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zerosmart
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Cyril Scarlet
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DJPop
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- Source: Hatsukoi Limited
- Tags: anime


~Easy~
00:37:48 (3) - new combo น่าจะดีกว่า
00:48:09 (1,2,3,4) - spacing ไม่เท่ากับชุดที่แล้ว ดูไม่สวย >_>
01:07:48 (2) - new combo
01:09:32 (5) - new combo น่าจะดีกว่า
01:12:09 (4) - ลบออกน่าจะดีกว่า
01:22:24 (3) - new combo
01:42:55 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - spacing ซ้ายกับขวาห่างเกินไป ทำให้เท่ากับแนวตั้ง
01:49:94 (1,2,3) - ย้าไปบนสุดดีกว่า
01:51:32 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ไว้ล่างโน๊ตน้ำเงิน แก้ spacing ด้วย
02:17:63 (2) - new combo
02:19:47 (6) - new combo
02:19:94 (7) - ย้ายไป 02:20:172
02:19:47 (6,7) - อย่าซ้อนกัน
02:25:94 (2) - new combo
02:26:40 (1) - remove new combo
02:27:32 (3) - new combo
02:31:01 (3) - ^
02:34:94 (6) - ^
02:40:24 (3,4) - สลับตำแหน่งกัน
03:18:55 (5) - new combo
03:27:32 (4,5) - เลื่อนให้ห่างจาก (3)
03:27:32 (4) - new combo น่าจะดีกว่า
03:52:71 (7) - ไว้ตรง (1)
03:56:864 - ทำไงก็ได้ให้มีโน๊ตตรงนี้ >_>

~Normal~ ปุ่มเล็กเกิน =_="
00:32:40 (1,2,3) - เลื่อนลงมาหน่อย
00:37:94 (5) - ใกล้ (4) ไป
00:38:63 (6) - new combo
01:07:48 (3) - เลื่อนขึ้นหน่อย
01:14:40 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - spacing แนวตั้งมันเล็กกว่าแนวนอน
01:19:94 (3,4) - spacing ผิด
01:20:40 (4) - เด้ง 3 ครั้ง
01:43:47 (4,5,6) - ห่าง (3) กับ (7) หน่อย
01:47:17 (4,5,6) - ^
01:49:94 (1,2,3,4,5) - ห่างไปหน่อย เทียบกับโน๊ตชุดต่อไป
02:04:24 (1) - ใกล้ (2) ไป
03:18:55 (5) - วางกลางๆระหว่าง (4) กับ (6)
03:27:09 (1,2,3,4,5) - spacing ผิด
03:37:48 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ห่างกว่านี้น่าจะดีกว่า
03:52:71 (7) - ไหงตัวนี้ไม่ไว้ตรงกลางล่ะ -.-

~Hard~ จะวางโน๊ตแบบนี้ให้ได้เลยสินะ -.-
00:18:55 (4) - new combo
00:33:78 (6) - ^
00:38:40 (2,3,4,5,6) - ใกล้ไป
00:48:09 (3) - new combo
01:11:17 (5) - ^
01:17:63 (7) - ^
02:15:32 (6) - ^
02:22:47 (9) - ^
02:30:78 (6) - ^
02:33:78 (5) - ^
02:39:32 (2,3) - ห่างไป
03:39:78 (3) - new combo
03:40:71 (1) - remove new combo
03:42:55 (3) - new combo

~Crazy Jump & Non STOP~ ชื่อยาวไป >_>
00:18:55 (4) - new combo
00:25:01 (3) - ^
00:29:63 (4) - ^
00:34:24 (1) - remove new combo
00:37:94 (7) - new combo
00:44:40 (2) - ^
00:48:09 (3) - ^
00:52:71 (4) - ^
00:56:86 (1,1,1) - remove new combo
01:02:40 (1,1,1) - ^
01:07:24 (4) - new combo
01:11:17 (5) - ^
01:14:40 (5) - ^
01:17:63 (11) - ^
01:27:78 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - spacing ไม่ผ่าน
01:33:32 (1) - remove new combo
01:38:86 (4) - new combo
01:40:01 (1) - remove new combo
01:41:17 (4) - new combo
01:45:32 (8) - ^
01:49:01 (8) - ^
02:09:32 (4) - ตกขอบจอ ไม่ผ่าน
02:15:32 (6) - new combo
02:22:47 (9) - ^
02:26:86 (3,4,5,6) - spacing ไม่เท่ากัน
02:26:86 (3,4,5,6) - ^
02:30:78 (6) - new combo
02:33:78 (5) - ^
02:55:01 (1,2) - ใกล้ไป
03:06:32 (4) - new combo
03:15:32 (6) - ^
03:40:59 (1) - วางผิดที่ - -
03:42:55 (4) - new combo


