Kodora wrote:

sorry for delay > >

[General]

1. You can remove "china" "taiwan" from tags, map will have "chinese" as gentre after rank anyway alright
2. Normal diff have different combo-colours, any reasons for that? fixed to same ones
3. Even with automatic audio lead-in map starts kinda really too fast... can you please adjust audio lead-in to 1000 via notepad? idk if lead-in is an issue before ranking... some bats told me that the system will give an appropriate lead-in addition set if the map's ranked. so let it be like this now
4. Nice bg lol, guess whio's she(?) ?

[Hard]

*Well, you kinda overuse extended sliders with silent slidertails here. I must say that Ranking Criteria allowes having silent slidertails, but only for cases where it makes sense (for example long note what ends in silence). Silencing slidertails only for achieving 1/4 or 1/8 jumps is not allowed. Actually, i made some of them audible and i find that they sounds pretty nice without any silence here. well, as for the song's silent and most of objs r set in vocal track. so i really think it's nice if those slider's ends' hs r set in silence... well, if the bat says that this is not rankble then i'll consider to remove some orz

1. 00:01:170 (1) - Don't see any reason for silence here, it ends on audible beat. Actually, i find rhythm at this part kinda strange, beat on 00:01:698 - needs to be played while it covered by sliderbody. Try something like this to follow music better: haha well, i'll remove the silence hs set. as for the unplayed beat... hmm, this hard diff is already hard enough, so i decide to miss this 0.0
   
   
   
2. 00:01:875 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Really well-done patterns, i like them a lot! Thought i have one idea to make this part a bit more interesting and challenging, especially for HD players. How about to try something like this? lol if i replace this slider by 2 notes it will be a bit too difficult in this mapset imo... so this is it ;w; i'm glad u love this pattern www
   
   
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   Just replace 00:02:932 (5,1) - with code:
   
   

   455,248,2932,2,0,L|499:255,1,40,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   438,267,3285,5,0,0:0:0:0:
   477,273,3461,1,0,0:0:0:0:

3. 00:06:458 (2,3,4,5) - Hmm, what about adjusting sliders here to follow vocals better? Something like this: uhhhhhhh??? i think the rhythm i set now is better to fit the vocal track than urs orzzz
   
   
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4. 00:12:098 (1,2) - If you going to keep an extended sliders here i guess you need to make slidertails audible - i actually tried and it was sounds not too bad! There is no reason to keep them silent anyway. hmm... alright OVQ
5. 00:13:156 (1) - Same as above yep u r right, it's still good OVQ
6. 00:17:738 (6) - New combo follow new part of music oh, here i think nc is not that necessary 0.0
7. 00:20:559 (5) - Same as above about extended sliders with silent slidertails. ok
8. 00:23:026 (6,7) - While i can agree with (6) being silent i can't agree with (7). A simple reason - (6) follows sound what music provides while (7) is just extended. Make tail of (7) audible please. Also, spacing at this part feels kinda clamped. I'd raise it a bit to avoid excessive overlapping between 00:23:026 (6,7,8) - ok, fixed the hs and ds issue both
9. 00:25:847 (5,6,7) - Same as above, all of these needs to be audible. fixed
10. 00:28:668 (5,6) - Same fixed
11. 00:34:307 (4,5) - Same fixed
12. 00:35:012 (6,7) - Raise spacing at this part. Main problem of this pattern: it looks totally same as 00:34:307 (4,5). Such spacing tricks can works good on Insane diffs, but since your is a Hard i'd prefer to see this part more friendly. i see, changed
13. 00:37:127 (1,2) - Same about unnesessary silence. As all usual extendeds they should have audible tails. By the way, you can extend 00:37:480 (2) - to 00:38:009 - it will improve playability and will madel made 00:38:186 (4,5) - easier to catch. Also try to made this overlap more prettier: fixed the hs issue. and changed the slider to another style
    
    
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14. 00:40:476 (2) - It can be mapped as singe note at 00:40:476 - or shortened to 00:40:653. Silence is unacceptable. fixed as the second mod
15. 00:42:768 (5,6) - Same problem with silent slidertails. fixed
16. 00:49:113 (9,10) - Same problem with silence fixed
18. 00:44:178 (1) - Also this can be just extended to 00:44:530 - i kept the pattern and remove the silence hs set
19. 00:45:588 (5,6) - Again problem with unneeded silence. fixed
20. 00:46:293 (7,8) - Same problem. Also, this overlap doesnt looks/plays well. How about try something like this to avoid it? good, all changed
    
