HabiHolic wrote:

[iyasine's Hard]

00:21:346 (2) - ctrl + g keep it!
00:42:630 (2) - blanket https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1350264 nice!

i not like this diff
I think the difficulty Insane. We recommend that you re-map.That's my style!

Garven wrote:

[Insane]
00:08:170 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - I'm not sure of the purpose of these 1/4 rhythms. They feel extraneous and unneeded considering the music. ok
00:11:819 (5,6,7) - This is the slow/calm part of the song. I don't see why you need 1/4 rhythms peppered throughout it. removed 1/4 rhythms
00:13:441 (5,6,7) - ^ ^
00:18:407 (3) - ^ ^
00:20:738 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
00:23:170 (1,2,3,4,5) - Equalize the spacing here. It looks messy. fixed

SPOILER

00:36:751 (6) - End this at 00:36:954 - and make it audible please. It doesn't make sense to have this one extended like the other two. changed
00:47:292 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Please don't new combo spam like this. If you think it's necessary to use new combos to increase readability, you probably need to redesign your pattern. fixed
01:23:373 (1,2,3) - After all these jumps, the low distance snap of 01:24:589 (1,2,3,4,1) - felt too close to play. changed

00:59:150 - Don't flash kiai so fast like this. The fountain doesn't stop and looks pretty dumb. removed kiai flash
01:00:772 - ^ ^
01:12:123 - ^ ^
01:13:745 - ^ ^

~

Satellite wrote:

via IRC check. on Insane diff.

Log

10:22 *Satellite is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/368119 Aso Natsuko - MoonRise Romance (TV Size) [Insane]]
10:22 kaCha: おはです！！
10:22 Satellite: 00:15:873 (1) - これ先頭whistleで合ってますか？
10:22 Satellite: おはようございます
10:23 Satellite: 00:18:508 (4) - ここのendも合ってないような・・・
10:23 kaCha: あ、合ってないですね・・・ 入れ替えたときそのままにしちゃってたみたいです・・
10:23 Satellite: 00:15:873 (1) - こっちは
10:23 Satellite: 先頭を終点へ移動ですね
10:24 kaCha: 了解です～
10:24 Satellite: 00:29:049 (9) - Nc長いかな？
10:25 Satellite: 00:42:022 (4) - whistleかfinish先頭に合いませんか？
10:25 kaCha: 確かにここだけクソ長いナア・・・ 変えときます～
10:25 Satellite: ちょっと気になってて
10:25 Satellite: しばらくしても直ってなかったので、聞いてみました・・・ｗ
10:26 kaCha: whistleにしてみます！
10:26 Satellite: 01:09:995 (3) - clap入れてないのは故意的？
10:26 kaCha: どうもありがとうございます！₍₍ (ง ˘ω˘ )ว ⁾⁾
10:26 Satellite: 01:10:400 (1) - whistleいれますか？
10:27 Satellite: hitsoundに関しては以上です~
10:27 Satellite: flowに関しては１つだけ
10:28 kaCha: hitsoundはほんと自信がないんでとても勉強になります～～～
10:28 Satellite: 00:13:846 (1) - これは下向きにしたほうが流れが綺麗になると思うので試してみてください
10:28 Satellite: http://puu.sh/7gRfh.jpg
10:28 Satellite: こういったsuggestionです
10:29 Satellite: 後は必ず
10:29 Satellite: resnap all notesしておいてくださいね！
10:29 Satellite: 以上です！

Garven wrote:

Love the tick sounds in the Easy/Normal! <3

[Hard]
00:59:150 - Don't flash kiai so fast like this. The fountain doesn't stop and looks pretty dumb.
01:00:772 - ^
01:12:123 - ^
01:13:745 - ^
All fixed!
The custom hitsounds are so subtle that it's hard to tell that you even applied any until there are multiple claps or lone finishes. It almost feels like there's almost none done at all. :/ volume小さかったですね gamuさんのdiffと同じvolumeにしました！
The map itself is fine though.

1. Please check this file " soft-sliderslide5 ". I don't know the reason why you use sound file. In my opinion, you should use silence sliderslide same as other files (2,4,6,7 and 21) So consider changing it .
2. About Tags : ed, is this necessary ? I guess no one will search this word.

1. 00:03:508 - i feel this tick sound is a bit low , you should consider turning the volume up around 50%. If you follow my suggestion, you should be able to apply my suggestion for the rest of the part.
2. 00:13:238 - - Same.. in this part, 40 or 50%

1. 00:35:738 - this sudden drum sound could confuse beginners imo. it's better to use a clap (soft custom 1). please try it! it would fit well with this kind of music.

