拯救华语乐坛

用sampleset和additions可以节约绿线

hard

00:11:125 - 这里可以拆一个圈出来
01:23:684 (9) - 可以做个跳
01:35:678 (2,3,4) - 不是很顺畅

normal

01:18:647 (2,3) - 01:31:360 (1,2) - 没对齐

easy

00:08:606 - 这里不爽，00:06:927 (1) - 折返，00:08:606 - 加个1/2滑条
01:31:360 (1) - 剪短1/4
01:37:117 (1,2) - 换成3/4折返，01:38:076 - 1/1
01:40:955 (1,2) - 两个3/4折返
音效方面可以利用slidertick，http://www.bilibili.tv/video/av673230/index_3.html，跳至8分钟

liangv587 wrote:

拯救华语乐坛 好

用sampleset和additions可以节约绿线 啊我煞笔了，下来研究研究……

hard

00:11:125 - 这里可以拆一个圈出来 ？不是很明白
01:23:684 (9) - 可以做个跳 好，那就让它小跳了一下，并加了NC
01:35:678 (2,3,4) - 不是很顺畅 这里可能跳得稍大了点……把3叠到2的尾部上了，不知道会不会好点

normal

01:18:647 (2,3) - 01:31:360 (1,2) - 没对齐 还真是，fixed

easy

00:08:606 - 这里不爽，00:06:927 (1) - 折返，00:08:606 - 加个1/2滑条 嗯，好主意啊，fixed
01:31:360 (1) - 剪短1/4 嗯……还是不要了吧
01:37:117 (1,2) - 换成3/4折返，01:38:076 - 1/1 试了一下，虽然节奏会大有改观但排列会很难搞orz，暂时保留
01:40:955 (1,2) - 两个3/4折返 那样在easy里可能偏难吧……先保留
音效方面可以利用slidertick，http://www.bilibili.tv/video/av673230/index_3.html，跳至8分钟 嗯，就像irc里我说的，尽量避免tick音效吧

谢谢mod！～

Hi Akabato.
I checked the map and found no unrankable issues. Thus, I'm giving this map a chance!
Have a bubble and good luck!

wow, thx a lot Ike!

Finally this is bubbled <3

I really love the amazing job you did with this map. Really looking forward to seeing this ranked!

Lanturn wrote:

Finally this is bubbled <3

I really love the amazing job you did with this map. Really looking forward to seeing this ranked!

really thanks for your support Lanturn!~ without your helpful mod, this map won't be improved so much

瞎了你们都疯狂泡图 苦苦

Oracle wrote:

瞎了你们都疯狂泡图 苦苦

撞大运要到了bat的M4M…… 要不真不知道还要等多久，老实说，这样的曲子找mod并不容易…… D:

Akabato wrote:

@10crystalmask01
wow, i'm really surprised and curious how could you find these Pili pics!! this TV series isn't famous at all even in Chinese area. thx a lot for your BG help!~ but as you see, this song is a character's theme song, that character's name is Qing Haichao (擎海潮 in Chinese), the one on the current BG. these three pics you found are from Pili series indeed, but all of them aren't Qing Haichao himself, two of them are Jian Zi Xian Ji (剑子仙迹 in Chinese) and the other one is Wu Mengsheng (无梦生 in Chinese). i know maybe they are look like the same one in eyes of people who don't know much about this series. so as the reason, i may keep the current BG thank you all the same!~ through mapping such songs from Pili to make more people try to know about this cool series, i'm really glad.

Ahh, I see now. How interesting
Now I'm wondering if I can watch the show with English subs.

BeatofIke wrote:

Hi Akabato.
I checked the map and found no unrankable issues. Thus, I'm giving this map a chance!
Have a bubble and good luck!

Yes, now someone grab another BAT to check this beatmap

ヽ(´□｀。)ﾉ

Consider this a random bubble check, popping because timing is wrong.

[General]
Timing is way off, set 1190 as offset, no need to put a negative one. You must fix this in order to rebubble.
Maybe make the combo colors a bit darker so they are easier to see.

[Hard]
00:00:931 (1,2) - I suggest to use a slider here, the speed hasn't been stablished so this may be a bit annoying for some players.
00:01:890 - Add two notes in 1/4 here? it feels a bit weird ignoring this one as you mapped similar streams in the rest of the song, not a must tho.
00:05:008 (7,1) - Remove (7) and begin the spinner in 00:05:008? It'd make more sense with the instrument you're following here.
00:10:765 (1) - I'm really sure you should use the 1/3 beat snap divisor for the end of this.
00:21:319 (3) - I think a 1/2 slider would fit better here.
00:56:340 (3,4) - Reverse (Ctrl+G) the slider so you keep an ↑ ↓ ↑ motion for this pattern, if you do, don't forget to move (4) so you keep spacing consistent.
01:11:211 (3) - How about using a 1/4 triple instead this slider, it'd match nicely the song, imo.
01:21:765 (1) - I think a 1/2 slider would fit better here.
01:23:684 (9) - Remove NC?
01:29:441 (1) - Use a 3/4 slider with a repeat like you did in 01:37:117 (1)? It'd play better imo.
01:31:360 (1) - I think a 1/2 slider would fit better here with that wind instrument.
01:32:319 (4) - ^

[Normal]
00:04:529 (4) - Use a 1/2 slider here and begin the spinner in 00:05:008, so it follows better the instrument you're mapping here.
01:10:252 (1) - You may want to use a slider here, the spinner is a bit short here in my opinion.

