Overall

1. 说下总体改音效的思路，听下来感觉whistle放的有点乱，然后那个finish挺好听的但是用的不多，所以觉得可以统一一下whistle的节奏，比如保持24whistle，然后在kiai部分的铁琴(好像是这个，总之是叮叮咚咚很清脆的那个声音)音上可以适当加一点finish
2. 后面都是具体的改法，基本都是按照上面这个思路的，你根据自己喜好看着改改把（

Cup

1. 00:23:136 - 00:24:268 - whistle
2. 00:45:777 - whistle
3. 01:14:081 (3,4) - 加finish，3的whistle去掉，01:15:211 - 加SC1 finish
4. 01:18:890 - 加finish， 01:19:739 - 加SC1 finish
5. 01:22:004 - 01:23:419 - 加finish， 01:24:268 - 加SC1 finish
6. 01:28:798 (4) - 滑条头尾和折返加finish， 折返和尾部的whistle去掉
7. 01:33:324 - SC1 finish
8. 01:34:456 - whistle去掉
9. 01:37:287 - 01:37:853 - finish
10. 01:38:138 (1) - whistle的节奏断了，改成单点加滑条试试看？滑条头加whistle
11. 01:40:117 - finish
12. 01:42:381 - 01:43:513 - finish， 01:45:211 - whistle
13. 01:49:173 - 转盘到这里结束，加个finish试试？

Salad

1. 00:27:098 (4) - whistle
2. 00:47:475 - whistle
3. 00:48:041 (7) - 滑条头的whistle去掉，放滑条尾
4. 01:14:081 (3,4) - 加finish，3的whistle去掉
5. 01:15:211 - SC1finish， whistle去掉
6. 01:19:739 - finish
7. 01:22:855 (1) - 滑条头和折返加finish
8. 01:28:798 (1,2,3) - 滑条头的whistle都改成finish
9. 01:33:324 - SC1finish
10. 01:37:004 - finish
11. 01:37:853 - SC1finish，whistle去掉
12. 01:39:551 - 01:40:683 - whistle
13. 01:41:249 - whistle去掉， 01:41:815 - 加whistle
14. 01:42:383 (3) - 头whistle去掉，加finish，尾加whistle
15. 01:43:515 (5) - 头whistle去掉，尾加whistle
16. 01:45:211 - whistle
17. 01:45:777 (1) - 头whistle去掉，尾加whistle
18. 01:46:911 (2) - 头whistle去掉，加finish，尾加whistle
19. 01:48:041 - 去掉whistle
20. 01:49:173 - 同cup，转盘这里结束加finish

General

1. Background: Resolution is quite low, try out this higher quality version
2. Timing: Timing is fine just the offset is a couple of beats off. You'll want to place the offset at 00:20:871 - so downbeats (the large white ticks) are in the right place

Cup

1. 00:20:871 - The current verse of the song starts here so although the vocals don't come in right away you should start mapping from here. A 1/1 slider starting here and ending at 00:21:437 - would work well
   
2. 00:22:003 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This part is quite dense for a cup, it uses a lot of 1/2 rhythms here so I'd suggest making use of some longer sliders here. I'd extend 00:22:003 (1) - to end at 00:22:570 - then extend 00:23:136 (2) - to end at 00:23:702 - and make it repeat once and then delete 00:24:551 (7,9) -. You'll have to rework the patterns here a bit but just use similar distances like before and it should be no problem
   
3. 00:26:248 (2) - This sound isn't too important so I'd delete this note
   
4. 00:26:532 (2) - This slider ends on a strong downbeat which you typically want to avoid. I think instead of a slider here a nice idea would be to place 4 notes [url=http://puu.sh/xQ0Px/4f7ddd5f04.jpg]like so[url]. I'd say the vocals here are worth emphasising and this curve movement is pretty simple and easy to follow
   
5. 00:27:947 (1,2,3,4) - Again I'd look to reduce density here. 1/1 sliders would be a great fit here. One at 00:27:663 - and one at 00:28:795 -. As for 00:29:928 (4) - I'd just replace that with a single note at 00:29:927 -
   
6. 00:30:494 (1,2,3,4) - With this current timeline it doesn't cover a strong vocal at 00:32:191 - and 00:33:889 (4) - ends on a strong downbeat. I'd recommend deleting 00:31:626 (2) - , make 00:30:494 (1) - repeat once and then move 00:32:758 (3,4) - backwards on the timeline to the previous white tick
   
7. 00:34:739 (5,1,2,3,4,5) - Again some more density reducing. A repeating 1/1 slider starting at 00:34:455 - and then single notes on 00:36:154 - and 00:36:720 - would cover this well.
   
