Nanahira - Monosugoi Ikioide Keine ga Monosugoi Uta · forum

Oracle

571 posts

Joined April 2012

Topic Starter

Oracle 2014-01-18T01:41:05+00:00

updated!

Awaken

858 posts

Joined February 2012

Awaken 2014-01-18T01:46:41+00:00

我真是服了你了随手就找几十个mod

mod reply

Akabato wrote:
[Awaken's Normal]
nice job~感觉基本挑不出啥来，就是貌似复制粘贴有点多;w;，不过normal这样也没啥大关系……
01:06:735 (3) - nazi，prev1.06了，稍微挪挪？ fixed
02:36:735 (4) - 这个感觉有些odd，考虑换成到02:37:068的一次折返滑条或者在02:37:068加个circle？我跟背景的机械音
02:42:068 (4) - ^ 后面还有好几个这样的，感觉要跟vocal但是也比较违和，不过估计要改会很麻烦，照顾排列啥的，所以请自行斟酌QvQ，我这就是建议……
02:55:901 (2) - 红线起手不怎么好读，考虑把这个换成从02:55:735到02:55:901的滑条？ another way

Rakuen wrote:
[Awaken's Normal]
00:03:735 - Feels like something is missing, beats are still going I follow the music of machine
00:09:068 - ^ (maybe add a reverse)
00:54:735 (2) - NC no,it's strange that only one object is NC
01:17:401 (3) - NC, music changed a bit ^
02:07:068 (4) - Clap k
02:07:734 (6) - ^ k
02:37:068 - As previous
02:42:401 - ^
02:44:068 - Add a timing point with 45% volume and add finish at 02:44:068 (3) - k
02:54:735 (1) - Sounds extra, the finish and other hitsounds are on red ticks like 02:54:568 - and 02:54:901 - O can't hear them @.@
02:55:901 (2) - Remove this or NC, there's a quite timing distance k
03:27:068 (4) - Clap k
03:27:735 (6) - ^ k

thx for mods~

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Title:Monosugoi Ikioide Keine ga Monosugoi Uta
TitleUnicode:物凄い勢いでけーねが物凄いうた
Artist:Nanahira
ArtistUnicode:ななひら
Creator:Oracle
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Tags:Starry Presto halozy keine kamishirasawa nostalgic blood of the east old world imperishable night awaken sherry
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Oracle

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Oracle 2014-01-18T10:44:31+00:00

Sharlo wrote:
=A= 你这签名怎么回事！！

没有偶像鼓励就没有这图惹(*>ω<*)

Selisi

721 posts

Joined October 2012

Selisi 2014-01-18T16:01:44+00:00

来补m4m 再不来害怕乃这个要rank了...
我的mod水平好渣的可能没什么用= =
[General]

None 好谱子

[Easy]

这个难度的spinner有些短了都是4分拍
02:22:066 - unsnap
00:02:735 (2,1) - 这两个的形状和位置是不是可以考虑对称的情况
00:40:068 (1,2) - ^
01:34:735 (1,2) - ^
02:06:735 (3,4) - ^
00:06:735 (1) - 这个是不是都出去了虽然aimod没说的确有一小部分看不到了
03:21:401 (2) - 这个尾巴也太靠边了
03:40:735 (2,1) - 对在一条线上好看些
03:48:735 (2,1) ^-

[Awaken's Normal]

01:36:901 (5) - 去掉clap
01:37:401 (1) - ^
01:38:068 (2) - ^
02:18:401 (6) - move to X352 Y276
02:36:735 (4) - 折返一次？后面很多不喜欢Ignore
03:40:068 (3) - 第四个点向下移动些
03:48:068 (4,1) - 这个路径再对准一些吧不然会很坑的

[Sherry's Hard]

