yozuca*, Rino, et al - Santa Claus ni Yoyaku Shite!

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Niko-nyan
gonna mod this later
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Title:Santa Claus ni Yoyaku Shite!
TitleUnicode:サンタクロースに予約して!
Artist:yozuca*, Rino, et al
ArtistUnicode:yozuca*, Rino, et al
Creator:Natsu
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Topic Starter
Natsu
Updated
Xinely
Yo as requested



  • General
    i don't really like the green and blue cause don't have those colour on the BG, how about http://puu.sh/5rQnv.png
    if you want the code, here is
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    Combo2 : 202,0,0
    Combo3 : 202,66,0
    Combo4 : 236,0,118
    Combo5 : 255,222,121
    add a soft-sliderslide2 for Gero's diff as i talked on #spectator when testplay all diffs

  • Umi's Present
    00:03:874 (1) - i don't see any reason why finish here, should be used clap (i mean finish S:C2. i got the fake it's finish but tbh it's clap lol)
    00:10:059 (1) - add whistle on head too? a bell sound appear on that time
    00:16:374 (3) - i think you can make a better slider for visual here,http://puu.sh/5rQjt.jpg
    00:18:480 (1) - add finish on head,repeat,tail ? the musics are loud here so i think you need finish for this or feel so odd/empty here
    00:22:690 (1) - should be finish on the head, the cymbal
    00:24:795 (3) - make a curved here, for consistency flow with previous
    00:32:690 (2,1) - idk why but i think you can improve blanket here
    00:45:848 (4) - add whistle on head? to follow the bell sound. also finish on repeat cause cymbal same as 00:46:901 -
    00:50:059 (1) - maybe you don't believe this but cymbal is appear here
    00:47:953 (1) - ^
    00:52:164 (1) - finish on repeat, cymbal
    01:05:848 (4) - remove whistle on tail? for consistency with 01:04:269 (2) - , i think whistle here nicely if for emphasize bell sound, not the vocal
    01:06:901 (1) - whistle on head to emphasize bell sound?
    01:11:111 (1) - a mistake here, should be finish on head. cymbal heard so loud here
    01:19:532 (1,2) - the flow not really nice here, i'm not expert on flow but at least i tried to give solution http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1124161
    if you like and want the code
    162,288,79532,6,0,B|204:272|260:284|260:284|308:260|328:208,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    428,172,81111,2,0,P|404:129|362:103,1,100
    01:25:848 (1) - too empty at the tail while w/o hitsound imo, how about add whistle S:C1 here?
    01:27:953 (1) - bell sound is loud here, maybe use finish for this
    01:28:480 (2) - whistle with sampleset drum, Really fit with bgm (background music), trust me ><
    01:31:111 (2) - flip this slider and put at 268,212 for nicer flow (note: 01:32:164 (1) - fix a little spacing here if you follow this)

  • White Christmas
    Since Gero's Hard used AR6, AR4 this diff? it's fit with ur kinda slow SV too
    00:05:322 - use finish S:C2 here and volume 70%, too odd when you skipped this sound
    00:06:637 (2) - remove this and add circle on 00:06:901 - . Bell sound on this song is important and can't skip that sound from my opinion
    00:08:743 (5) - oh baka don't use space 1/2 too long, remove this and add circle on 00:09:006 - , it's better
    00:10:848 (2) - i'm surely you will deny this suggestion around 90% but remove it and add circle on 00:11:111 - , it's better to heard imo
    00:16:374 (3) - nazi, 1 grid left for better blanket?
    00:18:480 (1) - i guess you know why i tell don't skip this time 00:19:401 - you can remove the (2) and extend the (1) until that blue tick with finish on repeat ofc
    00:22:164 (3) - use finish S:C2 for this. More fit with the background music
    00:31:111 (1) - finish on head, obvisously because a cymbal
    00:33:216 (4) - remove the finish, no cymbal no loud bell sound or anything, should be whistle only
    00:35:322 (1) - same as 00:31:111 (1) -
    00:36:374 (2) - add finish on head too, cymbal
    00:38:480 (4) - finish on head too, a cymbal
    00:39:006 - use finish S:C2 for more fit with the background music again
    00:45:848 (4) - add whistle on head to emphasize the bell sound
    00:46:901 (5) - 1 grid right for better blanket *runs
    00:47:953 (1) - same as 00:45:848 (4) -
    00:50:059 (2) - finish on head because cymbal sound
    00:53:085 (2) - maybe it's bad for suggestion. drum whistle on head?
    00:56:901 (1) - remove all finish sound here, too loud, not really fit. and the tail should be use finish S:C2
    01:06:901 (1,3) - maybe you don't believe this, cymbal sounds appear on both's head
    01:13:216 (3) - remove finish on the tail, that sound is enough with whistle only ><
    01:19:532 (1) - similar with 01:06:901 (1,3) -
    01:23:743 (1) - finish on head, obviously a loud cymbal sound
    01:27:953 (1) - drum whistle on tail. Really fit baka >w<

