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David J. Franco - Scribblenauts Theme

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NoHitter

Loogiesquared wrote:

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00:43:098 : This should have the 3 beats, not the 1 after it.
Updated

Matma Rex wrote:

Awesome~. All diffs are perfect for me.

I only did some image recompressing and adjusted the way 1, 2, 3 images appear (added black borders to 1 and aligned them). Here's the .rar with some new images and fixed .osb:[attachment=0:3ac94]9580 David J Franco - Scribblenauts Theme.rar[/attachment:3ac94]

It also contains silent sectionpass/fail sounds (which I suggest to use). After you change .osb file, remove old "black.JPG" file, which is not needed anymore (do not confuse it with "black.png"!).
Thanks :D

JInxyjem wrote:

Difficulty complete :D

As a SB suggestion, I think the Scribblenauts logo should be completely removed, since it does not have a pixelated feeling like the rest of the SB.

The Hint (Zombies and stuff) also seems to disappear too quickly, but that's just me.
For now the Scribblenauts logo will stay until I find a replacement. And the hint does appear kind of fast. Still trying to find a way to fix that.
Mind if I add hitsounds and change a few to your diff?

Zekira wrote:

Other than that this is pretty well mapped that I almost didn't believe that it was NoHitter who did this... haha
[/quote]

:D experiences?
Jinxy
Mini hitsound fix and kiai addition.

Could you PM me the parts where you want to add/remove hitsounds?

Download: David J. Franco - Scribblenauts Theme (NoHItter) [JInxy's Scribbles].osu
Kerensa
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Jinxy
Not exactly according to the mod, but I did make a few spacing changes.

Download: David J. Franco - Scribblenauts Theme (NoHItter) [JInxy's Scribbles].osu
GabrielRKF
Awesome :D
You didn't finish your Sb yet, right? ._.
But it's still great til now ^^

//Normal// - Good one! :D
  1. 01:03:598(timing section) - don't use sound changes on the top of the hit circles cuz if the player hit this one later, the sound will be from the previous sction. Use 1/2 tick earlier, maybe (01:03:348).
  2. 01:05:598(timing section) - same here ^
  3. 01:09:310(1,2,3) - too hard starting just before the slider. I think is better center this notes.
  4. 01:13:029(1,2,3,4) - ^
  5. 01:18:820(timing section) - out of time timing section?
//JInxy's Scribbles// - Cool!
  1. 00:53:098 ~ 01:00:723 - the stops between the New Combos here sounds a bit strange w/ the continuous hit claps. I think it's better: (1) Or use just the half of the claps. (2) Or make notes on the not used white ticks. Just a tip, you don't have to do it, ok? :]
//Hard// - Really good!
  1. 00:19:652(4) - the four is a bit ugly here ._. I think that you will have no prob moving the 1,2 and 3 down a litte bit ^^
  2. 00:22:929(9) - Maybe New Combo? ._.
  3. 00:41:598(2) - New Combo should be here, not on te previous note
  4. 01:03:598(Timing S.) - Move back 1/4.
//Blue's Insane// - Fun :3
First: replace every out of time timing section.
Second: Why diferent colors? Use the same as the other diffs.
  1. 00:39:098(5) - New Combo
  2. 00:53:098(11) - bad new: New Combo is here. So change it and take off the jump :/

Already got my star >w<
*modding the rest right at this moment, wait please* Done ;D
EEeee
Normal
looks good
just fix the break in this diff, it doesn't end right

JInxy's Scribbles
00:22:67 (1) - remove new combo, add new combo to next note, i'm suggesting this since 1 isn't spaced :/

Hard
This diff actually looks good

Blue's Insane
00:10:45 (8) - isn't spaced so well, to fix that, add new combo here, and remove off the next one
00:53:09 (11) - space this, it's a bit too far
and that's it

nice map^^
sorry it took so long to mod
Jinxy
Topic Starter
NoHitter
Updated, but the hitsounds are gone...
Jinxy
Redownload my difficulty, the hitsounds should all be there.
Jinxy
The comboburst...is facing the wrong direction >_<
Topic Starter
NoHitter

JInxyjem wrote:

The comboburst...is facing the wrong direction >_<
Fixed.
Lokamp
Normal
00:08:81 (1,2,3,4) - move these beats two squares right
00:41:09 (1) - whistle here
01:03:59 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - move them 2 squares left

JInxy's Scribble
Nothin' wrong!

Hard
Perfect ^^

Blue's Insane
00:12:84 (4) - finish here

Nice map and Storyboard! Star'd ^^
jockeytiyan
For Blue Dragon's diff:
If you're going to make the map a bit more properly-looking, I suggest that you'd either decrease the distance snapping divisor or rather make the hit circle size a bit bigger. Also, decrease the fountains in the middle part, starting from 00:41:348 (if you wanna keep the current hit circle size). It's very distracting since combobursts also appear on that part too.
00:20:66 (7) - And move this to 1 tick earlier in the timeline (1/8) and re-snap
00:24:94 (1) - Sounds very out-of-place

For others, found nothing wrong.

