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Haruna Luna x Kawano Marina - snowdrop -TV size ver.-

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Azure
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Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
Azure

Zero__wind wrote:

1st支持！

General
all fine

Hard
HP6吧 甚至5都行 7太不善良了 总共才2diff何必呢 hh ok
00:02:342 (4) - whistle？
00:04:801 (2) - ^ 要加就一起
3576这根红线不太准 建议往前挪到3536 調了~
00:07:278 (5) - 头上whistle一个吧
8531这根红线建议挪到8516 調了~
00:23:368 (1) - 头上drum？如果觉得可以的话像00:25:223 (5) - 的尾巴啊 00:28:316 (1) - 的头上啊这种长白线都可以用
00:30:172 (7) - clap没了
00:31:873 (2) - 还是换用finish好
00:33:265 (1) - 头上drum clap？反正whistle太弱了
00:34:811 (3,4) - 这里snap有问题 应该把这两个删掉 切换到1/3 只放一个circle在00:34:914 - 好吧這裡其實有很大的問題，所以又從測了這段的timing 加了幾根紅線 (
00:38:213 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - 音量太小了！
00:43:007 (9) - 这个circle最好删掉 这里没有任何音 然后可以考虑00:42:852 (8,1) - 分开 或者叠在同一位置
00:43:161 (1) - 怎么没有finish………
00:45:636 (1) - 尾巴上的whistle不合适
我发现kiai开始有点late 怀疑要再加一根红线……试了一下 可能需要在00:43:146 - 再加一条97BPM的红线 后面的绿线和物件都一起-15 感觉准一些……哎 timing好难
00:49:656 (4,6) - 我感觉不要完全叠在滑条尾巴上 稍微拉出来一些 可能对于打Hard的人来说好读一些
00:50:584 (1) - finish？
01:01:100 (2) - 尾巴上clap换finish
01:17:801 (5) - whistle换finish
01:20:893 (1) - 总感觉有点不太好看呢>.< 正中间有点棱角（幻觉？）

形狀音效那些全改了，timing又花了我30分鐘多(躺)

Normal
OAQ姐姐你太残忍了……最低难度setting这么高……HP3 AR4 OD3 plz hh ok
00:31:873 (2) - 头上换finish
00:33:265 (1) - finish
00:53:058 (3) - 还是soft finish好
01:00:481 (1) - 头上和中间都clap 尾巴换finish
01:02:337 (3) - 尾巴drum finish
01:17:801 (1) - finish
01:18:419 (2) - 尾巴换成drum finish
太可怕了……
全都改了~感謝零風風妹妹 <3
KantoKun
1,114 posts
Joined December 2011
KantoKun
irc mod~

