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[General]
Preview Time is unsnapped
Apparently SB files are missing (AImod complaining again)
04:23:385 - Kiai here is unsnapped
01:51:056 - Is the SB here placed a bit on purpose? Seems a bit empty and cut-off below the play field
[Spread]
Currently the spread is Kantan -- Futsuu -------- Muzukashii -------- Oni. The Kantan is too hard to make a reasonable spread: The gap between each diff from Futsuu to Oni is pretty much equally big but the Kantan looks a lot like the Futsuu at many parts and lacks a larger amount of breaks. That's why Kantan mostly has deletion suggestions, there are some parts in Muzu that have to be made easier too tho
[Kantan]
00:12:230 (15) - This completely destroys the rhythm you had previously, move 00:12:630 - here
00:26:630 (30) - Move this note 00:26:230 - here to map the downbeat
00:27:630 (31) - Move this 00:27:830 - here for the same reason as above and 00:18:230 (20) - OR move it 00:27:430 - here and then move 00:29:830 (33,34) - these to the same spots to have an easier and consistent rhythm
00:31:430 (35) - and then move this 00:31:830 - here
00:45:670 (9,11) - Delete these notes so Kantan isn't the same as Futsuu at this spot.
00:50:475 (17) - 00:55:136 (26) - ^
00:59:796 (35) - Delete; 01:00:670 (37) - move 01:00:961 - here
01:02:126 (38,40) - ^
01:05:621 (44) - Delete since there is no vocals here atm and it's better to delete that one than 01:04:456 (42) - since it would sound a little bit weird starting off the strophe with a break
01:10:281 (50) - Move 01:09:116 - here and maybe also change to don
01:12:903 (55) - Change to kat to make the big don more playable
01:14:941 (59) - Even though there are vocals here, less notes are needed and this could be deleted for consistency in breaks
01:18:728 (65,66,67) - This triplet feels very random. It comes out of nowhere since it hasn't been mapped like this in any other case. Delete both dons OR delete the 2nd don and move the first 01:18:437 - here
01:31:833 (86) - This note is quite hard to catch imo, move 01:32:416 - here
~Kiai~
Needs less 3/2 notes. Again, we want the Kantan to be easier than Futsuu and that noticably so we have an even spread from Kantan to Oni. Change them to 2/1 notes, you can also add a few more 1/1 triplets so the kiai is not the same as previous parts. Some notes like 01:57:463 (25) - could be changed to kat since the map is very don-heavy. Instead of the sliders you could have 4/1 breaks.
02:13:191 (1) - Replace with a note and add a note at its current end.
02:14:939 (1) - If you've done above: Delete
02:18:434 - Add don
02:19:599 (10) - Delete (all suggestions for consistency)
02:25:424 - to 02:28:337 - uses different rhythm. Don't use multiple rhythmsas it can be very confusing. Most notes (02:26:298 (22,23,24) - ) can be shifted back by 1/1
02:26:007 (22) - If you've done above: Change this to don
02:30:085 (29) - Delete
02:34:162 (37,38) - Replace with a 1/1 triplet
02:36:347 (41) - Move to downbeat
02:42:318 - to 02:46:687 - Lessen density to how it was 01:22:514 - 01:30:959 - here
02:47:269 - to 03:02:997 - Drasticly reduce note count since Futsuu has far less notes here. The Kantan uses too much varying rhyhtm here, sharing most of its notes with Muzukashii.
Apply suggestions to rest of the map where it fits.
[Nardo's Futsuu]
00:03:230 (6,7) - In order to balance spread a little bit more delete 6 and change 7 to kat.
00:09:830 (19) - Delete too
00:12:030 (25,26) - Maybe also delete 25 here and change 26 to kat.
01:47:997 (141,143) - Moving these notes back by 1/2 on the white tick would make it able to make it feel like the several strong 3/2 parts are seperated. Currently it plays relativly boring since there's no real emphasis possible here.
03:03:433 (313,315) - ^
03:54:113 (427) - idk this is the only doublet in this section which is kinda random.
[Muzukashii]
00:04:530 (11) - Delete this to create a more balanced spread
00:11:830 - to 00:39:030 - delete notes since the difference between Muzu and Oni is hardly noticable here
00:26:130 (76) - Pointing out this one since it doesn't really has to be there
00:49:602 (39) - Delete for a 2/1 break
01:03:873 - to 01:22:514 - Same as the intro, it nearly is the same as Oni while other parts drasticly differ. Additionally the density in Muzukashii is pretty similar in different parts
01:31:251 - Move this barline to 01:31:396 - to avoid the downbeat bar overlapping with the last note (01:31:105 (230) - ). I'm not even sure if it's a good idea to have such drastic SV changes in Muzu...
01:33:581 (237,238) - Delete these notes to have a 2/1 break (remember, calm part) and to follow vocals more - you mostly follow vocals here.
01:49:308 (28,29,30) - I understand why there's a triplet here but maybe consider having a big note here too since it would keep up the strength this has.
02:26:007 - to 02:42:026 - same as before
03:04:744 (193,194,195) - same as before
03:40:424 (5) - 03:42:754 (15) - Delete for Muzu -> Oni difference
03:45:084 (23) - 03:47:414 (34) - ^
03:52:657 (58) - ^
03:54:695 (67,69) - ^ and change 03:54:841 (68) - to kat
[Oni]
01:31:251 - Move this barline to 01:31:396 - to avoid the downbeat bar overlapping with the last note (01:31:105 (311) - )