00:23:568 - two circle here?
00:24:401 (2,3) - 00:24:068 (1,2) - blanket better
00:34:068 (3) - why not separate it into two slider like this 00:33:735 (2) -
00:44:068 (1,2,3,4) - adjust its spacing ，I mean distance between 1slider's tail and 2's should be the same as 2-3 3-4
00:49:901 (2,3) - blanket
01:42:568 (8,1,2) - spacing
02:08:735 (4,5) - symmetry?
02:14:568 (5,6) - blanket
02:17:401 (1) - why put a speed change slider here?feel a bit unreasonable...well, you can ignore this~
03:01:401 (1) - consider again? rhythm, put arrow at 03:01:693 -?
03:14:068 (4) - change into one circle+short slider?
03:41:235 (8,1) - blanket
U may put some jump into this diff :C

[Lunatic]

00:13:401 - 这个地方spinner不加也要把circle加上去吧这是长白线是开头不加节奏把握不好的
00:14:735 (1,2,3,4,5) - 坏梗好猎奇
这里试试这样你这个太鬼畜
00:50:068 (1,2,3,4) - 去掉00:49:735 (1,2) - 向后移动到红线前面加两个circle连成串调整位置
01:07:901 (6) - 这个要去掉虽然背景音里面有这个震动但是玩家的节奏感更重要些后面还有好多
01:16:901 (7) - 可以都是三连太鬼畜
01:29:735 (3,4) - 01:31:068 (3,4) - spacing
02:22:235 (1,2,3) - 这也很难...特别是哪个3
02:40:318 (2,3) - 坏梗
03:31:568 (4,1,2) - 这里也是一样为什么这样不太好因为这样很难玩HD的03:31:901 (2,2) - 这里还有藏折返箭头的嫌疑
连打和跳做的真心好就是太鬼畜:C

乃还记得哪张M4M么 = = ..from your queue~ good luck~ 第一张图这样简直神麻婆

kamisamaaa

605 posts

Joined July 2011

kamisamaaa 2014-01-18T17:06:56+00:00

来送mod~
[genaral]
我怎么觉得你这个歌听着有点闷的声音不知道是不是我的问题你自己对比一下我那个和你这个额我的那个mp3是我自己吧高音质降低的可能和直接192的不一样（我也不是很清楚你可以自己听下对比一下额）
因为我做的和你一样的图虽然我尽量避免了但是可能mod中还是带有我的思路想法了看的时候你注意一些额。。
[Lunatic]
00:12:068 感觉这里改成一个note吧转盘紧跟在后面因为转盘开始没声音可是这里有一声比较重的音和00:11:901 (5) - 这个感觉是一组
00:17:651这里建议还是补上一个note 因为这里明显是三声而且中间的调还比两边高
00:31:235 (2) - 这个建议ctrl+G 做个反向梗而且歌曲这两声也是降调然后后面那个单点是声调如果变方向了距离稍微改小一点
00:31:735 (3,1) - 这两个间距这么小根本读不出来中间停了一拍要不叠起来要么拉开吧
00:45:151这里一样漏音
00:55:235 (5) - NC吧要不然不好读到底是连着的串子还是空拍的
01:07:901 (6,1,2) - 这里感觉好乱三个折返两次的滑条还不一样时间的额
01:32:068 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 其实我觉得吧你kiai串子都是夹杂往返的那种反而kiai结束之后来这种长串不是很合适额
01:44:068 (1) - 建议往下点多露一点出来额
02:07:401 (3,4) - 这两个分别ctrl+G会不会更有意思一点额后面的一样的建议
02:13:235 (6) - 不知为何这个有违和感感觉多出来了
solo段做的好棒！

先说这么多 osu卡帧卡疯了别的diff之后再补~
祝你也早日rank~

Oracle

571 posts

Joined April 2012

Topic Starter

Oracle 2014-01-18T19:57:20+00:00

Really thanks for modding!! There's something wrong with my internet that i can't upload atm. Will go through them later when I can upload ><

Charles445

Elite Mapper II: Aspirant / osu! Paragon

2,881 posts

Joined March 2009

Charles445 2014-01-18T20:02:50+00:00

[General]
I have no idea if that title is correct D:

The combo colors look a bit strange, some are bright and easy to see and some are darkened.
Here's some alternate colors that might work better for you.