  • Hard
    00:05:190 - i'm so sad it's better if you make a new slidertick and the sound is like S:C2 finish. Really fit with the music
    00:09:532 - add note? i heard kinda odd when you skipped this time sorry Q_Q
    00:07:690 (5) - use default whistle same as 00:12:164 - for consistency
    00:22:164 (3) - use S:C2 finish? so fit ><
    00:22:953 (2) - you're mostly follow vocals here if we're see after this note so i think better if you following vocal too here, suggestion for you
    00:26:901 (1) - no need finish here since no cymbal or any loud sound so whistle is enough for me
    00:30:585 (7) - on 00:30:848 - clap isn't perfectly w/o whistle since there is a bell sound so i hope you can change the rhythm to map that time with whistle sound ~
    00:31:374 (1) - same as 00:22:953 (2) - so i give a rhythm suggestion here. try it, it's following drum sounds too ~
    00:33:216 (3) - same as 00:26:901 (1) -
    00:39:006 (3) - use finish S:C2 for more fit with music
    00:40:585 (3) -
    aa should start on 00:40:453 - to perfectly following vocal, also 00:40:453 - volume around 60 , vocal on here so relax so need to reduce the volume
    00:42:690 (3) - similar with above
    00:46:374 (2) - on 00:46:901 - should be cymbal here ><
    00:54:401 (1) - should be end on 00:56:374 - , and then you can make an anti jump like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1124330
    01:00:585 (4) - no need finish on head, no cymbal ><
    01:01:111 (5) - ^
    01:02:164 (1) - same too ><
    01:17:427 (4,5) - and 01:19:006 (1) - same as previous, no need finish
    01:18:480 - i think you need to map this, bell sound is important for chirstmas song (especially this song) ;-;
    01:24:795 (3) - obviously finish on repeat, Cymbal louder than on the start
    01:27:953 (1) - drum whistle on the repeat, really fit baka :3

  • Insane
    Actually i'm enjoyed with this diff, but fix the hitsounds that i mention on your Normal diff okay ;)
    You're did a Nice Insane on this song <3
  • Sekai
    the placements are fine to me and hitsound too but a little suggestion here
    CS-1 pls, i knew this is Hard+ but while i saw Insane used SC:4, ur diff is harder than Natsu tbh (i can pass Natsu's Insane but i can't pass yours :p)
    00:57:953 (3) - change with S:C2 Finish
    01:00:059 (4) - you should make this end on 01:00:322 - , it's read as 1/2 while i testplay it
    01:00:716 (2) - remove whistle body, too noisy tbh
    01:26:637 (2) - finish, obviously that vocal and cymbal
    01:28:480 (2) - remove clap and use drum whistle, better imo
    http://puu.sh/5rUuj.png unnecessary green lines, must be set the volume as other diffs or at least use 5% on 01:38:480 -

My longest mod so far lol
Good Luck ~ ;)
i'm still crying without santanely here :cry:
Vita-VVA
[Tips]
mod with light blue just is a suggestion or silly mod which made me uncomfortable personally
mod with dark blue is what I strongly suggest to do
mod with red is advise that I think should be changed
meanwhile, I was not a pro modder, so all of above is basing on myself :) Ignore them if you think they are helpless :)

[White Ch]
00:13:216 (6) - made a reverse?

00:39:532 (1) -add notes like so that there won't be lots of space between two rhythm

[Merry Ch]
00:13:743 (5) - change the slider just like with any shape

00:47:953 (6,7) - change just like

00:57:427 (3) - add two more notes at

01:15:322 (1) - could divide them into 4 short slider like to make a bit difficulty