ผิดเยอะมาก ยังไม่ให้ดาวนะ =_="
Topic Starter
Cyril Scarlet
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orioncomet
Slider Tick Rate 2
HP Draian Rate 6 (นอกนั้นยังไงก็ช่าง)
หาสีคอมโบมาใส่หน่อย

[Hard]
overall +1
00:41:403(1) - ให้จบที่ 00:41:633
02:51:095 เบรคนานมากเลยอะ หาอะไรมาใส่หน่อยเดียวรอเบื่อ
03:57:095(3) - เสียงจบ

[Jump & Non Stop] << N - S ตัวใหญ่
พยายามเว้นช่วงให้เท่าๆกันทั้งเพลง
Distance spacing ใช้ 1.3 หรือ 1.0 ไปเลย =3 < วิธีการปรับตรงนี้ ตอนกำลังทำแมพ กด Alt แช่ไว้ ดูมุมขวาบน จะมีให้ปรับ =P >
00:58:249 - kiai time =3
01:05:172 - add note
02:10:249(1,1,1,1) - ให้ห่างกับ(5)อีก
02:12:095 - kiai time =3
03:57:095(3) - เสียงจบ



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Topic Starter
Cyril Scarlet

orioncomet wrote:

Slider Tick Rate 2
HP Draian Rate 6 (นอกนั้นยังไงก็ช่าง)
หาสีคอมโบมาใส่หน่อย ??

[Hard]
overall +1 ??
00:41:403(1) - ให้จบที่ 00:41:633
02:51:095 เบรคนานมากเลยอะ หาอะไรมาใส่หน่อยเดียวรอเบื่อ ยัดเพิ่มละงับ
03:57:095(3) - เสียงจบ ใส่ไว้ที่ 3 ไว้ละ แต่ถ้า ทั้หมดของลาก 3 มันแปลกๆ เลยใส่ไว้ตัว 3 กับจัหวะจบ

[Jump & Non Stop] << N - S ตัวใหญ่
พยายามเว้นช่วงให้เท่าๆกันทั้งเพลง
Distance spacing ใช้ 1.3 หรือ 1.0 ไปเลย =3 < วิธีการปรับตรงนี้ ตอนกำลังทำแมพ กด Alt แช่ไว้ ดูมุมขวาบน จะมีให้ปรับ =P >
00:58:249 - kiai time =3
01:05:172 - add note Done
02:10:249(1,1,1,1) - ให้ห่างกับ(5)อีก Done
02:12:095 - kiai time =3 ??
03:57:095(3) - เสียงจบ ตาม ความเห็น hard

Thankyou for your mod m(_ _)m จุ๊บ ๆ ♥



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gdeath
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Cyril Scarlet
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Cyril Scarlet
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Yuukari-Banteki
[Easy]
00:18:55 (3) - hitsound the end
01:19:94 (4,1,2) - hitsounds in here
01:55:24 (1,2,3,4,1,1,1,1,1) - ^
02:25:01 (1) - add a note one full beat before this?
02:51:09 - 25 seconds of break is FAR too long
03:39:78 (3) - move 1/2 earlier
03:39:78 (3,1) - put a note in the middle of this
a few more hitsounds would be nice


[Normal]
00:18:55 (3) - hitsound the end
01:14:40 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - spacing feels too cramped for the time between notes
01:24:78 (3,1) - ^
01:31:47 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1,1,2,3) - hitsounds please
01:56:86 (6) - hitsound the end
02:01:01 (3) - do you hear the finish in the music? i think you should use finishes when the music also has finishes
02:41:63 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1) - hitsounds please
map part of the 25 second break
ending needs more hitsounds
03:45:78 (4) - spacing


[Hard]
00:18:55 (1) - hitsound the end
there are sections that have very few or no hitsounds that you should probably put more in
01:27:78 (1,2,3,4) - i love these hitsounds~ <3
please run AImod on this difficulty (ctrl-shift-a)
01:51:32 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ugh
03:39:78 (1,2,1,2) - feels/sounds weird


[Jump]
00:18:55 (1) - finish the end
work on your hitsounds
01:16:71 (6) - spacing is too close
ok you really do need a break in here
run AImod on this difficulty
03:16:71 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,2) - unintuitive spacing
Topic Starter
Cyril Scarlet

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Easy]
00:18:55 (3) - hitsound the end Done
01:19:94 (4,1,2) - hitsounds in here Done
01:55:24 (1,2,3,4,1,1,1,1,1) - ^ Done
02:25:01 (1) - add a note one full beat before this? Done
02:51:09 - 25 seconds of break is FAR too long Done
03:39:78 (3) - move 1/2 earlier Done
03:39:78 (3,1) - put a note in the middle of this Done
a few more hitsounds would be nice


