Rakuen wrote:

Hi~

M4M from your queue
My map: CLIFF EGDE feat. Nakamura Maiko - Endless Tears

[General]
Nice song, you should map more of these songs!

[Alarido's Insane]
Nice diff, I like symmetry and blankets \o/ ► Thanksie~
00:52:148 - Put something here ► Added.

Hope it helps!
Sorry for any inconvinience.

DexFrild wrote:

Мини-ИРЦ xD

19:43 DexFrild: твой хард. 03:33:228 - добавь тут либо серкл либо подвинь 03:33:398 (5) - на это место и добавь реверс. там точно что-то должно быть, мне кажется))
19:45 DexFrild: 03:34:591 - тут тож самое)
19:45 AlexaBM: добавила реверс
19:45 AlexaBM: и туть
19:46 DexFrild: 03:17:887 (8) - может тут НК?
19:46 DexFrild: 03:20:614 (5) - и туть?
19:47 AlexaBM: я не знаю, по-моему НК смотрится лучше с сильной доли
19:47 DexFrild: да. это правильно. оставляй.
19:48 DexFrild: еще момент)
19:49 DexFrild: 03:14:478 (3,4,5) - переход с четвертого на пятый - один, а с третьего на четвертый - другой. с четвертого на пятый выглядит няшнее ИМХО xD
19:50 DexFrild: придется немного покрутить их)
19:50 AlexaBM: хм, посмотрим
19:53 DexFrild: 01:23:000 (1) - тут не хочешь что-нибудь добавить?
19:54 AlexaBM: м..
19:54 AlexaBM: не думаю
19:54 AlexaBM: есть варианты?
19:59 DexFrild: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1177337
20:00 AlexaBM: не, это я оставлю..
20:00 DexFrild: оке)
20:01 DexFrild: 01:30:500 - хотелось тут нажать. но и так неплохо. просто давно практики не было.
20:02 AlexaBM: даж не наю. тут впринципе спейсинг.. говорит обождать чутка)
20:02 AlexaBM: кто-то уже когорил поставить серкл
20:02 AlexaBM: говорил*
20:02 AlexaBM: попробуем
20:04 DexFrild: да, но это для мапперов больше понятно. не все игроки знают как строится мапа и просерают такие моменты))
20:11 AlexaBM: а к нормалу претензий нет? сорри, что отвлекаю)
20:11 DexFrild: ща гляну) совсем забыл)
20:15 DexFrild: ниче не смог найти))

Мапка супер :3 жду новых обновлений и ранка
Удачки :з

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Ello, mod as requested! o̿ ̭ o̿ hi~~
[notice][Normal]
00:42:773 - Highly recommend you add a note here like how you did at 00:34:591. That way, the notes will sound more consistent and easily identified. added
00:45:841 (5) - NC? yes
00:48:569 (1) - Add a finish on the head please. added
00:51:296 (4) - NC okay
01:07:660 (5) - ^ ^
01:44:478 (3,4) - try replacing these objects with two 1/2 sliders like this? changed
- Adding a clap on the head of the 4th slider I added claps on the sliders tails
This simple form of objects may follow the drum rolls better imo. really!
01:48:569 - 01:50:614 done too
02:12:944 (7,1) - Unstack these notes? After seeing how 02:10:386 (4,5) - isn't stacked, these notes make a more confusing appeal. omg changed
03:06:296 (5,6) - Sorry for being nazi here, but could you add a little more curve to slider 5 please? added a bit (:

[Hard]
00:45:841 (5) - NC,for the jump heard in the vocals tone. added
01:00:841 (3,4,5) - After seeing how the entire sliders were placed in all the choruses of the song, I'd suggest that you don't stack these, but overlap their heads/tails instead. It just looks really strange and confusing. changed
01:09:023 (4,5) - Overlap 01:09:023 (4) - 's tail over slider 5 instead please. no
01:33:398 (2) - Put this note a bit higher? It's nice to see you using DS, but I think a jump can go here between this note and the previous slider. okay
01:49:080 (2) - Move to 01:49:250, and add a note here on 01:49:080 instead. Now you can add the missing clap on 01:49:250 (Since this part sounded awkward without the hitsound). really better, changed