01:25:322 (4) - add a note just like

01:29:006 (3) - add a note between 3 and 5 just like

01:35:190 (5) - change the slider with a reverse

[At last]
It's wonderful map and I shot a star since I couldn't find more :)
sjoy
M4M from your queue
[Umi's Present]
01:29:006 (3) - whis?
01:32:164 (1) - fin?
[White Christmas]
00:31:111 (1) - N-fin?
01:19:532 (1) - fin
[Gero's Xmas]
good :)
[Sekai-Claus]
00:10:453 (3) - delete it?it's overmap
00:26:637 (8) - stack with 00:25:190 (3) - ?
00:39:006 (5) - why not use C3-clap?
00:57:953 (3) - ^
01:00:585 (1) - move to
01:00:585 (1,2) - change it to 1/1 slider?
01:12:164 (3) - I think it's 3/4 slider http://puu.sh/5rX4Z.jpg
01:25:585 (6) - stack with 01:25:848 (1) - for a good flow?
[Merry Christmas]
00:10:322 (2,3) - ctrl+g?
00:29:006 (1) - ^
01:04:532 (7) - stack with 01:03:611 (4) - for a big jump?
nice map
good luck for rank
star :)
Topic Starter
Natsu

Xinely wrote:

Yo as requested

  • General
    i don't really like the green and blue cause don't have those colour on the BG, how about http://puu.sh/5rQnv.png blue is for the girls eyes and green is mainstream for christmas thats why
    add a soft-sliderslide2 for Gero's diff as i talked on #spectator when testplay all diffs up to him since he is the baka owo u know

  • White Christmas
    Since Gero's Hard used AR6, AR4 this diff? it's fit with ur kinda slow SV too I used some 1/2 rhythm thats why AR 5 fit best this diff
    00:05:322 - use finish S:C2 here and volume 70%, too odd when you skipped this sound I up the volume but I keep the clap cuz it fi better this part than a finish thought
    00:06:637 (2) - remove this and add circle on 00:06:901 - . Bell sound on this song is important and can't skip that sound from my opinion the crash sound in 00:06:637 is more important for me also I'm using tickrate2 the ticks do the work and empathize that part better
    00:08:743 (5) - oh baka don't use space 1/2 too long, remove this and add circle on 00:09:006 - , it's better this is easy and intuitive 00:08:743 also it fit the song best than a circle imo
    00:10:848 (2) - i'm surely you will deny this suggestion around 90% but remove it and add circle on 00:11:111 - , it's better to heard imo yeah my repeat follow better the song alsotake in consideration this is normal new players need a litte challenge here to improve they skills
    00:16:374 (3) - nazi, 1 grid left for better blanket?ok look better
    00:18:480 (1) - i guess you know why i tell don't skip this time 00:19:401 - you can remove the (2) and extend the (1) until that blue tick with finish on repeat ofc preffer my current way since if I move this I'll lose all the emphatize in the others spots but 00:19:269 added bell song there
    00:22:164 (3) - use finish S:C2 for this. More fit with the background music Preffer custom clap 1 there do better the job
    00:31:111 (1) - finish on head, obvisously because a cymbal ok sound cool
    00:33:216 (4) - remove the finish, no cymbal no loud bell sound or anything, should be whistle only ok
    00:35:322 (1) - same as 00:31:111 (1) - no here thought whistle fit better this part
    00:36:374 (2) - add finish on head too, cymbal sound really bad for me keeped whistle
    00:38:480 (4) - finish on head too, a cymbal nice
    00:39:006 - use finish S:C2 for more fit with the background music again I preffer clap sound there
    00:45:848 (4) - add whistle on head to emphasize the bell sound just finish fit best
    00:46:901 (5) - 1 grid right for better blanket *runs ok
    00:47:953 (1) - same as 00:45:848 (4) - same as the other one
    00:50:059 (2) - finish on head because cymbal sound yes
    00:53:085 (2) - maybe it's bad for suggestion. drum whistle on head? will be weird imo
    00:56:901 (1) - remove all finish sound here, too loud, not really fit. and the tail should be use finish S:C2 disagree you know im really careful with hitsounds it fit besdt for me
    01:06:901 (1,3) - maybe you don't believe this, cymbal sounds appear on both's head done
    01:13:216 (3) - remove finish on the tail, that sound is enough with whistle only >< finish its needed here
    01:19:532 (1) - similar with 01:06:901 (1,3) - cool
    01:23:743 (1) - finish on head, obviously a loud cymbal soundnice
    01:27:953 (1) - drum whistle on tail. Really fit baka >w< I dont like how it sound

  • Insane
    Actually i'm enjoyed with this diff, but fix the hitsounds that i mention on your Normal diff okay ;)
    You're did a Nice Insane on this song <3 thanks you and added somemore hitsounds


My longest mod so far lol
Good Luck ~ ;)
i'm still crying without santanely here :cry: huehueyou dont told me nothing :/

