wery good song ceep it up
dummiexx wrote:
Awesome song! I like the music and the beatmap.
Although this is my opinion, I would like it if you added Kiai in this beatmap. - Added kiai sections
On Easy difficulty, the combo at 00:43:881 goes up to 52 combos -oooops
On Hard difficulty, there is another spinner that starts right after a spinner at 00:40:224. Consider making them into one spinner (unless you purposely wanted two spinners) - must have forgot to change this one
No worries.Zerzxes wrote:
Thanks a lot for your feedback!
Died in a updating mixup. should be good now.dummiexx wrote:
What happened to Easy difficulty and Normal? 0.o
Yoeri wrote:
I tried. T~T
[General]
Hitsound volume is too high, it overpowers the song, and most of the random claps don't fit whatsoever. lowered. no idea how to actually hitsound tho
[Easy]
This map is a bit too hard to be an Easy, I think. Might be because of the Slider Velocity.
00:24:651 (2) - Just make this a three point slider. -done
00:33:276 (2,3) - Weird spacing. fix
00:33:522 (3) - Again, no reason to have so many points. fix
00:35:493 (5,6) - Well at least make sure (5) is exactly under the end of (6), although in this case I wouldn't recommend it at all, since it might be too confusing to read for an easy. altered
00:48:304 (4) - More weird curves. fix
00:56:189 (2) - Make the end and the part between the red points parallel.
00:57:667 (4) - Three points again. fix
01:04:049 (2) - ^ fix
01:05:053 (3) - ^ fix
01:06:535 (6) - ^ fix
01:15:485 - You should place a circle here. fix
01:31:255 - End the break here like you did on the other diffs. It drags on for too long otherwise.
01:48:502 (2) - Another slider with excessive points. fix
01:54:906 (2) - Looks weird altogether. changed
01:58:354 (2) - Weird overlap.
01:58:354 (2) - Another weird curve. fix
02:05:251 (4) - This is unrankable nowadays, I believe. altered the slider
02:22:000 (4) - Weird overlap.
02:28:896 (2) - Looks weird. did something
02:38:748 (5) - ^ did something
02:44:169 (2,4) - ^ did something
02:50:575 - Why does the map end here? was lazy once and then never fixed it. Note self, finish.
02:51:068 - Unsnapped section.
[Normal]
00:08:389 (1) - Weirdly curved again. fix
00:10:360 (3) - ^ fix
00:17:259 (4) - ^ fix
00:18:984 (3) - You could start the slider at 00:19:230 to follow the vocals more.
00:28:101 (2) - Weird curve again. fix
00:35:986 (4) - ^ fix
01:02:341 (5,6) - Would play better if they didn't start on red ticks. fix
01:56:630 (4,5) - ^ fix
02:15:589 - Unsnapped section.
02:28:896 (1) - Try to blanket (5) with this slider. fix
02:31:356 (5) - More weird curves fix
02:51:068 - Unsnapped section.
02:52:793 (1,2) - Would play better when starting on white ticks, again.
02:54:764 (1,2) - ^
02:56:982 (2,3) - Again, you shouldn't use more than 3 points for these kinds of sliders. [color=#4000FFfix[/color]
03:01:171 (1,2,3) - White ticks please. [color=#4000FFfix[/color]
03:10:781 (4) - More curves. [color=#4000FFfix[/color]
03:18:669 - Unsnapped section.
[Hard]
00:12:947 (5) - Nothing in the music indicates a 1/4 triple, so this is a bit overmapped. the song is nothing but constant 1/2's so I use triplets to add atleast some variation
00:15:781 (2,3) - Switch these around in the rhythm.
00:19:354 (2) - Again, no reason for a triple.
00:30:072 (3) - Use three points. fix
00:35:863 (7) - Triple doesn't fit here, though it would at 00:35:616 probably missed these timing after the bpm update
00:44:485 (4) - Overmapped again.
00:50:029 (4) - ^
00:54:341 (6) - ^
00:57:421 (3) - ^
00:58:776 (6) - ^
01:00:131 (4,6) - Weird curves. fix
01:01:975 (2) - Overmapped.
