zengdaen wrote:

m4m

[hard]

好像音效还没下完，是不是太多了……我就只管排列了

基本只用了中心版面，修改几处走向让版面整洁点比较好，比如00:23:353 (1) - 这个改成往下比较好，虽然没了和00:22:661 (4) - 的对应，但是毕竟你左下角几乎没有使用过，可以按ctrl+A观察这些改了几处，其实我喜欢在角落放滑条尾所以CTRL+A看不到/w\

00:25:200 (5,6,7,8) - 建议散开，AR7用这样的排列有点挤好，转了一下

00:31:661 (3) - 朝右上角，你已经在前面掉过一次头了，再掉头一次影响整洁不好

00:37:661 (9,1) - 感觉叠起来好点，不用那么在意1.2的距离的啦故意的啦，叠滑条头和滑条尾感觉都不怎么好看

01:18:738 (1,2,3,4) - 斜的比正方形要好看↓↓↓好的

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01:27:046 (3,4,5,1) - 结尾可以用5个note摆个五角星，好看点我觉得这样挺好，一直没有刻意去放规则形状

好短的曲子……曲子这么短m4m很吃亏的.ww

Jekate wrote:

hello M4M from Spring Roll queue~
sorry only std mod ;;

[General]

1. nothing

[Hard]

1. 00:31:661 (3) - it's looks better with straight slider, like this OK
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2. 00:37:661 (9) - ctrl+h and move to x:416 y:48, like this nice suggestion
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3. 00:50:123 (5,6,1) - nice slider art, but bad overlap change the arrangement,now they don't overlap
4. 01:20:584 (1,2,3,4,5) - how about add some spacing on that one? you can set the Distance Snap to 1.5 it would be cool, like this no i prefer what it is now
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zengdaen wrote:

m4m

本来想再看看insane不过insane好像没什么问题……:3

不过……像00:15:046 (4) - 这个最好ctrl+G，因为距离低于1的话影响手感，还有00:51:046 (2) - 会按快……都是小问题……ok fixed

Jekate wrote:

hello M4M from Spring Roll queue~
sorry only std mod ;;

[General]

1. nothing

[Normal]

1. 00:03:969 (1) - move to x:420 y:252 to avoid overlaping with this 00:02:123 (2) - Okay
2. if you do that mod above, then move this 00:04:892 (2) - to x:220 y:272
3. i think it will be better if a curve slider here 00:05:815 (3) - rather than a straight one
4. 00:07:661 (3,2) - bad overlap, maybe you can change paternOkay
5. 01:06:276 (2) - move this to x:480 y:224 to avoid overlap with this 01:04:661 (2) - ^
6. 01:16:892 (4) - move this to x:256 y:272 and move this 01:17:353 (5) - to x:336 y:196 to make a symetric square and move this 01:17:815 (6) - to x:336 y:84 to blanket perfectly

^

[Insane]

1. 00:45:276 (5) - delete? not fit with the rhythmFixed

Karia wrote:

Hi, try M4M from Spring Roll's Queue

General

1. Check out the 'Widescreen Support' plz.
2. KIAI : Start at 00:52:892 and ent at 01:22:430 is better?i have to keep the kiai time same with other two std diff,so no change

Spring Roll's Hard

1. 00:01:200 (1) - Just Just Just my suggestion. Move the red-point like this? Because tail's beat is weaker than head's beat. good idea
   
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2. 00:08:123 (3) - same as Normal. add soft-clap on head?done
3. 00:09:969 (3,4,5) - change it like 00:12:738 (2) - ? (00:16:892 (3,4,5) - Same.)i prefer mine
4. 00:17:815 (6) - end at 00:18:276 plz.ok and add a note
5. 00:21:507 (1,2,3,4) - this is better I think.i prefer mine
   
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6. 00:27:969 (4,5) - Try thisi don't know why
   
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7. 00:35:123 (2,3) - How about following the vocal?ok
   
