lZenxl wrote:

From Zenx' Queue o/

Storyboard check

00:00:855 - The transition here when black.jpg appears is very sudden, and rough I suggest to extend the start of black.jpg to fixed
00:00:000　The other storyboard seems fine except that the lyric's edges seem a bit rough.keep

Example:

I added Outer Glow using photoshop to the bottom lyrics - it creates a better transition than the top lyrics
- If you know photoshop add this effect yourself, if not just PM me and I'll send the images to replace the current one



Effect I used on photoshop ( Color : #57c0ff ):


Very smooth and nice Storyboard overall o/

Good Luck!

Anchor wrote:

こんにちは
tellertheworldさんの命令で来ました。(｀･ω･´)ゞ

RED You must fix.
BLUE You should fix.
GREEN Fix only if you like.

[Hard]
02:16:427 -　note追加
すみません！3つの方がいいと思うのでNo Change!
02:15:998 (1,2,3,4) - もし↑のnoteを追加したらこの四つのnoteをx 256 y 136ぐらいへ移動
前者を断ったため、こちらも

[Extra]
02:09:712 (1) - ちょっと曲がってみませんか? こんな感じで
Accepted
02:10:855 (1) - ^
Accepted
02:14:284 (1) - ^
Accepted

keeeeeeko wrote:

IRCのMOD！

01:16 keeeeeeko: hi
01:17 keeeeeeko: ちょっとだけThrove keysのmodしました
01:17 keeeeeeko: フォーラムに書くほどの量無いから時間ある時にIRCでおｋ？
01:17 Alternative: いいゾ
01:17 Alternative: てかそっち時間あるならそれで
01:18 keeeeeeko: 今やっておｋってこと？
01:18 Alternative: いいよぉ
01:18 keeeeeeko: いーじー
01:19 keeeeeeko: 00:13:141 (3) - NC
01:19 keeeeeeko: 00:22:284 (3) - ^
01:19 keeeeeeko: 01:23:998 (3) - ^
01:20 keeeeeeko: 01:31:427 (2) - お好みでここにNC入れていいかも
01:20 Alternative: そこは入れない方向で
01:21 keeeeeeko: 02:24:570 (3) - ここも入れていいかなと思った
01:22 keeeeeeko: 01:53:141 (1) - remove NC?
01:22 keeeeeeko: removeしたら01:54:284 (2) - NC
01:22 Alternative: おけ
01:23 keeeeeeko: 02:22:855 (1) - removeNC
01:23 keeeeeeko: したらまたその後ろ
01:23 keeeeeeko: 配置とかは見てない(言うことなかった)
01:23 Alternative: 最後のNCは変えない方向で
01:23 keeeeeeko: のーまる
01:24 keeeeeeko: おｋ
01:24 keeeeeeko: 1箇所だけ
01:24 keeeeeeko: 00:37:712 (5) - add clap
01:24 Alternative: あ、忘れてたなここ
01:24 keeeeeeko: はーど
01:25 keeeeeeko: 00:55:284 (1) - 頭にadd clap
01:25 keeeeeeko: 01:51:998 (3) - ctrl+gして
01:25 keeeeeeko: 01:52:427 (4) - を01:51:855 (2) - にスタックしてもいいかも
01:26 keeeeeeko: 02:27:569 (4) - whistleの場所間違い?
01:27 keeeeeeko: Exは1箇所しか無いけど
01:27 keeeeeeko: Gay兄貴のmodで訂正されたとこだった
01:27 keeeeeeko: から終わりです
01:28 Alternative: オウケイ

02:06 Alternative: 00:19:998 (1) - 
02:08 Alternative: 00:19:998 - 
02:08 Alternative: Sample - normal
02:08 Alternative: Addition - soft
02:09 Alternative: 00:19:998 (1) - 
02:09 Alternative: 00:38:284 - 
02:15 Alternative: 01:05:998 (2) - Finish delete
02:15 Alternative: 01:15:427 (5) - 
02:16 Alternative: 01:05:998 (2) - 
02:17 Alternative: 01:19:498 (1) - 
02:18 Alternative: 01:22:284 (3) - 
02:20 Alternative: 01:27:427 (6) - 
02:22 Alternative: 01:30:284 (1,2) - 
02:24 Alternative: 01:30:855 - 
02:30 Alternative: 01:42:570 - 
02:33 Alternative: 02:16:570 - 
02:34 Alternative: 02:17:712 - 
02:34 Alternative: 02:17:855 - 
02:34 Alternative: 02:17:998 - 
02:36 Alternative: 02:20:712 (7) - Clap delete
02:36 Alternative: 02:21:427 (9) - 
02:37 Alternative: 02:23:712 (7) - 
02:38 Alternative: 02:33:712 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 
02:39 Alternative: 02:33:712 (1,2) - 
02:39 Alternative: 02:33:998 (3) - 
02:40 Alternative: 02:34:284 (4,5) - SC2 drum clap
02:40 Alternative: 02:34:570 (6) - SC1 drum finish
02:41 Alternative: 02:33:712 (1,2) - Drum cla
02:41 Alternative: 02:33:998 (3) - Drum finish
02:44 Alternative: 02:36:855 (5,6,1) - 
02:45 Alternative: 02:34:855 (1) - 
02:46 Alternative: 02:37:141 - 
02:46 Alternative: 02:47:998 (4,5,6,7,8) - 
02:47 Alternative: 02:52:998 (5) - Sampleset - auto

