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Suzaku VS Genbu - Himiko

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Topic Starter
Jemmmmy
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 02 July 2014 at 19:28:53

Artist: Suzaku VS Genbu
Title: Himiko
Source: beatmania IIDX 16 EMPRESS
Tags: stream
BPM: 185
Filesize: 3506kb
Play Time: 02:08
Difficulties Available:
  1. Basic (1.61 stars, 134 notes)
  2. Beginner (1.16 stars, 85 notes)
  3. ExtrA (5.88 stars, 790 notes)
  4. Hyper (4.1 stars, 355 notes)
Download: Suzaku VS Genbu - Himiko
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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AruOtta
Hello, M4M from your queue =D

BeginneR

Circle Size -> 2


I think you must re-create these sliders =/


NC
01:18:482 (1) - This NC should start here : 01:17:833 (5)

Placements
00:36:645 (3,1) - Distance Snap ?
01:03:887 (5,6) - I think it's better to don't stack it


Rythm
00:39:888 - Timing point here ?

BasiC


NC
00:14:591 (1) - This combo should start here : 00:13:293 (5)
00:16:861 (1) - New Combo
00:17:834 (3) - This combo should start here : 00:18:807 (1)
00:19:780 (4) - Delete NC
00:21:077 (5) - NC
00:26:266 (1) - NC
00:42:483 (5) - NC
00:42:483 (5) - Delete NC
01:04:860 (1) - ^ (Logical)
01:11:995 (4) - NC
01:13:293 (1) - Delete NC
01:18:482 (1) - Should start here : 01:17:185 (5)
01:50:266 (5) - NC
01:51:563 (1) - Delete NC
01:53:545 (2) - NC

Placements
01:03:887 (3,4) - Don't stack them

Rythm
00:39:888 - Timing point

HypeR


Placements
01:14:590 (1,2,3,4) - Warning, we can think it's 1/4 beat
01:15:887 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:17:185 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:18:482 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:52:212 (1) - Stack with (2) ?

ExtrA


Placements
00:02:104 (1) - Place it in x:440 y:52
00:41:185 (4,4) - These sliders are in a strange position

Rythm
02:01:786 (8) - Delete it (better with the music)

Good Luck °w°
Topic Starter
Jemmmmy

Kenterz9 wrote:

Hello, M4M from your queue =D

BeginneR

Circle Size -> 2


I think you must re-create these sliders =/ok


NC
01:18:482 (1) - This NC should start here : 01:17:833 (5)ok


Placements
00:36:645 (3,1) - Distance Snap ?? it's fine
01:03:887 (5,6) - I think it's better to don't stack itok


Rythm
00:39:888 - Timing point here ?ok

BasiC


NC
00:14:591 (1) - This combo should start here : 00:13:293 (5)
00:16:861 (1) - New Combo
00:17:834 (3) - This combo should start here : 00:18:807 (1)
00:19:780 (4) - Delete NC
00:21:077 (5) - NC
00:26:266 (1) - NC
00:42:483 (5) - NC
00:42:483 (5) - Delete NC
01:04:860 (1) - ^ (Logical)
01:11:995 (4) - NC
01:13:293 (1) - Delete NC
01:18:482 (1) - Should start here : 01:17:185 (5)
01:50:266 (5) - NC
01:51:563 (1) - Delete NC
01:53:545 (2) - NC all done

Placements
01:03:887 (3,4) - Don't stack themok

Rythm
00:39:888 - Timing pointok

HypeR


Placements
01:14:590 (1,2,3,4) - Warning, we can think it's 1/4 beatok
01:15:887 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:17:185 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:18:482 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:52:212 (1) - Stack with (2) ?no

ExtrA


Placements
00:02:104 (1) - Place it in x:440 y:52change some
00:41:185 (4,4) - These sliders are in a strange positionthinking a something better

Rythm
02:01:786 (8) - Delete it (better with the music)no

Good Luck °w°
woo thank you!!
Nickelony


[Beginner]

00:00:321 (1) - Remove this slider and just let the spinner be first.
01:03:887 (5) - Remove this circle.

[Basic]

00:00:321 (1) - Remove this slider and just let the spinner be first.
00:43:780 (1) - This slider shape looks very bad.

