It appears to me that you are asking for feedback on your map, which is not allowed in this part of the forum.
Use
Modding queues instead, also be sure to read
How to use Modding Queues before.
But to answer your question, no, your map is not ready to be ranked!
It has some problems that go directly against the
Ranking Criteria, thus making it not suitable for ranking until those problems are fixed.
I'll write you a post in your
maps Discussion page, addressing said issues.