Vita-VVA wrote:

meanwhile, I was not a pro modder, so all of above is basing on myself :) Ignore them if you think they are helpless :) every mod and suggestion are importants

[White Ch]
00:13:216 (6) - made a reverse?will be to hard imo

00:39:532 (1) -add notes like so that there won't be lots of space between two rhythm I preffer just keep the stong sounds mapped there

[Merry Ch]
00:13:743 (5) - change the slider just like with any shape my current rhythm fit best here

00:47:953 (6,7) - change just like actually i preffer my own

00:57:427 (3) - add two more notes at but not sound there

01:15:322 (1) - could divide them into 4 short slider like to make a bit difficulty will be feel overmapped

01:25:322 (4) - add a note just like no sound there

01:29:006 (3) - add a note between 3 and 5 just like ^

01:35:190 (5) - change the slider with a reverse really nice added


It's wonderful map and I shot a star since I couldn't find more :)

sjoy wrote:

M4M from your queue

[White Christmas]
00:31:111 (1) - N-fin? ok
01:19:532 (1) - fin ~

[Merry Christmas]
00:10:322 (2,3) - ctrl+g? preffer my current way
00:29:006 (1) - ^ ok
01:04:532 (7) - stack with 01:03:611 (4) - for a big jump? mm no i dont feel making a jump here thought
nice map
good luck for rank
star :)

thanks for mods and stars guys <3
Lissette
Hi~

[Merry Christmas]
00:07:953 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing in this combo is weird, 2 should be farther from 1, like 5 is from 4, as it is, the spacing between 1 and 2 is almost the same as between 2,3,4 and results confusing.
00:11:901 (7) - This also should be a bit farther, compared to the spacing used in the rest of the combo
00:12:690 (2) - same as 00:07:953 (1,2,3,4,5) -
00:19:401 (4) - sounds better if you remove the reverse and longer the slider until 00:19:664 - , this way follows the music better, since that reverse felt awkward while playing
00:42:559 (4) - This should be farther from 3, like you did here 00:40:453 (4) -
Lovely map <3

[Sekai-Claus]
00:12:164 (1,2,3) - I feel like this doubles doesn't fit very well, try this http://puu.sh/5t5Eq.jpg 1 can either be a slider or two single notes, in case you use this
00:37:690 - I really think is missing a note here, I even missed it this part because something just didn't feel good
01:25:848 (1,2,3,4) - Try this http://puu.sh/5t5l4.jpg I think fits more, because the vocals is predominant here
01:36:374 - 01:36:901 - 01:37:427 - 01:37:953 - 01:38:216 - 01:38:480 - I think you forgot to decrease the volume on this timing points
Nice one, I liked the rhythm you made in parts like this 00:28:743 (1,2,3,4) - and 00:46:111 (2,3,4,5) - ^^

[Gero's Xmas]
00:30:585 (7,1) - the transition of these sliders was awkward to play, specially because you changed from following the vocals to the music so sudden, and confused me, I also think this combo 00:31:374 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - should start at 00:31:111 -
00:43:743 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I don't like when a symmetric pattern that is centered in the screen is sectioned into two different combos, I know many mappers do this and is not unrankable, but I have to say it because I really dislike it and wish less mappers do this, is just that for me, symmetry is represent with colors too
00:54:401 (1) - was waiting this spinner ends at 00:56:374 - so you can map something following the pretty bells~
01:02:164 (1,2) - I don't see the need of this short combo here
01:11:111 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this combo was hard to play, it confused me a lot, even after seeing in editor, Is just that I'm not very sure what are you following here, I tried this and sounds better to me http://puu.sh/5t6Rb.jpg

[White Christmas]
00:37:427 (3,4) - Is not a bad idea to center this, since is a symmetric pattern, looks better when is centered
01:30:059 (1) - according to the combo pattern in this whole diff, this shouldn't have new combo
Good~

[Umi's Present]
Is good to me~

Cute map~ Good luck ^^
Topic Starter
Natsu

Lissette wrote:

Hi~ Hello

[Merry Christmas]
00:07:953 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing in this combo is weird, 2 should be farther from 1, like 5 is from 4, as it is, the spacing between 1 and 2 is almost the same as between 2,3,4 and results confusing. nice done
00:11:901 (7) - This also should be a bit farther, compared to the spacing used in the rest of the combo ok
00:12:690 (2) - same as 00:07:953 (1,2,3,4,5) - In this one I reduce the 1/4 jumps instead cant move the 2 slider due to grid T-T
00:19:401 (4) - sounds better if you remove the reverse and longer the slider until 00:19:664 - , this way follows the music better, since that reverse felt awkward while playing have to disagree wih this one the sound at 00:19:532 is kinda important for me and should be maped also that whistle sound really sexy there owo
00:42:559 (4) - This should be farther from 3, like you did here 00:40:453 (4) - ok
Lovely map <3 thanks <3

