clap during kiai. ok ><

Good luck

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ffstar0716 wrote:

No Dap wrote:

Hi

[ffstar's Normal]
01:22:705 (2) - more than 1 reverse on short sliders is very hard to read. Consider splitting this into 2 1/2 sliders wait, the slider is slow enough to read that repeat sign :/
Maybe you can, but remember, this is normal diff and is for beginners.
01:30:048 (1) - deleting this note might be a good idea. You don't have to put circle on this very soft guitar when you have a strong beat 01:30:467 (2) - coming right after it's like kinda empty there, so no
You can keep it, but if you delete, it will emphasize the ending more imo.

No Dap wrote:

Hi

[ffstar's Normal]
01:22:705 (2) - more than 1 reverse on short sliders is very hard to read. Consider splitting this into 2 1/2 sliders wait, the slider is slow enough to read that repeat sign :/
Maybe you can, but remember, this is normal diff and is for beginners.
ok i change my mind, i will fix this

01:30:048 (1) - deleting this note might be a good idea. You don't have to put circle on this very soft guitar when you have a strong beat 01:30:467 (2) - coming right after it's like kinda empty there, so no
You can keep it, but if you delete, it will emphasize the ending more imo.
ok then, i understand your point, deleted

No Dap wrote:

Well.. RIP until scarlet comes back D:

Papcio wrote:

Hi! Really lately M4M, ya? :3

first, i would like to ask if you get the latest ver since scarlet haven't updated the map ><

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00:07:180 (5) - This slider is finishing good, but reverse not sounds good. 00:07:600 - I can't hear something on this place, so it isn't mapped correctly. ;/ yea it actually should be in blue tick, but i think it's ok for normal diff, if not it will be too hard to spread into a slider and two circles
01:30:048 (1,2) - Delete these notes and finish 01:27:740 (1) on 01:30:677 :'3 these two parts is actually two different thing, matching these parts using a spinner doesn't feel nice actually
AR-1, OD+1 for better spread. wait, in your ver i think it is OD5 and you still want to +1?! too high >< and the AR is fine i think

Awesome :3