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8. 00:42:738 (3) - move up the reverse-point a bit. Looks better I think.done
   
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9. 01:07:200 (4) - soft-clap is more fit I think.done
10. 01:12:738 (4) - curve like (3)?done
11. 01:23:584 (4) - this slider is not fit I think.no i don't think so
    
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GL

Karia wrote:

Hi, try M4M from Spring Roll's Queue

General

1. Check out the 'Widescreen Support' plz. Ok~
2. KIAI : Start at 00:52:892 and ent at 01:22:430 is better? hum...I'll consider it

Sweet Vanilla's Normal

1. 00:01:200 (1) - This shape is better for me. :3
   
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2. 00:05:815 (3) - Whistle on head like 00:02:123okay
3. 00:07:661 (3) - How about adding soft-clap on tail? add a cs4 clap
4. 00:09:507 (1) - This need not NC I think.sorry...
5. 00:10:430 ~ 00:22:892 - Add the soft-whistle on 1st and 3rd white-tick like 00:08:584 (1,2) - add some whistle
6. 00:15:969 (1) - finish on head.finish sounds bad ,whistle done
7. 00:23:353 ~ 00:37:661 - Add the hitsounds plz..add some whistle
8. 00:32:584 (1) - remove NC and add the NC on 00:33:969 (3) - Okay
9. 00:36:768 - Add a note plz. This blank is not good.no, rhythm have come into next section~
10. 00:37:200 (1,2) - If you followed above, this is better I think.
    
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11. 00:38:123 (3) - Changed the music. NC plz.
12. 00:39:969 (3,1) - In playing, this placement is bad I think. Change it?awesome
    
    Here is example.

    
13. 00:45:507 (1) - Keep the same rhythm is better I think. Okay
    
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14. 00:48:276 (1) - start at 00:49:200 is better.No too short
15. 00:55:200 (4,1) - Overlapped in game. How about this?fixed
    
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16. 00:59:353 (5,1) - try this. looks better I think.changed
    
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17. 01:25:200 (1) - like this?Okay
    
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Sweet Vanilla's Insane

1. 00:02:815 - adda note plz.fixed
2. 00:04:892 (2,3) - not fit I think. And personally, the next anti-jump is also not fit.If someone point it out again,I'll change it
   
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3. 00:10:430 - This blank is bad,,If you really want to blank, this is better.no but I changed the flow here
   
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4. 00:13:892 (1) - reverse on heavy beat is not good I think.If someone mention,I'll
   
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5. 00:26:353 (2) - remove the whistleno
6. 00:35:353 - Here is heavy beat..add a note plz.Okay,adjust it here
7. 00:36:738 - ^no thx
8. 00:48:046 - ^^
9. 00:48:276 (1) - Same as Normal. Insane diff ...
10. 00:51:046 ~ 00:51:738 - Plz no...only 1.6X here
    
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11. 00:58:892 (2) - Ctrl + gno :c
12. 01:05:353 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - NC and pattern suggestion.awesome
    
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13. 01:09:276 (1,2) - this anti-jump is not good...keep the distance plz.moo~ flow here
14. 01:17:815 (5,6) - ^ ^
15. 01:22:430 (6) - NCokay
16. 01:23:353 (1) - remove NC

okay
Thanks for mod~ <3
GL

smallboat wrote:

Hi,victorica_db, In-game mod req. A bit late,sor.

