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Topic Starter
Eni
Updated all.
Ringating
from my queue:

you asked me to remove the black columns of pixels on the right and left of the images, so I did that. However, I also downscaled the 1080p images to 768p, since osu zooms in to the centermost 768p anyway (example: your 1080p pause image; my 768p pause image).

Here are the 3 images:
bg
it's png now, since it's filesize as png isn't bad, and I downscaled from this larger image when making it
no kudosu
Kruzon
was asked to mod your map, but due to my inability i couldn't even find a single flaw on it. however it does seem quite good already. So, ima rain some stars!
( do not kudosu this post btw, do not )
Topic Starter
Eni
Ok, thanks for your support!


Will fix background ASAP, many thanks.


Edit: Updated with new images. They are really great, thank you. :)
SolrosRepica
Hiya~!
Thanks m4m :)
Nice mapping,I like this.Rhythmic map.

Dream
00:10:823 (4) - Add a note.If you like. example : http://puu.sh/dn75l/830d3b4ad4.jpg
00:11:550 (4) - ^ example: http://puu.sh/dn76a/1b7f1618d6.jpg
00:57:187 (3) - Change to Beat snap 1/4 and add a stream note. Here is example : http://puu.sh/dn7jR/2118a93f50.jpg
01:09:368 (3) - , 01:09:459 (4) - Add a note : http://puu.sh/dn7pX/0a69684f6f.jpg
00:41:005 (3) - ,00:41:096 (4) - ^ http://puu.sh/dn7D4/308c7bcf3e.jpg
00:57:368 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Add a sound[Whistle]
00:30:277 (1) - 00:40:823 (2) - I love this part <33 Awesome.

If you like my modding,I'm glad ;)
Topic Starter
Eni

SolrosRepica wrote:

Hiya~!
Thanks m4m :)
Nice mapping,I like this.Rhythmic map.

[Dream]
00:10:823 (4) - Add a note.If you like. example : http://puu.sh/dn75l/830d3b4ad4.jpg No, it breaks the transition here for me to add a circle here.
00:11:550 (4) - ^ example: http://puu.sh/dn76a/1b7f1618d6.jpg I want to follow the current pattern to match the triples in the song.
00:57:187 (3) - Change to Beat snap 1/4 and add a stream note. Here is example : http://puu.sh/dn7jR/2118a93f50.jpg I don't want to use 1/4 in this difficulty.
01:09:368 (3) - , 01:09:459 (4) - Add a note : http://puu.sh/dn7pX/0a69684f6f.jpg I will consider this, but I want to emphasize the voal here, so no change.
00:41:005 (3) - ,00:41:096 (4) - ^ http://puu.sh/dn7D4/308c7bcf3e.jpg No change, note does not fit IMO.
00:57:368 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Add a sound[Whistle] Instead, I added Finish to some.
00:30:277 (1) - 00:40:823 (2) - I love this part <33 Awesome. Thank you!

If you like my modding,I'm glad ;)
Thanks for mod
PureCreamy
Hi! Random Mod ^^

Alarido's Easy
In this diff. I'll give some suggestion about the hitsound
00:19:732 (2) Add clap (SC2)
00:21:187 (4) Add clap (SC2)
00:32:459 (2) Add clap (SC2)
00:32:823 (3) Add clap (SC2)
00:35:368 (2) Add clap (SC2)
00:35:732 (3) Add clap (SC2)
00:38:277 (2) Add clap (SC2)
00:38:641 (3) Add clap (SC2)
00:41:187 (2) Add clap (SC2)
00:41:550 (3) Add clap (SC2)
00:42:277 (1) Add clap (SC2)
00:43:005 (2) Add clap (SC2)
00:43:732 (3) Add clap (SC2)
00:44:459 (4) Add clap (SC2)
00:45:914 (2) Add clap (SC2)
00:52:459 (1) Add clap (SC2)
00:53:914 (3) Add clap (SC2)
00:54:641 (3) Add clap (SC2)
00:58:641 (2) Add whistle (SC2)
01:00:823 (1) Add finish (SC2)
The flow seems good for me ^^

