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Halozy - K.O.K.O.R.O

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__Ag
597 posts
Joined July 2011
Topic Starter
__Ag
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016年6月2日 at 23:33:14

Artist: Halozy
Title: K.O.K.O.R.O
Source: 東方Project
Tags: Zweib Frey DreaM117er Hakurei_Yoru JJburstOwO Mei Vert Dynamix project kokoro komeiji satori 3rd eyes Touhou Chireiden Subterranean Animism Future Love Reitaisai9 heartfelt fancy halozy sumijun stage 4 theme
BPM: 178
Filesize: 2325kb
Play Time: 01:17
Difficulties Available:
  1. 117's Insane (4.61 stars, 288 notes)
  2. DynaVert's Phantasm (5.66 stars, 427 notes)
  3. Frey's Normal (2.29 stars, 159 notes)
  4. Hard (3.32 stars, 237 notes)
  5. JJburst's Lunatic (5.36 stars, 348 notes)
  6. K.O.K.O.R.O (6.07 stars, 415 notes)
  7. Mei's Insane (4.8 stars, 315 notes)
  8. Yoru's Extra (5.58 stars, 407 notes)
  9. Zweib's Easy (1.73 stars, 83 notes)
Download: Halozy - K.O.K.O.R.O
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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种地中
Zweib's Easy By Zweib
Frey's Normal By Frey
Hard By me
117's Insane By DreaM117er
Mei's Insane By Mei
JJburst's Lunatic By JJburstOwO
Yoru's Extra By Hakurei Yoru
DynaVert's Phantasm By Vert and Dynamix（In touhou 7th game 'Touhou Youyoumu ~ Perfect Cherry Blossom' there is a difficulty called Phantasm after you pass extra stage,so I named the second hardest diff as Phantasm）
K.O.K.O.R.O By me(this diff has 1/8 streams)

一群老司机带我这个新人开飞机
Last edited by __Ag , edited 95 times in total.
Citrus
744 posts
Joined January 2011
Citrus
[General]
  • 为什么Agard难度的note颜色比其他难度多了一个？（或者说其他难度比Agard难度少一个颜色）
    00:23:557 (1) - 这里来个Kiai Time然后马上结束
    00:34:343 (1) - ^
    00:45:130—01:06:703、01:12:096—01:17:405 Kiai Time
    01:17:489 (11) - 这里来个Kiai Time然后马上结束
[Agane]
  • 00:01:984 (1) -到 00:12:770 (1) - 这一段可以加Clap
    00:06:871 (4,5,6,7,8) - 远离00:06:366 (2) -
    试试这样
    SPOILER
    00:40:074 (2,3) - 最好不要相互碰到
    00:45:130—01:12:096 这一段可以加Clap
    00:45:130 (3) - 开头Finish
    00:55:916 (1) - 开头Finish
    01:06:703 (1) - Finish
    01:12:096 (1) - 开头Finish
    01:17:489 (11) - Finish
[Agard]
  • 没什么问题，做得很好
[Normal]
  • 没什么问题，但是感觉音效略少
整体来说还不错,加油rank～
__Ag
597 posts
Joined July 2011
Topic Starter
__Ag

thou bad wrote:

[General]
  • 为什么Agard难度的note颜色比其他难度多了一个？（或者说其他难度比Agard难度少一个颜色）
    00:23:557 (1) - 这里来个Kiai Time然后马上结束
    00:34:343 (1) - ^
    00:45:130—01:06:703、01:12:096—01:17:405 Kiai Time
    01:17:489 (11) - 这里来个Kiai Time然后马上结束
不太明白你的意思，马上结束时指到哪里
[Agane]
  • 00:01:984 (1) -到 00:12:770 (1) - 这一段可以加ClapOK
    00:06:871 (4,5,6,7,8) - 远离00:06:366 (2) -
    试试这样OK
    SPOILER
    00:40:074 (2,3) - 最好不要相互碰到OK
    00:45:130—01:12:096 这一段可以加ClapOK
    00:45:130 (3) - 开头FinishOK
    00:55:916 (1) - 开头FinishOK
    01:06:703 (1) - FinishOK
    01:12:096 (1) - 开头FinishOK
    01:17:489 (11) - Finish
OK
[Agard]
  • 没什么问题，做得很好
[Normal]
  • 没什么问题，但是感觉音效略少
回头GDer会补上的