[Hyper]

OD - 5

[Extra]

OD - 7

[General]

Please change the BG, It doesn't fit to the song... BG suggestion: http://www.mrwallpaper.com/wallpapers/h ... 66x768.jpg
The StoryBoard is terrible. You can just use 1 Sprite to trigger all the pulses... (You don't need 100 sprites :P )

So Far... I can't really find any BIG problems... Nice map! :)
Topic Starter
Jemmmmy

iNickel wrote:



[Beginner]

00:00:321 (1) - Remove this slider and just let the spinner be first.ok
01:03:887 (5) - Remove this circle.nop

[Basic]

00:00:321 (1) - Remove this slider and just let the spinner be first.nop
00:43:780 (1) - This slider shape looks very bad.ok

[Hyper]

OD - 5nop

[Extra]

OD - 7nop

[General]

Please change the BG, It doesn't fit to the song... BG suggestion: http://www.mrwallpaper.com/wallpapers/h ... 66x768.jpgtrying to find better one
The StoryBoard is terrible. You can just use 1 Sprite to trigger all the pulses... (You don't need 100 sprites :P )kkk,but copy is efficient

So Far... I can't really find any BIG problems... Nice map! :)
thank you ;)
Kibbleru
i dont understand why ExtrA is rated 4.5 stars eue
Winek
I can't mod that, I don't have any suggestion ><
Sorry bout that... I'll star it. Good Luck with it!
Oh and pls. I don,t really like that storyboard... It's weird.
tkcbahamut
Hi! Here is my suggestion for my fav song in beatmania XD

[BeginneR] Use 1/2 beat snap divisor ( You can nevermind it, it doesn't change things but make it looks better for a easy diff lol... )

[ExtrA]
00:01:780 (2,1) - Distance's too far in this moment, better put (1) closer

[HypeR]
00:46:698 (1,1,1,1,1) ... Focusing 00:47:995 (1,1,1) - Use the same spacing like the first 2 circles will be better
00:49:941 (3,1,1) - Use the same spacing like 00:46:698 (1,1,1) -
00:52:536 (1,1) - ^
01:32:752 (3,4) - Distance's too far, better put (4) closer

---
Hope my suggestions help!
Love this beatmap! :)
Kibbleru
M4M from your queue gunna try to mod this lol

[HypeR]
00:08:753 (3,1) - not really important but i learned a useful trick from a wise man for stacking things like this, basically ctrl g things untill both the heads of the sliders are at where you want to stack them. stack the heads, then ctrl g back
so here you want to ctrl g (3) -> stack them with grid snap -> ctrl g (3) back to it's original position
do this with your other stacks :3 its so useful
00:23:996 (2,3) - space better
00:24:969 (1,6) - i'd say try to stack these?
00:47:347 (1,1,1) - no need for NC?
00:53:185 (1,2,3) - have the same DS as you had for 00:49:293 (1,2,3)? (1.3x)
00:54:482 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:59:022 (1,2,3,4) - just ctrl g them all, flow seems to make more sense like this since the sliders are leading into the next one
01:04:860 (1,2) - -nazi- fix blanket
01:37:293 (1,2) - ^
01:06:887 (1) - honestly might be a bit long, i'd end it short and have a break time
01:15:563 (6) - how does this look to u :o
01:19:131 (1,2,3,4) - slightly more tilt?
01:27:563 - either ctrl + g (1) and (3) or (2) and (4) :o?
01:31:941 - add note?

[ExtrA]
00:15:077 (4,8) - try not to overlap your stream? gets a bit crowded
00:18:320 (2) - how bout this
00:31:537 (7,8) - ctrl g?
01:36:158 (2) - ^
01:36:483 (2) - ^
00:51:887 (1,1,1) - why not keep up this pattern? 00:49:941 (3,1,1)
01:01:617 (1) - slider kinda ugly, make the bend less sharp pls
01:41:347 (2,3) - -nazi- fix blanket

[BasiC]
00:13:293 (1,3) - may be hard pattern for newbies?

[BeginneR]
00:56:428 (1,2,3,4) - too many consecutive circles


hope this helps
Topic Starter
Jemmmmy

tkcbahamut wrote:

Hi! Here is my suggestion for my fav song in beatmania XD

[BeginneR] Use 1/2 beat snap divisor ( You can nevermind it, it doesn't change things but make it looks better for a easy diff lol... ).............

[ExtrA]
00:01:780 (2,1) - Distance's too far in this moment, better put (1) closer.errr. no

[HypeR]
00:46:698 (1,1,1,1,1) ... Focusing 00:47:995 (1,1,1) - Use the same spacing like the first 2 circles will be better.no..

