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Insane的ar8好像太快,ar7会好一点
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Hey, M4M request here:
*Not going to make an easy diff?
[Insane]
00:00:146 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - This same pattern repetition is really boring, make something more exciting out of this rhythm if you can.
01:27:950 - Consider adding a note here with a finish, so it puts a more finishing touch for the chorus.
[Hard]
00:04:048 (4) - NC
00:43:072 (5) - ^
01:18:194 (1,3) - Pretty bad overlap here, either move these objects apart or try to stack'em.
[Normal]
00:04:048 (1) - Add finish on the head.
00:05:999 (3) - ^
00:08:438 (2,3) - These objects are actually placed closer then how they really should be. I don't know if this was intentional or not, but all objects
should be snapped accordingly in the Easy/Normal diffs.
00:18:438 (2,3) - ^ Same issue
00:31:365 (1,2) - ^
...and so on.
00:09:170 (3) - Add whistle on the tail.
00:21:121 - Rhythm suggestion:
00:26:975 (3) - Add finish on the tail.
01:00:633 (1) - Add finish on the head.
01:16:243 (1) - ^
01:24:048 (1) - ^
01:27:950 - Consider adding a note here with a finish, so it puts a more finishing touch for the chorus.
Fix the DS between all the notes that were placed 1/2 beats apart. And this diff has no hitsounds o.o
[Insane]
00:00:146 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - This same pattern repetition is really boring, make something more exciting out of this rhythm if you can.
01:27:950 - Consider adding a note here with a finish, so it puts a more finishing touch for the chorus.
[Hard]
00:04:048 (4) - NC
00:43:072 (5) - ^
01:18:194 (1,3) - Pretty bad overlap here, either move these objects apart or try to stack'em.
[Normal]
00:04:048 (1) - Add finish on the head.
00:05:999 (3) - ^
00:08:438 (2,3) - These objects are actually placed closer then how they really should be. I don't know if this was intentional or not, but all objects
should be snapped accordingly in the Easy/Normal diffs.
00:18:438 (2,3) - ^ Same issue
00:31:365 (1,2) - ^
...and so on.
00:09:170 (3) - Add whistle on the tail.
00:21:121 - Rhythm suggestion:
00:26:975 (3) - Add finish on the tail.
01:00:633 (1) - Add finish on the head.
01:16:243 (1) - ^
01:24:048 (1) - ^
01:27:950 - Consider adding a note here with a finish, so it puts a more finishing touch for the chorus.
Fix the DS between all the notes that were placed 1/2 beats apart. And this diff has no hitsounds o.o
[Normal]
00:00:146 (1) - 返折太多了点。。
00:04:048 (1) - DS
00:09:170 (3) - ^
00:19:170 (3) - ^
DS的好多 距离调一下吧
00:06:975 有音
00:50:145 (2) - 换成00:50:389单点
00:44:536 (1,2,1) - 我觉得都俩白线起步白线结尾好些
00:51:853 (2) - 移到后面白线
[Hard]
DS挺乱的
00:06:487 (1) - ctrl+g
00:09:170 (1,3) - 1折返 3换俩单点
00:12:828和00:15:267和00:16:243和00:16:731 note 空着很怪= = 还有这DS= =
00:30:145 (2) - ctrl+g+h+j 放1尾巴下
00:41:365 (2,3) - 蓝线结尾 好像不行
00:45:511 断滑条红线收
00:47:463 ^
00:46:243 (3) - 拉后面白线 删4
00:50:145 (3) - 换00:50:389单点
01:13:072 (3) - 折返
01:15:755 (5,6) - 换4连串？
01:23:316 note
01:27:463 (4) - 减1折返
[Insane]
00:00:146 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 不如上下左右对称？俩俩选择 Ctrl+g +j +h 什么
的你看看
00:16:243到00:25:511空了好多 我菜,看不懂诶= =
00:43:072到00:50:389可以参考我上面的hard mod
没啥大问题 (我对俩连捉鸡
00:00:146 (1) - 返折太多了点。。
00:04:048 (1) - DS
00:09:170 (3) - ^
00:19:170 (3) - ^
DS的好多 距离调一下吧
00:06:975 有音
00:50:145 (2) - 换成00:50:389单点
00:44:536 (1,2,1) - 我觉得都俩白线起步白线结尾好些
00:51:853 (2) - 移到后面白线
[Hard]
DS挺乱的
00:06:487 (1) - ctrl+g
00:09:170 (1,3) - 1折返 3换俩单点
00:12:828和00:15:267和00:16:243和00:16:731 note 空着很怪= = 还有这DS= =
00:30:145 (2) - ctrl+g+h+j 放1尾巴下
00:41:365 (2,3) - 蓝线结尾 好像不行
00:45:511 断滑条红线收
00:47:463 ^
00:46:243 (3) - 拉后面白线 删4
00:50:145 (3) - 换00:50:389单点
01:13:072 (3) - 折返
01:15:755 (5,6) - 换4连串？
01:23:316 note
01:27:463 (4) - 减1折返
[Insane]
00:00:146 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 不如上下左右对称？俩俩选择 Ctrl+g +j +h 什么
的你看看
00:16:243到00:25:511空了好多 我菜,看不懂诶= =
00:43:072到00:50:389可以参考我上面的hard mod
没啥大问题 (我对俩连捉鸡
Hi. M4M your queue.