[White Christmas]
00:37:427 (3,4) - Is not a bad idea to center this, since is a symmetric pattern, looks better when is centered I try but I need to redo alot of patterns if I try to move them also them play nice actually
01:30:059 (1) - according to the combo pattern in this whole diff, this shouldn't have new combo omg im baka fixed :3
Good~ yay


Cute map~ Good luck ^^
thanks for mod <3
Umi
thx for mod, some fixed :3

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TitleUnicode:サンタクロースに予約して!
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Lizbeth
Hi~

[Merry Christmas]
Nice diff, the only thing that i could point out is
01:30:059 (1,3) - these two slider could have a stronger curves in my opinion.

[Sekai-Claus]
00:06:637 (4,5) - I think it would fit better with a slider with a repeat, same for all like this. Or do what you did here:00:10:322 (2,3,4) -
00:12:427 - There s strong beat you re missing by letting this tick empty.
00:25:848 (5,6,7,8) - Here is a good spot to place a diamond or square pattern shape in my opinion. example:http://puu.sh/5vnWF.jpg
00:30:059 (6,7,8,1) - same here
01:20:059 (2,3,4) - Is kinda confusing cuz only 3 and 4 are stacked, while they are all 1/4 beat appart from each other >": I missed it.
01:26:637 (2,3) - replace by a spinner from 01:26:637 - to 01:27:427 - I think fits better with the song.

[Gero's Xmas]
I think should be a slider from here 00:26:901 - to 00:27:427 -
00:30:585 (7,1) - Wrong spacing, if is a jump, I dont think is a good idea in this diff.
00:49:532 (4) - replace by a circle
01:19:006 (1,2) - Can you make this two lonely circles part of the previous combe set?
01:27:427 (4) - delete circle and extend prev slider till here.

Other diffs were fine for me

Good luck~
Topic Starter
Natsu

Lizbeth wrote:

Hi~

[Merry Christmas]
Nice diff, the only thing that i could point out is
01:30:059 (1,3) - these two slider could have a stronger curves in my opinion. yeah I agree I made a better curve now :3


Good luck~
thanks for mod :3
Gero
Thanks for the mods guys >w<


Here my diff:

osu file format v12

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SampleSet: Soft
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Title:Santa Claus ni Yoyaku Shite!
TitleUnicode:サンタクロースに予約して!
Artist:yozuca*, Rino, et al
ArtistUnicode:yozuca*, Rino, et al
Creator:Natsu
Version:Gero's Xmas
Source:C.D. Christmas Days ~Circus Disc Christmas Days~
Tags:-Umi- Gero Sekai-nyan
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Sekai

Lizbeth wrote:

[Sekai-Claus]
00:06:637 (4,5) - I think it would fit better with a slider with a repeat, same for all like this. Or do what you did here:00:10:322 (2,3,4) -
00:12:427 - There s strong beat you re missing by letting this tick empty. Sorry but no, i totally followed the music, and i don't want to break it, because i did like this in many parts of this song, and it fits imo
00:25:848 (5,6,7,8) - Here is a good spot to place a diamond or square pattern shape in my opinion. example:http://puu.sh/5vnWF.jpg it's hard diff not insane D: and it's tooooo high
00:30:059 (6,7,8,1) - same here^
01:20:059 (2,3,4) - Is kinda confusing cuz only 3 and 4 are stacked, while they are all 1/4 beat appart from each other >": I missed it. I totally followed the music here and it's totally showing and i used stucks all over the map =3=
01:26:637 (2,3) - replace by a spinner from 01:26:637 - to 01:27:427 - I think fits better with the song. ok then~
Thanks for modding ~

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: smile.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 58348
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 14269,22690,43743,58480,95848
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Santa Claus ni Yoyaku Shite!
TitleUnicode:サンタクロースに予約して!
Artist:yozuca*, Rino, et al
ArtistUnicode:yozuca*, Rino, et al
Creator:Natsu
Version:Sekai-Claus
Source:C.D. Christmas Days ~Circus Disc Christmas Days~
Tags:-Umi- Gero Sekai-nyan
BeatmapID:327567
BeatmapSetID:129548

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:5
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:2