[Colours]
Combo1 : 227,252,88
Combo2 : 137,252,88
Combo3 : 88,88,252
Combo4 : 252,88,88

This makes the saturation and luminosity the same on the combo colors. It keeps the hues you had before.

There are a lot of breaks in strange places in the difficulties. It'd be a good idea to keep them consistent (use the ones in Lunatic, those were good).

[Easy]
Why is this tickrate 2 when the other difficulties are tickrate 1? Set the tickrate to 1.
02:21:400 (4) - This slider is unsnapped! Also pointed out by Sweet Vanilla
03:34:735 (1) - Try not to use double repeats in an Easy like this. Beginner players are most likely going to expect sliders to have a single repeat, not two.

[Awaken's Normal]
OD 5
00:18:735 (1) - Replace this spinner with other objects, it's out of place here.
02:55:401 - Add circle. May be different now because of Akabato's mod
02:55:735 - Add circle. May be different now because of Akabato's mod
03:38:068 (1) - This squiggles too sharply. Too much squiggling makes it hard to read and unrankable. Some slight bending would be a better idea.
03:40:735 (1) - ^
03:48:735 (1) - ^
03:51:401 (1) - ^
03:54:068 (1) - ^

[Sherry's Hard]
OD 7
01:39:068 (1) - Add new combo
03:34:068 (1) - Add new combo
This difficulty plays it very safe, not much worth pointing out.

[Lunatic]
00:23:568 (1,2) - It's hard to tell that these are sliders because they are so short. You might want to increase the slider velocity of these.
01:07:901 (6) - Shorten this a repeat? It's easy to sliderbreak here.
01:16:901 (7,8,9,10,1) - This part is way too confusing to read because the slider is on top of a big stream stack. Try unstacking them and having the circles go in a different direction, like this -> http://puu.sh/6nsa7.jpg . I'm pretty sure kamisamaaa pointed out the same thing.
01:34:068 (3,4) - Unstack these? I expected there to not be a circle at 4 because of how the song was previously. I also didn't see the 4 because it was under the 3. If you unstack these it will be easier to tell that there are two circles there.
02:00:235 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - These are a bit too compressed, I can't count all of the circles in the stream.
02:13:235 (6) - Shorten this a repeat? It's easy to sliderbreak here.
02:21:568 (1) - Remove new combo
02:21:901 (1) - Remove new combo
02:22:235 (1) - Shorten this a repeat so it's a 1/4 jump instead of a 1/8 jump.
02:22:568 (3) - Make this point downwards instead, it'll be easier to read.
02:40:068 (1,2,3) - Unstack these a little, the pattern looks like two big sliders instead of a slider, circle, and slider. Here's what it is now -> http://puu.sh/6nsu6.jpg and here's an improved version -> http://puu.sh/6nsvL.jpg . Readability is very important here.
03:00:068 (1) - Sliders that change speed like this aren't rankable anymore, sorry! Try to keep the speed consistent or don't use such sharp wiggles.
03:09:401 (1) - Increase the speed on this a little bit, the sudden drop in speed is really jarring. Also the slider squiggles a bit too much, it'd be better if the path it takes was clearer.
03:15:068 (1,1,1) - Remove these 3 new combos, there's no need for them.
03:22:568 (6) - Shorten this a repeat? It's easy to sliderbreak here.
03:31:568 (4) - Shorten this a repeat? It's easy to sliderbreak here.
03:31:901 (2) - Reverse this slider, it'd play better.
03:32:401 (2) - Move this slider far below the other slider, overlapping makes it hard to read.
03:32:735 (3) - If you moved the 2 slider down, move this slider farther up.
03:33:068 (4) - Shorten this a repeat? It's easy to sliderbreak here.

Kibbleru

osu! Alumni

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Joined August 2013

Kibbleru 2014-01-18T21:30:23+00:00

posted twice by accident sry

Last edited by Kibbleru 2014-01-18T21:49:43+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Kibbleru

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Joined August 2013

Kibbleru 2014-01-18T21:48:46+00:00

m4m

this is gunna be a challenge since it's been modded so many times already so be prepared for some really nazi stuff lol

[Easy]

00:02:735 (2) - try making this the same as 00:01:402 (1) ctrl+ j h g

00:10:610 - what is this timing point for o-o?

