rinsukir wrote:

[Sherry's Hard]
first: Notes mostly in the middle(?

SPOILER

00:46:735 (1,2) - I think this is ugly changed
00:52:068 (4,5) - ^ changed
01:37:401 (1,2,3,4) - Hard to read changed
01:39:068 (2) - Change to a circle on 01:39:068 ? changed
01:53:401 (1,2) - I think this is ugly changed
02:25:401 (7) - NC? Fixed
02:46:735 - Add a circle not Fixed but a little changed
Your rhythm is sometimes tight and sometimes loose(?) orz..

pkmnyab wrote:

Oh I forgot to mention earlier, but the song should be renamed to "Keine's Staggering Song", as that is the name of the song. If you search "Monosugoi Ikioide Keine ga Monosugoi Uta" in Google you only get one video of it on the first page, while if you Google "Keine's Staggering Song" you get three videos and multiple links to the lyrics（ΦωΦ）

kamisamaaa wrote:

挖 发现你和我做了一首歌！
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/130092 你看这个
等我回家给你送个mod~

rinsukir wrote:

m4m

[Easy]
00:10:568 - kiai意义不明 kiai喷泉,跟Lunatic一样
00:16:068 (1) - 滑条尾描点出界 Fixed.
00:32:068 (1) - 88|320 或者把三角弄好点 不太懂前面的坐标..但是重新摆了一下位置
00:36:068 (2,3) - easy最好不要出现锐角的flow(? 后面不再提 没问题的,Slider尾部可以直接甩尾移到note来
00:52:068 (2) - 224|203 顺便不做blanket? 好!
01:39:401 (3) - 尾巴出界 Fixed.
02:34:235 (1) - easy这样放太难Ctrl+G改了
02:54:768 - 这里的kiai意义不明
03:02:735 (3) - 怎么变速了fixed,来自Lunatic 难度的无用绿线,感谢找到这个...这个点真是很难发现


[Lunatic]
EDIT: 对不起 我以后再也不敢乱说话 请当我什么都没说 串图很好很完美 加油你一定能rank.
._.我还没来得及回...刚才在IRC mod,切出来一看到心都凉了.. 然后突然又被edit惹.._(:з」∠)_

Goodluck~

Xinely wrote:

