deejaydray wrote:

Hey there, from #modreqs ^^

iTZEasy:

00:48:093 (1) - I would delete this circle since it appears immediately after the spinner. It would not give enough time for a beginner to re-position their mouse after a spinner... V
00:50:329 (3) - Maybe this slider should begin on the opposite side, and then re-arrange the next few objects. True that
01:35:137 (4) - Too much distance between this slider and the last slider (3). V
01:50:042 (4) - This slider is positioned a little bit too late; it should begin at 01:49:948 V

iTZHard:

00:17:351 (3) - The distance between this circle and the next slider at 00:17:538 (4) is too little, maybe you should separate them a little, like at 00:17:910 (5) I'll leave it as it is.
00:47:348 (1) - I would move this slider a little more to the left. V
02:12:865 (6) - This circle is too close to the slider before (the slider at 02:11:933 (5) ). V

iTZFalling:

Sorry, but I'm not good at finding mistakes for an Insane difficulty
Good job with everything ^^ See you around :3

o0ohitomio0o wrote:

Hello~ you requested a taiko GD at my queue, so which dif do you want me to make? Kantan-Futsuu-Muzukashii-Inner Oni-Oni? By default I'll make somewhat between Inner Oni & Oni~

iTZAvishay wrote:

o0ohitomio0o wrote:

Hello~ you requested a taiko GD at my queue, so which dif do you want me to make? Kantan-Futsuu-Muzukashii-Inner Oni-Oni? By default I'll make somewhat between Inner Oni & Oni~

I don't really understand how are the names related to how difficult it is, but RatedNC17 made me a Taiko Oni difficulty, if that's the hardest, go one difficulty lower, if it is not, then go higher difficulty

o0ohitomio0o wrote:

Well in simpler, more understandable term, you can say:
Kantan = Easy
Futsuu = Normal
Muzukashii = Hard
Inner Oni = Hard+
Oni = Insane

So 1 dif lower, means Muzu Ok I'll try, gimme some time (a week usually)

o0ohitomio0o wrote:

There~ all done~ Inner Oni for you
I think it's bad ;w; take a look at it & gimme ur thoughts ;w;

Inner Oni

osu file format v12

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 31604
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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TitleUnicode:Rolling Star
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ArtistUnicode:YUI
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Version:mii-chan's Inner Oni
Source:Bleach
Tags:sky op full
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1. BG is invisible. for BG, file name must be used only one-byte character. change file name and set BG again
2. recheck "timing point", "Letterbox", "countdown". you must conform them among all diffs
3. source: BLEACH
4. add guest name for tags
5. 01:35:789- start kiai-time at 01:36:161?

1. for easy, you should avoid overlapping like 00:07:104 (2,4) -
2. conform DS. for example, 00:09:712 (5,6) - is not good
3. for easy, avoid too short slider. for example, combine 00:26:667 (3,4) - into 1 slider
4. for easy, you should reduce combo number more. for example, add NC at 00:17:165 (2) - and 00:20:146 (5) -
5. for easy, avoid too curved slder like 01:22:374 (1) - and 01:58:519 (2) -
6. 00:11:203 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I recommend to use not circles but sliders. for example, how about this?
   
7. 00:32:070 (1,2,3,4,5) - for easy, it's too difficult. you should reduce notes such as the following
   
8. 00:52:937 (5,6) - you should avoid overlap like this, too
9. 02:06:344 (5) - it is not good to extend slider through kiai-time start or end

1. even if hard-diff, it is better to conform DS to some extent. especially, be careful not to make bad overlapping such as 00:15:861 (5,6,7) -
2. it is better to avoid too curved slider like 00:28:344 (7) -
3. A maximum of 3 SV should be used Ranking Criteria
4. for hard, change of SV is too heavy
5. 02:07:462 (4) - NC. when kiai-time start or end, consider to add NC

1. offset conflict with other diffs
2. Object's isn't snapped! recheck AI-mod
3. A maximum of 3 SV should be used Ranking Criteria
4. 00:19:402 (1,2,3,4,5) - Do you know Ctrl+Shift+D? when making polygonal shape from circles, it's so useful
5. 00:42:131 (1,2) - this overlap is not good
6. 01:43:241 (6,1) - ^
7. 01:47:713 (1,2,3,4,5) - it is better to reduce DS about the stream like this

1. for normal, it is better to conform DS as far as possibble
   for example, 00:34:119 (6,1) - is not good
2. 00:25:363 (6) - move to 00:25:176
3. 01:53:302 (3) - start at 01:53:116
4. 02:05:971 (6,2) - avoid overlap
5. 02:19:386 (6) - NC?

