• 
  Good!

1. 00:20:300 (1) - move to x:339 y:18 (stack correctly)
2. 01:02:700 (3) - I prefer reverse slider
   

1. 00:02:300 (4,1) - it is better not to stack. it is difficult to find rhythm
2. 00:52:100 (8) - move to x:158 y:307 (stack correctly)

1. 00:02:100 (3) - move to x:405 y:82 (stack correctly)
2. 00:14:900 (1,2,3) - it is better to uniform DS
3. 00:29:300 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - beautiful!
4. 00:46:701 (1) - I prefer Ctrl+G
5. 00:47:100 (2) - ^
6. 00:58:100 (3) - move to x:392 y:303 (stack correctly)

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~

[Easy]

• 
  Good!

[Normal]

1. 00:20:300 (1) - move to x:339 y:18 (stack correctly)fixed
2. 01:02:700 (3) - I prefer reverse slider nice fixed
   

[Hard]

1. 00:02:300 (4,1) - it is better not to stack. it is difficult to find rhythm i kinda like these 1/1 break stack :/
2. 00:52:100 (8) - move to x:158 y:307 (stack correctly) Fixed

[Insane]

1. 00:02:100 (3) - move to x:405 y:82 (stack correctly) Fixed
2. 00:14:900 (1,2,3) - it is better to uniform DS i didn't understand what u mean '-'
3. 00:29:300 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - beautiful! lol thx
4. 00:46:701 (1) - I prefer Ctrl+G I wanna keep the same pattern as before so no change
5. 00:47:100 (2) - ^ ^
6. 00:58:100 (3) - move to x:392 y:303 (stack correctly) fixed

Nice mapping!
I love your mapping style~☆
~Good Luck~

Vhy wrote:

yeyeyeye ~ yayayaya

Here you go, mod #2 :3
ofc no kd this post.

[Hard]
before this, please check AImod 1st wow lol fixed

00:07:100 (4,1) - not stacked perfectly fixed
00:18:700 (6,7,8) - hehehe this pattern may satisfy you i prefer the flow of my current pattern '-' http://puu.sh/5kWj8.jpg wow my osu! have transparent on slider tail

SPOILER

263,274,18700,2,0,L|237:203,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,68,19100,2,0,L|212:125,1,75,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,164,19500,2,0,L|156:184,1,75,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

00:30:700 (3,5) - not stacked perfercly fixed
00:37:500 (5) - this may break the consistency with the slider after, but i prefer to make this slider shape into curvy one. like this http://puu.sh/5kWFY.jpg fixed

SPOILER

160,148,37500,2,0,P|132:116|96:108,1,75

00:58:700 (4) - NC this? just like your insane k added
01:00:900 (7) - flows better? http://puu.sh/5kWXh.jpg fixed

SPOILER

356,308,60900,2,0,P|272:304|216:336,1,150

01:01:700 (9) - move this circle to x:120 y:360 if you follow above other way
01:21:100 (1,3) - not stacked perfectly fixed
01:22:700 (1) - this too, with slider tail at 01:21:900 (3) fixed
01:27:400 (2) - i think 1/2 slider is better than 1/4 with reverse yep better fixed

okokok and
*vhy poof ~

Asphyxia wrote:

Well, after listening this song I can't stand it, but I promised a mod so I'm going to give some quick suggestions on Insane difficulty, if that's fine :3 sorry about that lol

General thoughts

1. Inconsistency in Kiai Times: fixed
   
   See this please!

   
2. I think people will search TV size ending songs with the word ''ed'' more so consider adding it to the tags also. Words in tags have to be longuer than 3 letters ^^

Insane

1. First of all, I don't get these jumps. The song doesn't sound jumpy to me at all so is there a reason you decided to put jumps? It sounds jumpy for me, and even if it wasn't, i don't think that a song need to be jumpy to have somes jumps
2. Second, if you're going to use such harsh jumps then please consider using Ar9, I think Ar8 just kills it but that's up to you. i prefer keep AR 8
3. Raise the OD by one tick to make a better difficulty spread. fixed
4. 00:01:100 (1,2) - Blanket is quite off, slider's end should be few grids higher to make a better blanket fixed
5. 00:19:900 (10,11) - Very unfitting, I can't hear anything that would lead up to this rhythm here, try this? It sounds a lot better already to me ok fixed
   
