This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 4. joulukuuta 2009 at 14:31:14

Artist: Haru
Title: Skygazer (Instrumental)
Source: Touhou
Tags: Touhou Instrumental Viotex pasonia yes
BPM: 140
Filesize: 5376kb
Play Time: 03:20
Difficulties Available:

1. Hard (4,86 stars, 462 notes)
2. Normal (4,11 stars, 170 notes)
3. Paso-don's Taiko (4,88 stars, 594 notes)
4. Yes (4,95 stars, 499 notes)

Download: Haru - Skygazer (Instrumental)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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For Nexy's Viotex project: forum/viewtopic.php?f=53&t=12924

I was surprised how well Hard turned out to be :>
Special thanks to Pasonia for taiko map.
Special thanks to Yes for another difficulty

><; hitsounds are kinda "strong" for this song...
minus 34 on on offset

Normal-
01:33:22 (1) - sounds too weird, why not just make this a repeating 1/2 slider
02:05:15 (2,3,4) - it was follow piano then suddenly this part followed another beat (maybe add hitsounds if you're ganna keep like this)
Redo Breaks
Hitsound complains-

Hard-
The drain is evil and the overall is kinda low
00:42:65 (7) - I saw this repeat, but not sure how well it'll fair for others
01:45:65 (5) - I don't like this note~! move 1/2 forward to white tick please, and you can probably fill in that gap
01:51:86 (5,6) - it was following piano, don't like how this suddenly doesn't
More hitsound complaints -

Hmm, I would have aimed for a simple hitsound set (clap every few white beat, or only whistle, etc etc) but doesn't seem to apply for this map, please try to make it a bit more simple or make it very creative like you did for 02:08:36 (3) to the end.

Shinxyn wrote:

><; hitsounds are kinda "strong" for this song...
minus 34 on on offset Oh I hadnt noticed that. Thanks

Normal-
01:33:22 (1) - sounds too weird, why not just make this a repeating 1/2 slider Done o/
02:05:15 (2,3,4) - it was follow piano then suddenly this part followed another beat (maybe add hitsounds if you're ganna keep like this) Added a whistle. I did the sudden change becouse I thought it would be too repetitive.
Redo Breaks
Hitsound complains-

SPOILER

00:29:15 (4) - Don't mix hitsounds please Agreed
00:32:58 (2) - prefer clap instead Agreed
00:34:29 (1) - ^ (for start of slider) ^
00:35:58 (3) - ^ (for end of slider) ^
00:42:01 (2) - the pace for this clap seems off, try adding clap to 00:41:36 (1)'s repeat (on the white tick) Agreed
00:50:36 (4,5) - I find it odd that it's finish-normal instead of normal-finish (the hitsound order..) I find it only perfectly natural :> (almost)
00:57:22 (5,6) - ^ ^
01:01:51 (1) - don't like the double finish, remove or... try another hitsound on first part instead? Agreed
01:20:58 (2,5) - you -could- match the background for claps here? Clever :3
01:35:79 (1,2) - I suggest hitsounds to make this your own beats Done
01:36:86 (2,3) - I don't get why this is the only part here that gets soft hitsounds I forgot to do the other ones T_T Fixed
01:39:22 (2,3) - I suggest hitsounds to make this your own beats Done
02:07:72 (1) - don't mix hitsounds please (remove whistle)

Hard-
The drain is evil and the overall is kinda low
00:42:65 (7) - I saw this repeat, but not sure how well it'll fair for others
01:45:65 (5) - I don't like this note~! move 1/2 forward to white tick please, and you can probably fill in that gap Done
01:51:86 (5,6) - it was following piano, don't like how this suddenly doesn't
More hitsound complaints :o -

