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Asian Kung-Fu Generation - After Dark (TV Size)

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ztrot
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ztrot
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, October 13, 2009 at 4:48:47 AM

Artist: Asian Kung-Fu Generation
Title: After Dark (TV Size)
Source: Bleach
Tags: Bleach OBT ztrot
BPM: 191.05
Filesize: 12637kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.94 stars, 110 notes)
  2. Hollow Mix (4.98 stars, 291 notes)
  3. Normal (4.19 stars, 188 notes)
Download: Asian Kung-Fu Generation - After Dark (TV Size)
Download: Asian Kung-Fu Generation - After Dark (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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7th bleach op
Hard is mapped
Normal is finished.
No hollow mix this time.
Revamp of the old after dark :D
New mp3 and Vid right from the dvd vid has been fitted for Best gameplay proformance.
Ready for mods.
Hollow mix was added anyway xD
Metriod's edits added
m980's advice

EDIT: No Guest diff on this bleach map next will be open for guests.
Last edited by ztrot , edited 54 times in total.
Jarby
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Jarby
Hard:

00:13:83 (4,4) - Flip to the opposite side so that they don't overlap and look shit.
00:17:76 (4) - New combo.
00:29:07 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:40:69 (1) - Re-align these and the following circles upwards in a wayd thaferdsce fsjdkhmcx `,
00:42:57 (1,1) - Remove new combo.
00:49:48 (5) - New combo.
00:51:99 (5) - New combo.
00:57:02 (4) - New combo.
feadslkn`xz,
ztrot
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Topic Starter
ztrot
jar thanks as always
<3
Lokamp
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Joined January 2009
Lokamp
Normal

[00:05:510] (1,1,1,1) finish (or whistle) here
[00:10:850] (2) clap/finish? pretty weird... :S
[00:14:310] (1) clap every repeat of this slider
[00:45:080] (1,1) try whistles instead of claps!
[00:48:230] kiai time from here until 01:18:53

Hard

[00:45:080] (1,1) do something as seen on normal...
[00:48:230] kiai time like normal
[01:19:320] new hitcircle here

GREAT work! Starry 4 you :3
Lokamp
2,530 posts
Joined January 2009
Lokamp
Oh, almost forget... I'll made an avi movie of this anime intro.
I'll attack with this post as soon as possible! ^^

Link
http://www.mediafire.com/?sharekey=228e ... f6e8ebb871

Ok, I know 11.6 mb can be a BIG video, but this is the best I could do... enjoy!
Mashley
2,042 posts
Joined September 2008
Mashley
Use 2982 offset or something, plays waaaay better

Normal
This is quite hard for a normal...
01:18:53 (1) - yeah fuck you, circles this close to spinners are not good, especially in normal
01:25:91 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - These are bad jumps in normal.

Hard
YES, but is it me or is this really similar to normal?
ztrot
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ztrot

Agent Spin Here wrote:

Use 2982 offset or something, plays waaaay better

Normal
This is quite hard for a normal...
01:18:53 (1) - yeah fuck you, circles this close to spinners are not good, especially in normal
01:25:91 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - These are bad jumps in normal.

Hard
YES, but is it me or is this really similar to normal?

It is really close from normal i kinda wanted them to feel the same just harder on the next diff
Mashley
2,042 posts
Joined September 2008
Mashley
I liked the old mp3 more, but for this one I'm getting 3,686 offset.
alvisto
881 posts
Joined April 2009
alvisto
*alvisto stumbles upon ztrot's map*

Let's go ! *All are purely suggestions =P*

General
Timing & offset : Seems fine.
BG : The watermark at the bottom right corner is really bothering me. Can you get rid of it somehow ?


NORMAL
00:23:80 (2,2) - Why not make these sounds like these 00:33:85 (2,3,3,4) -
01:11:85 (6,7) - Make this more pretty ? :3
Testplayed it, although there's 1 part that threw me off, all are perfectly fun for a normal player like me. =P

HARD
00:23:80 (2,4) - ^
01:00:54 (7) - This alignment is intended ?
01:05:57 (6) - This alignment looks bad amidst the sea of linear map pattern.
01:06:20 (8) - PURELY SUGGESTION : End the slider 1 tick earlier ? This apply to easy too.
01:11:85 (6) - NAZI alignment !
01:19:39 (2) - Don't wanna add a clap here ?