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~
mainly, basic suggetion

[General]

1. BG is invisible. for BG, file name must be used only one-byte character. change file name and set BG again Done, thanks.
2. recheck "timing point", "Letterbox", "countdown". you must conform them among all diffs V
3. source: BLEACH V
4. add guest name for tags V
5. 01:35:789- start kiai-time at 01:36:161? Good call there, done.

[Easy]

1. for easy, you should avoid overlapping like 00:07:104 (2,4) -
2. conform DS. for example, 00:09:712 (5,6) - is not good V
3. for easy, avoid too short slider. for example, combine 00:26:667 (3,4) - into 1 slider V
4. for easy, you should reduce combo number more. for example, add NC at 00:17:165 (2) - and 00:20:146 (5) - I see no reason to make a NC on the second note of the combo just after one slider..
5. for easy, avoid too curved slder like 01:22:374 (1) - and 01:58:519 (2) - V
6. 00:11:203 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I recommend to use not circles but sliders. for example, how about this?
   I like it, V
7. 00:32:070 (1,2,3,4,5) - for easy, it's too difficult. you should reduce notes such as the following
   
8. 00:52:937 (5,6) - you should avoid overlap like this, too V
9. 02:06:344 (5) - it is not good to extend slider through kiai-time start or end Correct, changed.

[Hard]

1. even if hard-diff, it is better to conform DS to some extent. especially, be careful not to make bad overlapping such as 00:15:861 (5,6,7) - I don't see what was so wrong in this place, anyway I changed the spacing a bit.
2. it is better to avoid too curved slider like 00:28:344 (7) - V
3. A maximum of 3 SV should be used Ranking Criteria V
4. for hard, change of SV is too heavy
5. 02:07:462 (4) - NC. when kiai-time start or end, consider to add NC V

[Insane]

1. offset conflict with other diffs V/b]
2. [b]Object's isn't snapped! recheck AI-mod This took a while, but done!
3. A maximum of 3 SV should be used Ranking Criteria V
4. 00:19:402 (1,2,3,4,5) - Do you know Ctrl+Shift+D? when making polygonal shape from circles, it's so useful I do, but the distance beteween the shapes is really small when I use it even I put the DS to 2.0 so I don't use it.
5. 00:42:131 (1,2) - this overlap is not good V
6. 01:43:241 (6,1) - ^ V
7. 01:47:713 (1,2,3,4,5) - it is better to reduce DS about the stream like this It is on purpose like that.

[deejaydray's Normal]

1. for normal, it is better to conform DS as far as possibble
   for example, 00:34:119 (6,1) - is not good
2. 00:25:363 (6) - move to 00:25:176
3. 01:53:302 (3) - start at 01:53:116
4. 02:05:971 (6,2) - avoid overlap
5. 02:19:386 (6) - NC?

I like YUI's song <3
~Good Luck~

Thanks for the great mod!

Kuron-Kun wrote:

Hii~ M4M

General

• What about stack leniency at 4 or 5? Seems like a good thing to do, Okay.
• Unmark Enable countdown (It's ugly ) You are right :<
• Unmark Letterbox during breaks, there is no SB V

~~

Easy

00:08:595 (1) - New Combo

00:11:203 (1) - What about a slider like this? http://puu.sh/61idD.png

00:27:598 (4) - Make a slider like this, it's more beautiful http://puu.sh/61iqc.png

00:53:310 (6) - This slideer is not good... make it more beautiful or delete it and make a short slider

01:32:808 (2) - Also this

01:34:671 (3) - Move to x:216 y:128

01:36:161 (5) - New Combo

01:37:652 (1) - Delete New Combo

~~

Normal

00:11:762 (4) - Move to x:224 y:144

00:13:252 (7) - Move to x:224 y:312

00:44:367 - Add a note here at x:80 y:232

01:12:313 (2) - Make a slider like this http://puu.sh/61iYN

~~

Hard

00:17:165 (2,3) - This is hard to read

00:17:910 (5,6,7,8) - Also

00:48:465 (1) - Move this one snap ahead >>

01:08:867 (2) - This slider starts in a blue snap

01:11:056 - There is a usnaped inherited point here

01:27:964 (1) - This slider is a little ugly

02:16:219 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is hard to read, looks like a stream

~~

Insane

01:04:302 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - This is hard to read, the spacing

02:02:245 (1) - Move to x:300 y:52

~~

Good luck ranking it :p

Mei wrote:

hi for m4m

[Insane]

unfortunately, before i give you suggestions. i must to say, this diff plays not good for me. And when i checked the map inedit i found you change the distances between notes and sliders too randomly which make pplayer confused. Meanwhile i also find some improper rhythm.


