Shinxyn wrote:

You wrote "disappearance" wrong (you forgot the "e")
And maybe add vocaloid as a tag, and "cosMo" (the song creator) as source (or add to tag)
Offset +5
Fixed.

Easy- can be a bit easier-
00:41:21 (4) - this was difficult to follow since it was a quick pace compared to the start of map @_@ (i know its your own beat... but still..)
01:27:46 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:45:21 (3) - ^
01:51:96 (1,2) - ^
eh? The spacings are exactly half of the previous >_>
I know the 1/2 beats are to vocal, but the map itself seems to follow 1/1 better.... (making easy easier~), maybe hide the 1/2 beats with sliders more? xD
Fixed almost of them.

Normal-
00:41:21 (4) - same as Easy, this flows weird, you can't really... see or hear it coming ._.
01:45:21 (3) - ^
Spacings are already right >_>
02:18:08 (1) - might as well have the spinner start in same place as Hard/Insane/Uninstall
Fixed.

Hard-
Nazi-
00:33:71 (7) - remove this whistle (I think it sounds better...)
00:44:21 - ?!?! where'd this clap come from?! what? huh? -confused- anyways, can you lower the extra clap volume to match the maps? (same goes for the rest like this..)
00:58:83 (4) - I kinda don't like the whistles coming in after those claps discontinue.. maybe - 00:57:46 (4) - replace the last clap with finish?
02:01:96 (1) - I think the claps should've ended here instead

Insane-
Honestly no problems just wondering- (nazi)
01:39:46 (2) - the repeats are on 1/3... on purpose? (seeing the next slider like this is on 1/4, and the one after that is 1/3 again, so i think it is on purpose, just wondering)
I heard the hihat-close sounds like that.
02:17:21 (11) - new combo to make it more clear that its stacked?
Fixed.
Huh, so this is where those custom soft hitsounds go...
It placed on hihat-close sounds.

Uninstall-
Yay!
Out of pure perfectionism-
01:04:96 (3) - nudge the endpoint a bit lower, its not "perfectly aligned" with the start xD
I wonder if deathmaps like this is allowed anymore, I sure hope this is
I've tried it but it can't align perfectly =_="

All-
02:22:52 (1) - does this have to be snapped on the 1/4? i think the 1/1 is fine O_o
1/1 is not snapped to anything.

Gabi wrote:

um nice map, i just have one thing to mention

[Uninstall]

01:29:96 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,
1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,
1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,
1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,
1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,
1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,1) -

WHAT THE FUCK?

IMHO remapp all of that.... if not then fix some of the wrong spacings and alot of the overlapping sliders <_<

Mafiamaster wrote:

Normal~
01:37:96 (1) - Shorten to the white tick?

That's the only problem I've found~

DJPop wrote:

I can get all 300 from 01:29:96 (1) to 01:53:96 (1) <_<

Larto wrote:

WHAT STORYBOARD!!! I'll do it no matter what it's supposed to be, this song/map is awesome. I'm just sad you didn't map the full version. :[

Gabi wrote:

thats because all of them are sliders.

i know you are trying to make the hardest maps in the game thats fine by me, and i usually like your maps. but keep in mind this is 240 fucking bpm with a spaced out stream like this

01:53:96 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,
1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,
1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,
1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24) -

the least thing you could do is 0.3-0.5x distans snap on those streams. these streams are faster then the kanbu streams by 40bpm.

anyways, im not gonna force you to change anything, i just want to tell you how it looks like. keep it if you like i dont really care

sorry if i offended you.

1. 00:41:967 (1) - symmetrical slider is more beautiful, of course you can keep it
2. 01:33:967 (1) - ^

minyeob wrote:

[Overall]
Need a kiai time I guess.
Coming soon...

[Normal]
00:45:96 (1) - Extend 1/4 beat?
X

[Uninstall]
Streams=Checked.
?

Breeze wrote:

[Normal]

1. 00:41:967 (1) - symmetrical slider is more beautiful, of course you can keep it
   Spacing made me to map it like that >_>
2. 01:33:967 (1) - ^
   Fixed.

animask wrote:

I'm mapping the full version of this~
Yeah, I saw it =P

[Easy]
Increase slider tick rate? =X lulz
lol ok

[Normal]
00:58:84 (3) - Move 3 here
01:00:84 (3) - ^
I think the old one might more easily to follow.

[Uninstall]
The deathstream(s) at the end worries me the most...
Singing the song and playing it might both be slightly impossible.
lol

Symbolic wrote:

[Easy]
00:45:71 (3) - New combo.
X
00:45:96 (1) - Remove new combo.
Fixed.
00:46:71 (2) - New combo.
Fixed.
02:22:529 (x) - Add a spinner from 02:22:529 to 02:24:154 here.
Fixed.

[Insane]
01:54:21 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Remove new combo's.
I used for removing the following points.

Takuma wrote:

Insane:
01:54:21 (1,1,1,1) - For this and the rest of the new combo stream, take it easy. Maybe you could just stick to the new combo every four beats thing you had going on.
I want to hide the following points.

Honestly, that's all I can complain about - unless you want me to rant about Uninstall. ;P
No, thanks. =P