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320,48,47427,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,88,47822,5,0,0:0:0:0:
192,88,47953,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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260,244,51506,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,52,52690,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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204,124,53480,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,124,53611,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,54269,12,2,56374,0:0:0:0:
256,48,56901,5,2,0:0:0:0:
400,192,57427,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,336,57953,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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184,148,59006,2,0,P|200:192|180:252,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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252,104,60585,5,4,0:0:0:0:
252,104,60716,2,0,L|396:104,1,135,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,156,61374,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,236,61637,2,0,P|392:284|404:348,2,90,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,156,62427,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,160,62690,6,0,B|272:160|272:160|204:100,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,108,63480,2,0,P|92:148|100:204,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,276,64006,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,264,64269,2,0,P|216:264|260:296,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,332,64795,5,4,0:0:0:0:
356,320,64927,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,280,65059,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,192,65322,2,0,P|372:152|384:96,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,280,65848,2,0,P|336:260|312:204,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,160,66374,2,0,B|208:136|168:152|168:152|116:180|72:144,1,180,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,216,67164,5,0,0:0:0:0:
80,284,67427,2,0,P|136:308|172:296,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,240,67953,2,0,P|172:216|136:228,2,90,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,328,68743,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,256,69006,6,0,B|316:196|256:160|256:160|256:88,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,28,69795,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,80,70059,2,0,P|424:108|432:160,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,236,70585,1,8,0:0:0:0:
444,324,70848,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,312,71111,6,0,P|281:356|208:296,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,244,71901,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,176,72164,2,0,P|256:144|335:172,2,135,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,164,73216,1,4,0:0:0:0:
148,244,73480,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,164,73743,2,0,L|60:80,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,176,74269,2,0,L|252:260,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,104,74795,2,0,L|208:20,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,92,75322,5,4,0:0:0:0:
400,156,75585,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,236,75848,2,0,P|348:280|368:340,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,156,76374,2,0,P|424:108|416:60,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,92,76901,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,164,77164,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,96,77427,6,0,B|148:64|148:64|40:104,1,180,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,176,78216,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,260,78480,2,0,B|148:292|148:292|256:252,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,172,79269,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,232,79532,6,0,P|360:264|368:316,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,172,80059,2,0,P|308:148|344:152,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,156,80453,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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332,28,81111,1,8,0:0:0:0:
244,24,81374,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,88,81637,6,0,P|136:164|188:256,1,180,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,316,82427,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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240,60,84269,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,44,84532,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,116,84795,2,0,P|68:168|80:208,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,284,85322,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,352,85585,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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428,192,87690,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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368,40,88480,1,2,3:0:0:0:
296,96,88743,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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72,280,92427,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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108,100,93216,1,2,0:0:0:0:
164,168,93480,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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320,332,94269,5,4,0:0:0:0:
380,264,94532,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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316,204,95059,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,148,95322,1,2,0:0:0:0:
312,92,95585,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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Topic Starter
Natsu
Updated~
[ Zzz ]
Hi~ Natsu

[ Umi's Present ]

No problem.

[ White Christmas ]

00:18:480 (1,2,3) -
Better beat

00:37:164 (3) - Add circle

01:34:006 (3) - Add circle

[ Gero's Xmas ]

No problem.

[ Sekai-Claus ]

No problem.

[ Merry Christmas ]

No problem.

Oh!! Good Map!!

Star~ ^ㅅ^~

( M4M = My map = http://osu.ppy.sh/s/131716 ) Thanks!!
LexiaLovesU
MerryMerryMerry~Christmas~<3 star~~*
ErunamoJAZZ
Hi moe-xmas team o3o/

[Sekai-Claus]
Although I really liked your diff (i love CS5), I think in general you should improve the flow.

00:07:953 (1) - example of bad flow http://puu.sh/5ztIf.jpg
00:09:137 - Here he feels empty, I suggest you put a small slider: http://puu.sh/5ztoQ.jpg
00:11:111 (5) - make spacing perfect in 1.0x (I failed both times I played)
00:15:322 (3) - For better flow http://puu.sh/5ztwc.jpg
00:21:637 (4) - ^ http://puu.sh/5ztzL.jpg
00:35:322 (3) - ^ http://puu.sh/5ztM2.jpg
01:03:480 (2) - bad flow?
01:11:111 (1) - bad flow... mm.. maybe?: http://puu.sh/5ztVM.jpg
01:27:690 (1) - why NC?
01:33:216 (5) - this listen wrong, Try http://puu.sh/5zu2W.jpg
01:35:322 (5) - ^

[Gero]
Amazing hitsounds, ever.



