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lkx_Shore

1,453 posts

Joined January 2010

lkx_Shore 2013-11-01T07:22:23+00:00

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- KaTZ - 2013-11-15T14:56:52+00:00

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yurunneram

682 posts

Joined January 2012

yurunneram 2014-01-04T10:08:38+00:00

won't mod incomplete mapsets. By right you should've put this in IRC.

PM me when all mods are in

Melt

353 posts

Joined May 2011

Melt 2014-01-13T13:48:38+00:00

一个是我觉得break放在01:39:560比较好
还有就是感觉你那个bg粉色的combo colour可以换一下0.0
Zweib's Insane
02:34:665 (4) - 这个whistle声音感觉有点大
03:02:455 (5,6,7) - 其实我觉得这段这里用了这个，后面不妨再放一组

0star不能忍

Setsurei

1,149 posts

Joined May 2012

Setsurei 2014-01-18T04:10:14+00:00

hi o/
M4M via in-game PM
my modding amount is depends on drain time, 3:40 - so 3 diffs

and it's hard to find mistakes, too nazi you may ignore

[Easy]
00:51:086 (5) - head (88, 308); tail (33, 250)
01:00:560 (1) - red point (412, 324)
02:02:297 (1) - red point (472, 156)
02:49:192 (1) - head (16, 232); tail (40, 350)
03:04:192 (2) - 2nd red point (344, 44); tail (301, 44)
03:09:244 (5) - center white point (208, 112); red point (144, 52); tail (189, 52)
04:12:402 (2) - center (420, 176); tail (448 328)

[Normal]
03:10:349 (1) - 254, 118

[Hard]
03:51:559 (2) - nearly thought of the tail of (2) is like a next object (5) when using HD lol

[Insane]
why the name is not Melt's Insane? because the mapper is Zweib

[Zweib's Insane]
as usual, your Insane style can't made me FC / pass with nice acc lol
naming stuffs, Zweib is the mapper so no need to add your own name to your diff

good luck, nice song :3

Zweib

579 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

Zweib 2014-01-18T08:04:20+00:00

Setsurei wrote:
hi o/
M4M via in-game PM
my modding amount is depends on drain time, 3:40 - so 3 diffs

and it's hard to find mistakes, too nazi you may ignore

[Easy]
00:51:086 (5) - head (88, 308); tail (33, 250)
01:00:560 (1) - red point (412, 324) fixed
02:02:297 (1) - red point (472, 156) fixed
02:49:192 (1) - head (16, 232); tail (40, 350) fixed
03:04:192 (2) - 2nd red point (344, 44); tail (301, 44) fixed
03:09:244 (5) - center white point (208, 112); red point (144, 52); tail (189, 52) fixed
04:12:402 (2) - center (420, 176); tail (448 328) fixed

[Normal]
03:10:349 (1) - 254, 118 fixed

[Hard]
03:51:559 (2) - nearly thought of the tail of (2) is like a next object (5) when using HD lol I moved (4) closer to the tail of (2), it might be better now

[Insane]
why the name is not Melt's Insane? because the mapper is Zweib because melt don't like Melt's Insane as diff name lol

[Zweib's Insane]
as usual, your Insane style can't made me FC / pass with nice acc lol orz
naming stuffs, Zweib is the mapper so no need to add your own name to your diff hmm if so I don't know how to distinguish my diff to his

good luck, nice song :3[/color]

Thanks for modding~!

For some nazi I didn't fixed them to the places given by you, but I did fixed the blanket and distance nazi of the whole patterns.

Feith

32 posts

Joined May 2013

Feith 2014-01-18T08:23:50+00:00

hai...haii....
I am from modding request queue

http://www.tusfiles.net/zwchhpw3c1o5

What is changed :
- keeping the object is inside the grid because it have an impact on standard monitor size
- change little bit of object timing
- please fix this late mod : 01:21:244 - disable the whistle

- many changed on timing & control points but I only finish it at the second Kiai Time

my opinion:
@ Nornal diff: - at the first spin, add the object again and then change the slide to circle because the object is not match with the music
@ Easy diff: none

That is all from me

thank you for requesting

(hey, you got nice music

)

Zweib

579 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

Zweib 2014-01-18T08:46:05+00:00

Feith wrote:
hai...haii....
I am from modding request queue

http://www.tusfiles.net/zwchhpw3c1o5

What is changed :
- keeping the object is inside the grid because it have an impact on standard monitor size
- change little bit of object timing
- please fix this late mod : 01:21:244 - disable the whistle
- many changed on timing & control points but I only finish it at the second Kiai Time

my opinion:
@ Nornal diff: - at the first spin, add the object again and then change the slide to circle because the object is not match with the music
@ Easy diff: none

That is all from me

thank you for requesting

(hey, you got nice music )

Thanks for modding!
Some of them are fixed.
The main purpose of green line is the usage of "normal-sliderslide.wav", so maybe you misunderstood it lol

Irie Miyuki

388 posts

Joined October 2010

Irie Miyuki 2014-01-18T16:33:34+00:00

m4m via Melt's pm

我来骗kd的

歌好棒啊

[General]
我是觉得把Insane改成Melt's Insane 把Zweib's Insane改成Insane比较好不过看到上面说Melt不喜欢了。。你可以考虑一下在自己diff里多加点东西做个Ex?
在tag里加上source的罗马音? 哦不要问我我不会而且这个Source好;w;啊
总感觉一直听见子宮を溶かす是我太恶俗了吗听到ゆりの花也想歪了啊啊啊

[Zweib]
00:54:244 (5) - ctrl+g一个?
01:16:823 (1) - ctrl+g了感觉比较好
01:22:507 (4) - ^
01:34:192 (5) - 折返去掉 01:34:349 (6) - 移动到 01:34:349 - 感觉更好点啊不然觉得拖了半拍?
02:16:823 (3) - ctrl+g了试试?
02:24:244 (1) - 取消NC 在 02:25:034 (3) - 上NC
02:34:665 (4) - 换成一个circle比较好吧 slider的话尾巴上的音挺多余的
02:37:586 (3) - circle删了在 02:37:744 - 加上
02:39:876 (1,2) - NC的位置换一下
02:55:507 (1) - 这个地方也还是snare NC换到下个circle上?
03:05:849 (2,3) - 应该是1/6节奏的三连吧
03:28:349 (1) - spinner在03:29:613 - 这个白线上听着顺耳些
03:39:718 (1,2,3,4,5) - 额这个形状故意的么
03:49:507 (9) - 跟前面kick和snare的对比的话我觉得这两个还是换成circle比较好
03:50:139 (1) - 把这个NC去掉在03:50:770 (6) - NC 然后再把03:51:086 (1) - NC去掉比较好吧？
04:11:613 (1) - 这个NC也不用了吧还有的话就是觉得这里用stream来overmap不太合适试着换成这个节奏?

SPOILER

04:15:876 (7,1) - 这两个NC的位置互换一下也是比较好 7是滑条减速也有理由放NC
04:18:876 - 这和后面两大段最好放上break 不然hr目测掉血死

[Melt]
哭哭哦mapping风格不是太合口味就简单说两句吧
01:57:876 - 加个circle?
02:07:823 (5,1,2,3) - 前面都是跟着钢琴音按zx的这里突然就变成slider尾是钢琴音了不是太爽
02:09:086 (1,2,3) - 其实这个会不会很容易误读啊要不1和2stack?
03:13:192 (1,2,3,4,5) - 同上上感觉击打节奏有点乱了还有就是每次吉他三连开始就是应该在白线上所以还是白线起比较合适(?)
03:28:270 (1) - 结尾用个soft的sampleset比较合适吧
04:25:349 - 这贝斯音真的不跟啊stress
~~总觉得这个diff该三连的时候不三连不该三连了却出现了~~

[Hard]
00:59:297 (1) - 嗯..NC感觉没必要呢歌词还在同一句里呢
02:24:718 (5) - ctrl+J这样换个方向的弧度感觉比较好呢
02:21:402 (1) - 同第一条
02:25:823 - 从这开始的滑条基本可以算是4个一组的感觉前面同样的你是三个一组后面NC接的也不一样..
03:20:613 (1) - 这おとぎ話就是一个词..然后就被分开NC了.. 算了我强迫症;w;
03:28:349 (1) - 用个Soft的sampleset?
04:26:455 (1) - 可以提前到蓝线上开始啊

[Normal]
00:54:244 (2) - 这个往前拉到白线上比较舒服啊感觉OvO 00:56:928 (2) - 同
01:07:507 (6) - 变成1/2?
02:34:033 (3) - 因为后面是静音随意把reverse去了?
03:16:981 (1) - 这一串combo是不是有点长了 03:19:034 (4) - NC?
03:45:560 (5) - 换成个circle比较好?

Easy就不摸了吧OvO ←就是懒..

Zweib

579 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

Zweib 2014-01-19T03:37:17+00:00

Irie Miyuki wrote:
m4m via Melt's pm

我来骗kd的

歌好棒啊拔作配燃曲我点233个赞

[General]
我是觉得把Insane改成Melt's Insane 把Zweib's Insane改成Insane比较好不过看到上面说Melt不喜欢了。。你可以考虑一下在自己diff里多加点东西做个Ex? 不加了暂时先保持这样我一般不做EX那么难0 0
在tag里加上source的罗马音? 哦不要问我我不会而且这个Source好;w;啊　ok
总感觉一直听见子宮を溶かす是我太恶俗了吗听到ゆりの花也想歪了啊啊啊这歌词写的多好啊我找个完整版贴来w

[Zweib]
00:54:244 (5) - ctrl+g一个? 这样更难打，因为转向没变但ds突然变小了
01:16:823 (1) - ctrl+g了感觉比较好逆一下好像更带感= =
01:22:507 (4) - ^ 好像太顺了，强调不足
01:34:192 (5) - 折返去掉 01:34:349 (6) - 移动到 01:34:349 - 感觉更好点啊不然觉得拖了半拍? 好
02:16:823 (3) - ctrl+g了试试? 这个还真没注意到。。。不过这里改了后面就不好接了，所以我只把(2)移近了点
02:24:244 (1) - 取消NC 在 02:25:034 (3) - 上NC 好
02:34:665 (4) - 换成一个circle比较好吧 slider的话尾巴上的音挺多余的感觉不怎么好看啊。。滑条比较有感觉还能防止节奏跟不准出100。。。于是我把尾巴彻底静音了
02:37:586 (3) - circle删了在 02:37:744 - 加上这个音听着跟前面比较连贯一点。。。其实我有的三连下法不是压重音而是把1/2slider拆成三连
02:39:876 (1,2) - NC的位置换一下好
02:55:507 (1) - 这个地方也还是snare NC换到下个circle上?这段一直听不明白
03:05:849 (2,3) - 应该是1/6节奏的三连吧确实在1/4前有个1/3的吉他音，但改的话感觉有点难打
03:28:349 (1) - spinner在03:29:613 - 这个白线上听着顺耳些好
03:39:718 (1,2,3,4,5) - 额这个形状故意的么 orz知道不怎么好看。。这里感觉很难表达出来
03:49:507 (9) - 跟前面kick和snare的对比的话我觉得这两个还是换成circle比较好跟钢琴音的话还是说的过去的
03:50:139 (1) - 把这个NC去掉在03:50:770 (6) - NC 然后再把03:51:086 (1) - NC去掉比较好吧？好，不过最后的NC不去因为进kiai了
04:11:613 (1) - 这个NC也不用了吧还有的话就是觉得这里用stream来overmap不太合适试着换成这个节奏? 去掉了NC
SPOILER
04:15:876 (7,1) - 这两个NC的位置互换一下也是比较好 7是滑条减速也有理由放NC 好
04:18:876 - 这和后面两大段最好放上break 不然hr目测掉血死我是不信的，然后亲自试下结果第一pc被打脸233。。。不过两段blank也就半管血嘛，我还是挺喜欢这感觉的