   Example

   
6. 00:20:300 (1,2) - Blanket again fixed
7. 00:31:900 (7) - Kinda uncomfortable movement here, I would recommend CTRL + G to make it feel more natrual I guess other way
8. 00:32:900 (3) - Blanket again <.< fixed
9. 00:33:700 (5,6) - Very unfitting again, I suggest removing (6) to make it more comfortable to play. it fit the trumpet
10. 00:38:700 (1,2,3) - I think this doesn't follow the music quite right, try this rhythm? i think the current rythm is good but i'll consider if i have other reflexion
    
    Example

    
    Remember to fix the hitsounds if you apply this!
11. 00:58:700 (1) - Sliders head 1 grid to the right to make a better blanket with 00:58:300 (4) - and then 00:59:300 (2) - this sliders end 1 grid up fixed
12. 01:14:500 (5) - Blanket here again she is okay for me
13. Otherwise fine

I hope this helps you ^_^

1. try finding new clap sound for 00:40:500 - 00:40:700 -
2. offset +6
3. Read-in 900 for Easy, 1500 for other diffs

1. 00:28:300 (2,3) - boring, try 3/2 slider instead of 2

1. 00:35:700 - clap
2. 00:42:100 - ^
3. 01:05:100 (1) - need more time after spinner, maybe extend spinner to 01:05:100 -
4. 01:08:700 (2) - bad flow, put this near (308,220)
5. 01:10:900 - clap
6. 01:17:300 - ^

1. 00:06:900 - this whistle sound doesn't feel anything, clap
2. 00:23:500 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - put 4 sliders on each side
3. 00:40:900 (3,4) - ctrl+g
4. 00:43:900 (4) - ^

1. Good, just consider adding claps i mentioned on Normal,Hard

Star Stream wrote:

From my Q

[General]

1. try finding new clap sound for 00:40:500 - 00:40:700 - i don't think it really needed
2. offset +6 Fixed
3. Read-in 900 for Easy, 1500 for other diffs Fixed

[Easy]

1. 00:28:300 (2,3) - boring, try 3/2 slider instead of 2 kay fixed

[Normal]

1. 00:35:700 - clap there is no clap for me here
2. 00:42:100 - ^ Fixed
3. 01:05:100 (1) - need more time after spinner, maybe extend spinner to 01:05:100 - i would like keep my current one, if i get other reflexion i'll consider
4. 01:08:700 (2) - bad flow, put this near (308,220) fixed
5. 01:10:900 - clap same as before
6. 01:17:300 - ^ ^

[Hard]

1. 00:06:900 - this whistle sound doesn't feel anything, clap Fixed
2. 00:23:500 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - put 4 sliders on each side yep nice fixed
3. 00:40:900 (3,4) - ctrl+g ^
4. 00:43:900 (4) - ^ ^

[Insane]

1. Good, just consider adding claps i mentioned on Normal,Hard

Sweet song, Good luck~

Lust wrote:

by request~

kawaii song uguu ;~; :3

[Easy]

1. 00:15:106 (2) - instead of having this over here, why dont you try putting it in the middle? thats what I think might be interesting nice fixed
   readjust spacing afterwards
2. 00:18:706 (3) - increase the curve on this slider by a bit, move the second slider point to about 212:312 the current one is good imo

[Normal]

1. 00:05:906 (5,6) - put a very slight curve on with these two sliders, like this maybe fixed
   the map doesnt call for many straight lines so I think it'd be nice to have these a little curvy, readjust the spacing afterwards though
2. 00:26:706 (1) - ctrl + G this for better flow and then readjust the following pattern's spacing if do so i prefer my current flow
3. 00:35:106 (5,6) - again maybe a nice place to put a curve on these sliders i prefer straight shape here '-'
   
4. 00:45:906 (1,2,3,4) - the straight lines here make sense since you only used them for this combo, i think they should stay as they are
5. 00:54:506 (1,2) - same here
6. 01:05:906 (2,3) - here though you might want to curve, you aren't going to run in to trouble with 01:08:106 (1) if you only barely put the curve like so fixed
   if you feel like you want to keep them straight, by all means keep them. its just my suggestion on what might look good with the song
7. 01:10:306 (4,5) - see look for here you had the curvy sliders that I said to put in before for 00:35:106 (5,6)
8. 01:11:506 (1,2) - same for here, if you intend on keeping the straight sliders, keep it consistent, otherwise curve the ones I pointed out

[Hard]
I like this very difficulty, its very smoother and fun to play. I just have a few problems, they aren't very big ones so you can probably scoot by with them.

