Skillet - Yours To Hold · forum

0_o

Joined December 2008

Topic Starter

0_o 2009-09-16T16:15:57+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on November 7, 2009 at 12:04:30 AM

Artist: Skillet
Title: Yours To Hold
Source: Comatose
BPM: 76
Filesize: 8885kb
Play Time: 03:30
Difficulties Available:

Hard (4.35 stars, 381 notes)
Normal (2.76 stars, 194 notes)

Download: Skillet - Yours To Hold
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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If Normal doesn't end for you, redownload

For rust45's Skillet project

An awesome slow song from the Skillet album Comatose.

Last edited by 0_o 2009-11-07T05:04:32+00:00, edited 21 times in total.

GbL

332 posts

Joined February 2009

GbL 2009-10-06T05:12:21+00:00

I liked the hitsound volumes.

Very nice diff.

XepherX3

625 posts

Joined September 2008

XepherX3 2009-10-06T18:36:05+00:00

very nice indeed

here is something extra for the map ^^

Download: Skillet - Yours To Hold (0_o).osb
needed for the Storyboard

SPOILER

*awaiting for the other diff to finish before starring*

XepherX3

625 posts

Joined September 2008

XepherX3 2009-10-07T03:55:24+00:00

my easy diff

Download: Skillet - Yours To Hold (0_o) [x3ns0r's easy].osu

made by image

rust45

1,088 posts

Joined May 2009

rust45 2009-10-07T04:34:24+00:00

[Normal]
02:26:96 (3) - Always iffy having a BPM change in the easiest diff, but I think you can get away with it.

[Hard]
01:38:41 (4,5) - I like how you didn't just go off to follow DS, but the spacing changed in the combo(Which if IIRC is unrankable), so I would make 4 or 5 a new combo.
01:51:04 (8) - New combo?
01:51:44 (1) - Remove new combo? Only if above is done.
03:17:889 - Any reason why this a new timing section when the BPM didn't change?

Between this and Alex's non submitted map, the project is looking promising. Great job.

0_o

2,155 posts

Joined December 2008

Topic Starter

0_o 2009-10-07T04:45:01+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

RandomJibberish

osu! Alumni

1,833 posts

Joined August 2009

RandomJibberish 2009-10-08T17:12:46+00:00

A very nice and clean beatmap. It flowed well, and wasn't boring.

The storyboard is nice, but not very noticeable, IMO. I don't mind though, as the slow change is very calm and relaxing, and fits the song well.

The hitsound volumes are a nice touch.

A star from me~

cyanberryio

424 posts

Joined August 2008

cyanberryio 2009-10-08T22:37:23+00:00

Neat~ I like this of course! ;p

The following are only opinions! You don't have to change them, take them as suggestions!
Most of them are emotions... Hope you understand them, some people don't! xD

[General]
Looks like you don't use distance snap. (Not something bad, just what I noticed in Hard)

[Storyboard]
I don't like how it's hidden behind the spinner...
And you might want to make them difficulty specific and shorten Normal's SB. Normal will drag on until you skip or the SB ends. Which bugs me!

[Normal]
~~Nothing bothering me!~~ Psst. Fix the breaks!

[Hard]
Generally, there's a bunch of finishes in the map. ._. (Or maybe it's just that I rarely place hitsounds...?)
00:54:20 (1) - Could be pulled back 1/2 and extended 1/2, but that's just IMO.
01:38:02 (3,4,5) - Even though it's obviously purposely, I just don't like this spacing. Especially 3 to 4.
02:02:10 (1) - Could be pulled back 1/2 and extended 1/2, but that's just IMO.
02:06:04 (4,5) - 0_o spacing... And this one isn't too minor... ._.
03:05:25 (1,2,3,4,5) - Mid combo spacing change... :[
03:16:70 (Empty Space) - Such a bleh gap. You can make something useful of this. ;o
For some reason I think there's some unsnapped beats. (Clicking to re-snap asks me to save, which means something changed.)

GREAT MAP. So deserving of a star~!

0_o

2,155 posts

Joined December 2008

Topic Starter

0_o 2009-10-09T01:16:59+00:00

Alex0686 wrote:
[General]
Looks like you don't use distance snap. (Not something bad, just what I noticed in Hard) I actually did use distance snap for a majority of the map, besides the occasional jumpy combo

[Storyboard]
I don't like how it's hidden behind the spinner...
And you might want to make them difficulty specific and shorten Normal's SB. Normal will drag on until you skip or the SB ends. Which bugs me! Hmm.. I'll see what I can do, if I end it early the SB'd background will go away when the map ends..

