Hello, m4m from #modreqs
Since this is your 1st map, I'm not going to be too harsh ^^
NORMAL:
00:24:675 (3) - I would delete this circle since there's no lyric
00:30:675 (5) - New Combo (NC) here
00:38:550 (3) - this is too close to the previous slider, you should move it to
x:72 y:12800:43:425 (6) - consider replacing this slider with the one from 00:41:925 (4) it sounds better in my opinion
00:59:175 (2) - hmm this doesn't sound too good... try replacing this with a slider that starts at the same time, but ends at 00:59:550 (basically, the same length, but without the repeat part
it doesn't sound good because of the lyric)
01:01:425 (2) - this slider comes over the last object at 01:01:050 (1) and looks ugly to me
try moving it to
x:320 y:10401:04:425 (1) - replace this with a single circle, it sounds better ^^
01:11:362 (2) - because of the lyrics, you might want to replace this with a short slider that starts at 01:11:550 and ends at 01:11:737
01:12:112 (3) - move it to
x:424 y:14401:21:675 (5) - NC here
01:31:050 (6) - ^ same
01:32:550 (1) - no need for NC here
01:49:425 (6) - NC here
02:03:862 (6) - ^ same
02:10:050 (6) - ^ same
02:13:425 (1) - no NC here
HARD:
About the Timing for this diff... 1.90 Slider Velocity might be a bit too much, I would choose ~ 1.60 or so
Another thing that you may want to change is the Distance Spacing. Try to use 1.0x instead of 1.3x
00:13:050 (7) - NC here
00:28:425 (2) - rotate 180 degrees this slider, then use CTRL + G and re-position it, looks better in my opinion
00:37:050 (8) - NC here
01:14:550 (7) - ^ same
01:24:300 (1) - no need for NC here
01:26:362 (7) - NC here
01:32:737 (6) - ^ same
01:45:393 (7) - hmm you better delete this circle, it doesn't sound too good due to the lyrics
01:48:393 (5) - ^ same
01:51:393 (7) - ^ same
INSANE:
00:22:425 (1,2,3,4,5) - nice, make something like this more often ^^
00:32:456 (1) - no NC here
00:59:362 (5) - NC here
01:12:675 - add a circle here, it matches with the lyric ^^
01:57:300 (7) - move this to 01:57:487 and make it end at 01:58:237 then add a circle at 01:57:300 (the time where the slider used to begin)
That's all!
The mapset is good, the only thing that I don't like is that there are too many straight sliders, especially in Normal and Hard
You should choose other shapes, curvier, otherwise it would look like an old map XD Anyway, GL, hope you'll get it ranked! :3 Here's a star from me ^^