goodbye wrote:

[general]
any tags?

[Luna]

现在用红线变速unrankable了

00:45:055 (8) - 索性放的更远一点啊
01:37:150 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - 间距?
02:20:325 (2,3,4,5,6) - 这形状好扁
02:48:298 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 间距

[Hard]
01:01:677 (3,6) - 同一part间距不同?

[Normal]
降星吧至少3.25以下

_lolipop wrote:

wa-大cj

Put Touhou in Source and remove it from Tags.
A few more tags: Affect a mind Clonesoldier
And remove the link from ID3tags
[Hard]
01:45:668 (2,3) - not snapped
[Lunatic]
01:45:668 (1,2,3,1,2) - not snapped
哭了不知道应该mod什么了 hard什么的其实只要998降一格hp就能4.5星了

1. Audio Lead in: 982...把他調到1000?以免給bat nazi.
2. Source: 把touhou從tags移除,然後移到source這裡,現在touhou song的map大多數都是這樣處理.
3. 整體map完成度不到80% ,不能rank...可能要把mp3裁減一下,或這把map做長一點

1. Difficulty setting
   (I suggest the difficulty setting for better gameplay.)
   
   1. AR,OD各 -1來平衡整體難度
2. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:10:596 (x) - 不在這裡加個音麼?踏在鼓點上不加note有點浪費...如果最後加了的話就順便加上clap把.
   2. 00:23:569 (x) - ^同
   3. 00:32:488 (3,4) - 可以的話啦低一點把,都快碰到HP bar了,這也是比較敏感的位置,建議修改
      
      ya

      
   4. 01:17:488 (2,3) - 這個stack會誤導新手,因為這個Normal diff是這個mapset得最低難度,所以新手都集中在這裡,我看你前面的部分都沒這種1/2疊,他們可能會誤認成1/1,如果這個unstack的話應該會好一點
   5. 01:55:596 (x) - 在這裡放break有一點不合適,因為這裡並沒有任何停頓的效果,如這這裡換spinner的話感覺也是一個不錯的選擇
   6. 02:26:407 (1,2,3) - 這個pattern是不錯啦,但是在低難度的話就沒顯示出他的效果,煩而,因為是slider-note-slider的方面是逆向的,所以新手更難辨認.
3. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 02:13:434 (2) - slider的開頭部分finish?

1. Issue/unrankable stuff
   (Something bad in gameplay or unrankable staff,you should take a look on it.)
   
   1. (unrankable) 有2歌unsnap notes,請fix掉
      
   2. 01:06:947 (x) - (unrabkable) 到現在,所有的0% volume都是unrankable的..其實調到5%也行啊,反正聽起來沒差
2. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:52:353 (x) - 為甚麼要在這裡放spinner呢?而且這slider不長,打起來比較怪,我建議map掉這裡就好
   2. 00:53:974 (1,1,1) - 這幾個new combo沒啥必要把,感覺在00:53:974 - 這裡加個就行了,後面的(1.1)- 就可以刪掉.
   3. 00:56:407 (1,2,3) - (design) 不把(3)- 包圍著 note (2)- 嗎?這樣的話看起來會好看多阿
      
      wwww

      
   4. 01:38:163 (x) - 在這裡加個note?相比整體來說,這裡確實比較空,沒了Hard的感覺.
   5. 01:55:596 (x) - 在這裡放break有一點不合適,因為這裡並沒有任何停頓的效果,如這這裡換spinner的話感覺也是一個不錯的選擇
   6. 02:21:542 (x) - spinner DDDD:
   7. 02:45:866 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 其實這個stream沒有甚麼意義阿,它和音樂不fit,聽起來也怪怪的,感覺普通的1/1,1/2 就行了
3. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:23:974 (1) - 在slider的開頭試加個finish?感覺還不錯
   2. 01:38:974 (1) - 你在這裡漏了個clap?是的話就加上把,不然clap pattern就不對了

1. Issue/unrankable stuff
   (Something bad in gameplay or unrankable staff,you should take a look on it.)
   
   1. (unrankable) 同樣,有unsnap notes.
   2. 01:45:461 (x) - (unrankable) 現在紅線變速是unrankable,不能這樣做了,一定要修的.
2. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:18:299 (3,4,5) - 這個不疊的話會好讀很多 T_T 麻,說說而已,不改也可以
   2. 00:30:258 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - 真心的,1/4snap再加上1/3 snap 真的好難打,我建議把那1/3 notes改成slider,這樣會比較順手
   3. 00:53:974 (3,1,1) - 在(3)- 加上new combo然後把後面的(1.1)- 的nc刪掉,原因同hard
   4. 01:38:163 (x) - 在這裡加個note?相比整體來說,這裡確實比較空,在insane裡面的節奏突然停了一下的話就不帶勁了 = .=
3. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 01:38:974 (1) - 我覺得這裡你可以考慮下finish/clap.或這是你漏了clap同hard

Beren wrote:

好古老的坑/

[General]
删除.osb

[Normal]
slider tick rate好像最小要1
音效同Lunatic
00:15:075 (2) - 下来点？
00:15:886 (3) - 间距
打开AiMod看看吧:3 有些间距有问题

[Hard]
音效同Lunatic
00:06:863 (5,6) - 没叠好
00:45:072 (8) - 多一来回?
00:59:261 (6) - 加note?
01:44:667 (2,3) - 改了间距加NC?


[Lunatic]
我觉得在高潮多放finish比较好:3
00:44:264 (6) - ^
00:47:508 (2) - ^
00:50:751 (7) - ^这样下去
02:49:129 (1) - 音量减小?

加油

TTTTTTTTTTTT wrote:

【Normal】
Slidertick:2
Why you use 100% soundvolume?It's too loud.80% is better.
02:28:048 (3) - Remove NC
[Hard]
Slidertick:2
[Insane]
00:01:292 (1) - change it to[attachment=0:e92cc]nazi.jpg[/attachment:e92cc]