[Melt]
哭哭哦mapping风格不是太合口味就简单说两句吧
01:57:876 - 加个circle?
02:07:823 (5,1,2,3) - 前面都是跟着钢琴音按zx的这里突然就变成slider尾是钢琴音了不是太爽
02:09:086 (1,2,3) - 其实这个会不会很容易误读啊要不1和2stack?
03:13:192 (1,2,3,4,5) - 同上上感觉击打节奏有点乱了还有就是每次吉他三连开始就是应该在白线上所以还是白线起比较合适(?)
03:28:270 (1) - 结尾用个soft的sampleset比较合适吧
04:25:349 - 这贝斯音真的不跟啊stress
~~总觉得这个diff该三连的时候不三连不该三连了却出现了~~

[Hard]
00:59:297 (1) - 嗯..NC感觉没必要呢歌词还在同一句里呢 k
02:24:718 (5) - ctrl+J这样换个方向的弧度感觉比较好呢k
02:21:402 (1) - 同第一条 k
02:25:823 - 从这开始的滑条基本可以算是4个一组的感觉前面同样的你是三个一组后面NC接的也不一样.. fixed
03:20:613 (1) - 这おとぎ話就是一个词..然后就被分开NC了.. 算了我强迫症;w; 这个可以有
03:28:349 (1) - 用个Soft的sampleset? fixed
04:26:455 (1) - 可以提前到蓝线上开始啊好

[Normal]
00:54:244 (2) - 这个往前拉到白线上比较舒服啊感觉OvO 00:56:928 (2) - 同好
01:07:507 (6) - 变成1/2? 好像意义不是很大，懒了OvQ
02:34:033 (3) - 因为后面是静音随意把reverse去了? k
03:16:981 (1) - 这一串combo是不是有点长了 03:19:034 (4) - NC? (5)NC了
03:45:560 (5) - 换成个circle比较好? 好

Easy就不摸了吧OvO ←就是懒..

Evil_Twilight

587 posts

Joined July 2010

Evil_Twilight 2014-01-26T05:41:25+00:00

From 302990838.

[General]

Zweib's Insane的source跟其他的不一樣
Insane的combo colour跟其他diff不一樣，窩不知道這樣行不行阿
順便加個opening到tag裡唄

[Zweib's Insane]

我覺得還是讓作GD的改成這種diff name吧

00:36:402 (1) - 往下移一格讓他身體完全被00:35:770 (3) - 蓋住？
00:41:613 (3) - NC下在這邊吧，我看你大部分都是下在長白線上的
00:47:455 (6) - 這裡的話我覺得用0.75x作個3/4的減速slider會很適合音樂
00:54:244 (5) - 試試頭尾相反，這樣對我來說flow和玩起來更順手些
00:59:297 (1) - 其實我感覺中間是空的可是卻有鼓聲玩起來有點詭異，osu這東西不像mania一樣可以一次跟很多音軌，所以我覺得你要這樣下的話乾脆就直接把這slider換成別的唄
01:12:560 (4) - 雖然你這裡是跟鋼琴音，不過我覺得可以跟著拉長一點到紅線或藍線直到人聲結束，紅線的音聽不太清楚就無視惹
01:14:928 (3) - 我會比較喜歡把這個排成和01:15:718 (1,2,3) - 相似的東西，這樣更順一點
01:24:086 (8,1,2) - 我的話會跟著人聲把NC下在(8)然後擺個三角形，(1)和(2)的音調差的有點多我覺得疊在一起不是那麼適合
01:29:928 (2) - 往上移讓尾巴疊在01:29:139 (4) - 吧，壓著(1)不太好看
01:32:297 (3,4,5) - (3)和(4)疊在一起，(5)擺在他們的下面會比較符合音樂，這一段給我的感覺是這樣你參考一下唄
SPOILER
02:07:349 (3) - 考慮加NC不？這一段你在每個''燈''的聲音都有加了NC
02:34:665 (4) - 跟前面一樣，不過這裡鋼琴到白線就停了（題外話，不知道為什麼突然拉出這種東西）
SPOILER
02:36:086 (1,2,3) - 基本上因為我比較偏向跟著音樂下節奏的，所以這裡我不太會放東西，不過這沒什麼關係你高興就好
02:55:507 (1) - 把NC放在(2)吧，這樣才會和02:54:244 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 保持一致
02:56:297 (6,1) - 如果你下這樣的話建議可以把(6)拉成3/4，這樣好玩些
03:02:455 (5,6,7) - 這三個我習慣順時針擺個三角形
03:49:192 (7,9) - 根據這段的規律應該在這加NC會好點

[Insane]

雖然這歌略長，不過前奏還是作一下比較好
AR+1會好點，到副歌的地方會覺得太慢，這歌又是190

00:37:192 (5) - 我的話會在這放NC去強調00:37:192 (5,6,7) - 這三個音
00:43:192 (2,3,4,5,1) - 考慮把這些擺成星星唄，我對這東西挺有強迫症的
00:55:823 (6,1) - 感覺這兩個靠太近了，可能會讓player產生混亂
00:58:034 (2) - 把NC下在這吧，鼓聲是從這裡加進來的
01:13:823 (5) - 試試頭尾相反作個跳在這當作一個過門去接副歌
01:17:455 (1,2,1) - 這三個我覺得這樣擺玩起來會順一些
SPOILER
01:32:139 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - ~~滿滿遮擋人性何在，這裡我肯定會死~~
01:34:586 (1) - 後面其實不太需要延長進入break的時間，音樂裡也沒什麼特別的
01:56:613 (2) - 01:58:034 (2) - 忘了clap嗎
02:13:034 (2,3,4) - 直接把(2)移到中間作對稱吧，(2)出現的時候02:11:613 (2) - 已經完全消失其實不太會去注意到他們是疊著的
02:20:455 (2,3,4,5,6) - 考慮也把這些作成對稱唄，這樣看起來也好一些，不然都是一樣的東西可是卻沒在中心感覺有點怪
02:34:113 (1) - 我覺得和前面一樣跟著人聲會比放spin好，或著這裡改跟鋼琴也行
02:42:402 (4) - 中間加clap嗎？雖然這樣玩起來會感覺怪怪的
04:16:428 (1) - 結束在04:18:718 - 然後04:18:876 - 加個note吧，配合鼓聲，然後後面空著的部份有點太長阿，要不要加些東西

[Hard]

00:42:876 (1) - 我會順時針轉一點點讓00:42:402 (5,1) - 的夾角的角度大一些
01:03:718 (2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 這一大串擺個形狀唄，都是直線轉一點角度感覺有點混
01:07:192 (3) - 節奏從一大串1/2變了，建議加個NC
01:13:195 - 這根綠線歪了
02:10:665 (1) - unsnap
04:16:428 (1) - 結束在04:18:718 - 然後04:18:876 - 加個note吧，配合鼓聲

[Normal]

00:33:876 (1) - ～ 00:40:192 (2) - 建議這裡弄個減速唄，這段SV這麼快不太適合阿

[Easy]

02:56:612 (1) - ～ 03:16:981 (1) - 我覺得可以刪掉放break，畢竟這是easy，給新手多點時間喘口氣唄

Zweib

579 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

Zweib 2014-01-26T18:12:28+00:00

Evil_Twilight wrote:
From 302990838.

[General]
Zweib's Insane的source跟其他的不一樣
Insane的combo colour跟其他diff不一樣，窩不知道這樣行不行阿
順便加個opening到tag裡唄
[Zweib's Insane]
我覺得還是讓作GD的改成這種diff name吧
00:36:402 (1) - 往下移一格讓他身體完全被00:35:770 (3) - 蓋住？ ok
00:41:613 (3) - NC下在這邊吧，我看你大部分都是下在長白線上的音乐这里变了所以。。
00:47:455 (6) - 這裡的話我覺得用0.75x作個3/4的減速slider會很適合音樂打起来有点难受还是算了。。
00:54:244 (5) - 試試頭尾相反，這樣對我來說flow和玩起來更順手些这边确实是这样的打起来更舒服啊因为(3)不适用甩尾flow
00:59:297 (1) - 其實我感覺中間是空的可是卻有鼓聲玩起來有點詭異，osu這東西不像mania一樣可以一次跟很多音軌，所以我覺得你要這樣下的話乾脆就直接把這slider換成別的唄有道理，这边是图做好了加音效时才发现漏鼓。改成了折返slider
01:12:560 (4) - 雖然你這裡是跟鋼琴音，不過我覺得可以跟著拉長一點到紅線或藍線直到人聲結束，紅線的音聽不太清楚就無視惹懒惹OvQ长滑条好难拉
01:14:928 (3) - 我會比較喜歡把這個排成和01:15:718 (1,2,3) - 相似的東西，這樣更順一點试验过并不会很蹩手的啦，也不好改了，我稍微摆近了些
01:24:086 (8,1,2) - 我的話會跟著人聲把NC下在(8)然後擺個三角形，(1)和(2)的音調差的有點多我覺得疊在一起不是那麼適合第一次出现我就想摆简单些
01:29:928 (2) - 往上移讓尾巴疊在01:29:139 (4) - 吧，壓著(1)不太好看移到下面去了。。其实个人挺喜欢这种半overlap（我这什么毛病orz
01:32:297 (3,4,5) - (3)和(4)疊在一起，(5)擺在他們的下面會比較符合音樂，這一段給我的感覺是這樣你參考一下唄看了好久没看懂orz。。。。这边听过好多遍感觉鼓本身挺乱的不是我排列的错orz，应该怎么都行吧？
SPOILER
02:07:349 (3) - 考慮加NC不？這一段你在每個''燈''的聲音都有加了NC 没注意其实我是乱加的www嘛这样再加个的话就又多一个并非NC abuse的理由了
02:34:665 (4) - 跟前面一樣，不過這裡鋼琴到白線就停了（題外話，不知道為什麼突然拉出這種東西）
SPOILER
02:36:086 (1,2,3) - 基本上因為我比較偏向跟著音樂下節奏的，所以這裡我不太會放東西，不過這沒什麼關係你高興就好唔感觉前面空足够长了所以加了
02:55:507 (1) - 把NC放在(2)吧，這樣才會和02:54:244 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 保持一致这段音乐有点乱orz
02:56:297 (6,1) - 如果你下這樣的話建議可以把(6)拉成3/4，這樣好玩些这个好像可以有
03:02:455 (5,6,7) - 這三個我習慣順時針擺個三角形好主意
03:49:192 (7,9) - 根據這段的規律應該在這加NC會好點
[Insane]
雖然這歌略長，不過前奏還是作一下比較好
AR+1會好點，到副歌的地方會覺得太慢，這歌又是190
00:37:192 (5) - 我的話會在這放NC去強調00:37:192 (5,6,7) - 這三個音
00:43:192 (2,3,4,5,1) - 考慮把這些擺成星星唄，我對這東西挺有強迫症的
00:55:823 (6,1) - 感覺這兩個靠太近了，可能會讓player產生混亂
00:58:034 (2) - 把NC下在這吧，鼓聲是從這裡加進來的
01:13:823 (5) - 試試頭尾相反作個跳在這當作一個過門去接副歌
01:17:455 (1,2,1) - 這三個我覺得這樣擺玩起來會順一些
SPOILER
01:32:139 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - ~~滿滿遮擋人性何在，這裡我肯定會死~~
01:34:586 (1) - 後面其實不太需要延長進入break的時間，音樂裡也沒什麼特別的
01:56:613 (2) - 01:58:034 (2) - 忘了clap嗎
02:13:034 (2,3,4) - 直接把(2)移到中間作對稱吧，(2)出現的時候02:11:613 (2) - 已經完全消失其實不太會去注意到他們是疊著的
02:20:455 (2,3,4,5,6) - 考慮也把這些作成對稱唄，這樣看起來也好一些，不然都是一樣的東西可是卻沒在中心感覺有點怪
02:34:113 (1) - 我覺得和前面一樣跟著人聲會比放spin好，或著這裡改跟鋼琴也行
02:42:402 (4) - 中間加clap嗎？雖然這樣玩起來會感覺怪怪的
04:16:428 (1) - 結束在04:18:718 - 然後04:18:876 - 加個note吧，配合鼓聲，然後後面空著的部份有點太長阿，要不要加些東西
[Hard]
00:42:876 (1) - 我會順時針轉一點點讓00:42:402 (5,1) - 的夾角的角度大一些好
01:03:718 (2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 這一大串擺個形狀唄，都是直線轉一點角度感覺有點混懒了=A=临时赶出来的diff orz
01:07:192 (3) - 節奏從一大串1/2變了，建議加個NC 唔这边好像是根据歌词看不适合NC
01:13:195 - 這根綠線歪了 fixed
02:10:665 (1) - unsnap fixed
04:16:428 (1) - 結束在04:18:718 - 然後04:18:876 - 加個note吧，配合鼓聲有点难啊先不改吧w
[Normal]
00:33:876 (1) - ～ 00:40:192 (2) - 建議這裡弄個減速唄，這段SV這麼快不太適合阿诶我好像没怎么见过normal有用绿线变速的。。。先这样吧
[Easy]
02:56:612 (1) - ～ 03:16:981 (1) - 我覺得可以刪掉放break，畢竟這是easy，給新手多點時間喘口氣唄好像太长了啊_(:3」∠)_