i guess a testplay and little mod for Lunatic diff here

• 
  General

1. you can use AR 3 for Easy to have better spread with other diffs
   sure

little irc mod Insane diff and continue the mod below this log

10:16 Oracle: a little sad ;w;
10:16 Xinely: Q_Q
10:17 Oracle: i don't even know
10:17 Oracle: he just left these words with no further explanation
10:17 Xinely: usually newbie's problem on their first map is flow ><
10:17 Oracle: if you check my Lunatic diff
10:17 Oracle: can you tell me if it really needs a remap ;w;
10:17 Xinely: let me see
10:17 *Xinely is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/350132 Nanahira - Monosugoi Ikioide Keine ga Monosugoi Uta [Lunatic]]
10:17 Oracle: i'm not so confident about my flow
10:18 Oracle: by they're not so bad imo
10:18 Xinely: 00:03:401 (5) - aaa maybe try to move the tail around 236,168? flow seems better
10:18 Oracle: a little hard since the song contains tons of 1/4
10:18 Oracle: sorry about that
10:19 Oracle: yeah cool!!
10:19 Xinely: 00:03:151 - you can add note here because vocal hehe
10:20 Oracle: i mainly follow the drums and guitar in this part
10:20 Oracle: as you can see it's a 1/2 full fill
10:21 Xinely: 00:08:568 (4) - i'm kinda confuse to read this circle.. aaa use NC instead?
10:21 Oracle: it's a back and forth jump
10:22 Oracle: i'll add NC!!:)
10:22 Xinely: 00:09:735 (3) - hmm i prefer to make a little jump here to emphasize the vocal. move to 238,256?
10:23 Oracle: yes
10:23 Oracle: and i fixed the blanket
10:24 Xinely: damn is this your first map?
10:25 Oracle: yes..
10:25 Oracle: in fact it's first for ranked
10:25 Oracle: i've made like 3 more before. for fun
10:25 Xinely: but flow seems like my 9th ranked map asdf asdf
10:26 Xinely: other word it's nice
10:26 Oracle: the modder said the flow is bad
10:26 Oracle: and too many streams
10:26 Oracle: jumps are not epic and boring
10:26 Oracle: remap
10:26 Oracle: _(:з」∠)_
10:26 Xinely: streams for standard is fun ``
10:26 Oracle: I'm not even mad
10:27 Xinely: for jumps aren't epic. i kinda agree
10:27 Xinely: here
10:27 Oracle: Is this really need a remap?
10:27 Oracle: 02:50:735 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) -
10:27 Oracle: this jump is proved to be epic
10:27 Xinely: 00:28:401 (2) - because there is a loud sound until you gave finish sound on it. should be increase the distance here. try to move 196,88
10:27 Oracle: kind of stolen from cRyo's mapset
10:27 Xinely: 00:28:735 (3) - if you fixed from previous. move to 192,360 there
10:28 Xinely: but it's nice asdf
10:28 Oracle: o.o
10:28 Oracle: ill try
10:29 Xinely: 00:33:401 (1,2,3,4) - jumps like this pattern are nice for playing. just saying :3
10:29 Xinely: 00:34:901 (2,3) - i have an idea for make jump here. move the (2) to 176,44 and ctrl+G the (3)
10:29 Oracle: the only nice pattern by myself lol
10:30 Oracle: let me try the loud sound one first~
10:30 Xinely: aaa it's nice asdf. okay i'll wait you for response about 2 mods that i gave you first
10:30 Oracle: 00:28:068 (1,2,3) -
10:30 Oracle: that's nice
10:30 Oracle: applied
10:32 Oracle: 00:35:401 (4,5) -
10:32 Oracle: if i do this, there will be an anti jump 4-5..
10:33 Xinely: eh i don't say to change it >_<
10:33 Oracle: 0.0
10:34 Oracle: i don't get it
10:34 Xinely: 00:34:901 (2,3) - just this pattern. (2) move to 176,44 and do a ctrl+G for (3) to make a jump ><
10:34 Xinely: ups not 44 but y:64
10:36 Xinely: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1247480 pattern should be like this ><
10:36 Oracle: let me test it
10:36 Oracle: looks awesome though!
10:36 Xinely: 00:36:401 (3,4) - you can make a better jump here example : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1247473 :3
10:36 Oracle: kind of hard to keep the combo
10:37 Xinely: if you feel hard to make ^ this pattern, i'll give the code
10:37 Oracle: i only did it once in like ,7 tries
10:37 Xinely: aa because Lunatic/Insane diff should have many jumps that it's interesting to play >3<
10:38 Oracle: i don't know if that's too annoying lol
10:38 Oracle: since my skill level is just enough to do the current lunatic
10:38 Xinely: nope it will be interesting, trust me >3<
10:38 Oracle: yes, maybe you noticed. The calm parts are similar
10:39 Oracle: 00:24:068 - this part and 01:29:401 -
10:39 Oracle: maybe that's boring?
10:39 Xinely: hmm just keep it. too many jumps or jumps everywhere is really hard too
10:40 Xinely: we need jumps but we need normal spacing too for relax our hand ><
10:40 Oracle: 00:36:401 (3,4) - this one is nice
10:40 Oracle: i will try to do this
10:40 Xinely: if you're feel hard to make it (actually i'm need to remove the slider first and make by my own lol) just tell me and i'll send the code to your pm
10:41 Oracle: i don't know how to input code TvT
10:41 Oracle: can you puush me the slider line?
10:42 Oracle: i mean, the white line and the point which shape the slider
10:42 Xinely: it's code x.x
10:42 Xinely: i'll teach you
10:42 Xinely: wait
10:42 Oracle: xinely sensei
10:43 Xinely: okay i sent it
10:43 Xinely: first, open your pm and copy the code
10:43 Oracle: done
10:44 Xinely: and then go to http://puu.sh/6jc1x.png this and choose open .osu in notepad
10:44 Oracle: done!
10:44 Xinely: wait SS uploading
10:45 Xinely: after it look the hitobjects http://puu.sh/6jc5P.png <-- this
10:45 Oracle: yes
10:45 Xinely: first line. you see 344,56,1402,1,0,0:0:0:0: right?
10:45 Oracle: yep
10:46 Xinely: the first one (344) is x coordinate, second one (56) is y coordinate. other word they are code for placement of object
10:46 Xinely: and the third one is 1402 it's timing of the object (ms)
10:46 Oracle: oh i see
10:46 Oracle: that's clear
10:47 Oracle: do i need to add the code in order of timing ?
10:47 Xinely: nah now the code that i gave up, the timing is 36735 right?
10:47 Xinely: aaa yap but not add, change it
10:47 Oracle: oh i get it
10:47 Oracle: find 36735 and change it
10:48 Xinely: nice
10:48 Xinely: after find it, remove the old one and replace the new code that i gave up
10:48 Xinely: after that choose file on top, and save
10:48 Xinely: escape from editor , and open the diff again
10:48 Xinely: should be work \:D/
10:48 Oracle: perfect!
10:49 Xinely: www
10:49 Oracle: wwww
10:49 Oracle: xinely sensei sugoi
10:50 Xinely: oh yeah the change of code can't worked if you're already changing from compose before try to change the code like i teach to you >_<
10:50 Oracle: the blanket can be fixed a bit
10:50 Xinely: oh since it's working now
10:50 Xinely: let's continue
10:50 Oracle: the blanket seems unperfect
10:50 Oracle: i will work on it later
10:51 Xinely: okay
10:51 Xinely: yeah i'm bad for make a blanket lol
10:51 Oracle: let's continue
10:51 Oracle: btw, I just keep the overall map like this
10:51 Oracle: is it okay?
10:51 Xinely: 00:39:068 (2,3) - same as previous. increase the distance for make a little jump here. try move (2) to 224,292 and (3) to 0,212
10:52 Oracle: really don't want to remap my ideas
10:52 Xinely: it's okay imo, flow seems nice tbh
10:52 Oracle: i will proably do the same thing if i remap
10:52 Oracle: lol
10:52 Oracle: 'cause that's what i feel from the song
10:52 Xinely: just need to add more jumps for emphasize the music especially loud music like cymbal >w<
10:52 Xinely: you're did a nice job here :3
10:52 Oracle: okay!!
10:52 Oracle: i'm bad on placing jumps
10:53 Xinely: that's why i mod often to point make jumps :3
10:53 Xinely: wut i mod, my mod xinely baka =3=
10:53 Oracle: not baka =3=
10:53 Xinely: xinely eror x.x
10:54 Oracle: 02:50:735 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - this is probably the only jump i have for increasing tension of music
10:54 Xinely: okay i guess finish until this is fine. i will continue this to my mod x.x
10:54 Xinely: aa yeah the jumps are nice here
[/code]

• 
  Insane

1. 00:39:735 (1) - i'm not really like 0,56x distance here. feel like anti jump, try to move this to 96,296 and 00:39:901 (2) - 120,208 for solution?cool
2. 00:41:568 (2) - i know you want make a jump here but from the last flow is curving and suddenly from this circle become straight/diagonal. i uncomfortable with it. try move this to 512,200 instead?yes
3. 00:45:235 - i suggest to add note here to follow the vocal (sa) herei'm following the drums here
4. 00:44:401 (3) - i guess you need to add more anchor in 504,208 for smoother flow http://puu.sh/6kfRm.jpg Fixed.
5. 00:45:068 (9) - i don't hear any cymbal sound here. remove the finish? feels better with finish imo._.
6. 00:45:735 (2) - the previous one (1) is straight and suddenly curve slider in this slider. imo flow seems different and feel bad. try this ?the flow is okay~
   SPOILER