* 00:07:477 no need to set green line there

* 00:09:712 (1,3) - ctrl+g

* 00:11:576 (8) - ctrl+g

* 00:12:973 add note there

* 00:13:998 (1,2) - switch your NC

* 00:18:097 (8) - this palce should be long slider but not repeated slider

* 00:19:587 (2,3,4,5) - ctrl+g

* 00:20:891 (2,3) - no reason for large DS there. i suggest you follow this

Picture

* 00:22:568 (5,1) - really wrong way to place notes like this. this is kinda mislead to players

Picture

* 00:24:617 vocal start from here

* 00:26:108 ^

* 00:28:903 (1) - i personally advice you to stack with the following slider

* 00:33:933 (3) - no reason for repeated slider there. if you want more vaiation i suggest you start these sliders from red line

* 00:37:100 (5,6,7) - use same ds with 234

* 00:44:553 (9) - you must add NC for this cuz you change the slider velocity

* 00:51:260 (2) - one more repeat for this slider

* 01:09:519 (4) - should be start from 01:09:332

* 01:10:823 (1) - from there you use lower sv, so keep using low ds to arrange your notes (and i suggest you put more sliders there to make people feel relax in this part)

* 01:27:964 (6) - no reason for this slider

this is not all the problems you have but i just wonder notice you it is really easy to find problems in your map. and whe mapset is really messy... sorry my friend but i dont really think this is a qualified map for rank. Maybe you should learn how to make you mapset both interesting and beautiful from this https://osu.ppy.sh/s/104541 or this https://osu.ppy.sh/s/39484



[hard]

for this diff , i think always make your 'distance snmap' on is necessary for you. This one is much better than insane but still not a beautiful work.


* 00:11:203 slider should be start from there

* 00:18:655 (8) - long slider there is ok but not a good way

* 00:22:382 (6) - since you miss a vocal there 00:22:941 i think this slider is improper

* 00:40:268 (1) - so lazyΣ( ° △ °|||)︴ maap there not just using spinner to muddle through there

* 00:43:435 (5) - nc

* 00:44:553 (6) - nc

* 00:47:348 (1) - cancel the repeat, end the slider at 00:47:534 and then move your spineer

* 00:54:148 Σ( ° △ °|||)︴


and from 01:11:568 to 01:31:504 i find to many rthym erros... use 25% playback to check it


[deejaydray's Normal]
first you need toi fix tags problem, i find it in aimod

* 00:23:500 (3) - change to note

* 01:05:792 remove this green line

* 01:17:530 (1,2) - change to a long lider and a note


[easy]

check aimod



well good luck

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1. jk about mii-chan taiko GD, it's look muzukashii/oni. but i think this is muzukashii, i bit rather confusing here. and you just pitch the vocal and drum.
   Consider the tick rate is 2 for mii-chan's GD, tick rate is 3 for RatedNC's GD.
   Does taiko must have widescreen support?

1. Kats Suggestion
   
   
   • 00:13:807 (61) - add?
     00:34:115 (135) - ^
     01:07:465 (256) - add more stylish at kdk

1. Delete/Add Suggestion
   
   
   • 00:13:434 (59) - delete u this is not pitched anything
     01:04:763 - add here. don/kat up to you. u missing a drum pitch here.
     01:38:020 (349) - delete u too enough

1. Other Suggestion
   
   
   • 00:05:609 (25,26) - cuz i rather confusing at reading pitch with better pitch notes. i think consider add kat at (25) these instrumental so high.
     00:12:130 (52,53) - i see on the instrumental, u must use dk for this.
     00:15:483 (66,67) - dk? similiar like dk kd style + pitching the notes
     00:16:974 (71,72,73,74,75,76,77) - Make new pitches. jk u with dddkddd so boring + no pitches
     00:22:936 (93,94,95,96,97,98,99,100,101,102,103) - Bad pattern. make new pattern and see the instrumental.
     00:27:594 (113) - big D?
     00:27:966 (114,115,116,117) - dk dk these.
     01:10:818 (265,266,267,268,269,270,271,272,273,274,275,276,277,278,279,280,281,282,283,284,285,286,287) - add some kat pls
     jk nothing. clean.