00:49:941 (3,1,1) - Use the same spacing like 00:46:698 (1,1,1) - on purpose
00:52:536 (1,1) - ^
01:32:752 (3,4) - Distance's too far, better put (4) closer.on purpose

---
Hope my suggestions help!
Love this beatmap! :)
thanks
Topic Starter
Jemmmmy

Kibbleru wrote:

M4M from your queue gunna try to mod this lol

[HypeR]
00:08:753 (3,1) - not really important but i learned a useful trick from a wise man for stacking things like this, basically ctrl g things untill both the heads of the sliders are at where you want to stack them. stack the heads, then ctrl g back
so here you want to ctrl g (3) -> stack them with grid snap -> ctrl g (3) back to it's original position
do this with your other stacks :3 its so usefulsure!!
00:23:996 (2,3) - space better
00:24:969 (1,6) - i'd say try to stack these?no.. it's fine
00:47:347 (1,1,1) - no need for NC?ok
00:53:185 (1,2,3) - have the same DS as you had for 00:49:293 (1,2,3)? (1.3x)sure!!
00:54:482 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^sure!!
00:59:022 (1,2,3,4) - just ctrl g them all, flow seems to make more sense like this since the sliders are leading into the next one
01:04:860 (1,2) - -nazi- fix blanketsure!!
01:37:293 (1,2) - ^sure!!
01:06:887 (1) - honestly might be a bit long, i'd end it short and have a break timecut a little bit!
01:15:563 (6) - how does this look to u :olooking great, but no change
01:19:131 (1,2,3,4) - slightly more tilt?ok!
01:27:563 - either ctrl + g (1) and (3) or (2) and (4) :o?
01:31:941 - add note?ok!

[ExtrA]
00:15:077 (4,8) - try not to overlap your stream? gets a bit crowded....
00:18:320 (2) - how bout this....no
00:31:537 (7,8) - ctrl g?
01:36:158 (2) - ^
01:36:483 (2) - ^
00:51:887 (1,1,1) - why not keep up this pattern? 00:49:941 (3,1,1)
01:01:617 (1) - slider kinda ugly, make the bend less sharp pls
01:41:347 (2,3) - -nazi- fix blanketok!

[BasiC]
00:13:293 (1,3) - may be hard pattern for newbies?err..change!

[BeginneR]
00:56:428 (1,2,3,4) - too many consecutive circles.no change


hope this helps
thanks a lot :)
Xiaolin
M4M from you queue~
[General]
-Why capitalizing the last word? I think if you used diff names like this ''Beginner'' it'll be better.
[BeginneR]
00:10:699 (3) -Move to x:316 y:276 and change it shape like the slider which is at 00:09:402 (2)
01:03:887 (4,5,6) -Stack?
01:45:076 (3) -Make it like this:
Example
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1455149

I checked the other diffs, they all seem to be fine~ =w= GL ~ !
AIR
黑~来自M4M

BeginneR
  1. 00:12:645 (5,1) - 01:38:590 (3,4) - 没围好
  2. 00:26:266 (3,4) - 01:02:914 (4,5,6) - 01:41:185 (6,1) - 这个难度间距统一下
  3. 00:37:942 - 这里的空缺感觉不太好
  4. 00:43:131 (3) - 去Note填上一个两拍滑条感觉好点
  5. 感觉timing跟难度不搭调
BasiC
  1. 00:21:077 (1,2) - 建议分成两个二分条

HypeR
  1. 00:05:591 (2) - 这里前奏,建议放在红线上
  2. 00:28:861 - 其他几个难度这里有东西,考虑取消break
  3. 00:41:348 (2,3) - 这里换两个二连比较顺,也避免节奏单一
  4. 01:23:671 (1,2) - 这个梗比二连难点
ExtrA
50%听了下,摸不动;w;
[Twinkle]
好图!
Ujimatsu Chiya
Mod request~ From my Queues.

Red : Must Fix. ( Unranked )
Blue : Recommendation.
Black : My personal opinion.
[General]
  1. Change diffs name. Begginer > Basic , Basic > Novice , Advanced or Medium. Difficulty: Easy Basic named below.
  2. http://puu.sh/9hIhO/c8401ac2d7.png remove this.
[ExtrA]

  • Extra difficulty like overmap.
    Like this patterns >> 01:32:111 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -

    00:29:192 (4,5,6,7,8) - chnage space. >> http://puu.sh/9hG7c/3fe70550f9.jpg Follow the cursor looks nicer.
    00:29:841 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
    00:47:354 (1) - cheak DS
    00:55:786 (5) - ^
    01:06:165 (1) - remove NC. and 01:06:489 (3) NC here.
    01:07:138 (3) - same (2) slider.
    01:07:624 (3) - ^
    --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
    01:24:975 (1) - cheak DS.
    01:25:624 (1) - ^
    01:26:273 (1) - ^
    DS is a long jump in the time constant is preferred.
    --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
    01:29:516 (1,2,3,4) - change. same here. 01:28:867 (1,2,3,4) -
    01:53:038 (2) - cheak DS. same here. 01:53:381 (1,2) -
    01:57:495 (1,2) - Position is ambiguous. (4) with open circles and place a little more spacing.
[Basic]