[Normal]
00:18:55 (3) - hitsound the end Done
01:14:40 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - spacing feels too cramped for the time between notes Done
01:24:78 (3,1) - ^ Done
01:31:47 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1,1,2,3) - hitsounds please Done
01:56:86 (6) - hitsound the end Done
02:01:01 (3) - do you hear the finish in the music? i think you should use finishes when the music also has finishes Done
02:41:63 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1) - hitsounds please Done
map part of the 25 second break Done
ending needs more hitsounds Done
03:45:78 (4) - spacing Done


[Hard]
00:18:55 (1) - hitsound the end Done
there are sections that have very few or no hitsounds that you should probably put more in
01:27:78 (1,2,3,4) - i love these hitsounds~ <3
please run AImod on this difficulty (ctrl-shift-a) Done
01:51:32 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ugh Done
03:39:78 (1,2,1,2) - feels/sounds weird Done


[Jump]
00:18:55 (1) - finish the end Done
work on your hitsounds
01:16:71 (6) - spacing is too close Done
ok you really do need a break in here
run AImod on this difficulty Done
03:16:71 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,2) - unintuitive spacing Done
Yuukari-Banteki
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Cyril Scarlet
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orioncomet
ไหนฟะดาว ยังไม่เห็นจะมีเลยดาว? ละเอี่ยวบอกไร แมพลุงอามมีดาวแล้วอัพเดทด้วย
ไม่เห็นมีเลยไง -*-????
Topic Starter
Cyril Scarlet
ไม่ใช่ดาวนั้นหนู

แค่บอกว่าได้ดาวจากเขา

ก็ดาวทั่วไปที่คนอื่นให้นี่แหละ - -

ปล.แค่ดีใจที่ยังอุตส่ามีค้างคาวหลงมาดูให้
orioncomet
ก็เอี่ยวบอก แมพลุงอามมีดาวแล้วนะ อัพเดทด้วย << ??

หมายความว่าไงฟ่ะ ไม่รู้แล้วพูดนี่นา - -*
Topic Starter
Cyril Scarlet
ถ้าไม่ใช่แม็พเป้อแต่สมัยก่อนมาตลอด หรือซี้กันนี่

ขอหยาบทีนะ

แม่มยากชิบเป๋งกว่าจะได้รับคำตอบที่ทำจริง ที่ไม่ใช่พูดไปเรื่อยพอผ่านๆตอนถาม -..-
orioncomet
=o=" ใจเย็นๆเนอะ
yongtw123
My humble opinions:

[Easy]
Good :D

[Normal]
01:25:710 jump is somewhat unexpected, consider shortening the distance?
02:02:403 jump is a little long if compared with the one on 01:58:249 (around 2 to 3 tiny grids)
02:50:864 - 03:03:787 there should be a break here :)

[Hard]
00:19:480 HP drains real fast after here (rather long gap until the spinner)
02:25:018 jump rather too long
03:37:480 - 03:42:095 distance is pretty random at this part, but maybe that's for difficulty reasons...

[Jump]
00:19:480 (same as [Hard])
And I guess there isn't much to say since this is supposed to be a "jumpy" map lol

All maps have one thing in common: random spacing, but that's not too bad. It's just that people who haven't listened to this music may have a hard time predicting the beats. Still... erm... I like consistent spacing (that's just me, that's just me).

And I also suggest you to change combo colors. Makes the map pretty :D
Topic Starter
Cyril Scarlet

yongtw123 wrote:

My humble opinions:

[Easy]
Good :D

[Normal]
01:25:710 jump is somewhat unexpected, consider shortening the distance? Done
02:02:403 jump is a little long if compared with the one on 01:58:249 (around 2 to 3 tiny grids)
02:50:864 - 03:03:787 there should be a break here :)

[Hard]
00:19:480 HP drains real fast after here (rather long gap until the spinner)
02:25:018 jump rather too long Done
03:37:480 - 03:42:095 distance is pretty random at this part, but maybe that's for difficulty reasons...

[Jump]
00:19:480 (same as [Hard]) Done
And I guess there isn't much to say since this is supposed to be a "jumpy" map lol

All maps have one thing in common: random spacing, but that's not too bad. It's just that people who haven't listened to this music may have a hard time predicting the beats. Still... erm... I like consistent spacing (that's just me, that's just me).