tellertheworld wrote:

From in-game PM~
Sorry for mod late.

Extra

1. 00:16:570 (3) - should be cut in 2 slider(00:16:570 (3) -(4/4) and 00:17:141 -(4/4) ) this is the same in the voice.
2. 00:20:712 (1) - slow quick cause to misreading.IMO speed should be a half and double for the before/after item. (you can change to 0.5X)
3. 00:22:998 (1,1) - you can change it.↓ > For match the rhythm.
   
4. 00:25:141 (4) - you can use 1.5X in this slider.The main point in the song.
5. 00:27:855 (1) - this may be misreading (this song quickly and different in rhythm.)
6. 00:28:998 (1) - ^
   >00:27:570 (5,1,4,1) - one for the missing 4/4, one for the 6/4. change it please.
7. 00:30:141 - should be slider.↓
   
   
   End here~
   For your PM request~

Insane

• 
  

  01:25 tellertheworld: Can you here now~?
  01:25 tellertheworld: Are...
  01:26 keeeeeeko: hi
  01:26 tellertheworld: hello~
  01:26 tellertheworld: Do you having a time for the in-game mod?
  01:26 *tellertheworld is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/354090 Foreground Eclipse - Throve Keys]
  01:28 keeeeeeko: Just a moment please
  01:41 keeeeeeko: Thank you for waiting.
  01:42 tellertheworld: let start~
  01:43 tellertheworld: 00:10:855 (1) - 
  01:43 tellertheworld: add the hitsound- Finish
  01:43 tellertheworld: 00:17:784 - 
  01:44 tellertheworld: Would you like to spinner here?
  01:44 keeeeeeko: no
  01:45 tellertheworld: Okay, that no problem
  01:45 tellertheworld: 00:22:284 (1) - 
  01:45 tellertheworld: 00:22:141 (6) - 
  01:45 tellertheworld: no overlap
  01:46 tellertheworld: 00:21:998 (5,6) -  you can try to overlap these
  01:47 keeeeeeko: sorry no change
  01:47 tellertheworld: Oh..
  01:48 tellertheworld: 00:24:427 (6) - may be too far
  01:48 keeeeeeko: i think so
  01:48 keeeeeeko: fix
  01:50 tellertheworld: 00:28:284 (2) - 
  01:50 tellertheworld: try to move to X:208 Y:343 around
  01:52 keeeeeeko: ok
  01:52 tellertheworld: 00:29:712 (4,5,1) - 
  01:52 tellertheworld: http://puu.sh/6rQ1Z.jpg
  01:53 tellertheworld: I think is the rhythm. But you can ignore.
  01:53 keeeeeeko: nice idea
  01:53 keeeeeeko: fix
  01:53 tellertheworld: 00:32:855 (2,3,4,5,6) - 
  01:54 tellertheworld: I think this is diff to follow..
  01:54 tellertheworld: 00:33:284 (5) - 
  01:54 tellertheworld: can move to X:244 Y:172?
  01:56 keeeeeeko: ok
  01:56 tellertheworld: 00:34:570 (4) - 
  01:56 tellertheworld: same to the 00:29:712 (4,5,1) - 
  01:57 keeeeeeko: ok
  01:57 tellertheworld: 00:35:141 (2) - 
  01:57 tellertheworld: I think you should slider here
  01:57 tellertheworld: (2/4)
  01:58 keeeeeeko: i make triangle 00:35:141 (2,3,4) - 
  01:58 keeeeeeko: no change
  01:59 tellertheworld: 00:35:927 (6) - 
  01:59 tellertheworld: delete?
  01:59 keeeeeeko: um
  02:00 keeeeeeko: keep
  02:00 tellertheworld: mum...
  02:00 tellertheworld: 00:36:998 (6) - 
  02:01 tellertheworld: http://puu.sh/6rQAQ.jpg
  02:02 keeeeeeko: ok
  02:02 tellertheworld: http://puu.sh/6rQJ6.jpg
  02:03 tellertheworld: try this~
  02:05 keeeeeeko: no change
  02:05 tellertheworld: Okay~
  02:06 tellertheworld: http://puu.sh/6rQYE.jpg
  02:06 tellertheworld: ~_~'' 00:40:570 -  to 00:42:570 - 
  02:07 keeeeeeko: no change
  02:08 tellertheworld: ... but I feel that having rthhym problem.
  02:09 keeeeeeko: I have to match the sound of the drum
  02:11 tellertheworld: The main is not the drum. 
  02:11 tellertheworld: But that okat~ If you like~
  02:11 tellertheworld: 00:47:355 (1) - 
  02:11 tellertheworld: push to 00:47:284 -
  02:12 keeeeeeko: no change
  02:13 tellertheworld: http://puu.sh/6rRtS.jpg
  02:16 tellertheworld: 00:49:427 (6) - too far for the next item
  02:17 keeeeeeko: Purposely
  02:17 tellertheworld: I see that..
  02:19 tellertheworld: let try this
  02:19 tellertheworld: http://puu.sh/6rRQk.jpg
  02:21 keeeeeeko: no change
  02:22 tellertheworld: 01:31:712 (7,8) -  CTRL + G (you can ignore that)
  02:24 keeeeeeko: ok
  02:25 tellertheworld: 02:30:141 (9) - some special
  02:25 tellertheworld: 02:31:284 (6) - ^
  02:27 keeeeeeko: no change
  02:27 tellertheworld: Okay

