Zektbach - L'avide · forum

Mao

Elite Mapper II

Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Mao 2013-10-19T17:58:16+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Mittwoch, 26. März 2014 at 15:53:41

Artist: Zektbach
Title: L'avide
Source: REFLEC BEAT colette
Tags: Desperate-kun Happy623 The Epic of Zektbach -Masinowa- -Spring- yoko
BPM: 170
Filesize: 7323kb
Play Time: 04:26
Difficulties Available:

623's Standard (4,06 stars, 271 notes)
Another (4,8 stars, 642 notes)
Desperate's Beginner (1,52 stars, 141 notes)
Hyper (4,92 stars, 555 notes)

Download: Zektbach - L'avide
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#2 Ranked \:DD/

Mapset Beginner by Desperate-kun Normal by happy623 Hyper by me Another by me

Changes

Applied ChivaCookie's Mod (ingame) Applied Lionheart's Mod Applied -Bakari-'s Mod Applied wcx19911123's Mod Added Desperate's Easy 02/12/14 Updated with 623's Standard and moved to Pending 02/12/14 Applied IamKwaN's Mod 02/13/14 Applied Kuron-kun's Mod 02/19/14 Applied Desperate-kun's Mod 02/23/14 Applied HabiHolic's Mod 02/23/14 Applied thou bad's Mod 02/23/14 Applied Cherry Blossom's Mod 02/25/14 Applied W h i t e's Mod 03/08/14 Applied Akabato's Mod 03/09/14 Applied Gomo Pslvarh's Mod 03/13/14 Bubbled by BeatofIke 03/14/14 Popped by Zero__Wind 03/14/14 Timing check + mod by Zero__Wind 03/14/14 Rebubbled by Zero__Wind 03/20/14 Ranked by p3n 03/26/14 Unrank and Rerank due to wrong spelled source by Zero__Wind

Last edited by Mao 2014-03-26T15:01:19+00:00, edited 66 times in total.

[ Lionheart ]

87 posts

Joined July 2012

[ Lionheart ] 2013-10-21T11:58:56+00:00

Ohai, ich schreib einfach mal auf deutsch

Insane Difficulty

Gefällt mir an sich gut, könntest den ersten Teil bis zur ersten Pause eventuell noch ein wenig abwechlungsreicher gestalten, zB so wie der Schlusstiel, den fand ich btw auch am besten

Ansonsten gibts wie gesagt nur Kleinigkeiten:

01:03:758 (3) - würde ich in ne schöne gerade Linie bringen weil du die restlichen ministreams auch entweder schön nach außen geschwungen oder gerade gemacht hast
02:07:464 (3) - Den Slider find ich nicht so schön, denk darüber nach, ihn und die, die genauso aussehen, zu ändern... und evtl auch ein paar der 'normalen' slider mit zB mal mit beziers oder so wie der zB 02:10:817 (8) oder 04:13:464 (2)
02:18:229 (4,5,6) - würde ich so weiterlaufen lassen wie die circles davor + den Abstand von x1 würde ich auch einhalten
02:54:053 (1) - Bei der Section die hier beginnt (und das ist meine ganz persönliche Meinung) fühlt sich das spacing irgendwie seltsam an o.o ich würde es entweder verkleinern oder meinetwegen auch noch vergrößern aber wenn das so circle perfekt an circle ist ist das irgendwie komisch^^
03:01:111 (2) - STRG+G maybe?

03:41:788 (5) - Den zu einem repeatslider als ersatz für den danach
03:49:288 (1) - NC weg

Beginner Difficulty

Allgemein solltest du viel weniger Repeatslider haben, weil das Anfänger eigentlich am meisten verwirrt. Ansonsten musst du checken, dass die Circles sozusagen "der Reihe nach" angeordnet sind, da man als Anfänger dazu neigt, immer den circle anzuklicken, der dem Cursor momentan am nächsten ist, zB wenn du dir diese Combo ansiehst 02:24:758 (2,3,4,5) die würde ich eher von links nach rechts verlaufen lassen, dann ist es einfach eindeutiger

Gleiches mit solchen 02:30:406 (2,3,4,5) sie sollten noch einfach auseinanderzuhalten sein, versuch das eindeutiger zu gestalten.
03:44:523 (8) - Vielleicht könntest du auch versuchen, die Combos ein bisschen kleiner zu halten, 8 ist in ner Easy meiner Meinung nach das Maximum, aber ist deine Entscheidung
04:23:347 (5,6,7,8) - das kannst du vllt sogar so lassen als kleine Herausforderung, aber platzier es mittig und mit leicht größeren Abständen

Viel Glück

Last edited by [ Lionheart ] 2013-10-21T12:36:17+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Mao

Elite Mapper II

2,963 posts

Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Mao 2013-10-21T12:10:34+00:00

[ Lionheart ] wrote:
Gefällt mir an sich gut, könntest den ersten Teil bis zur ersten Pause eventuell noch ein wenig abwechlungsreicher gestalten, zB so wie der Schlusstiel, den fand ich btw auch am besten

Ansonsten gibts wie gesagt nur Kleinigkeiten:

01:03:758 (3) - würde ich in ne schöne gerade Linie bringen weil du die restlichen ministreams auch entweder schön nach außen geschwungen oder gerade gemacht hast Geändert ^^
02:07:464 (3) - Den Slider find ich nicht so schön, denk darüber nach, ihn und die, die genauso aussehen, zu ändern... und evtl auch ein paar der 'normalen' slider mit zB mal mit beziers oder so wie der zB 02:10:817 (8) oder 04:13:464 (2) Subjektiv, ich mag die Slider.
02:18:229 (4,5,6) - würde ich so weiterlaufen lassen wie die circles davor + den Abstand von x1 würde ich auch einhalten fixed
02:54:053 (1) - Bei der Section die hier beginnt (und das ist meine ganz persönliche Meinung) fühlt sich das spacing irgendwie seltsam an o.o ich würde es entweder verkleinern oder meinetwegen auch noch vergrößern aber wenn das so circle perfekt an circle ist ist das irgendwie komisch^^ Wie du schon gesagt hast, auch subjektiv ^^ Ist halt ne Draining Section und meiner Meinung nach passt das Spacing :3
03:01:111 (2) - STRG+G maybe? done
03:41:788 (5) - Den zu einem repeatslider als ersatz für den danach Nö
03:49:288 (1) - NC weg Joa, geändert ^^
Viel Glück

Danke für den Mod :3

Evil_Twilight

587 posts

Joined July 2010

Evil_Twilight 2013-10-21T16:09:10+00:00

rank it please !!

riffy

osu! Alumni

8,060 posts

Joined December 2010

riffy 2013-10-22T16:10:31+00:00

Yo.

[General]

You do realize that Easy/Insane mapset can nt be ranked. You need at least two more diffs. (Hyper/Normal). Check osu!wiki if you want more details!
Try to get a better BG. 1024x768 or 1366x768 are the recommended sizes. However, you can keep yours if you have a good reason to keep it!
Disable the widescreen support. It's for widescreen STORYBOARDS only. You have no any Sb, therefore keeping it enabled makes no sense.

[Beginner]

AR seems to be way too fast. I'd go with AR3 because it's the most common AR for the easiest diffs, what's more, it gits with your patterns much better.
50-60% of your patterns are overlapped. I'd set x0.8 SV and x1.0 Distance Spacing. You know, it's a little bit weird to see a lot of your hitobjects overlapped. THe easiest diff is meant to be understandable and simple. So, try to avoid overlaps!
Note: however, you can keep them if you're 200% sure that IT IS REALLY NEEDED to keep this SV/DS.
01:42:405 (2,3,4,5) - some of the patterns look messy because of low DS/SV. For example, this one. It's a little bit messy and may confuse beginners. I generally dislike overlaps in easiest diff, and I strongly recommend mappers to avoid overlaps if it's possible!
Note: 02:11:700 (1,2) - yeah, same as above. Overlaps are confusing for beginners, so we should try our best to avoid overlaps when it's possible!
03:10:994 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - such combos are actually pretty weird. This one is too long, it's out of your combo pattern and it's will make beginners a bit nervous. Check it, I thibk you've missed a NC somewhere
03:58:641 (4) - I recommend you to avoid second repeat on such sliders. Players don't expect it here, so it may seem weird and confusing for them!
04:23:347 (5,6,7,8) - you really should work on making your patterns more playable! Beginners will cry because they're unable to understand such patterns! Be gentle with them!

