Itou shizuka - Honjitsu Mankai Watashi iro! Hina ver. · forum

taka1235

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taka1235 2009-10-03T02:35:28+00:00

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Cyril Scarlet

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Cyril Scarlet 2009-10-03T02:43:09+00:00

poypk > thank you ^^/

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Cyril Scarlet

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Cyril Scarlet 2009-10-03T04:05:08+00:00

Thank you very much SIN

I'm try to change som point of your advice and Full submit already ^^

Kharl

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Kharl 2009-10-03T04:05:20+00:00

พอดีเมื่อวานผม mod ไม่เสร็จ เพราะงั้นอันนี้ถือว่าผมโพสต์ต่อจากของเมื่อวาน ไม่ต้องให้ kudos ผมนะครับ

= Skin =
Combo finishes (hit100k and hit300k) is almost the same as the normal combo bursts. Also, Geki burst (hit300g) shows no score and evaluation. You should add "Good" to hit100k and hit300k, and "Great" to hit300g.
ตัว combo finish hit100k กับ hit300k นี่ดูไม่ออกเลยครับว่าเป็นตัวปิดคอมโบ ตัว hit300g นี่ก็ไม่โชว์คะแนน ควรจะต้องใส่คะแนนแล้วก็ข้อความพวก "Good" "Great" ลงไปใน combo finish ที่ว่ามาทั้งสามอันด้วยครับ

= Normal =
01:14:63 (4,5) - Move them 1/2 beat forward.

= taka's diff =
Among five difficulties, I prefer this one the most. Good job!

= S i R i R u's Pleasant =
The difficulty name at the lower right is misspelled.

= miccoli's Stream =
01:18:09 (6) - The end of this slider is silenced. Use soft sound set and apply whistle sfx there.

= orioncomet's Tsundere =
Too crazy for my taste. But since there are no glaring problem, I guess this map will be a good challenge for veteran players.

Cyril Scarlet

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Cyril Scarlet 2009-10-03T04:42:25+00:00

Kharl wrote:
พอดีเมื่อวานผม mod ไม่เสร็จ เพราะงั้นอันนี้ถือว่าผมโพสต์ต่อจากของเมื่อวาน ไม่ต้องให้ kudos ผมนะครับ

= Skin =
Combo finishes (hit100k and hit300k) is almost the same as the normal combo bursts. Also, Geki burst (hit300g) shows no score and evaluation. You should add "Good" to hit100k and hit300k, and "Great" to hit300g.
ตัว combo finish hit100k กับ hit300k นี่ดูไม่ออกเลยครับว่าเป็นตัวปิดคอมโบ ตัว hit300g นี่ก็ไม่โชว์คะแนน ควรจะต้องใส่คะแนนแล้วก็ข้อความพวก "Good" "Great" ลงไปใน combo finish ที่ว่ามาทั้งสามอันด้วยครับ

OK

= Normal =
01:14:63 (4,5) - Move them 1/2 beat forward. OK

เผลอให้ไปละ ก่อนจะอ่าน - -

orioncomet

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orioncomet 2009-10-03T12:22:49+00:00

Kharl wrote:
= orioncomet's Tsundere =
Too crazy for my taste. But since there are no glaring problem, I guess this map will be a good challenge for veteran players.

I think miccoli's Stream is Crazy more my Diff. lol

PicoLo

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PicoLo 2009-10-03T13:34:37+00:00

~Star.

Cyril Scarlet

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Cyril Scarlet 2009-10-03T14:07:24+00:00

thank you ^^/

*************************

= Skin = OK

= Normal =
01:14:63 (4,5) - Move them 1/2 beat forward. OK

= miccoli = OK

เผลอให้ไปละ ก่อนจะอ่าน - -

orioncomet

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orioncomet 2009-10-04T05:48:45+00:00

^

หน้าที่แล้วก็พิมพ์แล้วไม่ใช่เหรอ พิมพ์อีกไมเนี่ย - -

Cyril Scarlet

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Cyril Scarlet 2009-10-04T07:17:44+00:00

EDIT ทิ้งไปก่อนแล้ว - - ขึ้นหน้าใหม่เดี๋ยวไม่เห็นเลยย้ายมาเฉยๆ.

Echona

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Echona 2009-10-06T14:41:22+00:00

Great map!

Cyril Scarlet

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Cyril Scarlet 2009-10-06T20:58:02+00:00

スター有難うございます　^^

Cyril Scarlet

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Cyril Scarlet 2009-10-08T22:23:21+00:00

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orioncomet

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orioncomet 2009-10-10T07:17:00+00:00

ขอแก้นิดนึงน้า xD

Download: Itou Shizuka - Honjitsu Mankai Watashi iro! Hina ver. (S i R i R u) [orion's Tsundere].osu

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Cyril Scarlet

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quintessence

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quintessence 2009-10-10T16:45:08+00:00

Lovely map

Cyril Scarlet

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Cyril Scarlet 2009-10-11T00:19:10+00:00

♥ thx

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Tanmak 2009-10-11T22:47:16+00:00

Star~☆

Cyril Scarlet

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Cyril Scarlet 2009-10-13T13:01:51+00:00

Oh ~

Thank you Tanmak & cyborg ^o^//

jmaeshawn

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jmaeshawn 2009-10-18T08:43:14+00:00

This is an awesome map!!! Hope it gets ranked soon

Star for you~

Cyril Scarlet

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Cyril Scarlet 2009-10-18T16:06:53+00:00

thank you for star ^_ ^

Gens

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Gens 2009-10-18T22:15:10+00:00

[Normal]

For some reason I feel this is a bit more hard than a normal. Shouldn't matter though.