01:54:023 (7,1) - Swap notes please (so that the hit circle is on 01:54:705 instead). If you notice, the vocals long hold on the words 'here' starts at 01:54:023, so putting the slider here would fit very well with the music. no changes here
02:09:023 (4,5) - Unstack, and overlap sliders instead. done
02:37:660 (1,3) - Aww c'mon, you could definitely fashion these sliders better! D: Something like this would've looked way cooler: ok, I did smth like this

An easy way to do this without affecting the DS is to create a slider right on top of the existing one, so you can make sure the head and tail will stay on the same spots. thanks for the advice \:D/

03:03:569 (5) - Extend it's tail to 03:04:080, so that the rhythm is consistent and familiar with the previous rhythm with 02:53:853 (5,1,2) - . done
03:20:614 (5) - Extend its tail to 03:21:126,so its rhythm is familiar with 02:56:069 (4,1) - okay
03:24:364 (2) - NC ok
03:31:523 (1,2) - Unstack. ok

Good luck!

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Ello, mod as requested! o̿ ̭ o̿

[Alarido's Insane]
01:09:705 (7,8,1) - Nice format, but the rhythm's so simple? I can see a stream fitting here at 01:09:705 - 01:10:387 better. ► Well... it doesn't feels to me as it... In truth, it feels more likely those scrunched sliders (those with dozens of red points, which became unrankable due to some revival of osu!commandments). But... it doesn't feel to me having 1/8 beats here). As a second reason, I'm trying an approach of Larto's style with my personal touch (Larto's seems often angular/squared). And... I wish Larto come back to osu! and, why not, to BAT.
01:19:932 (7) - Add finish on the head? ► Added.
01:21:296 - A hit circle here with a finish will make a better ending to the first chorus. ► Surely. Also changed the pattern to a hexagon with a small jump from the last slider before it.
01:49:080 (2) - Lol same suggestion from Hard. Move to 01:49:250, and add a note here on 01:49:080 instead. Now you can add the missing clap on 01:49:250 (Since this part sounded awkward without the hitsound). ► Changed up to all.
02:32:205 (1) - Really neat shape, but this slider took an entire phrase out of the lyrics o.o Ending it at 02:34:932 would be better, since 02:34:932 and after is still map-able ► Thanks to Gonz ^^ A calmer part as a stopless raven before the strongest Kiai (: so keeping it.
02:39:023 (3,4) - Fun suggestion. Highlight these objects and Ctrl +G, for an interesting flow ► Yeah, let's know what others will say (:
03:12:091 (7,10) - add finish to match the cymbal crashes heard in the music? ► Feels amazing :3

Really nice diff Only the stacking issues in the Hard diff is really the big problem I see.
Good luck!

Winek wrote:

From my Modding queue!

General
May I know why Is there a tiny little pause to each kiai? ► For giving an emphasis in the stronger voice/instruments that occur just at Kiai middles.

Insane
You don't need 1/8 exept for a spinner, go back to 1/4 ► Ok.
Increase OD to 8 and HP to 8 or 9 ► For increasing OD to 8, I should raise AR to 9 (currently it's 8) and I'm not sure about it. But... I can adjust them later, according to Alexa's diffs.
02:39:023 (3,4) - Maybe you could distance them a bit? ► Ok.

I'm not very experienced, please accept this ^^ Hopes it help!

Winek wrote:

From my Modding queue!

Normal
Try checking your combo (I start getting annoying with my combo i guess) Normal diff should be 4-8 Changed in some places
00:37:660 (1,2,3,4) - Take a little exeption? Spread them alot! no
00:45:841 (1,2,1,2,3) - Maybe you could connect these to make only 1 combo? no
01:20:614 (1) - Add your clap to the head of slider, or maybe you did on purpose? Ok, added
01:37:660 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Connect into 1 combo? no

Hard
Combo should be 5-9 on hard. The most part of my combos are 5-9
Put approach rate 8-9 to surprise the player. No. AR 8 is too much for Hard diff. AR 9 is too much even for Insane diff.
Not experienced enough to detect anymore fault, seem correct at my eyes.