There're a lot of things to improve, but it's not bad. Don't give up!

[Another]

Try OD8, this diff is supposed to be very hard! So, make it hard!
01:27:935 (1) - nazi - it seems like the community is against such sliders. Well, it's kinda hard to read them sometimes. So, I'm just asking you tomake sure that it's playable!

Everything else seems really good to me. Didn't notice notice any problems during the testplay!

Well, you need more diffs. But that's going to be a cool mapset, right? :3

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Best of luck!

[ Lionheart ]

87 posts

Joined July 2012

[ Lionheart ] 2013-10-26T10:24:17+00:00

-Bakari- wrote:
Well, you need more diffs.

Maybe make Desperate-Kuns a Normal and add an easier [Easy]?

Mao

Elite Mapper II

2,963 posts

Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Mao 2013-10-26T11:10:12+00:00

[ Lionheart ] wrote:
-Bakari- wrote:
Well, you need more diffs.
Maybe make Desperate-Kuns a Normal and add an easier [Easy]?

Desperate is remapping his [Easy] ^^

RikiH_

1,149 posts

Joined February 2011

RikiH_ 2013-10-26T22:17:41+00:00

Please rank :<

Hard

696 posts

Joined February 2013

Hard 2013-12-07T18:42:17+00:00

when did i mod this ingame... well i think i did

Mao

Elite Mapper II

2,963 posts

Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Mao 2014-01-16T19:53:49+00:00

Another, Hyper and Beginner are finished now! Going to wait for Happy623's Normal diff now :3

Myxo

osu! Alumni

3,103 posts

Joined December 2012

Myxo 2014-01-16T21:30:57+00:00

Cool that you managed to finish your Hyper diff :b The mapset is quite old, but who cares, let's wait for Normal and rank *-*

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 2014-01-30T07:30:19+00:00

Hi, m4m request

I skip 623's Standard coz it is not finished.

General

Background size is not standard. I have resized it to 1024*768 for you. Feel free to use it.
SPOILER
Unicode title, tags, letterbox in breaks and source are not consistent throughout all difficulties. Please fix them.

Another

My general opinion on this Another is try not to rely on the DS too much. You can create much more patterns if u disregard of the DS.
00:54:935 (3,3,4,5) - Try stacking these tgt for aesthetic.
01:14:170 (1) - Place this at (96,256) seems prettier imo.
01:18:758 (4,5) - Perfect blanket please.
01:47:347 (6,4,5,6) - Stack also. I better skip those mods which're about stacks, because it might not be ur style to stack everything.
02:57:229 (1,2) - Intentional increase in DS?
04:24:494 (1) - Please NC this spinner.
SPOILER

Hyper

OD+2 HP+2 would match the AR better imo.
In fact, it would be more interesting if you insert spinner before every break-time.
01:03:229 (4,6) - If you are following the lyrics, then this slider doesn't fit. I prefer this:
SPOILER
01:06:494 (4) - Here, the string is so soft that I would not place such a reversed slider. Instead, I will do this which emphasizes on the drum sound at 01:06:758; as a player, I think it would be more comfortable:
SPOILER
01:15:053 (3,4) - Suggestion for higher correspondence to music:
SPOILER
01:23:347 (5,1) - Blanket. Also, I think a circle can capture the drum better at 01:23:700 like this:
SPOILER
01:25:464 (2,3) - I wonder if you're following the lyrics or not coz I saw the next combo is following the lyrics. Try this:
SPOILER
01:32:700 (7,8) - Blanket.
01:36:053 (5,1) - These two are not parallel here.
SPOILER
01:36:582 (1,2,3) - CTRL+G so as to follow the lyrics. (Of course u need to re-arrange the positions of circles and sliders.)
02:00:405 - Here doesn't sound nice imo. Try this:
SPOILER
02:12:053 - Why not capturing the sound here?
02:24:935 (2,3) - CTRL+G
02:30:229 (1,2,3) - ^
03:18:582 (1) - Place it at x=256?
03:52:640 (3,4,5) - CTRL+G

Beginner

Clapping in kiai time seems weird to me. Try using the same hitsound as Hyper or Another.
01:42:405 (2) - Try doing a blanket with 01:40:641 (1)?
03:15:229 (1) - (20,308) for a better flow.
03:21:582 (3,4) - Overlapping. Try this:
SPOILER

That's all. Good luck for ranking!

Myxo

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Joined December 2012

Myxo 2014-01-30T16:04:08+00:00

IamKwaN wrote:
Beginner
Clapping in kiai time seems weird to me. Try using the same hitsound as Hyper or Another. The hitsounds are already being changed or will be changed, so the claps sound more like whistles.
01:42:405 (2) - Try doing a blanket with 01:40:641 (1)? No, it's not necessary there.
03:15:229 (1) - (20,308) for a better flow. It flows much better how it currently is.
03:21:582 (3,4) - Overlapping. Try this:
SPOILER
Yes, done. Not because of the overlapping but because of flow though ;w;
That's all. Good luck for ranking!

Thanks for mod :3

EDIT:

Quallenbrötchen

osu file format v12

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TitleUnicode:L'avide ル・アビデ
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Source:
Tags:
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Mao

Elite Mapper II

2,963 posts

Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Mao 2014-02-12T12:46:41+00:00

IamKwaN wrote:
Hi, m4m request
I skip 623's Standard coz it is not finished.

General
Background size is not standard. I have resized it to 1024*768 for you. Feel free to use it. Thank you very much! :3
SPOILER
Unicode title, tags, letterbox in breaks and source are not consistent throughout all difficulties. Please fix them. Mapset wasm't final so this hasn't been changed yet. But now it is ready for mods sooo fixed ^-^

Another
My general opinion on this Another is try not to rely on the DS too much. You can create much more patterns if u disregard of the DS. Yeah, I know. Well, my mapping style has changed over these month so I'm not mapping like this anymore.
00:54:935 (3,3,4,5) - Try stacking these tgt for aesthetic. Done
01:14:170 (1) - Place this at (96,256) seems prettier imo. Yeah
01:18:758 (4,5) - Perfect blanket please. Fixed
01:47:347 (6,4,5,6) - Stack also. I better skip those mods which're about stacks, because it might not be ur style to stack everything. Stacked it
02:57:229 (1,2) - Intentional increase in DS? Hm, I think it's fine how it is o:
04:24:494 (1) - Please NC this spinner. Done
SPOILER

Hyper
OD+2 HP+2 would match the AR better imo. Increased both by 1. +2 would be too high imo
In fact, it would be more interesting if you insert spinner before every break-time. Didn't do this in the other diffs so no change here.
01:03:229 (4,6) - If you are following the lyrics, then this slider doesn't fit. I prefer this: Done
SPOILER
01:06:494 (4) - Here, the string is so soft that I would not place such a reversed slider. Instead, I will do this which emphasizes on the drum sound at 01:06:758; as a player, I think it would be more comfortable: Done
SPOILER
01:15:053 (3,4) - Suggestion for higher correspondence to music: Done
SPOILER
01:23:347 (5,1) - Blanket. Also, I think a circle can capture the drum better at 01:23:700 like this: Done
SPOILER
01:25:464 (2,3) - I wonder if you're following the lyrics or not coz I saw the next combo is following the lyrics. Try this: Done
SPOILER
01:32:700 (7,8) - Blanket. Fixed
01:36:053 (5,1) - These two are not parallel here. Rearranged placement here.
SPOILER
01:36:582 (1,2,3) - CTRL+G so as to follow the lyrics. (Of course u need to re-arrange the positions of circles and sliders.) Yeah
02:00:405 - Here doesn't sound nice imo. Try this: Changed
SPOILER
02:12:053 - Why not capturing the sound here? I don't know O: Added a note here
02:24:935 (2,3) - CTRL+G Yeah
02:30:229 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
03:18:582 (1) - Place it at x=256? Yep
03:52:640 (3,4,5) - CTRL+G Done

Thank you for mod

Kuron-kun

Kuron-kun 2014-02-12T16:41:48+00:00

Hi, request via forum PM

General

• Check Widescreen support?