    
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21. 00:46:998 (1) - This can be mapped just as single note, this extended actually even plays bad. Try to just replace with single note at 00:46:998 but i really love the patterns like this... OVQ
22. 00:47:703 (4,5,6) - This part technically plays well, but estetically looks bad. How about use bigger spacing here & rotate (6) a bit? Try this. Also, again problem with silence. lololololol, i think this is just fine, thou it looks not that much good but it's just fine www
    
    
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23. 00:52:286 (8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - A very problematic part. Inconsistent spacing between these sliders might confuse players a lot, actually these extendeds... I don't really think that they fit at all, in my opinion simple 1/2 sliders would work much better since it is still a Hard diff, but if you really want to keep them please made tails audible. i changed some of them to 1/2 sliders, and fixed the hs issue
24. 00:56:164 (3,4) - This works much better as 1/2 slider (00:56:164 - 00:56:516 - ). Not sure why you mapped it with extended, it imo doesn't mach music well well. i just can say: my feeling told me to set rhythm like this
25. 00:57:574 (7,8) - Should be audible fixed
26. 00:58:279 (1,2) - ^ fixed
27. 00:59:865 (6) - New combo follow pattern fixed
28. 01:01:099 (1,2) - Shouldn't be silent fixed
29. 01:02:686 (5) - NC? ok
30. 01:22:427 (1) - Spinnertail snapped to beat here and therefore should be audible. hmmmmmmm alright... ;w;

Lots of very nice patterns, kiai part actually was awesome. However, i must say that some overlapping patterns and unnesessary silent slidertails can be real problems for players, so i highly suggest you work at these problems. (You also have so any silent slidertails on kiai and it was working very well - it would be very nice if you will do them audible on the rest of map). yeah i see, changed a little bit in composing

[Normal]

1. 00:13:156 (1) - Add finish? hmmm nope
2. 00:27:962 (2) - Looks bad, try this: haha ok
   
   
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3. 00:55:459 (1) - Ah, 3 repeats are annoying to play for anyone. Can you please replace it with 3 1/1 sliders? hhhhhhmmmmmmmmm i decide to keep it, i bit fun with low sv if there's a pattern like this imo, don't u think? lol
4. 01:18:021 (4) - This slider feels kinda out of place. Maybe try something like this to make it flows more smoother? changed to another style
   
   
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Pretty nice diff. Good luck! lol sry for delay nearly 2 months lolol, and i'm glad u announced me of the hs issues in different words hhhhhh

1. 00:11:392 (5) - 把网格调到最小然后把它稍微往右调一下http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1287652如何？
2. 00:12:451 (2,3) - 两个这样的slider连的话这样我觉得比较好看http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1287660
3. 00:13:156 (1,2) - ^ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1287662
4. 00:23:379 (7,8) - slider弧度小一些会更好看？
5. 00:25:141 (3) - 不加音效么？
6. 00:38:537 - 要不要加个note？
7. 00:59:689 - ^
8. 00:01:170 - 01:03:919 :音效有些意义不明，00:13:156之前我好想没有听到你所加的whistle的声音，不过加上感觉更好。但是后面的我觉得按照music里面的音效下会比较好，不然显得有些乱。且我觉得可以把音效的声音加大些，而hitnormal的声音缩小些，否则有些地方没有音效的note感觉很突兀比如。
9. 01:21:898 (4,5,6) - 三角稍稍有点歪？
10. 01:14:495 (1) - 要加NC吗？

1PSA wrote:

我来了~偷懒之余就顺便摸了果然很短 我比你更懒orz

[Hard]

1. 00:11:392 (5) - 把网格调到最小然后把它稍微往右调一下http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1287652如何？ ok
2. 00:12:451 (2,3) - 两个这样的slider连的话这样我觉得比较好看http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1287660 咦，有区别吗orz
3. 00:13:156 (1,2) - ^ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1287662 这里就不改了
4. 00:23:379 (7,8) - slider弧度小一些会更好看？ 为何你们都喜欢小弧度。。。orz
5. 00:25:141 (3) - 不加音效么？ 不加
6. 00:38:537 - 要不要加个note？ 不加
7. 00:59:689 - ^ 不加
8. 00:01:170 - 01:03:919 :音效有些意义不明，00:13:156之前我好想没有听到你所加的whistle的声音，不过加上感觉更好。但是后面的我觉得按照music里面的音效下会比较好，不然显得有些乱。且我觉得可以把音效的声音加大些，而hitnormal的声音缩小些，否则有些地方没有音效的note感觉很突兀比如。 下音效我从来都是跟着感觉来的。。。现在的音效整体我还是很满意的
9. 01:21:898 (4,5,6) - 三角稍稍有点歪？ 稍微调了下
10. 01:14:495 (1) - 要加NC吗？ 啥？不加了么orz