整体来说还不错,加油rank～
感谢小白
sjoy
1,025 posts
Joined April 2012
sjoy
IRC MOD
15:02 __Ag: can you mod my map?short song
15:02 sjoy: 你为何使用英文
15:02 __Ag: ....
15:02 __Ag: 我以为不是中国的
15:03 sjoy: 那你怎么乱找？
15:03 sjoy: 随便抓个人问 ASK REQ?
15:03 __Ag: 嘛..
15:04 __Ag: 那应该是怎么样的流程
15:04 __Ag: 不太懂
15:06 sjoy: 什么歌
15:06 __Ag: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/114220
15:06 __Ag: 这个
15:06 sjoy: 好
15:06 __Ag: 好,谢
15:12 sjoy: IRC如何 感觉比较细
15:13 __Ag: 我可能随时会断开,这服务器太堪忧了
15:13 __Ag: post吧,谢谢
15:15 __Ag: 那就IRC吧,好像又没怎么掉了
15:15 __Ag: 先从哪个
15:15 sjoy: 难度名字建议ENHLEX
15:16 __Ag: H就到L?
15:16 sjoy: 难度命名
15:16 sjoy: 最后一个可以用Lunatic
15:16 __Ag: 好嘛
15:16 sjoy: 上面Hard
15:17 __Ag: 你书得对
15:17 sjoy: 再上面Normal
15:17 sjoy: 可以不做E
15:17 __Ag: insane完全可以不用了?
15:17 sjoy: 对东方不用INSANE
15:17 __Ag: 好
15:17 sjoy: 比L再难用EXTRA
15:18 sjoy: 00:32:995每首歌这里开始KIAI
15:18 sjoy: 00:44:456到这里结束
15:19 __Ag: 好
15:20 sjoy: 先开始最高难度
15:20 sjoy: 00:02:321 (3) - 一般放在00:03:164 (8) - 这个位置
15:20 sjoy: 5角跳都这样
15:20 sjoy: 4放在3的位置
15:21 sjoy: 5放在4的位置
15:21 sjoy: 然后再循环
15:21 __Ag: 我看看
15:24 __Ag: 恩
15:24 sjoy: 00:05:355 (3) - 不要叠
15:24 sjoy: 4也是
15:24 __Ag: 卧槽
15:24 __Ag: 这这
15:24 sjoy: 你的图太挤了
15:24 sjoy: 自己按CTRL+A看看
15:25 sjoy: 一般需要分布满整个版面
15:25 sjoy: 你都集中在中间了
15:26 __Ag: 我是怕放得太靠边了
15:28 sjoy: 3额可以放到412 204之类的
15:29 sjoy: 00:20:860 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这串连打太挤了
15:29 sjoy: DS调成0,3摆
15:29 __Ag: 这个应该不影响
15:30 sjoy: 好我只挑节奏好了
15:30 sjoy: 排版不挑了
15:31 sjoy: 00:48:669 (1) - 这个应该是滑条
15:31 sjoy: 1/2的
15:32 sjoy: 00:48:501这里开始
15:33 sjoy: 00:59:456 (1) - 这里也是
15:34 sjoy: 01:04:428这里漏音是3连
15:34 __Ag: 稍等,我有点慢orzzz
15:38 __Ag: 漏音那个应该不管也没关系吧orzzz
15:38 sjoy: ;w; 请问你需要什么MOD
15:38 sjoy: 我感觉已经不会MOD了
15:39 __Ag: 啊不是,你不要误会,其他我都改了的
15:39 sjoy: 既然是最高难度
15:39 sjoy: 基本不漏音的
15:39 sjoy: 而且这个音又在白线上
15:39 __Ag: 好嘛
15:40 sjoy: 01:05:355 (1,2,3,4) - 这里是串
15:41 sjoy: 可以选择串或者1/4滑条堆满
15:43 __Ag: 恩
15:45 sjoy: 然后就没了
15:45 __Ag: 好
15:46 sjoy: 01:02:657 (1) - H难度 这个提示歪了
15:46 sjoy: 重新移出线再移回来
15:47 __Ag: 没看明白
15:48 sjoy: 反正在时间轴上移一次就好
15:48 __Ag: 好
15:48 sjoy: 其他没什么问题
15:48 __Ag: 好
15:50 sjoy: N难度还行
15:50 sjoy: 感觉H难度做的最好
15:50 __Ag: normal来不来
15:51 sjoy: N没什么问题
15:51 __Ag: 其实in是以前以前做的了，随便修了一下
15:51 __Ag: H是昨晚补得
15:51 sjoy: 距离没问题 就差不多
15:52 __Ag: 你去post嘛
neurosis
508 posts
Joined March 2012
neurosis
hi~ pm req!

colour-coded modding:
red is unrankable. you must fix this.
orange is highly suggested. these are things we think you should really fix, and if you do not we want to know why you didn't.
everything in normal black is personal opinion. you are free to take this advice or ignore it.