I won't star this yet for the reason that I feel too compelled to do so~

(I might make a diff for this)
Topic Starter
NoHitter
Kiai time may be changed but not the beat placement.
Jinxy
Jinxy
O_O Why are the editor buttons in the SB?

[Jockey]
Increase hitsound volume.
Why are there beats on 1/6?
jockeytiyan

JInxyjem wrote:

O_O Why are the editor buttons in the SB?

[Jockey]
Increase hitsound volume.
Why are there beats on 1/6?
The hitsound volume were suggested by NoHItter himself. And the beats sounded very off at 1/4 beat snapping.
Topic Starter
NoHitter
They were part of an idea that has vanished...
Diasios
Mod Info's:

Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.

Starts Suggestions:

All seems ok.

[Normal]

It's ok

[Scribbles]

It's ok

[Doodles]

00:54:034 (6,7,8,9,1,2) - confusing part :S

[Hard]

It's ok

[Insane]

It's ok

Starred~
Azure_Kite
Here's my mod

Blue = Suggestion Red = Check this

[Normal]
01:15:026 (1) - The last spinner is unsnapped. Such a tiny thing.

No other problems found

[JInxy's Scribbles]
01:10:079 (1) - Maybe silence the end of this spinner?
01:15:001 (1) - The last spinner is unsnapped. Such a tiny thing.

No other problems found

[Jockey's Doodles]
Sliders need manual resnapping
00:15:061 (4) - Move one grid down
00:41:084 (3) - Move one grid right for symmetry
00:54:034 (6,7,8,9,1,2) - Incredibly hard to read. Could this be cleaned up, please?

[Hard]
00:17:088 (2) - Perhaps this can be rounded out more? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/242
01:14:076 (5) - Works so much better as a single beat rather than a reverse slider

No problems found

[Blue's Insane]
00:46:034 (6,7) - Either two grid spaces down, or one up. It feels out of alignment like this
A few sliders could be made prettier, but that's up to you,

No Problems found

Great beatmap; I'm so sorry I couldn't Get you the sprites you sought; Hopefully this mod post will help get this ranked, and judging from the number of errors I found, that isn't too far off. Starred
Andrea
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Teara
[General Thoughts]
Nice. I like the section fail/part sb, well done.

Timing seems on the dot, no problems found there

The following is just suggestions mostly.

[Normal]
01:05:059 (1) - Align with the slider (3) then resnap the rest

[JInxy's Scribbles]

00:44:009 (2) - mirror with (1) [Move 1 down, then 1 right, grid level "tiny"]
00:58:059 (*) - 1/2 silder sounds nice here.
01:02:034 (4) - add 1 repeat?
01:04:034 (2) - ^

[Hard]

No problem's

[Blue's Insane]

Circle Size = Normal. It plays a lot better and is more fun IMO.
Jinxy

Teara wrote:

[JInxy's Scribbles]

00:44:009 (2) - mirror with (1) [Move 1 down, then 1 right, grid level "tiny"]{It already is mirrored. You really think I would let someone nazi my map that easily?}
00:58:059 (*) - 1/2 silder sounds nice here.
01:02:034 (4) - add 1 repeat?
01:04:034 (2) - ^
Dusty
Disable the letterbox during the breaks? It cuts off part of the typewriter thingy.

That's it, nice job, have a star(ite lololol?)
Takuma
Timing I'm iffy about, but the map itself is fine. Have a star.
Topic Starter
NoHitter
It sounds fine to me...
Ephemeral
[Hard]
00:49:087 (6) - Unrankable note - slider ends offscreen

Aside from that, everything is fine except for the timing. I'm not much good with timing so you'll need to get awp or Cyclone to look at it. I have a feeling the BPM is wrong since this should probably be 1 timing section/offset deal based on how the song sounds.

Oh, and:
01:15:001 (1) - Across all difficulties, this spinner should end on the white primary beat, not the blue before it.
Topic Starter
NoHitter
I think the timing's correct...

The tempo speeds up and is not constant...
Kurai
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Topic Starter
NoHitter
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Zekira
Seriously people I think this is correct. And this isn't my timing; it's friggin' Loginer's for crying out loud. This song isn't mono-BPM >_>

...wait, actually...

3rd offset: move it to 63109, make it 121.25. In the current one, the 1 sequence just before the kiai sounds off. But the other timing sections are fine now, really.
MaxwellDemon
Hmmm, probably should map a hitcircle overlay as well. I am using another skin at the moment, it looks really weird. Hahaha... or you could just force the default skin, but eh. >_>;

Timing feels solid enough.

