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senya - Mangekyou

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Contrivance
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Contrivance
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, February 23, 2014 at 8:46:07 PM

Artist: senya
Title: Mangekyou
Source: Touhou
Tags: kaleidoscope yuuhei satellite dollmaker bucuresti alice margatroid perfect cherry blossom
BPM: 148
Filesize: 5512kb
Play Time: 02:49
Difficulties Available:
  1. Extra (5 stars, 459 notes)
  2. Lunatic (4.85 stars, 419 notes)
Download: senya - Mangekyou
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Yuuhei Satellite
Kaleidoscope
Last edited by Contrivance , edited 9 times in total.
Satellite
Beatmap Nominator
3,686 posts
Joined June 2012
Satellite
senya <3

really Nice map

But General wrong ;w;

please use this.

Title : 万華鏡
万華鏡

good luck !!
RandF
1,249 posts
Joined March 2013
RandF
Hello~

[General]
  1. you make 2 insane diff? I suggest to rename to the following like this
    Insane -> Lunatic
    Lunatic ->Extra
  2. your normal diff is a little difficult for beginner. it is better to add easy diff, imo
  3. 02:24:266- set Kiai-time correctly. move inherited point to 02:24:316
  4. 02:37:239- ^
[Normal]
  1. For normal diff (easiest diff), you should comform DS(Distance spacing) as possible
  2. 00:21:884 (1) - start at 00:21:073?
  3. 00:27:965 (1) - remove NC(New Combo)
  4. 00:49:857- clap
  5. 01:16:208 (1,1) - confusing pattern. it is better toavoid overlap like this, for example
    SPOILER
  6. 01:20:262- add a note
  7. 01:26:749- ^
  8. 02:23:911- ^
  9. 02:34:046 (1,1) - same as 01:16:208 (1,1) -
  10. 02:38:100- add a note
  11. 02:44:587- ^
[Hard]
  1. 00:22:695 (1) - same as normal
  2. 00:27:559 (1) - ^
  3. 00:27:965~00:53:303- it is better not to suit to vocal too much. it's hard to play because down beat hitsound is loud
  4. 01:32:830~01:57:965- ^
  5. 01:11:343 (5,7) - avoid overlap
  6. 01:14:587 (5,6,7,8) - how about symmetric square?
    SPOILER

    472,120,74587,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    472,273,74992,1,10,0:0:0:0:
    318,273,75397,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    318,118,75803,1,10,0:0:0:0:
  7. 01:17:019 (1,2,3) - I prefer the same rhythm as 01:16:208 (1,2,3) -
  8. 01:22:289 (9) - I prefer to stack on not 01:21:884 (8) - but 01:21:073 (6) -
[Insane]
  1. it is better to increase SV(Slider Velocity) than hard diff
  2. 01:25:532 (4,1) - avoiding stack is on purpose?
  3. 01:29:587 (3,2) - how about stack?
  4. 01:30:194 (2,3) - I prefer to exchange their positions
[Lunatic]
  1. 00:57:357 (2) - move to x:256 y:328
  2. 01:31:005 (2) - stack on 01:29:587 (3) - ?
  3. 01:31:208 (3) - stack on 01:30:397 (3) - ?
  4. 02:17:830~02:24:316- because of hardest diff, it is better to make a different pattern from other diff's
sorry to skip the same indications
senya <3
~Good Luck~
Avishay
1,250 posts
Joined April 2013
Avishay
Heyo! Thank you for your modding :)

[General]
Open AIMod (ctrl + shift + a) and see that all of the error lead to really weird kiai time changes, you just toggled the kiai-time on and off by mistake at some places so make sure to fix that. (I doubt you did it by mistake)
Aren't the histounds a bit too loud? I think you should consider lowering them by 10~20%

[Extra]
00:44:181 (4) - I like it much more when it is played backwards (CTRL + G)
00:54:316 (3) - CTRL + G perhaps? (fits good like 00:56:749 (1,2,3) - )
01:21:478 (2) - CTRL + G
01:55:532 (10) - NC
02:23:505 (3) - NC
02:23:911 (5) - NC
02:24:925 (3,4) - Swap places, just tapping twice on the same place is a bit dull, swapping those both will still flow good and is much fun in my opinion.

[Lunatic]
01:53:505 (5,6,7) - Stack 7 on 5, I think it is better to avoid the stacking of 2 notes on each other because you are doing it too much :D and I think that this pattern is nice
01:57:357 (4,5) - Swap places
02:25:938 (1,2,3,4) - Perhaps make them go downwards a bit everytime? Like that:


[Hard]
02:03:032 (3) - This pattern doesn't time in too well, what about this:


[Normal]
00:33:641 (3,4,5) - I think it may be a bit annoying for new players, so try making it a simple 1/2 slider which does a reverse.
00:40:127 (3,4,5) - ^ Hell ,I even think just making a small space between them is fine as well
01:16:208 (1,1) - Those are really confusing for new players, think about changing them, more than one reverse doesn't work well with new players
01:29:181 (1,1) - ^ (and so on..)
02:44:587 - Put a note here?


Great map, good luck!
- Ruby Rose -
- Ruby Rose -
Helo, m4m~!


[normal]

00:51:884 (2,3) - distance spacing is different from all else
01:16:208 (1,1) - suggestion http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1362684
01:20:668 (3) - straight line seems better
01:26:749 - add a note
01:29:181 (1,1) - another suggestion http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1362687
02:34:046 (1,1) - ^http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1362690
02:44:587 - add a note
02:47:019 (1,1) - you get the drift!

[hard]

00:27:559 (1) - should definitely stack this
00:34:046 (1) - remove NC
01:09:722 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - something about these placements.. i think they could be cleaner
02:27:560 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:27:965 (5,7) - stack
01:38:911 (1) - remove nc
02:45:803 (5,7) - stack

[lunatic]
I think AR +1 would work
00:27:559 (1) - stack
00:33:438 (6,7) - better blanket
00:40:938 (1,2) - I don't like the overlap,http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1362712
00:42:965 (6,1) - unexpected distance spacing
01:53:911 (7,1) - ^
00:47:019 (1) - unsure about NC
01:38:911 (1) - ^
01:03:235 (6) - remove nc
01:06:478 (1) - remove nc
01:18:843 (1) - ^
02:08:100 (1) - ^
01:25:532 (4,1) - stack
01:34:451 (1) - NC
02:17:830 (1,1,1,2,1,2) - should add some more notes, too empty for a lunatic
02:40:127 (4,1) - stack

[extra]

00:27:559 (1,1) - can tell that you were aware but stack XD
00:34:046 (1,1) - ^
00:40:532 (1,1) - ^
and all the other ones, I'd prefer you stack em
01:22:897 (2,4) - perhaps stack?
01:24:518 (2,4) - ^
01:31:208 (3,4) - i would ctrl+G
02:17:830 (1) -again, more notes. emptiness

That's it for me~
have fun mapping and gud luck~
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