[General]

  1. mp3 is 320kbs, please convert to 128-192kbs
  2. artist: this should be artist Halozy, i think..
[Lunatic]
00:03:838 (2) - adjust to x:272 y:184
00:10:748 (7) - nc?
00:11:422 (1) - ^ rm nc
00:23:557 (1) - don't fully stack this here, hard to read, maybe around x:188 y:220 as an example
00:31:647 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - raise volume of this, 30%, 35%, 40%
00:34:343 (1) - set kiai time here? end at 00:44:709 -
00:46:141 (9) - stack over 00:45:635 (4) -

[Hard]
00:06:029 (4,5,6) - overlap not very pretty here, try a blanket instead

00:24:231 (4) - 1.1 to 1.8x spacing here, lower a little?
00:34:343 - move kiai start here~
00:36:703 (5) - move x:200, y:220, then adjust 00:37:546 (4) - to x:336, y:224
00:48:501 (3) - adjust a little so not touching :<
01:17:489 (5) - nc~

can't mod normals sorry orz

good good song and map~ good luck!
__Ag
597 posts
Joined July 2011
Topic Starter
__Ag

emmy wrote:

hi~ pm req!

colour-coded modding:
red is unrankable. you must fix this.
orange is highly suggested. these are things we think you should really fix, and if you do not we want to know why you didn't.
everything in normal black is personal opinion. you are free to take this advice or ignore it.


[General]

  1. mp3 is 320kbs, please convert to 128-192kbs
  2. artist: this should be artist Halozy, i think..
[Lunatic]
00:03:838 (2) - adjust to x:272 y:184ok
00:10:748 (7) - nc?ok
00:11:422 (1) - ^ rm ncok
00:23:557 (1) - don't fully stack this here, hard to read, maybe around x:188 y:220 as an exampleok
00:31:647 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - raise volume of this, 30%, 35%, 40%ok
00:34:343 (1) - set kiai time here? end at 00:44:709 -I fixed kiai time
00:46:141 (9) - stack over 00:45:635 (4) - I fixed kiai time

[Hard]
00:06:029 (4,5,6) - overlap not very pretty here, try a blanket insteadok

00:24:231 (4) - 1.1 to 1.8x spacing here, lower a little?I think its fine
00:34:343 - move kiai start here~I fixed kiai time
00:36:703 (5) - move x:200, y:220, then adjust 00:37:546 (4) - to x:336, y:224ok
00:48:501 (3) - adjust a little so not touching :<ok
01:17:489 (5) - nc~ok

can't mod normals sorry orz

good good song and map~ good luck!
thx for your mod
epocsodielaK
50 posts
Joined March 2012
epocsodielaK
hi~ mod request from pm

[General]
没有 kiai?

[Normal]
00:12:770 - 无用绿线
00:23:557 - ^
00:25:579 (1) - remove NC
00:26:253 (2) - NC
00:27:602 (1) - remove NC
00:31:647 (1) - move to (0, 264)
00:32:658 (2) - move to (216, 376)
01:12:096 (1) - 转盘用音量减小比较好

[Agard]
OD - 1 :o
00:14:119 (5) - NC比较好看
00:16:815 (5) - ^
01:16:141 (3) - 这个怎么么不用小音量的1/8了？

Sorry but I can't play AR9 so I cant mod Agane.... :(
Last edited by epocsodielaK , edited 2 times in total.
Zweib
579 posts
Joined November 2011
Zweib
SPOILER

Kazane Hiyori wrote:

hi~ mod request from pm

[Normal]
00:12:770 - 无用绿线
00:23:557 - ^
00:25:579 (1) - remove NC
00:26:253 (2) - NC
00:27:602 (1) - remove NC
00:31:647 (1) - move to (0, 264)
00:32:658 (2) - move to (216, 376)
01:12:096 (1) - 转盘用音量减小比较好

all fixed

updated~
__Ag
597 posts
Joined July 2011
Topic Starter
__Ag

Kazane Hiyori wrote:

hi~ mod request from pm

[General]
没有 kiai?