   
7. 00:47:401 (1) - try to avoid the overlap with 00:47:068 (4) - with move the circle (1) to 280,88. better visual :3then the jump will be awkward orz. keep it for now
8. 00:48:568 (3) - maybe NC this circle to warning about 1/2 jump that i can't read it at first time >_<will fix this if other modders also point this out.
9. 00:57:401 (1) - need finish to emphasize the cymbal sound sure, can barely hear it though lol
10. 01:30:068 (4) - try to avoid the overlap for better visual http://puu.sh/6kgTW.jpgchanged
11. 01:31:401 (9) - make a blanket jump better here. just move this slider to 280,104 yes,and changed the slider a bit for even better blanket!!
12. 01:40:735 (4) - same as above, blanket jump can make neater pattern here. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1249787i kind of prefer the overlap here which gives a variety of patterns!
13. 01:42:068 (4) - reason same as above https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1249795let's keep 2 of these ;w;
14. 01:44:401 (2,3) - increase the distance for making jumps as i told you in IRC C:fixed!
15. 01:50:568 - same as 00:45:235 - same
16. 02:02:735 (1) - finish for emphasize the cymbal sound yes
17. 02:17:734 (2) - i prefer to ctrl+G this for better flow looks good but this loop pattern is intentional
18. 02:18:401 (4) - if you agree with above, ctrl+G this too for consistency flow and if you change this one,02:18:401 (4,1) - broken flow
19. 02:51:901 (8) - NC it because new pattern's shape? i said i don't want to force player to spilt the pattern. but now i myself always miss here._. so added.
    Nothing to say, flows are nice to play

Chinese too OP xinely modding too OP
Good Luck ~

Best mod ever received. I wish i coule give you 10kds

Sweet Vanilla wrote:

因为咱的那首歌最近有些大变动> < 这个M4M先延后一会 等改好后再来mod下 先占坑~Sry

liangv587 wrote:

easy

感觉没必要STR2tick的声音很有必要,这曲子节奏太密集,没tick很空洞
00:18:068 (2) - 掰弯？okay
00:22:735 (2) - 延长1/2no,听起来不太好
01:01:401 (3,4) - 这两个这样比较酱油，没存在感，可以换个方式，比如平行 贪吃蛇..好接
01:12:068 (1,2) - ^ ^
01:37:401 (1,2) - 你是想对直么 不是,我想要一个比较平滑的移动曲线
02:21:402 (4) - 可以掰弯 好! 宇宙第一直滑条
03:06:735 (1,2,1) -

感觉弄成这样的比较好

还是算了吧..超大钝角flow,不太舒服
03:17:401 (1,2,3,4) - 可以斜点 偏好正的
03:40:735 (2) - 如果不是对直的弄大概60°o.o不太懂你意思
03:53:401 (3,1) - 可以包一下感觉这种overlap嵌在里面也行

lunatic

nice thanks><
01:01:401 (1) - 这类似的几处可以加点变速 已经...是加速了

就这样吧XD

1. tags suggetion:
   Starry Presto

1. 00:56:068 (3) - NC?
2. 01:28:901~01:29:068- how about adding short slider?
3. 02:54:068 (1,2) - I prefer this
   
4. 03:09:068 (1) - start at 03:09:401

1. 00:05:901 (4,5,6,7,8) - move to x:365 y:155 (center of the pentagon 00:04:901 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - )
2. 00:46:901 (2,3,4,1) - avoid overlap
3. 01:39:235 (3) - x:334 y:171 (stack correctly)

1. 01:29:068 (2) - remove clap?
2. 02:01:068 (5) - how about stack on the head of 01:58:735 (1) - ?
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   266,203,118735,6,0,B|240:151|240:151|184:207|115:164,2,180,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   307,315,120068,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   390,228,120401,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   348,115,120734,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   266,203,121068,1,8,0:0:0:0:

3. 02:54:735 (1) - move to 02:54:568

1. 00:10:068 (3,4) - これは00:09:401 (1,2) - と同じ配置を持ってくるのが良いような気がしました
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:36:068 (1) - Ctrl+G. hard-diffなのでたまにjumpを入れると面白いかなーと
3. 00:52:568 (5) - ^
4. 01:04:068 (4,5,6,7) - 同じ音なのでDSはそろえた方が良い気がします　（>1.0xでそろえてもおもしろいかも）
5. 01:18:735 (1) - spinnerの直前にnoteを置いた方が良いと思います
   
6. 02:12:568 (6) - blanket the end of 02:12:068 (5) -
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 02:34:735- start break time
8. 03:43:735 (9,1) - avoid overlap. sliderの角度を変えるだけで避けられると思います

liangv587 wrote:

hard

以前一直没注意过这个问题，另外英语很拙计请见谅
00:11:568 (3) - change to 1/6 fixed
00:11:901 (4) - change to 1/2 slider not fixed, since the next is a break time
00:34:068 (3) - divided into two (1/4X4) not fixed , Since it is a place to heap up
02:12:568 (6) - blanket not fixed, blanket is speed killer. I think it not best
02:14:735 (6) - ^ ^
02:29:235 (9) - move to 410,173 fixed

RandomEffect wrote:

[Sherry's Hard]

1. 00:10:068 (3,4) - これは00:09:401 (1,2) - と同じ配置を持ってくるのが良いような気がしました fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:36:068 (1) - Ctrl+G. hard-diffなのでたまにjumpを入れると面白いかなーと not fixed いいアイディアだと思いましたが、試してみて、次のリズムが狂う気がするので～
3. 00:52:568 (5) - ^ ^
4. 01:04:068 (4,5,6,7) - 同じ音なのでDSはそろえた方が良い気がします　（>1.0xでそろえてもおもしろいかも） fixed
5. 01:18:735 (1) - spinnerの直前にnoteを置いた方が良いと思います changed 折り返しを延ばして変わりにスピナーを長めにしました
   
6. 02:12:568 (6) - blanket the end of 02:12:068 (5) - not fixed 変化がいまいちわからなかったので・・
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 02:34:735- start break time not fixed なんか変えれなかったので　あと余りきにならなかったので
8. 03:43:735 (9,1) - avoid overlap. sliderの角度を変えるだけで避けられると思います　changed 後半のリズムを少し簡単にしたのでここも一緒に変えました

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~
Thank you for M4M request!