1. Kats Suggestion
   
   
   • Done (:3]__)

1. Delete/Add Suggestion
   
   
   • Done (:3]__)

1. Other Suggestion
   
   
   • 00:05:609 (1,2) - swap them?
     00:13:061 (1,2) - ^

Restrict wrote:

Happy New Year 2014

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[Hard]

00:06:731 to 00:11:017 - I think that's somehow over-mapped.. I suggest you to change into http://up.ppy.sh/files/op2.jpg ...
You can also try using this code (objects have been positioned, hitsounded)

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I like it, thanks
00:13:439 (4) - It should be as jumpy as (2), which has distance spacing of 1.55x.. try to move (2) or (4) so it's consistent V

00:14:184 (1) to 00:15:116 (3) - You're following vocal, but at 00:15:861 (5) to 00:16:606 (7) you're no longer following vocal (follow bass i guess?).. It should be consistent.. If you're following vocal in a combo, then you must follow vocal throughout the combo.. My fix is remove (5) and make a new circle in 00:16:047 (if you follow vocal) You are right, done and changed patterns

00:16:792 (1) - Same problem as above^.. My fix is to remove (1) and make new circle in 00:16:979 .. NC it V

00:23:872 (1) - I think it's strange to place spinner here.. I don't, I will leave it as it is

00:25:735 (1,2,3) - I don't like the placement and the shape of the slider I love this blanket and it fits in my opinion

00:33:747 (1) - Remove whistle V

00:38:218 (3) - Unnecessary finish.. Better to place it at 00:38:032 (2) V

00:40:268 (1) - Strange spinner as ^ nah

01:04:861 to 01:07:097 - It's a best place to place spinner V

01:07:842 to 01:10:823 - It don't fit up with the music.. A slider is on the blue tick too.. Fix : http://up.ppy.sh/files/apt2.jpg ... Seems good, thanks

01:08:494 - Remove that inherited point.. Increase of slider velocity makes slider and gameplay awkward (it don't fit up with the music) V

01:51:160 (1) - Strange spinner as ^ and too close to the next object made it shorter

I barely can hear volume of clap and finish.. maybe you could increase volume of it. I suggest you to search audio editor program and increase its volume or search louder hitsound or use inherited point to increase your clap and finish volume.. last thing is not recommended as it's complicated it seems fine to me, I'll do so if more people mention it

[Insane]

00:14:184 to 00:25:176 - Reduce volume of hitsound V

00:14:929 to 00:25:176 - Move clap on the stanza 1/3 and use whistle instead on the stanza 2/4 I really have no idea what stanza is, maybe a patterned hitsound? I'll work on this place

00:17:910 (7, 8) - It feels strange.. Remove that double clap (also the others found in the range of 00:14:929 to 00:25:176) V

.....
Side Note

Ctrl+Shift+A on the editor and see many problems there... Fix it because that's the most important above all
If you need further assistance, chat on me IRC on the game

DenoisoGoiso wrote:

jkjkjkjkjjjkjjkjkjjkjkjkjkjkjjkjkjjk i mod this map in night `-`
Hello~ from my queue!

[General]
[RatedNC17's dog \:3/]

1. Kats Suggestion
   
   
   • Done (:3]__)

1. Delete/Add Suggestion
   
   
   • Done (:3]__)

1. Other Suggestion
   
   
   • 00:05:609 (1,2) - swap them? ok
     00:13:061 (1,2) - ^ ok

omg omg omg omg /me runs
can't say again... i'm tired :3
good luck :3

Thanks

DenoisoGoiso wrote:

jkjkjkjkjjjkjjkjkjjkjkjkjkjkjjkjkjjk i mod this map in night `-`
Hello~ from my queue!