SPOILER
2557-02-08 20:00 KantoKun: 00:03:530 - red line here isn't match in song :(
2557-02-08 20:00 Azure: *_*
2557-02-08 20:00 Azure: 3536?
2557-02-08 20:02 KantoKun: late it more~
2557-02-08 20:03 Azure: really?
2557-02-08 20:03 Azure: ok
2557-02-08 20:03 KantoKun: 3546 is OK
2557-02-08 20:03 KantoKun: i think
2557-02-08 20:03 Azure: 'o'b
2557-02-08 20:04 KantoKun: 00:09:167 - sb fade in this time, i think so fast lol
2557-02-08 20:04 KantoKun: even suggestion~
2557-02-08 20:05 Azure: k~ 
2557-02-08 20:05 KantoKun: 00:15:945 (1,2,3,4) - they aren't unequal
2557-02-08 20:06 KantoKun: i mean this lol 00:19:656 (4) - 
2557-02-08 20:07 KantoKun: 00:35:714 (1) - take it beautiful more?
2557-02-08 20:07 Azure: ok
2557-02-08 20:09 KantoKun: 00:52:424 (1,2) - i think , strike in normal is not good idea
2557-02-08 20:10 KantoKun: 01:14:069 - why soft volume ?
2557-02-08 20:10 KantoKun: i hear it normaly :|
2557-02-08 20:11 Azure: 0.0
2557-02-08 20:11 Azure: I lost it
2557-02-08 20:11 Azure: hh
2557-02-08 20:11 KantoKun: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/361896 Haruna Luna x Kawano Marina - snowdrop (TV Size) [Hard]]
2557-02-08 20:12 KantoKun: edit red line ~ , don't forget it~
2557-02-08 20:12 Azure: ok~
2557-02-08 20:12 KantoKun: 00:06:049 (1) - move up 1 scale?
2557-02-08 20:13 Azure: done~
2557-02-08 20:14 KantoKun: 00:29:553 (3,4,5,6,7) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1318536 ?
2557-02-08 20:14 KantoKun: so curve more than before
2557-02-08 20:15 KantoKun: oh!
2557-02-08 20:15 KantoKun: i forget it
2557-02-08 20:15 KantoKun: 00:34:311 - this rad line too , isn't match in song
2557-02-08 20:17 Azure: 34321?
2557-02-08 20:17 KantoKun: 34329 , i just find haha
2557-02-08 20:18 KantoKun: 00:35:714 (1) - i like this >.< , so cute 
2557-02-08 20:18 Azure: cool
2557-02-08 20:18 Azure: haha xD
2557-02-08 20:18 KantoKun: 00:47:166 (5,6,7,8,1) - take it curve more~ 
2557-02-08 20:19 Azure: I spend much to make ti 
2557-02-08 20:19 Azure: ok~
2557-02-08 20:19 KantoKun: 00:49:331 (3,4,5,6) - copy Gu's style? haha 
2557-02-08 20:20 Azure: really!?
2557-02-08 20:20 Azure: He uses thiis?
2557-02-08 20:20 KantoKun: yes
2557-02-08 20:21 Azure: oh
2557-02-08 20:21 Azure:  I didn't mention this haha
2557-02-08 20:21 KantoKun: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1318560
2557-02-08 20:22 KantoKun: 00:59:846 (5,6,7,8,9) - this curve is not beautiful~ i think haha
2557-02-08 20:22 KantoKun: 01:14:377 (5) - move down one scale 
2557-02-08 20:22 Azure: wow ok
2557-02-08 20:23 KantoKun: 01:14:686 (7) - x : 348 , y : 160
2557-02-08 20:23 KantoKun: 01:20:857 (1) - not pretty , take it beaatiful slide
2557-02-08 20:24 KantoKun: similar this 00:35:714 (1) - 
2557-02-08 20:24 Azure: ok!
2557-02-08 20:25 KantoKun: 01:22:863 (1) - end at this? 01:29:806 - 
2557-02-08 20:26 KantoKun: normal too >.<
2557-02-08 20:26 Azure: oh 
2557-02-08 20:26 KantoKun: so long i think orz
2557-02-08 20:27 KantoKun: but in song is that , i even mod follow song ;w;
2557-02-08 20:27 Azure: but it is no music between  01:25:177 ~ 01:29:806
2557-02-08 20:27 Azure: i know haha
2557-02-08 20:28 KantoKun: OK!!
2557-02-08 20:28 KantoKun: that all
2557-02-08 20:28 KantoKun: you style is very cute >.<~ , i like it very much~
2557-02-08 20:28 Azure: Thank you :-D
2557-02-08 20:28 Azure: haha

nice map ~
Good luck~
95648
32 posts
Joined May 2009
95648
hi
HARD
00:28:935 (2) -你可以 >http://holland.pk/1zp1
01:17:154 (4) - 你可以>http://holland.pk/1zp4

normal
00:30:172 (4) - 可加finish

good luck！
Selisi
721 posts
Joined October 2012
Selisi
渣mod一枚>///<
[General]
  1. spinner因为没有皮肤 做成声音渐小的效果要好些
[Storyboard]
  1. 背景没有动态元素呢 这样歌词很难被发现 咱也是后来才发现有sb> < 可以下雪呀 切图呀等等的这首歌效果做好一定超棒
  2. 如果不打算做超过3.8x的sb的话 widescreen support 可以打开 只占1X的load
  3. 歌词赞
[Hard]
  1. 00:50:259 (6) - 歪掉啦> <
  2. 00:02:642 (5,6) - 和00:03:119 (7,8) - 感觉好像是间隔一样的二连呢 为什么做成了不一样的呢？00:03:271 - 这个红线不用的circle放在1/8的黄线上就可以了
  3. 00:05:121 (3,4,5,6) - ^
  4. 00:10:997 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这里这样会很无聊哦 传插一些四连感觉会不错
  5. 00:32:637 (3) - 这个离00:33:256 (1) - 的spacing应该和 00:33:256 (1) - 离00:34:329 (2) - 的spacing是一样的
  6. 01:12:058 (7) - 这个的next和prev差的挺多的哦 apacing可以修复下
  7. 01:14:531 (6) - ^
[Normal]
  1. 00:09:167 (2) - 这个是滑条不好哦 因为后面是红线 接的感觉很突然 建议只要在00:09:167 - 一个circle就可以了
  2. 00:53:970 - 这个音咱感觉要空出来好些 滑条试着去掉后00:54:280 - 这里加一个circle和123的节奏很接近
没有了 很棒的图 射星星 :)
Azure
771 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
Azure