Good Luck :3
Topic Starter
Natsu

[ Zzz ] wrote:

Hi~ Natsu

[ White Christmas ]

00:18:480 (1,2,3) -
Better beat did some here

00:37:164 (3) - Add circle mmm I dont think it will fit nice here

01:34:006 (3) - Add circle ^
Lanturn
Christmas! \o/

Lots of different mappers in this, cool.

[General]

It says Hashimoto Miyuki (橋本みゆき) and Misato Aki (美郷あき) did sing this song as well as yozuca* and rino | http://puu.sh/5AEoi.jpg |

Artist: yozuca*, rino, 美郷 あき, 橋本 みゆき
R.Artist: yozuca*, rino, Misato Aki, Hashimoto Miyuki

Tags:
サーカスディスク クリスマスデイズ | Since you translate the source, its best to have its japanese as well.


[-Umi-]
  1. 00:03:743 (3,1) - because of mania, is it possible to start this 1/4 later? It also gives the new players an extra little bit to start spinning, and doesn't take up their screen before the last note is even hit | http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1143226 | There needs to be a rule about this to be honest. At least for Easy diffs
  2. 00:05:848 (1) - also since you start this 1/1 after, how about moving it away slightly from the center? | You should know really the reason, since you play Easy diffs like me.
  3. 00:20:848 (2,3) - Move the (2) over to the right--> a bit, so the (3) doesn't get that ugly overlap with the previous (1) slider. and also so the (1) flows better into the (2)
  4. 00:53:216 (2) - Dead note. You should actually start this 1/4 before, since your previous slider heavily focus on vocals. | I actually hit this early in my test play because I was following vocals.
  5. 01:24:795 (2,3) - Lower the volume for these finishes and raise them every note | (2) 50% | (3) 60% | (1) 70%
  6. 01:27:953 (1,2,3,1) - Another not so great overlap you got here. | Try moving (1,2) lower, and flipping Horizontally+Vertically on the (3) reverse slider and adjust the next (1) slider | http://puu.sh/5AF5e.jpg | Try also flipping | 01:31:111 (2) - vertically
  7. 01:34:795 (2,3) - Maybe add some life into the (3) slider? It looks a bit plain straight when it probably would look best with a curve.
  8. 01:35:980 (1) - again, start this 1/4 later please.

Nice Easy -umi-.. but again you troll with those randomly placed notes after a gap with no clear indication of where to go.. Why must I use my brain to remember easy stuff =o


[White Christmas]
White Christmas seems like its been named to be the 'hardest difficulty' in the mapset, lol.
  1. 00:05:848 (1,2,3,4,5) - and 00:10:059 (1,2,3,4,5) - These are the two most densest parts of the song note-wise but for the rest you use a lot of 1/1 with some 1/2s to join stuff. I was just wondering why you made this part kind of hard compared to the rest.
  2. 00:22:690 (1) - Holy clap. I really don't think you need this finish effect on the head here.. How about just the standard soft finish?
  3. 00:37:164 - to ramp up the difficulty a bit, how about adding a circle here? It'll be awhile before you use 1/2s again after this anyways.
  4. 01:16:901 (3) - You finished on 01:00:059 (3) - but not this.
  5. 01:24:795 (2,3) - Drop the (2) to 65% and the (3) to 75%
  6. 01:04:795 (3) - Although I don't think this is necessary | Following your finish patterns, it seems like you missed the one on this head.
  7. 01:29:006 (2) - Since you like following a mix of vocals and the beat, how about the vocals for this one? Try doing a 3/4 slider and then adding a reverse. This will make the map slightly harder?
  8. 01:32:164 (1) - Again, I don't think this finish is necessary on the head? | normal soft finish instead?

Nothing really wrong on this map. more nazi stuff. If you want though, you should start the spinners 1/4 later so mania people can enjoy this song as well. Not really required on Normal, but since you don't have any 1/4 notes.. It'll probably be enjoyed more for them.
Nice map though :)

[Gero]
  1. 00:20:585 (1) - with the way you follow the music here, this note really seems unnecessary. To me, I can't see this note as anything but pointless, even if you are doing a drum hit.
  2. 00:18:480 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Such loud finishes.. I'm sure someone has mentioned this but, why not just use whistles instead of adding all those finishes. It just adds a bit too much noise. Or at least lower the volume of the finishes a little :)
  3. 00:31:374 (1) - Most awkward jump ever. Every part of this song gives off a 1/1 feeling so this note is horrible to attempt a jump on. Also, I think this is the only one in your map that you attempt to jump with? | How about making a 1/2 slider from 00:30:585 (7) - and adding a circle at 00:31:111 - to help make this slider feel like its meant to be hit on the red tick.
  4. 00:40:585 (3) - I'd hate to be the one to ruin this artwork, but you should really start this 1/4 earlier
  5. 00:42:690 (3) - same with this | The vocals are the only thing playing at this point, and you don't want to hit them late.
  6. 01:09:532 (2) - how about making the curve for this one even? | http://puu.sh/5AGzZ.jpg