FINISH~

tellertheworld wrote:

From in-game PM~
Sorry for mod late.

Extra

1. 00:16:570 (3) - should be cut in 2 slider(00:16:570 (3) -(4/4) and 00:17:141 -(4/4) ) this is the same in the voice.
   I know. But I described slowly part. so I deny
2. 00:20:712 (1) - slow quick cause to misreading.IMO speed should be a half and double for the before/after item. (you can change to 0.5X)
   It's OK.
3. 00:22:998 (1,1) - you can change it.↓ > For match the rhythm.
   
   Sorry. I intended to get drum sound. your sound is not able to get drum.... so I deny
4. 00:25:141 (4) - you can use 1.5X in this slider.The main point in the song.
   sorry Deny
5. 00:27:855 (1) - this may be misreading (this song quickly and different in rhythm.)
   It's intentionally.
6. 00:28:998 (1) - ^
   It's intentionally.
   >00:27:570 (5,1,4,1) - one for the missing 4/4, one for the 6/4. change it please.
   Sorry....
7. 00:30:141 - should be slider.↓
   
   Sorry.... I denied
   
   End here~
   For your PM request~

FINISH~

old unrankable resolution (1366x768):
S,0,9712,,0.62126
new rankable resolution (800x450):
S,0,9712,,1.06080145

Ranking Criteria wrote:

Storyboard images must be at a reasonable size for their usage. For most uses (e.g. full-screen images), the maximum is 800x600 pixels, although 640x480 is highly preferred. The editor is 640x480 at default, so there's really no need to use anything larger for full-screen purposes.

• 02:38:855 - NC here
  02:39:427 - remove NC
  02:40:570 - NC here
  02:41:712 - remove NC

SPOILER

00:18:855 (1) - x 248 y 120
00:19:141 (2) - x 272 y 136
00:19:426 (3) - x 291 y 169
00:19:712 (4) - x 300 y 216
(00:19:712 (4) - is your original position)
I already made them distance 0.3, 0.4, 0.5 like what you did

SPOILER

02:45:141 (1) - x 256 y 127
02:45:284 (2) - x 294 y 245
02:45:427 (3) - x 194 y 172
02:45:570 (4) - x 318 y 172
02:45:712 (5) - x 218 y 245

Setsurei wrote:

some suggestions, lots of nazi mod you may ignore
[Easy]
02:41:712 (1) - I know you're preventing combo reaches 5, but this one should remove NC because it's still the same pattern
if you really want to avoid combo reaches 5, then here's the alternative:

• 02:38:855 - NC here
  02:39:427 - remove NC
  02:40:570 - NC here
  02:41:712 - remove NC
  

flow seems alright on this diff
[Normal]
00:27:855 (2) - x 340 y 168
00:28:998 (1) - x 60 y 260
00:51:998 (1) - tail x 108 y 120
00:52:998 (2) - x 228 y 92
00:53:712 (3) - x 412 y 20
00:54:284 (1) - x 424 y 108
All accepted
[Extra]
00:18:855 (1,2,3,4) - this is cramped, mind to make it like this?

