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18:53 *Rare is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/647032 ginkiha+kamome sano - Dawn of Asia]
18:53 Rare: これのHYPER
18:56 wring: 00:03:107 (2) - ctrl+gとか？
18:56 Rare: fixed
18:58 wring: 00:11:565 (4) - これはしよう
19:00 wring: 00:16:671 (3) - これはctrl+gしたほうが面白そう
19:01 Rare: fixed
19:03 wring: 00:30:554 (3,4) - これもっと離していいよ
19:03 wring: http://puu.sh/i3ucY/3ee11977a2.jpg
19:03 wring: こっちの方向に
19:03 Rare: fixed
19:08 wring: 00:54:490 (5,6,7,8) - ここもっと飛ばそう
19:09 wring: 00:56:086 (2,3) -
19:09 wring: http://puu.sh/i3urh/abf6ca8904.jpgこういうのとか
19:10 wring: 01:00:235 (3,4) - せっかくだし隙間いれよう
19:10 wring: http://puu.sh/i3utD/0242d14db6.jpg
19:11 wring: 01:02:309 (4,5) - http://puu.sh/i3uwo/ca06abbd43.jpg
19:13 wring: 01:04:650 (2) - 音的には1の終点、3の始点で3角形作りたい
19:13 wring: http://puu.sh/i3uzk/a7ca26b57d.jpg
19:14 wring: 01:21:458 (6) - ctrlｇ
19:15 wring: 01:22:097 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 音はそうなってるんだけど流石に今までの配置からしたら続いてるって思われなくもないから、思い切って5連打5連打にして配置からやり直しましょう
19:16 wring: 01:28:001 (8) - 怒られそうだけどx165 y182あたりに置きたいよね
19:18 wring: 01:28:799 (2) - http://puu.sh/i3uMB/58a19eca0e.jpg
19:19 wring: 01:31:033 (3,4,5,1) - もっと離して
19:20 wring: 01:41:246 (1) - ちょっと汚くなるけど重ねてるスライダーの始点に重ねるつもりぐらいまで離したほうがいい感じ
19:20 wring: 01:42:522 (5,6,7) - 離して
19:21 wring: 01:43:799 (1) - 逆に離れすぎ感ある
19:21 wring: 次の連打とね
19:22 wring: 01:46:512 (2) - ジャンプさせていいところ
18:53 Rare: これのHYPER
18:56 wring: 00:03:107 (2) - ctrl+gとか？
18:56 Rare: fixed
18:58 wring: 00:11:565 (4) - これはしよう
19:00 wring: 00:16:671 (3) - これはctrl+gしたほうが面白そう
19:01 Rare: fixed
19:03 wring: 00:30:554 (3,4) - これもっと離していいよ
19:03 wring: http://puu.sh/i3ucY/3ee11977a2.jpg
19:03 wring: こっちの方向に
19:03 Rare: fixed
19:08 wring: 00:54:490 (5,6,7,8) - ここもっと飛ばそう
19:09 wring: 00:56:086 (2,3) -
19:09 wring: http://puu.sh/i3urh/abf6ca8904.jpgこういうのとか
19:10 wring: 01:00:235 (3,4) - せっかくだし隙間いれよう
19:10 wring: http://puu.sh/i3utD/0242d14db6.jpg
19:11 wring: 01:02:309 (4,5) - http://puu.sh/i3uwo/ca06abbd43.jpg
19:13 wring: 01:04:650 (2) - 音的には1の終点、3の始点で3角形作りたい
19:13 wring: http://puu.sh/i3uzk/a7ca26b57d.jpg
19:14 wring: 01:21:458 (6) - ctrlｇ
19:15 wring: 01:22:097 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 音はそうなってるんだけど流石に今までの配置からしたら続いてるって思われなくもないから、思い切って5連打5連打にして配置からやり直しましょう
19:16 wring: 01:28:001 (8) - 怒られそうだけどx165 y182あたりに置きたいよね
19:18 wring: 01:28:799 (2) - http://puu.sh/i3uMB/58a19eca0e.jpg
19:19 wring: 01:31:033 (3,4,5,1) - もっと離して
19:20 wring: 01:41:246 (1) - ちょっと汚くなるけど重ねてるスライダーの始点に重ねるつもりぐらいまで離したほうがいい感じ
19:20 wring: 01:42:522 (5,6,7) - 離して
19:21 wring: 01:43:799 (1) - 逆に離れすぎ感ある
19:21 wring: 次の連打とね
19:22 wring: 01:46:512 (2) - ジャンプさせていいところ
古事記しにきた
Topic Starter
ヘルプありがとう！
Topic Starter
thanks Flask 
Cool 
looks fine to me. requalified ~
Topic Starter
Satelliteさんありがとう！！！
Yeah~
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\:D/
Hey Rare,
We need to disqualify your map for the following reasons:
[Basic]
00:06:777 (1,2) - has too much similar visual to 1/1 compared to earlier sets of this rhythm during the beginning
[Hyper]
00:15:075 (3,4) - 00:16:990 (1,2) - The inconsistency of 1/2 vs. 1/4 spacing after kick sliders makes for a poor reading experience. Please adjust these so that they read more intuitively.