[orion's Tsundere]

I really hate the triples spam.
Also, it is kinda ridiculous that this is the difficulty that goes next to Normal... it makes me think this thread had a good purpose.

[miccoli's Stream]

Wow... the max score is really high. I think it deserves it though. Just watch out...

~ ~ ~

There were some spinners too short for my taste... I'm going to leave it like this though, I think you're capable of spotting and removing them if you want. The reason of why am I doing this is because they have probably been reported and rejected before, and I don't want to read through 8 pages of a thread.

Everything else is good. Just one little nitpick; maybe add the corresponding anime in Source?

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orioncomet 2009-10-18T23:46:28+00:00

[miccoli's Stream]
02:26:076 - this spinner is unrankable bcz auto get lower 2000
O.O think this diff so crazy lol~

* thanks Gens :3 btw, i really <3 triples spam >O<

Cyril Scarlet

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Cyril Scarlet 2009-10-23T10:06:57+00:00

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ตลอดดดดดดดดดดดดดดดดดดเวลา BAT

tobebuta

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tobebuta 2009-10-23T22:14:54+00:00

BUHIY

Cyril Scarlet

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Cyril Scarlet 2009-10-23T22:52:35+00:00

あら、いらっしゃいませ　とべさん ^o^/

Cyril Scarlet

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Cyril Scarlet 2009-10-28T23:09:12+00:00

[to TH friend]

WTF...

เดี๋ยวมา เดี๋ยวมา เดี๋ยวมา

สงสัยต้อรอให้ ☆+100 เนอะ กว่าจะมา

Larto ตอนแรกก็มีกระทู้ คิว Mod นี่ก็หายเงียบไปละ ลอยแพตามเคย

Tired of seeing BAT !

พอไร้วี่แววมา ก็ขอมาร์ค มาร์ค ก็บอกจะมามาเดือนนึงละ - -

พอมี BAT บ้างมาดูช่วงกลางๆ แต่ก็ไม่มีดาว แล้วเมื่อไรจะอันเชิญ BAT คนอื่นได้ฟะ

ยุ่ง ? Busy ?

umm.. แต่เวลา BAT ทำ MAP หรือ Mapper คนดังทำนี่ว่างไป rank ทันที

orioncomet

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orioncomet 2009-10-29T21:04:20+00:00

=A=' ใจเย็นๆ orz เข้าใจความรู้สึกอยู่หรอก
นี่ก็ขึ้นมาหน้าแรกแล้ว เดี๋ยวก็คงมีคนมาดูเองแหล่ะน่า =3=
พอมาร์คมาลุงอามก็ฉกเลยเด้ เตือนเขาไว้ เขาทำงาน(หมายถึงชีวิตจริง เห็นบ่นกะพลอยบ่อยๆว่าเหนื่อยๆ)คงลืมมั้ง
แต่คนอื่นพลอยไม่รู้แหะ X<

MegaManEXE

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MegaManEXE 2009-10-29T22:16:32+00:00

Keep your head up, don't give up hope yet.

I know you're frustrated but in the end when this gets ranked it will feel that much better.

;-;

Here's a little star boost for you.

Cyril Scarlet

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Cyril Scarlet 2009-10-29T22:50:34+00:00

พลอย > อ๋อ ลืมไปเขาทำงานนี่เนอะ บ่เป็นหยังๆ

Megaman > huhu, thank you ~ for message and star ^^

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heartnetkung 2009-10-30T07:11:22+00:00

ลุงอามสู้ๆๆๆๆๆๆๆๆๆ
ขยันสแปม BAT เข้าไว้ๆๆๆ
เพื่อนู๋ฮินะ จะได้ผงาด อดทนไว้ลุงอาม !!

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orioncomet 2009-10-30T07:17:16+00:00

เอาน่าเพิ่งจะเดือนเดียวเอง(?) ;_;"
เทลมีของพลอยตั้ง 4เดือนแหน่ะ orz

Cyril Scarlet

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Cyril Scarlet 2009-10-30T09:48:52+00:00

จะสองเดือนละมั้ง >v<

อัพตอนต้นๆเดือน 9

Jarby

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Jarby 2009-10-30T14:53:37+00:00

01:01:45 - Set preview point. Finish sounds are pretty cool, guys. Use them.

S i R i R u's Pleasant:

This isn't unrankable, but why would you use hitsounds swapping from normal to soft like that? It's awful, really.

miccoli's Stream:

02:26:07 (1) - Too short, unrankable.

taka's diff:

Combo nazi blah blah blah

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DJPop 2009-10-30T17:22:37+00:00

JarJarJacob wrote:
01:01:45 - Set preview point. Finish sounds are pretty cool, guys. Use them.
S i R i R u's Pleasant:
This isn't unrankable, but why would you use hitsounds swapping from normal to soft like that? It's awful, really.
miccoli's Stream:
02:26:07 (1) - Too short, unrankable.
taka's diff:
Combo nazi blah blah blah

Too hard, JJJ. He needs translation =P

แปลคร่าวๆนะ

01:01:45 - ตั้งค่า preview point
ในแมพให้ใส่เสียง hitfinish ลงไปด้วย
S i R i R u's Pleasant:
เปลี่ยนเสียง hitsounds ไปมาแบบนั้น ดูไม่ดีเลย
miccoli's Stream:
02:26:07 (1) - สั้นเกินไป
taka's diff:
คอมโบมีปัญหาอะไรซักอย่างนี่แหละ ไม่ได้ดูในแมพ

Cyril Scarlet

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