00:10:568 (1) - (optional) something like this maybe; http://gyazo.com/b1982ef20a9ab26b30c3fb9a0ee107bd

-Rly nazi stuff here- ignore if you want

SPOILER

00:14:068 (1) - make this slider "connect" better with the next one. Maybe it's just me but it just seems like it's aimed off the board. maybe make it curve a bit.
01:12:068 (1) - same here. again, ignore this whole section if you want
01:17:401 (1) - this one i would recommend changing into a curve
03:20:068 (1) - ^

00:40:068 (1) - make this more curvy like 00:41:401 (2) or make the second one lest curvy
01:34:735 (1) - same case here

00:53:401 (1) - move this circle up a bit more so that it kinda makes the previous slider look like a beatblanket: http://gyazo.com/7637dd8bbbd9135002d97a97cd75a20d

01:31:735 (3) - fix this up so that it makes a straighter line with the end of 01:30:735 (2) and the start of 01:32:068 (1)

01:52:068 (3) - try to make this one similar to 01:50:735 (1) ctrl + j g

02:06:735 (3) - make this parallel to 02:08:069 (1)
02:07:402 (4) - this isnt quite parallel to 02:08:069 (1) fix it up slightly

02:12:069 (3) - curve might be better
02:22:734 (1) - same case here
02:40:401 (2) - ^

02:57:401 (2) - reversing this might look better http://gyazo.com/d306b0b7bc89f4b7dff132e19584890d

[Awaken's Normal]

00:08:735 (4) - parallel to 00:08:068 (3) might look nicer

00:16:735 (2) - curve maybe?
01:03:401 (2) - ^
01:14:068 (2) - ^
02:19:401 (2) - ^

00:46:735 (3,4) - these 2 overlap. overlaps are fine but this one looks a bit awkward since it doesn't look like it's suppose to overlap
01:52:068 (3,4) - same here
03:37:401 (3,1) - here too
03:40:068 (3,1) - and here
03:42:735 (3,1) - ^
03:48:068 (4,1) - ^
03:50:735 (4,1) - ^
03:53:401 (4,1) - ^

03:04:068 (1,2,3,4) - maybe it's just me but the way these are arranged looks a bit messy. play around with them a bit maybe

i noticed there were a lot of parts where you just copied and pasted the previous sections. that should be fine but it might be a little boring to play as this is a fairly long song.

[Sherry's Hard]

00:04:568 (2) - this is slightly off. move it down a bit

00:59:735 (4) - beatblanket the end of 00:59:401 (3)?

01:12:068 (1,2,3,4) - probably just me again but looks a bit messy.

01:16:235 (2,3) - make these adjacent to 01:16:735 (4)

01:18:401 (3) - (super nazi) angle this better so that its perfectly parallel to 01:17:735 (1) (use grid level 4 or even no grid snap)

02:03:735 (4) - curve this a bit more so it fits better with 02:03:401 (3)

03:04:735 (3) - make this less curvier so it kinda fits with 03:04:068 (1); http://gyazo.com/2cf78ee47f94f229908611eb1f58b68a

03:08:735 (4) - 03:08:068 (3) ctrl + j h

03:13:068 (2,3) - slightly overlaps. doesn't look natural

this difficulty is really well done. i'm just being super picky i admit.

[Lunatic]