Beginner

04:24:493 (1) - Move this spinner to the red tick/white tick, it's a beginner, so you should not put this at the blue tick

Good ♥

Standard

Perfect ♥

Hyper

02:07:817 (2) - Maybe ctrl + g?

Good ♥

Another

00:58:817 (2) - Move to x348 y118 because nazi

00:59:523 (4) - Move to x355 y287 ^

01:00:405 (3,4,5) - Move to x187 y294

01:00:935 (6) - also to x355 y288

01:01:111 (1) - ^

01:17:170 (2) - Maybe ctrl + h and move to x250 y62

01:36:935 (4) - Move to x195 y119 it's a bit nazi

02:32:876 (1) - Move to x212 y239

03:16:288 (1) - Move to x413 y270

04:05:876 (4) - Move one pixel down </3

04:14:876 (2) - Whistle

Good ♥

Here it is, a bit nazi mod, I hope you like it, and good luck ranking

Myxo

osu! Alumni

3,103 posts

Joined December 2012

Myxo 2014-02-12T19:22:32+00:00

Fixed, thanks ^^

Wasserwerfer

osu file format v12

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Mode: 0
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TitleUnicode:ル・アビデ
Artist:Zektbach
ArtistUnicode:Zektbach
Creator:Mao
Version:Desperate's Beginner
Source:REFLEC BEAT
Tags:Desperate-kun Happy623
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Mao

Elite Mapper II

2,963 posts

Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Mao 2014-02-13T18:40:22+00:00

Kuron-Kun wrote:
Hi, request via forum PM

General

• Check Widescreen support?

Beginner

04:24:493 (1) - Move this spinner to the red tick/white tick, it's a beginner, so you should not put this at the blue tick

Good ♥

Standard

Perfect ♥

Hyper

02:07:817 (2) - Maybe ctrl + g?

Good ♥

Another

00:58:817 (2) - Move to x348 y118 because nazi

00:59:523 (4) - Move to x355 y287 ^

01:00:405 (3,4,5) - Move to x187 y294

01:00:935 (6) - also to x355 y288

01:01:111 (1) - ^

01:17:170 (2) - Maybe ctrl + h and move to x250 y62

01:36:935 (4) - Move to x195 y119 it's a bit nazi

02:32:876 (1) - Move to x212 y239

03:16:288 (1) - Move to x413 y270

04:05:876 (4) - Move one pixel down </3

04:14:876 (2) - Whistle

Good ♥

Here it is, a bit nazi mod, I hope you like it, and good luck ranking

Fixed all, thank you for mod :3

Myxo

osu! Alumni

3,103 posts

Joined December 2012

Myxo 2014-02-14T18:11:08+00:00

Mod for my little twin and his gd-slaves ;w;

[General]

No problems!

[623's Standard]

00:53:700 (3) - 0.04x Spacing difference. Consider to fix
01:19:464 (3) - Make slider a little bit more curved to create better blanket.
01:48:405 (4) - x:409 y:339 for better blanket.
02:08:876 (1,2,3) - Create better-looking triangle (the slider-heads)?
02:12:582 (2) - 0.04x Spacing difference.
02:22:111 (2,1) - Blanket?
02:25:464 (6) - 0.04x sd
02:41:170 (3) - 0.04x sd
03:21:582 (1) - x:274 y:232 for better blanket.
03:50:523 (1) - You might want to change this slider for better blanket.
03:53:346 (1) - Make slider less curvey to create better curve between 03:52:993 (4,1)?
04:08:876 (1) - 0.04x sd
04:20:699 (2) - 0.04x sd
04:21:582 (1) - Fix blanket :C
Awesome diff, as always ^^

[Hyper]

00:50:170 (2) - Strg+g?
00:50:170 (2,3) - Mach das Triangle besser.
00:51:935 (3) - Strg+g?
00:52:464 (5) - NC
00:53:876 (1) - Reverse weg und 00:54:405 mappen?
00:58:111 (5) - NC
01:01:111 (6) - NC
01:01:641 (1) - NC weg
01:06:582 - Lösche die nicht notwendigen Inherited-Sections :b
01:09:758 (5) - NC
01:12:582 (4) - NC
01:15:053 (3) - NC
01:18:229 (5) - NC
01:19:288 + 01:19:464 - Unbedingt die Whistles weg. Klingt garnicht gut. Wenn es dir dann zu wenig sind, könnte man wenn dann bei 01:18:935 - eine Whistle adden. Aber das würde dann mit anderen Hitsound-Patterns in Stellen davor nicht übereinstimmen... Überlegs dir, aber lösch bitte die 2 Whistles hier raus ;w;
01:21:758 (3) - Die Whistle gehört nach 01:21:935. Du willst zwar den Pattern damit betonen, aber das tust du dann immer noch, nur halt umgekehrt.
01:21:758 (3,4) - Der große Jump zur 3 flowt sich nicht so gut in einer Hard Diff. Ich empfehle dir folgendes: Mach bei 3 und 4 Strg+g. Dann bewege 01:22:288 (1) irgendwo in die Gegend x:211 y:159, um ein Pseudo-Blanket mit (2) zu erzeugen. Würde nicht zu schlecht aussehen, aber sich weitaus besser flowen.
01:26:170 (4) - Reverse weg und 01:26:700 mappen?
01:31:288 (2) - Strg+g?
01:32:347 (5) - NC
01:47:876 (5) - NC
02:01:641 (4) - NC
02:01:994 (1) - NC weg
02:11:700 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Ich wäre hier für einen anderen Whistle-Pattern, wie du es auch schon danach versucht hast, da hier die Begleitung anders ist als im Rest des Liedes. Da du die Whistles generell offbeat platzierst, wäre es gut, das auch hier zu tun. Das würde bedeuten: Entferne zuerst die Whistles bei 02:12:758 (5) - 02:13:464 (3). Dann füge Whistles hinzu bei 02:12:053 (2) - 02:12:582 (4) - 02:13:111 - 02:13:641 (4). Wenn du das alles nicht machen willst, dann adde wenigstens die vergessene Whistle bei 02:12:053 (2).
02:14:523 (1,2,3,4,5) - Hier hast du schon versucht, einen Pattern zu machen, aber besser wäre es wenn du dich entscheiden könntest xD Also entweder bei jedem Slider am Anfang oder am Ende eine Whistle... Ich fände am Ende besser.
02:16:111 (4) - NC
02:17:347 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Hier die nächste Stelle. Besser wäre ein Whistle-Pattern wie bei 02:11:700 von mir empfohlen. Dafür müsstest du folgendes ändern: Entferne zuerst die Whistles bei 02:18:582 - 02:19:111 - 02:19:464 (3). Dann adde eine Whistle bei 02:19:288 (2).
02:20:170 (1,2) - Blanket besser machen?
02:20:523 - Whistle weg.
02:21:053 - Whistle weg.
02:21:758 (1) - Strg+g?
02:37:288 (1) - Strg+g?
02:41:523 (5) - NC
02:56:523 (3) - Whistle weg.
03:02:700 (2,3) - Whistles weg. Ist zwar ne nette Idee, klingt aber überfüllt. Sind schon genug Whistles in der Diff
03:04:994 (2) - Whistle weg.
03:06:758 (1) - Whistle weg. Auch wenn ich es hier sehr gut verstehen kann... Naja, du könntest sie auch lassen, aber dann müsste bei 03:08:170 - auch eine hin.
03:09:935 (5) - NC
03:15:582 - Whistle weg.
03:17:347 (1) - Whistle.
03:42:052 (1) - NC weg
03:44:523 (4) - Für Konsistenz mit anderen Stellen wie dieser: NC und dafür bei 03:44:876 (1) keiner.
03:50:170 (5) - Hier genauso. NC und dafür keiner bei 03:50:523 (1)
03:52:640 (3) - Strg+g?
03:53:346 (5) - NC
03:53:523 (1) - NC weg
04:16:287 (5) - NC
Coole diff :3 Man merkt, dass du ab der Draining-Section neu gemappt hast, weil die Map ab da richtig geil wird *-*