1. 00:09:387 (5) - add a finish here to follow this sound ? 00:07:765 - and 00:08:576 - then, you would increase the volume gradually. It's an adjustment to increase the tension leading into the background music.
2. 00:15:873 (5,1) - If you followed the vocal in your part, it's better to make ( slider -> circle ) to this part.
3. 00:23:373 (3,4) - I feel that these consecutive whistles do not match. Please try to put a whistle (soft custom 1) to here 00:23:778 - and remove it on here 00:23:981 (4) -
4. 00:58:035 (6,1) - this part looks crowded for playing. i hope you put more distance between circle and slider.
5. 01:15:873 (5) - ^ again, i prefer to add a finish.

1. 00:22:968 (3) - hmm.. It might be better to put a whistle here. it seems empty to me.
2. 00:37:765 (1) - no need to add new combo here.
3. 00:47:292 (1) - you can't follow the crash cymbal in the music. so you should consider removing finish sound.
4. 00:49:319 (1) - ^ Same
5. 00:59:251 (1,2) - i prefer to use a clap (soft custom 3) same as hard diff. Please try it ~ then, don't forget to change other parts 01:00:873 (1,2) - ...

alacat wrote:

Hi

[General]

1. Please check this file " soft-sliderslide5 ". I don't know the reason why you use sound file. In my opinion, you should use silence sliderslide same as other files (2,4,6,7 and 21) So consider changing it .
   No. I am using it because adding at the same time the clap and whistle sound. also think you can understand if you look at my diff.

[Normal]

1. 00:35:738 - this sudden drum sound could confuse beginners imo. it's better to use a clap (soft custom 1). please try it! it would fit well with this kind of music.
   ok!

That's all for now. make sure everyone checked my mod and let me know for a recheck.

alacat wrote:

Hi

[General]

1. Please check this file " soft-sliderslide5 ". I don't know the reason why you use sound file. In my opinion, you should use silence sliderslide same as other files (2,4,6,7 and 21) So consider changing it .
2. About Tags : ed, is this necessary ? I guess no one will search this word.

[Insane]

1. 00:22:968 (3) - hmm.. It might be better to put a whistle here. it seems empty to me.
2. 00:37:765 (1) - no need to add new combo here.
3. 00:47:292 (1) - you can't follow the crash cymbal in the music. so you should consider removing finish sound.
4. 00:49:319 (1) - ^ Same
5. 00:59:251 (1,2) - i prefer to use a clap (soft custom 3) same as hard diff. Please try it ~ then, don't forget to change other parts 01:00:873 (1,2) - ...

That's all for now. make sure everyone checked my mod and let me know for a recheck.

alacat wrote:

Hi

[Hard]

1. 00:09:387 (5) - add a finish here to follow this sound ? 00:07:765 - and 00:08:576 - then, you would increase the volume gradually. It's an adjustment to increase the tension leading into the background music. fixed!vol調整もしておきました！
2. 00:15:873 (5,1) - If you followed the vocal in your part, it's better to make ( slider -> circle ) to this part. ok!!
3. 00:23:373 (3,4) - I feel that these consecutive whistles do not match. Please try to put a whistle (soft custom 1) to here 00:23:778 - and remove it on here 00:23:981 (4) - 連続してて若干耳障りですが、シンセとボーカルと合っていると思うのでkeepで！
4. 00:58:035 (6,1) - this part looks crowded for playing. i hope you put more distance between circle and slider. ctrl+Gしました！
5. 01:15:873 (5) - ^ again, i prefer to add a finish. clap気に入ってたんですけど、手前からの一連の流れを考えるとfinishいいなと思ったのでfinishにしました！るーらーさんごめんなさい！

That's all for now. make sure everyone checked my mod and let me know for a recheck.

alacat wrote:

Hi

[General]

1. Please check this file " soft-sliderslide5 ". I don't know the reason why you use sound file. In my opinion, you should use silence sliderslide same as other files (2,4,6,7 and 21) So consider changing it .
2. About Tags : ed, is this necessary ? I guess no one will search this word.

[Easy]

1. 00:03:508 - i feel this tick sound is a bit low , you should consider turning the volume up around 50%. If you follow my suggestion, you should be able to apply my suggestion for the rest of the part.
2. 00:13:238 - - Same.. in this part, 40 or 50%

That's all for now. make sure everyone checked my mod and let me know for a recheck.

Guy wrote:

1st ranked おめでとう