02:51:735 (4) - move this over to 02:50:901 (2)
02:52:401 (1) - same case

02:56:485 (4,5,6,7,8) - make this curvier.. maybe

03:05:068 (1,2) - this doesn't fit in with the previous ones

ehh its mapped so well i rly couldn't find much

Sherry

213 posts

Joined December 2010

Sherry 2014-01-19T09:07:01+00:00

Sweet Vanilla wrote:
[Sherry's Hard]
00:23:568 - two circle here? not fixed. It becomes difficult to start.
00:24:401 (2,3) - 00:24:068 (1,2) - blanket better fixed
00:34:068 (3) - why not separate it into two slider like this 00:33:735 (2) - not fixed
00:44:068 (1,2,3,4) - adjust its spacing ，I mean distance between 1slider's tail and 2's should be the same as 2-3 3-4 not fixed
00:49:901 (2,3) - blanket not fixed
01:42:568 (8,1,2) - spacing not fixed
02:08:735 (4,5) - symmetry? not fixed
02:14:568 (5,6) - blanket not fixed
02:17:401 (1) - why put a speed change slider here?feel a bit unreasonable...well, you can ignore this~ fixed. change slider speed 0.75->1.0
03:01:401 (1) - consider again? rhythm, put arrow at 03:01:693 -? not fixed
03:14:068 (4) - change into one circle+short slider? changed
03:41:235 (8,1) - blanket not fixed
U may put some jump into this diff :C not fixed Since it becomes difficult too much :C

Charles445 wrote:
[Sherry's Hard]
OD 7 fixed
01:39:068 (1) - Add new combo fixed
03:34:068 (1) - Add new combo fixed
This difficulty plays it very safe, not much worth pointing out.

Kibbleru wrote:
[Sherry's Hard]

00:04:568 (2) - this is slightly off. move it down a bit fixed

00:59:735 (4) - beatblanket the end of 00:59:401 (3)? not fixed

01:12:068 (1,2,3,4) - probably just me again but looks a bit messy. a little changed

01:16:235 (2,3) - make these adjacent to 01:16:735 (4) not fixed

01:18:401 (3) - (super nazi) angle this better so that its perfectly parallel to 01:17:735 (1) (use grid level 4 or even no grid snap )fixed?

02:03:735 (4) - curve this a bit more so it fits better with 02:03:401 (3) fixed

03:04:735 (3) - make this less curvier so it kinda fits with 03:04:068 (1); http://gyazo.com/2cf78ee47f94f229908611eb1f58b68a fixed

03:08:735 (4) - 03:08:068 (3) ctrl + j h position changed

03:13:068 (2,3) - slightly overlaps. doesn't look natural not fixed Since it has not made a mistake in distance

this difficulty is really well done. i'm just being super picky i admit.

update ~

thx modding http://puu.sh/6qdug.osu

Oracle

571 posts

Joined April 2012

Topic Starter

Oracle 2014-01-19T11:09:07+00:00

Sweet Vanilla wrote:
来补m4m 再不来害怕乃这个要rank了...
我的mod水平好渣的可能没什么用= =
[General]
None 好谱子
[Easy]
这个难度的spinner有些短了都是4分拍
02:22:066 - unsnapfixed
00:02:735 (2,1) - 这两个的形状和位置是不是可以考虑对称的情况试过..没位置放破坏flow
00:40:068 (1,2) - ^^
01:34:735 (1,2) - ^还是不了..不强求对称
02:06:735 (3,4) - ^^
00:06:735 (1) - 这个是不是都出去了虽然aimod没说的确有一小部分看不到了稍微放了一点
03:21:401 (2) - 这个尾巴也太靠边了没问题的..
03:40:735 (2,1) - 对在一条线上好看些好
03:48:735 (2,1) ^- 这个还好

[Lunatic]
00:13:401 - 这个地方spinner不加也要把circle加上去吧这是长白线是开头不加节奏把握不好的test过很多次了,没啥影响,这个转盘是为了表达那个渐强音啊
00:14:735 (1,2,3,4,5) - 坏梗好猎奇扭一下把方向扭过去..
这里试试这样你这个太鬼畜
00:50:068 (1,2,3,4) - 去掉00:49:735 (1,2) - 向后移动到红线前面加两个circle连成串调整位置不鬼畜的,这个其实意外的好打
01:07:901 (6) - 这个要去掉虽然背景音里面有这个震动但是玩家的节奏感更重要些后面还有好多稍微改容易了
01:16:901 (7) - 可以都是三连太鬼畜会想办法把后面的连打摆开来
01:29:735 (3,4) - 01:31:068 (3,4) - spacingno fix.
02:22:235 (1,2,3) - 这也很难...特别是哪个3fixed a bit
02:40:318 (2,3) - 坏梗恩改掉了
03:31:568 (4,1,2) - 这里也是一样为什么这样不太好因为这样很难玩HD的03:31:901 (2,2) - 这里还有藏折返箭头的嫌疑稍微改了一点
连打和跳做的真心好就是太鬼畜:C
乃还记得哪张M4M么 = = ..from your queue~ good luck~ 第一张图这样简直神麻婆><回头摸你那张~今天摸了一张马拉松..先休息下

