Set a preview point.

Disable countdown, too loud for this song.

[Normal]

00:25:69 (3) - Lower volume.
00:26:97 (2) - Lower volume.
00:30:40 (1,3) - Lower volume.
00:35:54 (3) - Lower volume.
00:46:26 (2) - Remove finish.
00:50:76 (5) - Why not add some notes after here and follow that nice piano sound? Feels like a sudden stop.
00:59:97 (2) - Why did you switch to soft here? I didn't really see why.
01:16:90 - Reinsert.
01:20:54 (2,5) - Too loud.
01:31:90 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try soft whistles instead.
01:51:19 - Add a circle here.
01:51:62 - Add a circle here.
02:03:19 (5) - Whistle instead of clap.

You didn't follow the music in this next section and this tripped me up a little. I suggest you do this:



02:07:69 (1) - Reduce the volume on the finish.

[Hard]

Put a spinner somewhere?

01:20:54 (2,5) - Lower volume on these claps.
01:22:79 - Reinsert.
01:23:12 - Reinsert.
01:31:90 (1,2,3,4,5) - These work better as soft whistles in my opinion.
01:35:76 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - Pretty random soft/normal switching here I think. Needs a more stable pattern.
02:03:19 (5) - Whistle instead of clap.
02:07:69 (1) - Lower volume on the end slightly.

Modding star.

Mystearica wrote:

Set a preview point.

Disable countdown, too loud for this song.

[Normal]

00:25:69 (3) - Lower volume.
00:26:97 (2) - Lower volume.
00:30:40 (1,3) - Lower volume.
00:35:54 (3) - Lower volume.
00:46:26 (2) - Remove finish.
00:50:76 (5) - Why not add some notes after here and follow that nice piano sound? Feels like a sudden stop.
00:59:97 (2) - Why did you switch to soft here? I didn't really see why.
01:16:90 - Reinsert.
01:20:54 (2,5) - Too loud.
01:31:90 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try soft whistles instead.
01:51:19 - Add a circle here.
01:51:62 - Add a circle here.
02:03:19 (5) - Whistle instead of clap.

You didn't follow the music in this next section and this tripped me up a little. I suggest you do this:

[attachment=0:00bbf]screenshot290.jpg[/attachment:00bbf]

02:07:69 (1) - Reduce the volume on the finish.

Did everything except the picture. Since its normal, I wanna keep it a little bit easier.

[Hard]

Put a spinner somewhere?

01:20:54 (2,5) - Lower volume on these claps.
01:22:79 - Reinsert.
01:23:12 - Reinsert.
01:31:90 (1,2,3,4,5) - These work better as soft whistles in my opinion.
01:35:76 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - Pretty random soft/normal switching here I think. Needs a more stable pattern.
02:03:19 (5) - Whistle instead of clap.
02:07:69 (1) - Lower volume on the end slightly.

Did everything except spinner and the first suggestion

Modding star.

Thats some serious modding O_o Thank you and have a kudosu

My custom Taiko-only.

Download: Haru - Skygazer (Instrumental) (Mukku) [Paso-don's Taiko].osu

what a nice song. here's some suggestionssss (mostly hitsounds ._.")

hard
01:20:97 (4) - confusing spacing?
01:21:08 (5) - whistle on 4 instead?
01:26:97 (2) - whistle beginning
01:39:19 (5) - soft whistle
01:39:40 (6) - soft clap
01:39:83 (8) - soft whistle
01:46:26 (x) - note?
01:46:69 (x) - ^
01:50:54 (4) - finish
01:54:83 (2) - whistle
01:56:54 (8) - clap
01:56:97 (2,3) - whistle? dunno
02:00:72 (x) - note?
02:07:69 (1) - finish


normal
00:50:97 (2) - clap
00:51:83 (6) - ^
00:52:04 (7) - ^
00:52:26 (1) - finish
00:53:12 (2) - clap beginning
01:35:97 (x) - note
01:38:33 (1) - no new combo
01:42:83 (3) - clap
01:43:26 (4) - finish at end
01:47:97 (3) - clap beginning
01:52:69 (2) - clap
01:54:83 (1) - ^
02:01:69 (1) - ^
02:02:33 (3) - whistle

also, i think the volume of hitsounds for the beginning is too loud, if you want to lower a little.

star n_n.