[Normal]
~~Nothing bothering me!~~ Psst. Fix the breaks! Done

[Hard]
Generally, there's a bunch of finishes in the map. ._. (Or maybe it's just that I rarely place hitsounds...?) Yeah you're probably right, I'll get rid of some.
00:54:20 (1) - Could be pulled back 1/2 and extended 1/2, but that's just IMO. Nah
01:38:02 (3,4,5) - Even though it's obviously purposely, I just don't like this spacing. Especially 3 to 4. I DO like the spacing
02:02:10 (1) - Could be pulled back 1/2 and extended 1/2, but that's just IMO. Nah
02:06:04 (4,5) - 0_o spacing... And this one isn't too minor... ._. Oh it's fine.
03:05:25 (1,2,3,4,5) - Mid combo spacing change... :[ Its actually spaced pretty close to 1.4x..
03:16:70 (Empty Space) - Such a bleh gap. You can make something useful of this. ;o Yeah you're right Done.
For some reason I think there's some unsnapped beats. (Clicking to re-snap asks me to save, which means something changed.) Done.

Thanks!

Matma Rex

586 posts

Joined March 2009

Matma Rex 2009-10-10T10:24:02+00:00

[Overall]
I like the trick with backgrounds and late displaying of author/title, but the coloured background is so sad that at first I couldn't see the difference. I let myself spice it up a bit:

I think it's much better.

Set it as base background on both diffs, then in SB cover it with grey one and cover it again with coloured one. Seeing that grey BG in song selection may make people keep scrolling down.

[Normal]
Great diff.

[Hard]
Awesome, too. I can't tell which specific part is best - it just plays great as a whole.

Starred.

Armin

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Joined May 2009

Armin 2009-10-14T13:09:07+00:00

Remember: most of these are only suggestions.

-Normal
00:00:521 Add a whistle, maybe
00:14:731 Remove the finish at the end
00:15:521 Remove hitsounds
00:15:915 Try a whistle instead
00:19:468 Try a finish instead
00:22:626 Remove clap
02:32:100 Add a finish?

-Hard
Decrease the slider tick rate to 2

00:00:521 whistle
00:03:679 whistle at the start?
00:05:258 whistle or finish
00:15:126 remove the finish
00:06:442 Add a whistle instead
00:13:152 This slider should finish at 00:13:942
01:25:389 finish or whistle at the start
01:46:705 finish at the start
01:49:073 This slider should finish at 01:49:863
01:55:389 Finish??
01:56:573 Finish??
02:37:626 Finish??
02:38:415 Add a finish instead?
02:49:468 Add a finish instead?
03:02:889 Add a finish
03:13:152 Try a finish instead
03:14:336 Finish at the start??
03:15:521 add a whistle

I enjoyed the map, so here you are my star

Mashley

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Joined September 2008

Mashley 2009-10-15T06:18:25+00:00

Pretty damn perfect. In my opinion the drain should be higher on Hard though.

0_o

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Topic Starter

0_o 2009-10-15T06:48:30+00:00

@Matma: Thanks, but I kind of like the subtlety of the background as it is. It fits better than a bright vibrant background imo

@Armin: I won't go through which ones I changed and didn't, but changes were made

@ASH: I agree, done.

Thanks

Behon

Elite Mapper

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Here since the beginning

Behon 2009-10-18T01:24:55+00:00

It would be a bit of a hassle, but it might be a good idea to put the MP3 into Audacity and generate some silence at the beginning- it's never good for a map to start so immediately.

Also, maybe you should have Kiai Time start at 01:39:994?

anonymous_old

0 posts

Here since the beginning

anonymous_old 2009-10-18T21:49:34+00:00

General
Storyboard goes on too long in Normal. Make it difficulty specific and match map length.

Storyboard isn't scaled properly. Change the scale factor (both of them) to 1.0666667.

Blue combo colour is a bit too dark.

Normal
I personally would stack the 1/2's. No problem, though.

Hard
<3

eee

692 posts

Joined January 2008

eee 2009-10-30T23:35:49+00:00

Hi, I'm just here to star
you're [Hard]s are always really cool

Matma Rex

586 posts

Joined March 2009

Matma Rex 2009-10-31T13:42:59+00:00

eee wrote:
Hi, I'm just here to star
you're [Hard]s are always really cool

eee wrote:
you're [Hard]s are always really cool

eee wrote:
you're

!faq english

I couldn't resist D:

Kytoxid

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Joined April 2009

Kytoxid 2009-11-07T04:23:57+00:00

[General]

Move the storyboard into the background, since right now it overlaps the black bars during breaks.

[Normal]

00:32:010 (1) - Increase the hitsound volume for this section by 2 ticks or so.
00:44:073 (4,4) - Add finishes to the start of these 2 sliders?
02:13:094 (7) - This might look nicer if it either made a triangle with the start/end points of 6, or was between the end of 6 and the start of 8.
02:26:096 (3) - Too far up.

[Hard]

02:13:015 (7,8,9,10) - Looks a bit messy.
02:49:046 (10) - Finish?

Starred!

Matma Rex

586 posts

Joined March 2009

Matma Rex 2009-11-07T10:18:39+00:00