Thanks for modding

Melt

353 posts

Joined May 2011

Melt 2014-01-28T03:19:00+00:00

Irie Miyuki

哭哭哦mapping风格不是太合口味就简单说两句吧
01:57:876 - 加个circle? 感觉这个音不太明显就没放
02:07:823 (5,1,2,3) - 前面都是跟着钢琴音按zx的这里突然就变成slider尾是钢琴音了不是太爽因为这3个大概跟的是vocal的感觉，如果再有人提就改掉
02:09:086 (1,2,3) - 其实这个会不会很容易误读啊要不1和2stack? 1拉远了
03:13:192 (1,2,3,4,5) - 同上上感觉击打节奏有点乱了还有就是每次吉他三连开始就是应该在白线上所以还是白线起比较合适(?) 听鼓的话感觉没什么不对orz
03:28:270 (1) - 结尾用个soft的sampleset比较合适吧 fixed
04:25:349 - 这贝斯音真的不跟啊stress

Evil_Twilight

[Insane]

雖然這歌略長，不過前奏還是作一下比較好
AR+1會好點，到副歌的地方會覺得太慢，這歌又是190 fixed

00:37:192 (5) - 我的話會在這放NC去強調00:37:192 (5,6,7) - 這三個音好
00:43:192 (2,3,4,5,1) - 考慮把這些擺成星星唄，我對這東西挺有強迫症的感觉其实想在这样也算对称了
00:55:823 (6,1) - 感覺這兩個靠太近了，可能會讓player產生混亂拉远了
00:58:034 (2) - 把NC下在這吧，鼓聲是從這裡加進來的前面nc换到这了
01:13:823 (5) - 試試頭尾相反作個跳在這當作一個過門去接副歌其实我感觉现在这样还行
01:17:455 (1,2,1) - 這三個我覺得這樣擺玩起來會順一些
SPOILER
我个人不太习惯这种摆法orz
01:32:139 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - ~~滿滿遮擋人性何在，這裡我肯定會死~~
01:34:586 (1) - 後面其實不太需要延長進入break的時間，音樂裡也沒什麼特別的其实是延长到一个大节开始的位置了
01:56:613 (2) - 01:58:034 (2) - 忘了clap嗎这一段本来就没
02:13:034 (2,3,4) - 直接把(2)移到中間作對稱吧，(2)出現的時候02:11:613 (2) - 已經完全消失其實不太會去注意到他們是疊著的现在的3,4本来就是根据2做的对称来着
02:20:455 (2,3,4,5,6) - 考慮也把這些作成對稱唄，這樣看起來也好一些，不然都是一樣的東西可是卻沒在中心感覺有點怪其实只是为了照顾ds，不过我觉得虽然不在中线上，但是也可以算对称了
02:34:113 (1) - 我覺得和前面一樣跟著人聲會比放spin好，或著這裡改跟鋼琴也行
02:42:402 (4) - 中間加clap嗎？雖然這樣玩起來會感覺怪怪的
04:16:428 (1) - 結束在04:18:718 - 然後04:18:876 - 加個note吧，配合鼓聲，然後後面空著的部份有點太長阿，要不要加些東西后面加了点note

Thanks for modding

code

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HelloSCV

3,490 posts

Joined April 2011

HelloSCV 2014-01-29T03:09:10+00:00

from my queue
[Easy]

same volume suggestions of the sliderslide with Insane
you'd better to keep consistency about NC on low diff (01:07:507 (1) - like here and 01:14:455 (1) - here etc.)
01:05:297 (3) - missed clap
02:35:928 - useless green line
03:00:402 - why didn't you add claps on sliderslides? it hears really empty
03:07:823 (3) - add clap
03:40:034 (7) - i'd rather using 1/1 slider here, there aren't any reasonable sounds for this red tick imo
03:40:507 (8,1) - and i don't prefer to add 1/2 beat rhythm as well, since it's Easy diff you'd better to delete this and add a note 03:40:665 - here instead
example
04:07:349 (2,3,4) - this rhythm.... isn't it too hard for Easy diff?

[Normal]

same volume suggestions of the sliderslide with Insane
01:04:349 (4) - delete this clap
02:16:507 (2) - this slider suddenly snapped on red tick? it's little bit weird, try moving to previouis white tick and 02:17:297 - add a note here instead
example
02:19:033 (2) - same as above
03:04:349 (3,1) - swap NC for consistency and 03:06:560 (3) - add it on here and 03:08:139 (1) - delete this NC

[Hard]

same volume suggestions of the sliderslide with Insane
tick rate 2 fits best on this song
00:50:770 (1,3) - add claps on those slider starts each to match with the drum sounds in background
00:55:823 (1) - whistle on end
01:17:770 (4) - missed clap on end
01:28:192 (5,6,7) - i don't prefer to use this anti-jump in Hard diff without NC, this might cause confusion imo, try to keep DS like previous notes or just add NC on it
example
01:56:139 (4) - add clap on end and 01:57:086 (1) - delete this for conistency
01:58:034 (4) - add clap on start
02:22:034 (6) - i think 1/1 fits bette with the vocal compared with current one
example
02:36:086 (2) - try soft sampleset here and add NC for consistency
03:20:613 (5) - NC for consistency
04:16:349 (1) - shorten the spinner's length by previous red tick like you did on other diffs

[Insane]

you NEED too add your nickname on this diff since it's made by you Melt
tick rate 2 fits best on this song
same volume suggestions of the sliderslide with Insane
00:40:823 (2) - add whistle on slider end to fit with piano sound
00:42:876 (1) - try using finish on start? it fits well with the music (and on 02:04:981 (5) - here too)
00:46:823 - why don't you add a note here? i can hear the drum sounds cleary , it feels too empty now
example
00:55:981 - same suggestion with above and reason too
example
01:00:560 (1,2) - this pattern causes confusion as 1/2 beat seriously, i highly recommed moving to other location
example
01:05:928 (2,3,4) - stacking these objects aren't good to play imo, i prefer reversing (4) slider using ctrl g at least, or just putting it somewhere else
example
example2
01:17:455 (1) - delete NC, it's unnecessary
01:28:507 (1,1,1) - i think there isn't any reason to add many NCs here, since you did't use variable distances and there isn't any rhythmic changes throughout this part, it just looks like spamming NCs orz. But if you really want to keep this, pls delete NCs on 01:28:507 (1,1) - these notes at least, this works as far as you intended
01:33:718 (1,2,3) - what about moving these objects to somewhere else? following your previous circle pattern would be great
example
01:39:560 - um why you delayed the break time? pls delete the delay it's weird
02:04:981 (5,1) - swap NC for consistency
02:13:823 (4) - try reversing this slider using ctrl g, it has better flow for playing
02:26:455 (5,1) - swap NC for consistency
02:36:086 (1,2,3) - as i said in Zweib's Insane, try soft sampleset here, hears nice
03:14:455 (1,2) - try giving more jump distances on here? like next notes
03:45:086 (2) - this part doesn't need clap sound
04:09:876 (4) - actually i expected reversed slider here for better flow, well but since it's kinda hard to fix it and current flow isn't very bad, up to you lol

[Zweib's Insane]

i have no idea why you attached your name on diff (it doesn't make sense generaly), some people may think you made two insane diffs, so you'd better to delete your name on this diff, it's your mapset! not other's
tick rate 2 fits best on this song
decrease all of volumes on sliderslide (clap and whistle) by 10% each, it's little bit louder than others
00:36:402 (1) - this slider seems that you tried hard to make this but since most part of slider is hidden, how about changing the slider shape little for sure?
example
[img]]http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1289958[/img]
00:39:560 (4) - since you placed whistles following the piano sounds, try putting it on this slider's end too
00:40:192 (1) - same suggestion with above, i also have a suggestion about it
example
00:40:823 (2) - same whistle suggestion with 00:39:560 (4) - this
00:43:349 (3) - missed whistle on end?
00:45:876 (3) - ^
01:02:613 (5) - i think you placed finishes on all of cymbal sounds, but this part still empty even there is cymbal sound obviously, maybe a mistake?
01:04:507 (3) - this clap is inappropriate imo, i can't hear any reasonable sounds for clap here
01:18:718 (3) - add finish on slider start, same reason with before
01:24:086 (8,1) - swap NC for consistency
01:32:770 (1) - try arranging NCs like this to match with the music well (not only here, but also other same parts like 02:54:402 (2) - here and 04:13:981 (3) - here)
02:02:928 (3,4) - it seems that you followed vocal as rhythm, but this part hears kinda awkward to me, try reversing rhythm? it would be much better imo and after this, i'd rather stacking 02:03:243 (4) - this note with next 1/4 slider and delete the NC on slider (i found that there are more rhythmic issues but you don't need to fix them all, i'm just suggesting this to fix the 1/4 slider with NC, it doesn't look really good imo)
example
02:11:139 (1) - missed finish on start
02:13:507 (5) - ^
02:14:928 (5,6) - need whistles on these?
02:18:560 (1,3) - swap NC for consistency and 02:18:086 (5) - add NC here too
02:24:560 (6) - add finish on end
02:31:664 (4) - too far from previous slider imo even not playable, i also have a suggestion
example
02:36:086 (1,2,3) - try soft sampleset? normal hears too rough
02:40:823 (3) - add finish on start
02:56:613 (1) - another hidden slider, it's good to pro players but little bit hard to catch on first playing, try to avoid this pattern orz, anyway here's a example for you
example
03:03:323 (2) - hmm? why you changed DS suddenly? i'm not sure it's intentional but still thinking keep DS consistently is better
03:11:613 (5) - add finish on start
03:15:718 (1) - ^
03:21:560 (8,9,10) - again orz, same reason with other suggestions
example
03:26:613 (6) - what about NC here? for consistency and it feels kinda nice
03:33:876 (3,4) - this may cause confusion as 1/4 beat for players imo? an anti-jump on this part doesn't really needed imo
03:39:955 (4,5) - variable Streams are mostly used on long stream patterns, changing DS on short stream isn't good to play, try changing those as 1/4 slider with giving more DS or just keep DS consistently with previous notes
example
example2
03:40:192 (1) - and like above image, delete this NC, it's totally unnecessary
04:02:928 (3) - add finish on start