[Another]

00:54:405 (1,2,3,4) - Timeline nich so gut... Also vom Circle/Slider-Placement her. Ich empfehle dir die Timeline:
Beispiel
Wenn du das übernehmen willst, aber nichts remappen, dann musst du nur: (1) und (2) von der Timeline tauschen. Dann mach Strg+g bei dem Slider hier: 00:54:405. Dann Strg+g den Slider 00:54:935 (7). Und dann noch Strg+g 00:55:288 (8).
01:07:994 (9) - NC
01:08:523 (1) - NC weg
01:09:229 (1) - NC weg
01:09:935 (2) - NC
01:11:347 (4) - NC
01:11:170 + 01:11:523 - sollten unbedingt gemappt werden... Du hast hier sonst eine Mischung aus Lyrics und Piano gemappt, und hier trifft beiden aufeinander. 01:11:347 - ist dagegen wenig betont. Mappe es entweder so:
Beispiel
Oder sogar so...
Beispiel
01:14:700 - Den Tick würde ich auch mappen, ist aber nur persönliche Präferenz..
01:27:582 (5) - Whistle hier.
01:37:817 (1,2) - Die beiden Slider sehen irgendwie ein wenig drollig aus.. Wäre vielleicht besser wenn du entweder andere Slider nimmst oder den zweiten Slider irgendwie dem ersten anpasst, so dass sie aussehen, als gehören sie zusammen. So, wie es ist, wirkt es eher schlecht.
02:09:053 (1,2,3) - Das hört sich von der Timeline her komisch an... Sowas wäre besser:
Beispiel
Dann könntest du auch Whistles platzieren...
02:11:700 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Platzier die Whistles hier so wie in der Hyper! Sorry, das ist viel, aber ich hab jetzt auch keine Lust, jede einzelne Whistle hier aufzuschreiben :b
02:14:347 (4) - Einfach durch einen Circle ersetzten?
03:02:523 (1) - Sowas wäre besser von der Form her:
Beispiel
03:07:111 (5) - NC
03:08:523 (2) + 03:09:582 - Whistles weg. In der Another kann ich verstehen, warum du in der Draining Section viele Whistles platzierst, aber das hier ist zu viel.
03:25:288 (2) - Ich denke der Stack passt hier nicht. Mach lieber ein Triangle indem du den Circle ganz normal snappst
Nyaaa :3 Macht auf jeden Fall immernoch sehr viel Spaß die Diff ^^

Good luck for rank *-*

happy623

1,436 posts

Joined April 2010

happy623 2014-02-15T07:16:56+00:00

Desperate-kun wrote:
Mod for my little twin and his gd-slaves ;w;

[General]
No problems!
[623's Standard]
00:53:700 (3) - 0.04x Spacing difference. Consider to fix
01:19:464 (3) - Make slider a little bit more curved to create better blanket. waa I like this
01:48:405 (4) - x:409 y:339 for better blanket. moved, not exactly the same coordinate
02:08:876 (1,2,3) - Create better-looking triangle (the slider-heads)? k!
02:12:582 (2) - 0.04x Spacing difference.
02:22:111 (2,1) - Blanket? yea!
02:25:464 (6) - 0.04x sd
02:41:170 (3) - 0.04x sd
03:21:582 (1) - x:274 y:232 for better blanket. hmm, I try to move 03:20:523 (3) - a bit instead
03:50:523 (1) - You might want to change this slider for better blanket. changed a few part
03:53:346 (1) - Make slider less curvey to create better curve between 03:52:993 (4,1)? it is really nice idea
04:08:876 (1) - 0.04x sd
04:20:699 (2) - 0.04x sd about the spacing problem, all fixed, my bad xD I was using 1.1x ds but suddenly changed to 1.0x
04:21:582 (1) - Fix blanket :C fixed
Awesome diff, as always ^^
Good luck for rank *-*

thanks for the nice mod xD!

code!

osu file format v12

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 89347
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 49817
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
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TitleUnicode:ル・アビデ
Artist:Zektbach
ArtistUnicode:Zektbach
Creator:Mao
Version:623's Standard
Source:REFLEC BEAT
Tags:Desperate-kun Happy623
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BeatmapSetID:123359

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4
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SliderTickRate:1

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HabiHolic

5,372 posts

Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 2014-02-20T01:00:46+00:00

[Another]

00:52:994 (1) - Delete NC 00:52:464 (6) - NC Here?
01:37:817 (1,2) - blanket?

https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1350206
01:46:111 (4,5,1,2,3) - I think the rhythm is not difficile. This batter

https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1350212
02:55:111 (1) - delete NC and like this?

https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1350216

[Hyper]

00:55:111 (4) - Ctrl + g
01:15:758 (3) - Why the slider is a strange look like? Your right to modify the shape

https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1350223
01:26:523 - add Whistle
04:03:934 (2) - Ctrl + g

[623's Standard]

00:54:582 - add note
02:22:111 (2) - like this?

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1350233

Citrus

744 posts

Joined January 2011

Citrus 2014-02-20T08:58:38+00:00

[Another]

OD+1
00:54:405 (1,2) - add a note at 00:54:847 (3) -
you can change it like this
SPOILER
01:22:464 (1,2) - (440,360) (500,292)

[Hyper]

00:54:582 add a note here
01:26:170 (4) - add whistle at start and end

really nice beatmap,good luck~

Cherry Blossom

3,185 posts

Joined October 2011

Cherry Blossom 2014-02-20T17:04:07+00:00

Hello, mod as requested.

Desperate's Beginner

00:49:817 (1) - I see what you want to follow with the red tick, but it is not really nice to follow it in a easy because you make a polarity issue, so it is better to end this slider to the next white tick.
00:52:641 (3) - ^
and many more....
01:10:994 (5) - Here to get rid of the polarity issue here, it might be better if you add a reverse, or following drums.
and many more...
Well, there is a lot of polarity issues... you should fix many of them
01:16:641 (5,1,2) - Here there is the perfect example of what you SHOULD NOT do in easy. The player will think that the distance between objects is the same, but it is not. You should fix, use the right polarity or change the spacing.
02:10:288 (5) - the flow is a bit broken with a "V" slider, why don't to change to a "U" slider ?
02:31:464 (3) - is that intentional to not set the red anchor on the middle of this slider ? if it isnt, you should fix.
03:16:288 (2) - look at the spacing, you see that it is not the same with 03:17:347 (3) - and 03:15:229 (1) -

623's Standardl

Combo's are too short imo, you should remove 1/2 combos.
00:52:641 (1,2) - It's just me or not, but using two 1/1 slider after two 1/2 slider might be hard to play for a Beginner/normal player.
00:59:700 (1) - Here, the blanket for (2) is not really well made, make a better one.
01:33:405 - here it will be nicer if you follow violins, it is more intuitive imo.
01:37:817 (1,2) - here you followed vocals, but not here 01:36:053 (3,4) - , it is not consistent.
02:40:994 (2) - is that note misplaced, seems random imo ? vocal is here 02:40:817, and you followed vocals.
04:06:758 (2) - make a curve with this slider, flows better.
04:14:346 (1) - This kind of technique is used to introduce sliders like this 04:15:758 (1) - , but it does not. It is really confusing, so you should not overlap.

