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Walkie talkie Man

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shinn_old
Although it didn't post on the forums... here's the beatmap
http://osu.ppy.sh/index.php?p=song&s=601
chan
2 questions: what help do you want and how big is the file? I can provide help when I get home from work (in about 30 minutes)
Topic Starter
shinn_old
Size: ~4mb
Help?: Final checks and no embarrassing errors in the beatmap
chan
Righto. Will check this out in around 2 hours when I get home from work. Sorry about the time delays!
chan

shinn wrote:

Help?: Final checks and no embarrassing errors in the beatmap
Sorry to say this but there's a major flaw with your timing. I think a BPM of 141.00 and offset of 1,630 sounds about right. Please use this timing and resnap all notes and play through all versions of your song to ensure that resnapping is done correctly for all notes. You will also need to recalculate slider lengths. I think a lot of your beats were out because of this BPM and it will really help time all your notes a lot more to the song.

On a minor note, why are there different offsets for different difficulties? They should be the same! Easy was like 1699 and Normal and Hard were 1709 or something. Stick to the better one.

Easy is really repetitive. Sure you shouldn't make it difficult, but some variety would be good. You repeat those chorus combos a lot and the verses are really not inspiring (ie. around 00:15:35).

Normal is also quite repetitive, but at least you tried to make a different pattern after the last break. Your combos are very linear (all the notes are in a straight line) for most of the song. Mix it up with some curved or angled sliders (or linear sliders with multiple points) as well as placing notes not in a line.
At 02:22:29, there were some funny notes in that combo, like (9) seemed out of place.

Hard is a bit less repetitive, but it's a bit monotonous clicking away at all those whole beats. You could follow the vocals a bit more closely for a bit more of an interesting rhythm.

I hope this has been helpful for you. Let me know what you think.
Topic Starter
shinn_old
Thanks Chan

But can't change it right now :cry: because I don't have osu with me :cry:
chan
Yeah, that's fine. Just edit & upload it when you can and I can take another look at it again and maybe move it to the completed beatmap forum for ranking. Happy Chinese New Year by the way!
Topic Starter
shinn_old
thx

Happy CHinese New Year to You too!
Topic Starter
shinn_old
Yah! New design, all beats are either repositioned or replaced
Loginer
Here's a fixed version of the easy beatmap. Now, if you could fix Normal and Hard, too, this could be rankable.

Download: Steriogram - Walkie Talkie Man (shinn) [Easy].osu
peppy
Not sure why you didn't post this using BSS. Could you please do so, and we will merge this thread in with it?
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shinn_old
Tried over 5 times

Just Can't
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