  • 00:10:706 (1) - Add to clap this slider tick.
    00:12:003 (3) - ^
    00:13:300 (1) - ^
    00:15:246 (4) - ^
    01:24:975 (3) - add clap end of slider.
    01:36:002 (3) - Add to clap this slider tick.
    01:43:786 (4) - ^
    01:46:381 (3) - ^
[Beginner]

  • 00:13:300 (1) - Add to clap this slider tick. only here. 00:13:949
    00:15:895 (4) - ^ same timing.
    01:13:300 (2) - ^
    01:15:894 (4) - ^
    01:18:489 (2) - ^
    00:36:652 (3) - add clap end of slider.
    00:37:949 (4) - change finish.
    01:41:192 (6) - add Finish end of slider.
ok. That's all. good map and good song :)

but Extra diff must fix it.

GL :3
Topic Starter
Jemmmmy
[Lapis Aoki]M4M from you queue~
[General]
-Why capitalizing the last word? I think if you used diff names like this ''Beginner'' it'll be better. done
[BeginneR]
00:10:699 (3) -Move to x:316 y:276 and change it shape like the slider which is at 00:09:402 (2)change some
01:03:887 (4,5,6) -Stack?no
01:45:076 (3) -Make it like this:
Example
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1455149

I checked the other diffs, they all seem to be fine~ =w= GL ~ !

thank you

[ids]
黑~来自M4M

BeginneR
  1. 00:12:645 (5,1) - 01:38:590 (3,4) - 没围好ok
  2. 00:26:266 (3,4) - 01:02:914 (4,5,6) - 01:41:185 (6,1) - 这个难度间距统一下都是按ds来呢
  3. 00:37:942 - 这里的空缺感觉不太好空吧,节奏难
  4. 00:43:131 (3) - 去Note填上一个两拍滑条感觉好点不变
  5. 感觉timing跟难度不搭调.......怎么说
BasiC
  1. 00:21:077 (1,2) - 建议分成两个二分条没必要了

HypeR
  1. 00:05:591 (2) - 这里前奏,建议放在红线上no,节奏在这里,红线没东西
  2. 00:28:861 - 其他几个难度这里有东西,考虑取消breakno
  3. 00:41:348 (2,3) - 这里换两个二连比较顺,也避免节奏单一2连dt难度加大太多
  4. 01:23:671 (1,2) - 这个梗比二连难点应该还好
ExtrA
50%听了下,摸不动;w;
谢谢!

eINess wrote:

Mod request~ From my Queues.

Red : Must Fix. ( Unranked )
Blue : Recommendation.
Black : My personal opinion.
[General]
  1. Change diffs name. Begginer > Basic , Basic > Novice , Advanced or Medium. Difficulty: Easy Basic named below.
  2. http://puu.sh/9hIhO/c8401ac2d7.png remove this.
[ExtrA]

  • Extra difficulty like overmap. i hate overmap and i can tell you there is no overmap in my map
    Like this patterns >> 01:32:111 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -

    00:29:192 (4,5,6,7,8) - chnage space. >> http://puu.sh/9hG7c/3fe70550f9.jpg Follow the cursor looks nicer.
    00:29:841 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
    00:47:354 (1) - cheak DS
    00:55:786 (5) - ^
    01:06:165 (1) - remove NC. and 01:06:489 (3) NC here.
    01:07:138 (3) - same (2) slider.
    01:07:624 (3) - ^
    --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
    01:24:975 (1) - cheak DS.
    01:25:624 (1) - ^
    01:26:273 (1) - ^
    DS is a long jump in the time constant is preferred.
    --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
    01:29:516 (1,2,3,4) - change. same here. 01:28:867 (1,2,3,4) -
    01:53:038 (2) - cheak DS. same here. 01:53:381 (1,2) -
    01:57:495 (1,2) - Position is ambiguous. (4) with open circles and place a little more spacing.
[Basic]

  • 00:10:706 (1) - Add to clap this slider tick.
    00:12:003 (3) - ^
    00:13:300 (1) - ^
    00:15:246 (4) - ^
    01:24:975 (3) - add clap end of slider.
    01:36:002 (3) - Add to clap this slider tick.
    01:43:786 (4) - ^
    01:46:381 (3) - ^
[Beginner]

  • 00:13:300 (1) - Add to clap this slider tick. only here. 00:13:949
    00:15:895 (4) - ^ same timing.
    01:13:300 (2) - ^
    01:15:894 (4) - ^
    01:18:489 (2) - ^
    00:36:652 (3) - add clap end of slider.
    00:37:949 (4) - change finish.
    01:41:192 (6) - add Finish end of slider.
ok. That's all. good map and good song :)

but Extra diff must fix it.change some

GL :3
thanks
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