[Normal]
没。

以上~~好图快rank~ 233我也想啊噗

ZZHBOY wrote:

啊 女神我来了
[Normal]
00:51:229 (2) - 这里建议拆成1note加1/2折返滑条 哦哦哦这样的感觉 虽然是个好主意不过在normal里beat的出现速度普遍偏慢，所以这个就这样好了，不然感觉有点突兀
00:55:459 (1) - 少折返一次然后00:58:279 加个note 可以突出鼓点 前面四个字也是一个词 这个可以有，改了
01:01:099 (1) - 去掉nc 下一个滑条nc 人声起 这里nc不需要动
01:12:381 (4) - 建议改3/4折返 然后下一个滑条提前1/4拍然后拉长1/4拍 我传不了图你感受一下 感觉有点奇怪 这里节奏也不需要动
01:19:078 - 不跟这里的wuuuuuuuu? 不跟了噗（为何看到你wuuu我就想笑噗
01:20:841 (1,3) - 总感觉没报号 然后挤在一起不觉得很蠢吗._. blanket稍微调了下。这么萌的滑条居然说蠢，打你哦
[Hard]
00:07:339 (5,1) - crtl+g然后调整位置 感觉会好点 这不需要动
00:46:293 (7,8,1) - 感觉好丑啊=。= 改掉了
00:54:754 - 空着感觉有点奇怪 没事的
00:56:164 (3) - 建议老老实实用1/4滑条 或者萍水相逢都用这种设置会感觉舒服一点 这里不打算动
00:58:631 (2,4) - overlap好丑=。= 为何。。。
然后看完KIAI说说对这个难度的感想 还是有点你那种一个难度里不同部分难度差太大的特点 有点偏向I 嗯orz
所以说hwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww女神龖死ki =。=||||||

Piyoko_9796 wrote:

你是女生o le o le o~ 我是男生o le o le o~
HW你決定去泰國了喔恭喜 没钱去
記住爆照 -，-|||

中文歌真無力....((趴
給個渣摸((被巴

[Hard]
00:05:400 (4) - NC 不需要
00:07:339 (5) - 要不要前面的滑條改成return? 那個什麼oleoleo 有種來回的感覺((語死中 没事，这样也挺好玩的
00:20:206 (4) - circle比較好... 故意下了不一样的节奏
00:22:497 (4) - remove nope
00:23:731 (8) - 向下好看點((思 稍微调了下
00:33:955 (3) - 變兩個circle 柑橘也挺好。。。纠结。。。先不改orz
00:37:127 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這裡我miss了幾次了Q口Q 这边的梗我翻新了一下
00:38:186 (4) - 拉出點變三角形((耶((X 没，这里是叠在之前note的位置上啦
00:54:401 (6) - 滑條尾到白線 nope

[NM]
00:17:386 (3) - 縮短到紅線然後(4)以前到白線 这里节奏不想动
01:12:381 (4,5,6) - 這裡接的有點奇葩...不知怎樣改 不会改

[General]
你X的...這圖怎麼這麼有趣hhh hhh

我就只懂摸ins....我吧HD當成ins摸了_(TvT_)_ 23333
祝rk

這歌好洗腦喔喔喔喔喔喔喔((不要喔喔喔喔喔!!!! 哦哦哦哦哦！！！

1. You must remove "drum-hitnormal" file in your folder. as you can see both diffs, you don't use this file.

1. Circle size +1, AR-1. It's a bit hard for this difficulty.
2. 00:01:170 (1) - This spinner is really short for beginner. I recommend you to use one slider here.
3. 00:24:436 (1) - add a finish to the head of the slider same as your hard diff.
4. 00:29:372 (4) - Design suggestion: I prefer to make curve slider here. It would look better imo also you can make a flow more naturally
   
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5. 00:51:229 (2) - About slider's repeat. If you followed the vocal at this slider, It's better to use a finish instead of a whistle.
6. 00:55:459 (1,1) - I don't agree the stack in the easiest diff. You should consider remaking this part. Fix this one, so it prevents the player from misreading.
7. 01:08:150 (5) - I feel kind of empty here 01:07:797 - .because you followed this sound at previous part 01:03:919 (1,2) - . So Please try to make this
   
8. 01:13:966 (5) - I think you don't need to follow this slider. It seems a bit hard to me for this difficulty. So you should consider removing it.
9. 01:19:431 (5) - Same as above.