[General]

1. tags suggetion:
   Starry Presto added

[Easy]

1. 00:56:068 (3) - NC? sure
2. 01:28:901~01:29:068- how about adding short slider? yes
3. 02:54:068 (1,2) - I prefer this changed
   
4. 03:09:068 (1) - start at 03:09:401 changed.

[Insane]

1. 00:05:901 (4,5,6,7,8) - move to x:365 y:155 (center of the pentagon 00:04:901 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - ) perfect
2. 00:46:901 (2,3,4,1) - avoid overlap fixed.
3. 01:39:235 (3) - x:334 y:171 (stack correctly) fixed.

Nanahira is so cute<3 Agree!<333
~Good Luck~

1. I recommend add the silent soft-sliderslide.wav because Easy diff have S:C1 place.
2. Uncheck letterbox during breaks.

1. 00:12:068 (1) - Try to add finish this spinner.
2. 00:23:568 (1,2) - Add soft-finish to slider head.
3. 00:24:068 (1) - Add finish
4. 00:29:068 (1) - (nazi) move to 2grid left. 00:29:068 (1,2,3) - current spacing is a little ugly.
5. 00:30:735 (1,2,3,4) - Rhythm suggestion. follow the vocal pattern.
   
   
   SPOILER

   

   72,64,30735,6,0,P|40:100|44:240,1,180
   192,308,31235,2,0,P|260:284|312:172,1,180

6. 00:31:735 (3) - Change 1/2 slider? for vocal.
7. 00:36:401 (1) - Remove NC.
8. 00:37:735 (5) - Add NC? cuz since the spacing changes from here.
9. 01:11:068 (2,3) - a little ugly this overlapping sliders. try this.
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 01:29:401 (1,2,3) - hm, like this flow? more good enjoyable for me.
    
    SPOILER

    
11. 01:40:235 (2) - (nazi) 2grid down this note. Reason is same 00:29:068 (1) - the suggestion.
12. 03:00:068 (11) - Add NC for changing slider speed. and This slider has many red point. so might unrankable it. but idk about that lol
13. 03:18:735 (2) - Add soft-finish. Volume is around 30% best for me.
14. 03:20:068 (2) - ^
15. 03:31:735 (5) - Add NC.

1. 01:02:485 (4) - 音楽にfitしてないのでこのnoteは削除した方がいいと思いました。
2. 01:18:401 (3) - 少しスペーシングが近いので1/4と勘違いしてしまうかも？　1.00xくらいはほしいです。
3. 01:34:735 (1) - whistleよりもfinishが合いそうです。
4. 02:53:401 (1) - 02:52:068 (5) - ここにfinish入れるなら、シンバルの目立つこちらにも同様にfinishを入れるべきではないでしょうか？
5. 03:18:735 (5) - 終端のwhistleは合っていないように感じました。
   

1. 00:08:735 (4) - Add clap instead of whistle to slider end.
2. 01:01:735 (4,6) - Add whistle? really fit the song imo.
3. 01:17:735 (4,6) - Remove clap. sound too loud and this part is quiet.
4. 01:29:068 (2) - Remove clap from the note.
5. 01:34:735 - Please down the volume this part. the part is too quiet, clap sound is too noisy. so you shoule down the volume imo.
6. 02:07:068 (4,6) - same as comment 01:01:735 (4,6) -
7. 02:23:068 (4,6) - same as comment 01:17:735 (4,6) -
8. 02:52:734 (4) - Add clap instead of whistle to slider end.
9. 02:54:735 (1) - Really weird this rhythm. so like this? 02:54:067 (2) - this slider, changing of slider end 02:54:568 - here.
   
   
10. 03:27:068 (4,6) - same as comment 01:01:735 (4,6) -
11. 03:34:735 (2,3) - Remove clap from slider end.

1. Slider tick rate 1 -> 2 pls
2. 02:48:735 (1) - Remove NC.

1. Slider tick rate 2 -> 1 pls. idk why did you set str2 only Easy diff ._.

Guy wrote:

Hi! for m4m :3

Red : You must be fix.
Blue : You should be fix.
Black : Just suggestion.


[General]

1. I recommend add the silent soft-sliderslide.wav because Easy diff have S:C1 place. Don't know where to find one ;_;
2. Uncheck letterbox during breaks. Okay!

[Lunatic]

1. 00:12:068 (1) - Try to add finish this spinner.added
2. 00:23:568 (1,2) - Add soft-finish to slider head. cool
3. 00:24:068 (1) - Add finish It used to have finish before. But i removed it because it feels too noisy.
4. 00:29:068 (1) - (nazi) move to 2grid left. 00:29:068 (1,2,3) - current spacing is a little ugly.Fixed. That's my mistake on spacing lol
5. 00:30:735 (1,2,3,4) - Rhythm suggestion. follow the vocal pattern. Very cool idea. Changed.
   
   
   SPOILER

   

   72,64,30735,6,0,P|40:100|44:240,1,180
   192,308,31235,2,0,P|260:284|312:172,1,180

6. 00:31:735 (3) - Change 1/2 slider? for vocal.can't find a good pattern for this slider..
7. 00:36:401 (1) - Remove NC. fixed.
8. 00:37:735 (5) - Add NC? cuz since the spacing changes from here.ok
9. 01:11:068 (2,3) - a little ugly this overlapping sliders. try this. fixed.
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 01:29:401 (1,2,3) - hm, like this flow? more good enjoyable for me.yes!
    