Hyper

00:54:405 (2) - add whistle.
01:03:935 (1) - Unfortunately overlapping scores, move a bit down.
01:06:758 (1) - out of screen, move a bit up.
01:07:641 (3,4) - change into : slider - circle, sounds better imo. like this
SPOILER
01:15:229 - i really disagree here D: this should be clicked, not "heard" you should emphasize this note, with a beat or a slider reverse.
01:26:170 (4) - 2 missing whistle (end and beginning)
01:39:229 (1,2,3,4) - Fix distance, you know what to do.

- After this part, the other is mapped very well ! Nice using of symmetries (like my mapping style D: (i.e Monthly mapping contest #3) )
03:12:053 (1) - Not stacked well with 03:10:817 (3) - , was it your intention ?
04:23:346 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - ouuuuch, this part was really nice to watch, but this star is not well made D:, fix it.

Another

00:55:464 - This note should be clicked !!!
01:03:670 (4,5,6) - a bit surprising since there were not... really fast patterns/jumps etc.
01:07:288 (3,4,5,6,7) - not a really good idea, as i said ^, this kind of stream is better to play after a jump imo.
01:13:287 (7,8,9) - align these notes or make a better triangle with a smaller angle with them.
01:46:111 (4,5,1,2,3) - a stream here does not fit with the rhythm, it rather begins here : 01:46:288
02:07:464 (1) - i'm not really fan of this kind of stuff here, breaks the flow imo.
02:11:700 (1,2) - The player will think that the spacing is 1/2 because of the symmetry, you might add a note here : 02:11:700, and here 02:12:405 instead of these sliders.
and as Hyper, the rest is well made.

I hope my mod was useful

Good Luck ~

Mao

Elite Mapper II

2,963 posts

Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Mao 2014-02-22T14:51:17+00:00

Cherry Blossom

Cherry Blossom wrote:
Hello, mod as requested.

Another
02:11:700 (1,2) - The player will think that the spacing is 1/2 because of the symmetry, you might add a note here : 02:11:700, and here 02:12:405 instead of these sliders. Well, I don't know. For me they are totally fine. I'll change same if another modder tells me to. Need more opinions ^^
[/color]

Fixed everything else I guess. Thank you guys for the mods

Myxo

osu! Alumni

3,103 posts

Joined December 2012

Myxo 2014-02-22T15:03:09+00:00

Cherry Blossom wrote:
Hello, mod as requested.

Desperate's Beginner
00:49:817 (1) - I see what you want to follow with the red tick, but it is not really nice to follow it in a easy because you make a polarity issue, so it is better to end this slider to the next white tick. I know about the polarity, but in my opinion it's readable and plays nice for beginners. As you can also see with many ranked maps... And that's because the slider ends in red-tick-polarity, but the beginners expect it to end at white-tick-polarity. So it's kinda like... They always have to press the button at white-ticks, you understand? So I think it's ok. I wouldn't do that now probably, but this dif i a bit older lol
00:52:641 (3) - ^
and many more....
01:10:994 (5) - Here to get rid of the polarity issue here, it might be better if you add a reverse, or following drums.
and many more...
Well, there is a lot of polarity issues... you should fix many of them
01:16:641 (5,1,2) - Here there is the perfect example of what you SHOULD NOT do in easy. The player will think that the distance between objects is the same, but it is not. You should fix, use the right polarity or change the spacing. Wow, how could I do that back then? o.o Me = baka
02:10:288 (5) - the flow is a bit broken with a "V" slider, why don't to change to a "U" slider ? If you say so
02:31:464 (3) - is that intentional to not set the red anchor on the middle of this slider ? if it isnt, you should fix. Yes, it is o: Why shouldn't it be intentional
03:16:288 (2) - look at the spacing, you see that it is not the same with 03:17:347 (3) - and 03:15:229 (1) -

Right, fixed the spacing and didn't fix the polarity. Thank you for your nice mod :3

My diff is not really good, but I lost motivation to remap it a third time (because of long song).

QRCode

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happy623

1,436 posts

Joined April 2010

happy623 2014-02-22T18:40:45+00:00

HabiHolic

HabiHolic wrote:
[623's Standard]

00:54:582 - add note keep this, I feel its quite hard if you add a note here, since there are much 1/2 objects before it, so I keep it easier in here
02:22:111 (2) - like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1350233 hmm well I prefer mine xD, I love something like "U-turn" stuff xD

thanks for the mod btw!!

Cherry Blossom

Cherry Blossom wrote:
Hello, mod as requested.

623's Standardl
Combo's are too short imo, you should remove 1/2 combos. Do you mean New Combo? emmmmm, I feels its okay ;w; Since its a low-level diff, with short combos are okay I guess
00:52:641 (1,2) - It's just me or not, but using two 1/1 slider after two 1/2 slider might be hard to play for a Beginner/normal player. I think its fine in Normal but not Easy of cos xD it matches with the music, so I guess it will not be too hard
00:59:700 (1) - Here, the blanket for (2) is not really well made, make a better one. SURE!
01:33:405 - here it will be nicer if you follow violins, it is more intuitive imo. hmm, I didnt apply in 01:39:935 (4) - too, or it will be really hard then
01:37:817 (1,2) - here you followed vocals, but not here 01:36:053 (3,4) - , it is not consistent. ahh, fixed, nice one!
02:40:994 (2) - is that note misplaced, seems random imo ? vocal is here 02:40:817, and you followed vocals. done!
04:06:758 (2) - make a curve with this slider, flows better. sounds gooood
04:14:346 (1) - This kind of technique is used to introduce sliders like this 04:15:758 (1) - , but it does not. It is really confusing, so you should not overlap. alright, I placed 04:15:758 (1) - some grids down

I hope my mod was useful
Good Luck ~

was a nice mod here! thanks for your great effort on my diff! xD <3

thanks both!!

MAAAAOOOOOOOO

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: L'avide.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 89347
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:L'avide
TitleUnicode:ル・アビデ
Artist:Zektbach
ArtistUnicode:Zektbach
Creator:Mao
Version:623's Standard
Source:REFLEC BEAT
Tags:Desperate-kun Happy623
BeatmapID:359735
BeatmapSetID:123359

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1.00000000596046
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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2,109310,119085
2,162958,172733
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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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Beige

Elite Mapper

2,191 posts

Joined February 2011

Beige 2014-03-01T06:06:30+00:00

As your request!

[General]

Fine!

[Beginner]

Really Fine...

OD +1 is better

[Standard]

01:32:170 (1) - nazi sorry ;_;, 1 grid down at red point can make blanket...

really fine, too ;_;

[Hyper]
00:57:935 (4) - Move (372,42) is better
01:21:229 (1) - Close
01:21:934 (4) - ^

;_;

[Another]
02:54:053 - Why this part is closer than Hyper diff?
03:52:199 (1) - Delete NC and if you accept this, 03:52:287 (2) - Add NC
04:00:493 (1,2) - ^
04:03:493 (1,2) - ^
04:09:141 (1) - Circle is better. Don't forget NC
04:14:787 (1,2) - ^
04:20:434 (1,2) - ^

nice work!

nice work! GL

Mao

Elite Mapper II

2,963 posts

Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Mao 2014-03-07T11:26:50+00:00

W h i t e wrote:
As your request!
[Another]
02:54:053 - Why this part is closer than Hyper diff? Well, this was mapped way earlier than the Hyper but I wanted to keep it here :c
03:52:199 (1) - Delete NC and if you accept this, 03:52:287 (2) - Add NC Going to change if another modder also wants this :c
04:00:493 (1,2) - ^ ^
04:03:493 (1,2) - ^ ^

Fixed everything else! Thank you for mod and sorry for late reply ;c

Akabato

207 posts

Joined October 2013

Akabato 2014-03-07T15:30:49+00:00

hi~ from pm request

[General]
- delete the .osb file?