1. 00:41:506 (5) - best to stack in on top of 00:39:906 (2) 's repeater? why not, fixed
2. 00:57:306 (1,2) - maybe this would be nice as a blanket it's already a good blanket '-'
3. 01:25:706 (1) - NC it doesn't need a NC here imo

Good luck!

sjoy wrote:

M4M from your queue
[Easy]
00:55:506 (1) - add fin? fixed with 30% volum
00:58:306 (3) - check the spacing fixed
01:05:106 (1) - add fin? added
01:12:306 (2) - touch the HPbar down a bit
[Normal]
00:55:506 (1) - add fin same as easy
[Hard]
00:02:106 (3,4) - ctrl+g? i prefer how it's now
00:08:706 (4) - change it to 1/2 slider? fixed
00:15:306 add a note? nope
00:37:506 (4,5) - I don't think it's a good flow changed a bit
00:50:306 (3,4,5) - try this http://puu.sh/5qL5l.jpg no
[Insane]
00:05:506 (4) - move to 328,296? other way
00:08:706 (5) - ctrl+g my flow better imo
00:09:906 (2,3) - ctrl+g? fixed
00:31:306 (5,6,7) -http://puu.sh/5qLkg.jpg nice fixed
01:06:506 (5) - ctrl+g? fixed
01:20:906 (4) - move to 288,40? no
nice map .Here is my star .good luck for rank~

-Gamu- wrote:

Hi~

• [General]

1. BG file : It's recommended that you change to a JPEG file format. Then, it's possible to reduce the file size. Most maps are using the JPEG format.
2. TitleUnicode :デート TIME (TV Size) ⇒ デートTIME (TV Size)
   Please remove the space. Please look at this. I think because there is no space, it's unnecessary.
3. Tags : Please add "戸松遥 M・A・O 山崎エリイ Tomatsu Haruka MAO Yamazaki Eryi"
   They are voice actor, and the people who are singing this song, so you should add. Of course, both Romanised and Japanese.
4. Tags (2) : Please add "サムライフラメンコ"
   It is possible to add to the tags. I recommend that you add. Recently, most maps would have been added (Various anime).
5. Widescreen Support : Hard diff only is enabled, therefore you should be disabled.

• [Easy]

1. 00:23:106 (4) - Move to x:328 y:256.
   
   image

   
2. 00:23:506 (1) - Add clap (end). I think you have forgot to add
3. 00:25:106 (3) - ^
4. 00:25:906 (4) - ^
5. 00:28:306 (1) - ^ (start and middle). I thought unsatisfactory
6. 00:29:106 (2) - ^ (start). Then, add finish (end). ^
7. 00:34:706 (3) - Move to x:352 y:40. You make blanket firmly. Please check the blanket~ Then, 00:33:106 (1) - move to x:229 y:63. Don't forget.
8. 00:36:306 (1) - ^ x:307 y:129. The stack firmly to the start of the slider.
9. 00:37:906 (3) - ^ Exactly the same as above
10. 00:54:306 (T) - Add the green line of S:C2. I want a clap sound here. Please do not forget to add the green line another (S:C1).
11. 00:55:506 (1) - Add clap (end). Reason is the same as 00:23:506 (1).
12. 00:57:506 (T) - Same as 00:54:306.
13. 00:58:306 (3) - spacing error.
14. 00:58:706 (1) - ^

• [Normal]