[General]
[General]
- Remove Widescreen Support all diff.
- Audio-Lead in 2500 suggest. not automatic operateworkrun.
- Artist: やなぎなぎ Romanised Artist: yanaginagi
- This is ending song. try add 'ed' and 'ending' tag.
- This Sourse is 'Nagi no Asu Kara' and japanese '凪のあすから' try add.
- HP+1. i think bit low Normal diff.
- I recommend OD +1 or +2. '2' is Easy diff setting imo. try up.
- 00:00:146 (1) - add whistle start and all reverse and end. fit song.
- 00:04:048 (1) - add finish slider head.
- 00:05:999 (3) - add finish.
- 00:07:463 (1) - add finish slider end.
- 00:14:048 (1) - this reverse hitsound suggest, try use this all diff. fit imo. http://puu.sh/7kypC.wav
- 00:41:121 (1,2,3,4) - try this rhythm. blue line is confuse player imo. drum sound and vocal sound took suggest. for example.
- 00:43:072 (4,1) - switch NC.
- 00:43:072 (4) - add finish.
- 00:50:877 (1) - add finish slider head.
- 00:57:463 (5) - add note? easily rhythm and vocal and drum fit.
- 01:00:633 (1) - add finish slider head.
- 01:08:438 (1) - add finish slider head.
- 01:14:048 (3) - add finish slider head.
- 01:16:243 (1) - add finish slider head.
- 01:24:048 (1) - add finish slider head.
- 01:27:219 (5) - not fit rhythm imo. try add reverse. and slider end add finish. more fit.
i suggested finish hit sound only. but, try some clap and whistle
- AR+1? this diff have triplet and bit hardly rhythm. i think fit imo.
- 00:07:950 (4,1) - add whistle slider end. try add whistle strong piano part.
- 00:09:170 (3) - add whistle slider head.
- 00:09:658 (4) - add whistle.
- 00:29:170 (4) - this is not bad. but, i suggest (x:158 y:24). more seems beautiful distance imo.
- 01:13:560 (4) - add whistle slider head. follow piano.
- 01:27:463 (4) - slider end, try add finish instead clap. sound better. also, if you think loud volume, try low volume.
- 01:27:463 (4) - try this?
- 00:57:463 (4,5) - try Ctrl+G? i think more fun play imo. also, strong vocal jump.
- 01:27:828 (8) - same as hard diff.
yanaginagi /o/
[General]
Source : Nagi no Asukara / 凪のあすから
[Normal]
HP +1
00:39:170 (4) - NC
00:59:658 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - try to re-place this things, because too lower *in my opinion
01:27:219 (5) - after this, try to put spinner?
