Hinsvar wrote:

>Dekaane's Easy

1. 00:08:947 (2) - Move this to (291,286) to make the space between 00:07:683 (1,2) similar to 00:06:420 (4,1)? It'ill look more consistent and neater, IMO. /*Done
2. 00:08:947 (2,1) - ...Is this kind of spacing inconsistent a valid pattern for an Easy diff, actually? o.o /*Oops.
3. 00:12:736 (1) - Shape the slider to something like this to make a smoother flow from this slider to 00:13:999 (2)? /*Actually it is parallel to 00:11:473 (2), but moved some stuff ther to make smoother the flow.
4. 00:41:157 (4,1) - Swap NC? I believe you're applying NCs every two stanzas, and you're following the music, not the vocal, so...? /*Done
5. 00:53:473 (5) - Apply NC here because of the same reason as the suggestion above. /*I'd rather keep the long combo than a combo for that single slider, they're still part of the same phrase.
6. 01:33:432 (1) - Ctrl+H (flipping this horizontally) gives a better flow, actually, since 01:31:106 (2)'s flow is going clockwise, while this slider goes counterclockwise, making the transition here uncomfortable. /*That'd ruin a bit the flow in 01:33:432 (1,2), keeping this note as it is.
7. 01:34:221 (2,3) - Inconsistent spacing, and it's totally unreadable. /*aaa this part messed up, fixed sliders.
8. 01:35:958 (1,2,3,4) - Any reason why are the sliders like this? Lengthening them by 1/4 beats won't hurt, and is actually following the song better, IMO. I just can't see what are you following on those blue ticks. /*^
9. 01:55:852 (3) - It'll be better to rotate this 70 degrees clockwise to preserve the flow from 01:53:642 (2). /*The flow there fits nicely with the guitar imo, and it's not harsh to be ankward to play.
10. 02:29:168 (1) - It will be better to start this slider at 02:29:010. A light cymbal (?) plays there, and I feel that needs to be followed more than 02:29:167, which doesn't seem to have anything. /*In the previous combo I followed vocals for the long sliders and it'd be expected that here I'd be following vocals imo.
11. 02:37:378 (4,1) - Swap NC for the same reason as 00:41:157 (4,1)? /*Done
12. 02:49:694 (5) - Same as 00:53:473 (5). /*Ditto

Guy wrote:

Hi! from your request :3

Red : You must be fix.
Blue : You should be fix.
Black : Just suggestion.


[General]

1. Combo color 6 and 7 is too similar. Please change or remove either. - Really? Might lighten seven up more then.
2. Please uncheck Widescreen support. - Faust is finishing up a storyboard which will be widescreen.

[Insane]

1. HP&OD9 ;_; - Best settings, anything less feels far too lenient and the map has enough note density to remain alive anyhow.
2. 01:29:816 (2) - Add NC. Because HP drain is too high. - Vocal break-up per word not syllable and this drain section is perfectly fine in my opinion.
   
   nothing to say x_x

[Hard]

1. 00:55:526 (10) - Stack to 00:55:683 (1) - the head. fit the vocal better than current one. - These are stacked due to the
2. 00:58:052 (1,2) - hmm sounds werid this slider. here my suggestion. - This is mapped to the guitar riffs for the rhythm that's there at the moment.
   
   
   00:58:052 - add note
   00:58:210 - add 1/1 slider
   00:58:683 - add note
   try it~
   
3. 01:33:432 (1) - Just a suggestion. like this? - Same as above and it ruins the ryhthm/feeling of the song with the additional break-up in my opinion.
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 02:26:326 (5) - Add clap instead of finish? - Finish is to match that high hat hit.
   
5. 02:33:589 (1) - Remove NC? I felt that don't need one. - It's a new musical phrase and nothing connected to the prior (1,2).
6. 02:54:273 (1,2) - same as 00:58:052 (1,2) - here.

[meiikyuu's Normal]

1. 00:15:578 (1,2) - stack them properly? - Corrected.
2. 01:21:262 (2,3) - ^ - Corrected.
3. 01:34:853 (3,4) - I think that follow the vocal better than current one. try my suggestion. - Changed differently but I got your point with this.
   
   
4. 01:37:221 (2) - Remove finish from the slider? - Hitsounding is consistent throughout the entire set so this stays as it brings a new tone to this segment of music to make it feel truly unique.

Good luck~