8. 00:37:004 (1) - This piano sound stands out so I would certainly keep this
   
9. 00:37:853 (1,2,3,4) - May or may not want to keep the density here, it might be a little much and better off with a 1/1 slider but if you do want to I'd recommend simplifying the pattern here. It's a fairly quick series of movements for a Cup so a curve might be a better fit or you could reduce the distances between the notes so it's a bit easier
   
10. 00:38:984 - The song repeats a verse here so it's very similar to the previous section starting at 00:20:870 -. Aim to make the timeline similar to what you've done earlier for similar bits of the song
    
11. 00:48:041 (7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - No issues with the timeline here but the patterns here are very repetitive. Try to add some more variation with slider shapes and direction changes between notes
    
12. 00:58:230 (3,4,5) - I'd rearrange this to better represent the instrument on 00:59:362 - 01:00:494 - and 01:01:626 -. Get rid of the repeat on 00:58:230 (3) - and add a new 1/1 slider at 00:59:362 - and replace 00:59:928 (4,5) - with a new 1/1 slider at 01:00:494 -
    
13. 01:08:560 (1) - This spinner is currently starts too soon after 01:07:853 (4) -, it would have to start on 01:08:701 - at the earliest to be rankable though I think it would be best to remove the spinner here and replace it with some notes instead. A large curve from 01:08:984 - 01:10:399 - could be worth trying.
    
14. 01:10:400 (1) - This ends on a strong downbeat so I'd remove this and 01:11:248 (2) - and replace them with a 1/1 slider starting on 01:11:248 (2) - that repeats once
    
15. 01:13:513 (2,4) - I'd move these to x:424 just to make this a little easier
    
16. 01:15:210 - I think a higher note density is the Kiai is pretty acceptable here and there's quite a few longer sliders used here so overall density feels better here
    
17. 01:25:966 (1) - There's no movement on this which is a bit uninteresting to play and it also ends on a downbeat. Try to add some movement here and make 01:26:531 - its own note
    
18. 01:31:202 (1) - Similar to the previous spinner, it starts too soon and would probably be best just mapping this with notes instead as this spinner covers the downbeat at 01:33:323 -
    
19. 01:35:022 (4) - Another downbeat covered here, 1/1 slider starting on 01:35:587 - would fit well
    
20. 01:37:570 (7) - Downbeat covered again, try make 01:37:852 - have its own note
    
21. 01:39:551 (3) - Downbeat covered by the end of this
    
22. 01:48:041 (1) - Ending of this spinner feels a little out of place, try ending it at 01:49:173 - to better match the vocal here

Salad

1. 00:20:871 - As with the cup you'll want to start mapping from here
   
2. 00:25:400 (1) - I'd suggest moving this to about x:160 to make this dash clearer
   
3. 00:28:230 (8,9) - I'd nerf the distance here as it's currently a little ambiguous and this isn't worth dashing to, try around x:144
   
4. 00:29:645 (11) - There's little movement to this which is a little weird to play. Try adding some more movement here, try x:288
   
5. 00:30:494 (1) - Good to have a dash to this for the vocal and the distance is good but right now the slider is pointing in the opposite direction of the dash which is a little tricky for a Salad player to stop dashing and change direction to catch the slider droplets. I'd suggest to Ctrl+H this and move it back to x:304 so the slider shape flows with the catcher movement
   
6. 00:32:758 (5) - Distance is a little ambiguous here, to avoid too many dashes in a short space I'd lower distance here by moving this to x:144 and then 00:33:324 (6) - to x:304 to avoid making that distance become ambiguous.
   