[Easy]
Your combos are too short here, you may want put a NC each 2 downbeats (large white ticks).
00:05:008 (1) - You may want to change this for a slider, the next object is a bit close so beginners may not be able to recover in time.
00:13:164 (1) - Same about this spinner, you remove 00:12:684 (4) and begin the spinner there, and end it in 00:15:562.
01:23:684 (1) - End this spinner in 01:26:563 so you give beginners the time to recover.
01:43:353 (1) - Maybe use a slider instead.

Simple but effective , poke me when you're done.

DakeDekaane wrote:

ヽ(´□｀。)ﾉ

Consider this a random bubble check, popping because timing is wrong.

[General]
Timing is way off, set 1190 as offset, no need to put a negative one. You must fix this in order to rebubble. ok, fixed offset and all timing lines
Maybe make the combo colors a bit darker so they are easier to see. i choosed #2, thx for your advice~

Suggestion 1

Combo1 : 185,113,113
Combo2 : 255,165,43
Combo3 : 108,108,255

Suggestion 2 (a bit brighter than 1)

Combo1 : 179,98,98
Combo2 : 255,174,64
Combo3 : 108,108,255

[Hard]
00:00:931 (1,2) - I suggest to use a slider here, the speed hasn't been stablished so this may be a bit annoying for some players. ok, fixed
00:01:890 - Add two notes in 1/4 here? it feels a bit weird ignoring this one as you mapped similar streams in the rest of the song, not a must tho. since it's the beginning part of the song, so don't want to make the rhythm concentrated, keep the current notes
00:05:008 (7,1) - Remove (7) and begin the spinner in 00:05:008? It'd make more sense with the instrument you're following here. umm……prefer to keep the pattern here, no change
00:10:765 (1) - I'm really sure you should use the 1/3 beat snap divisor for the end of this. ok, fixed
00:21:319 (3) - I think a 1/2 slider would fit better here. ok, fixed
00:56:340 (3,4) - Reverse (Ctrl+G) the slider so you keep an ↑ ↓ ↑ motion for this pattern, if you do, don't forget to move (4) so you keep spacing consistent. actually the downward sliders here are want to follow the music, the sound of drum has a pitch-down trend here. so keep the current pattern
01:11:211 (3) - How about using a 1/4 triple instead this slider, it'd match nicely the song, imo. prefer the original
01:21:765 (1) - I think a 1/2 slider would fit better here. ok, fixed
01:23:684 (9) - Remove NC? ok, removed
01:29:441 (1) - Use a 3/4 slider with a repeat like you did in 01:37:117 (1)? It'd play better imo. want to make the rhythm more various, so keep the current notes
01:31:360 (1) - I think a 1/2 slider would fit better here with that wind instrument. ok, fixed
01:32:319 (4) - ^ here want to keep the current pattern

[Normal]
00:04:529 (4) - Use a 1/2 slider here and begin the spinner in 00:05:008, so it follows better the instrument you're mapping here. ok, fixed
01:10:252 (1) - You may want to use a slider here, the spinner is a bit short here in my opinion. ok, fixed

[Easy]
Your combos are too short here, you may want put a NC each 2 downbeats (large white ticks). ok, fixed
00:05:008 (1) - You may want to change this for a slider, the next object is a bit close so beginners may not be able to recover in time. ok, fixed
00:13:164 (1) - Same about this spinner, you remove 00:12:684 (4) and begin the spinner there, and end it in 00:15:562. ok, fixed
01:23:684 (1) - End this spinner in 01:26:563 so you give beginners the time to recover. ok, fixed
01:43:353 (1) - Maybe use a slider instead. here want to keep the spinner, but made it begin at 01:43:132 (1/2 beat early than before), and deleted the circle after it to make sure there has enough recover time

Simple but effective , poke me when you're done.

thx a lot for your mod!~ updated

Alright have your bubble back.

(。･∀･)ﾉ

DakeDekaane wrote:

Alright have your bubble back.

(。･∀･)ﾉ

thx!~ :3

;_;

A pity you didn't include the video. It's pretty neat.

Considering the wip rule at t/142383 you might want to change the Artist/title to a romanized version of the Chinese, unless this is the official English title. You can put the English title in the tags if you wish.

[Hard]
I'm thinking AR -1 works well for this map. If not, OD +1.
00:22:298 (1,2,3) - This part would be awesome with some jumps
01:15:788 (4,1) - This jump was kind of sudden and harsh compared to the rest of the map. Maybe reposition 3 and 4 so that it's moving towards the left

UnderminE wrote:

;_;

0v0
Caesar so moe

Garven wrote:

A pity you didn't include the video. It's pretty neat.

Considering the wip rule at t/142383 you might want to change the Artist/title to a romanized version of the Chinese, unless this is the official English title. You can put the English title in the tags if you wish. since the artist has official english name (check the official site here: http://www.ebtc.com.tw ), so i just changed the song's title

[Hard]
I'm thinking AR -1 works well for this map. If not, OD +1. OD+1, i think AR8 may be easier to read
00:22:298 (1,2,3) - This part would be awesome with some jumps ok, changed pattern
01:15:788 (4,1) - This jump was kind of sudden and harsh compared to the rest of the map. Maybe reposition 3 and 4 so that it's moving towards the left ok, fixed

SPOILER

thx for your mod!~ updated

I dig it.

wowowow finally. Congrats!!!!!

恭喜rank〜

Congratulations!

Garven wrote:

I dig it.

thx a lot, Garven!~

Lanturn wrote:

wowowow finally. Congrats!!!!!

thx, Lanturn!~ there is your effort indeed!

Streliteela wrote:

恭喜rank〜

谢谢S妹子一直的支持，你也加油！～

DakeDekaane wrote:

Congratulations!

thx!~

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CET 6 wrote:

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