[Normal]
00:12:770 - 无用绿线
00:23:557 - ^
00:25:579 (1) - remove NC
00:26:253 (2) - NC
00:27:602 (1) - remove NC
00:31:647 (1) - move to (0, 264)
00:32:658 (2) - move to (216, 376)
01:12:096 (1) - 转盘用音量减小比较好

[Agard]
OD - 1 :o
00:14:119 (5) - NC比较好看ok
00:16:815 (5) - ^ok
01:16:141 (3) - 这个怎么么不用小音量的1/8了？ok

Sorry but I can't play AR9 so I cant mod Agane.... :(
buhei
567 posts
Joined February 2012
buhei
m4m

[Normal]
00:35:355 (3) - 往上去点
00:46:478 (3) - ^
00:47:489 (4) - spacing
00:47:827 (1,2) - 为何用长滑条?
01:01:984 (1) - 节奏有点别扭 这里还是拆短吧
01:12:096 (1) - 略长

[Hard]
00:02:321 - Normal那段开头的Clap挺好的 这里为什么放那么多? 和Normal一样就好
00:06:029 (4,6) - 感觉没圈上
00:07:377 (1) - ^
00:18:501 (3,6) - 蛋疼
00:22:209 (3) - 在00:22:546 - 这个位置拆一下
00:30:130 - 00:31:478 - 莫名的空缺
00:31:647 (1) - 太长了吧
00:32:995 (2) - 或00:33:501 (3) - NC
00:39:737 (1,2,7) - 球球 不要折那么多次
00:42:770 (5) - 太长了, 要是没有前面的四连打还稍微好一点 有连打的话这个拆成几个短的
00:43:782 (6,7,8) - 前面1/4的话 这里也1/4
00:55:074 - 00:55:158 - 在后面的滑条上加个连打
00:59:287 (3) - 和前面的碰上了看着难受
01:05:355 (1,2,3,4) - 可以更用心一点的
01:09:400 (3,4) - 不要折
01:16:141 (3) - 拆

[Lunatic]
00:02:321 (3) - 同Hard Clap密度太高了
00:01:984 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这形状可以更用心一点啊 不行Ctrl+Shift+D重新摆一下?
00:04:343 (5,6,7) - 三连感觉位置不好 放到00:03:838 - 感觉好些
00:04:680 (1,2,3,4) - 怎么一开始滑条就这么快
00:08:725 (1,2,3) - 这里也考虑一下吧
00:18:164 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 形状
00:22:883 (1) - 拆两个
00:25:242 (2) - 位置不好
00:35:692 (1) - 忽然冒出这个形状感觉奇怪 多用几个这个形状吧
00:48:164 (2,4) - 放远一点
00:51:366 - 00:51:619 - 加note
01:09:400 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 没感觉这里有必要这么鬼畜啊..放到需要鬼畜的地方吧 比如01:14:793 - 这里
01:16:815 (2) - 拆两个

没了 挺有意思的图
__Ag
597 posts
Joined July 2011
Topic Starter
__Ag

buhei wrote:

m4m

[Normal]
00:35:355 (3) - 往上去点
00:46:478 (3) - ^
00:47:489 (4) - spacing
00:47:827 (1,2) - 为何用长滑条?
01:01:984 (1) - 节奏有点别扭 这里还是拆短吧
01:12:096 (1) - 略长

[Hard]
00:02:321 - Normal那段开头的Clap挺好的 这里为什么放那么多? 和Normal一样就好感觉24挺合适
00:06:029 (4,6) - 感觉没圈上ok
00:07:377 (1) - ^这个圈上了吧
00:18:501 (3,6) - 蛋疼就这样
00:22:209 (3) - 在00:22:546 - 这个位置拆一下hard。。还是不了吧
00:30:130 - 00:31:478 - 莫名的空缺空个拍休息
00:31:647 (1) - 太长了吧跟着音走的
00:32:995 (2) - 或00:33:501 (3) - NCok
00:39:737 (1,2,7) - 球球 不要折那么多次很常见啊
00:42:770 (5) - 太长了, 要是没有前面的四连打还稍微好一点 有连打的话这个拆成几个短的正因为有连打
00:43:782 (6,7,8) - 前面1/4的话 这里也1/4但是再接后面单note就有点蛋疼
00:55:074 - 00:55:158 - 在后面的滑条上加个连打不了吧，我感觉挺好
00:59:287 (3) - 和前面的碰上了看着难受ok
01:05:355 (1,2,3,4) - 可以更用心一点的好吧，没掌握这种排列的诀窍
01:09:400 (3,4) - 不要折跟前面一样的节奏
01:16:141 (3) - 拆难度能低些就低些了