谢谢mod!

kamisamaaa wrote:
来送mod~
[genaral]
我怎么觉得你这个歌听着有点闷的声音不知道是不是我的问题你自己对比一下我那个和你这个额我的那个mp3是我自己吧高音质降低的可能和直接192的不一样（我也不是很清楚你可以自己听下对比一下额）恩我这个是从nico上扒的.. 最后的嗨嗨嗨声音也有点不同 lol
因为我做的和你一样的图虽然我尽量避免了但是可能mod中还是带有我的思路想法了看的时候你注意一些额。。
[Lunatic]
00:12:068 感觉这里改成一个note吧转盘紧跟在后面因为转盘开始没声音可是这里有一声比较重的音和00:11:901 (5) - 这个感觉是一组还是想用转盘表达那个渐强音效啊
00:17:651这里建议还是补上一个note 因为这里明显是三声而且中间的调还比两边高要做四方
00:31:235 (2) - 这个建议ctrl+G 做个反向梗而且歌曲这两声也是降调然后后面那个单点是声调如果变方向了距离稍微改小一点反向后那个跳太大了,也找不到好的位置放
00:31:735 (3,1) - 这两个间距这么小根本读不出来中间停了一拍要不叠起来要么拉开吧好,拉开了
00:45:151这里一样漏音没漏,我跟鼓的
00:55:235 (5) - NC吧要不然不好读到底是连着的串子还是空拍的柑橘没必要;_;
01:07:901 (6,1,2) - 这里感觉好乱三个折返两次的滑条还不一样时间的额改了一点,没那么容易断了
01:32:068 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 其实我觉得吧你kiai串子都是夹杂往返的那种反而kiai结束之后来这种长串不是很合适额应该也可以吧..
01:44:068 (1) - 建议往下点多露一点出来额恩好
02:07:401 (3,4) - 这两个分别ctrl+G会不会更有意思一点额后面的一样的建议故意做两个loop的,因为后面的串也是跟着现在的flow来,所以很难改..
02:13:235 (6) - 不知为何这个有违和感感觉多出来了因为你跟的是vocal,我跟的是鼓,所以这个感觉多出来
solo段做的好棒！谢谢>< 不过那个加速slider是unrankable,要改..sad
先说这么多 osu卡帧卡疯了别的diff之后再补~
祝你也早日rank~:D

感谢!!

Charles445 wrote:
[General]
I have no idea if that title is correct D: it's correct. same with the ranked version

The combo colors look a bit strange, some are bright and easy to see and some are darkened.
Here's some alternate colors that might work better for you.
[Colours]
Combo1 : 227,252,88
Combo2 : 137,252,88
Combo3 : 88,88,252
Combo4 : 252,88,88
This makes the saturation and luminosity the same on the combo colors. It keeps the hues you had before.
Thanks for the code! That really helps!
There are a lot of breaks in strange places in the difficulties. It'd be a good idea to keep them consistent (use the ones in Lunatic, those were good).
will talk with the guests about this
[Easy]
Why is this tickrate 2 when the other difficulties are tickrate 1? Set the tickrate to 1.so many modders pointed this out... ok then
02:21:400 (4) - This slider is unsnapped! Also pointed out by Sweet Vanillaahh my bad.. fixed.
03:34:735 (1) - Try not to use double repeats in an Easy like this. Beginner players are most likely going to expect sliders to have a single repeat, not two.
changed a bit.