    SPOILER

    
11. 01:40:235 (2) - (nazi) 2grid down this note. Reason is same 00:29:068 (1) - the suggestion. fixed.
12. 03:00:068 (11) - Add NC for changing slider speed. and This slider has many red point. so might unrankable it. but idk about that lol I'll go and ask a BAT about this.
13. 03:18:735 (2) - Add soft-finish. Volume is around 30% best for me.used 35%
14. 03:20:068 (2) - ^^
15. 03:31:735 (5) - Add NC.added.

[Easy]

1. Slider tick rate 1 -> 2 plsit's already 2
2. 02:48:735 (1) - Remove NC.i want to keep this

Good luck!

smallboat wrote:

Hi,Oracle, In-game req. 來MOD了。

1. Red words: Should be fix it.
2. Blue words : I recommended suggestion.
3. Black words : In my personal opinion.

[General]

Lunatic的widescreen沒勾到，勾一下吧。

[Easy]

其實可以試試照著弧度來擺放，
這樣會顯得比較平滑舒服些，
例如00:25:401 (2,3,1) - 這邊可以想說可以複製2，把1刪掉貼上，再使用對稱快捷+個折返，最後就變這樣:

SPOILER

虽然好但是无法把flow引到下方的note

00:18:735 (1,2,3) - 之前有講過這邊放單點還蠻奇怪的感覺，前面都是用滑的，這邊突然變點擊，建議還是00:16:068 (1) 換成這折返比較好?主要是想利用一下上面的空间
00:42:735 (1,2,3) - 怎沒配音效? 這邊跟00:32:068 (1,2,3) 是同樣音軌有+clap，這邊竟然沒加。要不然32068那邊都不加音效也可行。加了,本来是想跟lunatic一致的
00:45:401 (1,2) - 可以試試上下對稱好
00:50:735 (1,2) - 看看兩個要不要互相Blanket。现在这样也蛮好看的
00:57:401 (1) - 間距差到快0.20x也差蠻多。开始新的一段了,间隔这么长应该不怕吧
01:34:735 (1,2) - 搞得對稱應該不錯，因為這樣看起來不太好看。柑橘还好
02:02:735 (1) - 間距。跟上面一样
02:17:402 (1,2,1) - 這三個稍微調一下移到右上角，因為使用ctrl+a這樣看，右上角有空洞。(別碰血條)稍微往下放了
02:40:401 (2,1,2) - 不覺得1放到內側，這樣圖形很不好看? (因為弧度內凹了)no idea
03:13:401 (2) - 照著間距放在(352|288)，因為這個放太下面了蠻奇怪的。因为没位置放后面的滑条1了;_;
03:57:401 (1) - 這個後面人聲沒了怎麼會拉這麼長? 結束點應該是03:59:735，因為人聲到這結束。 跟的不是人声而是那个背景效果音

中規中矩的ez不算太難。

Ikaros_F wrote:

Hello,from QQ
m4m

[Lunatic]
00:03:235 (4,6) - http://puu.sh/6mEPj 这样弄对称会好看很多吧 确实好,fixed.
00:05:901 (4,5,6,7,8) - http://puu.sh/6mEUx 我觉得放在中间会使谱面看起来太乱了还好,觉得不错
00:15:401 (7) - 00:15:735 (11) - 我觉得想这种地方应该有一个clap clap吵..
00:18:068 (5,6,7,8,9) - 这里5个全部加上clap感觉会爽一些 ^
00:24:735 (4) - http://puu.sh/6mF7c 可以想这样，把00:25:401 (1) - 包一下会好看一些赞
00:36:401 (3,4) - 没包好应该好点了
00:59:401 (9) - 稍微吧这个做的弯一点吧直接做成直的了
02:03:735 (5,1,2,3) - 红色到黄色的地方转的角度有点大不太好看啊，建议重新排一下，圆滑的会爽一些试了好多次,打起来没问题的
03:17:568 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 感觉有些奇怪._.03:18:735 (2) - 这个有些莫名 这里跟的音不同了,03:18:735 (2)是填节奏
00:09:568 (2,3) - 可以包一下包了啊
00:14:735 (1,2,3,4,5) - 其实我觉得这样反而不好看 no change
00:16:068 (1,2,3) - 滑条弄弯吧no
00:16:735 (4) - 这里是不是有whistle忘记加了呢没有 whistle都加在两个尾音
01:16:235 (1,2,3) - 01:16:568 (4,5,6) - 还是不要三连了，换成1/8的回转滑条合适一些不行 overmap

差不多就这些了
祝你好运

hoshisorakiseki wrote:

m4m什么的...
for Oracle：
感觉这首歌下soft音效不太好，节奏比较激烈。
kiai3跟两个gd不一致，可以参考一下别人是怎么下kiai的
01:34:736 - 如果按照前面说改音效的话，这个绿线保持soft音效

难度：Easy
slider tick rate-1需要tick音来填充节奏
00:13:568 - 这里绿线的hitsound音效提高一点吵
00:56:068 (1,1) - 感觉前面的circle改成spinner然后再后面的slider头部结束，再在原slider末下一个circle比较好我想保持跟lunatic一致
02:01:401 (1,1) - 同00:56:068 (1,1)^

难度：Lunatic
果然东方类的音乐都很难overmap
00:34:068 (5,7,9,11) - +clap
00:37:401 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这里感觉不出要跳
00:44:735 (5) - +whistle好
01:59:735 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 这个梗不知道会不会被水果党骂，如果是ctb的话，原地不动就全接下来了不会的,送分人人爱
02:23:068 (2,3,4,1) - 基本同上^
03:00:068 (1) - 这个有争议，不过也不好说问了BAT,说没问题
03:08:068 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 直线......我做standard,不考虑ctb

加油

Guy wrote:

[Sherry's Hard]