Normal
00:01:187 (1) You need to add finish here
00:02:277 (2) Add clap (SC2)
00:03:732 (4) ^
00:18:277 (3) ^
00:19:732 (2) ^
00:21:187 (4) ^
00:22:641 (1) ^
00:24:096 (4) ^
00:25:550 (3) ^
00:27:005 (4) ^
00:29:914 (5) ^
00:42:277 (1) ^
00:43:005 (2) ^
00:43:732 (3) ^
00:44:459 (4) ^
00:45:914 (2) ^
00:46:641 (3) ^
00:51:005 (2) ^
00:51:732 (3) ^
00:52:459 (4) ^
00:53:187 (5) ^
00:53:914 (2) ^
00:54:641 (2) ^
00:58:277 (1) ^
00:59:005 (2) ^
00:59:732 (4) ^
01:00:459 (5) ^
01:01:187 (1) ^
01:01:914 (2) ^
01:02:641 (3) ^
01:04:096 (2) ^
01:04:823 (2) ^
01:05:550 (4) ^
01:07:005 (1) ^
01:07:732 (2) ^
01:08:459 (3) ^
01:09:914 (1) ^
01:10:641 (2) ^
01:11:368 (4) ^
01:12:096 (6) ^
01:12:823 (1) ^
01:13:550 (2) ^
01:14:277 (3) ^
01:15:005 (4) ^
01:15:732 (2) ^
01:18:641 (1) ^
01:19:368 (2) ^
01:20:823 (1) ^
01:22:277 (2) ^
01:00:823 (1) Add finish
01:03:187 (4) Add whistle
01:03:550 (4) ^
01:06:096 (5) ^
01:06:459 (5) ^
01:08:641 (1) It would be great if you add finish here
01:09:005 (2) Same ^
01:12:459 (1) ^

That's all Good luck!
Alarido

PureCreamy wrote:

Hi! Random Mod ^^

Alarido's Easy
In this diff. I'll give some suggestion about the hitsound
00:19:732 (2) Add clap (SC2)
00:21:187 (4) Add clap (SC2)
00:32:459 (2) Add clap (SC2)
00:32:823 (3) Add clap (SC2)
00:35:368 (2) Add clap (SC2)
00:35:732 (3) Add clap (SC2)
00:38:277 (2) Add clap (SC2)
00:38:641 (3) Add clap (SC2)
00:41:187 (2) Add clap (SC2)
00:41:550 (3) Add clap (SC2)
00:42:277 (1) Add clap (SC2)
00:43:005 (2) Add clap (SC2)
00:43:732 (3) Add clap (SC2)
00:44:459 (4) Add clap (SC2)
00:45:914 (2) Add clap (SC2)
00:52:459 (1) Add clap (SC2)
00:53:914 (3) Add clap (SC2)
00:54:641 (3) Add clap (SC2)
00:58:641 (2) Add whistle (SC2)
01:00:823 (1) Add finish (SC2)
The flow seems good for me ^^ ► ♥ Flow is my main concern on mapping. It has the power of enchant or ruin any map, and also of make a map harder or easier, obvious or fuzzy.

► APPLIED EVERYTHING (:

That's all Good luck!
@PureCreamy > Thank you very much!

@Railgun > The new version of diff > http://0paste.com/6988

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Topic Starter
Eni

PureCreamy wrote:

Hi! Random Mod ^^

Normal
00:01:187 (1) You need to add finish here Tried here but I prefer my current Clap -> Finish Soft Drum pattern
00:02:277 (2) Add clap (SC2) I tried SC2 for the map but I think regular whistles match the mapping style better, the claps sounded too loud and blocked out the whistle
00:03:732 (4) ^
00:18:277 (3) ^
00:19:732 (2) ^
00:21:187 (4) ^
00:22:641 (1) ^
00:24:096 (4) ^
00:25:550 (3) ^
00:27:005 (4) ^
00:29:914 (5) ^
00:42:277 (1) ^
00:43:005 (2) ^
00:43:732 (3) ^
00:44:459 (4) ^
00:45:914 (2) ^
00:46:641 (3) ^
00:51:005 (2) ^
00:51:732 (3) ^
00:52:459 (4) ^
00:53:187 (5) ^
00:53:914 (2) ^
00:54:641 (2) ^
00:58:277 (1) ^
00:59:005 (2) ^
00:59:732 (4) ^
01:00:459 (5) ^
01:01:187 (1) ^
01:01:914 (2) ^
01:02:641 (3) ^
01:04:096 (2) ^
01:04:823 (2) ^
01:05:550 (4) ^
01:07:005 (1) ^
01:07:732 (2) ^
01:08:459 (3) ^
01:09:914 (1) ^
01:10:641 (2) ^
01:11:368 (4) ^
01:12:096 (6) ^
01:12:823 (1) ^
01:13:550 (2) ^
01:14:277 (3) ^
01:15:005 (4) ^
01:15:732 (2) ^
01:18:641 (1) ^
01:19:368 (2) ^
01:20:823 (1) ^
01:22:277 (2) ^
01:00:823 (1) Add finish I don't want to put a finish here
01:03:187 (4) Add whistle Done!
01:03:550 (4) ^ Done!
01:06:096 (5) ^ Done!
01:06:459 (5) ^ Done!
01:08:641 (1) It would be great if you add finish here Done!
01:09:005 (2) Same ^ Done!
01:12:459 (1) ^ No change, I have drum here