I'm not very experienced, please accept this ^^ Hopes it help!

yurunneram wrote:

Wow cleavage desu *runs*

Harururu~ Mod modu ticket tiketo~

NORMAL

00:45:841 (1) - Really this slider just looks straight so why not delete that point and make it straight :> ok, why not

00:47:887 (2) - ^ ehehehe ^

01:02:887 (4) - move to x88 y180 that way flow is better and we get a blanket (whee blanket @@) and hey lookit you don't need to respace things (ahhahahah) ok, done

01:11:750 (2) - Um... straighten out a bit? cuz the tail is nearer to (1) than the head @@ ok, changed a bit

02:29:478 (1) - x340 y92? I like blanket desu @@ I did smth like this

HARD

No prob ^^")7

Wheeee~~~~~

You have been modded out by Yurun Ceroia Neram~

1. if you not use SB, please remove .osb file.
2. ^ remove Widescreen Support check.

1. I worry about speed change of SV this Normal. because this Normal is least diff. but, mapping is good.
2. OD-1 please. because least diff and Normal. i strong suggest.
3. 00:40:387 (1) - remove NC. this broken NC pettern.
4. 00:43:114 - add NC.
5. 00:45:841 - remove NC.
6. 00:48:569 (1) - 1grid up. (x:380 y:156). before slider straig
7. ht flow more beautiful.
8. 00:54:023 (1) - i think remove curve looks better.
9. 01:07:489 (4) - umm, this is blue line and stack note is very hard rhythm 'least normal diff'. remove this circle better. instead, 01:07:319 - add note, this sound is drum took sound. please try.
   SPOILER

   
10. 01:09:023 (3) - 1gird left. very close soon overlaps. if you do this, seems beautiful. (1,2,3) between DS note.
    SPOILER

    
11. 01:15:671 (7) - again blue line... also, blue line is confuse rhythm bigginer player. are you sure? i strong suggest change this. 01:15:500 - instead you take drum sound better. for example
    SPOILER

    
12. 01:18:398 (3) - ^ same reason. simple example, this note move 01:18:228 and (x:350 y:111) is playable and flow good.
13. 01:20:614 (1) - why NC. i don't know you add NC. i suggest remove NC. this is pettern broken.
14. 01:21:466 (1) - spinner suggest, end line reduce 01:23:341, and, you try this.sound and more feel better.
    SPOILER

    
15. 01:36:296 (3) - blanket suggestion, middle point (x:301 y:172), end point (x:319 y:195) let's try. more beautiful seems.
16. 01:37:660 (1,2) - overlaps here, seems wrong, i suggest (2) move (x:24 y:116). because DS fix and overlaps fix. you try this.
17. 01:45:841 (1) - why all slider finish? you try remove finish. and please check slider start added finish. if added fine.
18. 01:53:682 x) - you try add note here. take drum part.
19. 02:00:671 (4) - blue line start, rhythm confused. i suggest (3) change slider. and (4) move 02:00:841. rhythm is more easy and fitting song. or add note 02:00:501 take drum sound.
    example
    SPOILER

    
20. 02:02:035 (1) - ^
21. 02:04:762 (5) - ^
22. 02:07:660 (5) - i think NC part. please add NC.
23. 02:08:341 - remove NC.
24. 02:12:944 (7) - blue line rhythm. same, should fix it.
25. 02:51:807 (1,3,5,7) - rhythm is fine. but, blue line start rhythm. bigginer player confused. you should other change rhythm. i suggest, take drum sound is simple better. example, 02:51:637,02:53:001,02:54:364,02:55:728
26. 02:59:307 (2) - ^ same.
27. 03:04:080 (2) - ^ you try drum rhythm or not start blue line vocal note. 03:06:296 (5) - this is good example.
28. 03:10:216 (5) - ^.
29. 03:20:444 (6) - ^.
30. 03:21:637 (2,3,4) - i think confuse play this. you try other pettern. for example [spoilerbox]
31. 03:28:626 (2,4) - blue line start. change please other rhythm.
32. 03:34:251 (1) - broken rhythm NC. remove NC.

1. 01:20:955 - D:C1 hitsound weird for me. i suggest remove this green line. more fit drum.
2. 01:55:387 (1) - this is very confuse play circle. 01:55:728 (1) - slider start stack is better. and more palyable. also, remove NC. and add finish (Drum finish)
3. 02:36:978 (7) - add whistle fitting.
4. 02:37:660 (1) - add whistle slider head. vocal fit.
5. 02:59:819 (4) - add NC.
6. 03:00:841 (1) - remove NC.
7. 03:02:205 (3) - Add NC. repart. i think should New Combo this.
8. 03:04:932 (7) - long white line. Add NC.
9. 03:05:273 (1) - remove NC.

