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Kugimiya Rie - I MY

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WyndII
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WyndII
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Wednesday, April 07, 2010 at 12:17:03 PM

Artist: Kugimiya Rie
Title: I MY
Source: Toradora Character Song Album
Tags: Aisaka Taiga Tiger Dragon
BPM: 92.5
Filesize: 11880kb
Play Time: 03:38
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.79 stars, 414 notes)
  2. Normal (3.97 stars, 239 notes)
Download: Kugimiya Rie - I MY
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Track No. 3 in Toradora! Character Song Album. <3
I MY by Kugimiya Rie (as Aisaka Taiga)
---Redownload, thx--


SPOILER
+Offset +25 thx to Alace
+Followed tieff and Nacho's suggestions/mod
+Some modding in IRC with Kiou2 and done =3
+Followed Shinx's and Taku's mod.
+Followed animask and Wojjan mod
+Moo Symbolic n JI <3.
+Ok, followed some of Gens'.
+Eph's Mod convinced me to remap some parts.
+Followed whymeman's posts
+Followed Gen's post.
Thanks to all who helped this map

Download: Kugimiya Rie - I MY (WyndII) [Hard1].osu
Last edited by WyndII , edited 35 times in total.
WubWoofWolf
Former osu! Champion: 2017
112 posts
Joined September 2008
WubWoofWolf
Very good map. Star :)
niedz
719 posts
Joined May 2008
niedz
D:
minyeob
osu! Alumni
2,540 posts
Joined May 2008
minyeob
Offset: 1,770

[Normal]
45:88(4)~47:83(7)-> Er.... This part sounds strange. You should remap this part.
2:19:13(1)-> Start on white thick

[Hard]
11:00(1)-> 1/8 beat snap divisor?!
1:46:86(1)-> Make farther from 1:46:37(11)

Awsome Storyboard~!
Starrred.
Alace
osu! Alumni
3,088 posts
Joined August 2008
Alace
cool SB
second offset:12185
some parts still sound a bit off because of the BGM
orz
alvisto
881 posts
Joined April 2009
alvisto
Hi !

NORMAL
01:03:914 - This part SB is cool
02:10:563 (5) - Make it look paralled to 4

HARD
Good !
1 suggestion though, make your last note a slider with a very slow BPM ?

Taiga ~~~ <3
Ok, Star !
WyndII
777 posts
Joined October 2008
Topic Starter
WyndII

minyeob wrote:

Offset: 1,770

[Normal]
45:88(4)~47:83(7)-> Er.... This part sounds strange. You should remap this part. I dont get it why I'll remap that part, it sounds fine and Im confused on how you mod >.>
2:19:13(1)-> Start on white thick nope

[Hard]
11:00(1)-> 1/8 beat snap divisor?!
1:46:86(1)-> Make farther from 1:46:37(11) The bpm change so as the spacing.. I think thats how that part flows

Awsome Storyboard~! Thank you! =3
Starrred.

alvisto wrote:

Hi ! Konnichiwa =3

NORMAL
01:03:914 - This part SB is cool Really? I like it too <3
02:10:563 (5) - Make it look paralled to 4 Why my editor says "Invalid Format" aznyway, fixed!

HARD
Good !
1 suggestion though, make your last note a slider with a very slow BPM ? Nope a note with a finish is just fine, I think.

Taiga ~~~ <3 yez, Taiga <3
Ok, Star !
Nachy
807 posts
Joined April 2009
Nachy
Awesome map and great Storyboarding. No problems found. Just a tiny suggestion.

[Hard]
03:26:130 - Add a note

Starred.
tieff
Featured Artist
2,254 posts
Joined March 2009
tieff
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WyndII
777 posts
Joined October 2008
Topic Starter
WyndII

NachoPiggy wrote:

Awesome map and great Storyboarding. No problems found. Just a tiny suggestion.

[Hard]
03:26:130 - Add a note added =3 I guess it also made my pattern pretty, i guess xD

Starred.

tieff wrote:

I love your SB. <3 ur maps too

[Normal]
00:14:45 (7,8) - Spacing. Its fine ~ said Alace xD
00:45:91 (4) - New combo? yes
01:40:72 (6) - Wtf? Loud... fixed >.> no more SB hitsound though
02:02:77 (5,6) - Spacing. O.o

[Hard]
01:35:53 (8,9) - Spacing.
01:40:725 - Wtf? So loud... Fixed

Star, cool map.
Hai, ty!!
kioukiou
774 posts
Joined June 2008
kioukiou
some modding in irc and done.

star.
Gabi
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Gabi
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Lizbeth
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Joined August 2008
Lizbeth
cool map
i loved the SB

just one thing that catch my attention:

Hard
00:12:18 (1) - this note is too fast after the spinner

star
good luck :)
Shinxyn
osu! Alumni
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Joined June 2008
Shinxyn
Nice Slideshow Storyboard :P
Lower hitsound audio a bit, the music and beatmap sounds clash a bit too much

Normal-
00:43:32 (1,2,3) - I don't like this in Normal, its too fast compared to the rest of the map... maybe reduce (1,2) by 1/2 beat, move (2) forward by 1/4 and reduce one repeat on 3? <<< what I suggested follows the vocal though
The notes are placed too scattered for me to Nazi~

Hard-
So much placement I want to nazi... but since its so scattered (design?), I shouldn't
Nazi-
00:10:24 (2) - add clap?
00:39:26 - felt like a note should be here (comparing to the last two combos that have this fast pace)
The map itself is hard to follow... oh well, nothing technically wrong

Redo Breaks for both diffs

Its faint, but I can see the light dots on the storyboard end (for To-Ra-Do-Ra-! and that skip), that's kinda... umm noticable for me, no biggie, but please trim those off (if you know what I'm talking about)
And I doubt people would understand the skip arrow right away for Normal, so just turn the rest of the storyboarding as Diff specific for Hard?
Takuma
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Takuma
Hard:
The spacing changes are a little hard to make out, imo. And the whistles towards the end are a little random - I mean, they sound nice but, yeah.

Normal:
When I choose this difficulty, a bg appears. Intentional?
02:19:15 (1) - Woah, really long spinner! You should end it at 02:24:509 imo.

Have a star~!
WyndII
777 posts
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Topic Starter
WyndII
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Hikato
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Hikato
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Henkie
728 posts
Joined July 2008
Henkie
Modded via IRC

No need to really re-map anything in [Hard]

Great map, starred :3
Sleep Powder
1,540 posts
Joined October 2008
Sleep Powder
Don't forget to add a Source and Tags

[Normal]
01:08:29 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This looks messy to me...

[Hard]
00:07:65 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - It might sound better if you continue with the clap pattern here too
01:15:42 (3) - Align with 1
01:28:40 (4) - Remove?
02:32:29 (5,1) - Whistles maybe?
02:37:80 (3) - ^
02:45:26 (1) - Raise hitsound volume a little
03:28:40 (1) - Change the whistle pattern here maybe?
Wojjan
806 posts
Joined August 2008
Wojjan
NORMAL

00:09:59 (1) - Delete this spinner. You'll see why when I get to the overall section.
00:14:45 (7) - Align with 5 and 8
01:15:42 (5) - Move 1 lvl 3 grid up, and...
01:15:75 (6) - align this with 1

Halven the BPM, place the slider tick rate at 2, and recalculate slider lengths. Kiai time will go slower, which would be better here.

HARD

00:01:81 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - I'd delete this entire part. It allows for a build up, and you get to grow accustomed to the song. Also see the overall section.
00:20:45 (4,5,6,7) - This is hard enough without jumps D=
00:22:23 (9,1) - Spacing
00:48:99 (1,2,3) - Move the entire combo to the blue ticks after every note!
01:52:40 (1) - Place on the blue tick BEFORE the current position
03:28:40 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Change this into a break
Once the pitch of the guitar lowers at (7)
03:33:26 (7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Spinner here!

OVERALL

Your patterns are really wild O.O
Disable count down, or storyboard one, so it will go like this:
00:11:22 (3...)
00:11:54 (2...)
00:11:86 (1...)
00:12:19 (GO!!)
You've managed to pull of that awesome SB already, so a countdown will be a breeze!

You get a star!
WyndII
777 posts
Joined October 2008
Topic Starter
WyndII

animask wrote:

Don't forget to add a Source and Tags :arrow: added

[Normal]
01:08:29 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This looks messy to me... :arrow: it shouldn't be messy >.< I just copied the first four notes then paste the other 4 below the first 4 o.o buuuut. I fixed it.