~~will post other diffs too~~ it would be much better if you add some missed finishes because those are on the music, good luck anyway

Zweib

579 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

Zweib 2014-01-30T01:01:38+00:00

lol a huge project for me，I'll try to work it out asap
btw，a little bit late but congratz on joining BAT wwww

Zweib

579 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

Zweib 2014-01-30T16:28:01+00:00

HelloSCV wrote:
from my queue
[Easy]
same volume suggestions of the sliderslide with Insane
you'd better to keep consistency about NC on low diff (01:07:507 (1) - like here and 01:14:455 (1) - here etc.) fixed
01:05:297 (3) - missed clap fixed
02:35:928 - useless green line fixed
03:00:402 - why didn't you add claps on sliderslides? it hears really empty because there are some clap that cannot be followed, anyway fixed
03:07:823 (3) - add clap fixed
03:40:034 (7) - i'd rather using 1/1 slider here, there aren't any reasonable sounds for this red tick imo I can hear sound on red tick while not white tick
03:40:507 (8,1) - and i don't prefer to add 1/2 beat rhythm as well, since it's Easy diff you'd better to delete this and add a note 03:40:665 - here instead
example
04:07:349 (2,3,4) - this rhythm.... isn't it too hard for Easy diff? yay I saw that the rhytms may be too hard to follow, thus I mainly use sliders rather than circles, I guess it's not that hard to keep combo at least
[Normal]
same volume suggestions of the sliderslide with Insane
01:04:349 (4) - delete this clap fixed
02:16:507 (2) - this slider suddenly snapped on red tick? it's little bit weird, try moving to previouis white tick and 02:17:297 - add a note here instead fixed
example
02:19:033 (2) - same as above fixed
03:04:349 (3,1) - swap NC for consistency and 03:06:560 (3) - add it on here and 03:08:139 (1) - delete this NC fixed
[Hard]
same volume suggestions of the sliderslide with Insane
tick rate 2 fits best on this song
00:50:770 (1,3) - add claps on those slider starts each to match with the drum sounds in background fixed
00:55:823 (1) - whistle on end fixed
01:17:770 (4) - missed clap on end fixed
01:28:192 (5,6,7) - i don't prefer to use this anti-jump in Hard diff without NC, this might cause confusion imo, try to keep DS like previous notes or just add NC on it fixed NC
example
01:56:139 (4) - add clap on end and 01:57:086 (1) - delete this for conistency fixed
01:58:034 (4) - add clap on start fixed
02:22:034 (6) - i think 1/1 fits bette with the vocal compared with current one not really lol, I add whistle on the tail
example
02:36:086 (2) - try soft sampleset here and add NC for consistency ok
03:20:613 (5) - NC for consistency fixed
04:16:349 (1) - shorten the spinner's length by previous red tick like you did on other diffs fixed

[Zweib's Insane]
i have no idea why you attached your name on diff (it doesn't make sense generaly), some people may think you made two insane diffs, so you'd better to delete your name on this diff, it's your mapset! not other's lol changed
tick rate 2 fits best on this song It sounds good but may cause combo break easier, I will consider it
decrease all of volumes on sliderslide (clap and whistle) by 10% each, it's little bit louder than others I don't think so but fixed a little lol
00:36:402 (1) - this slider seems that you tried hard to make this but since most part of slider is hidden, how about changing the slider shape little for sure? I think it's not so hard to catch, and I want to create a sense of mystery xD
example
[img]]http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1289958[/img]
00:39:560 (4) - since you placed whistles following the piano sounds, try putting it on this slider's end too piano here is not so strong like before
00:40:192 (1) - same suggestion with above, i also have a suggestion about it ^
example
00:40:823 (2) - same whistle suggestion with 00:39:560 (4) - this ^
00:43:349 (3) - missed whistle on end? not really
00:45:876 (3) - ^ ^
01:02:613 (5) - i think you placed finishes on all of cymbal sounds, but this part still empty even there is cymbal sound obviously, maybe a mistake? all finishes missed were fixed
01:04:507 (3) - this clap is inappropriate imo, i can't hear any reasonable sounds for clap here fixed
01:18:718 (3) - add finish on slider start, same reason with before
01:24:086 (8,1) - swap NC for consistency The NC in all my diff are consistent, here it is decided by lyric
01:32:770 (1) - try arranging NCs like this to match with the music well (not only here, but also other same parts like 02:54:402 (2) - here and 04:13:981 (3) - here) I cant get through you jpg lol, I think it's good enough
02:02:928 (3,4) - it seems that you followed vocal as rhythm, but this part hears kinda awkward to me, try reversing rhythm? it would be much better imo and after this, i'd rather stacking 02:03:243 (4) - this note with next 1/4 slider and delete the NC on slider (i found that there are more rhythmic issues but you don't need to fix them all, i'm just suggesting this to fix the 1/4 slider with NC, it doesn't look really good imo) hmm maybe the colorhax can infer the speed up? lol
example
02:11:139 (1) - missed finish on start
02:13:507 (5) - ^
02:14:928 (5,6) - need whistles on these? I don't think so
02:18:560 (1,3) - swap NC for consistency and 02:18:086 (5) - add NC here too same as before
02:24:560 (6) - add finish on end
02:31:664 (4) - too far from previous slider imo even not playable, i also have a suggestion I just moved them closer
example
02:36:086 (1,2,3) - try soft sampleset? normal hears too rough fixed
02:40:823 (3) - add finish on start
02:56:613 (1) - another hidden slider, it's good to pro players but little bit hard to catch on first playing, try to avoid this pattern orz, anyway here's a example for you I guess it's ok lol, it won't cause combo break on first play
example
03:03:323 (2) - hmm? why you changed DS suddenly? i'm not sure it's intentional but still thinking keep DS consistently is better It's my mistake ;p fixed
03:11:613 (5) - add finish on start
03:15:718 (1) - ^
03:21:560 (8,9,10) - again orz, same reason with other suggestions same as before
example
03:26:613 (6) - what about NC here? for consistency and it feels kinda nice ok
03:33:876 (3,4) - this may cause confusion as 1/4 beat for players imo? an anti-jump on this part doesn't really needed imo stacked
03:39:955 (4,5) - variable Streams are mostly used on long stream patterns, changing DS on short stream isn't good to play, try changing those as 1/4 slider with giving more DS or just keep DS consistently with previous notes hmm I want to create a sense of brake, and it's not hard imo because them are quite close
example
example2
03:40:192 (1) - and like above image, delete this NC, it's totally unnecessary ok
04:02:928 (3) - add finish on start

~~will post other diffs too~~ it would be much better if you add some missed finishes because those are on the music, good luck anyway

Thank you for modding!~

RandF

1,245 posts

Joined March 2013

RandF 2014-02-01T10:15:33+00:00

From my queue~

[General]

Title: COLD BUTTERFLY
Tags suggetiion:
Frill
eroge
Lyrics check (if you don't need, ignore please)
そっと髪をなでて
無様なタトゥー

[Easy]

DS of several notes is too short. in order to avoid overlap, it is better to make DS >1.1x
several sliders start at red line(1/2 rhythm). it is difficult to find rhythm for beginner
00:54:718 (2) - it is better to change to slider: 00:54:244~00:54:718
00:57:244 (4) - ^
01:05:613 (1,2) - avoid overlap
01:17:770 (4) - end at 01:18:086?
02:16:823 (2) - same as 00:54:718 (2) -
02:19:349 (4) - ^
03:19:034 (4) - NC
03:24:086 (4) - ^
03:30:876~03:40:507- because of easy-diff, it is better to add break time, imo
04:01:507 (2,3,4) - this overlap is confusing for beginner

[Normal]

00:33:402- add a note
00:52:665 (1) - remove NC

01:32:139 (1,2) - how about making parallel?

SPOILER

372,344,92139,6,0,L|481:351,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
423,257,92770,2,0,L|314:250,1,110,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

02:28:981 (5,6) - straight sliders are better, imo

SPOILER

272,51,148981,2,0,L|394:31,1,110,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
451,118,149613,2,0,L|342:135,1,110,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

03:00:244 (1) - strange rhythm. how about this?
03:33:402 (2,3) - it is better to combine into slider like previous pattern
03:34:665 (5,6) - ^
04:15:086 (2,1) - the same pattern as easy is better

[Hard]

01:05:928 (2) - make symmetric about 01:05:613 (1) -
01:22:507 (4) - x:316 y:329 (stack correctly)
02:39:402 (2) - x:238 y:223 (^)
03:22:507 (3) - x:296 y:231(^)
03:58:665 (1) - I prefer straight slider

[Insane]

00:35:770 (3,1) - this overlap is not good, imo
00:39:560 (4,1) - ^
00:40:823 (2,3) - increase DS and avoid overlap
00:54:086 (4) - x:296 y:165 how about stack on the end of 00:52:981 (1) - ?
01:22:507 (4) - Ctrl+G
01:24:244 (2,3) - x:162 y:205 stack on the head of 01:22:507 (4) -
02:03:323 (1) - remove NC
02:36:086 (5) - NC
02:55:349 (2,1) - I prefer to exchange each position

[Melt's Insane]

00:55:981- add a note
01:28:192 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - I recommend to conform DS
04:23:613 (3) - NC

Nice Duca!

~Good Luck~

Zweib

579 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

Zweib 2014-02-02T12:37:58+00:00

RandomEffect wrote:
From my queue~

[General]
Title: COLD BUTTERFLY
Tags suggetiion:
Frill
eroge
Lyrics check (if you don't need, ignore please)
そっと髪をなでて
無様なタトゥー all fixed!
[Easy]
DS of several notes is too short. in order to avoid overlap, it is better to make DS >1.1x
several sliders start at red line(1/2 rhythm). it is difficult to find rhythm for beginner
00:54:718 (2) - it is better to change to slider: 00:54:244~00:54:718 I'll consider it
00:57:244 (4) - ^
01:05:613 (1,2) - avoid overlap fixed
01:17:770 (4) - end at 01:18:086? hmm no change
02:16:823 (2) - same as 00:54:718 (2) -
02:19:349 (4) - ^
03:19:034 (4) - NC fixed
03:24:086 (4) - ^ fixed
03:30:876~03:40:507- because of easy-diff, it is better to add break time, imo I'll consider it
04:01:507 (2,3,4) - this overlap is confusing for beginner I want to keep this
[Normal]
00:33:402- add a note maybe too close to the end of the spinner?
00:52:665 (1) - remove NC fixed
01:32:139 (1,2) - how about making parallel? fixed
SPOILER
372,344,92139,6,0,L|481:351,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
423,257,92770,2,0,L|314:250,1,110,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
02:28:981 (5,6) - straight sliders are better, imo hmm it's better looking but maybe a little bit boring
SPOILER
272,51,148981,2,0,L|394:31,1,110,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
451,118,149613,2,0,L|342:135,1,110,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
03:00:244 (1) - strange rhythm. how about this? I guess it is ok
03:33:402 (2,3) - it is better to combine into slider like previous pattern I think both are ok, I want to keep 4.24stars lol
03:34:665 (5,6) - ^
04:15:086 (2,1) - the same pattern as easy is better fixed
[Hard]
01:05:928 (2) - make symmetric about 01:05:613 (1) - orz a little bit hard to make it
01:22:507 (4) - x:316 y:329 (stack correctly) fixed
02:39:402 (2) - x:238 y:223 (^) fixed
03:22:507 (3) - x:296 y:231(^) fixed
03:58:665 (1) - I prefer straight slider It's hard to tell.. so no fix
[Insane]
00:35:770 (3,1) - this overlap is not good, imo lol
00:39:560 (4,1) - ^
00:40:823 (2,3) - increase DS and avoid overlap fixed
00:54:086 (4) - x:296 y:165 how about stack on the end of 00:52:981 (1) - ? ok
01:22:507 (4) - Ctrl+G nope.. lol
01:24:244 (2,3) - x:162 y:205 stack on the head of 01:22:507 (4) - ok
02:03:323 (1) - remove NC ok
02:36:086 (5) - NC ok
02:55:349 (2,1) - I prefer to exchange each position ok
Nice Duca!
~Good Luck~

Thanks for modding!XD
I'm busy these days so maybe some suggestions which are not so necessary will be ignored, sorry for that orz

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

smallboat 2014-02-04T10:12:47+00:00

Hi,Zweib,In-game mod req. A bit late.

