1. ADVANCED (3.99 stars, 341 notes)
2. EXHAUST (5.56 stars, 613 notes)
3. NOVICE (1.77 stars, 120 notes)
4. TAKA (5.52 stars, 432 notes)

1. Fix the redlines in all the difficulties, they are a bit different now:
   
   I can check the timing if you want, but later. I'm really tired now ;w;

1. 00:01:583 (1,2,3,4) - I think you spaced a little bit more 00:01:583 (1,2) - these two notes on purpose, but while playing it looks like a little spacing error. Consider increasing the distance between 00:01:583 (1) - this note and 00:01:741 (2,3,4) - these three a little bit more, in alternative use the same spacing for all the four notes. Same for the other patterns like this in the intro.
   
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2. 00:07:581 (3,4) - These two notes and 00:08:844 (3,4) - these other two are unsnapped by ~1ms! Snap them correctly. Same for 00:17:844 (2) - and 00:19:107 (2) - .
3. 00:16:741 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - What about increasing the spacing every couple of notes? The pattern would become more and more awesome in my opinion! Also, the distance from 00:17:687 (1,2) - this couple of notes and 00:18:004 (1,2) - this other couple of notes is different compared to the others!
   
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4. 00:26:214 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Are you sure about this? The stacked stream (00:26:530 (3,4,5,6,1) - ) is totally unreadable, also it looks really strange in my opinion. You should stack it under 00:26:293 (2) - 's tail as you did 00:23:688 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - here.
   
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5. 00:35:056 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Well, this is playable, but really unreadable! You can't read 00:35:372 (5,6,7) - these three notes, they are unpredictable. In addition, they aren't really nice to see and play, but I'm sure you can make an amazing and better pattern!
6. 00:40:741 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is excessive! The spacing is too different and it doesn't look really good esthetically. Consider changing it something different, a star for example:
   
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7. 01:14:529 (2) - As AiMod says, this slider is unsnapped, so snap it correctly. Same for 01:46:029 (5) -.
8. 01:30:004 (1,2,1,2) - These sliders are snapped uncorrectly, each one should start on the white tick and then end on the red one.
9. 01:31:898 (5,6,7,8,1) - Consider stacking these notes manually or you'll break the star pattern while playing. I mean, the first note of the stacked stream (01:31:898 (5) - ) will not appear on the same row of 01:31:741 (4) - this one:
   
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10. 01:40:109 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - Please, change this pattern is something different, it's totally unplayable.
11. 01:46:267 (1,2,3,4) - Here you have set the greenlines uncorrectly, so the elements appear wrongly snapped. Remove the ones at the positions below since they aren't useful:
    
    1. 106504
    2. 106741
    3. 106977

1. There are some unsnapped objects. Check them using AiMod.
2. 00:18:872 (9,10) - Consider moving 00:19:109 (10) - this slider a bit down (x:200 y:384 should be fine, for example) to remove the overlap between 00:18:872 (9,10) - these two sliders since I don't find this cool esthetically.
3. 00:27:004 (2,3) - At this moment 00:26:846 (1,2,3,4) - these elements are stacked, and I'd like to move a bit instead of stop on them, so, what about reversing these two notes (CTRL+G)?
4. 00:44:688 (1,1) - I'd suggest to fill the empty space between these two elements adding a note on the white tick (00:45:162 (2) - here) since there is a sound on it that should be considered.
5. 01:09:477 (2,1) - These two elements seem distant just by 1/4, so, increase the spacing between them for a better readability.
6. 01:52:819 (1) - I don't expect that this beat is on a blue tick, so, add a note on the downbeat (01:52:740 (2) - ) since there is a sound that should be mapper, in my opinion. After that, a player should be able to understand that 01:52:977 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - this stream starts on a blue tick.

1. Please, use AR8! AR7 isn't good here, there are doublets, triples, and some (I don't know how they are called, the streams composed by 4 notes like 00:25:188 (4,5,6,7) - this one), and AR8 makes them perfectly readable.
2. 01:24:635 (2,1,2,3) - I would suggest to change this in the pattern above to remove the overlap created between 01:24:635 (2,3) - these two elements:
   
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1. 00:32:530 (4,1,2) - What about making them a little bit more spaced? At this moment they are a bit overlapped, so I'd suggest to do this change. Same thing for 01:18:004 (2,3,4) - this pattern.
   
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2. 00:52:109 (1,1,1) - These spinners are too hard for a novice in my opinion. Consider removing them and placing some objects instead.
3. 00:59:688 (1) - Let the break start immediately after this spinner please! Okay, there is different sound at 01:04:741 (1) - , but it doesn't fit anyways.

Nemis wrote:

Here as asked, gowww!

[General]

1. Fix the redlines in all the difficulties, they are a bit different now:
   I can check the timing if you want, but later. I'm really tired now ;w;

[NOVICE]

1. 00:32:530 (4,1,2) - What about making them a little bit more spaced? At this moment they are a bit overlapped, so I'd suggest to do this change. Same thing for 01:18:004 (2,3,4) - this pattern. fix
   
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2. 00:52:109 (1,1,1) - These spinners are too hard for a novice in my opinion. Consider removing them and placing some objects instead. fix spin ---> 2 slider~~ and circle
3. 00:59:688 (1) - Let the break start immediately after this spinner please! Okay, there is different sound at 01:04:741 (1) - , but it doesn't fit anyways. fix

Nice diff. I'm a bit unsure on the crushed sliders, but this shouldn't be a big problem.


The spread is well balanced. Good luck!

CakiP wrote:

request~~ !

[NOVICE]
01:41:372 (2,3) - すこしくっついてるのが気になりました。

スライダーが素晴らしいです・・・!

CakiP wrote:

[ADVANCED]
01:30:162 (2) - これちょっと隠れてるのが気になった~ たしかに隠れてた。もし他の人にも指摘されるようなら直すね～