1. 00:00:506 (1) - Change to clap (start and middle). I thought clap is better than whistle.
2. 00:20:306 (1) - Add clap (end). It will fit a song
3. 00:21:906 (2) - ^
4. 00:27:106 (T) - Same as 00:54:306 (Easy diff).
5. 00:28:306 (2) - Add new combo. It has been added in Easy diff, or remove the new combo in Easy diff. not needed here imo
6. 00:29:106 (3) - Add clap (start). Reason is the same as 00:20:306 (1).
7. 00:02:706 (1) - Remove new combo. Maintain the uniformity of the new combo.
8. 00:47:506 (3) - Add clap (end).
9. 00:49:106 (1) - ^
10. 00:49:706 (T) - Same as 00:54:306 (Easy diff).
11. 00:50:706 (2) - Add clap (end).
12. 00:51:706 (3) - ^ (start, middle and end). I would recommend that you add three places.
13. 00:54:106 (4,1,2) - hmm... It would be hard to grasp the rhythm for a beginner players. Therefore, I will issue a suggestion of rhythm here. I think it's very good o3o i like the current one, and it's not that hard imo >.<
    
    image

    
14. 00:57:306 (4,1,2,3) - ^
15. 01:02:706 (3) - Add clap (start). clap sound is need.
16. 01:05:106 (1) - Ctrl+G. The farther from the center of the spinner.
17. 01:08:706 (2) - Add clap (start and end).
18. 01:24:306 (1) - move to y:192 (end point). It is deviated

• [Hard]

1. 00:00:506 (1) - Change to clap (start and end). I thought clap is better than whistle.
2. 00:15:506 (4) - Add new combo. The same as the new combo of 00:01:106~00:13:906. I thought the rhythm is similar, so new combo should also be the same.
3. 00:18:706 (6) - ^
4. 00:21:906 (4) - ^
5. 00:27:106 (T) - Same as 00:54:306 (Easy diff).
6. 00:26:706 (1) - Add clap (end).
7. 00:35:706 (8) - Add new combo. Because, rhythm has changed.
8. 00:37:106 (3,4) - I think the flow is not so good, so Ctrl+G.
9. 00:41:506 (5) - Add clap. I think it's need.
10. 00:51:906 (7) - ^
11. 00:54:306 (T) - Same as 00:54:306 (Easy diff).
12. 00:57:506 (T) - ^
13. 00:59:906 (3) - Add clap (start and end).
14. 01:01:906 (1) - ^ (end).
15. 01:26:906 (1,2) - Suggestion of rhythm. I prefer this.
    
    image

    
    

• [Insane]

1. 00:00:506 (1) - Same as Hard diff.
2. 00:06:906 (4) - Add clap. I think it's very good.
3. 00:13:106 (2) - ^ (end).
4. 00:09:106 (6,1) - please replace the new combo.
5. 00:12:306 (6,1) - ^
6. 00:15:506 (7) - Add new combo. Reason is the same as the Hard diff
7. 00:18:706 (7) - ^
8. 00:21:906 (5) - ^
9. 00:27:106 (T) - Same as 00:54:306 (Easy diff).
10. 00:35:706 (5) - Add clap. nice sound
11. 00:41:506 (1,2) - Ctrl+G. I think it's not very good..orz
12. 00:49:106 (1) - Add whislte (end).
13. 00:49:706 (2) - ^
14. 00:50:306 (3) - Add clap.
15. 00:50:506 (4) - Add whistle.
16. 00:51:306 (2) - ^ (end).
17. Suggestion of whistle sound. I thought hitsound was unsatisfactory. But, if you do not want to add, then it would be all right prefer not add them '-'
    
    suggestion

    -00:52:906 (3) - Add whistle
    -00:53:306 (4) - ^
    -00:53:906 (6) - ^
    -00:54:506 (1) - ^
    -00:54:906 (3) - ^
    -00:55:506 (1) - ^ (start).
    -00:56:106 (3) - ^ (end).
    -00:56:506 (4) - ^
    -00:57:106 (6) - ^
    -00:57:706 (2) - ^ (start).
    -00:58:106 (3) - ^
    -00:58:706 (1) - ^ (start).
18. 01:10:906 (6) - Add clap. nice :3
19. 01:17:306 (3) - Add new combo?

There may be a point where missed x_x My god i missed so many clap ..