[Lunatic]
00:02:321 (3) - 同Hard Clap密度太高了普通的24
00:01:984 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这形状可以更用心一点啊 不行Ctrl+Shift+D重新摆一下?稍微修了一下
00:04:343 (5,6,7) - 三连感觉位置不好 放到00:03:838 - 感觉好些白线三连比红线我觉得好些
00:04:680 (1,2,3,4) - 怎么一开始滑条就这么快也没有变速，全程就这样的
00:08:725 (1,2,3) - 这里也考虑一下吧恩。。。。
00:18:164 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 形状五角星真是太难了ww
00:22:883 (1) - 拆两个已经拆了啊
00:25:242 (2) - 位置不好算了
00:35:692 (1) - 忽然冒出这个形状感觉奇怪 多用几个这个形状吧还有一个ww
00:48:164 (2,4) - 放远一点
00:51:366 - 00:51:619 - 加note
01:09:400 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 没感觉这里有必要这么鬼畜啊..放到需要鬼畜的地方吧 比如01:14:793 - 这里
01:16:815 (2) - 拆两个

没了 挺有意思的图
__Ag
597 posts
Joined July 2011
Topic Starter
__Ag

__Ag wrote:

buhei wrote:

m4m

[Normal]
00:35:355 (3) - 往上去点
00:46:478 (3) - ^
00:47:489 (4) - spacing
00:47:827 (1,2) - 为何用长滑条?
01:01:984 (1) - 节奏有点别扭 这里还是拆短吧
01:12:096 (1) - 略长

[Hard]
00:02:321 - Normal那段开头的Clap挺好的 这里为什么放那么多? 和Normal一样就好感觉24挺合适
00:06:029 (4,6) - 感觉没圈上ok
00:07:377 (1) - ^这个圈上了吧
00:18:501 (3,6) - 蛋疼就这样
00:22:209 (3) - 在00:22:546 - 这个位置拆一下hard。。还是不了吧
00:30:130 - 00:31:478 - 莫名的空缺空个拍休息
00:31:647 (1) - 太长了吧跟着音走的
00:32:995 (2) - 或00:33:501 (3) - NCok
00:39:737 (1,2,7) - 球球 不要折那么多次很常见啊
00:42:770 (5) - 太长了, 要是没有前面的四连打还稍微好一点 有连打的话这个拆成几个短的正因为有连打
00:43:782 (6,7,8) - 前面1/4的话 这里也1/4但是再接后面单note就有点蛋疼
00:55:074 - 00:55:158 - 在后面的滑条上加个连打不了吧，我感觉挺好
00:59:287 (3) - 和前面的碰上了看着难受ok
01:05:355 (1,2,3,4) - 可以更用心一点的好吧，没掌握这种排列的诀窍
01:09:400 (3,4) - 不要折跟前面一样的节奏
01:16:141 (3) - 拆难度能低些就低些了

[Lunatic]
00:02:321 (3) - 同Hard Clap密度太高了普通的24
00:01:984 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这形状可以更用心一点啊 不行Ctrl+Shift+D重新摆一下?稍微修了一下
00:04:343 (5,6,7) - 三连感觉位置不好 放到00:03:838 - 感觉好些白线三连比红线我觉得好些
00:04:680 (1,2,3,4) - 怎么一开始滑条就这么快也没有变速，全程就这样的
00:08:725 (1,2,3) - 这里也考虑一下吧恩。。。。
00:18:164 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 形状五角星真是太难了ww
00:22:883 (1) - 拆两个已经拆了啊
00:25:242 (2) - 位置不好算了
00:35:692 (1) - 忽然冒出这个形状感觉奇怪 多用几个这个形状吧还有一个ww
00:48:164 (2,4) - 放远一点ok
00:51:366 - 00:51:619 - 加note就这样吧，没音的话加个二连好烦
01:09:400 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 没感觉这里有必要这么鬼畜啊..放到需要鬼畜的地方吧 比如01:14:793 - 这里挺顺手的短滑条，说实话不鬼畜
01:16:815 (2) - 拆两个算了