95648 wrote:

hi
HARD
00:28:935 (2) -你可以 >http://holland.pk/1zp1
01:17:154 (4) - 你可以>http://holland.pk/1zp4

normal
00:30:172 (4) - 可加finish
good luck！
哇謝謝，雖然都沒改 (

Sweet Vanilla wrote:

渣mod一枚>///<
[General]
  1. spinner因为没有皮肤 做成声音渐小的效果要好些我發想兩個spinner從開始就沒有生音 所以也懶的加(
[Storyboard]
  1. 背景没有动态元素呢 这样歌词很难被发现 咱也是后来才发现有sb> < 可以下雪呀 切图呀等等的这首歌效果做好一定超棒
  2. 如果不打算做超过3.8x的sb的话 widescreen support 可以打开 只占1X的load 其實我不會做下雪啊 ._.
  3. 歌词赞
[Hard]
  1. 00:50:259 (6) - 歪掉啦> < 歪?
  2. 00:02:642 (5,6) - 和00:03:119 (7,8) - 感觉好像是间隔一样的二连呢 为什么做成了不一样的呢？00:03:271 - 这个红线不用的circle放在1/8的黄线上就可以了 哪裡不一樣了0.0 我怎麼聽不懂..
  3. 00:05:121 (3,4,5,6) - ^
  4. 00:10:997 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这里这样会很无聊哦 传插一些四连感觉会不错 啊嗯..原本要很溫和的跟音樂不過還是改了 thank you
  5. 00:32:637 (3) - 这个离00:33:256 (1) - 的spacing应该和 00:33:256 (1) - 离00:34:329 (2) - 的spacing是一样的 呃 不會一樣吧?
  6. 01:12:058 (7) - 这个的next和prev差的挺多的哦 apacing可以修复下
  7. 01:14:531 (6) - ^
[Normal]
  1. 00:09:167 (2) - 这个是滑条不好哦 因为后面是红线 接的感觉很突然 建议只要在00:09:167 - 一个circle就可以了 這沒改~感覺全是note也不好
  2. 00:53:970 - 这个音咱感觉要空出来好些 滑条试着去掉后00:54:280 - 这里加一个circle和123的节奏很接近 改了~
没有了 很棒的图 射星星 :)
Thank you for mods
Rakuen
1,654 posts
Joined March 2013
Rakuen
( =`･ω･´) AIRakuen 愛楽園 (Mod/GD/M4M)

[General]
Haruna Luna owo!

[Normal]
00:04:801 (4) - This timing seems a bit inconsistency with the BPM (im not good in timing)
00:55:517 (1,2,3) - How about changing 00:57:063 (2) - to a circle or slider with no reverse at 00:57:372 -
00:59:228 (4,5,1) - Image
Image

[Hard]
AR: -1 looks better, altho the SV is a bit fast
00:08:531 (1) - X:332 Y:172 , not suggesting to stack
00:29:553 (3,4,5,6,7) - Arrange them for a bit like (included coordinates):
Image

00:29:553 (3) - X:44 Y:188
00:29:708 (4) - X:52 Y:176
00:29:862 (5) - X:60 Y:160
00:30:017 (6) - X:68 Y:44
00:30:172 (7) - X:72 Y:188
00:52:424 (8,9,1) - Nazi:
00:52:733 (9) - X:96 Y:88
00:53:042 (1) - X:136 Y:164
01:02:935 (1) - X:300 Y:60
01:03:553 (2,3,4) - Try this:
Image

01:04:017 (3) - X:264 Y:144
01:04:172 (4) - X:344 Y:132 (stack on 01:02:630 (5) - )
01:08:965 - Add a note like 01:04:017 (3) -
01:10:821 - ^
01:12:522 - Remove clap to remain consistency with hitsounds in front like 01:02:630 -
01:17:771 (5) - NC and + Finish, heavy vocal
Azure
771 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
Azure
fix almost Thank you~

wow Thanks alacat's star!!~
Fycho
Global Moderator
2,479 posts
Joined August 2012
Fycho
heya~ 公主, 晚上好！
嘛，稍微提点音效为主的建议了

[Mod Info]
  1. Black: Suggestions
  2. Bold: Importance.You might consider
  3. Red:Unrank issues. You Must Fix