1. 01:02:485 (4) - 音楽にfitしてないのでこのnoteは削除した方がいいと思いました。 fixed
2. 01:18:401 (3) - 少しスペーシングが近いので1/4と勘違いしてしまうかも？　1.00xくらいはほしいです。 [/color] fixed
3. 01:34:735 (1) - whistleよりもfinishが合いそうです。 [/color] fixed
4. 02:53:401 (1) - 02:52:068 (5) - ここにfinish入れるなら、シンバルの目立つこちらにも同様にfinishを入れるべきではないでしょうか？ [/color] fixed
5. 03:18:735 (5) - 終端のwhistleは合っていないように感じました。 [/color] fixed
   

Ikaros_F wrote:

[Sherry's Hard]
i think ar8 will better fixed. i think so too. but it very Hard..
00:49:901 (2,3) - i think it can blanket better. not fixed
02:17:401 (5) - add a NC because of the slider'speed change, it can convenient player read map. fixed
02:46:901 (6) - i think it have whistle in white line fixed
02:54:568 (6,7,8) - add clap may better not fixed
03:06:735 (1,3) - can blanket better not fixed
03:22:068 (4) - do like this? →http://puu.sh/6mGdU not fixed, it so Hard

hoshisorakiseki wrote:

難易度：Sherry's Hard
下手の日本語、すみません
これ譜面はいいですね
02:06:735 (1,2,3,4) - 4x1ヒット-->4x3ヒット not fixed ,　連打がくどくなってしまうので

1. 00:30:735 (2) - Personally, I would go for something like this instead:
   
   Alternatively, you could shorten the slider 2 by 1/2 to match its end with the vocals.
   
2. 00:41:401 (2) - Same as above.
3. 00:46:735 (2) - Shorten slider by 1/2
4. 00:48:068 (1) - Shorten slider by 1/2 and add a note at 00:49:401
5. 00:52:068 (2) - I would shorten the slider length by 1/2 and make it reverse once
6. 00:54:068 (2) - Move it to 00:53:901 or turn 00:53:401 (1) into a slider with length 3/2 and perhaps add a note at 00:54:401 instead. Another option would be another 3/2 reverse slider
   
   If you want to fix any of the things above, most of the same counts for section 01:29:401 - 02:01:401
   
7. 02:36:401 (2) - Shorten by 1/2
8. 02:41:735 (2) - Same as above
   
9. 02:45:735 - Add a note
10. 02:47:401 (4) - Shorten slider to 1/2 to put emphasis on the snare
11. 02:48:068 (1) - Remove this note and add one at 02:48:401 instead to match the snare
    
12. 03:05:401 (1) - I'm not a fan of the stacked notes, I'd turn it into a 2/2 slider that reverses two times and ends on 03:06:401
13. 03:08:735 (2) - Turn it into a fourth slider
14. 03:27:401 (4) - Align this slider's position to be either an extension of slider 3 or right under it?
15. 03:56:068 (2) - Expand slider by 1/2

Redon wrote:

Hello! This is my first attempt at modding a map. And it's hard to find anything wrong with this one So all but one of these points are suggestions on the rhythm of note placement and how I would do it, were it my map. I hope they're helpful in some way.

[Easy]

1. 00:30:735 (2) - Personally, I would go for something like this instead:
   
   Alternatively, you could shorten the slider 2 by 1/2 to match its end with the vocals
   
2. 00:41:401 (2) - Same as above.
3. 00:46:735 (2) - Shorten slider by 1/2
4. 00:48:068 (1) - Shorten slider by 1/2 and add a note at 00:49:401
5. 00:52:068 (2) - I would shorten the slider length by 1/2 and make it reverse once
6. 00:54:068 (2) - Move it to 00:53:901 or turn 00:53:401 (1) into a slider with length 3/2 and perhaps add a note at 00:54:401 instead. Another option would be another 3/2 reverse slider
   
   If you want to fix any of the things above, most of the same counts for section 01:29:401 - 02:01:401
   
7. 02:36:401 (2) - Shorten by 1/2
8. 02:41:735 (2) - Same as above
   
9. 02:45:735 - Add a note
10. 02:47:401 (4) - Shorten slider to 1/2 to put emphasis on the snare
11. 02:48:068 (1) - Remove this note and add one at 02:48:401 instead to match the snare
    
12. 03:05:401 (1) - I'm not a fan of the stacked notes, I'd turn it into a 2/2 slider that reverses two times and ends on 03:06:401
13. 03:08:735 (2) - Turn it into a fourth slider
14. 03:27:401 (4) - Align this slider's position to be either an extension of slider 3 or right under it?
15. 03:56:068 (2) - Expand slider by 1/2

Feverie wrote:

[Easy]

03:50:068 (2) - Try changing the End of the Sliderchanged a bit.

Good Luck.

I tried. But I am not good at modding Fast maps :/

Akabato wrote:

hi~M4M here~

[General]
- AIBAT显示所有难度的kiai time不一致，normal和hard各不相同而且与easy,insane不同，考虑与两位GD mapper商议一下让kiai time保持一致？
- 全难度audio lead-in均为1402ms，低于要求最低值2000，考虑在.osu文件里手动设置？guest可以有不同kiai. anyway,will talk about this with sherry & Awaken