Yes wrote:

what a nice song. here's some suggestionssss (mostly hitsounds ._.")

hard
01:20:97 (4) - confusing spacing? I guess I wanted a jump there.. Cant remember anymore tho.
01:21:08 (5) - whistle on 4 instead? Oh yeah.. It used to be in 4. Changed it accidentally while fixing other mods.
01:26:97 (2) - whistle beginning Finally it makes sense.
01:39:19 (5) - soft whistle I liked clap.. But I like this one also. I'll let it stay clap.
01:39:40 (6) - soft clap Goodie.
01:39:83 (8) - soft whistle ^
01:46:26 (x) - note? Okay
01:46:69 (x) - ^ I guess it makes sense T_T Why didnt I do it before
01:50:54 (4) - finish Refusal!
01:54:83 (2) - whistle It makes sense but nah.
01:56:54 (8) - clap Hmm.. Nah
01:56:97 (2,3) - whistle? dunno Goodie
02:00:72 (x) - note? Nice
02:07:69 (1) - finish Sure


normal
00:50:97 (2) - clap Good
00:51:83 (6) - ^ Good
00:52:04 (7) - ^ Refusal!
00:52:26 (1) - finish goodie
00:53:12 (2) - clap beginning Sure
01:35:97 (x) - note Great
01:38:33 (1) - no new combo Sure
01:42:83 (3) - clap Sure
01:43:26 (4) - finish at end Goodie
01:47:97 (3) - clap beginning Refusal!
01:52:69 (2) - clap Refusal!
01:54:83 (1) - ^ Refusal!
02:01:69 (1) - ^ Okayw
02:02:33 (3) - whistle Goodie

also, i think the volume of hitsounds for the beginning is too loud, if you want to lower a little.

star n_n.

Goodie, goodie! Kudosued :3

And thanks to Pasonia for the Taiko map. Thank goodness its not one of the uber hards.

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Download: Haru - Skygazer (Instrumental) (Mukku) [Yes].osu

[General Thoughts]

I cant find anything wrong in either diffs.. the following are moslty just suggestions. Very well made beatmap. Good job. ~Star.

[Normal]

01:44:12 (1,2,3,4) - Finish? the way the sound lowers here is perfect for it, and it sounds really nice to me
01:53:33 (4) - Clap ( start, and middle, not the last one )
02:00:19 (5) - ^

[Hard]

Very nice! I love this diff. But, you need to take a look at combo placements. It felt like you just placed them randomly at times. They don't follow the change of the song.

00:42:62 (7) - Confusing, but love it =p

Teara wrote:

[General Thoughts]

I cant find anything wrong in either diffs.. the following are moslty just suggestions. Very well made beatmap. Good job. ~Star.

[Normal]

01:44:12 (1,2,3,4) - Finish? the way the sound lowers here is perfect for it, and it sounds really nice to me Great
01:53:33 (4) - Clap ( start, and middle, not the last one ) Goodio
02:00:19 (5) - ^ ^

[Hard]

Very nice! I love this diff. But, you need to take a look at combo placements. It felt like you just placed them randomly at times. They don't follow the change of the song. Yes, I am not good at placing them :D

00:42:62 (7) - Confusing, but love it =p I guess I should put the reverse arrow visible.. If thats indeed the case I will also give kudosu to ykcarrot

Good job! Kudosu given

Awesome map.
do u know that Yes is harder then Hard? lower overall?

star~

edit

Yes's difff
00:30:406(2) - is this supposed to be aligned with (1)
01:06:192 - re insert break.
02:06:620 - add note here? maybe

Hard
01:06:406 - reinsert break
01:22:477 - ^

star.

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Mukku wrote:

ouranhshc wrote:

edit

Yes's difff
00:30:406(2) - is this supposed to be aligned with (1)
01:06:192 - re insert break.
02:06:620 - add note here? maybe

Hard
01:06:406 - reinsert break
01:22:477 - ^

star.

Okay.. Why do people keep telling me to reinsert the breaks? It doesnt help anything. After I do it, osu! doesnt even give me the option to save changes. In other words nothing changes.

haha. a kudosu whore probably? u_u"
didn't like any of your suggestions, sorry!

All suggestions no orders, mainly hitsounds.

Easy:

00:30:40 (1) - You really don't need a finish here, normal is fine but without reduced audio.
00:37:04 (3) - Remove the whistle it makes the move to normal hit sounds sound strange.
00:40:90 (6) - Finish?
00:43:47 (5) - Remove clap?
01:53:33 (4) - Remove clap?
01:54:83 (1,2) - In soft hitsounds?
02:03:19 (5) - Align with 02:02:76 (4) -

Yes:

00:26:12 (6) - Finish? [Reduce the sound or normal sounds good also]
00:27:83 (6) - Finish?
00:29:54 (7) - Finish?
00:31:69 (1) - Remove new combo and add it to 00:32:12 (2) -
00:33:40 (1) - Remove new combo and add it to 00:33:83 (2) -
00:34:26 (1) - Remove new combo
00:34:69 (1) - ^
00:35:12 (1) - ^
00:35:54 (1) - Add a new combo here
The same applied for the other new combos in this section.
00:37:26 (1,2,3) - Then put new combos on these instead of earlier.
00:44:76 (5,6,7) - Stack?
00:58:47 (3,4,5) - ^
01:05:97 - New note plus finish, just for completion
01:44:54 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - These look and play better stacked I think.
01:46:26 (5) - Remove finish?
01:47:12 (1) - Finish
01:47:54 (2) - New Combo?
02:09:40 (5) - Clap? The finish really put me off. - This works with the next section really well I think.
02:09:72 (7) - Clap?