[General]
  1. Tags里加 “恋物語”　

[Hard]
  1. 00:03:119 (7,8) – 我觉得这个whistle应该加在8上面而不是7上面，毕竟8的音要高一点，听起来效果好一点
  2. 00:05:595 (5,6) –同理加6而不是5
  3. 00:07:278 (5) –头上加个whistle跟钢琴音？
  4. 00:08:223 (7) –加whistle
  5. 00:21:512 (2) - 这个可以离1再近点，可能有些难读
  6. 00:23:368 (1,2,3) - 上面那个还好，这就太那个了吧，1/2和1/4放了差不多了
  7. 00:23:368 (1) –这个头上的clap配合音乐听起来有点脱线。本身这是个地鼓位，所以应该把clap去掉再用drum的sampleset和00:22:131 (3,5) –这些是一样的。
  8. 00:25:223 (5) –这个滑条尾也是，其他的大白线处也是，这些和2,4白线上的鼓音不一样。
  9. 00:32:637 (3) –降点音量，这个和音效组的hitnormal还有finish比起来太吵了，建议到30%左右。
  10. 00:34:329 (2,3,4) – 这些也是，适当降低音量
  11. 00:42:525 (6) –加个NC？
  12. 00:43:146 (1) –头上漏finish
  13. 00:49:950 (5) –尾巴上漏whsitle，参考这00:45:001 (4) –
  14. 00:54:279 (3) –滑条头漏whistle
  15. 00:57:063 (6) –滑条尾漏whistle
  16. 01:00:465 (9,1) –我建议交换NC，这两个一组的时候容易读，而且01:00:465 –是大白线
  17. 01:02:321 (4,5) –这两个滑条尾也加上drum的finish，一来音乐里有鼓点存在，其次01:02:011 (3) –滑条尾加了，再者我加上去听了下，也不是那么的吵。
  18. 01:04:790 (5) –折返漏whistle？
  19. 01:06:646 (5) –漏了个whistle
  20. 01:09:120 (3) –漏whistle了哇orz，音乐里很强的鼓点
  21. 01:12:522 (9) –滑条头加个whistle更好
  22. 01:14:069 (3) –加个whsitle更好
  23. 01:20:857 (1) –滑条头漏finish，明明有那么明显的cymbal的说。其实我认为这里默认的soft finish更好。
  24. 01:22:863 (1) –转盘上的whsitle我倒觉得没必要，本身是拖长音的转盘，而且音乐里也没什么伴奏。

[Normal]
  1. 00:10:417 –根据ranking criterira，非转盘音量降低到20%以下应该是unrankable的。Hitsounds from notes and sliders must be audible.
  2. 00:31:868 (2,1) –unsnapped objects
  3. 00:30:782 (1) – 头上的左上角drum改成soft，这里我感觉cymbal音比较主要，或者加成hard那样？
  4. 01:02:935 (1,4) –这为何不加whistle了？kiai的whistle尽量统一一下。
  5. 01:22:709 (1) –同hard

Good luck.
Azure
771 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
Azure

Fycho wrote:

heya~ 公主, 晚上好！
嘛，稍微提点音效为主的建议了

[Mod Info]
  1. Black: Suggestions
  2. Bold: Importance.You might consider
  3. Red:Unrank issues. You Must Fix