[Desperate's Beginner]
00:57:229 (2) - try this? flow may be more natural imo http://puu.sh/7mbzm.jpg
01:20:876 (4) - rotate it 6 degrees (anti-clockwise), and move it to (184,340), then this slider's end can make blanket pattern with 01:22:288 (5) and the dot can place on the middle Y-line, just like this http://puu.sh/7mcb3.jpg
01:48:053 (2,3) - move them little lower, (104,284)?
03:02:523 (1) - add finish at the silder's head?
03:10:994 (1) - ^ here has an obivous finish sound in music
03:13:111 (3) - try this? may be better. actually the placing here can be improved http://puu.sh/7mcOH.jpg
04:21:582 (3) - change it to another shape, maybe like this? http://puu.sh/7md2c.jpg

[623's Standard]
- this diff can set NC by every two downdeats, now it sets NC every downbeat at some parts, combo numbers are always 2 or 3, kind of too small imo

01:16:641 (1) - move it to (124,164), then it can blanket with 01:15:229 (3)'s head
02:24:053 (2) - move it to (260,68)?
02:39:229 (5) - try to make it blanket with 02:39:935 (1) would be better imo
03:03:582 (2) - like this? http://puu.sh/7mdMz.jpg

[Hyper]
00:58:817 (3) - make its head stack with 00:57:405 (2) , just like this http://puu.sh/7medz.jpg then you may move 00:58:641 (2) and 00:59:347 (4) to adjust distance
01:00:405 (4) - head stack with 01:00:229 (3) may be better imo, then you can move 01:00:935 (5) to (304,116), just like this http://puu.sh/7mesT.jpg
01:11:700 (3) - try this? http://puu.sh/7meDQ.jpg
01:20:170 (3,4) - like this? avoid making them overlap with 01:18:935 (3)'s head http://puu.sh/7meSm.jpg
01:27:052 (1) - nazi. move the end dot to (294,124) to make a better blanket
01:35:347 (3) - try to make it stack with 01:33:758 (1)'s head? could be neater
03:04:994 (2) - move to (211,27) could make the flow better imo, like this http://puu.sh/7mfvW.jpg
03:52:287 (1) - try to stack with 03:50:876 (3)?

[Another]
00:57:405 (2) - try to avoid overlap with 00:58:111 (4), maybe try this pattern? http://puu.sh/7mfSF.jpg
02:57:758 (2) - seems too far from last note?
03:05:700 (1) - head stack with 03:04:464 (2)?
03:09:935 (1) - remove finish? kind of weird here
03:25:994 (1) - stack with 03:24:758 (1)'s head?
04:19:111 (2) - make its tail stack with 04:18:405 (7)?
04:24:229 (7,1) - like this? just as you do in the same pattern before http://puu.sh/7mgn5.jpg
tbh i don't really appreciate some overlap patterns in this diff, but overall it's a nice diff indeed

that's all. very impressive song and map, take a star~ and good luck on ranking this!~

happy623

1,436 posts

Joined April 2010

happy623 2014-03-07T20:44:47+00:00

W h i t e wrote:
As your request!

[Standard]
01:32:170 (1) - nazi sorry ;_;, 1 grid down at red point can make blanket... fixed XD

really fine, too ;_;

nice work! GL

thanks o/

Akabato wrote:
hi~ from pm request

[General]
- delete the .osb file?

[623's Standard]
- this diff can set NC by every two downdeats, now it sets NC every downbeat at some parts, combo numbers are always 2 or 3, kind of too small imo okay, I'd try to fewer it, but yea, some have to keep the same as it is consisting the NC pattern

01:16:641 (1) - move it to (124,164), then it can blanket with 01:15:229 (3)'s head moved, but not exactly the x|y mentioned
02:24:053 (2) - move it to (260,68)? hmm, I guess no, it was following the flow with 02:22:994 (1) -'s tail
02:39:229 (5) - try to make it blanket with 02:39:935 (1) would be better imo done!
03:03:582 (2) - like this? http://puu.sh/7mdMz.jpg no, but well I try to curve the current one a better look

that's all. very impressive song and map, take a star~ and good luck on ranking this!~

thanks for the mod

huehue

osu file format v12

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 89347
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:L'avide
TitleUnicode:ル・アビデ
Artist:Zektbach
ArtistUnicode:Zektbach
Creator:Mao
Version:623's Standard
Source:REFLEC BEAT
Tags:Desperate-kun Happy623
BeatmapID:359735
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CircleSize:3
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Kashimaria

455 posts

Joined November 2011

Kashimaria 2014-03-09T11:54:48+00:00

Red : Unrankable.
Blue : Suggestion but maybe this is unrankable.
Black : just Suggestion.

[General]

fine.

[Desperate's Beginner]

00:49:817 (1) - add S Finish on slider's start
00:51:582 (2) - add S Whistle
00:57:229 (2) - ^
01:12:405 (1) - add S Finish
01:23:700 (1) - ^
01:32:170 (3) - i think this slider is looks like some dirty.
01:34:994 (1) - add S Finish on Slider's Start.
01:40:641 (1) - ^
01:46:288 (1) - ^
01:45:229 (4,1) - eh, this pattern is fine?
02:06:053 (1) - add S Finish
02:08:170 (3) - add S Clap
02:11:700 (1) - add S Finish
02:17:347 (1) - add S Finish or Clap, or nothing do.
02:54:053 (1) - i think use S:C1 Whistle is more better.
03:02:523 (1) - ^?
03:10:994 (1,2,3) - change like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1401625 and, add S Finish
03:25:817 (3) - add S Finish on this Slider's end or not.
03:50:523 (1) - add S Finish on this Slider's start
04:01:817 (1) - ^
04:14:876 (2,3) - this pattern is fine?
04:21:582 (3) - i think this slider is looks like some dirty.

[623's Standard]

fine.

[Hyper]

01:21:229 (1,2,3,4) - it will be fake pattern?
02:02:876 (1) - i think 2 reverse slider is not good. change to 1 reverse slider, or add 3 circle stream.
02:05:964 (6) - delete this.
02:08:787 (6) - ^
02:39:582 (4) - add S Finish on slider's end.
03:04:817 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern is not problem?
03:41:699 (1) - use 2 -> 1 reverse slider.
03:44:523 (1) - ^
03:50:523 (2) - add S Finish
04:12:405 (3) - use 2 -> 1 reverse slider. or delete slider and add 3 circles stream?
04:18:052 (2) - ^
04:23:699 (3,4,5) - if this pattern has problem, you can change 1 reverse slider.

[Another]

01:06:494 (6,7) - delete slider and add 4 circles stream?
01:09:758 - add note
01:10:464 - ^
01:17:170 (2) - copy+paste yea, i think it looks like dirty.
01:25:905 (2,3) - change like this? if it will be more fine. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1401752 (don't stack note)
01:27:141 (2,3) - don't stack note.
01:40:553 (6,1) - ^
01:46:288 (5) - add NC and add S Finish.
02:14:347 (4) - move slider's end to 365,210 ? or delete slider and add 2 circles stream.
02:20:788 (2,3) - don't stack note.
02:30:582 (4,5,6) - change like this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1401773 this patten makes more funny
02:34:200 (7,1) - don't stack note.
02:34:817 (4) - i think this slider is maybe unrankable.
02:55:111 (1) - delete NC
02:57:229 (1) - ^
02:59:347 (1) - ^
03:01:817 (1) - ^
03:03:582 (1) - ^
03:05:700 (1) - ^
03:07:817 (1) - ^
03:14:170 (1) - ^
03:16:288 (1) - ^
03:18:758 (1) - ^
03:22:641 (1) - ^
03:52:199 (1,2) - don't stack note.
04:00:493 (1,2) - ^
04:03:493 (1) - delete NC
04:03:582 (2) - add NC

Myxo

osu! Alumni

3,103 posts

Joined December 2012

Myxo 2014-03-09T14:10:23+00:00

W h i t e wrote:
Really Fine...