Beautiful slider work <3

[Sekai-nyan]
I'm wondering if you should try to follow the drums + vocals more instead of creating your own patterns and rhythm. It's a bit hard to understand what your goal was for this. I think the biggest issue is that you use a lot of 1/4 sliders and end them on things that don't match creating somewhat strange patterns.

  1. 00:06:637 (4,5,6,7) - Here it seems like you try to follow the drums for the first note and the head of the slider. Then you go and end it on the on the chime. The only problem with having a player hit the note at 00:06:769 - is that they will immediately assume they need to follow the beat and think a note will be placed at 00:07:032 - but instead you place it at 00:07:164 (6) - to catch the main hit of the drums. By missing the first part of the drums though, it really creates an awkward rhythm, which is the reason lots of other mods have found this to be a bit strange.
  2. 00:10:453 (3) - I'm not too sure why you decided to map to this either, There is no sound at all in the music, and is also in a strange place to have a triplet really.
  3. 00:12:953 (3,4,5,6) - this is a perfect example of what following the drums will do. This makes the map flow really nicely.
  4. 00:25:190 (3) - This hits a dead note (mapping to no audible music/vocals in the song) It would be better off just having a circle where the tail end is at 00:25:322 -
  5. 00:28:743 (1,2,3,4) - more examples of dead notes at the slider's head
  6. 00:28:874 (2,4) - ^
  7. 00:32:164 (5) - move this back 1/4 to hit the vocals and the drums instead of a being a dead note.
  8. 00:34:006 (3,4,5) - This time the tail end is hitting nothing, and makes the next drum hit at 00:34:401 - and 00:34:532 - feel strange
  9. 00:40:585 (4) - Another note I feel a bit strange hitting. Sure you hit the weird toilet-like sound, but it really feels like you should be trying to follow the vocals here above all else, since that's exactly what you do for the rest of this section. | http://puu.sh/5AHzG.jpg might be a good fix.
  10. 00:42:164 (3,4,5) - Suggestion: Join (3,4) into a slider, and move (5) 1/4 ahead
  11. 00:46:111 (2,3,4,5) - A bit strange hitting at 00:46:243 - and 00:46:769 - instead of the ends where it feels more natural
  12. 00:50:059 (1,2,3,4) - I believe this spot is an attempt at trying to fuse both vocals and sounds?
  13. 01:00:585 (1,2) - this is another thing that confuses me since there is nothing playing on the head of (2) | It would just be better as one single slider.
  14. 01:26:637 (1,1) - for a 'hard' this might be a little bit excessive. If you plan on using a 1/2 note after the spinner, it might be better off to have it a bit closer so players are able to hit it if they end on the left side of the map.


I think that'll be most of it. There are a few other spots, but if you plan on changing your map around, you should be able to notice them. The map is nice looking and all, it just didn't really make much sense to me, which is why I ended up writing so much. Feel free to accept or ignore them since it is a pretty big change to the patterns you have here.

[Merry Kurisumasu!]
  1. 00:01:638 (1,2,3,4,1) - Why not try to center these more? You have a spinner coming up anyways, and everything in this section is almost symmetrical. | Maybe place the second (1) dead center?
  2. 00:05:848 (1,2,3) - Nice that you made the (3) a slider, but it really doesn't give any indication that its a 1/4 distance away from (2) | I mistook this easily as a 1/2 note | No suggestions really though, people like me will just have to learn.. at least I don't make the same mistake on the next measure XD
  3. 00:30:453 (5) - Not sure about this one. Dead note, and it doesn't match up with your previous 1/4 patterns.


I don't have much to say about this mapset, because you know me and insanes, albeit one that I can play XD. The only other thing that bothered me was your stream section. It felt a little strange because I kept thinking you followed the vocals, of course which you didn't, I still managed to play it just fine though, and it isn't an issue. This map is pretty enjoyable to play. :)


Also one more thing..

Sin título.avi on gero/natsu/sekai (doesn't play vid) Offset 1638
Sin titulo.avi on umi. (plays vid) Offset 1129


I lied.. I have one more thing to say! Have this
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