Red words: Should be fix it.
Blue words : I recommended suggestion.
Black words : In my personal opinion.

[General]

1.Stack Leniency 不一致，Hard是3，Melt是2，其他7，建議不動就好。
2.就只有Melt的diff勾選 wide screen support，其他也勾選起來?

[Easy] 感覺有些combo太長，看看要不要中間加個NC

03:14:455 (1) - 感覺有點出界
03:38:455 (4) - NC
03:40:507 (8) - 或許能換一個1/1滑條，多了一個1/2有點莫名。(你有些滑條中間還是有摻雜一些vocal所以我覺得可以考慮一下，難度也沒加多少)
03:44:297 (6) - 中間很重的vocal我覺得不建議用折返帶過，我覺得節奏可以這樣，重vocal放頭:

SPOILER

03:49:823 (3) - 換了一個不同旋律，所以我認為這裡可以NC一下。
03:56:138 (6) - 這段會不會太長combo，要不要NC一下?
04:04:507 (2) - 同 03:44:297 (6)

[Normal]

00:52:981 (1) - 感覺有點出界而且間距也不對。
00:55:507 (1) - ^
02:15:086 (1) - 開頭加個finish? (雖然聽不太出來
02:16:349 (2,3) - 應該可以在這3個裡面加個whistle。
02:17:612 (1) - 同 02:15:086 (1)
03:31:823 (2) - 跟前面對應的話，這個折返我覺得也可以加whistle增加效果 (都加大白線
03:33:402 (2,5) - ^
03:37:192 (2) - ^
03:49:823 (3) - 同Ez

[Hard]

03:31:823 (4) - 感覺這尾端whistle好像多加，應該是加後面大白線? (跟Normal一樣)
03:33:086 (3) - 沒疊好
03:40:507 (3,4,5) - 疊這麼多，還能想一點變化吧?
04:13:823 (1) - 不跟前面疊起來嗎?
04:25:349 (1) - 音量再小一點吧，還是有聽到一點點的soft音效。 (到20)

[Insane]

01:02:139 (3) - 感覺這個可以放的再遠些，轉個角度對(1)然後移到 (225|267)?
01:14:297 (4,1) - 感覺連打間距蠻坑，很容易miss。
02:29:612 (3,4,5) - 感覺會誤讀到不是1/4的連打。
02:34:034 (1) - 開頭whistle?
02:34:665 (4) - ^
03:33:876 (3) - 開頭少了whistle?
03:36:402 (4) - ^
03:45:244 (3) - ^
04:21:244 (2,1) - 覺得這兩個為一組，所以就跟妹兒特設一樣的吧。
04:23:613 (2) - NC?

[Melt's Insane]

00:33:244 (3,7) - 我覺得開頭可以+whistle，因為00:33:876 (5) 前面人聲都有加了，所以我認為加了會很有效果。
00:35:770 (3) - ^
00:38:297 (2,6) - ^
00:52:981 (1) - 開頭加個finish? (雖然聽不太出來
00:55:823 (6) - 感覺這裡應該是放1/2滑條而不是note? (聽到紅線有鼓
00:56:297 (1) - 我覺得疊在00:57:086 (4) 蠻不錯的，運用重複座標。
01:10:349 (2) - Ctrl+g不就順了?
01:11:139 (5) - 或許能放在(341|145)。
01:12:560 (5) - +個whistle 對應 01:11:928 (3) 的vocal?
01:13:823 (5) - Ctrl+g不就順了?
01:17:770 (2) - 或許能疊 01:18:086 (1) 滑條頭。
01:22:034 (1,2,3) - 之前的flow有點奇怪，試試這個?

SPOILER

02:04:981 (5) - 感覺疊在02:05:297 (1) 上比較帶感。
02:36:086 (1,2,3) - 這3個間距要不要小一點?
03:49:507 (3,4) - 這連打間距有點坑阿，我建議還是擺的近一點比較好。

[Other]
1.If you have any mod above problems, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.Hope to you ranked.
3.Hope my mod is useful to you.

Zweib

579 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

Zweib 2014-02-17T05:17:10+00:00

smallboat wrote:
Hi,Zweib,In-game mod req. A bit late.

Red words: Should be fix it.
Blue words : I recommended suggestion.
Black words : In my personal opinion.

[General]

1.Stack Leniency 不一致，Hard是3，Melt是2，其他7，建議不動就好。
2.就只有Melt的diff勾選 wide screen support，其他也勾選起來?[/color]

[Easy] 感覺有些combo太長，看看要不要中間加個NC [/color]

03:14:455 (1) - 感覺有點出界没
03:38:455 (4) - NC 好
03:40:507 (8) - 或許能換一個1/1滑條，多了一個1/2有點莫名。(你有些滑條中間還是有摻雜一些vocal所以我覺得可以考慮一下，難度也沒加多少) [/color]
03:44:297 (6) - 中間很重的vocal我覺得不建議用折返帶過，我覺得節奏可以這樣，重vocal放頭:
SPOILER
感觉节奏太难，用滑条过渡会简单些
03:49:823 (3) - 換了一個不同旋律，所以我認為這裡可以NC一下。从歌词看还是不NC了
03:56:138 (6) - 這段會不會太長combo，要不要NC一下? 好
04:04:507 (2) - 同 03:44:297 (6)

[Normal]

00:52:981 (1) - 感覺有點出界而且間距也不對。没问题
00:55:507 (1) - ^
02:15:086 (1) - 開頭加個finish? (雖然聽不太出來加过惹
02:16:349 (2,3) - 應該可以在這3個裡面加個whistle。不
02:17:612 (1) - 同 02:15:086 (1)
03:31:823 (2) - 跟前面對應的話，這個折返我覺得也可以加whistle增加效果 (都加大白線稍作修改
03:33:402 (2,5) - ^
03:37:192 (2) - ^
03:49:823 (3) - 同Ez

[Hard]

03:31:823 (4) - 感覺這尾端whistle好像多加，應該是加後面大白線? (跟Normal一樣) 不，本来就打算这么加的，是音效复制到normal漏音
03:33:086 (3) - 沒疊好好的
03:40:507 (3,4,5) - 疊這麼多，還能想一點變化吧? 懒惹。。这边简单些就好
04:13:823 (1) - 不跟前面疊起來嗎? 好吧
04:25:349 (1) - 音量再小一點吧，還是有聽到一點點的soft音效。 (到20) 还是要能听见比较好

[Insane]

01:02:139 (3) - 感覺這個可以放的再遠些，轉個角度對(1)然後移到 (225|267)? 差不多
01:14:297 (4,1) - 感覺連打間距蠻坑，很容易miss。不改了，其实不是间距坑，是1/4多比较难读啦
02:29:612 (3,4,5) - 感覺會誤讀到不是1/4的連打。没关系啦
02:34:034 (1) - 開頭whistle? 好
02:34:665 (4) - ^
03:33:876 (3) - 開頭少了whistle? 没有
03:36:402 (4) - ^
03:45:244 (3) - ^
04:21:244 (2,1) - 覺得這兩個為一組，所以就跟妹兒特設一樣的吧。不，我要建议他也改过来
04:23:613 (2) - NC? 不啦NC太多了

[Other]
1.If you have any mod above problems, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.Hope to you ranked.
3.Hope my mod is useful to you.

谢谢modding

Melt

353 posts

Joined May 2011

Melt 2014-02-17T12:47:11+00:00

HelloSCV

[Insane]

you NEED too add your nickname on this diff since it's made by you Melt ok~
tick rate 2 fits best on this song i think 1 may better to me
same volume suggestions of the sliderslide with Insane fixed some，and keep some in kiaitime part
00:40:823 (2) - add whistle on slider end to fit with piano sound fixed
00:42:876 (1) - try using finish on start? it fits well with the music (and on 02:04:981 (5) - here too) fixed
00:46:823 - why don't you add a note here? i can hear the drum sounds cleary , it feels too empty now i followed the vocal here，maybe its good to me ;w;
00:55:981 - same suggestion with above and reason too ok fixed
01:00:560 (1,2) - this pattern causes confusion as 1/2 beat seriously, i highly recommed moving to other location fixed
01:05:928 (2,3,4) - stacking these objects aren't good to play imo, i prefer reversing (4) slider using ctrl g at least, or just putting it somewhere else fixed
01:17:455 (1) - delete NC, it's unnecessary fixed
01:28:507 (1,1,1) - i think there isn't any reason to add many NCs here, since you did't use variable distances and there isn't any rhythmic changes throughout this part, it just looks like spamming NCs orz. But if you really want to keep this, pls delete NCs on 01:28:507 (1,1) - these notes at least, this works as far as you intended changed the ncs here
01:33:718 (1,2,3) - what about moving these objects to somewhere else? following your previous circle pattern would be great i think people may dont move when they click this two sldiers，so its just fine
01:39:560 - um why you delayed the break time? pls delete the delay it's weird
02:04:981 (5,1) - swap NC for consistency fixed
02:13:823 (4) - try reversing this slider using ctrl g, it has better flow for playing ok
02:26:455 (5,1) - swap NC for consistency fixed
02:36:086 (1,2,3) - as i said in Zweib's Insane, try soft sampleset here, hears nice fixed
03:14:455 (1,2) - try giving more jump distances on here? like next notes ok
03:45:086 (2) - this part doesn't need clap sound fixed
04:09:876 (4) - actually i expected reversed slider here for better flow, well but since it's kinda hard to fix it and current flow isn't very bad, up to you lol thanks for help :3

RandomEffect

[Melt's Insane]

00:55:981- add a note ok
01:28:192 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - I recommend to conform DS changed a little and deleted the ncs
04:23:613 (3) - NC

fixed

smallboat

[Melt's Insane]

00:33:244 (3,7) - 我覺得開頭可以+whistle，因為00:33:876 (5) 前面人聲都有加了，所以我認為加了會很有效果。
00:35:770 (3) - ^
00:38:297 (2,6) - ^ 感觉前面这一段不太需要音效来衬托
00:52:981 (1) - 開頭加個finish? (雖然聽不太出來好
00:55:823 (6) - 感覺這裡應該是放1/2滑條而不是note? (聽到紅線有鼓加了个note
00:56:297 (1) - 我覺得疊在00:57:086 (4) 蠻不錯的，運用重複座標。照顾一下ds 就没放
01:10:349 (2) - Ctrl+g不就順了?
01:11:139 (5) - 或許能放在(341|145)。因为整篇除了跳以外ds都相差不大所以没改
01:12:560 (5) - +個whistle 對應 01:11:928 (3) 的vocal? 其实感觉影响不大
01:13:823 (5) - Ctrl+g不就順了? ctrl+g反而不好吧orz，调整了下距离
01:17:770 (2) - 或許能疊 01:18:086 (1) 滑條頭。
01:22:034 (1,2,3) - 之前的flow有點奇怪，試試這個?