SPOILER

00:25:72 (4) - you didn't have to almost silence this Not agreed o/
00:27:44 (4) - ^ Not agreed o/
00:29:15 (4) - ^ (and whats with the timing panel all the way back there...?) Not agreed o/
00:30:86 (4) - would prefer clap, but it works
00:34:29 (6,7) - hmmm make the normal clap quieter, and maybe change the soft to something else... whistle? Agreed o/
00:35:58 (2) - don't mix please Agreed o/
00:36:01 (3) - a clap please~ (if you do, make ^ a whistle only) Agreed o/
00:37:29 (1) - one or the other, not both Agreed o/
00:54:22 (1) - don't like this finish Agreed o/
01:03:65 (1,2,3,4,5) - don't like the hitsounds here, I feel you can just use whistle and only whistle Agreed o/
01:26:58 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - completely lacking hitsounds? (complared to rest of map) Agreed o/
02:00:86 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - needs... hitsounds.. for.. own.. beats Agreed o/
02:09:22 (2) - the whistles don't sound bad as they are, but they're odd since it just suddenly appears near the end Not agreed.. Oh well, I can consider.

Hmm, I would have aimed for a simple hitsound set (clap every few white beat, or only whistle, etc etc) but doesn't seem to apply for this map, please try to make it a bit more simple or make it very creative like you did for 02:08:36 (3) to the end.

I thank you for your insight. I'll get back to the hitsounding once I have more time to spend. :3

Have a kudosu.

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Unrankable..? I've been told that before but I can remember dozens of ranked maps with reverse arrow covered. Its not fair :D


And the breaks dont change anyhow even if I redo them. I tried.

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~Star.

Blue Dragon wrote:

Normal
00:38:12 (2) - Clap at end? Mm.. Why not.
00:39:40 (2) - Clap at start? Makes sense.
00:39:83 (3) - Remove clap? [if accept ^] Makes more sense
00:40:04 (4) - Whistle? [if accept ^] No sense whatsoever :o
00:46:26 (2) - WTF with what finish? Put clap instead of finish, sounds better :? Nah.. I'll stick to the finish; but thanks to this, I noticed an unnecessary clap in the 1.
00:50:76 (5) - clap? I dont wanna do that.. Although I noticed now that the sound is way too high.
01:05:54 (5) - finish at end? Yeah, sure :3
01:26:54 (1) - clap, or whistle. You choose. Whislte I say!
01:34:26 (3,4) - spacing Thanks
01:46:69 (2) - clap at end? No need imo
02:00:83 (6) - finish? Hmm.. I dont think it fits with the following sounds very well.
02:06:83 (x) - note with clap here Makes sense after I make the 2 a clap and red combos 5 to clap o/

Hard
00:44:54 (3) - clap? I'll consider.. But for now I'll leave it as it is.
00:44:97 (6) - [if accept ^] remove hitsound
00:45:40 (1) - [if accept ^] add finish here


Great map. Star. :)

Thank you. I realized that normals hitsounds are a bit too loud imo.

Have a kudosu

Set a preview point.

Disable countdown, too loud for this song.

[Normal]

00:25:69 (3) - Lower volume.
00:26:97 (2) - Lower volume.
00:30:40 (1,3) - Lower volume.
00:35:54 (3) - Lower volume.
00:46:26 (2) - Remove finish.
00:50:76 (5) - Why not add some notes after here and follow that nice piano sound? Feels like a sudden stop.
00:59:97 (2) - Why did you switch to soft here? I didn't really see why.
01:16:90 - Reinsert.
01:20:54 (2,5) - Too loud.
01:31:90 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try soft whistles instead.
01:51:19 - Add a circle here.
01:51:62 - Add a circle here.
02:03:19 (5) - Whistle instead of clap.

You didn't follow the music in this next section and this tripped me up a little. I suggest you do this:



02:07:69 (1) - Reduce the volume on the finish.

[Hard]

Put a spinner somewhere?

01:20:54 (2,5) - Lower volume on these claps.
01:22:79 - Reinsert.
01:23:12 - Reinsert.
01:31:90 (1,2,3,4,5) - These work better as soft whistles in my opinion.
01:35:76 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - Pretty random soft/normal switching here I think. Needs a more stable pattern.
02:03:19 (5) - Whistle instead of clap.
02:07:69 (1) - Lower volume on the end slightly.

