Awesome~
Thanks for checkin'. makes up for my poor timing recheckLybydose wrote:
Timing:
I checked EVERYTHING except the parts are entirely breaks. If it's not mentioned here, it's fine already.
00:27:008 - Starts out slightly late, but then gets really early. Try 163.70 BPM // 27,000 Offset I see. That one sounds like it goes a little late though, so I'll use 163.75 BPM instead
01:34:803 - minus 10ms here Done
07:19:685 - slightly late, maybe -5 or -7 or so I'll go with -6
08:53:934 - the end of this section is quite a bit off. Try 163.30 BPM. Fixed
11:24:901 - 7/4 time signature Last time I fiddled with the timing I don't think this was available, soooo done.
11:45:256 - same ^
12:06:763 - ^ ^
12:14:711 - ^ ^
12:17:317 - guess what ^
12:37:457 - set offset to 757,457 Done
12:47:457 - add a section here: 162 BPM // 767,457 Offset Done
12:48:938 - delete the section here Done
13:00:790 - this offset should be 780,790 (think this is no change, but I'm not 100% sure on what I edited here) Yeah, that's the one It's already got.
14:13:314 - minus 10ms. I think. I constantly get early hits in test mode here, but it's hard to confirm in the editor by listening. I managed to play it fine, but ehh, it does feel a little late, so I'll go with that.
15:24:886 - change the section here to 148.00 BPM // 924,658 Offset... Oh dear. Done (I guess the reason I neglected it was because I didn't map there, but eww)
15:36:020 - ...then delete the timing section here... ...but yeah, haven't got a reason for this being so off, apart from maybe blaming my timing skill back then (My rechecks must've been poor too)
15:37:640 - ...and here. Done
18:10:253 - +8ms Sounds good to me
18:46:243 - I decreased the offset here. I'm not sure by how much, but I set it to 1,126,243 Sounds a tiny touch early to me. I'll use 1,126,245
22:20:897 - Just make it 144 BPM flat Done
22:44:038 - Add a section here with offset 1,364,038 (same 144 bpm), and then add another section on the next note if you'd like the white ticks to line up again. Done both
Other small things I noticed while testing:
05:09:064 (2,3,4) - stacking here is kind of confusing I'll remove (3), since it sounds better without it anyway, and plays smoother. done the same with similar parts in this section.
07:32:306 (5,6,7,8,1) - sounds a lot better if you do this instead: http://puu.sh/1PJV Yeah. Done
07:36:697 (4,5,6,7,1) - same Changed the rhythm, but to 1/2's since that's how the rhythm went here to my ears.
16:11:948 (1) - slider feels like it ends early, and sounds better to me if extended to the white tick. Perhaps, but I dunno. I quite like how it leads on somewhat (and I'm not just saying that because it's symmetrical, heh).
16:08:294 (3) - finish
16:08:871 (6) - finish at start
16:14:448 (3) - ^
16:15:025 (5) - ^
You've got finishes at those parts when this song section repeats a 2nd time there anyway.
(I missed them out because I wanted a buildup in the second repeat. The song itself builds up there so I did the same with hitsounds)
Also would have liked to see some normal whistles in some spots, especially in Illusionary Funeral and Border of Life, but whatever.
(I'm not a fan of normal whistles when the planets aren't aligned )
...also fix that song title problem someone pointed out above.
(Done)
Lybydose wrote:
Ok, quick nazi things I missed the first time:
02:28:156 (2,3) - stack these better Done
12:47:457 (1,2) - The edited timing here made these into soft hits instead of normal. Did you forget to change them back? Oh dear. Fixed
13:11:822 - move the timing section ahead two white ticks to 13:12:572 so that the metronome lines up properly. Alternatively, you could just add a new section two ticks forward if you really want the spinner snapped to the new timing. It's only like 4ms difference though. Doesn't fuss me much, but done (Moved it forward)
14:12:853 - the storyboard background moves slightly down and to the right just before the transition. Was that intentional? Just an artefact from my old storyboarding skills. I'll remove that one (even though I didn't notice it. heh)
18:46:245 - 3/4 time signature Done
19:19:733 - I'm pretty sure it goes back to 4/4 here. I can't really tell Actually, 7/4 seems to fit in. I think I'll go with that
23:00:410 - the strong note is on the next white tick, so you could simply add a timing section at 23:00:799 to line that up. Dooone
Also you should manually move it back to Pending after you're finished so I know there's nothing else you want to change Yeah, that one slipped my mind
I do agree about changing that, doesn't look too nice while playing at the momentErufenRito wrote:
Hi there, just want to say about one thing that i found out when i played this map:
08:10:844 (1) - This is offscreen.
loveFantasy wrote:
tags: "zun" isn't needed in tags?
tags:sleepess night--> sleepless night
James2250 wrote:
Titles:
-For the 14th song are you sure the translation isn't meant to be "Sleepless Night of the Eastern Country" instead of "Sleepless Night in the Eastern Country". Not a major difference I know but still
ThanksJames2250 wrote:
I do agree about changing that, doesn't look too nice while playing at the moment jigged it around a bit. Should be fine nowErufenRito wrote:
Hi there, just want to say about one thing that i found out when i played this map:
08:10:844 (1) - This is offscreen.
Titles:
-For the 14th song are you sure the translation isn't meant to be "Sleepless Night of the Eastern Country" instead of "Sleepless Night in the Eastern Country". Not a major difference I know but still Fixed
Timing:
I don't know too much about big timing projects like this but some things I thought about while going through, feel free to disagree with any of them. I am going to assume the offsets for the timing sections you already have are pretty close (they sound like it).
-I know it is during a break but add a 3/4 timing section at 04:05:175? Then another one at 04:18:508 to go back to 4/4 Yeah
-Not sure about the timing at 04:42:212, might need a 3/4 section around there Yeah
-The metronome at 07:06:112 seems off right now, but I think that is just me (same with the one at 07:18:189) It sounds fine to me. Seemed odd at first but it sounded right the second time around.
-Add another timing section at 09:22:826 with 4/4 (seems to fit more than 3/4) Agreed
-Add another timing section at 19:38:570 with 4/4 Yeah
-Add a Metronome reset at 21:54:230 Done
-I don't really get the last timing section at 24:35:706 but if you are sure it is meant to be like that~ It was an attempt to get the start of that section. But ehh, it's not used and it's bad sooo I'll remove that
Marathon:
00:44:221 (1) - remove new combo Done
01:47:065 (7,8) - stacking on purpose? (not that it is a big deal) Not intentional. Fixed
04:41:657 (1) - remove new combo fixed ~
07:58:459 (3,1) - stack these? Not worth stacking those I don't think. But (3, 1) in the yellow combo are not symmetical, so budge (3) over to fix
16:13:102 (1) - remove new combo? Yeah. Done
22:22:980 (7,8,9,10) - kind of odd spacing here Didn't bother me much while playing, but I see what you mean. Done
22:36:313 (2,3,4,5) - ^ Fixed
Not much to find in the maps, everything looks pretty solid there. Nicely done
While you are looking through the maps you might as well fix the minor stuff mentioned earlier in the thread tooI thought I fixed that one earlier, ugh. FixedloveFantasy wrote:
tags: "zun" isn't needed in tags?
tags:sleepess night--> sleepless night