SPOILER

00:18:855 (1) - x 248 y 120
00:19:141 (2) - x 272 y 136
00:19:426 (3) - x 291 y 169
00:19:712 (4) - x 300 y 216
(00:19:712 (4) - is your original position)
I already made them distance 0.3, 0.4, 0.5 like what you did

Accepted
02:45:141 (1,2,3,4,5) - people will confused in this part, mind not to stack? or just make a star shaped? places may be vary depends on you, the mapper

SPOILER

02:45:141 (1) - x 256 y 127
02:45:284 (2) - x 294 y 245
02:45:427 (3) - x 194 y 172
02:45:570 (4) - x 318 y 172
02:45:712 (5) - x 218 y 245

I made a star like that~
I think that's all, good luck[/color]

Setsurei wrote:

some suggestions, lots of nazi mod you may ignore
[SB]
why inside folder lyrics there's another folder lyrics? mind to reduce a level of directory? - it's to reduce the .osb file size too oh,i understood putting inside folder is meaningless,I'll put these lyrics in the foreground.fixed
16.png - mind to fade it a bit slower? from 01:42:284 - to this part 01:42:855 -
rika2.jpg is not used as BG, any SB images are allowed of the max size of 800x600 - resize this to 800x450 (to make it wide resolution) okay!fixed
and times the scale on your .osb by 1.7075

old unrankable resolution (1366x768):
S,0,9712,,0.62126
new rankable resolution (800x450):
S,0,9712,,1.06080145

it was too big so I changed to 1.271213fixed

Ranking Criteria wrote:

Storyboard images must be at a reasonable size for their usage. For most uses (e.g. full-screen images), the maximum is 800x600 pixels, although 640x480 is highly preferred. The editor is 640x480 at default, so there's really no need to use anything larger for full-screen purposes.

I think that's all, good luck THANK YOU

Leorda wrote:

Hiiii

[keeeeeeko's Insane]
00:25:141 (3) - For better flow and rhythm, why not add 1 repeating slider?
00:33:570 (7) - Why this note is further away from zig-zag pattern? That could be mess up the pattern. But, that's my opinion, though
00:47:355 (1) - Maybe removing this note would be nice, since this note isn't following anything from the music itself
01:56:998 (6) - Idk why you suddenly having a jump? That could be throw the players off

Good luck

Leorda wrote:

Hiiii

[Easy]
01:23:998 (1,2,1) - This pattern is not straight enough... rearrange like this?
I can't understand 'like this.'
02:41:427 (2) - Place note here between 2 slider w/ high BPM can cause beginners are unable to click this. Perhaps, remove this note if possible?
I attempted to delete this note.

[Normal]
00:17:712 (1) - With high BPM, some average player will unable to complete this spinner due to bit short spinner. Maybe extend it if possible or replace it?
umm... That was difficult matter... If others point out this matter, I'll have changed it.
00:51:998 (1) - Spacing too far from previous note
fixed
01:21:712 (1) - While the default spinner is blue, this combo color will blend it. Do the colorhax by click "left" arrove beside New Combo button
fixed

01:31:998 (1) - Remove new combo for your comob pattern?
01:34:284 (1) - ^
01:36:570 (1) - ^
01:38:855 (1) - ^
Accepted

[Hard]
* This would be Hard+.... since this looks very hard....

01:14:284 (4) - Spacing error? Could this is intentional?
01:27:141 (6) - ^

Sorry these are intentional.

Good luck

baraatje123 wrote:

Hi, from my queue.
All hitsounds are good, except the fact the they are so soft, I can't hear them in [Easy], but I can hear them in the other diffs o_0. highten the sample vol. to around 80-100 in Kiai, and 70-90 in the rest. I just can't hear them. And remember, Put a clap on EVERY 2nd/4th Beat, so you have Downbeat-Beat-Beat-Beat-Downbeat etc. so it should be -Downbeat (In many cases this means FINISH) - CLAP - (Could be FINISH, could be WHITLE, could be CLAP, could be NOTHING) - CLAP - This again, and again, and again. This is NOT ALWAYS the case in your diffs, but it should be at sometimes, like [Easy] 02:26:010 (1) - It should have Clap at the begin, and at the end, and there are a few other beside this, please fix.;
Maybe the fact that I can't hear them is because they are custom samples, but I do really recommend to highten the volume of them.

I Love Keeeeeko's Insane
Good Map!
Good Lcuk!!