Modding star.

Mystearica wrote:

Set a preview point.

Disable countdown, too loud for this song.

[Normal]

00:25:69 (3) - Lower volume.
00:26:97 (2) - Lower volume.
00:30:40 (1,3) - Lower volume.
00:35:54 (3) - Lower volume.
00:46:26 (2) - Remove finish.
00:50:76 (5) - Why not add some notes after here and follow that nice piano sound? Feels like a sudden stop.
00:59:97 (2) - Why did you switch to soft here? I didn't really see why.
01:16:90 - Reinsert.
01:20:54 (2,5) - Too loud.
01:31:90 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try soft whistles instead.
01:51:19 - Add a circle here.
01:51:62 - Add a circle here.
02:03:19 (5) - Whistle instead of clap.

You didn't follow the music in this next section and this tripped me up a little. I suggest you do this:

[attachment=0:00bbf]screenshot290.jpg[/attachment:00bbf]

02:07:69 (1) - Reduce the volume on the finish.

Did everything except the picture. Since its normal, I wanna keep it a little bit easier.

[Hard]

Put a spinner somewhere?

01:20:54 (2,5) - Lower volume on these claps.
01:22:79 - Reinsert.
01:23:12 - Reinsert.
01:31:90 (1,2,3,4,5) - These work better as soft whistles in my opinion.
01:35:76 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - Pretty random soft/normal switching here I think. Needs a more stable pattern.
02:03:19 (5) - Whistle instead of clap.
02:07:69 (1) - Lower volume on the end slightly.

Did everything except spinner and the first suggestion

Modding star.

Thats some serious modding O_o Thank you and have a kudosu

My custom Taiko-only.

Download: Haru - Skygazer (Instrumental) (Mukku) [Paso-don's Taiko].osu

what a nice song. here's some suggestionssss (mostly hitsounds ._.")

hard
01:20:97 (4) - confusing spacing?
01:21:08 (5) - whistle on 4 instead?
01:26:97 (2) - whistle beginning
01:39:19 (5) - soft whistle
01:39:40 (6) - soft clap
01:39:83 (8) - soft whistle
01:46:26 (x) - note?
01:46:69 (x) - ^
01:50:54 (4) - finish
01:54:83 (2) - whistle
01:56:54 (8) - clap
01:56:97 (2,3) - whistle? dunno
02:00:72 (x) - note?
02:07:69 (1) - finish


normal
00:50:97 (2) - clap
00:51:83 (6) - ^
00:52:04 (7) - ^
00:52:26 (1) - finish
00:53:12 (2) - clap beginning
01:35:97 (x) - note
01:38:33 (1) - no new combo
01:42:83 (3) - clap
01:43:26 (4) - finish at end
01:47:97 (3) - clap beginning
01:52:69 (2) - clap
01:54:83 (1) - ^
02:01:69 (1) - ^
02:02:33 (3) - whistle

also, i think the volume of hitsounds for the beginning is too loud, if you want to lower a little.

star n_n.

Yes wrote:

what a nice song. here's some suggestionssss (mostly hitsounds ._.")

hard
01:20:97 (4) - confusing spacing? I guess I wanted a jump there.. Cant remember anymore tho.
01:21:08 (5) - whistle on 4 instead? Oh yeah.. It used to be in 4. Changed it accidentally while fixing other mods.
01:26:97 (2) - whistle beginning Finally it makes sense.
01:39:19 (5) - soft whistle I liked clap.. But I like this one also. I'll let it stay clap.
01:39:40 (6) - soft clap Goodie.
01:39:83 (8) - soft whistle ^
01:46:26 (x) - note? Okay
01:46:69 (x) - ^ I guess it makes sense T_T Why didnt I do it before
01:50:54 (4) - finish Refusal!
01:54:83 (2) - whistle It makes sense but nah.
01:56:54 (8) - clap Hmm.. Nah
01:56:97 (2,3) - whistle? dunno Goodie
02:00:72 (x) - note? Nice
02:07:69 (1) - finish Sure