[mii-chan's Inner Oni]

1. Kats Suggestion
   
   
   • 00:13:807 (61) - add? fixed
     00:34:115 (135) - ^ fixed
     01:07:465 (256) - add more stylish at kdk fixed

1. Delete/Add Suggestion
   
   
   • 00:13:434 (59) - delete u this is not pitched anything guitar sound here? I'll change if more say
     01:04:763 - add here. don/kat up to you. u missing a drum pitch here. fixed
     01:38:020 (349) - delete u too enough vocal "ka" there. changed to d

1. Other Suggestion
   
   
   • 00:05:609 (25,26) - cuz i rather confusing at reading pitch with better pitch notes. i think consider add kat at (25) these instrumental so high. fixed
     00:12:130 (52,53) - i see on the instrumental, u must use dk for this. fixed
     00:15:483 (66,67) - dk? similiar like dk kd style + pitching the notes fixed. good suggestion
     00:16:974 (71,72,73,74,75,76,77) - Make new pitches. jk u with dddkddd so boring + no pitches changed to dkdkkdd
     00:22:936 (93,94,95,96,97,98,99,100,101,102,103) - Bad pattern. make new pattern and see the instrumental. changed to ddkddkdkdkk
     00:27:594 (113) - big D? nope, nothing for D there
     00:27:966 (114,115,116,117) - dk dk these. fixed
     01:10:818 (265,266,267,268,269,270,271,272,273,274,275,276,277,278,279,280,281,282,283,284,285,286,287) - add some kat pls k added at 272,278,280,283,286,287
     jk nothing. clean.

omg omg omg omg /me runs
can't say again... i'm tired :3
good luck :3

osu file format v12

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 31604
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 1
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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[Editor]
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Title:Rolling Star
TitleUnicode:Rolling Star
Artist:YUI
ArtistUnicode:YUI
Creator:Avishay
Version:mii-chan's Inner Oni
Source:BLEACH
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WhiteAries wrote:

Hi from GD request:3

http://puu.sh/69Hfy.zip

Zamaro wrote:

Hay! Form my modding queue!
Ok so... I didn't find a lot. My modding skills are not that great for the moment... But the song is greatly timed and all.
Mostly suggestions.


Easy :

00:59:644 (5) - Should probably be changed. I find this boring it shouldn't be this long, the music is still playing! I leave it as it is, I thought that new players need a break so it is just the introduction to the break


deejaydray's Normal :

Colors are not the same as in other difficulties. i don't know if it's okay or not to have this difference, but you should at least change the black color, it's kinda ugly with the background


Hard :

00:14:184 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This part of the combo is perfectly following the vocals, but 00:16:420 (7) - is not... Should be fixed! Changed it to a reverse slider and repositioned it
01:57:774 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Is this ok for an hard diff? There's a jump for 01:58:333 (4,5) - and with 01:58:705 (6) - in the middle, it's a bit confusing. Also, spaces between the notes vary a lot here. So... Maybe re-do the whole combo? V


Insane :

00:31:325 (2) - The acceleration is a bit surprising and the song doesn't really suggest it yet. It's not a big problem, but consider lowering this section to BPM x1,30~1,40 or so. I did it on purpose, and I'll leave it as it is
01:34:578 (5,6) - This section is a bit confusing, I've miss-hit this part a few time. Maybe you should put more space between the sliders so that you can see the approach circles better. Right, I removed the reverse slider and made an other pattern


Arie's Insane :

00:11:203 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - Too imprecise and confusing, you may want to change this part


Yeah... I seriously didn't find a lot...
Well... You're map is already good as it is right know. I'm sure it'll be ranked soon.

• 00:20:146 (1,3) - remove that overlap lightly
  00:23:872 (1,2) - try blanket
  00:38:405 (4) - NC
  00:58:154 (4,5) - bad overlap
  01:35:137 (4,1) - try blanket
  01:39:515 (5,6) - remove that overlap lightly
  01:42:123 (7,1) - bad overlap D:
  01:54:606 (4) - same like 01:55:910 (5) -
  02:19:013 (1) - why used whistle?
  
  [deejaydray's Normal]
  
  • 00:20:146 (2) - move to (196,172) for better flow
    00:23:872 (4) - distance
    00:34:119 (6) - end on 00:34:678 for follow vocal
    01:13:804 (3,4) - better blanket
    01:22:747 (1,2,3,4) - ^
    01:38:210 (6) - end on 01:38:770 -
    01:53:116 (3) - start on 01:52:929 - and add circle on 01:53:488 -
    02:09:326 (4) - same like 02:07:835 (2) -
    
    [Hard]
    
    • I think it is good :3
      
      [Aries's Insane]
      
      • 00:54:986 (5) - NC
        01:00:762 (8) - ^
        01:33:832 (8) - ^
        02:05:040 (5) - ^
        02:12:492 (5) - ^
        
        [Insane]
        