[Hard]

00:22:425 (7,8) - This seems to not fit? :/

[Blue's Insane]

00:23:685 (7,8,9,10) - Don't really understand the claps here XD XD
00:56:848 (1,2) - I think this is just evil, hahahaha. XD XD
01:09:294 (2,3) - I am not sure if that fits soundwise either. :/

Other than those little "issues", you guys will definitely need a hitcircle overlay. :p
So, I can only grant you a star for now~
BUT IT IS A MAXWELL-STAR!ZOMGZOMGZOMG. XD
Topic Starter
NoHitter
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Gens
[General]
  1. Why is there a black.jpg and a black.png in the song folder? You can use only one image and shrink it to 640x480.
[Skin]
  1. You should just shrink the section pass/fail images to 1x1 or similar. It isn't of much importance, so meh. :p
[All Difficulties]
  1. Check that the hitvolume is consistent for the whole song. Sometimes the hitvolume suddenly changes. Also, IMO you should lower it while you're at it.
  2. Timing is not the same on all difficulties. You can ignore the inherited sections, but you need to fix the red/main sections.
[Normal]

01:09:017 (1,1) - Beats right after a spinner is... a bit tricky for a normal. It can get a bit frustrating for a semi-newbie.

[Blue's Insane]

00:58:084 (1) - What @ slider arrow

~ ~ ~

Overall, the map is fine, just some minor things about the SB/Skin. However, I'll wait until you fix timing and the black image thing to star this. Shouldn't take much anyway. :)
Topic Starter
NoHitter

Gens wrote:

[General]
  1. Why is there a black.jpg and a black.png in the song folder? You can use only one image and shrink it to 640x480.
There is no black.jpg...

[Skin]
  1. You should just shrink the section pass/fail images to 1x1 or similar. It isn't of much importance, so meh. :p
Done

[All Difficulties]
  1. Check that the hitvolume is consistent for the whole song. Sometimes the hitvolume suddenly changes. Also, IMO you should lower it while you're at it.
  2. Timing is not the same on all difficulties. You can ignore the inherited sections, but you need to fix the red/main sections.
Good job finding that.

[Normal]

01:09:017 (1,1) - Beats right after a spinner is... a bit tricky for a normal. It can get a bit frustrating for a semi-newbie. Fixed

[Blue's Insane]

00:58:084 (1) - What @ slider arrow ???

~ ~ ~

Overall, the map is fine, just some minor things about the SB/Skin. However, I'll wait until you fix timing and the black image thing to star this. Shouldn't take much anyway. :)
Gens
Sorry about the black.jpg fuzz, it seems I had an old version of the map. I still redownloaded so I don't get it... you can forget about it anyway. =/

Also, the slider repeat arrow in Blue's Insane is pointing the wrong way here, that's why I pointed it out. Not sure why, but it looks dumb.
Xgor
[Normal]
01:09:017 (1) - Make this spinner end at 1:12:016 so you have more time to react on the slider

[Jinxy]
01:07:006 (5) - I think it would be better if this had one reverse arrow more

[Hard]
:)

[Blue's]
00:47:009 (8) - This slider drain soo much health X.x Lower the HP drain or change that part

Pretty good map and it shows that it has been modded allot :D
*star*
Jinxy
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Aoitenshi
Normal:
1:13:005 - I don't think it's necessary to put another Kiai here.
Blue's Insane
1:09:170 - ^
Topic Starter
NoHitter
Done
Andrea
[Overall]

3rd offset is wrong. I got this offset.

BPM: 121,25 - Offset: 63.125 (Resnap all notes.)

[Difficulties]

[Normal]

01:12:075 (1) - A note after spinner is too hard for the most easier difficulty.

[JInxy's Scribbles]

No major problems found.

[Hard]

00:38:084 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:39:009 (2) - New combo.

[Blue's Insane]

00:57:034 (3,4) - Spacing.
Jinxy
For the numbers, I don't think I can provide you with those, because after making them, I realised they had white spots around, and I have no idea which pixels are the ones causing it.
Topic Starter
NoHitter
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Andrea
Looks good now.

Bubbled.
RemmyX25
I was going to come up with a scribblenauts joke for this but not worth it.

Ranked. Very well done.
Topic Starter
NoHitter
Thanks :D
0_o
I dunno if it's just me, but I keep getting 100's from 00:53:034 (1) to the next offset, imo the notes feel a bit early in this part..
Derekku

0_o wrote:

I dunno if it's just me, but I keep getting 100's from 00:53:034 (1) to the next offset, imo the notes feel a bit early in this part..
Okay, it wasn't just me then. :o I'll check it again tomorrow when I'm more awake.

PS: I love this SB oh god <3
Zekira

0_o wrote:

I dunno if it's just me, but I keep getting 100's from 00:53:034 (1) to the next offset, imo the notes feel a bit early in this part..
This is making me want to re-check stuff... :\
Derekku
Yeah, that section is definitely off. I was going to try retiming it but I have to leave for a bit. If no one else figures it out, I'll try it when I get back. :o

EDIT: Came home, fell asleep around 8pm because I wasn't feeling so well, and then had more errands and things to do today. Let's see...

EDIT 2: Buh.. I'm just going in circles with the timing. Something like a +10 offset (same BPM) seems better at the trouble spot. But, the last timing section sounds off too. Uhhh, something like a faster BPM (121.5) might work better. My laptop keeps lagging so it's hard to test it atm. orz

Also: 00:56:858 (1,2) - I REALLY HATE THIS. Just make it one slider that repeats >.>;

01:09:055 (1) - Shouldn't kiai start here? Seems REALLY awkward where it starts now (not even on a note).
FrozenOG
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