01:02:585 (5,6) - ^
01:14:509 (1,2) - ^ Put a triple at 01:14:997 and another circle at 01:15:485. added the circle, but kept the sliders. I like how it plays
01:31:255 (1) - Make the start parallel to the end. fix
01:57:862 (5,6) - More weird curves. fix
02:13:379 (1,3) - Use three points. fix
02:22:369 (3) - A bit overmapped.
02:25:818 (2) - ^
02:30:128 (4) - ^
02:51:068 - Unsnapped section.
03:13:491 (4) - Weird curve. fix
03:15:832 (2) - Overmapped too, I think.
03:18:173 (5) - ^
03:18:666 - Unsnapped section.
-kept the triplets becuase it adds some variation. The map would be nothing but 1/2's at every beat if not, it plays well imo
[Insane]
Lots of overmapping here! Keep in mind to not place object where they don't fit in the music.
00:19:107 (2) - This doesn't fit at all, for instance.
00:20:586 (7) - ^
00:25:760 (5) - ^
00:26:130 (1) - Probably unrankable. sltered
00:28:101 (1) - Put the circle right under the sliderend. fix
00:29:210 (6) - Overmapped.
00:30:195 (4) - ^
00:34:754 (6,1) - Confusing spacing. fix
00:35:370 (2) - Overmapped again.
00:48:920 (7) - ^
00:50:891 (4) - ^
00:54:341 (5,6) - ^
00:55:080 (9) - ^
00:59:762 (1) - ^
01:02:097 (5,6,7,8) - ^
01:07:527 (8,9,10,11) - ^
01:11:891 (4) - ^
01:43:205 (5) - ^
01:55:152 (7) - Weird looking slider. fix
02:00:817 - Why is there a short break here? You should just map it at a lower volume. I feel like the short break puts more emphasis and still plays well. Drain sections are cool.
02:07:221 (1) - The curve in the middle could be better.attempted to fix, but I suck at constructing sliders
02:09:684 - New combo? fix
02:11:532 (11,12,13,14,15) - These are annoying to play because they start on blue ticks. moved
02:15:596 - Unsnapped section.
02:24:217 (2) - Overmapped.
02:24:955 (4) - ^
02:25:818 (2,5) - ^
02:29:389 (5) - Use three points please. fix
02:33:573 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Really overmapped there.
02:39:487 (3,4,5,6,7) - Overmapped, but a few triples would work.
02:45:154 (4,5,6,7) - You should make these parallel. fix
02:51:068 - Unsnapped section.
02:56:243 (4) - Use three points. fix
02:56:982 (1,2) - ^ fix
03:00:185 (1,2,3,4,5) - Overmapped.
03:18:912 - Unsnapped section.
Again kept 1/4 beats in there so it is not just constant 1/4's. Many are added after a recommendation from CXu to break the flow a little.
nerfed easy. thanks for checking anyways.Sensualdango wrote:
Easy
00:20:462 (1,1) - It is very quick to put a circle after a slider, remove it
00:30:072 (4,5) - SD 1/1
00:32:044 (1,2,3) - ^
00:44:854 (3,4,5) - ^
00:46:825 (1,2,3) - ^
ALL MAP IN 1/1 XD
agggg, no me gusta la cancion END OF THE MOD ¬¬
Thanks a lot for modding!Endemic wrote:
From my modding queue
[Hard]
make this section 00:14:795 - 00:16:766 look like this made it follow the vocals more
00:19:230 (1,2,3) - Make this a slider done
00:24:159 (1) - make this slider more vibratey and less earquakey
00:26:130 (2) - consider making this slider like this one 00:24:159 (1) -
00:26:130 (2) - End this slider here 00:26:623
00:27:978 - Put a circle here on the base of this slider 00:28:101 (4) - done
00:35:986 (8) - remove this circle and move this slider 00:36:232 (1) - back to where the circle was and make the slider end at 00:36:479 (2) -
01:11:264 (5) - Make this a circle and have a slider at 01:11:513 that's shaped like this http://puu.sh/8fszF.jpg neat! done.