1. 00:03:109 - add a whistle same as here 00:04:519 - You should be able to apply my suggestion for the rest of the part....00:08:749 - ... and so on.
2. 00:15:094 - i feel kind of empty here, it is better to use 1/2 rhythm for playing also you followed same sound at here 00:14:389 - . so consider adding a note.
3. 01:09:384 - These consecutive whistles do not match imo. Please remove it here.

alacat wrote:

hey www

[General]

1. You must remove "drum-hitnormal" file in your folder. as you can see both diffs, you don't use this file. thou i actually used it a bit but anyway it didn't work really well, so fixed this already 0.0

[Normal]

1. Circle size +1, AR-1. It's a bit hard for this difficulty. hmm? it may be bigger circle size and set CS to 3 right? ok~~
2. 00:01:170 (1) - This spinner is really short for beginner. I recommend you to use one slider here. ok
3. 00:24:436 (1) - add a finish to the head of the slider same as your hard diff. ohhh my bad! fixed!! ;w; (u really found issues, awesome
4. 00:29:372 (4) - Design suggestion: I prefer to make curve slider here. It would look better imo also you can make a flow more naturally ok~~
   
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5. 00:51:229 (2) - About slider's repeat. If you followed the vocal at this slider, It's better to use a finish instead of a whistle. yyyyyeahhhhhh u r right!!! u really understand my hs works! ;w;
6. 00:55:459 (1,1) - I don't agree the stack in the easiest diff. You should consider remaking this part. Fix this one, so it prevents the player from misreading. fixed
7. 01:08:150 (5) - I feel kind of empty here 01:07:797 - .because you followed this sound at previous part 01:03:919 (1,2) - . So Please try to make this of course, fixed
   
8. 01:13:966 (5) - I think you don't need to follow this slider. It seems a bit hard to me for this difficulty. So you should consider removing it. ok, i'm bad at low diff's mapping ;w; changed these two sliders to one note here
9. 01:19:431 (5) - Same as above. ^

[Hard]

1. 00:03:109 - add a whistle same as here 00:04:519 - You should be able to apply my suggestion for the rest of the part....00:08:749 - ... and so on. all fixed
2. 00:15:094 - i feel kind of empty here, it is better to use 1/2 rhythm for playing also you followed same sound at here 00:14:389 - . so consider adding a note.
3. 01:09:384 - These consecutive whistles do not match imo. Please remove it here. u mean the whistle at 01:09:560 (1) - right? removed, and 01:20:841 (1) - 's as well 0.0

This map needs more works tbh. So please get some mods around 2~3. i hope your map will be fine at that time. and whenever you're ready, Call me back for recheck. thank u very much alacat!!! OVQ

EmingK wrote:

猴王姐姐是女生，嗯，没错 我是男生！！OVQ

This post is generated by EK's osu modpost generator.

Red=unrankable issue
Purple=Emphasis suggestion
Black=Suggestion
Gray=Feel free to ignore

[专注查metadata三十年]
那三个tag都没啥用，删掉，把姓名全拼加到tag中去
歌曲所属专辑是《Yuki 第一张个人专辑》 可以考虑一下 徐怀钰没删，其他加了

[Hard]
打起来不错，就是看着挺砢碜的Orz orz
00:12:451 (2) - 这里不要太弯啊，正好让00:12:451 (2,3) - 和00:13:156 (1,2) - 形状一样，好看一些 其实我觉得还好。。。嘛，稍微调整了下
00:37:480 (2) - 拆成3/8滑条+单点？因为SV比较低容易被误认成3/8导致(3)按早，我打的时候就中招了;w; 好主意啊，改了
00:46:293 (7) - 尾巴往外一点包好 fixed
00:05:400 (4) - NC? 不需要

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01:21:722 (2) - 这间距不建议啊 这里pattern直接改了
01:22:339 (1) - hard有音效啊 这个美丽 fixed

好多感觉是个人风格问题没法挑啥啊 你给的建议都不错啊！
酷爱rank 噗。。。

smallboat wrote:

臥巢 怎麼一顆星號了 那我今晚跳過先前的債先幫你摸 (Will post here)

嗨HW。 嗨，请不要那么客气hhh

1. Red words: Should be fix it.
2. Blue words : I recommended suggestion.
3. Black words : In my personal opinion.

[General]