OD +1 is better

Ok fixed :3 Thanks for mod <3

Akabato wrote:
[Desperate's Beginner]
01:20:876 (4) - rotate it 6 degrees (anti-clockwise), and move it to (184,340), then this slider's end can make blanket pattern with 01:22:288 (5) and the dot can place on the middle Y-line, just like this http://puu.sh/7mcb3.jpg
Sorry, this is not even a blanket pattern for me, because it is very sloppy looking. It makes no difference imo
03:13:111 (3) - try this? may be better. actually the placing here can be improved http://puu.sh/7mcOH.jpg Sorry, I want to keep that kind of flow here ;w;
04:21:582 (3) - change it to another shape, maybe like this? http://puu.sh/7md2c.jpg It doesn't look much different for me, so it is just about the flow? But then I want to keep my flow sry ._.

that's all. very impressive song and map, take a star~ and good luck on ranking this!~

Fixed the others! Thank you <33

Gomo Pslvarh wrote:
[Desperate's Beginner]
01:32:170 (3) - i think this slider is looks like some dirty. Sorry, I like the slidershapes ;w;
02:54:053 (1) - i think use S:C1 Whistle is more better. I think they sound good here, and I won't change because of consistency
03:02:523 (1) - ^?
04:14:876 (2,3) - this pattern is fine? I think so o:
04:21:582 (3) - i think this slider is looks like some dirty.

Fixed the others! :3 Thank you for your nice mod.

Zwergenschüssel

osu file format v12

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 89347
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

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TitleUnicode:ル・アビデ
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ArtistUnicode:Zektbach
Creator:Mao
Version:Desperate's Beginner
Source:REFLEC BEAT
Tags:Desperate-kun Happy623
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Mao

Elite Mapper II

2,963 posts

Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Mao 2014-03-09T14:54:45+00:00

Akabato

Akabato wrote:
[Hyper]
01:35:347 (3) - try to make it stack with 01:33:758 (1)'s head? could be neater Doesn't make a big change in gameplay for me so no change for now ^^

Gomo Pslvarh

Gomo Pslvarh wrote:
[Hyper]

01:21:229 (1,2,3,4) - it will be fake pattern? No fix
02:02:876 (1) - i think 2 reverse slider is not good. change to 1 reverse slider, or add 3 circle stream. No problem in flow for me :/
02:05:964 (6) - delete this. Why? It's in the music and isn't flowing bad.
02:08:787 (6) - ^ ^
03:04:817 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern is not problem? No it isn't :c
03:41:699 (1) - use 2 -> 1 reverse slider. As said before, I have no problem with these.
03:44:523 (1) - ^ ^
04:12:405 (3) - use 2 -> 1 reverse slider. or delete slider and add 3 circles stream? ^
04:18:052 (2) - ^ ^
04:23:699 (3,4,5) - if this pattern has problem, you can change 1 reverse slider. No Problem for me with this pattern.

[Another]

01:17:170 (2) - copy+paste yea, i think it looks like dirty. Doesn't look bad to me. Was suggested to do like this by another modder I guess o:
02:34:817 (4) - i think this slider is maybe unrankable. It isn't but I still changed it since I don't like its look anymore.

Hope that I was able to fix everything else. Thank you for the mods <3

Leader

osu! Alumni

1,849 posts

Joined January 2011

Leader 2014-03-11T15:44:34+00:00

Hello

[General]

Correct source is REFLECT BEAT colette, consider adding -Spring- to tags too (This is the complete name of the game)
You should add The Epic of Zektbach -Masinowa- to tags as well (this version is included in this album). Oh, and yoko too, she's the singer

[Desperate's Beginner]

At first sight, I found a weird rhythm who might be difficult to understand, especially if it's adressed to new players. I see you are trying to follow both main melody and ryhthm on white ticks and sometimes is really hard to catch. Let's take the first part as example:
00:49:817 (1,2,3) - This rhythm could be easily fixed by this rhythm (well, 00:49:817 (1) - could be split in a note + slider) . As Cherry Blossom said, you'll have many polarity issues and following only one of two rhythms I told before can help. I won't point all of them, you can easily understand of which parts I'm referring to.

00:51:582 (2,3) - If you are not going to listen to me, at least fix this flow (and aestethic is not at its best here)
00:58:288 (3) - Is this shape intentional? I rather have it more symmetric, at least..
01:08:876 (3) - This will work better if replaced with a 1/1 slider, since it fills vocals on 01:09:229 too
01:10:994 (5) - This slider could be extended to 01:12:053 - in order to follow vocals (remember to add hitsounds on tail)
01:16:641 (5) - 01:22:288 (5) - 01:27:935 (5) - and many others.. If you have followed my suggestion above, fix these as well with the same procedure
03:01:111 - A 1/1 slider with repeat could work very nice here
03:27:935 - Break should start here
03:54:758 (4) - This curve feels.. too curved? You should try to continue 03:53:346 (3) -'s path

I hope you understand what I'm trying to explain you, I think this map needs some polishment rhythm-wise

[623's Standard]

OD+1 to keep the spread polite.

00:52:641 (1) - Since head stands over nothing really relevant, why don't you replace this slider with a 1/2 one starting from 00:52:817 -, where you can find a proper and loud sound? Moreover, you can add a repeat on it and replace 00:53:170 (2,3) - with another similar slider starting from 00:53:523 -. I think it follows music more properly and doesn't make not-experienced players confused
04:04:640 (1,2,3) - ^ Here as well
02:11:700 (1) - What about making it symmetric to the grid?
02:16:817 (3) - Would be cooler if you make this slider parallel to the previous one
03:42:758 (2,3) - ^
02:24:053 (2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern currently looks a bit pressed, I think a star pattern could resolve this issue easily!
02:27:582 (4,1) - Blanket could be improved here!
03:19:464 (2) - ^
02:56:170 (1,2) - I believe they would flow and look better if similar, just copy (2)'s shape on (1)
03:40:640 (3) - 1 grid up on second sliderpoint to have it similar to previous slider
04:23:523 - Adding a circle here would fit pretty nice!

Nice!

[Hyper]

00:53:170 (3) - I'm not a fan of random shapes where they are not needed, but I won't judge your style. However, this really looks awkward and a bit unnecessary
01:10:111 (3) - And this shape could be better if symmetrical
02:01:288 (3) - Replace with a 1/2 slider in order to fill the sound in 02:01:488 - ?
02:07:817 (2) - What about splitting this slider in two notes to emphasize the sound in 02:07:994 - ?

Despite the sliders' shapes, this is pretty cool!

[Another]

Really good diff, but I'd rather use AR8 and OD8 The diff doesn't have many jumps nor unreadable stuff, and moreover, it's just 170BPM, so AR8 should be appropriate too (and it might be a wonderful challenge for DT players!). About OD8, it should be used in order to have a nice OD2/4/6/8 spread

Nice map, good luck~

happy623

1,436 posts

Joined April 2010

happy623 2014-03-12T18:42:30+00:00

Leader wrote:
Hello

[General]
Correct source is REFLECT BEAT colette, consider adding -Spring- to tags too (This is the complete name of the game)
You should add The Epic of Zektbach -Masinowa- to tags as well (this version is included in this album). Oh, and yoko too, she's the singer
[623's Standard]

OD+1 to keep the spread polite. changed
00:52:641 (1) - Since head stands over nothing really relevant, why don't you replace this slider with a 1/2 one starting from 00:52:817 -, where you can find a proper and loud sound? Moreover, you can add a repeat on it and replace 00:53:170 (2,3) - with another similar slider starting from 00:53:523 -. I think it follows music more properly and doesn't make not-experienced players confused
04:04:640 (1,2,3) - ^ Here as well both changed!!
02:11:700 (1) - What about making it symmetric to the grid? nice one B)
02:16:817 (3) - Would be cooler if you make this slider parallel to the previous one sure
03:42:758 (2,3) - ^ ^ so clean xD
02:24:053 (2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern currently looks a bit pressed, I think a star pattern could resolve this issue easily! Leader so clever QWWQ
02:27:582 (4,1) - Blanket could be improved here! ya fixed
03:19:464 (2) - ^ hmm, it should be fixed I guess qwq
02:56:170 (1,2) - I believe they would flow and look better if similar, just copy (2)'s shape on (1) hmm, okay, but I did a bit change on (1)'s look
03:40:640 (3) - 1 grid up on second sliderpoint to have it similar to previous slider nice again!
04:23:523 - Adding a circle here would fit pretty nice! added!