[Easy]
- 建议slider tick rate减1。看你上面回复说是要照顾节奏，但个人认为slider tick本身并不是击打物件，声音也很低（不使用custom的slider tick音效时），所以似乎以tick来使节奏充实的意义并不太大，而且现在的情况，很多靠外的tick小圈都压在note的白边上，看上去也不甚美观，所以诚心建议slider tick rate -1;w;如果再来一个modder提我就考虑改掉..
00:02:735 (2) - 这个建议复制1之后ctrl+j再移动，不要像现在这样转过一定角度，即 http://puu.sh/6n7sE.jpg 感觉这样flow好啊orz
00:06:735 (1) - 可以稍往左上挪挪，有点太低了恩稍微往上了
00:09:401 (1) - 貌似出格了，尾部的锚点已在格外？保险起见，可以稍往里一些fixed.
00:10:568 这个kiai是想做喷泉效果吗？但一般要求kiai time须在重音(downbeat)起始，可以考虑把这个喷泉移到00:10:735或者干脆不要。后面以及Lunatic难度似乎还有同类问题，请用AIBAT自行检查一下～那是常规kiai的要求,我觉得喷泉应该不用,因为这个音堪比重音..
00:12:068 (1) - 让这个转盘在00:13:068结束，然后在00:13:401加个circle？EZ难度,转盘后这么近放circle,会难打的
00:52:068 (2) - 可以挪到（248，216），这样它跟前面1的头和后面的1(circle)多少会有包的感觉，看着整洁一点我是想让00:53:401 (1) - 跟00:50:735 (1) - stack
00:56:068 (1) - 虽然是长白线，但感觉可以remove NC？没必要,想突出重音
01:02:735 (1,2) - 实心锚点往滑条中部挪，看着好看一些changed a bit.
02:01:401 (1) - 同样remove NC？同样
02:24:068 (1) - ^^
03:09:068 add note?还是不了
03:34:735 (1) - 最低难度不太推荐使用超过一次折返的滑条，考虑换成一次折返的滑条加一个circle？一个大丈夫吧;w;

[Lunatic]
- OD个人建议到6，8也略凶残点……6太送啦
00:08:068 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这一组摆得略乱，既然是呈五点分布式不如考虑摆成五边形再各种重复来回跳？音乐是4组1/2note,所以做成4次的往返跳
00:14:735 (1,2,3,4,5) - 鉴于之后再没有同类pattern而且这样叠也不怎么好看，考虑就普通的原地stack五连？我想扭一下把flow转到后面的方向啊_(:з」∠)_
01:16:901 (7) - 这里叠得不怎么好读……建议让它的尾巴冲右上跟前面两个三连一样形状.好看
01:49:985 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这个串摆得略歪，建议善用compose菜单下的convert slider to stream功能，先拉出大致符合flow的滑条，选中再进行此命令来造出较整洁的串fixed spacing
02:47:568 (4) - 考虑放在02:46:901 (10)所在的位置？这一组跳也是有点乱keep this
02:48:068 (1,2,3,4) - 同样有些random，考虑摆成平行四边形？1→2, 3→4的spacing渐增

that's all. GL~ >.<

Rakuen wrote:

M4M o~

My map: CLIFF EGDE feat. Nakamura Maiko - Endless Tears

[Easy]
Try AR:4yep!
00:32:068 (1) - Try this:niceee

image

00:57:401 (1) - If can use 1.2x DS?empty time is long so not gonna be a problem.
01:37:401 (1) - Try this, or arrange a little to make better cursor movementchanged a bit.

image

01:51:735 (2) - X:16 Y:180fixed
01:52:068 (3) - X:60 Y:252fixed
02:02:735 (1) - If can use 1.2x DS toolike i mentioned before
02:21:400 (4) - Make this a little more like this shapechanged
02:56:068 - There's no KIAI here for other diffs, try to make them samei guess it's okay..

image

03:06:068 (2) - Try stacking this to 03:04:068 (1) -looks good
^ Arrange 03:06:735 (1) - for a bit OR stack it with 03:06:068 (2) - arranged, i never do stack with continous notes in Easy
03:22:735 - KIAI here, other diffs do nope, my diff don't have that.
03:34:735 (1) - This may be a little hard cuz it reverses 2 times, try changing it to 2 slidersit feels awesome ;w;
03:53:401 (3) - If possible don't stack this with 03:54:735 (1) - i consider this as a kind of blanket lol
03:56:901 (3) - NC, the slider length is different and it's placed at red tick not really needed



[Lunatic]
00:11:568 (4) - NC
00:14:068 (5,6,7,8) - Try 0.8x DS to make it look same like 00:15:401 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - I want to have various patterns!
00:47:651 - Circle here for constant with 00:46:901 (2,3,4) - true,but the current one is okay imo
00:52:735 (1) - Remove NC (optional)NC for seperate that jump
00:53:068 (3) - NC here for heavy vocalfeels like abuse NC
00:55:735 (11) - NC, there's a brief break at 00:56:235 - (optional)that stream is a whole
00:58:818 (2,3) - Distance snap of this circle is a bit different, make them constant with 0.7xthanks for noticing this! my mistake xD
00:58:318 (4) - ^ maybe this toothey look fine, the reason of this is i'm using grid snap when placing this stream.
01:03:568 (3,4,5) - May look a bit squeezed at here (optional)yes fixed
01:07:401 (4) - NCno
01:16:568 (4) - NC (optional, same as 02:21:568 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - )no spacing change so no
01:16:901 (7) - NClooks abusive
01:34:235 (4) - Remove this circle, looks extraplz listen to the drums
01:52:818 - A circle here, same as 00:47:651 - no
02:00:568 (5) - NC, my opinion onlyno need, consist spcaing and linear pattern
02:12:735 (4) - NCno
02:13:235 (6) - NC (optional, possibility for easier reading)no
02:22:401 (2) - NCno_(:з」∠)_
02:37:401 (1,2) - Make this not stacked to 02:37:735 (3) - it's already perfectly stacked!
02:43:401 (3,4,5) - Try this?keep it for now

image

02:46:735 (9) - NC and remove NC at 02:47:068 (1) - i put NC with spacing
02:54:401 (4) - Try X:244 Y:92i prefer stacking them
03:08:235 (2) - NCno
03:08:568 (5) - ^^
03:15:068 (1,1,1) - Remove NC may look better (optional)^
03:21:901 (3) - NC (optional)^
03:22:401 (5) - ^^
03:31:568 (4) - NC, density is differentno necessary imo..