[Hard]
00:07:65 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - It might sound better if you continue with the clap pattern here too :arrow: you won't be hearing any claps coz whistles are loud
01:15:42 (3) - Align with 1 :arrow: lol fixed
01:28:40 (4) - Remove? :arrow:
02:32:29 (5,1) - Whistles maybe? :arrow:
02:37:80 (3) - ^ :arrow:
02:45:26 (1) - Raise hitsound volume a little :arrow:
03:28:40 (1) - Change the whistle pattern here maybe? X nooo, i love it. you love it too right? =3

Wojjan wrote:

NORMAL

00:09:59 (1) - Delete this spinner. You'll see why when I get to the overall section. :arrow: >w<
00:14:45 (7) - Align with 5 and 8 :arrow:
01:15:42 (5) - Move 1 lvl 3 grid up, and... :arrow: Changed the whole pattern
01:15:75 (6) - align this with 1 :arrow:

Halven the BPM, place the slider tick rate at 2, and recalculate slider lengths. Kiai time will go slower, which would be better here. :arrow: only on first chorus

HARD

00:01:81 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - I'd delete this entire part. It allows for a build up, and you get to grow accustomed to the song. Also see the overall section. X no
00:20:45 (4,5,6,7) - This is hard enough without jumps D= X na-uh
00:22:23 (9,1) - Spacing :arrow: ooh o.O
00:48:99 (1,2,3) - Move the entire combo to the blue ticks after every note! X no
01:52:40 (1) - Place on the blue tick BEFORE the current position X no >: sounds ugly
03:28:40 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Change this into a break X no
Once the pitch of the guitar lowers at (7)
03:33:26 (7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Spinner here! X no =-=

OVERALL

Your patterns are really wild O.O :arrow: O.O
Disable count down, or storyboard one, so it will go like this: :arrow: this will only be applied only on Normal, I'll ask someone who can make a cuty cute cute countdown =3
00:11:22 (3...)
00:11:54 (2...)
00:11:86 (1...)
00:12:19 (GO!!)
You've managed to pull of that awesome SB already, so a countdown will be a breeze! :arrow: putting a SB countdown is nice, i'll try =3

You get a star!
Thanks guys!
Symbolic
519 posts
Joined June 2008
Symbolic
[Normal]

00:57:91 (2) - New combo.
01:14:77 (3) - ^
01:34:88 (4) - ^
02:18:34 (3) - ^


[Hard]

00:04:08 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:05:05 (3) - New combo.
00:20:45 (4,5,6,7,8) - No :( not the jumps...
02:28:72 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:29:37 (1) - ^
02:30:02 (1) - ^
02:30:67 (1) - ^
02:54:50 (1) - Remove this new combo.
02:54:67 (1) - ^
02:54:99 (1) - ^
02:55:15 (1) - ^


Starred *
Jinxy
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Jinxy
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yeahyeahyeahhh
osu! Alumni
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yeahyeahyeahhh
Great map! There really isn't ANYTHING wrong! The SB was REALLY good. Like JInxyjem said, the SB feels like a video. It's awesome!
KIA
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Joined February 2009
KIA
:oops: I MY~~
Mafiamaster
osu! Alumni
3,460 posts
Joined July 2008
Mafiamaster
Niiiiiiiiice SB~~~

Normal~
02:19:15 (1) - Suggestion: Maybe start this at 02:19:32 instead.
WOW! Nice SB at the end lol.

Hard~
Awesome SB! =P
Didn't see anything wrong.
K2J
872 posts
Here since the beginning
K2J
[Normal]
Nice!

[Hard]
Rename to Insane? Especially since it's over 10 mil.
Storyboard: 02:28:40 (1) - Is this section of black intentional? Are the characters from the other difficulty supposed to drop in?

Otherwise,



Really nice-looking map, skin, storyboard. Keep it up!
WyndII
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Topic Starter
WyndII

K2J wrote:

[Hard]
Rename to Insane? Especially since it's over 10 mil. No need,My Hard is not actually that Insane , I think.
Storyboard: 02:28:40 (1) - Is this section of black intentional? Are the characters from the other difficulty supposed to drop in?this is intentional, the TO-RA-DO-RA-! characters is only for closing the Normal diff. ^-^

Otherwise,



Really nice-looking map, skin, storyboard. Keep it up!
THANKS!!!!!!XD
bmin11
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bmin11
I see no problems here

Nice BG :)
Starred
KIA
1,754 posts
Joined February 2009
KIA
Can't see these ugly "To Ra Do Ra !" hieroglyphs in the end of "Normal" :( :o :cry:
May be exchange them on colored circles?

Download: stuff.rar
heartnetkung
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Joined March 2009
heartnetkung
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Orkel
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Orkel
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Crazy Jay
482 posts
Joined October 2008
Crazy Jay
make a mark
I'll download this map if the download speed return to normal
Crazy Jay
482 posts
Joined October 2008
Crazy Jay
good map
+star
Gens
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Gens
[Kiai Time]
  1. Watch out! You can't have 2 Kiai fountains at almost the same time... Please regulate Kiai and limit yourself to place it only on the chorus. Also, it must be the same for both difficulties.
[All Difficulties]
00:12:19 - You forgot to Inherit this section.