Nice!
Nice map, good luck~

Leader's mod always pro xD/ thanks a lot!!

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BeatofIke

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BeatofIke 2014-03-13T16:55:31+00:00

Hi Mao. Modding time!
[Beginner]

00:49:817 (1,2,3,4) - Polarity could be better if you re-arrange the notes like this. Here are 3 options/examples:
Example 1
Example 2
Example 3
00:55:464 (1,2,3,4,5) - If suggested above, do the same thing here. Also at 04:01:817 (1,2,3,4), 04:07:464 (1,2,3,4), 04:13:111 (1,2,3,4,5), and 04:18:758 (1,2,3,4,5). You are free to mix them up if you like. Just make sure the polarity is good. For more information about polarity, watch this video.
03:27:582 (4) - Like Leader mentioned. Extend the break time so it ends here. You did it in your Normal difficulty, so why not in this difficulty? o.o
Image
01:29:347 (1,2,3,4) - Same suggestion as 00:49:817 (1,2,3,4): " Polarity could be better if you re-arrange the notes like this." Here is an example:
Image
01:34:994 (1,2,3,4) - If suggested above, do the same thing here. Also at 01:40:641 (1,2,3,4) and 01:46:288 (1,2,3). Don't forgot to do the same thing in the 2nd kiai section as well. Again, you are free to mix it up a bit for variety.

I highly suggest following some of Leader's suggestions (especially at 02:54:053 - 03:25:817) for this difficulty! Some are actually good suggestions that I won't mention again in my mod post.

[Standard]

02:54:053 (1) - To make up with the vocals fully, I suggest replacing this hit circle with a 2/1 slider (02:56:170 (1) for example).
03:16:288 (3) - This slider feels awkward with the music, since the vocals are more prominent in this part. Instead, try replacing this with a 1/1 repeat slider and an extra hit circle at 03:17:347. If suggested, remove the green timing sections at 03:17:347 and 03:17:523. Here is an example:
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03:19:111 - Better to add a note here (along with a new combo) to make up with the vocals. If suggested, remove the combo at 03:18:405 (1).

Good map, but try to focus more on the most prominent rhythms.

Good map overall. Found no issues in Hyper and Another! Once you fix that, call me back!

happy623

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Joined April 2010

happy623 2014-03-13T17:15:35+00:00

BeatofIke wrote:
Hi Mao. Modding time!

[Standard]
02:54:053 (1) - To make up with the vocals fully, I suggest replacing this hit circle with a 2/1 slider (02:56:170 (1) for example).
03:16:288 (3) - This slider feels awkward with the music, since the vocals are more prominent in this part. Instead, try replacing this with a 1/1 repeat slider and an extra hit circle at 03:17:347. If suggested, remove the green timing sections at 03:17:347 and 03:17:523. Here is an example:
Image
03:19:111 - Better to add a note here (along with a new combo) to make up with the vocals. If suggested, remove the combo at 03:18:405 (1). also applied in 03:21:582 (1) -
Good map, but try to focus more on the most prominent rhythms.

Fixed everything here, and also tried to fix some blankets , hope its much better now!! ty Ike!

osu file format v12

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 89347
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

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Title:L'avide
TitleUnicode:ル・アビデ
Artist:Zektbach
ArtistUnicode:Zektbach
Creator:Mao
Version:623's Standard
Source:REFLECT BEAT colette
Tags:Desperate-kun Happy623 The Epic of Zektbach -Masinowa- -Spring- yoko
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Mao

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Mao 2014-03-13T17:29:51+00:00

Updated! \:D/
So let's wait for Desperate to fix his diff *^*

Myxo

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Myxo 2014-03-13T20:45:56+00:00

Leader wrote:
Hello

[Desperate's Beginner]

At first sight, I found a weird rhythm who might be difficult to understand, especially if it's adressed to new players. I see you are trying to follow both main melody and ryhthm on white ticks and sometimes is really hard to catch. Let's take the first part as example:
00:49:817 (1,2,3) - This rhythm could be easily fixed by this rhythm (well, 00:49:817 (1) - could be split in a note + slider) . As Cherry Blossom said, you'll have many polarity issues and following only one of two rhythms I told before can help. I won't point all of them, you can easily understand of which parts I'm referring to.
I fixed all the polarity issues in the beatmap
00:51:582 (2,3) - If you are not going to listen to me, at least fix this flow (and aestethic is not at its best here) Sorry, I think the aesthethics and flow are ok at this point. But I listened to you
00:58:288 (3) - Is this shape intentional? I rather have it more symmetric, at least.. Hmm, I think the "free" sliders fit my style in this diff pretty well, so no change here
01:08:876 (3) - This will work better if replaced with a 1/1 slider, since it fills vocals on 01:09:229 too I changed it, and also the other ones
01:10:994 (5) - This slider could be extended to 01:12:053 - in order to follow vocals (remember to add hitsounds on tail) I did it a bit different but I changed it
01:16:641 (5) - 01:22:288 (5) - 01:27:935 (5) - and many others.. If you have followed my suggestion above, fix these as well with the same procedure Ok
03:01:111 - A 1/1 slider with repeat could work very nice here Sorry. I mapped only the big white ticks in this section, with the sliders. And it makes no sense to break this rhythm with the gaps between the sliders. I hope you understand what I mean
03:27:935 - Break should start here Ok
03:54:758 (4) - This curve feels.. too curved? You should try to continue 03:53:346 (3) -'s path Fixed

I hope you understand what I'm trying to explain you, I think this map needs some polishment rhythm-wise
Nice map, good luck~

Thank you <33

BeatofIke wrote:
Hi Mao. Modding time!
[Beginner]
00:49:817 (1,2,3,4) - Polarity could be better if you re-arrange the notes like this. Here are 3 options/examples:
Example 2
I used this version
00:55:464 (1,2,3,4,5) - If suggested above, do the same thing here. Also at 04:01:817 (1,2,3,4), 04:07:464 (1,2,3,4), 04:13:111 (1,2,3,4,5), and 04:18:758 (1,2,3,4,5). You are free to mix them up if you like. Just make sure the polarity is good. For more information about polarity, watch this video.
I know about polarity ;w; I just didn't knew about it when I mapped this diff, long time ago. Sorry ~ I fixed it all
03:27:582 (4) - Like Leader mentioned. Extend the break time so it ends here. You did it in your Normal difficulty, so why not in this difficulty? o.o
Image
Ok, it's not at 3:27 but I got it
01:29:347 (1,2,3,4) - Same suggestion as 00:49:817 (1,2,3,4): " Polarity could be better if you re-arrange the notes like this." Here is an example:
Image
Ok
01:34:994 (1,2,3,4) - If suggested above, do the same thing here. Also at 01:40:641 (1,2,3,4) and 01:46:288 (1,2,3). Don't forgot to do the same thing in the 2nd kiai section as well. Again, you are free to mix it up a bit for variety.
Ok
I highly suggest following some of Leader's suggestions (especially at 02:54:053 - 03:25:817) for this difficulty! Some are actually good suggestions that I won't mention again in my mod post.
Sorry, I didn't take his suggestion in this part ;w;

Good map overall. Found no issues in Hyper and Another! Once you fix that, call me back!

Thank you <33333

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BeatofIke 2014-03-13T20:49:03+00:00

Good luck!

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Myxo 2014-03-13T20:51:47+00:00

Gogo rank! *-*

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