Feverie wrote:

[Hard]
00:05:568 (5) - Maybe change the start of the Slider not fixed
01:47:235 (6) - Neaten up start of slider not fixed

Akabato wrote:

[Sherry's Hard]
00:02:735 add note here? cause 00:02:901 (1) - is not far from 00:02:235 (4) - ,kind of hard to read fixed
00:11:901 (4) - don't overlap？make it away from last note not fixed
00:42:401 (3) - make it blanket better with 00:41:901 (2)'s tail? changed
00:50:068 (3) - better blanket with 00:49:901 (2)? not fixed
02:10:735 (1) - move it to (360,60) to make a blanket pattern? fixed
02:15:401 (8) - make the slider's tail at (104,260) will look better imo not fixed

Rakuen wrote:

[Sherry's Hard]
00:02:735 - Add note not fixed
00:03:735 (4) - Ctrl+G not fixed , it hard
00:07:401 (3) - Blanket not fixed, not speed down
00:10:068 (3,4) - Swap their timing place not fixed
00:11:901 (4) - Don't stick with 00:11:568 (3) - , try putting at right side of it fixed
00:25:401 (1) - Blanket with 00:25:901 (2) - fixed
00:27:068 (2) - Ctrl+G　fixed
00:29:735 (2,3) - Try some claps here　fixed
00:34:068 (3) - Change into 2 slider with reverses　not fixed
00:53:401 (1) - Reduce 2 reverse, add circle at 00:53:735 - which stack on 00:53:901 (2) - not fixed
01:14:735 (3) - NC, jump NC fixed
01:16:901 (5) - This may make combo miss / stopped flow changed
01:42:735 (1) - Ctrl+G not fixed
01:58:735 (1) - Ctrl+G, I prefer stack not fixed
02:05:401 (1) - Ctrl+G not fixed
02:06:068 (3) - Blanket with 02:05:401 (1) - not fixed
02:12:568 (6) - Ctrl+G, better flow not fixed
02:54:568 (6) - NC for heavy sound (optional) fixed
02:55:568 (1) - Remove NC and NC at 02:56:068 (2) - fixed
^ KIAI should start at 02:56:068 - not fixed
03:06:735 (1,2) - Blanket changed
03:16:401 (2) - Put clap or something, whistle sounds tiny not fixed
03:17:068 (4) - ^ color=#FF0000]not fixed[/color]
03:22:068 (4) - Reduce 2 reverses, you can hear nothing sounds at 03:22:318 - with slower playback rate not fixed. it is using mishearing effect sound
03:34:735 (2) - NC, spacing goes different fixed
03:39:901 (1) - Remove NC, constant with 03:37:235 (5) - fixed
03:46:401 (1) - Remove NC, put at 03:46:901 (2) - not fixed

Sharlo wrote:

=A= 你这签名怎么回事！！

Sharlo wrote:

=A= 你这签名怎么回事！！

1. None 好谱子

1. 这个难度的spinner有些短了 都是4分拍
2. 02:22:066 - unsnap
3. 00:02:735 (2,1) - 这两个的形状和位置是不是可以考虑对称的情况
4. 00:40:068 (1,2) - ^
5. 01:34:735 (1,2) - ^
6. 02:06:735 (3,4) - ^
7. 00:06:735 (1) - 这个是不是都出去了 虽然aimod没说 的确有一小部分看不到了
8. 03:21:401 (2) - 这个尾巴也太靠边了
9. 03:40:735 (2,1) - 对在一条线上好看些
10. 03:48:735 (2,1) ^-

1. 01:36:901 (5) - 去掉clap
2. 01:37:401 (1) - ^
3. 01:38:068 (2) - ^
4. 02:18:401 (6) - move to X352 Y276
5. 02:36:735 (4) - 折返一次？ 后面很多 不喜欢Ignore
6. 03:40:068 (3) - 第四个点向下移动些
7. 03:48:068 (4,1) - 这个路径再对准一些吧 不然会很坑的

1. 00:23:568 - two circle here?
2. 00:24:401 (2,3) - 00:24:068 (1,2) - blanket better
3. 00:34:068 (3) - why not separate it into two slider like this 00:33:735 (2) -
4. 00:44:068 (1,2,3,4) - adjust its spacing ，I mean distance between 1slider's tail and 2's should be the same as 2-3 3-4
5. 00:49:901 (2,3) - blanket
6. 01:42:568 (8,1,2) - spacing
7. 02:08:735 (4,5) - symmetry?
8. 02:14:568 (5,6) - blanket
9. 02:17:401 (1) - why put a speed ​​change slider here?feel a bit unreasonable...well, you can ignore this~
10. 03:01:401 (1) - consider again? rhythm, put arrow at 03:01:693 -?
11. 03:14:068 (4) - change into one circle+short slider?
12. 03:41:235 (8,1) - blanket
13. U may put some jump into this diff :C

1. 00:13:401 - 这个地方spinner不加也要把circle加上去吧 这是长白线 是开头 不加节奏把握不好的
2. 00:14:735 (1,2,3,4,5) - 坏梗 好猎奇
3. 这里试试这样 你这个太鬼畜
   00:50:068 (1,2,3,4) - 去掉00:49:735 (1,2) - 向后移动到红线 前面加两个circle连成串 调整位置
4. 01:07:901 (6) - 这个要去掉 虽然背景音里面有这个震动 但是玩家的节奏感更重要些 后面还有好多
5. 01:16:901 (7) - 可以都是三连 太鬼畜
6. 01:29:735 (3,4) - 01:31:068 (3,4) - spacing
7. 02:22:235 (1,2,3) - 这也很难...特别是哪个3
8. 02:40:318 (2,3) - 坏梗
9. 03:31:568 (4,1,2) - 这里也是一样 为什么这样不太好 因为这样很难玩HD的03:31:901 (2,2) - 这里还有藏折返箭头的嫌疑
10. 连打和跳做的真心好 就是太鬼畜:C