normal
00:50:97 (2) - clap Good
00:51:83 (6) - ^ Good
00:52:04 (7) - ^ Refusal!
00:52:26 (1) - finish goodie
00:53:12 (2) - clap beginning Sure
01:35:97 (x) - note Great
01:38:33 (1) - no new combo Sure
01:42:83 (3) - clap Sure
01:43:26 (4) - finish at end Goodie
01:47:97 (3) - clap beginning Refusal!
01:52:69 (2) - clap Refusal!
01:54:83 (1) - ^ Refusal!
02:01:69 (1) - ^ Okayw
02:02:33 (3) - whistle Goodie

also, i think the volume of hitsounds for the beginning is too loud, if you want to lower a little.

star n_n.

Goodie, goodie! Kudosued :3

And thanks to Pasonia for the Taiko map. Thank goodness its not one of the uber hards.

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Download: Haru - Skygazer (Instrumental) (Mukku) [Yes].osu

[General Thoughts]

I cant find anything wrong in either diffs.. the following are moslty just suggestions. Very well made beatmap. Good job. ~Star.

[Normal]

01:44:12 (1,2,3,4) - Finish? the way the sound lowers here is perfect for it, and it sounds really nice to me
01:53:33 (4) - Clap ( start, and middle, not the last one )
02:00:19 (5) - ^

[Hard]

Very nice! I love this diff. But, you need to take a look at combo placements. It felt like you just placed them randomly at times. They don't follow the change of the song.

00:42:62 (7) - Confusing, but love it =p

Teara wrote:

[General Thoughts]

I cant find anything wrong in either diffs.. the following are moslty just suggestions. Very well made beatmap. Good job. ~Star.

[Normal]

01:44:12 (1,2,3,4) - Finish? the way the sound lowers here is perfect for it, and it sounds really nice to me Great
01:53:33 (4) - Clap ( start, and middle, not the last one ) Goodio
02:00:19 (5) - ^ ^

[Hard]

Very nice! I love this diff. But, you need to take a look at combo placements. It felt like you just placed them randomly at times. They don't follow the change of the song. Yes, I am not good at placing them :D

00:42:62 (7) - Confusing, but love it =p I guess I should put the reverse arrow visible.. If thats indeed the case I will also give kudosu to ykcarrot

Good job! Kudosu given

Awesome map.
do u know that Yes is harder then Hard? lower overall?

star~

edit

Yes's difff
00:30:406(2) - is this supposed to be aligned with (1)
01:06:192 - re insert break.
02:06:620 - add note here? maybe

Hard
01:06:406 - reinsert break
01:22:477 - ^

star.

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Mukku wrote:

ouranhshc wrote:

edit

Yes's difff
00:30:406(2) - is this supposed to be aligned with (1)
01:06:192 - re insert break.
02:06:620 - add note here? maybe

Hard
01:06:406 - reinsert break
01:22:477 - ^

star.

Okay.. Why do people keep telling me to reinsert the breaks? It doesnt help anything. After I do it, osu! doesnt even give me the option to save changes. In other words nothing changes.

haha. a kudosu whore probably? u_u"
didn't like any of your suggestions, sorry!

All suggestions no orders, mainly hitsounds.

Easy:

00:30:40 (1) - You really don't need a finish here, normal is fine but without reduced audio.
00:37:04 (3) - Remove the whistle it makes the move to normal hit sounds sound strange.
00:40:90 (6) - Finish?
00:43:47 (5) - Remove clap?
01:53:33 (4) - Remove clap?
01:54:83 (1,2) - In soft hitsounds?
02:03:19 (5) - Align with 02:02:76 (4) -

Yes:

00:26:12 (6) - Finish? [Reduce the sound or normal sounds good also]
00:27:83 (6) - Finish?
00:29:54 (7) - Finish?
00:31:69 (1) - Remove new combo and add it to 00:32:12 (2) -
00:33:40 (1) - Remove new combo and add it to 00:33:83 (2) -
00:34:26 (1) - Remove new combo
00:34:69 (1) - ^
00:35:12 (1) - ^
00:35:54 (1) - Add a new combo here
The same applied for the other new combos in this section.
00:37:26 (1,2,3) - Then put new combos on these instead of earlier.
00:44:76 (5,6,7) - Stack?
00:58:47 (3,4,5) - ^
01:05:97 - New note plus finish, just for completion
01:44:54 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - These look and play better stacked I think.
01:46:26 (5) - Remove finish?
01:47:12 (1) - Finish
01:47:54 (2) - New Combo?
02:09:40 (5) - Clap? The finish really put me off. - This works with the next section really well I think.
02:09:72 (7) - Clap?

Paso-don's Taiko:

00:26:33 - Add a beat, normal.[Red]
00:28:04 - Add a beat, clap. [Blue]
00:31:47 - Add a beat, normal. [Red]
01:05:97 (165) - Finish! [Double red]

Hard:

00:25:69 (4) - Odd clap compared to the other difficulties, but otherwise fine.
00:27:40 (4) - ^
00:29:12 (4) - ^
00:33:83 (4,5,6,7) - This feels and plays a little clustered, spacing?
00:41:33 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Confusing spacing. And it actually covers the start of the slider during gameplay which I think is illegal.
00:44:76 (5) - Remove finish?
00:55:04 (3) - Remove whistle?
00:56:76 (4) - Remove finish at the end?
01:27:83 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Confusing spacing.
01:37:47 (4,5,6) - Make the same as 01:36:62 (1,2,3) - ?
01:38:33 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Plays a bit clustered.
01:49:26 (8,9,10) - Could you repeat this pattern to the left or right instead of straight ahead, I think it will add variation.

What else can I say... I love this map so star!

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will mod this later, great map you have here though mukku, hope its ranked soon

star

cool map ! i love it ^^


star~

Hi~
[Normal]
Nice

[Hard]
Nice

[Yes]
Perfect

[Paso-don's Taiko]
Niice xD'

Very good map, this is perfect 8D

☼Star☼

Mukku wrote:

Shulin wrote:

All suggestions no orders, mainly hitsounds.

Yes: Wont touch here, since Yes told me he will be fixing his own diffi. I'm a girl!

00:26:12 (6) - Finish? [Reduce the sound or normal sounds good also]
00:27:83 (6) - Finish?
00:29:54 (7) - Finish?
00:31:69 (1) - Remove new combo and add it to 00:32:12 (2) -
00:33:40 (1) - Remove new combo and add it to 00:33:83 (2) -
00:34:26 (1) - Remove new combo
00:34:69 (1) - ^
00:35:12 (1) - ^
00:35:54 (1) - Add a new combo here
The same applied for the other new combos in this section.
00:37:26 (1,2,3) - Then put new combos on these instead of earlier.
00:44:76 (5,6,7) - Stack?
00:58:47 (3,4,5) - ^
01:05:97 - New note plus finish, just for completion
01:44:54 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - These look and play better stacked I think.
01:46:26 (5) - Remove finish?
01:47:12 (1) - Finish
01:47:54 (2) - New Combo?
02:09:40 (5) - Clap? The finish really put me off. - This works with the next section really well I think.
02:09:72 (7) - Clap?

alrighty fixed some of the things that Shulin mentioned n_n

sorry for the delay! also, Mukku. you can change the difficulty name to whatever you want xD you don't have to keep it [Yes]

Download: Haru - Skygazer (Instrumental) (Mukku) [Yes].osu

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Played all three difficulties, looked good. (I say three cause I can't play Taiko. ) My laziness lead me to not bother taking it into editor, you might have a few flaws, but the map plays well and I liked it. Timing seems spot on.

Blah, I took it into editor anyways. You're missing preview points on all diffs according to AIMod, tags and all that fun stuff seems to be in order.

Anyways, nice relaxing map and song, star'd.