• 
  Hello Alarido.

1. 01:09:023 (6,7) - i want soft or normal finish slider start both slider.
2. 01:19:932 (7) - ^
3. 01:56:410 x) - you try add note this part. more fit.
4. 02:24:023 (1,3) - add whistle slider start both. bit sad nothing hitsound part... please try.
5. 03:18:228 (2,3,4,5) - all note 1grid right. (3) not middle line is bit weird this diff.
6. 03:21:396 (2,3,4,5) - ^ same reason, but, 1grid left all note.
7. 03:35:018 (1) - add whistle. cute heard. try.

P o M u T a wrote:

here ticket

[General]

1. if you not use SB, please remove .osb file. okay
2. ^ remove Widescreen Support check.

okay

[Normal]

1. I worry about speed change of SV this Normal. because this Normal is least diff. but, mapping is good. There is not such a big difference between them, if BATs or someone else will say about it, I will change it
2. OD-1 please. because least diff and Normal. i strong suggest. okay
3. 00:40:387 (1) - remove NC. this broken NC pettern.okay
4. 00:43:114 - add NC.okay
5. 00:45:841 - remove NC.okay
6. 00:48:569 (1) - 1grid up. (x:380 y:156). before slider straig
7. ht flow more beautiful. okay
8. 00:54:023 (1) - i think remove curve looks better. okay
9. 01:07:489 (4) - umm, this is blue line and stack note is very hard rhythm 'least normal diff'. remove this circle better. instead, 01:07:319 - add note, this sound is drum took sound. please try.okay
   SPOILER

   
10. 01:09:023 (3) - 1gird left. very close soon overlaps. if you do this, seems beautiful. (1,2,3) between DS note. okay
    SPOILER

    
11. 01:15:671 (7) - again blue line... also, blue line is confuse rhythm bigginer player. are you sure? i strong suggest change this. 01:15:500 - instead you take drum sound better. for example okay
    SPOILER

    
12. 01:18:398 (3) - ^ same reason. simple example, this note move 01:18:228 and (x:350 y:111) is playable and flow good. okay
13. 01:20:614 (1) - why NC. i don't know you add NC. i suggest remove NC. this is pettern broken. I want to leave it at that
14. 01:21:466 (1) - spinner suggest, end line reduce 01:23:341, and, you try this.sound and more feel better. Maybe I'll do that in Hard diff, but it's a too small spinner for Normal diff, I think
    SPOILER

    
15. 01:36:296 (3) - blanket suggestion, middle point (x:301 y:172), end point (x:319 y:195) let's try. more beautiful seems. ok, changed okay
16. 01:37:660 (1,2) - overlaps here, seems wrong, i suggest (2) move (x:24 y:116). because DS fix and overlaps fix. you try this.
17. 01:45:841 (1) - why all slider finish? you try remove finish. and please check slider start added finish. if added fine. fixed
18. 01:53:682 x) - you try add note here. take drum part. okay
19. 02:00:671 (4) - blue line start, rhythm confused. i suggest (3) change slider. and (4) move 02:00:841. rhythm is more easy and fitting song. or add note 02:00:501 take drum sound.
    example
    SPOILER

    
20. 02:02:035 (1) - ^okay
21. 02:04:762 (5) - ^okay
22. 02:07:660 (5) - i think NC part. please add NC.okay
23. 02:08:341 - remove NC.okay
24. 02:12:944 (7) - blue line rhythm. same, should fix it.okay
25. 02:51:807 (1,3,5,7) - rhythm is fine. but, blue line start rhythm. bigginer player confused. you should other change rhythm. i suggest, take drum sound is simple better. example, 02:51:637,02:53:001,02:54:364,02:55:728 I remapped this part
26. 02:59:307 (2) - ^ same.okay
27. 03:04:080 (2) - ^ you try drum rhythm or not start blue line vocal note. 03:06:296 (5) - this is good example.okay
28. 03:10:216 (5) - ^.okay
29. 03:20:444 (6) - ^.okay
30. 03:21:637 (2,3,4) - i think confuse play this. you try other pettern. for example okay[spoilerbox]
31. 03:28:626 (2,4) - blue line start. change please other rhythm.okay
32. 03:34:251 (1) - broken rhythm NC. remove NC. I already said about it

