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thanks for your mod Squirrel Squirrel wrote:
sorry, I'm sooo slow. ;o;
mod from queue!
[General][Easy]
- I didn't check (or rather was too lazy to calculate x: ..) but is your background image 16:9 or 4:3 ratio?
if not, please resize it accordingly!- I had the feeling the timing isn't accurate 100%, so maybe find someone to check it
I suck at timing myself, so I can't help with that, sorry. orz
hmmh, this looks nice already!
this is gonna get a bit nazi I think. x:
so all below is just suggestions![Normal]
- 00:02:228 (4) - might match even better with 00:03:256 (5) if you move the middle anchor down/left one grid done
- 00:03:256 (5) - rotate by 30° (selection centre), the movement from 4 to 5 feels nicer then imo
you could do the same then with 00:04:285 (6)!- 00:07:371 (2) - don't break DS in Easy/Normal diffs please. >< done
it's too hard to read for beginners andit's just an example, there are billions of alternatives c:- 00:08:742 (4) - rotate by -20° (selection centre)? done
- 00:10:114 (6) - move to 412|200 for perfect triangle with 4+5
- 00:14:228 (4,5) - why not use the same shape for them? done
- 00:19:028 (3) - move middle anchor one grid to the right done
- 00:19:714 (4,5) - move slider's end closer to circle
- 00:21:428 (7) - move slider's end a tiiiny bit further from circle
also the distance to 00:22:456 (8) is too far- 00:23:314 (1) - might be better to not switch between white and red ticks,
it's incredible hard to read cause it's a different tapping rhythm
(and this is the easiest diff after all. >: )
and better don't break DS!
same here - 00:48:342 (4,1) and here - 01:23:656 (3)!
btw, it might be better to not stack 00:47:828 (3,4), it's too hard to read- 00:40:628 (5,6) - movement here doesn't feel nice, maybe you can align 6 to 5?
- 00:43:028 - missing an object here, there is a loooud beat, I'd expect a circle
additionally the purple combo is too long anyway (max should be 8 I think), so you could start a new here- cause of the two above - (matched 6 with 5, added a circle on 5's end at 43:028 and placed the next slider at 6's reverse)
don't wanna mess with your style tho, up to you if you wanna change it :3- 00:47:485 (2) - shorten distnace to previous object a bit
- 01:03:256 (3) - movement to 4 feels kinda weird, move to 444|260 maybe?
or let 4 start further left, around 412|104?- 01:12:514 (1) - placing circles in the centre of the playfield is confusing (imo!)
cause the approach circle has the same shape as the spinner, they might overlook it
up to you if you wanna place it somewhere else- 01:15:942 (6,7,1) - movement might be better if you place 7 and 1 further left/down
[Hard]
- 00:03:256 (1) - include it in the circle the previous object create?
(move to 272|196)- 00:09:428 (6) - movement here and at some other parts would feel nicer if reversed. .o.
but it's kinda your style.. meh. >< (not sayin your style is bad or anything, personally I just prefer smoother movement!)- 00:12:856 (3) - feels a bit weird, plus the next pbjects starts on a white tick so this should end on a white tick as well imo
there are some more parts with the red/white tick stuff, might wanna pay attention to thatBTWit's only hard to read if you leave a gap between reds/whites like here:
it's fine if the 2nd objects follows directly after like here:- 00:33:085 (6) - keep DS consistent! done
- 00:42:685 (3) - place middle anchor closer to 2's end
- 00:46:456 (1,2) - I guess a "correct" overlap is preferable
- 01:12:514 (1) - same as in Easy (circle after spinner) Nope e.e
- 01:23:656 (3) - place differently maybe, might be confusing done
there's almost nothing in this diff, only some minor pixel things.. O:
- 00:01:714 (6) - middle anchor a bit further away done
same here - 00:19:371 (6) done- 00:03:256 (10) - new combo should start here I think, delete NC at next object then done
- 00:05:656 (1) - use same shape as for 2+3 done
- 00:27:599 (2) - align better to 4
overall a really nice mapset, good luck to you! [=
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eLtigreXXx wrote:
mod request in Shinsei mapuu team queue
hard
00:03:256 (10) - no seria el nuevo combo aquí ? hecho
easy
00:05:999 (1,2) - vas a tener que arreglar el espacio entre estas notas no se puede tener diferente y esque esta en el mismo combo
00:24:171 (2) - mover a x372 y224
01:08:056 (2) - curva a este slider ?
normal
00:33:085 (6) - creo que no se debe de tapar un reverse arrow hecho
also thanks for your mod eLtigreX
fixed & Updated.kamisamaaa wrote:
btw, I think offset should be 500 changed