1. Red words: Should be fix it.
2. Blue words : I recommended suggestion.
3. Black words : In my personal opinion.

[General]

1.為什麼會有這些bassdrum clap cymbol hihat命名的多餘的音效? 這些是沒辦法用自定義調音效的，一定要刪掉它，不要留沒有用到的檔案在Rank圖裡面。
2.自定義音效名稱我建議前面第一個字小寫。
DB快来改


[Spring Roll's Hard]

00:10:892 (6) - 故意不疊起來?恩
00:35:123 (2) - ^o.o\不小心碰坏的
00:36:046 (5) - 試試疊在00:36:276 (6) 上?ok
00:37:661 (9) - 最後一個連打是在左上角結束的，感覺會被坑到容易miss。Ctrl+G了
00:51:046 (1) - 按 G 打開最大網格，把左邊那個紅點移下面一點?呃，好
01:00:276 (1) - Finish?不需要吧
01:22:430 (1) - ^好的



[Other]
1.If you have any mod above problems, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.Hope to you ranked.
3.Hope my mod is useful to you.

smallboat wrote:

一定要删掉它

Fycho wrote:

[Mod Info]

1. Black: Suggestions
2. Blue: Importance.You might consider
3. Red:Unrank issues. You Must Fix

[Hard]
神触居然会做出这么简单的图来。。这作为hard太良心太简单了，BPM很低，适当考虑放些滑条跳，可以增加这个diff的乐趣。没跳的hard不是好hard，全程ds很无聊 被特别叮嘱过要做的简单向= =

1. 00:04:892 (1) –这类重音可以配合着来个小跳，不过要改全都要改，兼顾统一性 ^
2. 00:08:123 (3) –这个头上用S;C4的clap会更好 好
3. 00:38:123 (1) –首加finish更好，另外这一段开始是舒缓段，音量应该调低而不是调高 恩
4. 00:38:123 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) –这几句节奏下的完全一样真无聊，建议换些滑条和note的组合。例如00:40:892 (6) –这可以改成1/2滑条+circle，也可以直接三个圈，也可以圈加滑条，总之要增加多样性 ok
5. 00:51:046 (1) –这个音效组，加个滑条滑动静音音效，那个滑动的声音听着有点难听，另外减少音量，这音量居然比KIAI还大，有点喧宾夺主 ok
6. KIAI音量同insane的建议，太低，根本打空气，建议到70以上 ok
7. 00:55:661 –这音量减成25干嘛，没任何意义，要复制insane的绿线偷懒也检查一遍啊 。。。吧没用的绿线都删了。。。
8. 01:07:200 (4) –这头上的clap你有没有搞错了，检查一遍绿线
9. 01:05:815 (1,2,3) –我建议这三个头上用相同的音效，就是N;C2的clap，然后01:07:200 (4) –用S;C4的clap，打击感很好，而且适合kiai的激烈度。 2和4加了，1和3没加
10. 01:10:430 –这地方几根绿线自己看不说了 。。。
11. 01:12:738 (4) –头上漏了个clap done
12. 01:21:507 (5) –尾上用S;C4的clap done
13. 01:27:507 (5) –音量又无缘无故变了，你要知道hard和insane是不一样的，节奏不一样，音效自然就不一样，insane里面有很多1/4的串子或者连续1/2，而这类串子全加音效会很吵，所以就用绿线来减小音量，而你的hard节奏是很简单的，音效不用考虑那么复杂，一味的复制绿线只能ruin your diff hitsound pattern
14. 01:27:507 (5) –头上我建议改成水滴的音效，就是这个00:22:661 (4) –滑条尾的 done

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smallboat wrote:

Hi,victorica_db, In-game mod req. A bit late,sor.

1. Red words: Should be fix it.
2. Blue words : I recommended suggestion.
3. Black words : In my personal opinion.

[General]

1.為什麼會有這些bassdrum clap cymbol hihat命名的多餘的音效? 這些是沒辦法用自定義調音效的，一定要刪掉它，不要留沒有用到的檔案在Rank圖裡面。是 mania的音效
2.自定義音效名稱我建議前面第一個字小寫。= =..