[Hard]

1. 01:20:955 - D:C1 hitsound weird for me. i suggest remove this green line. more fit drum. okay
2. 01:55:387 (1) - this is very confuse play circle. 01:55:728 (1) - slider start stack is better. and more palyable. also, remove NC. and add finish (Drum finish) no, I'll leave it at that
3. 02:36:978 (7) - add whistle fitting. okay
4. 02:37:660 (1) - add whistle slider head. vocal fit. okay
5. 02:59:819 (4) - add NC. no
6. 03:00:841 (1) - remove NC. no
7. 03:02:205 (3) - Add NC. repart. i think should New Combo this. no
8. 03:04:932 (7) - long white line. Add NC. ok
9. 03:05:273 (1) - remove NC.

ok

that's all. good luck.

P o M u T a wrote:

[Alarido's Insane]

Hello Alarido. Hi ^^
01:09:023 (6,7) - i want soft or normal finish slider start both slider. ► Ok.
01:19:932 (7) - ^ ► Ok.
01:56:410 x) - you try add note this part. more fit. ► Nice, added^^
02:24:023 (1,3) - add whistle slider start both. bit sad nothing hitsound part... please try. ► Added.
03:18:228 (2,3,4,5) - all note 1grid right. (3) not middle line is bit weird this diff. ► Ok.
03:21:396 (2,3,4,5) - ^ same reason, but, 1grid left all note. ► Sure.
03:35:018 (1) - add whistle. cute heard. try. ► Added sound.

Lapis Aoki wrote:

From my queue~ Sorry if my mod was so short. >.<
[Normal]
00:26:750 -Straight slider. ok, why not
00:30:160 -Change it shape like the slider on 00:27:432 I don't really understand..
00:48:569 -Move. ..maybe give me coordinates?? ._.
02:01:523 -^ ^
[Hard]
-Whistles on the slider on the kiai time. Don't think it's necessary.

GL btw~~ c:

Lapis Aoki wrote:

From my queue~ Sorry if my mod was so short. >.<
[Hard]
-Whistles on the slider on the kiai time.
[Alarido's Insane]
-^ ► (which slider?)

GL btw~~ c:

IceBeam wrote:

классная песня, ранкни обязательно)

только убери Blood and Chocolate из саурса, это в тэги надо, тем более песня в двух альбомах была убрала и добавила

из замечаний:

в харде мне ужасно не нравится этот стак - 01:55:387 (1). хорошая идея использовать здесь слоудаун, но лучше бы вот такой слайдер под 0.5х хм.. хорошая идея

SPOILER

02:26:069 (4,5,6) - коряво фиксед

SPOILER

в нормале пропали клапы - 02:00:160 (3,5) исправила

и не используй слайдертики как хитсаунды не надо так ага, сама думала над этим, убрала

Alarido wrote:

HALLELUJAH!

Finally, good news in this desert! At least she came before our death.... I hope Gabe look this soon. Naraku and Mancuso are alumni now ._.

Zero__wind wrote:

passing by > <
found that a clap is missing at 01:49:250 - in Insane diff
not a big deal though
sorry that I don't have time to mod the mapset =.=

Zero__wind wrote:

passing by > <
found that a clap is missing at 01:49:250 - in Insane diff
not a big deal though
sorry that I don't have time to mod the mapset =.=

Zero__wind wrote:

found that a clap is missing at 01:49:250 - in Insane diff

Zero__wind wrote:

not a big deal though

Kurai wrote:

Fix Zero__wind's missing clap, and I'll rank :3

Lanturn wrote:

One thing quickly on the normal

02:32:887 (2) - This feels a bit strange to come off of. The vocals and music key actually happen closer to 02:33:995 - Not sure if you want to adjust it to an 1/8th note or not, but it was the only thing that felt odd when playing this diff.

Kurai wrote:

Fix Zero__wind's missing clap, and I'll rank :3

Alarido wrote:

right now in Chişinău, Moldova* (if she currently lives there ofc)