Additional comments:
[Novice]
-00:59:756 (4) - Issues can crop up with such sliders in E/N diffs. They aren't really readable and they don't make much sense with the patterns in the diff.
-01:08:054 (1,2) - this creates an unnatural/uncommon and uncomfortable flow, which is also hard to read
[Exhaust]
01:21:777 (8,9,1) - Why the low spacing (9) (1) after that big jump..
[Infinite]
01:43:719 - Missing note?
00:14:437 (1,2,3,4) - Huge 1/4-jump and then very low 1/2 spacing for no reason
The map does this pretty often - huge jumps and then a low spacing for an equally emphasized beat, which also plays forced.
###M
We need to disqualify your map for the following reasons:
[Basic]
00:06:777 (1,2) - has too much similar visual to 1/1 compared to earlier sets of this rhythm during the beginning
[Hyper]
00:15:075 (3,4) - 00:16:990 (1,2) - The inconsistency of 1/2 vs. 1/4 spacing after kick sliders makes for a poor reading experience. Please adjust these so that they read more intuitively.
Additional comments:
[Novice]
-00:59:756 (4) - Issues can crop up with such sliders in E/N diffs. They aren't really readable and they don't make much sense with the patterns in the diff.
-01:08:054 (1,2) - this creates an unnatural/uncommon and uncomfortable flow, which is also hard to read
[Exhaust]
01:21:777 (8,9,1) - Why the low spacing (9) (1) after that big jump..
[Infinite]
01:43:719 - Missing note?
00:14:437 (1,2,3,4) - Huge 1/4-jump and then very low 1/2 spacing for no reason
The map does this pretty often - huge jumps and then a low spacing for an equally emphasized beat, which also plays forced.
###M
Should be moved to WIP?
Topic Starter
thanks garven!Garven wrote:
Hey Rare, hi garven.
We need to disqualify your map for the following reasons:
[Basic]
00:06:777 (1,2) - has too much similar visual to 1/1 compared to earlier sets of this rhythm during the beginning
[Hyper]
00:15:075 (3,4) - 00:16:990 (1,2) - The inconsistency of 1/2 vs. 1/4 spacing after kick sliders makes for a poor reading experience. Please adjust these so that they read more intuitively.
Additional comments:
[Exhaust]
01:21:777 (8,9,1) - Why the low spacing (9) (1) after that big jump.. it's nothing. i think this is not issue.
[Infinite]
01:43:719 - Missing note? nothing there. i won't change it.
00:14:437 (1,2,3,4) - Huge 1/4-jump and then very low 1/2 spacing for no reason
The map does this pretty often - huge jumps and then a low spacing for an equally emphasized beat, which also plays forced.
###M
all fixed except wrote comments.
ill update later. i can't upload cause upload error D:
Topic Starter
updated~
aaaaa
Topic Starter
ありがとうありがとう！！！
Qualified :3
regrats
Topic Starter
thanks Priti!