Paso-don's Taiko:

00:26:33 - Add a beat, normal.[Red]
00:28:04 - Add a beat, clap. [Blue]
00:31:47 - Add a beat, normal. [Red]
01:05:97 (165) - Finish! [Double red]

Hard:

00:25:69 (4) - Odd clap compared to the other difficulties, but otherwise fine.
00:27:40 (4) - ^
00:29:12 (4) - ^
00:33:83 (4,5,6,7) - This feels and plays a little clustered, spacing?
00:41:33 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Confusing spacing. And it actually covers the start of the slider during gameplay which I think is illegal.
00:44:76 (5) - Remove finish?
00:55:04 (3) - Remove whistle?
00:56:76 (4) - Remove finish at the end?
01:27:83 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Confusing spacing.
01:37:47 (4,5,6) - Make the same as 01:36:62 (1,2,3) - ?
01:38:33 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Plays a bit clustered.
01:49:26 (8,9,10) - Could you repeat this pattern to the left or right instead of straight ahead, I think it will add variation.

What else can I say... I love this map so star!

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will mod this later, great map you have here though mukku, hope its ranked soon

star

cool map ! i love it ^^


star~

Hi~
[Normal]
Nice

[Hard]
Nice

[Yes]
Perfect

[Paso-don's Taiko]
Niice xD'

Very good map, this is perfect 8D

☼Star☼

Mukku wrote:

Shulin wrote:

All suggestions no orders, mainly hitsounds.

Yes: Wont touch here, since Yes told me he will be fixing his own diffi. I'm a girl!

00:26:12 (6) - Finish? [Reduce the sound or normal sounds good also]
00:27:83 (6) - Finish?
00:29:54 (7) - Finish?
00:31:69 (1) - Remove new combo and add it to 00:32:12 (2) -
00:33:40 (1) - Remove new combo and add it to 00:33:83 (2) -
00:34:26 (1) - Remove new combo
00:34:69 (1) - ^
00:35:12 (1) - ^
00:35:54 (1) - Add a new combo here
The same applied for the other new combos in this section.
00:37:26 (1,2,3) - Then put new combos on these instead of earlier.
00:44:76 (5,6,7) - Stack?
00:58:47 (3,4,5) - ^
01:05:97 - New note plus finish, just for completion
01:44:54 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - These look and play better stacked I think.
01:46:26 (5) - Remove finish?
01:47:12 (1) - Finish
01:47:54 (2) - New Combo?
02:09:40 (5) - Clap? The finish really put me off. - This works with the next section really well I think.
02:09:72 (7) - Clap?

alrighty fixed some of the things that Shulin mentioned n_n

sorry for the delay! also, Mukku. you can change the difficulty name to whatever you want xD you don't have to keep it [Yes]

Download: Haru - Skygazer (Instrumental) (Mukku) [Yes].osu

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Played all three difficulties, looked good. (I say three cause I can't play Taiko. ) My laziness lead me to not bother taking it into editor, you might have a few flaws, but the map plays well and I liked it. Timing seems spot on.

Blah, I took it into editor anyways. You're missing preview points on all diffs according to AIMod, tags and all that fun stuff seems to be in order.

Anyways, nice relaxing map and song, star'd.

Isnt the preview point the red line that I've indicated in the picture?

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Okay thanks :o Fixed

Except spacing mods...

~Normal~
Fine.

~Hard~
Fine.

~Yes~
Fine.


+Star

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Someone might berate you for only using half of the mp3 file. You might want to crop it down.

AIMod points this out for you, just to be sure.

vytalibus wrote:

Someone might berate you for only using half of the mp3 file. You might want to crop it down.

AIMod points this out for you, just to be sure.

Oh.. I just dont know how to do that. And Pasonias map is 3:49 anyway.

Mukku wrote:

vytalibus wrote:

Someone might berate you for only using half of the mp3 file. You might want to crop it down.

AIMod points this out for you, just to be sure.

Oh.. I just dont know how to do that. And Pasonias map is 3:49 anyway.