没了 挺有意思的图
没看见下面还有，再回复一次好了
Autumn
501 posts
Joined October 2011
Autumn
嘿

[Lunatic]
除了跳跃安排得比较随机，其他都好
00:15:298 - 00:17:995 - 可以适当加note增加变化
00:23:220 - 这个音之后所有的折返点都可以加上soft的whistle。效果不错，觉得听不清的话音量也可以放大点
具体做法：右边点上whistle，左边选择Additions下的soft
00:24:905 (1) - Ctrl+G构成一个强烈的逆时针五角星的flow

[Hard]
00:25:748 (4,5) - 建议交换45，别忘改下音效~
00:34:512 (4,5) - ^
00:50:186 (1,2) - 试试交换，可以优化一下这里的flow，或者说追求一些变化吧
00:50:523 (3) - 滑条头部Finish
00:54:568 (8) - 可以包好一点：
http://puu.sh/4xtNd.jpg

[Normal]
我觉得特棒 怎么办！

赞！
Hollow Wings
1,514 posts
Joined July 2010
Hollow Wings
random mod

General

  1. 曲子感觉最后有种被截掉的感觉。。。如果不怕麻烦的话可以搞个渐出什么的
  2. normal最好写成Zweib's Normal

Lunatic

大体上来讲跳很多而且很大，各种空气人即视感。我就想说一点：一直顺时针或者逆时针转的跳会非常难，特别是在跳大的时候。如果有必要最好正逆交错，那样会好打很多，比如00:23:557 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 和00:41:085 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 就很难，01:13:444 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 就会简单一些（虽然对移动硬的人来说无所谓，不过还是很容易断就是了）
如果实在想要同一方向的话最好在分割梗的时候进行更大而不是更小的跳，具体可以参照一下逝夏的四方跳
  1. 00:11:085 (3,4,5) - 这样摆是很难的，34换一下会简单点，换的话注意音效
  2. 01:08:388 (4,1) - 这个间距太小了，虽然音乐安静了起来但是还是推荐1放远一点
    整体打着还是很爽的w

  1. 00:45:804 (5,7) - stack perfect （nazi
  2. 00:56:591 (4,6) - ^
  3. 00:51:197 (5) - 这三个finish音太吵了，感觉不太必要。如果一定要加的话建议减低音量
  4. 00:55:242 (9) - 这个为什么又要消音orz，感觉还是保留一些比较好，类似的还有01:11:422 (7) -
    复制粘贴用的太多啦，那么短的曲子都偷懒么0.0

Normal


  • hitnormal的变化稍感违和
  1. 00:23:557 (1) - 从这个地方开始一直到kiai开始前的所有clap，我都建议减少一半。因为你kiai段都是第三白线下clap，如果前面下的稀疏一点的话可以体现和kiai的对比，也比较合曲（强烈推荐
    具体去掉的clap：
    00:28:613 (4) -
    00:30:973 (4) -
    00:33:669 (4) -
  2. 00:47:827 (1) - 突然出现的whistle有点违和，如果要加的话最好整个曲子弄成一个感觉的
  3. 00:55:916 (1) - 头上finish？
    嗯，其他没啥w
mp你开过这个图然后我1pcfc了

