JUSTICE!!!
спасибо!Reiji-RJ wrote:
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вроде как это из тохо, добавил- 00:30:851 - тут немного странный киай О:
у меня киаи начинается на всех дабстеп-частях. вот как тут 02:30:851 - . я убрал киаи отсюда 02:15:851 - правда, потому что в первой такой же части его не было- 02:15:851 - и тут тоже... длинный и странный ._. там просто две разные части, а объединены одним киаем
Hard
- 00:42:101 (1) - убери вистл и добавь нормал финиш
в остальных похожих частях и в других дифках тоже добавил- 00:45:851 (1) - финиш?
не, слишком тихая часть- 00:51:241 (3) - вистл на начало
да, везде- 00:53:351 (1,2) - может их лучше под вокал сократить?
да- 00:58:741 (2,3,4) - после (3) как-то резко прерывается ритм, может ноту там поставишь?
м, да нет- 01:27:101 (3) - финиш грубоват на нем :с
там и без финиша грубовато музыка звучит, значит подходит)- 01:23:116 (1) - финиш сюда
окда- 03:17:726 (1) - нормал финиш?
мм, нет- 03:19:132 (2) - драм? на этой части иногда пропадают драмы, это намеренно?
мой копирователь долбоёб( никогда не работает. да, кое-где пропали.Insane
- 00:16:554 (2) - драм клеп лишний
я уберу, но сам честно не знаю. с ним лучше звучит немного. или не лучше- 00:30:499 - ноту сюда, нен?
слишком сложно для моего хардеца :з- 01:23:116 (4) - финиш?
ага- 01:45:851 (1) - финиш!
не- 02:12:101 (1,3) - клапы под музыку поставь или драмы, как вначале. А то совсем пусто
во всех диффах да- 03:17:726 (1) - финиш иди драм на начало, опять пусто
неХитсаундомод какой-то вышел, лол D: норм мод :3 я драмы много восстановил в изи
- 01:22:999 (5) - опять этот звук у тебя не выделен :С
- 02:13:976 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - драм свистки во второй половине не звучат, по-моему D: может, продолжить нормал?
есть такое. сделал их тише, вроде норм- 03:17:726 (3) - финиш, нен?
хм, не, софт вистл там обязательно, а софт финиш не звучит
Хотя в контестовой мапке лучше и ничего не менять почти. Гоу ранк >:3
grumd wrote:
Fork you Scorpiour
are you kiddingStefan wrote:
nice place
ah, i see c:Stefan wrote:
jk
Yey done! Thankies to Melo :3Melophobia wrote:
/lazy mod
[Insane]
00:05:890 - How about adding an adittional note here in order to diversify the rhythm? In this section there's only 1/2 rhythm and I find it kind of boring.
would be a nice idea, but i can't, there are really no sounds there in the music :c
00:22:647 (4,5,6) - Make these spacings equal and i think it plays better. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1236284
i made them less different, but now equal. these unequal jump are a part of my style, i use them all the time 00:26:632 (6,7,1) - 00:37:647 (4,5,6) - 01:15:382 (4,5,1) -
00:23:116 (6) - Add a newcombo here instead of 00:23:351 (1) - so it looks better.
okie
00:24:522 (5) - Considering how (3,4) flows it would be better to curve this slider in the opposite direction. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1236291
ye i know what you're talking about but this diverse flow is also a part of my style xD 00:32:726 (1,2,3) - 00:43:976 (1,2,3) - i just don't like when everything is too round, i like when it sometimes flows in opposite directions
00:38:116 (6,1) - Switch these newcombos so it looks better.
yeye
00:54:288 (2) - I think this slider needs to be more curved considering how curved (1) and (3) are.
ye right
00:59:913 (6,7,8,9) - A jump here would fit nicely with this section. Or at least this spacing usage should be scaled larger because it's not really noticeable while playing.
increased the spacing. i still don't want to make edgy jumps, only smooth ones like i did here now because i feel that the music here is quite smooth
01:48:663 (3,4,5,6,1) - Realign these notes in order that transition between 6 and 1 flows better. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1236308
i don't really see a difference between your pic and my map lol xD though it still flows fine to me, i don't think there's any big problem here
02:15:030 (1) - Shorten this slider by 1/4 beat and let it start at 02:15:030 - ? The sound you tried to follow is on a blue tick and the current rhythm sounds weired to me.
explained
[Hard]
00:12:101 (1,2) - Honestly these sliders are kinda messy to me compared to all other pattern. I'm 100% sure you can do better here.
ok remapped, i spent like 10 minutes on these xD
00:15:616 (5) - How about making a jump here like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1236335 it does fit well with the emphasis and percussion
http://puu.sh/6e2EI.jpg it was actually a square pattern, so i'll just move next slider a bit down to make a jump on it
01:05:304 (3) - Feels empty here due to lack of hitsound here, how about adding a whistle to the beginning of this slider?
can't. that part was fully with basses only, so adding a whistle will make it unfitting. i place whistles on piano notes a bit later, 01:06:476 (1,2,3,4,5) - but not here. bass sounds on this slider are also unfitting since it skips them (bass is in the middle of the slider) so i'm keeping this empty for consistency
01:15:616 (7) - Same suggestion as 00:15:616 (5) - . http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1236340
ye ok
03:30:616 - Whistle?
yea my mistake, added in Normal as well
That's just my 2 cents, but I wish you could use a little more jumps in this difficulty. 1/2 spamming at 128 BPM is just painful to me. Otherwise was really nicely done.
if i make it even more jumpy, it will be Insane copy lol. mostly the jumps is what differs it from Insane, so i'm not using it too much in here. i guess kind of lack of jumps is not such painful to people who are not that experienced and want sometimes to play relaxing diffs :p
[Normal]
00:25:226 (1) - Remove this newcombo and add it to 00:27:101 (4) - instead.
01:37:179 (1) - Use a long slider instead of this spinner? it's way too short for beginners to react and doesn't even fit with the music imo. Though you'll have to find another place for a spinner..
02:51:476 - Fill in here? The long vocal is totally ignored and feels really empty imo.
yea right
02:59:210 (2) - Add a whistle to somewhere? There's no hitsounds around here and it's kinda empty to me.
ye okay
Really nice ! I'll give it a closer look when I recheck!
oh u xDgrumd wrote:
are you kiddingStefan wrote:
nice placeah, i see c:Stefan wrote:
jk
Thanks jonathanjonathanlfj wrote:
wow this might get ranked before mine xD
here is a star for you, good luck!
You dun have to be sorry, dear, you helped me sou much anyway <333Melophobia wrote:
Ahh I'm sorry i couldn't be the ranker. ;____; Congrats though!