[Lunatic]
00:23:568 (1,2) - It's hard to tell that these are sliders because they are so short. You might want to increase the slider velocity of these.attempted to fix this
01:07:901 (6) - Shorten this a repeat? It's easy to sliderbreak here.the incoming object is also a slider so it would be safe without shorten.
01:16:901 (7,8,9,10,1) - This part is way too confusing to read because the slider is on top of a big stream stack. Try unstacking them and having the circles go in a different direction, like this -> http://puu.sh/6nsa7.jpg . I'm pretty sure kamisamaaa pointed out the same thing.okay, unstacked
01:34:068 (3,4) - Unstack these? I expected there to not be a circle at 4 because of how the song was previously. I also didn't see the 4 because it was under the 3. If you unstack these it will be easier to tell that there are two circles there.seems reasonable, applied.
02:00:235 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - These are a bit too compressed, I can't count all of the circles in the stream.ahh, that's because I don't have enough spacing to put them. And since it's exactly how it was in the previous part. It won't be hard to read.
02:13:235 (6) - Shorten this a repeat? It's easy to sliderbreak here.same reason above
02:21:568 (1) - Remove new combok
02:21:901 (1) - Remove new combodone
02:22:235 (1) - Shorten this a repeat so it's a 1/4 jump instead of a 1/8 jump.okay. tho it's pretty easy to catch with 1/8 jump
02:22:568 (3) - Make this point downwards instead, it'll be easier to read.i tried it but i missed many times with the change. let's just kepp it
02:40:068 (1,2,3) - Unstack these a little, the pattern looks like two big sliders instead of a slider, circle, and slider. Here's what it is now -> http://puu.sh/6nsu6.jpg and here's an improved version -> http://puu.sh/6nsvL.jpg . Readability is very important here.changed.
03:00:068 (1) - Sliders that change speed like this aren't rankable anymore, sorry! Try to keep the speed consistent or don't use such sharp wiggles.Deleted.
03:09:401 (1) - Increase the speed on this a little bit, the sudden drop in speed is really jarring. Also the slider squiggles a bit too much, it'd be better if the path it takes was clearer.the slider path is exactly following the music. Watch it in 25% and you will find out.. Besides i got no other pattern to think of for this part. The space is just not enough.
03:15:068 (1,1,1) - Remove these 3 new combos, there's no need for them.okay
03:22:568 (6) - Shorten this a repeat? It's easy to sliderbreak here.
03:31:568 (4) - Shorten this a repeat? It's easy to sliderbreak here.yes
03:31:901 (2) - Reverse this slider, it'd play better.k, feel better
03:32:401 (2) - Move this slider far below the other slider, overlapping makes it hard to read.i guess it's fine.. This pattern is tested by many players, the only point they might get a slider break is the one you mentioned below. I will fix that.
03:32:735 (3) - If you moved the 2 slider down, move this slider farther up.^
03:33:068 (4) - Shorten this a repeat? It's easy to sliderbreak here.this is it, fixed!

Thank you!! I learnt a lot from your mod. May talk about the copy&paste stuffs in E&N and remap them(maybe?). If the copy&paste stuffs were fixed. I might bother you again for a bubble. lol

And gonna mod back your map soon :3

Oracle

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Oracle 2014-01-21T05:27:37+00:00

Charles445 wrote:
[Awaken's Normal]
OD 5 K
00:18:735 (1) - Replace this spinner with other objects, it's out of place here. Changed.
02:55:401 - Add circle. May be different now because of Akabato's mod Remapped.
02:55:735 - Add circle. May be different now because of Akabato's mod Remapped.
03:38:068 (1) - This squiggles too sharply. Too much squiggling makes it hard to read and unrankable. Some slight bending would be a better idea. Changed to straight one.
03:40:735 (1) - ^ ^
03:48:735 (1) - ^ ^
03:51:401 (1) - ^ ^
03:54:068 (1) - ^ ^

Terribly sorry about the copy&paste. I've remapped nearly all of them. Thank you for teaching me this. I'll try to avoid them in the future.