Very nice and rhythmic map ztrot, and sorry for those nazi, really can't find any major flaw in your map. *alvisto had lookes at every crook and crannies.* XD

Star.

Modded by:
James2250
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James2250
normal:
00:23:80 (2) - move 1/2 forward?
00:26:31 (2) - shorten by 1/2?
00:30:55 (3) - could be stacked under 2 slightly better
00:33:85 (2) - move forward 1/2 and extend by 1/2?
01:06:20 (8) - to me sounds kinda odd where it ends maybe end at 01:06:82? (up to you)
01:16:40 (1) - might wanna add some more hitsounds after this point...like a whistle on every 1 or something..

hard:
00:04:01 (3) - odd having every single one clap except this one..
00:23:80 (2) -*same comment as normal*
00:26:31 (4) - ^
01:00:23 (5,6,7) - seems kinda randomly not aligned..
01:06:20 (8) - *same comment as normal*

*random comments*-- I saw there was no break, prob not a problem but if you see time to insert a small one?
and I kinda found it annoying to have red notes after that spinnner....but thats just me :P

basically all of these are suggestions :) nicely done
*star*
Azure_Kite
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Azure_Kite
[Normal]
00:30:55 (3) - maybe this should be snapped to the slider?

[Hard]
No problems found

It's Asian Kung-Fu Generation. Starred for sure <3
PicoLo_old
188 posts
Joined July 2009
PicoLo_old
I like bleach. ;)
~Star. ^^
blissfulyoshi
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blissfulyoshi
The red combo color is pretty hard to see against the fire and your spinner.

Normal:
SPOILER
normal mod:
01:19:23 (1) - the recovery time after the spinner is very short, so this note is a little hard to hit for this difficulty

combo mod:
00:54:89 (1,2) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 2 (swap new combo)

nazi mod:
00:52:69 (1) - align with the red 3
00:58:97 (1) - make the same distance from 6 that 5 is
01:08:39 (2,3,4) - make a straight line?
01:11:22 (4,5,6,7) - make a straight line

Hard:
SPOILER
This is a little bit too similar to normal for my taste. I would like if you changed some of the patterns, especially the ones in the middle that are virtually the same as the ones in normal.

combo mod:
00:54:89 (1,2) - swap new combo

nazi mod:
00:40:28 (1,2) - make the same distance from the stack 2 combos before as the previous combo
00:45:78 (1) - stack on the previous blue 2
00:57:72 (5) - make a horizontal reflection of 3?
01:08:39 (2,3,4) - make a straight line?
01:11:22 (4,5,6,7) - make a straight line
01:26:61 (1,2) - highlight the rectangle of 6 and line up this note with the bottom right notes. Ex:01:22:84 (1,2,3) -
01:27:08 (1,2) - highlight the rectangle of 6 and line up this note with the top middle notes. Ex: 01:24:10 (1,2,3) -

For a 2 difficulty map, the maps are too similar in my opinion. Still, the maps are decent. Star.
0_o
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Joined December 2008
0_o
Normal
Pretty tough for the easiest difficulty...
00:19:71 (2,3) [and similar]- It's difficult to tell whether 3 comes a white tick or red tick later, since until then you are following a steady beat on the white ticks. I would either unstack 3, or move 3 to the white tick
00:34:95 (3) [and similiar[ - Again, tricky when until then the stacked notes on the end of sliders where 1/2 away. If you dont unstack the above, unstack these :P
00:50:18 (1,2) - To me it feels more natural to get rid of 2 and add another repeat, but your call
01:14:36 (1,2,3) - This doesn't sync well with the music, considering previous to this was mostly white tick stuff

Hard
~

Hollow
00:34:95 (4,1,2,1) - This confused me :S
01:08:71 (5,6,7) - Overlapping streams like this are annoying

Nice skin + hitsounds
*
Starrodkirby86
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Starrodkirby86
After Dark...I rape bubble


(also IRC fixes)
DJPop
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DJPop
~Hard & Hollow~
Suggest the better way to place notes
01:16:39 (1) - move ending point 1 beat backward
01:19:07 - add circle

Otherwise, hitbursts make the map harder to see =_="


+Star
Sushi
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Sushi
The only thing i found in editor were some stacking issues. BUT while playing, auto stacking correct these. this really is a great map.
Also, i like the skin :3