[Sweet Vanilla's Normal]

00:09:507 (2,3,4,5) - 感覺能呈一個弧度比較好看。3下移了一些
00:10:430 (3,5) - 這邊其實可以照24拍加個whistle，不一定只有前面的12才要加呀，可以加看看。加了很多
00:13:200 (2,3,4) - 三角形?唔 这个是有些不好看 因为直的滑条限制 我也不知道怎么办了> <
00:25:200 (3) - 跟前面疊起來?好
00:38:123 (3) - 這邊是重音怎麼不加finish改了 不过好像效果看不出来
01:22:430 (1) - ^Okay

[Sweet Vanilla's Insane] Hard是 AR7 然後這個Insane也 AR7 ? 建議 AR+1 來辨認出區別圈圈速度。好

00:05:353 (3,4,5) - 前面跳得這麼大，然後這邊用antijump做跳不太有什麼漸慢感覺，尤其是4點到5的時候，沒什麼理由，test一下就知道了。好吧 这里咱想办法改下
00:08:584 (1,2) - 考慮看看要不要24拍加一個whistle。好
00:12:969 (4) - 或許可以試試放在00:11:815 (6) 滑條頭上做個轉圈flow，放在這邊有點彆扭。恩 试着改了一下
00:25:200 (5,6) - 試著擺個弧度? 現在這個明顯是凹進去的不好看。好
00:27:046 (1) - Blanket 00:26:815 (4) ?fixed
00:27:507 (2) - 這可以小跳，中間有長音可以放遠一點，放到2.0x左右可行。例如 (472|316)。
00:31:661 (4,6) - 同樣這邊也是做跳，這樣看起來很擠，試著再放開點。
00:36:276 (4) - 弧度，也可以個人喜好選擇no change。这里做出弧度就会太弯了 这里还有个三连
00:42:276 (2) - 或許滑條尾可試試疊00:40:661 (2) 滑條頭上。好
00:54:507 (1) - 這樣放也是可以，但有點擠，給你兩個選擇:可以都兼顾哦

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00:58:430 (1) - 放到(220|92)比較有感覺。好

[Other]
1.If you have any mod above problems, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.Hope to you ranked.
3.Hope my mod is useful to you.谢谢mod~

Fycho wrote:

[Mod Info]

1. Black: Suggestions
2. Blue: Importance.You might consider
3. Red:Unrank issues. You Must Fix

[General]

1. 把所有难度widescreen support去掉好像是呢 这个只有sb用的到
2. Tags里的Log Horizon去掉，因为source里已经有过，另外加ed在tags里

[Insane]

1. AR+1，和hard区别开来，而且这个insane的难度需要一个AR8的支持。Fixed
2. 00:07:661 (3,4,5,6) –这形状flow不怎么舒服，考虑把00:08:353 (6) –放到(148,124)这个附近, 后面的蓝1和2之类的位置也跟着变下，现在这个6翘着而且形状就诡异。恩 做了些修改
3. 00:08:123 (5) –用S;C4的clap和你的normal保持一致？好
4. 00:13:200 (5) –首加whistle和00:09:507 (3) –保持一致？好
5. 00:15:969 (1) –finish略吵，考虑把音量减小到50左右好
6. 00:21:507 (2) –首加个whistle更好，因为有钢琴音好
7. 00:22:892 (5) –很明确的漏了个clap，水滴音唔 sorry
8. 00:37:200 (2) –这个用默认的normal-hit音更好吧，音乐里这个音的音效和左右是不一样的，应该是个地鼓位
9. 00:38:123 (1) –首，00:38:123 (1,2) –尾这些类似的，这一段音乐里有低音鼓的这一段，用N;C2的hit音加上，不要空着音效，像打空气。哇 效果很棒 Thank U
10. 00:39:046 (3) –这个尾巴也是
11. 00:51:046 (2) –减小点音量，太吵了好
12. 00:51:738 (1,2,3) –这里音很弱，强烈不建议放跳好 12 交换了位子
13. 00:52:892 (1) –KIAI音效音量真小，就45%还没主歌高，根本听不见，强烈建议到70%因为咱用了normalhit 所以70真的玩起来好别扭 真的> <
14. 01:07:200 (1) –试试使用S;C4的clap,跟贴合音乐好
15. 01:21:969 (2) -^
16. 01:09:276 (1,2) –为啥你喜欢把1/2的摆成这样，打着很坑，像1/4，而且不符合设计学因为咱是强双啦> <
17. 01:17:353 (3,5,6) -^