Use an audio-editing program to cut off the part of the music that is not used in the map. A program called "Audacity" can be easily found around the internet; you can use that program if you don't have any.

It's not the case of "that map goes as far as mine, anyway". It's more of the gameplay involved in this map.

vytalibus wrote:

Use an audio-editing program to cut off the part of the music that is not used in the map. A program called "Audacity" can be easily found around the internet; you can use that program if you don't have any.

It's not the case of "that map goes as far as mine, anyway". It's more of the gameplay involved in this map.

No, no, no! Pasonia made a taiko map for me.. It uses almost the whole mp3 so theres no point cutting the file.

update!

Download: Haru - Skygazer (Instrumental) (Mukku) [Yes].osu

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Here's my mod

Blue = Suggestion Red = Check this

[Normal]
No problems found

[Hard]
00:25:069 (4,4,4) - These quiet timing sections don't work very well for me Raise volume to ~30/40%?
01:05:012 (9) - Remove a reverse?
01:27:083 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Doesn't look very pretty in my eyes; can you make it straight, and align 4 and 9 directly in the middle by disabling grid snap?
01:29:076 (3) - Silence the end of this slider?
No problems found

[Yes]
01:21:019 (5) - Horizontal align with 4
01:22:004 (6) - ^ with 5
02:07:047 (10) - One grid to the left to align correctly
02:32:054 (3) - Maybe like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/263
03:17:076 (5) - curve out this slider; it doesn't look very good to me

Great job Starred

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asdf

Download: Haru - Skygazer (Instrumental) (Mukku) [Yes].osu

[mp3]
I suggest you cut a bit of the mp3....

[Normal]
Add the source and tags from other the other diffs

[Hard]
01:45:083 (5,6,7) - Add finish here
02:54:040 (1,2,3) - ^

[Taiko]
Not a big fan of the placement for some of the small 1/4 steams but well.... I'm not taiko player so i guess it's ok.

[Yes]
I guess it's ok.....

Good map.
I suggest you make a easy due to that this is a quite calm song though.....
*star*

[Normal]

00:40:049 (4,5,6) Finish
00:43:049 (4,5) Finish
00:54:192 Clap
00:57:620 Finish
01:27:406 Whistle at the start
01:27:834 Remove the whistle
01:28:049 Whistle at the start+whistle at the end
01:50:120 (1,3,5) Whistles
02:00:192 Remove the clap on the repeat?

[Hard]

00:42:620 The repeat of this slider is hidden, consider to move it in another position like in the picture:



00:49:906 Add a whistle instead
00:49:906 Spacing
00:50:334 Whistle
01:28:477 (7,8,9) Replace these hitcircles better:



01:59:549 (2,5,7) Whistles
02:01:049 Remove the whistle
02:01:263 Add a whistle
02:28:692 (2,5) Whistles
02:30:192 (2,3) Whistles

Paso-don's Taiko

It's ok

[Yes]

00:41:549 Try a whistle instead
00:43:906 Whistle
00:44:549 Add a whistle instead
00:45:192 As above
01:28:691 Remove thw whistle in the middle of the slider
02:52:263 New combo?

Starred. :3

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forgot to give a star ^^

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Download: Haru - Skygazer (Instrumental) (Mukku) [Yes].osu

Offset should be 24852

Aside from that I can see no pressing problems in anything.

Ensure everything is resnapped properly after the offset change. I'm hesitant to bubble this since I've never modded taiko before, but I will give you a star this time at least.

Offset: 24842
I dunno, offset sounds a tad late to me but perhaps it's the rust.

[Hard]
01:20:056 (3,4) - Space these closer or make (4) a new combo.

[Yes]
00:58:092 (2) - Space equally between (1) and (3).

DawnII wrote:

Offset: 24842 I compared this with the current one. I think your suggestion is a tad early :O I'll stick with Ephemeral's suggestion
I dunno, offset sounds a tad late to me but perhaps it's the rust.

[Hard]
01:20:056 (3,4) - Space these closer or make (4) a new combo. Done

[Yes]
00:58:092 (2) - Space equally between (1) and (3). Very fixed.

Thank thee.

No issues on Taiko diffs :3
But kiai time...
Never mind for that :3

Here's my star XD

e-Edit: Awarded kudosu for verifying Taiko difficulty on request from myself

Looks ready to me. Verified the taiko difficulty with arken's help. Seems about right for a bubble.

Ranked

WOWOW rank おめでとう。

arsrun wrote:

WOWOW rank おめでとう。

ありがとう。 <- did I do it right?

just a note here,
at the Yes(Mikku) difficulty, setting the offset to -10 stopped me from getting 100 hits