That's all Good luck!
Thanks for mod!
Jintai
Suggestions for Railgun's Dream

00:56:096 (1,1,2,3,4) - Would be better if you make a mini stream instead of using 4 circles.

01:05:550 (1) - Should cut that slider in half and add a circle between them.

01:17:187 (1,4,1,2) - Sounds a bit offbeat to me.

01:24:096 (1) - Maybe add a circle at the end of the slider.

This beatmap is fun in general, but it needs a bit more work on it because i think it's a bit easy to be 4.10 stars. Too me, it's like a 3.98 - 4 stars. Great job so far on your beatmap. :)
Topic Starter
Eni

Jintai wrote:

Suggestions for Railgun's Dream

00:56:096 (1,1,2,3,4) - Would be better if you make a mini stream instead of using 4 circles. No change, this is 1/2 map

01:05:550 (1) - Should cut that slider in half and add a circle between them. I hold the vocal here

01:17:187 (1,4,1,2) - Sounds a bit offbeat to me.

01:24:096 (1) - Maybe add a circle at the end of the slider. "Ku" starts on 01:23:914 - so I don't think there needs to be a circle here.

This beatmap is fun in general, but it needs a bit more work on it because i think it's a bit easy to be 4.10 stars. Too me, it's like a 3.98 - 4 stars. Great job so far on your beatmap. :) you shouldn't judge a map by the amount of stars ><
Thanks for mod
Meyrink
Hi ! MRM Sory for late
Going to put important things i noticed and suggestions !
Alarido's Easy
  1. Slider Track rate 2 a bit wierd! try just 1
  2. 01:12:460 (1) - can be better ! or ! the best si to map that place rather than long slider !cuz overlap with 01:16:096 (2) -
  3. 01:27:005 (1) - u can remove spinner to make it like other diffs ! or do here a spinner 01:24:096 - then delet 2nd
Normal
  1. 00:43:368 (3,4) - Check DS
  2. 00:55:005 (3,4) - Better to snap it to 1x Distance
  3. 01:11:732 (5,2) - Small Overlap
  4. 00:12:459 (4,1) - Switch NC
Hard
  1. 00:46:277 - try this rhytm http://puu.sh/gbjkN/f3ea98525e.jpg
  2. 00:57:187 - http://puu.sh/gbjvB/ff5a0659e0.jpg
  3. 01:02:459 (6) - Maby CTRL+ G ! then make it like that http://puu.sh/gbjIc/6181e58fe1.jpg
toybot's Insane
  1. Better Diff Name Light insane
  2. 00:20:641 (2,3) - isn't that curved alot ? just to make keep map consistent maby make them normal like 00:19:187 (2) - etc..
  3. 00:57:732 (5) - why not just 2 circles ?
    nice diff !
Dream
  1. 00:02:641 (5) - CTRL G ? Think flow better , and make it a bit higher
  2. 00:57:187 (1,2,3,4) - Better to make stream there since it's the highest difficulty ! and that sound is quite loud
  3. 01:09:005 (2,1) - i 'd do an antijump and stack these 2 01:09:550 (1) - under 01:09:005 (2) -
  4. Try to add some Triplets and 1/4 rhythms to make it harder

that's all ! good luck o/
Topic Starter
Eni
thanks for mod will look soon
Alarido

Meyrink wrote:

Hi ! MRM Sory for late
Going to put important things i noticed and suggestions !
Alarido's Easy
  1. Slider Track rate 2 a bit wierd! try just 1 Done.
  2. 01:12:460 (1) - can be better ! or ! the best si to map that place rather than long slider !cuz overlap with 01:16:096 (2) - ► View no problem coz (3) is far on time than the minimum it could. Kept.
  3. 01:27:005 (1) - u can remove spinner to make it like other diffs ! or do here a spinner 01:24:096 - then delet 2nd ► Remov'd the slider and moved spinner by some measures early. Done.

that's all ! good luck o/
@Meyrink > Thanks

@Railgun > Diff > http://puu.sh/gcEb3/d02266a8e6.osu

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toybot

Meyrink wrote:

Hi ! MRM Sory for late
Going to put important things i noticed and suggestions !
toybot's Insane
  1. Better Diff Name Light insane -changed
  2. 00:20:641 (2,3) - isn't that curved alot ? just to make keep map consistent maby make them normal like 00:19:187 (2) - etc.. -changed
  3. 00:57:732 (5) - why not just 2 circles ? -it emphasizes the next object more imo
    nice diff !

that's all ! good luck o/
thanks for the mod

http://0paste.com/7312
Asfand
Dream:

00:14:277 (4) - I think this note is placed a bit out of place, I don't think it needs to be emphasized that much.
this: 00:12:823 (1) - and this 00:13:732 (3,4) - have the same sound but one is a lot harder. maybe move 4 to make a triangle shape with 2 slider end and 3 slider head.

00:29:187 (3) - only slider that isn't curved want to know why you decided not to do it
00:45:005 (2,3) - maybe try to make these single notes instead, doesn't sound like a slider part to me
00:57:368 (2,3,4,1) - stream here map the blue ticks
01:17:732 (3,4) - fix blanket
move 01:22:460 (4) - to x=248 y=12
Topic Starter
Eni

regN wrote:

Dream:

00:14:277 (4) - I think this note is placed a bit out of place, I don't think it needs to be emphasized that much. I changed the angle a bit but kept the same DS. It should look a bit better.
this: 00:12:823 (1) - and this 00:13:732 (3,4) - have the same sound but one is a lot harder. maybe move 4 to make a triangle shape with 2 slider end and 3 slider head. Done

00:29:187 (3) - only slider that isn't curved want to know why you decided not to do it Mixing things up. I think it makes it easier to see.
00:45:005 (2,3) - maybe try to make these single notes instead, doesn't sound like a slider part to me I prefer the current pattern
00:57:368 (2,3,4,1) - stream here map the blue ticks I prefer not to use any 1/4 in this diff
01:17:732 (3,4) - fix blanket Ok
move 01:22:460 (4) - to x=248 y=12 Done for both
Thanks for helpful mod
Okoratu
What i found is

夢の続き(TVサイズ) for the title
I think adding the space and not changing your romanisation makes sense
sources:
http://recochoku.jp/album/A230239120/
https://itunes.apple.com/jp/album/tvani ... d593842010

not the most srs sites but at least they sell the thing as TV Size lol
Topic Starter
Eni
Ok, I updated the title in all diffs.
toybot
i was forced to post here so i did
https://0paste.com/8591.txt
Topic Starter
Eni
Thanks! We want to make sure that potential nominators see our progress. :P
Invertable
Hi man
Dream diff
00:01:914 (3,4,5) - use distance snap there it feels kinda weird try to move 00:02:459 (4) - little closer to 00:02:641 (5) -
00:04:096 (1) - your spinner is too long in my opinion
http://prntscr.com/bee78c 00:04:096 (1,1,2,3,4,5) - i think this part needs to look like this its smoother and nicer than just a spinner :)
00:32:459 (1,2) - this cant have same spacing as 00:30:277 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - it feels bad :/
00:37:187 (1,2) - i think this ones cant be the same spacing as 00:36:096 (1,2,1,2) - those couse the music at 00:37:187 (1,2) gets a little bit different :)
00:57:368 (2,3,4) - this place im sorry to say but its ugly u need to put stream there for sure
01:21:005 (4) - try to replace this one with a slider
01:22:460 (4) - and this one
01:22:823 (1,2) - and change those they feels really weird :S
U decide about a star :)
GL
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