这回要填完啊

good luck
DreaM117er
1,594 posts
Joined September 2012
DreaM117er
轉坑 :)
Momizi
275 posts
Joined June 2013
Momizi
给琪老板送SP来啦
[Extra]
00:05:523 (6,7) - 6和7之间的顺序倒一下感觉和后面的三连衔接的更加好
00:08:557 (8) - 这个8一看就是没法和前面一样向花瓣那样临时想了个位置（尝试把8弄进之前的这个花瓣形状内？增加角度和缩短之间的距离？
00:13:444 (5) - 这种感觉像前面一样用长滑条比较适合啊00:13:107 (3) -
00:18:501 (3) - 这里拆成两个滑条吧，感觉更加符合明显的鼓点（类似下图
00:19:175 (7) - ↑
image
00:22:209 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - excuse me？ 178的1/8卧槽，就是356的BPM爷爷，怎么玩
00:23:557 (1) - 这里开始可以考虑加速？感觉比一开始前奏的快一些，所以考虑下1.0以上的？
00:31:857 - 感觉这个折返从这里开始比较好，前面正常放？如图的节奏
图
00:32:995 (1) - 这里感觉还是和前面的00:22:883 (1,2) - 一样，体现的更加好
00:43:782 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
00:53:220 (40,41,42,43,44,45,46) - 感觉距离可以更加大
[117]
神麻婆的图怎么摸，根本不需要摸的感觉
00:29:624 (3,6) - 这两个感觉距离稍微放开点？不要碰到一起或者stack？
00:32:995 (1) - 这个的尾巴感觉体现不出那个音（
01:00:973 (3) - 半个在滑条身体底下不太符合我的审美观
[Hard]
00:41:759 (7) - 感觉直线的比较好
00:46:478 (7) - stack没用叠好
[浮雷]
00:20:860 (1,2) -addition 用normal的whistle会不会更加好？
00:32:995 (1) - 到白线结束吧？音效和上面一样的提议
00:41:085 (5) - nc
00:54:568 (1) - 不用nc
01:16:141 (1) - 弄五个的折返更加符合音乐？看你前面四个的折返也常用
[Easy]
00:31:647 (1) - 一眼看去两边不一样长，用2格子看了下确实是两臂长短不一样（
Frey
1,205 posts
Joined February 2011
Frey

Momizi wrote:

[浮雷]
00:20:860 (1,2) -addition 用normal的whistle会不会更加好？ fixed
00:32:995 (1) - 到白线结束吧？音效和上面一样的提议 这里算了，我觉得这样就已经很明显了。
00:41:085 (5) - nc 后面最后一段类似的我没有用，先保持一致
00:54:568 (1) - 不用nc fixed
01:16:141 (1) - 弄五个的折返更加符合音乐？看你前面四个的折返也常用 五个折返太有欺骗性了..最好不弄。

Thanks for modding! :)

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sahuang
2,293 posts
Joined December 2014
sahuang
NM from in-game req

[General]
  1. No video/SB so maybe disable widescreen support & letterbox
  2. use soft-sliderslide will be better?

[Zweib]
  1. 00:39:737 (1) - i don't think the spinner is appropriate here during kiai part. You can certainly follow the rhythm and add some objects here.
    Spinner seems to be abrupt and spoil the highest part of the song.
  2. 01:12:096 (1) - ^it will be better if you map the spinner part and start spinner 01:17:489 - to 01:18:838 -
  3. Nice sliders btw xD

[Frey]
  1. Nice diff,nothing wrong imo,maybe just add some green lines to control the volume as other diffs do

[Hard]
  1. 00:18:501 (3,6) - 多次往返滑条貌似不好，可以考虑拆一下
  2. 00:18:164 (1,2,3) - 节奏其实差不多，考虑2个圈+1个滑条或者1个滑条+2个圈为4拍，总共4个循环
  3. 00:22:883 (1) - NC没必要吧，4/8拍一个NC的话
  4. 00:24:062 (3,4) - 不大好看
  5. 00:36:703 (5,1) - ^包下？
  6. 01:04:006 (1,3,5,7) - 这5,7距离怎么有点近的感觉...
  7. 01:16:141 (3) - 这也有点不好，多次折返滑条而且不快，打起来太不舒服

[117 God]
  1. Consider HP-0.5? 7.5 seems too high for 4.5* insane
  2. 00:18:838 (5,6,7,8) - 只有这个flow和00:18:164 (1,2,3,4) - 00:19:512 (1,2,3,4) - 00:20:186 (5,6,7,8) - 都不同，所以我打起来的时候这边也容易miss（（
    是不是考虑一个flow，改一下排列
  3. 好神啊

[Extra]
  1. 那么快的滑条加上>300bpm连打。。人玩？
__Ag
597 posts
Joined July 2011
Topic Starter
__Ag

Frey wrote:

Momizi wrote:

[浮雷]
00:20:860 (1,2) -addition 用normal的whistle会不会更加好？ fixed
00:32:995 (1) - 到白线结束吧？音效和上面一样的提议 这里算了，我觉得这样就已经很明显了。
00:41:085 (5) - nc 后面最后一段类似的我没有用，先保持一致
00:54:568 (1) - 不用nc fixed
01:16:141 (1) - 弄五个的折返更加符合音乐？看你前面四个的折返也常用 五个折返太有欺骗性了..最好不弄。