SPOILER

02:04:981 (5) - 感覺疊在02:05:297 (1) 上比較帶感。其实只是想坑一下HD，fixed
02:36:086 (1,2,3) - 這3個間距要不要小一點? 调小了一点
03:49:507 (3,4) - 這連打間距有點坑阿，我建議還是擺的近一點比較好。好

Thanks for modding :3

SPOILER

osu file format v12

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120,99,223507,38,0,P|114:133|136:182,1,71.9999978027344,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,221,223823,1,8,0:0:0:0:
7,292,223981,2,0,L|28:373,1,71.9999978027344,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
111,354,224297,2,0,L|117:269,1,71.9999978027344,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,216,224613,5,2,0:0:0:0:
172,216,224770,1,0,0:0:0:0:
214,291,224928,37,2,0:0:0:0:
214,291,225086,1,0,0:0:0:0:
299,305,225244,5,0,0:0:0:0:
299,305,225402,1,0,0:0:0:0:
365,250,225560,37,2,0:0:0:0:
365,250,225718,1,0,0:0:0:0:
434,198,225876,6,0,P|476:113|356:186,1,359.999989013672,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
257,151,226823,2,0,P|256:112|272:66,1,71.9999978027344,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
187,41,227139,38,0,P|167:110|82:87,1,143.999995605469,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
22,81,227613,2,0,L|29:164,1,71.9999978027344,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
10,237,227928,2,0,P|85:251|87:334,1,143.999995605469,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,309,228560,5,2,0:0:0:0:
208,351,228718,1,8,0:0:0:0:
247,357,228797,1,0,0:0:0:0:
286,348,228876,1,8,0:0:0:0:
385,290,229034,1,2,0:0:0:0:
288,219,229192,6,0,L|297:164,1,40,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,113,229349,2,0,L|215:168,1,40,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,246,229507,1,2,0:0:0:0:
88,149,229665,1,8,0:0:0:0:
165,41,229823,6,0,L|205:35,3,40,2|8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,47,230139,2,0,L|324:41,3,40,8|8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
403,53,230455,2,0,L|443:47,2,40,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,166,230770,1,8,0:0:0:0:
478,151,230928,1,0,0:0:0:0:
291,130,231086,22,0,P|283:178|316:236,1,92.0000017547608,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,257,231402,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,291,231560,2,0,P|335:333|327:378,1,92.0000017547608,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,345,231876,5,2,0:0:0:0:
220,226,232034,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,291,232192,1,0,0:0:0:0:
181,284,232349,2,0,L|71:279,1,92.0000017547608,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
50,139,232665,1,8,0:0:0:0:
30,321,232823,2,0,P|18:275|40:229,1,92.0000017547608,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
181,79,233139,5,2,0:0:0:0:
328,64,233297,1,8,0:0:0:0:
119,36,233455,2,0,P|106:82|131:137,1,92.0000017547608,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
265,197,233770,1,0,0:0:0:0:
119,122,233928,1,8,0:0:0:0:
317,250,234086,2,0,P|337:196|312:136,1,92.0000017547608,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
409,55,234402,6,0,L|422:151,1,92.0000017547608,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
401,275,234718,2,0,P|332:335|233:282,1,184.000003509522,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
114,299,235192,1,8,0:0:0:0:
32,379,235349,2,0,P|83:296|36:212,1,184.000003509522,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,110,235823,1,8,0:0:0:0:
121,122,235981,1,0,0:0:0:0:
52,223,236139,6,0,L|115:301,1,92.0000017547608,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
209,355,236455,1,8,0:0:0:0:
316,307,236613,2,0,P|357:318|405:301,1,92.0000017547608,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
399,215,236928,2,0,P|358:204|309:220,1,92.0000017547608,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
467,256,237244,6,0,P|481:206|390:130,1,184.000003509522,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
274,129,237718,1,8,0:0:0:0:
165,88,237876,2,0,P|172:41|150:-5,1,92.0000017547608,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
58,15,238192,2,0,P|51:62|73:108,1,92.0000017547608,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
134,202,238507,1,0,0:0:0:0:
24,359,238665,6,0,P|40:323|20:258,1,92.0000017547608,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
134,202,238981,1,8,0:0:0:0:
278,297,239139,2,0,P|235:310|171:282,1,92.0000017547608,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
313,192,239455,2,0,P|356:179|420:207,1,92.0000017547608,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,116,239770,6,0,P|403:203|518:214,1,276.000005264282,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,44,240402,1,6,0:0:0:0:
388,58,240481,1,0,0:0:0:0:
355,91,240560,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,143,240718,5,2,0:0:0:0:
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232,143,241192,6,0,L|236:261,1,92.0000017547608,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
194,341,241507,1,8,0:0:0:0:
88,297,241665,2,0,P|73:202|-5:171,1,184.000003509522,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
3,264,242139,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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158,31,242770,1,8,0:0:0:0:
44,33,242928,2,0,L|47:124,1,92.0000017547608,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,250,243244,2,0,P|23:303|45:349,2,92.0000017547608,2|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
167,239,243718,6,0,P|214:250|260:232,1,92.0000017547608,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
335,335,244034,1,8,0:0:0:0:
329,206,244192,2,0,P|372:192|416:203,1,92.0000017547608,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
422,332,244507,2,0,P|378:345|334:334,1,92.0000017547608,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
179,335,244823,5,6,0:0:0:0:
99,329,244981,1,0,0:0:0:0:
12,233,245139,5,6,0:0:0:0:
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139,113,245613,1,0,0:0:0:0:
0,30,245770,5,14,0:0:0:0:
82,23,245928,1,0,0:0:0:0:
226,20,246086,6,0,P|319:22|337:123,1,184.000003509522,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
311,199,246560,2,0,P|239:159|283:76,1,184.000003509522,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
429,156,247034,2,0,P|442:197|428:249,1,92.0000017547608,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
387,340,247349,5,6,0:0:0:0:
201,317,247507,1,0,0:0:0:0:
246,313,247586,1,0,0:0:0:0:
291,308,247665,1,8,0:0:0:0:
113,277,247823,5,8,0:0:0:0:
5,329,247981,2,0,L|9:381,2,46.0000008773804,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
21,215,248297,6,0,P|-8:140|55:71,1,184.000003509522,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,0,248770,2,0,L|277:20,1,92.0000017547608,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
363,38,249086,1,8,0:0:0:0:
342,239,249402,5,8,0:0:0:0:
205,287,249560,1,0,0:0:0:0:
231,144,249718,1,0,0:0:0:0:
142,331,249876,2,0,P|191:360|272:326,1,138.000002632141,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
289,306,250192,2,0,L|385:315,1,92.0000017547608,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
481,238,250507,1,2,0:0:0:0:
415,135,250665,1,8,0:0:0:0:
484,27,250823,2,0,P|410:64|310:9,1,184.000003509522,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,63,251297,6,0,P|208:177|75:103,1,368.000007019043,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
33,241,252086,1,2,0:0:0:0:
65,274,252165,1,0,0:0:0:0:
109,285,252244,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,338,252402,6,0,P|270:325|322:345,1,92.0000017547608,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
427,365,252718,1,8,0:0:0:0:
427,365,252876,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,245,253034,2,0,P|465:195|443:142,1,92.0000017547608,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
333,108,253349,2,0,P|266:150|177:103,1,184.000003509522,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
257,64,253823,5,2,0:0:0:0:
144,15,253981,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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144,15,254139,1,8,0:0:0:0:
89,137,254297,1,0,0:0:0:0:
21,233,254455,5,8,0:0:0:0:
89,137,254613,1,8,0:0:0:0:
132,241,254770,1,0,0:0:0:0:
199,357,254928,5,8,0:0:0:0:
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263,237,255244,1,2,0:0:0:0:
281,146,255402,5,2,0:0:0:0:
263,237,255560,1,2,0:0:0:0:
348,205,255718,1,8,0:0:0:0:
217,85,255876,2,0,P|298:64|364:109,1,160,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
339,340,256349,21,2,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,261402,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,40,263613,5,8,0:0:0:0:
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430,95,264244,2,0,L|413:190,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
421,299,264560,2,0,L|463:308,2,40,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
311,335,264876,2,0,P|303:285|322:235,1,80,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,266297,37,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,266376,12,0,267718,0:0:0:0:

shigure999

2 posts

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shigure999 2014-02-18T12:17:03+00:00

nice map!

Zweib

579 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

Zweib 2014-02-18T12:31:54+00:00

shigure999 wrote:
nice map!

thx!

epocsodielaK

50 posts

Joined March 2012

epocsodielaK 2014-07-10T06:52:02+00:00

just a suggestion for the combo colour set ;p

[Colours]
Combo1 : 196,193,181
Combo2 : 159,169,146
Combo3 : 156,78,115
Combo4 : 114,119,156

Zweib

579 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

Zweib 2014-08-29T04:24:39+00:00

AR and OD fixed

Mei

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Joined March 2012

Mei 2014-09-20T05:40:59+00:00

嘿嘿

[insane]

00:34:981 (1,2) - 00:35:139 这里有个ka的音，滑条尾感觉弱化了，试试这样的我感觉好些
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00:36:402 (1,2,3) - 这里也是类似的意见，原因是有吉他（或者其他的奇怪的乐器的声音
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00:42:086 (5,6,7) - 我个人感觉ctrl+g好打些
00:45:717 (2) - 移到x268 y108抱起来啊
01:14:455 (1,2,3,4,5) - 23的flow感觉不太好，建议试试这样
Picture
01:17:297 (2,3,4) - 根据前面的节奏下发这里可以这样啊，顺便01:17:297 (2,1) - 有点overlap
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01:22:823 (5) - ctrl+g 好些
01:23:139 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 正常做法不是滑条拉倒红线然后连打放偶数个么（吐血
01:24:244 (2,1) - 2叠在一的头上啊
02:09:402 (1,2) - 这两个也加上clap
02:12:402 (1) - ctrl+g？
02:16:823 (3,4) - 3和4分别ctrl+g
02:20:455 (2,3,4) - 试试这样
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02:48:244 (2,3) - 感觉有点怪，试试这样
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03:31:349 (2) - ctrl+g
03:49:113 (6) - 建议删掉这个，听起来顺耳一点.-.，5可以叠在7的头上然后nc一下
04:10:034 (1,5) - 5叠在1上面试试
04:26:139 在这里加个note？比如x336 y252

有人叫我mp，所以猪尾巴88

Zweib

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Topic Starter

Zweib 2014-09-20T14:33:56+00:00

Mei wrote:
嘿嘿
[insane]
00:34:981 (1,2) - 00:35:139 这里有个ka的音，滑条尾感觉弱化了，试试这样的我感觉好些
Picture
不太喜欢这种滑条尾压蓝._.用滑条尾踩重音不也挺带感的嘛w

00:36:402 (1,2,3) - 这里也是类似的意见，原因是有吉他（或者其他的奇怪的乐器的声音
Picture
同上

00:42:086 (5,6,7) - 我个人感觉ctrl+g好打些这里打着是不舒服，改了节奏

00:45:717 (2) - 移到x268 y108抱起来啊嘛，nazi

01:14:455 (1,2,3,4,5) - 23的flow感觉不太好，建议试试这样
Picture

01:17:297 (2,3,4) - 根据前面的节奏下发这里可以这样啊，顺便01:17:297 (2,1) - 有点overlap 前面好像没这么下过节奏呀，，
Picture

01:22:823 (5) - ctrl+g 好些故意的w

01:23:139 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 正常做法不是滑条拉倒红线然后连打放偶数个么（吐血确实是按你说的那样打起来更习惯点，不过这里6个的串总觉得短了- -，其实NC在这个位置的话不影响读图的

01:24:244 (2,1) - 2叠在一的头上啊？？

02:09:402 (1,2) - 这两个也加上clap 唔效果不明显，还是按原音乐的来吧

02:12:402 (1) - ctrl+g？不了，一直朝一个方向转很闷的

02:16:823 (3,4) - 3和4分别ctrl+g 后面不好接了orz

02:20:455 (2,3,4) - 试试这样
Picture

02:48:244 (2,3) - 感觉有点怪，试试这样
Picture

03:31:349 (2) - ctrl+g

03:49:113 (6) - 建议删掉这个，听起来顺耳一点.-.，5可以叠在7的头上然后nc一下加了NC

04:10:034 (1,5) - 5叠在1上面试试

04:26:139 在这里加个note？比如x336 y252
有人叫我mp，所以猪尾巴88

谢摸
我比较懒改的不多orz女王不要打我

Hinsvar

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Hinsvar 2014-09-22T15:23:08+00:00

Yo; modding here!