或許Tags的地名就別用中文的? 地名看看能不能改成英文。 加了英文

[Normal] 01:03:567 沒必要的綠線 fixed

00:59:513 (3) - 建議開頭是在 00:59:689 白線處(放在這邊我也覺得蠻不錯，鼓點有跟前面白線鼓點對到)，因為這樣白線123拍才能打得順，你這邊開頭這邊放藍線有點難掌握打擊點，只是我的意見。 好的，我觉得改了不错，嗯
01:03:567 (3) - 似乎換個finish音效比較舒服些，也跟vocal蠻合適。 这个音效不想改。。。
01:08:855 (6) - 我會把開頭移到前面白線然後用個長條，這樣就能對到vocal，也是意見之一。 移到白线？红线吧？不过这里改了似乎比较违和所以就这样好了
01:14:495 (5) - 稍微挑個間距? 改了
01:20:841 (1,2) - 這音軌節奏要跟01:09:560 (1,2) 相同吧? 后面全改掉了

[Hard]

00:15:094 (7) - 這邊加一個note我覺得打得比較順暢。(像這段00:18:796 (1) 之後都有跟到為何這不跟呢) 因为想玩不同梗噗，这里就这样好了
00:17:915 (7) - ^ ^
00:41:181 (5,1) - 似乎有點難讀，還是跟前面保持同距吧? 没关系的

[Other]

HW你怎麼要到阿拉貓mod的我不服 求搞基大法

[Twinkle] wrote:

[HARD]
00:54:754 这里加一个note上去可能会比较好？ 不想加
00:56:869 (5) - 这个也换成前面滑条00:56:164 (3) - 的长度？ 这里是为了做节奏对称的梗所以就不改了
01:01:804 (3) - 也许这也要换成和01:01:099 (1) - 一样？orz纯属建议 换了个梗
01:03:038 (2,3,4,5) - 这几note感觉堆在一起不是太好，可以试试DS渐渐增大同时volume增加 噗。。。hard不想搞太难啦orz
01:04:096 (2,3) - 这两个滑条尾端的音都明显要比头部的重很多，试试都往后移4分只1拍然后前面再加一个note？ 现在这样也不错啊
01:05:682 (5,6,7) - 试试看换成3个4分之一拍长度的滑条 这里这样没关系的
01:08:326 (5) - 这个note拿出来放吧 现在柑橘还行啊噗，放下面柑橘移动好大，放上面不好放233
01:09:560 (1,2,3) - 这个和前面 01:04:096 (2,3) - 类似，试试看同样的改法 同上
01:11:675 (7) - 把这个换成2个4分之一长度的滑条试试，这个结尾的音还是挺强的，也是长音。距离放的稍微远一点 哎呀这里就跟vocal的语气算了orz
01:12:380 (1,2,3) - 这里我觉得人声肯定是占据主导，这一段最重的音就在这里01:12:909 。ORZ也许这样放好一点 我柑橘这里切的还行啊orzzz

SPOILER

slider1是01:12:380

01:15:200 (1,2,3,4) - 和上面一样~
01:22:251 (6) - 这个音特别响，也许可以放远一点，不一定要三角形。 我是首席三角梗脑残粉

[NORMAL]
00:55:459 (1) - 这个放得太低了？回转两次的话感觉应该要放到容易按到点的地方。 orz这还好吧

/w\就这样啦，normal不会摸orz orz

Flask wrote:

女生 = nu sheng

Nv sheng感覺神拼音

BeatofIke wrote:

Pretty straight-forward map. Ranked!

KaedekaShizuru wrote:

Flask wrote:

女生 = nu sheng

Nv sheng感覺神拼音

汉语拼音里的确要打nv才会出来女 同理绿要打lv才会出现
nu的话则是怒这些字了


顺便打完这图我整个人都伪娘了Orz
BG绝对是恶意

Hollow Wings wrote:

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HWの拼音小课堂

估计台湾那边不教汉语拼音，总之在拼音里有六个韵母：a o e i u ü。 它们和各种声母或韵母结合成读音后，还要在主韵母加上音标。（注意，它们并不是和所有的声母或韵母都能互相结合成读音

仅就ü而言，大多数结合成读音后，加上音标时，需将ü上两点去掉写成u，只有和l和n结合时为例外，具体为：lü（绿）nü（女），复韵母中的lüe（略）, nüe（虐），在写这些字的音标的时候，ü的两点要保留

由于在标准键盘里没有与ü对应的字母，于是就凑数加在了汉语拼音里正好不存在的“V”的键上。至于汉语中“v”的发音，标准普通话里是不存在的

而现在人的误区就在于以为u和ü在键盘输入时无区别，总之都打u就行，并且确实打的出来，因为现在的输入法太过智能以至于太过不靠谱，即使有纠正拼音功能看的人估计也不多。

问问用过上古时代智能abc输入法的筒子们就可以知道了，当时电脑输入拼音简直就是可以复习高中语文拼音一般，各种前鼻韵后鼻韵，平舌音翘舌音，打错了这字就打不出来的。

以上知识为我小学一年级学的东西，估计大多数人早忘了

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