Nyaaah, star!
Cyclone
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Cyclone
Try this on for size

1. Offset: 3,690ms BPM: 191.05
2. Offset: 48,230ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)
3. Offset: 78,380ms BPM: Inhereted (1x)
Hitoshirenu Shourai
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Hitoshirenu Shourai
My 2 cents: 191 BPM / 3,690 Offset

I'm obviously not going to test it, but it was perfect timing on my side.
blissfulyoshi
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blissfulyoshi
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
whymeman
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whymeman
Remember, some of the errors posted are suggestions, not directions. Edit to what you see fit.

Detailed Modding v.4.5 Go

Osz. File Check (Done)

SPOILER
Video: Yes
SB (Story Board): No
Custom Skin: Yes
Backg round: Yes
[Current] Size: 12.50 MB / 20.00 MB
Source: Yes
Tags: Yes


[Normal] (Done)

SPOILER
Timing (BPM / Offset): 191.050 / 3,695 ms (Sounds good so far)
[Currently] with double BPM: No
[Currently] with altered timing sections: No
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: 1 / 1.10
Distance Snap Average: x0.7 + Manual Snapping
[Current] Objects: 189 ( 157 Circles / 32 Sliders / No Spinners )
[Current] Max Combo: 263
[Current] Max Score: 1,357,908
[Current] Star Rating: 4.24
[Current] HP Drain Rate: Lv.4
[Current] Circle Size: Lv.1
[Current] Overall Difficulty: Lv.6

00:20:49 (3) - Uneven under the slider end.
00:23:00 (3) - ^
00:30:54 (3) - ^
00:33:05 (3) - ^
00:34:94 (3) - ^
00:37:45 (4) - ^
00:54:57 (3,1,2,3) - What happened with the spacing here?
01:16:24 (4) - Not even under the slider end.
01:16:45 (B) - Delete and replace break.

Notes: The map is nice but please check into the spacing. Its a bit unstable and concidering that this is the easiest difficulty, you don't want to mess with the jumps too much. And consider having a spinner in the map other wise the scores would be too rigid to compete with.

[Hard] (Done)

SPOILER
Timing (BPM / Offset): 191.050 / 3,695 ms (Sounds good so far)
[Currently] with double BPM: No
[Currently] with altered timing sections: No
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: 1 / 1.10
Distance Snap Average: x0.8 + Manual Snapping
[Current] Objects: 248 ( 228 Circles / 19 Sliders / 1 Spinner )
[Current] Max Combo: 296
[Current] Max Score: 2,401,570
[Current] Star Rating: 4.85
[Current] HP Drain Rate: Lv.7
[Current] Circle Size: Lv.3
[Current] Overall Difficulty: Lv.9

00:17:51 (1,2,3) - Unevenly scaled jump.
00:20:49 (3) - Not evenly under the slider end.
00:23:00 (3) - ^
00:30:54 (3) - ^
00:33:05 (3) - ^
00:34:94 (4) - ^
00:37:45 (4) - ^
01:12:31 (8,9,1,2) - If you take a closer look at this spacing, you can see its not the same.
01:16:24 (5) - Not even under the slider end.

Notes: Double check the spacing around the map. Other than that, it seems good.

[Hollow Mix] (Done)

SPOILER
Timing (BPM / Offset): 191.050 / 3,695 ms (Sounds good so far)
[Currently] with double BPM: No
[Currently] with altered timing sections: No
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: 1 / 1.40
Distance Snap Average: x0.9 + Manual Snapping
[Current] Objects: 275 ( 255 Circles / 19 Sliders / 1 Spinner )
[Current] Max Combo: 325
[Current] Max Score: 2,928,330
[Current] Star Rating: 4.93
[Current] HP Drain Rate: Lv.9 (The drain looks like its tries to overpower the map at some point...)
[Current] Circle Size: Lv.2
[Current] Overall Difficulty: Lv.9

00:09:03 (2) - This part could look a bit neater if you flip the set of notes before it but its optional.
00:25:36 (1,2,3,4) - Unevenly scaled jump.
01:16:24 (5) - Uneven under the slider end.

Notes: Not much to look into but the spacing is a bit unstable. Also, its possible to mix around the notes or add a few in with some pattern changes like around the start and the end of the map. Also, make sure to check into the drain rate...