[Normal]
  1. The difficulty ends with a black background, and it won't skip itself; It can be troublesome. Maybe just delete it?
00:20:53 (1) - Maybe shorten spinner abit? The next note is not easy to catch.
02:19:15 (1) - Same goes for this spinner.

[Hard]
00:12:50 (1,2) - You're keeping a steady rhythm here, so these sliders sound out of place.

~ ~ ~

Starred. Honestly, I'm not a fan of girlish anime songs, but here you go.
kino77
909 posts
Joined March 2009
kino77
Very good~


[Normal]
02:28:08(1)-Remove new combo?
02:28:40(2)-New combo?
02:30:67(x)-Add a note here?

[Hard]
00:51:75(3)-Move to 00:51:91?
00:52:08(4)-Move to 00:52:24?
00:52:40(5)-Remove?
00:52:73(6)-Move to 00:52:56?
00:52:89(x)-Add a note here?
01:55:32(3)-Move to 01:55:48?
01:55:64(4)-Move to 01:55:81?
01:55:97(5)-Move to 01:56:13?
01:56:29(6)-Move to 01:56:46?

Star~
WyndII
777 posts
Joined October 2008
Topic Starter
WyndII
I'm so sorry to the previous modders D=
Im actually remapping Hard!
But Thanks for checking!!

I should post this in OP
Jarby
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Joined August 2008
Jarby
You should probably have moved this from Pending since it isn't complete.
Hitoshirenu Shourai
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Here since the beginning
Hitoshirenu Shourai
Hurry up and finish Hard, I wanna bubble or rank this. =(
WyndII
777 posts
Joined October 2008
Topic Starter
WyndII
So JJJ, moved this to WIP
and Hito convinced me to work with this, and i did aaand
you cant rank this after I uploaded the new version >.> needs other BAT approval right? but
you can bubble it :lol:
and now it's done

Some clarifications:

Gens wrote:

[Kiai Time]
  1. Watch out! You can't have 2 Kiai fountains at almost the same time... Please regulate Kiai and limit yourself to place it only on the chorus. Also, it must be the same for both difficulties.
:arrow: ok fixed
[All Difficulties]
00:12:19 - You forgot to Inherit this section. :arrow: if i did, it will ruin my map D+
Hitoshirenu Shourai
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Hitoshirenu Shourai
Awesome. Still awesome. More awesome? Maybe. Just... <3
Cyril Scarlet
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Cyril Scarlet
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whymeman
osu! Alumni
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whymeman
Hmmm....

[Normal]

00:14:45 (7,8) - This is the only jump I see in this difficulty, though normal wouldn't feel right with jumps honestly. Please check into this.
01:08:29 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - In the shape here, (5) is kidna off. It can look much neater if lined up with (2).
02:02:13 (3) - Bottomed out of the window...

Make sure to double check the spacing on this difficulty.

[Hard]

Seems okay, though the combo placement feels a bit odd...


Another thing I want to point out is that you have a large amount of the SB objects in .jpeg format instead of .png. I know .png's take a great load of space but it does help with the quality as i'm seeing the pixels being streched out in a way that makes it look less neat (example at 02:08:94). Make sure to check into that as well. After the fixes are done, let me know and i'll check into bubbling.
WyndII
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Topic Starter
WyndII
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Yes_old
525 posts
Joined May 2009
Yes_old
great map (:!
WyndII
777 posts
Joined October 2008
Topic Starter
WyndII
thanks~ ^-^
whymeman
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whymeman
Almost...

[Normal]

01:10:56 (8) - Not lined up with (3) above it.


Just that small fix and then i'll bubble.

Edit: Error fixed and bubble for you.
Sir Minelli
524 posts
Joined September 2008
Sir Minelli
A well made map needs well placed timing sections~


[Normal]

01:26:13 - What is this timing section doing here? It doesn't change anything.


[Hard]

The following timing sections are placed right on top of the beats / sliders.
If a player clicks to early, he will get the previous timing section sound / properties.
Place them a couple of ticks before.

00:48:83 -
00:54:34 -
00:54:99 -
01:20:94 -
01:58:56 -

02:28:40 - Timing section doesn't change anything. (also, if you are adding something to it, make sure to place it before the beat)

Again, the following timing sections are placed right on top of the beats / sliders:

02:45:26 -
02:54:34 -
02:55:64 -

Other than that, nice map.
WyndII
777 posts
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Topic Starter
WyndII
I have changed the placement of the sections
gdeath
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gdeath
>Sir Minelli

I don't think it would prevent it of being ranked.
however WyndII have changed the timing and poped bubble by himself ;_;

star for you.WyndII
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