Well, good luck~ :3

1. 00:10:706 (1) - Ce slider n'est pas symétrique avec le début et la fin. C'est très minime, mais il y a toujours place à l'amélioration :3
2. 00:13:906 (1) - et 00:15:506 (3) - Pareil pour ces sliders c:
3. 00:23:506 (1,2,3,4) - C'est pas mal, mais je n'aime pas beaucoup l'effet que ça fait puisque les sliders (2,3) ont un parfait flow, mais avec (1,2) et (3,4), c'est désastreux. Qu'en penses-tu de faire autre chose ici?
4. 00:26:706 (1,1,2) - Je sais pas.. on vois clairement que le slider (2) fait un overlap avec le (1) précédent, tu pourrais essayer de faire autre chose tout en gardant le rythme, de faire en sorte qu'on ne le vois pas autant? o.o
5. 00:33:506 (2) - Le blanket de ce slider avec le début du prochain slider n'est pas très bon. Avec ce screenshot, on vois que le blanket n'est pas parfait et puis, il y a plus d'espace avec le blanket (1) et le début de (2) que (2) avec le début de (1).
6. 01:14:706 (1) - Très mauvais spacing! Il y a un jump ici, tu devrais l'arranger puisque ce n'est pas consistent.

1. 00:26:706 (1) - N'est pas parfaitement symétrique. *runs
2. 00:28:306 (2) - Sur toutes les autres difficultés, il y a un nouveau combo, pourquoi ne pas faire pareil pour suivre la consistance des autres?
3. 00:29:106 (3) - Sur l'Easy, j'avais dit un truc similaire, tu crois pouvoir faire pareil ici?
4. 00:49:106 (1) - Ce slider n'est pas symétrique.

1. 00:38:306 - Il manquerait pas un clap ici, par hasard? c:
2. 01:03:306 (4) - Pourrais-tu déplacer ce cercle un peu plus vers la gauche pour le centrer avec l'espace des deux autres sliders précédant?

Gabe wrote:

Easy

1. 00:10:706 (1) - Ce slider n'est pas symétrique avec le début et la fin. C'est très minime, mais il y a toujours place à l'amélioration :3
2. 00:13:906 (1) - et 00:15:506 (3) - Pareil pour ces sliders c:
3. 00:23:506 (1,2,3,4) - C'est pas mal, mais je n'aime pas beaucoup l'effet que ça fait puisque les sliders (2,3) ont un parfait flow, mais avec (1,2) et (3,4), c'est désastreux. Qu'en penses-tu de faire autre chose ici?
4. 00:26:706 (1,1,2) - Je sais pas.. on vois clairement que le slider (2) fait un overlap avec le (1) précédent, tu pourrais essayer de faire autre chose tout en gardant le rythme, de faire en sorte qu'on ne le vois pas autant? o.o
5. 00:33:506 (2) - Le blanket de ce slider avec le début du prochain slider n'est pas très bon. Avec ce screenshot, on vois que le blanket n'est pas parfait et puis, il y a plus d'espace avec le blanket (1) et le début de (2) que (2) avec le début de (1).
6. 01:14:706 (1) - Très mauvais spacing! Il y a un jump ici, tu devrais l'arranger puisque ce n'est pas consistent.

tout fixé ici :3

Normal

1. 00:26:706 (1) - N'est pas parfaitement symétrique. *runs Nazi gabe ! mais fixed
2. 00:28:306 (2) - Sur toutes les autres difficultés, il y a un nouveau combo, pourquoi ne pas faire pareil pour suivre la consistance des autres? bah le fait que le combo d'avant soit si court j'avais peur que ça pose probleme mais apparement nan
3. 00:29:106 (3) - Sur l'Easy, j'avais dit un truc similaire, tu crois pouvoir faire pareil ici? honnetement sur celui la je trouve que ça passe >.<
4. 00:49:106 (1) - Ce slider n'est pas symétrique. il l'est pour moi xD

Cool o3o! o3ob

Hard

1. 00:38:306 - Il manquerait pas un clap ici, par hasard? c: inversé le clap et le whistle lawl
2. 01:03:306 (4) - Pourrais-tu déplacer ce cercle un peu plus vers la gauche pour le centrer avec l'espace des deux autres sliders précédant? okay desu

Waouh, j'ai quasiment rien à dire o3o

J'ai rien pour Insane ;~;, gg

-Umi- wrote:

what u mean ? i deleted and redownloaded the map, and it doesn't need any update for me.

Satellite wrote:

Congratz~