Overall: The map overall is nice. The main issue is just the spacing that needs to be checked on but other than that, its good for now. I'll drop my star in then...
Last edited by whymeman , edited 1 time in total.
EEeee
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Joined July 2008
EEeee
just a couple quick suggestions

Normal
00:47:97 (1) - Remove new combo, add new combo to the note right after this, I'm suggesting this cause the next not kinda does a jumpish thingy
01:16:398 - Fix break

Hard
00:47:97 (1) - remove new combo, add new combo to the note right after this one
hmmm, that's about it, I see more like ^, but they look like they play well in those other places

Hollow Mix
00:16:57 (1) - hmmm, well it kinda looks good in this diff, but check if it looks okay if u remove this new combo, and add to the next
01:13:10 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This just looks cool, had to point it out


P.S. can i make a diff in this map ._. I know it's late, but i never knew this song was sang by Asian Kung-Fu . . . . I recently got into the anime Bleach, and I love this song ._.

Download: Asian Kung-Fu Generation - After Dark (TV Size) (ztrot) [Name it something cool, like Hollow].osu
Metroid
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Metroid
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
0_o
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0_o
EEeee
Turn down stacking by 1 to prevent stacking atrocities like 00:47:66 (3) :P
Also the HP drain is pretty high compared to the difficulty of the map, it's pretty easy to fail after missing a couple jumps. Lower it a notch or two?
EEeee
1,026 posts
Joined July 2008
EEeee

Metroid wrote:

I'm only modding EEeee's difficulty by request.
I have big issues, unintuitive jumps and no regard for at least a spacing to be a basis.
Also that growing jump is illegal...01:03:67 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -

Hahahahahaa I kinda laughed, really metroid sometimes u make me laugh,
Growing Jumps Illegal, hmmm when show me proof of this, hahahahaha, seriously it's too funny, hahahahaha, also if the map is hard for u, don't cry about it, u can always play an easy diff to make u feel better
Shinde
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707 posts
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Shinde
Mm.
SPOILER
ATTACH[Asian Kung-Fu Generation - After Dark (TV Size) (ztrot) [Shinde's Shikai].osu]

The clap/whistle spam on EEeee's Bankai halfway through sounds bad imo. Some of the jumps feel unintuitive as well.

Those are my general thoughts, perhaps I'll write a more thorough and formal mod post at some other point in time for all difficulties.

Download: Asian Kung-Fu Generation - After Dark (TV Size) (ztrot) [Shinde's Shikai].osu



ztrot
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Topic Starter
ztrot

EEeee wrote:

Metroid wrote:

I'm only modding EEeee's difficulty by request.
I have big issues, unintuitive jumps and no regard for at least a spacing to be a basis.
Also that growing jump is illegal...01:03:67 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -

Hahahahahaa I kinda laughed, really metroid sometimes u make me laugh,
Growing Jumps Illegal, hmmm when show me proof of this, hahahahaha, seriously it's too funny, hahahahaha, also if the map is hard for u, don't cry about it, u can always play an easy diff to make u feel better
EEeee be nice >;(
EEeee
1,026 posts
Joined July 2008
EEeee

ztrot wrote:

EEeee wrote:

Metroid wrote:

I'm only modding EEeee's difficulty by request.
I have big issues, unintuitive jumps and no regard for at least a spacing to be a basis.
Also that growing jump is illegal...01:03:67 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -

Hahahahahaa I kinda laughed, really metroid sometimes u make me laugh,
Growing Jumps Illegal, hmmm when show me proof of this, hahahahaha, seriously it's too funny, hahahahaha, also if the map is hard for u, don't cry about it, u can always play an easy diff to make u feel better
EEeee be nice >;(
He started it >_<
ztrot
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Topic Starter
ztrot
EEeee plz add the timing i added to the map.
you have so many timing sections and i don't want to mess it up
And plz do something about the stacks.
You have 3 days to reply then i will remove This map is ready for ranking >.<
EEeee
1,026 posts
Joined July 2008
EEeee
uhhh, this is the neatest I can get, patterns have not been changed
new timing added
and maybe stacks looks a little better :/

anyways, that is kinda true, if u get a guarantee on this map being ranked but my diff seems to be causing trouble, u can drop it T__T, but make sure u don't drop it for some nazi >_<

Download: Asian Kung-Fu Generation - After Dark (TV Size) (ztrot) [EEeee's Bankai].osu
anonymous_old
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anonymous_old
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Lilac
Elite Mapper
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Joined December 2008
Lilac
This was one the first maps I wanted to do but never got around to do...