*Bolded = Unrankable or very, very strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems. Also note that hitsound suggestions on a diff may apply on similar parts of the song and the other diffs of the mapset.

>General

Use the kanji of the eroge's title as the source ("聖娼女～性奴育成学園～") and put the romanized name (should be changed to "Sei Shoujo ~Seido Ikusei Gakuen~" btw) in the tags to follow the current ranking criteria.
Try using 75-80% volume for the kiai times? 65% is a pretty low increase of volume from the other parts of the song to the point where it feels insignificant. A noticeably louder hitsound in the kiai time would be nice to indicate that it's the strongest part of the song!

>Easy

01:00:560 (1) - Remove NC? I think this is inconsistent with the combo pattern that you have made so far.
01:02:928 (2,1) - Swap NC? Same reason as the suggestion above.
01:17:770 (1) - Remove the NC, then swap NC at 01:19:507 (3,1)? Again, same reason.
01:58:665 (1,2) - Swap NC yet again? I believe you should know the reason by now. (If I ask for a remove/swap/add NC, assume that it's to keep the combo consistency.)
02:03:560 - Add a finish to follow the cymbal here?
02:04:981 (1) - ^
03:00:402 & 03:01:823 - Use the default soft finish if possible to emphasize the cymbals here, too? The current finish doesn't really go well with the song.
03:01:823 (2,1) - Swap NC?
03:06:718 (2) - Add an NC here?
03:54:402 (1,3) - Swap NC?
03:57:401 (1) - Remove NC? (Okay, I'm honestly pretty confused right now. The combo pattern looks kinda random. Sometimes you add an NC every 4 stanzas, and sometimes 2. Well, just try to make them consistent.)

>Normal

00:51:718 (5,6) - Can have a little better blanket, I think.
01:02:928 - Use the default soft finish to emphasize the cymbal?
03:00:244 - 03:14:455 - This part is very awkward to play since you used too many long sliders and skipped a lot of strong instrument sounds. I recommend you to remap this part and emphasize more instrument sounds + make this part a little more intense with less long sliders.
03:33:086 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Not a must, but might as well make them symmetrical. Don't you think it'd be nicer?

>Hard

00:45:244 (1) - Try to follow that piano note in the middle of the slider? Feels weird to leave it unmapped.
01:13:981 (4) - Won't it be confusing since it has four repeats compared to 01:13:349 (2,3)?
02:00:402 (3) - Same as 00:45:244 (1). I don't think hitsounding the middle with a custom hitsound is enough.
02:34:034 (1) - Rotate it like this for a better flow?
03:30:402 - 03:48:244 - I think the usage of whistles can be improved here. For example, add whistles at 03:31:349, 03:32:139, and 03:32:613 because the instruments are clearly strong, and remove the whistle at 03:31:981 since there's no instrument sound that can be followed.
03:33:244 (1) - Same as 00:45:244 (1).
03:59:139 (3,1) - Don't you think they're too close to each other?
04:25:349 (1,2,3) - Why are you mapping here? There is literally nothing that you can map except the cymbal at 04:26:297. This is completely unacceptable since it's essentially mapping emptiness for a relatively long amount of time.

>Melt's Insane

00:33:244 (3) - Same as 00:45:244 (1) in the Hard diff. I can't see what are you trying to follow here by using this rhythm, honestly.
00:58:507 - Try to add a circle here to follow the drum? It feels pretty noticeable, and I think it's awkward to skip it.
01:06:244 - ^. It's actually confusing to leave this unmapped because players might think that 01:06:402 (4) starts here.
02:26:455 (5,1) - Unstack? It's hard to explain... it just feels more comfortable and fits with the song better if there isn't any stack here, IMO.
03:06:718 (6,1) - Swap NC since the music's rhythm "restarts" at (6), and make a jump between 03:06:560 (5,6)? Fits the song way better.
03:28:270 (1) - Use Soft whistle here instead? A drum hitsound doesn't really work here...
03:38:770 (3,4,5,6) - What's with the sudden spacing inconsistency?

>Insane

01:12:560 (4) - Lengthen to 1/1 and add a whistle on the head? Feels more comfortable to play that way.
02:34:665 (4) - ^
04:11:297 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - What's with this stream? These objects are largely based on nothing and are just odd to play since there isn't anything that the circles on the blue ticks are mapping on...
04:25:349 (1,2,3) - Same as Hard.

Well uh, yeah. I think Easy and Hard are quite hard as Easy and Hard diffs, especially Easy with the complicated rhythm. The overall flow in Hard can also be improved, and also the triangles at the end of each kiai time in Melt's diff.

Still a good mapset, but definitely can be improved.

Good luck on the way!

Zweib

579 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

Zweib 2014-09-22T17:23:13+00:00

Hinsvar wrote:
Yo; modding here!

*Bolded = Unrankable or very, very strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems. Also note that hitsound suggestions on a diff may apply on similar parts of the song and the other diffs of the mapset.

>General
Use the kanji of the eroge's title as the source ("聖娼女～性奴育成学園～") and put the romanized name (should be changed to "Sei Shoujo ~Seido Ikusei Gakuen~" btw) in the tags to follow the current ranking criteria.
Try using 75-80% volume for the kiai times? 65% is a pretty low increase of volume from the other parts of the song to the point where it feels insignificant. A noticeably louder hitsound in the kiai time would be nice to indicate that it's the strongest part of the song! changed to 70%
>Easy
01:00:560 (1) - Remove NC? I think this is inconsistent with the combo pattern that you have made so far.
01:02:928 (2,1) - Swap NC? Same reason as the suggestion above.
01:17:770 (1) - Remove the NC, then swap NC at 01:19:507 (3,1)? Again, same reason.
01:58:665 (1,2) - Swap NC yet again? I believe you should know the reason by now. (If I ask for a remove/swap/add NC, assume that it's to keep the combo consistency.)
02:03:560 - Add a finish to follow the cymbal here?
02:04:981 (1) - ^
03:00:402 & 03:01:823 - Use the default soft finish if possible to emphasize the cymbals here, too? The current finish doesn't really go well with the song. i'm not sure because i see no difference between here and before
03:01:823 (2,1) - Swap NC?
03:06:718 (2) - Add an NC here?
03:54:402 (1,3) - Swap NC?
03:57:401 (1) - Remove NC? (Okay, I'm honestly pretty confused right now. The combo pattern looks kinda random. Sometimes you add an NC every 4 stanzas, and sometimes 2. Well, just try to make them consistent.)
>Normal
00:51:718 (5,6) - Can have a little better blanket, I think.
01:02:928 - Use the default soft finish to emphasize the cymbal? same to easy, so no change here, or maybe I should change the sample file of normal-hitfinish?
03:00:244 - 03:14:455 - This part is very awkward to play since you used too many long sliders and skipped a lot of strong instrument sounds. I recommend you to remap this part and emphasize more instrument sounds + make this part a little more intense with less long sliders.
03:33:086 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Not a must, but might as well make them symmetrical. Don't you think it'd be nicer?
>Hard
00:45:244 (1) - Try to follow that piano note in the middle of the slider? Feels weird to leave it unmapped. I dont think so because player will pay more attention to the vocal, I'd like to use 1/1 sliders to release the rhythm
01:13:981 (4) - Won't it be confusing since it has four repeats compared to 01:13:349 (2,3)? I think it's ok because player will read the approach circle when dealing with these short reverse sliders
02:00:402 (3) - Same as 00:45:244 (1). I don't think hitsounding the middle with a custom hitsound is enough. same to before
02:34:034 (1) - Rotate it like this for a better flow?
03:30:402 - 03:48:244 - I think the usage of whistles can be improved here. For example, add whistles at 03:31:349, 03:32:139, and 03:32:613 because the instruments are clearly strong, and remove the whistle at 03:31:981 since there's no instrument sound that can be followed.
03:33:244 (1) - Same as 00:45:244 (1).
03:59:139 (3,1) - Don't you think they're too close to each other? it's okay because when we see (1), the slider(3) already disappeared.
04:25:349 (1,2,3) - Why are you mapping here? There is literally nothing that you can map except the cymbal at 04:26:297. This is completely unacceptable since it's essentially mapping emptiness for a relatively long amount of time. ??I can hear bass here :/
>Insane
01:12:560 (4) - Lengthen to 1/1 and add a whistle on the head? Feels more comfortable to play that way.
02:34:665 (4) - ^
04:11:297 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - What's with this stream? These objects are largely based on nothing and are just odd to play since there isn't anything that the circles on the blue ticks are mapping on... i can hear the 1/4.... and it fits the music, it's exciting here
04:25:349 (1,2,3) - Same as Hard. same. low but the bass notes do exist
Well uh, yeah. I think Easy and Hard are quite hard as Easy and Hard diffs, especially Easy with the complicated rhythm. The overall flow in Hard can also be improved, and also the triangles at the end of each kiai time in Melt's diff. lol, I agree with you that the rhythm of Easy is quite painful, so I mainly used more sliders rather than circles to fulfill the song. But I believe that the difficulty of Hard is of good balance, which I am most satisfied with. For better diff spread, maybe Normal can be mapped harder

Still a good mapset, but definitely can be improved.

Good luck on the way!

And other all fixed, thanks for modding!