Isnt the preview point the red line that I've indicated in the picture?

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Okay thanks :o Fixed

Except spacing mods...

~Normal~
Fine.

~Hard~
Fine.

~Yes~
Fine.


+Star

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Someone might berate you for only using half of the mp3 file. You might want to crop it down.

AIMod points this out for you, just to be sure.

vytalibus wrote:

Someone might berate you for only using half of the mp3 file. You might want to crop it down.

AIMod points this out for you, just to be sure.

Oh.. I just dont know how to do that. And Pasonias map is 3:49 anyway.

Mukku wrote:

vytalibus wrote:

Someone might berate you for only using half of the mp3 file. You might want to crop it down.

AIMod points this out for you, just to be sure.

Oh.. I just dont know how to do that. And Pasonias map is 3:49 anyway.

Use an audio-editing program to cut off the part of the music that is not used in the map. A program called "Audacity" can be easily found around the internet; you can use that program if you don't have any.

It's not the case of "that map goes as far as mine, anyway". It's more of the gameplay involved in this map.

vytalibus wrote:

Use an audio-editing program to cut off the part of the music that is not used in the map. A program called "Audacity" can be easily found around the internet; you can use that program if you don't have any.

It's not the case of "that map goes as far as mine, anyway". It's more of the gameplay involved in this map.

No, no, no! Pasonia made a taiko map for me.. It uses almost the whole mp3 so theres no point cutting the file.

update!

Download: Haru - Skygazer (Instrumental) (Mukku) [Yes].osu

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Here's my mod

Blue = Suggestion Red = Check this

[Normal]
No problems found

[Hard]
00:25:069 (4,4,4) - These quiet timing sections don't work very well for me Raise volume to ~30/40%?
01:05:012 (9) - Remove a reverse?
01:27:083 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Doesn't look very pretty in my eyes; can you make it straight, and align 4 and 9 directly in the middle by disabling grid snap?
01:29:076 (3) - Silence the end of this slider?
No problems found

[Yes]
01:21:019 (5) - Horizontal align with 4
01:22:004 (6) - ^ with 5
02:07:047 (10) - One grid to the left to align correctly
02:32:054 (3) - Maybe like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/263
03:17:076 (5) - curve out this slider; it doesn't look very good to me

Great job Starred

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asdf

Download: Haru - Skygazer (Instrumental) (Mukku) [Yes].osu

[mp3]
I suggest you cut a bit of the mp3....

[Normal]
Add the source and tags from other the other diffs

[Hard]
01:45:083 (5,6,7) - Add finish here
02:54:040 (1,2,3) - ^

[Taiko]
Not a big fan of the placement for some of the small 1/4 steams but well.... I'm not taiko player so i guess it's ok.

[Yes]
I guess it's ok.....

Good map.
I suggest you make a easy due to that this is a quite calm song though.....
*star*

[Normal]

00:40:049 (4,5,6) Finish
00:43:049 (4,5) Finish
00:54:192 Clap
00:57:620 Finish
01:27:406 Whistle at the start
01:27:834 Remove the whistle
01:28:049 Whistle at the start+whistle at the end
01:50:120 (1,3,5) Whistles
02:00:192 Remove the clap on the repeat?

[Hard]

00:42:620 The repeat of this slider is hidden, consider to move it in another position like in the picture:



00:49:906 Add a whistle instead
00:49:906 Spacing
00:50:334 Whistle
01:28:477 (7,8,9) Replace these hitcircles better:



01:59:549 (2,5,7) Whistles
02:01:049 Remove the whistle
02:01:263 Add a whistle
02:28:692 (2,5) Whistles
02:30:192 (2,3) Whistles

Paso-don's Taiko

It's ok

[Yes]

00:41:549 Try a whistle instead
00:43:906 Whistle
00:44:549 Add a whistle instead
00:45:192 As above
01:28:691 Remove thw whistle in the middle of the slider
02:52:263 New combo?

Starred. :3

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forgot to give a star ^^

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