So I thought I'd make a difficulty. Whether you include it or not is up to you and I any decision you make, I will agree by.

So with that out of the way, I used Hard as the name because I can't think of a good difficulty name. Also, I haven't quite finished it yet but I'll wait on your opinion for that.

EDIT: Oh yeah, great map.

Download: Asian Kung-Fu Generation - After Dark (TV Size) (ztrot) [MB777's Hard].osu
EEeee
1,026 posts
Joined July 2008
EEeee
irc help on the offsets :) i mean i don't think it could've got ranked with that, minor problem, but i was told in my time that offset is everything :)


anyways, sorry for the drag, for sure u'll get this ranked soon, , , , , , , , , ,, , , i hope ;_;

Download: Asian Kung-Fu Generation - After Dark (TV Size) (ztrot) [EEeee's Bankai].osu
Raidou Saijo
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Raidou Saijo
What can I say other than " THE MOST AWESOME MAP EVER MAN!!!"? ...Okay. Now that that's outta the way, great map dude. I hope this get's ranked soon, too...
Lilac
Elite Mapper
1,515 posts
Joined December 2008
Lilac
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: Asian Kung-Fu Generation - After Dark (TV Size) (ztrot) [MB777's Hard].osu
Alace
osu! Alumni
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Alace
Nice hitsound
Hard is good and fun
shoot a star~
arien666
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Joined May 2009
arien666
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Last edited by arien666 , edited 1 time in total.
MoonFragrance
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Joined April 2009
MoonFragrance
Why the BPM is 195.05? OwO;
Kinaya
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Joined July 2009
Kinaya
Star 4 you
Starrodkirby86
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Starrodkirby86
IRC job, stuff checks out now. I suppose. Hehe. ^^
Larto
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Joined June 2008
Larto
Skin:
good

Hollow mix:
good

Hard:
good

NormaL:
TOO HARD FOR THE EASIEST DIFFICULTY RAAGEE

Make a "retard easy" as you called it <.<

EDIT:
Rebubbled.
Takuma
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Takuma
Hollow Mix:
00:56:76 (1,2) - I reaaally think you should reverse selection here.
00:35:25 (1,2) - Maybe you can tone this down a bit? This part makes me so agnry. >8(

Easy:
01:11:21 (2,4) - The distance snap fucked up a bit here. Please move 1 level 3 grid right, then highlight the whole combo and move it 1 level 3 grid down - you don't have to do this, it'll just make it a tad nicer. ;)

Only suggestions - I'm fine with ranking it how it is.
ztrot
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ztrot
I'd rather you rank it as is plz
m980
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m980
NEATFREAK NAZI

[Easy]
00:22:53 (3) - EEEEEEEEEEW

[Normal]
This is all clutter. Uuuugly.
Protips : Spread the beats out more. Your beats are mostly focused near the center.

[Hard]
The whole map seems to be "White Tick, White Tick, WhiteRedWhite, White, White, White, White." That's REALLY boring :(

[Hollow Mix]
^

[Overall]
The whole mapset itself is boring. It's not really all that fun. Try to diversify where each beat goes on the timeline, since right now it just seems to have filler triplets to up the difficulty.
ztrot
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ztrot
erk this won't be ranked ever :P
Will do
arien666
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Joined May 2009
arien666

ztrot wrote:

erk this won't be ranked ever :P
Will do
No!
It'll be ranked and cheer up!
And I think it's good map :3

Keep going XD
Shinde
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Shinde
Hmm.

SPOILER
ATTACH[Asian Kung-Fu Generation - After Dark (TV Size) (ztrot) [Shinde's Shikai].osu]

Download: Asian Kung-Fu Generation - After Dark (TV Size) (ztrot) [Shinde's Shikai].osu
Jarby
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Joined August 2008
Jarby
Fixed. Kudosu now.

Download: Asian Kung-Fu Generation - After Dark (TV Size) (ztrot) [Hollow Mix].osu
m980
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m980
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