[General]
  1. Tags里加 “恋物語”　因為我不想在tags裡加上中文，而且有寫koimonagatari了，所以沒改~

[Hard]
  1. 00:03:119 (7,8) – 我觉得这个whistle应该加在8上面而不是7上面，毕竟8的音要高一点，听起来效果好一点
  2. 00:05:595 (5,6) –同理加6而不是5
  3. 00:07:278 (5) –头上加个whistle跟钢琴音？
  4. 00:08:223 (7) –加whistle
  5. 00:21:512 (2) - 这个可以离1再近点，可能有些难读
  6. 00:23:368 (1,2,3) - 上面那个还好，这就太那个了吧，1/2和1/4放了差不多了 這裡改了，兩個疊的面積都一樣
  7. 00:23:368 (1) –这个头上的clap配合音乐听起来有点脱线。本身这是个地鼓位，所以应该把clap去掉再用drum的sampleset和00:22:131 (3,5) –这些是一样的。
  8. 00:25:223 (5) –这个滑条尾也是，其他的大白线处也是，这些和2,4白线上的鼓音不一样。
  9. 00:32:637 (3) –降点音量，这个和音效组的hitnormal还有finish比起来太吵了，建议到30%左右。
  10. 00:34:329 (2,3,4) – 这些也是，适当降低音量
  11. 00:42:525 (6) –加个NC？
  12. 00:43:146 (1) –头上漏finish
  13. 00:49:950 (5) –尾巴上漏whsitle，参考这00:45:001 (4) –
  14. 00:54:279 (3) –滑条头漏whistle
  15. 00:57:063 (6) –滑条尾漏whistle
  16. 01:00:465 (9,1) –我建议交换NC，这两个一组的时候容易读，而且01:00:465 –是大白线
  17. 01:02:321 (4,5) –这两个滑条尾也加上drum的finish，一来音乐里有鼓点存在，其次01:02:011 (3) –滑条尾加了，再者我加上去听了下，也不是那么的吵。
  18. 01:04:790 (5) –折返漏whistle？
  19. 01:06:646 (5) –漏了个whistle
  20. 01:09:120 (3) –漏whistle了哇orz，音乐里很强的鼓点
  21. 01:12:522 (9) –滑条头加个whistle更好
  22. 01:14:069 (3) –加个whsitle更好
  23. 01:20:857 (1) –滑条头漏finish，明明有那么明显的cymbal的说。其实我认为这里默认的soft finish更好。
  24. 01:22:863 (1) –转盘上的whsitle我倒觉得没必要，本身是拖长音的转盘，而且音乐里也没什么伴奏。 雖然是這樣，但覺得加個whistle好點

[Normal]
  1. 00:10:417 –根据ranking criterira，非转盘音量降低到20%以下应该是unrankable的。Hitsounds from notes and sliders must be audible.
  2. 00:31:868 (2,1) –unsnapped objects
  3. 00:30:782 (1) – 头上的左上角drum改成soft，这里我感觉cymbal音比较主要，或者加成hard那样？
  4. 01:02:935 (1,4) –这为何不加whistle了？kiai的whistle尽量统一一下。
  5. 01:22:709 (1) –同hard同上

Good luck.
其他沒回覆的地方都改了，你教的方法很好用，謝謝囉!
Zero__wind
osu! Alumni
3,314 posts
Joined August 2012
Zero__wind
General
Remove ED from tags, website search doesn't work for words with less than 3 characters.

Hard
00:42:525 (2) - clap
00:52:733 (9) - remove clap on head
01:22:863 (1) - remove whistle at end, doesn't seem to fit anything

Normal
00:42:525 - clap, same as Hard
01:22:709 (1) - same as hard

Good
Azure
771 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
Azure

Zero__wind wrote:

General
Remove ED from tags, website search doesn't work for words with less than 3 characters.

Hard
00:42:525 (2) - clap
00:52:733 (9) - remove clap on head
01:22:863 (1) - remove whistle at end, doesn't seem to fit anything

Normal
00:42:525 - clap, same as Hard
01:22:709 (1) - same as hard

Good
all fix Thank you 零風風 <3
and fix title!
Zero__wind
osu! Alumni
3,314 posts
Joined August 2012
Zero__wind
dealt with some inherited points and reset unsnapped preview point in both diffs
Bubbled.

title change referred to http://vgmdb.net/album/42493 if anyone's concerned
happy623
1,436 posts
Joined April 2010
happy623
太快了摸不及233 加油
BeatofIke
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BeatofIke
BPM is just 97.00. Why all the unnecessary BPM changes? lol
For the Piano part, you will be better off just half the BPM to 48.500. :P
Once you fix that (along with the timing sections and notes), call me back and I'll rank it!
Azure
771 posts
Joined November 2010
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Azure

BeatofIke wrote:

BPM is just 97.00. Why all the unnecessary BPM changes? lol
For the Piano part, you will be better off just half the BPM to 48.500. :P
Once you fix that (along with the timing sections and notes), call me back and I'll rank it!
oh...I deleted some red lines of piano part and fixed unsnapped notes, thank you very much!
BeatofIke
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Joined September 2011
BeatofIke
Enjoy your rank!
Azure
771 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
Azure
Thank you >.<
Satellite
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Satellite
Gratz :3
Zero__wind
osu! Alumni
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Zero__wind
お姉さん大好き❤
qoot8123
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Joined March 2011
qoot8123
恭喜~~很好聽的歌,譜也很棒 :)
Selisi
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Selisi
哇 rank了 恭喜安卓姐姐>///<
KantoKun
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KantoKun
oh.. fast , congratz~
Fycho
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Fycho
お姉たん大好き❤
Azure
771 posts
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Azure
thanks guys!
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