Last edited by Zweib 2014-11-25T08:04:46+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

wantuol

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wantuol 2014-09-23T13:23:30+00:00

聖娼女～性奴育成学園～

Narcissu

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Narcissu 2014-09-30T12:29:39+00:00

聖娼女～性奴育成学園～

[CSGA]Ar3sgice

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[CSGA]Ar3sgice 2014-11-23T13:42:09+00:00

我觉得你还是把source去掉吧

[CSGA]Ar3sgice

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Joined July 2011

[CSGA]Ar3sgice 2014-11-23T14:17:12+00:00

ins
01:24:244 (2) - 没叠好
02:32:139 (5) - 这个和那大滑条太近了不好看拉远点吧
02:34:665 (4) - 弧度小一点比较好
02:38:613 (1,2,3,4,5) - nightmare233
02:40:191 (1) - 其实你blanket没弄好..
04:08:139 (1,2,3,4) - 3和4那里建议多考虑一下
04:21:560 - 加spin啊
233

melt's insane
01:17:928 - 有点坑啊
01:26:297 (2) - 往下一点
啊

hard
感觉没啥问题

我觉得没啥能挑的啊
歌还不错就是source实在太kowai
总之就当这歌是什么单曲把source去掉比较好
反正之前牛顿爱迪生大发明还是哪个也是删了吧

---

ez
00:32:770 (1) - ez不要玩这种花式滑条啊
01:17:770 (4) - slider end
01:23:139 (6) - 提前1/2结束比较好听
01:33:402 (3) - 建议弄成blanket (2)的那种新装你感受一下
02:39:876 (4) - sldier end
03:09:244 (4) - 123456788
03:26:613 (1,2) - 建议把这两个拖到383:107的位置感觉那个地方两边一样的间距不是很好
03:38:770 (5) - 你的三角星华佗了
04:02:770 (4) - 这样不好吧

我觉得你这确实不过关最前面那一段感觉做图没进入状态后面还好

edit2
nm还行不挑了

Zweib

579 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

Zweib 2014-11-23T14:47:24+00:00

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:
ins
01:24:244 (2) - 没叠好
02:32:139 (5) - 这个和那大滑条太近了不好看拉远点吧
02:34:665 (4) - 弧度小一点比较好
02:38:613 (1,2,3,4,5) - nightmare233 这个抄太明显了w，突然想起我还找kloyd要摸了orz
02:40:191 (1) - 其实你blanket没弄好..
04:08:139 (1,2,3,4) - 3和4那里建议多考虑一下
04:21:560 - 加spin啊 = =塞不进
233

melt's insane
01:17:928 - 有点坑啊？
01:26:297 (2) - 往下一点
啊

hard
感觉没啥问题

我觉得没啥能挑的啊
歌还不错就是source实在太kowai
总之就当这歌是什么单曲把source去掉比较好
反正之前牛顿爱迪生大发明还是哪个也是删了吧

---

ez
00:32:770 (1) - ez不要玩这种花式滑条啊
01:17:770 (4) - slider end
01:23:139 (6) - 提前1/2结束比较好听
01:33:402 (3) - 建议弄成blanket (2)的那种新装你感受一下
02:39:876 (4) - sldier end
03:09:244 (4) - 123456788
03:26:613 (1,2) - 建议把这两个拖到383:107的位置感觉那个地方两边一样的间距不是很好
03:38:770 (5) - 你的三角星华佗了
04:02:770 (4) - 这样不好吧

我觉得你这确实不过关最前面那一段感觉做图没进入状态后面还好 orz，之前更糟，现在感觉好一些了

edit2
nm还行不挑了

其他all fixed
thanks for modding

Pururut

488 posts

Joined March 2012

Pururut 2014-11-24T11:17:14+00:00

~~真随便写点~~

[Insane]
00:33:876 (4,5) - 读成压蓝线滑条
01:14:455 (1,2,3) - bad flow don't ask me why,大概是23太近,3 ctrl+g可能会好点
01:23:139 (6) - 圆弧朝上感觉更顺
02:32:139 (5,6) - 好像6锚点高了点
02:34:665 (4) - 塞不下转盘感觉可以折返一次
03:14:455 (1) - 漏了whistle
03:21:797 (9,10) - 貌似没盖好后面的滑条
03:47:139 (1) - 也这样啊 02:13:981 (2)
04:00:086 (1,2,3) - try

SPOILER

04:02:297 (5,1,2,3) - try

SPOILER

04:16:349 (2) - 还可以下一点

[Melt'Insane]
hh辣鸡妹儿
01:17:455 (6,7,1) - 不该空拍的建议改成滑条
01:37:192 没有必要拖这么久才break啊掉血的啊
02:24:560 (2) - 建议拖到后面红线这里加个note
02:36:086 (1,2,3) -

SPOILER

03:11:297 (3,4) - 不需要空拍打起来很怪异
04:25:349 这里也是别空了连hard都有

[Hard]
01:13:981 (4) - 感觉改成两次折返加两个note还容易打点
02:36:086 (2,3,4) -

SPOILER

02:39:402 (2) - 没叠好

[Normal]
1/2 1/1堆叠还是别老是混搭的好
00:56:770 (2) - 难看
01:26:613 (1,2) - 好像断flow了
03:02:139 (2,3) - ^

[Easy]
fine

下面美丽

Zweib

579 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

Zweib 2014-11-24T13:27:24+00:00

Pururut wrote:
~~真随便写点~~

[Insane]
00:33:876 (4,5) - 读成压蓝线滑条稍微移远了点，其实影响不大？
01:14:455 (1,2,3) - bad flow don't ask me why,大概是23太近,3 ctrl+g可能会好点把2放到了前面4的下面（爷爷！）
01:23:139 (6) - 圆弧朝上感觉更顺感觉差不多。。朝下的话跟后面的串更顺
02:32:139 (5,6) - 好像6锚点高了点 fixed
02:34:665 (4) - 塞不下转盘感觉可以折返一次略怪
03:14:455 (1) - 漏了whistle 这里不加
03:21:797 (9,10) - 貌似没盖好后面的滑条不好看
03:47:139 (1) - 也这样啊 02:13:981 (2) 好
04:00:086 (1,2,3) - try 感觉不好，不过缩小了点ds容易些
SPOILER
04:02:297 (5,1,2,3) - try = =诡异，改了别的
SPOILER
04:16:349 (2) - 还可以下一点好

[Hard]
01:13:981 (4) - 感觉改成两次折返加两个note还容易打点改了
02:36:086 (2,3,4) - 改成一个滑条了，更简单

SPOILER
02:39:402 (2) - 没叠好 fixed

[Normal]
1/2 1/1堆叠还是别老是混搭的好再考虑下因为ez hd比较难，nm已经偏简单了
00:56:770 (2) - 难看改了
01:26:613 (1,2) - 好像断flow了微调了下
03:02:139 (2,3) - ^ 微调了下

[Easy]
fine

下面美丽

Mafumafu

Beatmap Nominator

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Joined August 2013

Mafumafu 2014-11-24T15:57:24+00:00

[Easy]
01:29:455 (1,2) - Way too apparent blanket issue.
02:02:297 (1) - Remove NC
02:04:981 (3) - NC

[Normal]
01:19:507 (1,2,3,4) - Why suddenly you didnt follow the vocal here?
02:07:192 (5,1) - 1/2
02:58:665 (4) - Touch the HP bar, unrankable.

[Hard]
00:42:086 (4) - Too curved.
00:42:402 (5,1) - Weird 1/4
01:13:507 (2,3,4) - 做个音量渐增吧。。。

本来还想多摸，可是还有三分钟断电。。。TwT

加油！

Zweib

579 posts

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Topic Starter

Zweib 2014-11-24T16:59:47+00:00

Regraz wrote:
[Easy]
01:29:455 (1,2) - Way too apparent blanket issue. fixed
02:02:297 (1) - Remove NC fixed
02:04:981 (3) - NC fixed

[Normal]
01:19:507 (1,2,3,4) - Why suddenly you didnt follow the vocal here? hmm for the clap
02:07:192 (5,1) - 1/2 might be hard
02:58:665 (4) - Touch the HP bar, unrankable. fixed

[Hard]
00:42:086 (4) - Too curved. fixed
00:42:402 (5,1) - Weird 1/4 maybe it's ok
01:13:507 (2,3,4) - 做个音量渐增吧。。。ok

本来还想多摸，可是还有三分钟断电。。。TwT

加油！

Thanks!

-Yuzuriha

574 posts

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-Yuzuriha 2014-11-25T10:13:21+00:00

From my topic

Insane

why dorain 6 ?

i think 7~8 best!!

00:39:560 Blanket?
http://gyazo.com/15a7ed1e9835aef767a330ec2fe233b3

00:43:981(1,2) forrow is Hard lol . chenge i hope

00:45:876 I like this slider ↓↓↓
http://gyazo.com/975a567501f3c321ab223da01f41ba60

00:55:192 NC remove
00:55:823 NC add ?

01:21:244(3,4) forrow 3slider is curve best , i think

01:30:718 ~ 01:37:034 i like this part!! good

02:37:349 i think
http://gyazo.com/a5dde1ac69b1a97d341fbb58275423a2

02:42:402(4,5,6,7) no forrow lol chenge plz

02:50:928 curve? 02:50:297(1,2,4)

03:44:928 curve?

03:50:849(2,4) remove . overmap?

Melt's Insane

01:57:876 add

02:52:823 Clap Drum
02:53:139 finish Drum
02:53:613 Clap Drum

03:06:876(1) 03:06:718 this start

03:35:928(1,2) forrow plz

03:40:507 NC remove
03:40:981 NC add

03:56:928(1,4) Blanket?

03:59:770 Ctrl G

04:07:823 I like ↓↓↓
http://gyazo.com/c845624ae16002c8497809894b0a8fd1

Hard

Drain 6 ? i think

00:59:928(6,1) far

01:32:060 remove
02:54:165 ^^
04:08:692 ^^

03:19:744 X101 Y323

03:32:901 X129 Y161

03:47:928 Clap Drum
03:48:244 finish Drum

Nomal

02:02:770 add ?

02:13:823 this?
http://gyazo.com/cb5244a3b8b3f3b40f0c97cb98b23878

Easy

good!

---------------------------------------------------------

good songs

i hope ranked!!

slider is cool

good luck XD

Star prezents!!

Zweib

579 posts

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Topic Starter

Zweib 2014-11-25T12:19:31+00:00

-Yuzuriha-inori- wrote:
From my topic

Insane

why dorain 6 ?

i think 7~8 best!! changed to 7!

00:39:560 Blanket? fixed!
http://gyazo.com/15a7ed1e9835aef767a330ec2fe233b3

00:43:981(1,2) forrow is Hard lol . chenge i hope moved them closer

00:45:876 I like this slider ↓↓↓ The jump too high, not fit the music imo
http://gyazo.com/975a567501f3c321ab223da01f41ba60

00:55:192 NC remove fixed!
00:55:823 NC add ? fixed!

01:21:244(3,4) forrow 3slider is curve best , i think curved by a little

01:30:718 ~ 01:37:034 i like this part!! good

02:37:349 i think keep this
http://gyazo.com/a5dde1ac69b1a97d341fbb58275423a2

02:42:402(4,5,6,7) no forrow lol chenge plz it's ok imo

02:50:928 curve? 02:50:297(1,2,4)

03:44:928 curve? ok!

03:50:849(2,4) remove . overmap? no

Melt's Insane

01:57:876 add

02:52:823 Clap Drum
02:53:139 finish Drum
02:53:613 Clap Drum

03:06:876(1) 03:06:718 this start

03:35:928(1,2) forrow plz

03:40:507 NC remove
03:40:981 NC add

03:56:928(1,4) Blanket?

03:59:770 Ctrl G

04:07:823 I like ↓↓↓
http://gyazo.com/c845624ae16002c8497809894b0a8fd1

Hard

Drain 6 ? i think

00:59:928(6,1) far distance snapped here

01:32:060 remove uh, all fixed thx!
02:54:165 ^^
04:08:692 ^^

03:19:744 X101 Y323

03:32:901 X129 Y161

03:47:928 Clap Drum cool but not consist lol
03:48:244 finish Drum

Nomal

02:02:770 add ? all fixed!

02:13:823 this?
http://gyazo.com/cb5244a3b8b3f3b40f0c97cb98b23878

Easy

good!

---------------------------------------------------------

good songs

i hope ranked!!

slider is cool

good luck XD

Thanks for modding!

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