01:14:997 (3) - Remove the finish done
From 01:31:255 to 01:39:140 consider remapping it so there's sliders on the wub noise and have doubles here 01:32:979,
01:34:951 here,
01:35:936 here,
01:36:922 here,
01:37:907 and finally having a triple to finish it off here 01:38:893
03:03:388 (1,) - Move this to x:192 y:160 done
03:03:635 (2) - move this to x:280 y:96 done
03:03:881 (3) - Move this to x:344 y:184 done
03:04:128 (4) - Move this to x:256 y:248 done
03:04:620 (5) - Move this to x:72 y:168 done
03:13:491 (4) - Move this forward on the timeline to it starts and ends on the white line and reshape it so it flows into the next note. 03:14:230 (1) -
Remove this circle and add a circle here: 03:13:491 (4) . Also reshape the notes after it. done
[Normal]
Its a really hard normal, i would consider studying some normals in similar ranked maps and remapping accordingly, also the spacing is too high.
00:19:230 (3) - Shorten this slider so it starts and ends on a white line done
00:25:637 (2,3) - Ctrl + G and move the circle closer to the slider done
00:27:608 (1) - Move this to x:128 y:208 done
00:35:740 - Add a circle here and space it evenly between 00:35:000 (3) - and 00:35:986 (5) - done
00:37:957 (6) - make this a 1/1 slider done
01:40:864 (1) - remove this slider and move this 01:41:357 (2) - to 01:41:111 done
01:42:096 (6) - Remove this circle and move 01:42:343 (7) - back to where the circle was on the timeline done
01:43:082 (7,1,2) - Space these away from 01:42:096 (6) - done
01:53:921 (3) - Delete this circle and move 01:54:167 (4) - back on the timeline to where the circle was done
02:37:514 (5) - Remove this slider and put a circle at 02:37:514 done
02:37:761 (6) - Move this back to the white line on the timeline done
[Easy]
Spacing is wayyyyyyyyy too high changed spacing to 0,6x
00:33:522 (2) - Shorten this slider so its only 1/1 long but make it repeat, like this done
Sorry for having really bad formatting in this mod.
rEdo wrote:
[Easy]
Inconsistent kiai during the chorus. I guess you also should map the beginning of the song, just like you did in other difficulties.
00:53:232 (3,4,5) - These might be quite hard to read, because (3) is partially overlapped by (2). Try something like this instead. done
01:00:624 (3,2) - You should avoid overlaps like these. They just don't play nor look well. fixed
01:11:512 (1) - Consider moving it to x:208 y:200 since that jump you've got there doesn't play alright on the easiest difficulty of a mapset.
01:15:485 - 01:43:082 - Now that's a huge-ass break you've got there. Consider mapping until 01:31:255 here.
02:38:748 (5,6,1) - This overlap isn't something a beginner player would feel comfortable with. I'd say that you MUST either move (1) away or rearrange that part a little bit. fixed
02:44:169 (2,3,4) - Same thing as above. That might be horrendously hard to read. fixed
[Normal]
00:17:259 (4,1,2) - Quite inconsistent spacing you've got there. fixed
01:01:117 (1,2,3) - Aaand another weird jump. fixed
02:03:773 (1,2,3) - I'm pretty sure (1,2) should be closer to (3). fixed
02:27:911 (3,4) - Not sure if this jump is something that should be happening on a Normal difficulty. fixed
03:03:875 (3,4) - Same thing as above. fixed
[Hard]
00:11:345 (4) - The distance between (3) and (4) is 1.0x, instead of 1.2x that was used in the previous sliders. Gotta fix that. fixed
00:17:013 (1) - I bet you were following the vocals with that long slider. Don't break that convention, delete this note as currently it plays rather unnatural. done
00:18:984 (3,4) - I don't really see how this jump would be natural...
00:35:493 (5) - New combo so it's quite easier to read. done
00:52:739 (1) - A little bit of a inconsistent spacing there - (1) being quite too close to previous slider. fixed
01:06:039 (4) - I'm not sure if such slowdown slider even would fit there, you're missing on a lot of good sounds you could map to.
01:07:527 (3) - New combo. moved NC here
01:11:513 (6) - This makes sense, but I'm pretty sure sliders like that aren't rankable anymore, unfortunately.
01:14:997 (3) - Try to extend it by 1/4 so it follows the rhythm. done
02:47:618 (1) - Start it 1/2 earlier? done
I mentioned just the things that caught my eye, but I'm pretty sure there's plenty more. I'd suggest you taking a look at your beatmap on your own to check for inconsistencies in distance snap (AIMod might come in handy). Also, the overlaps. There should be none in easier difficulties because they're pretty hard to read for people that are still learning how to play the game. Good luck!