[Normal]

1. 这虽然是最低难度，但是是个normal，请HP+1，OD+1来平衡难度，然后AR+1好
2. 00:19:200 (1) –加whistle会更好 好
3. 00:37:200 (1,2) –加点啥音效，别空着，音乐这的鼓音和之前是不一样的，我建议加默认的normal的hit音，也就是N;C2的clap不错呢QvQ
4. 00:46:892 (2) –漏了个whistle捂脸
5. 00:51:046 –这些建议同insane，音量什么的，还有KIAI的也是会试图做些更改
6. 00:55:661 (5) –clap呢？不要只把clap加在折返滑条身上，请仔细听一下，这样是不会发出clap的声音的，请把clap加在滑条头或者尾或者折返箭头上来表达好
7. 00:59:353 –为啥要减低音量？我觉得这个和insane的情况不一样Fixed
8. 01:07:661 (1) –首加finish和00:52:892 (1) –保持一致好
9. 01:21:507 (3) –尾巴上用S;C4的clap试试不错呢 加了
10. 01:27:046 (3) –折返箭头上不要降低音量，这很另类，听着也不舒服。另外我建议用那个水滴的音效放在这个折返箭头上。恩要改的话insane也改成水滴唔 怪怪的 保留了

谢谢小凛的mod> <
mod 和作图一样都好神QwQ

S o a p wrote:

[HARD]
00:21:046 (5,1,2) - 这边明明是个长音为什么要加这么多不明的节奏 因为跟的节奏o.o
00:34:200 (8,1) - ctrl+G break the flow
00:41:353 (7) - 这个间距变得没什么意思 改掉 好
01:03:046 (7) - 这里是个重音怎么能用滑条尾巴盖过去呢 改了
01:18:507 (8,1,2,3,4) - 这里完全对不上歌词啊 跟的节奏

_(:з」∠)_GDER来找我摸那我就摸GD了啊【炸 果然是懒比

axschiming wrote:

hello,m4m


[Hard]
00:15:969 (1,2,3) - 拼成一个正三角形试试？ 好
00:21:507 (1,2,3,4) - 看看这样猴不猴哦，4的尾巴消音掉-w- 还是现在这样好

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00:55:661 (7) - 改成向下弯好些 还是现在这样好

其他实在找不出问题了Orz


大概就这样，实在摸不动了Orz
给图和歌都赞一个，射一发，祝早日rank

axschiming wrote:

[Normal]
00:08:584 (1,2) - 包一下？ 不好
00:13:200 (2,3) - 这两个调整下位置让flow更加平滑些？改了下
00:23:353 (1) - 我感觉开头用SC5的clap也挺带感,其他难度的也是。。。额
01:05:815 (1,2,3,4) - 叮叮地有点怪怪的，柑橘能换一个皮肤的默认音效会影响 改了一下
01:10:430 (4) - 尾巴稍稍偏左一点点？flow或许更好些恩
01:17:815 (6) - 包下2...？

[Insane]
00:07:661 (3,4,5,6) - 你看看这样好不好0 0.因为音乐是越来越弱的。。不太好吧

SPOILER

00:15:507 (4) - Ctrl+H再稍稍调整下试试？感觉能和12凑成2组额
00:19:200 (4,5) - 稍稍突出下这两声？虽然我也不知怎么放好，但是感觉这两声挺亮调整了下
00:33:738 (1) - 与7放在同一个y上？恩
00:34:661 (6) - 同上好
01:24:969 - ……美丽？这里没有音也不能overmap呀
谢谢mod 和星星
大概就这样，实在摸不动了Orz
给图和歌都赞一个，射一发，祝早日rank