[Hard]
in begin: try put something in an empty place, if there is any lyric or music in that time
00:29:170 (4) - NC
00:29:414 (1) - remove NC
[Insane]
00:00:146 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - try to something creative xD maybe make it like flower or anything, not just stay at same place
nice nice mapset!! good song too!
i hope it will ranked xD GL~
[Normal]
为什么用 0.8 SV阿 我觉得好慢阿，滑条好短阿
00:44:292 (1) - 感觉有点奇怪 00:44:536这里开始吧
01:22:097 (5) - 我觉得这里01:21:853 1/1比较好
01:22:828 加个 NOTE
01:27:219 (5) - 后面不加一个转盘么？
[Hard]
00:17:950 (3) - 后面2个音加WHIS吧
01:25:755 (1) - 给我感觉节奏是这样的http://puu.sh/7oF9S.jpg
01:27:950 同N
[Insane]
我觉得1/1滑条挺好的
00:42:097 (4) - 我觉得挺奇怪的，http://puu.sh/7oFhD.jpg这样感觉挺好的
00:52:828 (1) - 同上
01:25:755 (1) - 折返去了 01:26:243加个NOTE如何？
01:27:950 同N
祝你身体健康
为什么用 0.8 SV阿 我觉得好慢阿，滑条好短阿
00:44:292 (1) - 感觉有点奇怪 00:44:536这里开始吧
01:22:097 (5) - 我觉得这里01:21:853 1/1比较好
01:22:828 加个 NOTE
01:27:219 (5) - 后面不加一个转盘么？
[Hard]
00:17:950 (3) - 后面2个音加WHIS吧
01:25:755 (1) - 给我感觉节奏是这样的http://puu.sh/7oF9S.jpg
01:27:950 同N
[Insane]
我觉得1/1滑条挺好的
00:42:097 (4) - 我觉得挺奇怪的，http://puu.sh/7oFhD.jpg这样感觉挺好的
00:52:828 (1) - 同上
01:25:755 (1) - 折返去了 01:26:243加个NOTE如何？
01:27:950 同N
祝你身体健康
From my queue~
[General]
I hope you can get good BG of this song, too~
yanaginagi<3 ~☆
~Good Luck~
[General]
- Title: やなぎなぎ
- tags suggetion:
ending - 01:00:633~ Kiai-time!
- 00:35:267 (3,4,5) - a little hard to see... I suggest to make DS 1.0x like 01:05:511 (3,4,5,6) -
- 00:37:219 (1,2,3) - ^
- 00:42:097 (3,4) - ^
- 00:50:145 (2,1,2) - ^
- 00:52:828 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - ^
- 00:08:438 (1,3) - blanket correctly
- 00:53:804 (2) - rotate around 10 degrees anti-clockwise for smoother cursor moving
- 00:58:194 (4) - I prefer to ignore DistanceSnap and move to x:256 y:192
- 01:09:170 (2) - umm... it isbetter to end at 01:09:414
- 01:25:755 (1,2) - I feel not smoothing flow. how about this? (stack 01:26:487 (2) - on 01:25:511 (4) - )
- 00:00:146 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Intersting~
- 00:39:658 (4,5,6) - I recommend to more smooting flow. for example, how about this?
- 00:52:828 (1,2) - how about blanket and stack?SPOILER
161,162,52828,6,0,P|169:130|145:58,2,96,6|4|4,0:1|0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
102,221,53804,1,8,0:1:0:0: - 01:19:902 (8,1) - too large DS... I recommend to fix...
I hope you can get good BG of this song, too~
yanaginagi<3 ~☆
~Good Luck~
M4M / Mod from my queue~
[General]
- [Normal]
- Needs a BG, don't you think?
- Remove capitals from tags.
- I don't know if I'm just hearing things, but some hitsounds seem to cut off abruptly.
- 01:00:633 - to 01:27:463 - needs to be a kiai time imo.
- Good diff, so almost nothing to mod
- Why not make 00:07:463 (1,2) - two straight sliders instead of ones with a curve?
- 00:35:267 (3) - NC
- 00:37:219 (1) - Remove NC?
- 00:39:170 (4) - NC?
- 01:27:219 (5) - Maybe add an finish, since I can clearly hear one.
[Hard]- Again, nice diff.
- 00:17:219 (2) - NC?
- 00:17:950 (3) - NC?
- 00:32:828 (1) -Remove NC and place NC at 00:34:048 (2) - .
- 00:57:219 (2) - CTRL+G this slider?
[Insane]
Nothing found here.
Sorry if my mod sucked, but the map is very well made. So, good luck ^^/
I'll delay my mod if I can gained 2 kd after I modded it 0.0
Hi!
Good map~
Good luck :3
[General]
Fine
[Normal]
00:05:999 (3) - How about this rhythm? I think it would be better if you followed for instrumental here00:07:463 (1) - How about add whistle at the repeat slider?