Thanks for modding! :)

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Wishkey
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Wishkey
Heya from ingame request

Easy

  1. 00:12:770 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - you could add a normal-clap hitsound on these makes it stand out more
  2. 00:18:164 (1,1) - and 00:39:737 (1,1) - needs more recovery time for an easy diff pretty sure this is unrankable
  3. 00:54:568 (3) - and 01:04:006 (1) - remove some red achor points, yeah they fit the song but its still an easy diff so keep it a bit more simple
normal

  1. 30% volume in the intro since you're using the same sampleset throughout the song aswell
  2. 01:02:658 (4,5) - 2 1/2 sliders fit better here since stop following the drum
hard

  1. 00:22:209 (3) - NC the 1/8 new instrument starts here aswell
  2. 00:35:692 (1) - 2 circles for consistency
  3. 00:52:209 (2,4) - and 01:02:995 (2,4) - blankets can be improved here was noticable while playing
  4. 00:57:096 (5) - x12/y112 you lose the triangle but (5,6) flows alot better
  5. 01:04:343 (3,4) - could make this into a return slider
  6. 01:09:400 (3,4,5) - dunno why you made 2 4x returns here when you can hear that these are sets of 3
  7. 01:16:141 (3) - make into a 4x return and circle so the end is clickable aswell, might even stack the new cirle with 01:17:152 (5) -
Insane

  1. 00:12:518 (6) - ending on the red tick sounds better here cause it gives 00:12:770 (1) - more of a kick
  2. 00:22:546 (3) - remove NC no sv here so just makes it more confusing when the next combo is NC'd
  3. 00:57:265 (1,2) -changing (2) to the empy spot sounds alot better
  4. 01:17:489 (2) - NC
Those jumps are really fun to play!

Extra

mini big black haha nice

  1. 00:02:658 (3,4,5,6) - the flow into 00:03:164 (6,1,2) - pretty insane if your working with this kind of bpm so I'd change: 4=>6 ; 5=>4; 6=>5
  2. 00:10:748 (5) - control g + h + j same for 00:11:085 (7) -
  3. 00:19:428 (8,1) - stack these for consistency in this part since you stacked 00:18:753 (4,5) -
  4. 00:36:197 (3,4) - unstack these need some flow in the return slider
  5. 01:10:916 (2,3) - could make these into 1/4 if you want to follow the wub but is fine as it is
good luck with the map!
Hanazawa Kana
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Joined February 2013
Hanazawa Kana
只摸你的难度了

[Hard]

00:01:984 - 这一段调下音量吧 太吵了 感觉到30%差不多00:12:433 -
00:06:029 (4,5,6) - Flow好像不太顺 调一下6的位置吧
00:12:770 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 全是四边形看起来不太爽,我个人建议可以往返 左右左右 上下上下这种的
00:49:006 (4) - 去掉
00:57:096 (5) - 往左拉一点
00:59:792 (4) - 去掉
01:16:815 - 这里我觉得可以把往返滑条变短 然后加一个note
其实很多地方能改进的,比如从这里00:18:164 (1) - 到这里00:22:883 (1) - 没必要转一大圈过去 我觉得从这里00:19:512 (4) -向上拉然后顺时针拐比较好 你觉得呢? 00:23:557 (1) - 到00:26:085 (6) - 也是
嗯还有就是很多地方我看你用四边形跳 我觉得可以换成不规则的那种 稍微好读点.钝角的连续单点可以换种排法 比如这里00:53:220 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 可以变成三个一组的

[Extra]
这滑条速度有点惊人..
00:15:130 - 尽量让这里能点到 或许可以吧往返滑条拉回去一点 然后放个滑条上去
00:16:478 - 同上
00:17:827 - 同
00:12:602 (8,9) - 错开一点吧
00:22:883 (1,2) - 有点难看 可以考虑多加点红点 变成那种左右晃的感觉
00:43:782 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 玛德你真做成1/8了...人玩?
00:44:624 - 漏音
其实鼓点的地方最好能让人点上,不然会有重大在空气上的感觉
00:51:366 - 这种放在滑条尾其实就不怎么合适 还是像之前那样放两个滑条 或者两个单点什么的 反正要让人能点上去 确实的感觉到鼓点
后面也有 我就不都说了
这难度打不动... 排列就不摸了

就这样吧,祝早日起飞
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