And I also suggest you to change combo colors. Makes the map pretty :D
Thank for test ^^
ztrot
I would do more but at this time I'm hit up for time so I'll shoot a star your way.
Topic Starter
Cyril Scarlet
ok, thank for come to see.
dkey
star~ :)
Topic Starter
Cyril Scarlet
Oh,

Thank you Satosid for see my map ^o^
mtmcl
Really fun map. After some irc discussion, I'm now willing to bubble this. (plus a star for priority)
Topic Starter
Cyril Scarlet
thank you mtmcl for come to test my map long time in tonight .

m(_ _)m
orioncomet
อย่าอัพเดท จนกว่าจะมีค้างคาวมาม็อดแล้วบอกว่า "ถ้าแก้ไขแล้วจะมารีบับเบิ้ล" ไม่งั้นฟองแตกแล้วไม่มีคนมารีบับเบิ้ลแน่

ปล. บทเรียนจากคิวคุง +.+
taNa
i love this anime <3
and nice map! star~☆

おはよう、タイ
Topic Starter
Cyril Scarlet
星ありがとうですTanaさん!

あと、おはよう日本ww
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Cyril Scarlet
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miccoliasms
nice map!!
ランク化願ってます♪
あ、おはよう、タイ
Topic Starter
Cyril Scarlet
わざわざ見に来て頂いてうれしいっす。

あ、オハヨウ日本 ヾ(^∇^)
Kharl
Did a bit of modding through PMs. Mostly weeded out some bad short sliders, corrected spacing, and fixed some skinning and storyboard issues. This map is now ready for ranking.

*Bubbled*
mtmcl
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Topic Starter
Cyril Scarlet
Ok , Now I'm resize already :?
mtmcl
Considering the skin and sb, this file size is a lot more acceptable. Here's your bubble back. Get Kharl or someone to rank this.
vytalibus
Popping.

Offset's off by +41 ms. Personally, I'd move it to 13,980 ms instead 'coz I like my measures organized.

[Normal]
A lot of useless non-inherited timing sections. Delete them.
01:23:67 (1) - I'd have to say this slider's quite questionable, considering the very huge circle size makes it look like a very unreadable slider.
Topic Starter
Cyril Scarlet
EDIT already

ps. after pm to you I'm cheeck again and ask many peple and bat

I think offset 13950 is better.
Takuma
I'll provide my offset suggestion - 13,970 ms. I get the best results with this offset, so please try it. The SB, song and stuff is cute by the way. XD Have a star!
Topic Starter
Cyril Scarlet
thank you for testing TAKUMA >v<//

Now I'm go to EDIT already !
Takuma
SB:
01:07:046 - There's an extra "todoke hanatte".

Normal:
00:49:970 - The break has disappeared? >A</

It's all I can complain about. XD
Topic Starter
Cyril Scarlet
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Takuma
Bubble for you! Good map!
mtmcl
Alright, offset fixed, file size good, beautiful map. I love the jump difficulty. <3
Gabi
damnit mark! i was just going to complain about the skin D: cursor is stupid and hitburst too >.<

other then that, i thought this was a very good map i liked it a lot. but the cursor.. orz >.<
Furawa
❤~
Derekku

Gabi wrote:

damnit mark! i was just going to complain about the skin D: cursor is stupid and hitburst too >.<

other then that, i thought this was a very good map i liked it a lot. but the cursor.. orz >.<
wtf.. that cursor is sexy =(
SNZ_old
すんごい綺麗なスキン
osuはどれも絵作りのレベルが高くて最高!
Easyだけど、一番乗りもらったぁ!(笑)
Kujo
One of the most annoying note skins i've ever seen, holy shit.
Takuma
If it's really that annoying to you, delete the stuff and stop complaining. It's not that hard to do.
Topic Starter
Cyril Scarlet

Gabi wrote:

damnit mark! i was just going to complain about the skin D: cursor is stupid and hitburst too >.<

other then that, i thought this was a very good map i liked it a lot. but the cursor.. orz >.<
Thank you Gabi ~

and if you don't want to use skin you can replace that =w=b

SOGASOGAMO wrote:

❤~
♥ ♥ ♥

Derekku Chan wrote:

Gabi wrote:

damnit mark! i was just going to complain about the skin D: cursor is stupid and hitburst too >.<

other then that, i thought this was a very good map i liked it a lot. but the cursor.. orz >.<
wtf.. that cursor is sexy =(
haha , sexy =w="


Takuma wrote:

If it's really that annoying to you, delete the stuff and stop complaining. It's not that hard to do.

SNZ wrote:

すんごい綺麗なスキン
osuはどれも絵作りのレベルが高くて最高!
Easyだけど、一番乗りもらったぁ!(笑)
ありがとうございます!

やって頂いただけでもうれしいです ^o^//

Darkoff wrote:

One of the most annoying note skins i've ever seen, holy shit.
-..-"

Takuma wrote:

If it's really that annoying to you, delete the stuff and stop complaining. It's not that hard to do.
It's ok ^^

I dont carehis sentence =w=
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