        • 00:06:731 (1,2) - better blanket
          00:12:693 (5,1) - accurate overlap
          00:15:488 (5,6) - better blanket
          00:25:735 (9) - should be start on 00:26:108 - for follow vocal
          00:37:846 (3,4) - accurate overlap
          00:51:260 (2) - i think this is bored ;w;
          01:19:207 (2) - too close
          01:51:439 (6,1) - don't overlap
          01:56:469 (1,3) - switch NC
          02:02:618 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - distance is too confuse
          02:04:295 (1) - avoid overlap with 02:03:363 (10) -
          02:09:139 (6) - NC
          
          Good luck :3

tutuhaha wrote:

！！！！This song ヾ(　´・∀・｀)ノ！！！！
tag: change op to opening
[Insane]
00:06:731 (1,2,3) - make same distance with those three note Pretty cool, should've done that before!
00:08:781 (2,3,4) - ^ :)
00:09:712 (1) - move to x172y80 V
00:10:271 (3) - move to x340y80 V
^try to make it looks more nice
00:13:439 (3,4,5,1) - make same distance with those note I think it was fine but I changed the pattern
00:19:121 (4) - delete will be better about rhythm V
00:22:661 (x) - add note? I like it, added
00:24:431 (2,3,4) - I am sure it is unrank Why is that? 2 then 3 then 4 in on a slider that starts in 2 and ends in 3, it is not unrankable
00:29:275 (x) - you dont need rhythm here I think I think it fits and I like it, I won't remove it
00:30:579 (6,7) - ...space is too close....and also looks not really nice...I suggest to move 7 to x220y104 The thing that was before was nice in my opinion, but your suggestion is even better
00:32:070 (3,4,5,6) - try to make a □ and ctrl+g 4 and 5 Created a square and changed it a bit.
00:33:840 (x) - there should have rhythm, no 00:34:026 Right, changed!
00:36:076 (x) - there should have rhythm, no 00:36:262 V
00:37:939 (x) - note V
00:38:964 (8,9) - unrank I am not sure about that, but I did change the pattern to something better
00:44:553 (1) - this part try to follow music will be more good than follow vocal I follow the vocal on purpose because I like this part in the song
00:55:452 (x) - miss rhythm V
00:55:638 (x) - ^ Also removed the slider and made a stream here
00:58:619 (4) - delete V
01:06:445 (6) - nc V
01:18:834 (1) - delete nc V
01:24:796 (1,2,3,4) - ....try to make same distance Alright, made it look nicer with bigger distance
01:43:800 (2,3,4) - ^ Done!
01:49:762 (x) - miss rhythm V
you need take care of space, it will cause your map beautiful or not.

[Aries's Insane]
00:06:731 (1,2,3) - try to make same space between those three note
00:15:674 (6) - try to make it overlap with slider3's end?
00:16:886 (2) - delete
00:25:176 (4,5) - use slider will be better I think
00:31:138 (x) - there has rhythm I think
01:07:097 (7) - just look at rhythm↓

01:17:623 (5) - delete
01:19:114 (12) - delete
01:31:504 (x) - miss rhythm
01:49:483 (x) - ^
01:51:346 (x) - ^
02:00:382 (2) - begin here, try to use more smooth slider

will finish tomorrow

Feverie wrote:

[Easy]

00:08:595 (1) - Move this to the right a bit. At the moment it is not exactly above the hit Circle. They are, the X of both are 368
00:14:184 (1) - Do not overlap this in the middle of the slider. Try overlapping it at the end of 00:12:693 (6) - This will be just confusing for new players, because the DS won't allow it.
00:23:872 (1) - Slider may confuse new Players. Try to make it straight or one curve. I don't think it will, it is a simple line and a curve, and they will have to learn it anyway from some song
00:51:819 (4) - Try moving this Left a Tad It is fine as it is
01:30:199 (4) - Move this up so it only overlaps with the End of 01:28:336 (3) - Moving it up looking nicer indeed
01:32:808 (2) - Slider may confuse new Players. Try to make it straight or one curve. Same as before
01:54:047 (3) - Move this up so it lines up with the end of 01:53:302 (2) - It should have considerable DS and it does not fit well with your suggestion
01:54:606 (4) - Move this down so it is not overlapping. But put it as close to 01:55:910 (5) - as you can. You are right, done.
01:57:401 (1) - Avoid Overlap Unavoidable, and I think it is fine as it is

Good Luck!