Due to Awaken's huge lagging on posting. I'll post his reply here. And after disgussion we remapped all the copy&paste parts in Easy & Normal. I'm pretty sure they look much better now.

dkun

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dkun 2014-01-23T09:11:33+00:00

Looks like Charles beat me to the juicy part of the mod.

We just changed a few sliders in Lunatic and made the combo colors in Normal match with the rest of the set. I suggested a few other changes to no avail (not in a bad way!) and we went over the difficulties for quite some time over IRC.

The mapset has my approval. Let's move on! (note to any incoming BAT, this same song was ranked on the 18th of Jan.)

rinsukir

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rinsukir 2014-01-23T09:28:21+00:00

恭喜rank

Oracle

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Oracle 2014-01-23T09:38:41+00:00

dkun wrote:
Looks like Charles beat me to the juicy part of the mod.

We just changed a few sliders in Lunatic and made the combo colors in Normal match with the rest of the set. I suggested a few other changes to no avail (not in a bad way!) and we went over the difficulties for quite some time over IRC.

The mapset has my approval. Let's move on! (note to any incoming BAT, this same song was ranked on the 18th of Jan.)

Thanks dkun!!!

I will keep on improving myself!!

Oracle

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Oracle 2014-01-23T10:37:11+00:00

rinsukir wrote:
恭喜rank

同喜 :3

Awaken

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Awaken 2014-01-23T10:37:37+00:00

恭喜rank

Snowy Dream

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Snowy Dream 2014-01-23T10:46:12+00:00

恭喜泡祝早日rank！
（吗的现在mapper都19天就泡..

Mafumafu

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Mafumafu 2014-01-23T12:42:00+00:00

恭喜！

Akabato

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Akabato 2014-01-23T18:58:02+00:00

哦哦泡了啊，恭喜！～

kamisamaaa

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kamisamaaa 2014-01-24T06:58:37+00:00

恭喜rank~（虽然还没rank）

dkun

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dkun 2014-01-26T01:47:20+00:00

Oracle, Frostmourne and I are discussing the MP3 quality of this map.

So in layman's terms, I'm just posting for Frosty saying that he's in the process of checking the map.

Charles445

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Charles445 2014-01-27T19:38:01+00:00

dkun wrote:
Oracle, Frostmourne and I are discussing the MP3 quality of this map.

So in layman's terms, I'm just posting for Frosty saying that he's in the process of checking the map.

I think this song got ranked recently. If this sound quality isn't good enough, maybe use that version's mp3?

Frostmourne

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Frostmourne 2014-01-28T07:01:43+00:00

Oracle told me that some part in the map (around 3.33 iirc) is different from the latest ranked version and I can confirm that it is.
He mapped in a different way that the ranked version can't compensate.
Actually here is a new osz with fixed offset and new mp3 for this particular version.
(I gave it to Oracle but I didn't tell him to update it yet)

http://puu.sh/6xS3j.osz

@Charles please confirm the timing for the osz above if you don't mind!

Sharlo

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Sharlo 2014-01-29T18:21:18+00:00

11天就泡你是人妈
偶像我都没这本事啊【喂

Oracle

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Oracle 2014-01-31T15:07:32+00:00

Self-popping the bubble because of mp3 change.

Frosty noticed my current mp3's quality is pretty bad. So after discussion on this I decide to change my mp3 into Halozy's album version(192kbps converted from 320kbps). Also adjusted the hitsounding volume a bit to make it suitable with the new mp3.

Nothing else in the mapset is changed. Just posting this to explain the status i guess.

Sherry

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Sherry 2014-01-31T16:04:25+00:00

update~
change hit sound and sound volume
00:24:446 (1) and 03:27:779 (3) Curve
http://puu.sh/6EWBi.osu

Oracle

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Oracle 2014-01-31T16:48:52+00:00

Updated everything!
I adjusted the volume for all diffs and 3 whistles in Lunatic. Also added 'niconico' to tags.
Everything else ramains the same as bubble state.

dkun

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dkun 2014-01-31T17:03:56+00:00

ＦＩＧＨＴＯ！ (ﾉ≧∀≦)ﾉ

Oracle

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Oracle 2014-01-31T17:16:37+00:00