00:08:438 (2) - ^?
00:59:658 (3) - Add NC
00:41:121 (1) - Remove NC and add NC here 00:41:365 (2)
[Hard]
00:41:121 (1) - Same opinion as Normal
00:41:853 (x) - Would be great follow if you add a note. Also you can add note here too 00:42:585 (x)
00:59:658 (2) - Add NC
01:27:463 (4) - I think finish at the end slider feel well, you can reduce the volume if you want
[Insane]
00:00:146 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - This pattern сan be improved. How about Citrl+ H 00:00:877 (1,2) and here 00:02:341 (1,2)
00:08:438 (1) - Maybe add whistle at the end slider?
00:09:658 (5) - ^?
00:41:121 (1) - Same opinion as Normal
01:27:828 (8) - Add finish at the end slider
Fine
[Normal]
00:05:999 (3) - How about this rhythm? I think it would be better if you followed for instrumental here00:07:463 (1) - How about add whistle at the repeat slider?
00:08:438 (2) - ^?
00:59:658 (3) - Add NC
00:41:121 (1) - Remove NC and add NC here 00:41:365 (2)
[Hard]
00:41:121 (1) - Same opinion as Normal
00:41:853 (x) - Would be great follow if you add a note. Also you can add note here too 00:42:585 (x)
00:59:658 (2) - Add NC
01:27:463 (4) - I think finish at the end slider feel well, you can reduce the volume if you want
[Insane]
00:00:146 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - This pattern сan be improved. How about Citrl+ H 00:00:877 (1,2) and here 00:02:341 (1,2)
00:08:438 (1) - Maybe add whistle at the end slider?
00:09:658 (5) - ^?
00:41:121 (1) - Same opinion as Normal
01:27:828 (8) - Add finish at the end slider
Good map~
Good luck :3
Topic Starter
updated
thanks for modding :3
thanks for modding :3
Hi wcx. Modding time!
[General]
[General]
- All Clear. No unrankable issues found.
- 00:00:146 (1,1,1,1,1) - How about a star pattern? The current pattern is not bad, but I like to throw some suggestions.
- 00:58:682 (1,2,3) - When I test played this part, I missed this pattern at the around 3 via sightread. I don't suggest changing anything here, but it's worth mentioning lol.
Topic Starter
BeatofIke
thanks for moddingBeatofIke wrote:
Hi wcx. Modding time!
[General][Hard]
- All Clear. No unrankable issues found.
[Insane]
- 00:00:146 (1,1,1,1,1) - How about a star pattern? The current pattern is not bad, but I like to throw some suggestions.
I like to keep this cuz the song here didn't change in every 3/2 beatsNothing much to point out. Very good map and relaxing song. Call me back!
- 00:58:682 (1,2,3) - When I test played this part, I missed this pattern at the around 3 via sightread. I don't suggest changing anything here, but it's worth mentioning lol.
the pattern plays fine imo, there's 1/4 time gap to read and click he next note.. this is totally enough imo
Okay bubbled! 
This anime is best and all good song ~
Nice job ~ Here you go <3
Nice job ~ Here you go <3
gratz wcx!
Gratz :3
Wonderfull! Congrtaz!! wcx
wow, around 1 week ago i checked this map and saw no background, lack of mod, and likely not going to ranked so fast
then.. miracle happen ;O
congrats wcx!!
then.. miracle happen ;O
congrats wcx!!
Topic Starter
thanks for support everyone :3
GRATZ~! :3
不好意思最近忙了。。
想来摸的时候已经心了
grats
想来摸的时候已经心了
grats
The sliderslide3 hitsounds are screwy. They cut off prematurely and sound wrong. Just use the proper tick rate if you want to use tick sounds.
i knew itGarven wrote:
The sliderslide3 hitsounds are screwy. They cut off prematurely and sound wrong. Just use the proper tick rate if you want to use tick sounds.
Topic Starter
01:12:828 - this one in Normal just sounds fine to me, I'm fixing the rest
btw, is it a new rule for avoiding sliderslide sounds end to early?
edit: fixed and updated
btw, is it a new rule for avoiding sliderslide sounds end to early?
edit: fixed and updated
Alright, we got it all fixed up. No score reset is needed. Since this is really minor, I'm thinking this is good to send straight back to rank, soooo~ Reranked!
congratz www
Gratz ~