7. 00:33:890 (7) - I think this higher pitch vocal would be suit a dash. If you followed the above point try putting this at about x:64 then Ctrl+H on 00:34:456 (8) - and move it to x:192
   
8. 00:35:305 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - There's a lot of back and forth movements here and I think it would be good to tone that down a little, save it for just 00:37:853 (1,2,3,4) - so it has more impact. Try to simplify the patterns here so there's less direction changes and aim to keep the distances clear
   
9. 00:38:985 (5) - Similar point here as with 00:30:494 (1) -, the dash is good but the slider shape makes this a little tricky. Tweak the shape so the slider goes off to the right instead of left
   
10. 00:43:513 (3) - Nice guitar sound here, would be good to have a dash to this
    
11. 00:46:909 (3) - This sound isn't worth dashing to, I'd nerf the distance here to a walk
    
12. 00:52:570 (4) - Strong vocal here, distance is close to a dash already but I'd move this to about x:320 to make it clearer
    
13. 00:54:834 (2,1,2) - I'd remove the dashes here to avoid having too many in a short space
    
14. 00:57:098 (4) - Strong sound here but there's no movement to this, I'd strongly suggest making a dash to this instead
    
15. 00:59:079 (3) - Try add some more movement to this, there's very little right now
    
16. 00:59:362 (4) - A dash would suit this sound well
    
17. 01:01:626 (2) - And this certainly deserves a dash
    
18. 01:02:758 (1) - I'd reduce distance here to a walk
    
19. 01:03:324 (2) - And increase it here to a dash for the vocal, though keep in mind the flow of the slider
    
20. 01:06:720 (2) - Move this a couple of grid spaces to the right, x:192 or so to avoid ambiguous distance
    
21. 01:08:702 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Gradual increase in distance here makes some ambiguous distances. I'd suggest to keep the distances here clearly walkable
    
22. 01:10:400 (7) - This covers the downbeat at 01:10:682 - which ideally you'd want to dash to. I'd replace this with a single note at 01:10:399 - and a 1/2 slider on 01:10:682 -
    
23. 01:11:249 (1) - This slider shape is a bit funky and makes a weird droplet trail that's uncomfortable to play. Try straighten this out a little
    
24. 01:12:947 (1,2,3,4) - This is a little tricky for a Salad, mostly this many dashes back to back is too much. I'd make these distances much smaller and easily walkable
    
25. 01:15:070 (1) - Might be best to delete this and just have a lone note on 01:15:211 -. I don't hear anything on 01:15:353 - and the start of this slider takes away some of the impact of 01:15:211 - which is the strong sound here
    
26. 01:19:173 (10) - Slider end covers a strong downbeat, probably best to shorten this to 01:19:456 - and add a new note at 01:19:739 - with a dash to it
    
27. 01:20:305 (2) - This sounds overmapped, I can't hear anything on 01:20:447 - so I'd suggest just making this a 1/2 slider
    
28. 01:22:004 (6) - Try make this flow a little smoother
    
29. 01:22:853 (1) - Weird slider shape is a little hard to follow, try make it a little simpler
    
30. 01:27:381 (2,3,4,5,1) - Too many dashes here, I'd remove them and just have a dash to 01:28:796 (1) - as that's the strongest sound
    
31. 01:29:928 (2) - Lack of movement to this is weird, try add some
    
32. 01:31:060 (3) - Little low to this as well
    
33. 01:33:324 (1) - This sound certainly deserves a dash
    
34. 01:33:607 (2) - Feels a little overmapped, I'd just make this a lone note on 01:33:607 -
    
35. 01:35:588 (7) - Dash for the vocal here would be good
    
36. 01:36:437 (1) - Weaker vocal here, would just have a walk to this
    
37. 01:42:381 (3) - I'd increase the distance a bit here so it's clearer it's a dash
    
38. 01:48:183 (1) - This spinner starts too soon after a note. I think if you want to keep a spinner here you should replace 01:47:758 (3) - with a lone note at 01:47:758 - and then use the same length spinner as suggested in the cup, going from 01:48:041 - to 01:49:173 -